In my Track Changes comments on your document, I have made quite a few suggestions in addition to the explanations of my edits. One of the overarching recommendations I made was about formatting: rather than capitalizing key phrases, I recommend you bold them for emphasis; this is because typing in all capital letters gives off the impression of shouting, and may come off as hostile and out-of-touch. Please let me know if I have mis-interpreted anything (particularly the sentence that references "SWE-UNIT") in a message so I can provide follow-up help free of charge. I would like to provide you with a five-star editing service, so please don't hesitate to let me know&nbsp;if you have any questions or concerns!