As you'll see, most of the edits are word choices or grammar-related. I inserted comments when I was unsure about a word or phrase or what you intended to say.<br /><br />The use of the subtitles&nbsp;was very good to move the reading along and help with shifts in topics.<br /><br />That you are passionate about teaching is very clear&nbsp;from the overall tone and your main ponts. I'm sure you will do well in any classroom anywhere.<br /><br />Thank you.