This is a very well-written paper and so the edits are "gentle." Also, you wrote to the brink of five pages of text and I had to combine paragraphs to make the text fit, as I didn't want to delete any more text than necessary (a word or two here and there).<br /><br />All APA now, as requested.<br /><br />Again, this flowed extremely well.<br /><br />Thank you.