Hi Lindsay:<br /><br />Here is your document, which I enjoyed reading.<br />I had to convert your pdf to Microsoft Word for editing and then I saved the document&nbsp;as a pdf again. Unfortunately, this precudes using track changes in MS Word, but it shouldn't be too difficult for you to copy and paste the changes you like into your original document. Usually, we edit all documents in MS Word so the author can&nbsp;accept or reject individual changes, but I'm sure you can work around this limitation.<br /><br />I hope you like the edit.<br /><br />Regards -- TypeRighter<br /><br />&nbsp;