      Hi, Laura. I wanted to see if you can take a look and edit my query letter when you have a chance. I really don't want to be traditionally published. But my goal is to get an agent or publisist. I need help with promoting.<br /><br />I have the query letter in the 1st part of the attachment, and also a sneak peek into book #3.<br /><br /><p>I have read that a query letter is supposed to be written in 2<sup>nd</sup> person present tense. I’m not good at that tense. So please make sure I did it right. This will be my first query letter, and I only have one chance to make my letter stand out. I’m also not sure of the best format. I read it needs to one page, and include the hook, mini-synopsis, author bio, and a thank you. Please tell me what you feel is the best format. Thank you.</p><p>     I threw in the prologue of book #3 for fun. The prologue is written in 3<sup>rd</sup> person, just like I did the prologue for book #2. I wanted to keep the same style with both of those books.<br />     I reasearched eclipses for the prologue. It's the theme for book #3. Thank you for catching that slip in book #2. I had no idea that we already knew when I eclipses will occur. Lol.<br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /></p><br /><br /><br /><br />     <br /><br /><br /><br />