Hi, Peter:<br /><br />Well, this was challenging, to put it mildly! You did a fine job, and I hope I haven't spoilt the original. Of course, with track changes, it's easy to accept or reject any or all edits.&nbsp;Although I was careful not to change the content, please proofread the edited document carefully.<br /><br />As I understood your instructions, you wanted me to polish and tighten. I know Hegel fairly&nbsp;well (we were in school together), so I don't think I've changed&nbsp;your objective. But again, wonderful though I am, I make mistakes, a fact my grown-up children regularly remind me about.<br /><br />If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World and I'll get back to you as soon as I can.&nbsp;<br /><br />Best wishes - George<br />I am usually available for editing between 6:00 am and 10:30 pm (EST). If my status is set to 'unavailable', you can still reach me via Editor World.<br /><br />&nbsp;<br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br />