Long time no edit! I do apologize for the absence, but I'm back and ready to continue working on my novel! I've reviewed your notes and implemented most of the changes. The only question I have is in reference to the passage regarding Damon's Halloween fort. &nbsp;I get what you mean about it being a time jump, but I was really trying to set it as more of a flashback scene from Lela's POV. Does the same rule apply. I wouldn't want readers to be confused when they see the offset paragraph and then it jumps right back into her cooking in the kitchen.