Thank you for the opportunity to review this text.<br /><br />The longer text will follow later today.<br /><br />I tried for consistency of terms and to establish some style points (Mom, serial comma, OB/GYN, etc.).<br /><br />Also worked on&nbsp;the footnotes to impose some order. Looks like many of the notes refer to books, in which case you could italicize the titles. If articles, then use quotation marks.<br /><br />Onward,<br /><br />Jackson