Hello,<br /><br />This is my personal statement for the English grad program at the University of Westminster (in London).<br /><br />1) Please find a synonym for 'icy' "icy blue." I don't like that word but I can't think of another synonym.<br /><br />2) Please let me know if, and where, I need to add more.<br /><br /><br />Thanks in advance:)<br /><br />Dominic