Thanks for the input! I'm adding in a subplot and character that I'd taken out from even before the first draft. A young super human named Abby Sanchez will be Sterling's trainee. He's helping her get control of her abilities which she is very much afraid of. &nbsp;When she first got the abilities she had no control and they killed her parents so she has major anxiety over using them. She'll only have been at the agency for a few weeks so she'll be able to ask questions to Sterling that the audience might have. She's a good excuse to give backstory information.<br /><br />Unfortunately when I've done the re-writes and added her in I won't have it in the budget to send you the book again, but you've been a great help, thanks!