Thanks so much for your work.  I saw almost no issues with your edit suggestions.  The few points you mentioned for possible inconsistencies I could see how you were confused and I'm contemplating ways to eliminate that confusion.  As to another look-over, is that included in the package I purchased?

I very much enjoyed your work.  I'm already editing the second novella for the last time I'll do it before sending it in.  I'd like to use your services again when that happens here in the next few months.  Thanks again for your kind words, your hard work, and your excellent eyes!