Hello, Kathleen,<br /><br />I wanted to let you know that I am just finishing up your excellent book--I am on Hawaii time, so it might not be done exactly at 6 EST. I hope that's okay.<br /><br />As I did for Brandy, I'll offer you the opportunity to look over any changes I have made and notes I have written and send the ms back for a second edit. I do this at no charge, because I believe the price of the edit should include at least one back-and-forth between author and editor.&nbsp;<br /><br />Your book is very well written and did not need any major work, but I did make some changes in usage and structure for added impact or clarity, and edited for consistency with punctuation, capitalization, etc.<br /><br />Please take your time in going over the edits, and let me know when you would like me to take a second look to polish things up and answer any questions you might have.<br /><br />Thank you so much for sharing your work with me. Your characters are beautifully drawn, I love Casey and the rest of the crew, the plot is taut, the action thrilling, and the story heart-rending.<br /><br />Thanks again,<br />Laura