Hello, Pastor Williams,<br /><br />You have quite an impressive piece of work here. Please don't be discouraged by all the strikethroughs; theses and dissertations take so much editing before they are polished, as I'm sure you know! Feel free to reject any of my changes, and also feel free to contact me if you have any questions or concerns or would like me to look at a section again once you've incorporated those changes you'd like to keep.<br /><br />References are usually a separate service, but I went through yours and cleaned them up a bit, marking where you need additional citation information. I guess you know that the two reference sections will have to be combined.<br /><br />Again, I'm here if you have any questions. Thank you very much for selecting me to work on this paper, and thank you for the good work you do.<br /><br />Laura Kenney