Hi Maya:<br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document and hope that you find the editing suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />Please proofread carefully, particularly the bibiography, before making it your own. You know far more about this subject than I do. Here and there, I might even have inadvertently changed your meaning.<br /><br />As a rule, I make more changes to a document than necessary. With Microsoft Word&rsquo;s track changes feature, I can indulge own grammatical tastes, knowing that the original author can reject any or all of the suggestions. It is better to over than under edit, so the number of edits are not a comment on the quality of original.<br /><br />You did a nice job! You're reading some pretty heavy books, which I might have read long ago. With my memory it's hard to know.<br /><br />Best wishes - George