Hi there,<br /><br />Thanks for sending this over for a sample edit! As it is a sample I only edited the first couple of paragraphs - enough to give you an idea for how I work. Suggested changes can be seen in Track Changes. <br /><br />If you have more work completed that is ready for editing, I'm running a 15% off special right now, and my schedule is pretty clear so I can have it turned around quickly.<br /><br />If you have any questions or concerns please feel free to let me know.<br /><br />Cheers!<br />EM