Hello WriteAid,<br />My name is Madona. I have attached my personal statement, it is really a rough draft. I am a okay writer but I need a lot of editing and grammar. Nevertheless, I really need your professional help.  <br />I have breaked the PS writing, it needs to answer top 10 questions they might have. It is based on a point system, so I have sneaked in points and I am trying to show my character. It is above the word limits, so I could really use your help to help me use less words to convey the same message. <br />Here is the prompt: <br /><span id="DismissedReason_hint" class="Caption"><b><br />(max 4500 characters)</b></span><p align="justify">Your Personal Essay should address why you selected pharmacy as a career and how the Doctor of Pharmacy degree relates to your immediate and long-term professional goals. Describe how your personal, educational, and professional background will help you achieve your goals. The personal essay is an important part of your application for admission and provides you with an opportunity for you to clearly and effectively express your ideas.</p>