Hi, EU:<br /><br />Thank you for your generous feedback. I'm sorry if I missed anything; I hope the oversights weren't critical.<br /><br />The nice thing about editing a submission at your level is that I know that you know that editors aren't perfect. We really provide a collaborative service in which the author has the last word. A lot of editing -- again, at your level -- is a subjective word or phrasing choice, neither better nor worse, just different. (I tend not to use capitals if I don't have to and favor the em dash over brackets, this example notwithstanding.)<br /><br />The same is true for this submission.&nbsp;I'm not sure that I've improved it, but this way you have a slightly different way of saying the same thing and you can always pick and mix.<br /><br />This was true with your last submission. When reviewing, I wouldn't bother with individual Track Changes but rather flip back and forth between Final and Original, cutting and pasting what I like into a new document. Five minutes and I'm done!<br /><br />Thank you again for your thoughtful&nbsp;feedback. I hope I have helped with this document.<br /><br />Best wishes - George<br /><br />I am usually available for editing between 6:00 am and 10:30 pm. If my status is set to unavailable, you can still send a message to me via Editor World