<p>Hi, Wanda,<br />Just wanted to mention that I haven't graduated from Walden yet, but I am very aware of their expectations. I will do what I can to address your concerns, but you should know that, in the case of your adviser looking for more information or explanation of actual facts, I might not be able to help. I can help with clarity, usage, structure, transition, and the other issues you mentioned.<br /><br />I will get this back to you as much before the deadline as possible.<br /><br />Thanks!</p>
<p>Laura</p>