Please recheck aout the following areas.
1. Awkward phase
I am trying to make the report to be like a native English speaker, but  cannot identify where to change it.
2. Under the recommendation, I would like to emphasize why I am recommending each option.  Is there any way to make it clear why I am recommending?

3. Please rewrite the paragraphs with red fonts. I am trying to differentiate with another report I did, but I am having problem to rewrite it, but it still has the same meaning.