Hi! I loved your analysis and input.  Is there any chance you can give me some suggestive writing to include your comments into the essay?  My issue is, we are applying early action to Yale, hoping to get her essay in tonight or tomorrow at the latest and based on your comments its not ready.  I don't want to have to do a total rewrite and I am happy to pay for a second or supplemental edit fee for this.  Please advise, thank you!!