Thank you for your consideration. I used Track Changes so that the student can see each of the changes that were made. For some of the bigger changes, I added a comment that explains my thought process behind the change.<br /><br />Many of my clients are non-native speakers of English, and so I am familiar with the struggles with English syntax and grammar. I look forward to working with you and your student in the future. Thank you for the opportunity. Please let me know if you have any questions.