A lot of edits because you veer off course, off topic. The paper is about the lack of physical activities by the adults in Callaway County. Stay focused on that group. At one point, you start talking about students in schools, when the paper is not about students. It's about adults.<br /><br />Fixed the APA format. You still need to add one more Reference and I mentioned this in a few comments.<br /><br />I hope you'll accept the changes and then re-read and revise.<br /><br />Thank you.