Hello! <br /><br />For this document, I focused on making sure that terminology and spellings were consistent. I also gave strong attention to eliminating as much passive voice as possible to make the sentences more streamlined and flowing from one thought to the next. I left several comments on the sides throughout the document either explaining certain edits of offering suggestions for your consideration, so be sure to look out for those. Feel free to message me if you have any questions! Thanks. =)