Hi,I believe that the content in this short paper is solid. That said,&nbsp;I have a big issue with commas. I use them too much or not enough.&nbsp; I wrote this paper for an American History class years ago and I can't find my final draft. I know that I got an A on the paper from a professor who was pretty tough in his&nbsp;grading; however, I know that I was more used to writing papers then so this could use some polish. I found a rough draft and have attempted to revise it, but I want to make sure that it's in as good a shape as possible when I submit it to someone who wants an academic writing sample.&nbsp; (I also know that the way I'm citing my sources throughout is wrong- Again, it's been alittle while since I had to cite anything.)&nbsp; This needs to follow APA style guidlines.&nbsp; Let me know if you have any questions.&nbsp; Thanks