Glad you liked the revision. If you get close to the “cutâ€ number and still need help getting to 2,500 let me know. Now, for your questions:

1. Please add the subtitles wherever you deem appropriate. These help the readers “navigateâ€ your text.

2. Glad you’ve fixed the Atlanta/Georgia/LaGrange issue. I knew something was amiss, but couldn’t even guess at the substitute for Georgia. That’s why the comment function is so important.

3. As for format, you are correct that the “classicâ€ order is Introduction, Body 1, 2, 3, and Conclusion. But within this order, you can certainly have many shorter paragraphs, depending on the subject matter, otherwise every essay would be only five paragraphs long (and some of these paragraphs would be very long). When you were describing the three main methods, it seemed natural to me to give each one a separate paragraph. Again, this kind of paragraphing helps the reader. As a group, the many paragraphs will still just be a part of your bigger concept/division of Body 1 (might be one or more paragraphs),  2 (one or more paragraphs), and 3 (one or more paragraphs). The subtitles will help the reader see these division/sub-divisions more clearly.

As a final note, use the classic order only as the basis of your paper and allow your creativity and insights to “bendâ€ this framework; in other words, all papers have an Introduction and conclusion, so it’s in the body that the fun/creativity/excitement can occur. So do so.