This is a resaerch grant that I am planning to submit to a grant agency to support my dissertation resaerch. I am particularly concerneda bout the following points. (1) Does this grant proposal have a great hook that may attract the agency to support my resaerch? (2) I am concerned about whether I have clearly presented my resaerch ideas. (3) I am also concerned about the language and grammar. Thanks so much for your help!