<p>Below are the comments my instructor left on my last assignment. This is a literature review for my thesis.</p><p>  “You have a lot of very good ideas written up in a very sloppy fashion without proof-reading.  You won’t be able to complete your thesis if you try to use this kind of lazy man’s writing style.  For each of your major assignments, you need to produce a literature review (organized around ideas, not around a sequential review of authors), a methodology section and finally, the thesis free of errors in grammar, diction, usage, punctuation and spelling.  You may want to hire a professional copy editing service like Scribendi to proof read and copy edit your work.  Our students have had excellent success with it in the past.  I’ll pass you on this assignment, but if the next assignment is not proof-read, I will send it back ungraded.”</p><p>I had two people proof read it before I sent it in. Unfortunately neither one of them has completed a paper like this before. I will add the sources later after the editing since I haven’t had any issues with it. </p>