Hi Arnie....<br />I am sending you back each final you have sent me with very small changes.On careful reading several changes you made changed the meaning and as such did not make sense as logically followed through...The one in particular that comes to mind is the wind was making me deaf when I was trying to get Davids attention...whereas the wind was making it hard for him to hear me...as I said little tweaks..Maybe half a dozen in each chapter...also If a word was overused I found another one..again only a few places....Finally...a little nuance...The Island capitalized is when referring to the Island of Bermuda...small island would refer to Harry's Island Turtle island...Or are both capitalized as a matter of form??<br />So I will now send back my little tweaks<br />Magna Charta=Magna Carta...fixed little things like that<br />Cherrio,<br />Andrew