Hi, I am nearing the final stages of writing my personal statement for plastic surgery residency applications. This might be the most important document I have ever written. I am feeling comfortable with the majority of the statement -- I am a little unsure of the strength of the first paragraph. I am also wondering if the first paragraph seems disjointed from the rest of the statement. In general, I would like help making the statement as concise as possible and typo/grammatical error-free. Thanks!