Hi,<br /><br />I'm a engineering project manager who will be applying to the MBA program at SUNY Empire State College.<br /><br />The MBA application requires two essays and a resume'.  I'm submitting the first of the three documents.  <br /><br />Through phone conversation with the director of the MBA program, I learned that the admission board is looking for applicant essays that would score a 5 or 6 on the Analytical Writing Section of the GRE.  I do have a pdf docment that shows examples of essays with a score of 5 and 6.  I can forward a copy to you.<br /><br />I feel that your background is the best fit to edit my documents.  I appreaciate all your help and work in advance!<br /><br />Thanks!<br /><br />James Warrington<br /><br />