Hi Elizabeth,<br /><br />I have though about what you have said and several things occurred to me while I read your book-jacket copy. I'm not sure why these ideas did not occur to me while reading the MS, but perhaps it was because the text was so well-ordered and concise. Before I return your MS, take a look at the suggestions in this doc and let me know what you think. I changed the copy considerably--please feel free to change it back, add to it, or rework it in whatever way you see fit, and let me know if I am going in a direction you'd rather not.<br /><br />Thanks,<br /><br />Laura