Hi, there:<br /><br />I edited the document in the areas of grammar, sentence structure, flow, punctuation, clarity, consistency, spelling, detail, word choice, organization, and conciseness. I also edited the document in the area of APA style, as requested. It has been my pleasure!<br /><br />Sincerely,<br />MasterEditor<br /><br />P.S. I see that Order EW_68088 is a duplicate of this current order, EW_68073, so I have told the administrator so that the duplicate can be undone.