Hello editor, you must read this because it is an essential part of the work. <br /><br />This is the first two chapters of my Master Degree thesis in Political Science. SO IT IS VERY IMPORTANT TO ME.<br /><br />I need you to <br />1- Edit the gramatical mistakes and Fluency of the sentences or the flow of the sentence or meaning. <br />2- proofread it, and leave me comments on any mistakes.<br />3- follow my university thesis guideline about the Layout and citation formating (provided in the PDF link bellow)<br /><br />http://www.esu.edu/documents/thesis_guidelines.pdf<br /><br />4- My citation formating is the APA style.<br /><br />90% of this thesis was edited here in Editor World. but my professor did not like it, becuase it was not fully edited. <br /><br />if you don't like this please let me know so we could cancel it. <br /><br />if you don't understand any thing of what I wrote, please contact me immediately.<br /><br />Thank you,