Hi Nyanidoc,<br /><br />I was so surpised to see how fast your job was done!<br /><br />I think your editing is great as it is. However, I am in the process of finalizing since I have word count limit. I am omitting few words here and there.&nbsp;<br /><br /><br />I just wanted to see any comments on my writing content. Do you think my writing can be submitted to schools as it is? Please do not worry about my rating! I would not give you a low score based on your critics. Please let me know your honest opinion about my writing!&nbsp;