Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your writing sample.<br /><br />I'm afraid it is no longer 15 pp, not because I deleted much content--you can see everything I deleted in the track changes version--but because you had a blank page at the end. So, I don't know what to tell you.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc