Hello! <br /><br />For this document, I focused on grammar, the smoothness of transitions between paragraphs and sentences, and sentence structure (including consistency in terminology and passive voice). I also did some restructuring to make sure it met the APA style used in the document. I left several comments on the side either explaining certain edits or offering suggestions for your consideration, so be sure to look out for those. Feel free to message me if you have any questions! Thanks. =)