Hi George,<br /><br />Attached is my two articles summarized to be added to my yesterday's paper for Fukuyama. I am hoping to present it orally by reading it on the paper (not slides), &nbsp;and I have about 20 minutes in total to do that. Please help making my presentation more precise but comprehensive, and more cohesive. I will need to talk in lecture style, so I will need transition words. I will need it by tomorrow Monday. I look forward to your output!<br /><br />Thank you very much.&nbsp;<br /><br />Maya