Dear Nyanidoc, <br /><br /> This is my personal statement for internal medicine residency application. It feels a bit choppy to me, I'm you could help make this a more cohesive piece. Total word count has to be under 645. Also, if you could help strengnthen the final sentence that would be wonderful. Thank you!!<br /><br /><br />Kindest regards, <br /><br /><br />Jenica 