<p>Good evening,</p>
<p>I hope all is well. I am sending you my two responses I need for you to help me clean and make it sharper and charged. This is a continuation of the admissio package you helped me edit in November and December of last years, 2015 (about 4 months ago). I am currently competing for 3 fellowships, and the responses we are crafting here will have a major impact in my ability to be chosen as a fellow. <br /><br />As always, I have included in the total word count key background information I have pasted in the document, which I feel will give you better context of how and what I need from you in this editing session. Although I am under the word count limit on both responses, I don't mind if we reduce it even more if need be. Also, for some reason I feel I am repeating the words "Latino", "United States", and "Immigrant" WAY TOO MUCH in both responses. Please help me use different words, or strategically eliminating some unnecessary repetitions, as I am sure the essay as it currently stands, feels very rushed and not emotionally solid. <br /><br />I look forward to your advice as in prior sessions, in order for us to really create a winning essay.</p>
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<p>Best!<br />Salvador</p>