Hello Steven,

Thanks for your response. I appreciate you getting back to me.

I'm glad that you were satisfied with the proofreading, etc. I'm sorry that I didn't have some of it in APA style. I'm not sure that I was aware that it was supposed to be in APA format. I think I mentioned that you would have to redo the TOC. I didn't want to do that myself as I didn't know what changes you would accept vs. those you wouldn't. I should have made that clear.

I'm sorry as well if some of the comments were overly blunt. As a writer and journal reviewer, I know that what readers appreciate above all is concise writing and there was a good deal of repetition in your dissertation that I believed detracted from the overall impact of your findings and arguments, which were good.

If you can see your way clear to give me a somewhat higher rating, I would really appreciate it. An email to Patti would take care of it.

Again, I apologize for anything I did that caused you displeasure. I try hard to leave my clients completely satisfied with my work.

Best Regards,

Nyanidoc