<p>Hi TextPro,&nbsp;<br /><br />This is actually a minutes that is to be sent to the top management. I know that there's lots to edit but reallly need your help to sharpen it. I have never written minutes before and I felt that most of the sentences were not professionally written. Hope you could also help to make the communication clearer and presentable. I don't mind if you shorten some of it...&nbsp;<br /><br />Thanks.&nbsp;<br /><br /></p>
<p>Regards</p>