Hey Arnie!&nbsp;<br /><br />I hope you had a fantastic weekend!&nbsp;<br /><br />I took a quick look at your edits, you're doing a great job! It's exactlty what I needed. My adviser noted that I really need to avoid writing lengthy run-on sentences, so that's what I will do in my next draft. All in all, your edits will make an excellent addition to my next draft.&nbsp;<br /><br />I did make a few comments. I've written them all below, but you can also find them in the attached document.&nbsp;<br /><br />
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<li>Page 15- I think we should leave&nbsp;impact&rdquo; in cumulative environmental impact analysis. That&rsquo;s how the literature kept referring to it, so the acronym should be CEIA</li>
<li>Page 21/23 and on- Can we add acronyms for initial study (IS), negative declaration (ND), mitigated negative declaration (MND), environmental impact statemrent (EIS)?</li>
<li>Page 28, under "Gaps in NEPA's Public Participation Process", second paragraph, first sentence- Please somehow leave the word "early" in the sentence. It is a key concept I'm trying to&nbsp;address. &nbsp;</li>
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Thanks so much! I look forward to the finished product and I hope you can get it all finished early this week since I am turning in my second draft over to my adviser on Monday the 23rd.&nbsp;<br /><br />Kindest Regards,<br /><br />Kenneth