Hi there! The final redlined document is attached. (You might need to change the view to see the redlines.) Let me know if you have any issues with the document. I really enjoyed working with you on this. I think you made your points very well and the paper has a cohesive flow. I'm glad you included the entire paper so I could get the feel for it again. It's an interesting topic and you provided a deep and thoughtful analysis of it. I hope you get a great grade! Good luck!