Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your interesting dissertation. Because it is your work, I have replaced 'we' with 'I' throughout, except in the instances where 'we' might refer to you and the reader.<br /><br />I did not see the last two chapters to which you refer, so was a bit confused about that.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc