Hi, Ivan:<br /><br />I'm really not sure about this one. To begin, I thought there were too many 'feels' and 'felts.' It's stronger, I think, without them. It ran nicely after that, until the end, when the narrator implies, if not states, that he loves a paper bag. To me, that diminishes his or her connection with nature. Would it be better to change&nbsp;the 'paper bag' to 'all living things'? Or something similar. Obviously, I don't want to change the overall meaning&nbsp;but I think the last line should keep the spirit of the earlier narrative.<br /><br />If you do change it and want to re-send as a message&nbsp;attachment, I'll get back to you as soon as I can. What do you think?<br /><br />Best wishes - George<br /><br />I'm taking my daughter's Corgi for a walk, so I'll be unavailable for a while.&nbsp;