Hi Miss Laura... You really made my day! Wow... that is the very first time anyone EVER has given me any feedback on my writing. And you said it's good. WOW. So, let me tell you... I have two complete books finished. As you see, my grammar and punctuation are terrible. Of course I am bias, but I think my storyline from start to finish is BLOCKBUSTER... lol. It's my calling. Funny thing is - I hated reading all my life, and I never aspired to write. GOD WROTE THESE BOOKS, I just typed. So, there's lots and lots of imperfections. No one has ever read them cover to cover.... but, I am about to put together a kickstarter fundraiser to cover the edit and publish process.... I am working on the third book for that series. I wish I had the money to just pay you to read them just for your opinion of the storyline not to do tedious edit until I can pay you... I sent a different selection for sample edit of part of a sermon (a large part of my story is pulpit time :) Anyway, three editors declined. That makes me think it's bad or that religious content may be a problem.&nbsp;<br />THank you again for your feedback. I pray to be able to hire you to do my whole project... these three and the many, many others God is teasing me with already.&nbsp;<br />Be Blessed!