Hello! Thank you for letting me work on your writing. I do make some comments within the text, but I wanted to add here that overall, my focus was on streamlining your syntax to make your analysis more readable. You have so much great information here, but at times there is indeed so much information that certain words and phrases feel a little jammed together. My hope is that I have altered your text so that the presentation of information is a little easier for your reader to grasp.<br /><br />If you have any comments or concerns, please do let me know! Thank you!