Hello again. I have accepted some of your changes, rejected others, and put together a clean copy, with one comment. Incidentally, whoever deleted the spaces around ellipses is wrong. Actually, the computer-generated ellipses are only a convenience for the&nbsp;writer and are changed to three separate periods, separated by spaces before, between, and after by the typesetter, so I did that here.<br /><br />So, here's the clean final copy. Now, back to chapter one.<br /><br />Arnie