<p>Dear Editor,<br />I have submitted the manuscript (draft for journal review) to my supervisor. He has critisized on writing, saying that with such write-ups we will have little chance for publication.<br />If possible, I'd like you to see his edited version (with tract changes) and would like to have some of sentences re-edited by you with (no cost) message attachment (since it was done before by you). I thought you have edited well, but looking at his edited version, there were several missing "a" "the", some sentences he completely rewrote.<br /><br />I need to submit it by tomorrow PM and so let me soon after you see my message<br />thanks</p>