Hello,
I want you to know that I have had difficulty in revising At the End of the Day  in the eyes of an intern.  In writing that version of the story, I discovered that too much background information on Harding had to be conveyed to the intern, (interns are short-timers, and Harding had a history). The intern started to develop into a character, which in my opinion, was taking focus away from Harding.  Not sure if I can explain it any further, but it didnt work.  In short, the intern route took too much explaining, I thought.  
So, I shifted the narrator tp a Noise Catcher, one of the four recruited after the original 16 members.  Her opinions of Harding were indifferent.  Office politics and intrigue were not part of her thing.  She preferred to do her job and go home to her kids (at the end of the day, btw).  She agreed to become a Noise Catcher, because if she declined it would have created tension, which she wanted no part of.  The upside, is shes $500 to the good in the office pool (and money is important to her.) She keeps her distance from the other Noise Catchers and from Harding. Im not sure if she will develop an opinion.  If she does, it will lean more favorably toward Harding.  I believe the story is working out and will have it to you by no later that Monday.  Thanks,
Dan