<p class="p1"><b>Thank you for the opportunity to edit your work. Please let me know if there are any issues, and I will address them asap.<br /></b><br /><br />I edited the first page for you, but I am not sure about quite a few of the sentences: for example, I am not sure what&nbsp;&nbsp;the following is supposed to mean: <br /><br />He selected and found many countries strength in art.<br /><br /> Unfortunately, other scholars and high-status people admitted it because of his status.&nbsp;&nbsp;</p>