Hi George,<br />I don't know how much I'll be using editing services in the near future as I am completely broke, but for me the most useful edits are those in the middle, i.e. neithercomplete overhaul nor just punctuation check. Of course, every editor has a style and I can't ask you anythign too specific. It's simply the case that I benefit the most from changes, corrections, and suggestions that improve the text without dramatically altering the meaning. This piece is not even a quote. It's simply an important (and rather unfortunate) correspondence, so you can make any changes you see fit, although I don't know if they are necessary. Thank you!&nbsp;