The prompt was to Answer the question as to whether or not Amercia waas founded as a Christian Nation.<br /><br />My reponse wa America was not founded as a Christian Nation due to the unorthodox beleifs of the founding fathers, secular nature of Am. Revolutionary War,  and teh foudning documents were secular.....however I do believe Christian princples ( ie. morals/values) were key in its formation.<br /><br />The main point throughout  the course is the profssor wants us to be consie adn to the poitn with our wiritng.  So I would liek you to revise and/or take out any "wordiness" in the essay.<br /><br />Secondly, I would like for you to make sure the first sentence of each paragraph captures powerfully the main point of the paragraph and that the pargraphs flow smoothly from one to another. <br /><br />After reading the paper, I woud liek for you to go back to the introduction adn conclusion and see if the body paragroahs match up with both the intro and cocnlusion.<br /><br />Thanks<br /><br />