Dear George: Thanks for your time to correct lot's of errors and expressions in my abstract. I have only one question and wish to hear your suggestion.&nbsp;<br />*&nbsp;Many native Chinese students have difficulty translating Chinese into English, particularly long, complex sentences found in academic writing (on higher education) &nbsp;reason: to match with my titile &nbsp;<br />Is it ok to add (on higher education) in the frist sentence?&nbsp;<br /><br />Sincerely,&nbsp;<br />Chiying Chien<br /><br />