Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your paper. As you will see, I used track changes/comments, but always recommend that authors read the clean copy first before going blind reading the marked-up version.<br /><br />I noted that you were inconsistent in your use of &amp; and and in the in-text refs. If you are using APA format, it should be &amp;. I didn't know which way to jump, so simply highlighted &amp; and and in the text. I believe that you used &amp; exclusively in the refs section.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc