Dear Eric,<br /><br />Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your thesis. My main comment is that it does not address the title. Rather than being an argument for Christianity, save for a couple of glaring errors, the bulk of it is a well-reasoned argument against evolution, although one with which I do not agree. Further, it does not present thesis followed by antithesis, but rather interlards the two, and produces a disconnect that I find a bit jarring.<br /><br />I often edit works with which I disagree violently, and you are in no danger of joining those authors. I am a politically liberal Christian who believes that God created the world and set evolution in motion. Whether or not He continues to guide the process, I couldn't say, and I'm not sure it's important.<br /><br />Surely you do not think that I would put so much effort into editing the text and then ignore the footnotes, which were rather a mess? I have not been able to address all of the issues, primarily b/c of missing information, but have done my best.<br /><br />If you could be so kind as to take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much--unless, of course, you plan to trash it :)<br /><br />All Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc