Hi, there:<br /><br />I edited the resume in the areas of grammar, sentence structure, flow, punctuation, clarity, consistency, spelling, detail, word choice, and organization. I also made sure that the format and content of the resume adhered to current standards of the Professional Assocation of Resume Writers and Career Coaches.<br /><br />In addition, I had a chance to look at the PDF you sent of the strong sample essays (Score 6) and looked again at your essays. Your essays appear to be strong because they feature professional language, are insightful and detailed, and logical. Also, your ideas flow well, and the grammar suggestions should help to further make the essay clear.<br /><br />Thank you very much!<br />MasterEditor