Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your chapter--at least I'm presuming that's what it is. I'm afraid I did not find your comment/question for me. It is a bit redundant, but I really wasn't confident enough with the material to know when to cut bits. I believe you remarked on a redundant passage at one point.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc