Hello, Ms. Grant,<br /><br />Attached please find your edited document. Don't be alarmed by all the markings--it looks more dramatic than it is. I edited for the points you requested, and I changed some of the bolding and italics. Please see notes within the doc. You can keep or reject any of the changes I made using the "track changes" feature under the review tab at the top of the document.&nbsp;<br /><br />Please feel free to contact me if you have any questions.<br /><br />Thank you,<br /><br />Laura Kenney