I edited the citations that were there in APA style. There are several instances of your having data without giving a source for it. Also, check that the font is the one the professor wants, and if you need a bibliography page.&nbsp;<br /><br />I added some clarifying sentenes, and rearranged some of the paragraphs to make it flow better. There are still instances where you offer an opinion without much support. If this is just an outline for the paper, then that should be fine, just keep it in mind when it comes time for the actual research paper.<br /><br />Please let me know if you have any questions.