Hi linniebobo! Good to hear from you again. It sounds like you are stressing. But don't worry! Some semesters are just like this. You will work your way out of it. All semesters end eventually. My revisions are in red, as usual. I think I've stayed true to what you were saying. They are still your words. They are just rearranged somewhat and fluffed up a bit. This was a really tough assignment so don't be too hard on yourself. It really is a difficult one! I hope I've done well enough. I think instructors just like to see that you paid attention, and I believe this shows that you have. Thank you for choosing me as your editor again!