Mr. Fisher,<br /><br />My suggested edits to your Healthy Home blog post are attached. I used track changes so that you can see the changes I made. I could, and still can, do a simple edit if you would like. But the edits I've suggested are fairly substantial. I tried to bring the residential side into it more while staying on point with the school story. I added more details because they often help make things feel more immediate. I added hyperlinks to my sources on those details. I understand hyperlinks are good for SEO as well. <br /><br />I added a few things, and I took out the part about the school's history with lead and filters. It felt a little confrontational to me, and not really relevant to the real news, which is&nbsp;1) you might have lead in your house, but you 2) don't know it, so you should 3) get testing done.<br /><br />I changed the timing of events to just say "recently" so that the post will stay greener longer. As you said, locals are familiar with the school's story anyway. It wouldn't be a bad idea to add more research about lead in homes. But with blogs I find that it's often just as easy and even better to do an new, additional post rather than continuing to add to one.<br /><br />I sincerely appreciate the opportunity to work on this for you. I hope you like my suggestions and will send more work to me. I am available and ready to work!&nbsp;<br /><br />Have a great day!<br />Leah