Hi,<br /><br />Thanks for your helpful feedback. I will be happy to rate and leave feedback. <br /><br />I have attached the docuemnt after I have accepted the changes you made. I just need your final revision with what I have insterted (mainly commas and one question about length of a sentence) is they are placed wrongly, please correct.<br /><br /><br />I highly appreciate if you can respond shortly as I have to submit it.&nbsp;<br /><br />Thanks a lot!<br />Maya<br /><br />