Hi George,<br /><br />Thank you very much for writing! The edited version looks good. I admit that the literature review is still the hardest to structure, let alone to cite accurately. I have 26 books for this paper so far and it is so messy right now to go back and find the exact citation. I will have to manage this issue more effectively now. In the actual paper I will need to show my argument more clearly within the literature review.&nbsp;<br /><br />Anyway, thank you for your efforts and I will be in touch soon!<br /><br />Very best,<br />Maya