Hi, Emilia:<br /><br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document, and I hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />MS Word includes tracked changes by default. Before sharing this document, please consider running Inspect Document. To do this, click File/Info/Check for Issues/Inspect Document on the Microsoft Word menu bar.<br /><br />Although I was careful not to change the content of your document, please review it carefully, and run spell-check using your dictionary language.<br /><br />Thanks&nbsp;for doing the heavy lifting for me. You made my job so much easier. Nice job! I hope the edits&nbsp;help.<br /><br />Best wishes - George (TypeRighter)<br />I am usually available for editing between 6:00 am and 10:30 pm (EST). If my status is set to 'unavailable', you can still reach me via Editor World.<br /><br />Don't forget:&nbsp;TRACK CHANGES<br />When you open a document containing tracked changes, it appears in the Final Show Mark-up view. To see the document without mark-ups, do the following: <br />For PCs, on the Microsoft Word (2010) menu bar, click Review. Then select Final: Show Mark-up (All Mark-up) and click the drop-down arrow. Choose Final.<br />For Word 2013, click Review, then from the All Mark-up drop-down box, select No Mark-up.<br />For Macs, on the Review tab, under Tracking, click Track Changes to turn on or off. Choose No Mark-up from the drop-down menu in Show Mark-up.