Hi Diane,<br />I'm glad you liked the sample edit and thank you for choosing me for this assignment.<br /><br />In regards to your questions in your message:<br />*I am more than happy to edit any type of document. I do have experience with book reviews, and used to actually assign book review assignments to my students, so I have edited literally hundreds of them.<br />*Happy to help with press releases as well. Format for these does tend to vary quite a bit from company to company, though.<br /><br />As for this edit, you will find corrections in the attached documents. Most were basic, including for proper punctuation in lists (those darn semi-colons!), ensuring parallel tense structure, and general tense shifts (you switched back and forth a bit between present and past, try to stick with one and go with it).<br /><br />This was a really beautiful story about your friend and the personal connections and passion here is so evident and powerful. I commend you for your optimism and ability to help a friend in crisis.<br /><br />Hope to hear from you again soon,<br />Ryan