Hi Travis, I've edited your document.<br /><br />For the most part, I thought it was well done, but one thing you may want to look at is how you talk about percentages. You tend to say "A was larger by a factor of X% than B," but it's usually preferable to say "A was X% larger than B." It's less wordy and more natural that way. I made the appropriate changes for the version I'm sending you, but it's something to keep looking out for.<br /><br />Thank you for choosing the Word Doctor.<br /><br />- TWD