<p>Editorial notes (in no particular order)</p>
<p>1. Enjoyed reading your story.</p>
<p>2. I fixed the quotation marks and apostrophes (from the so-called dumb to smart; just means how they look).</p>
<p>3. &nbsp;Original typeface is Courier New. Suggest you use Times New Roman 12 point and single spacing.</p>
<p>4. Added headers and page numbers.</p>
<p>5. Set up a temporary Table of Contents; add page numbers AFTER all changes are made.</p>
<p>6. Tenses: seems you wanted present tense throughout the text.</p>
<p>7. Chapter three was duplicated, so one version was deleted.</p>
<p>8. The comments detail other issues.</p>
<p>&nbsp;Please let me know if you have any questions or concerns.</p>
<p>Thank you.</p>