Dear Nyandoc:<br /><br />Any help with the organization and progression so as to make it read more clearly and smoothly is very much appreciated. Likewise regarding&nbsp;any grammar/ style issues I'm not seeing.<br /><br />I had some difficulty referring to myself in the third person. Also, I wasn't sure how to handle the block quote for Ritchhart on page 9.&nbsp;<br /><br />Thank you very much in any case again for your time and help.<br /><br />Sincerely,<br /><br />JH<br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br />