Hi, Nicolepaul:<br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document, and I hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />I think you have a nice essay here - or at least an introduction to one. I made more changes than were&nbsp;necessary, but they are easy to undo with track&nbsp;changes. Thanks for doing the heavy lifting. You made my job much easier.&nbsp;<br /><br />Best wishes - George (TypeRighter)<br />I am usually available for editing between 6:00 am and 10:30 pm (EST). If my status is set to 'unavailable', you can still reach me via Editor World.<br /><br />