Hello!<br />Thanks for your exellent editing. however, I notcied that you changed the title of sections and did not change in them as the apear in table of contents? like in table of contents page it's -CARDIOVASCULAR RISK FACTORS but the title of the section you made it -CVD RISK FACTORS ?<br /><br />Also, when there is (bla bla)(citation) you made itl ike this (bla bla:citation) ,, I do not know what colon serves for?<br /><br />I'm sure you're right but just to double check with you b4 submitting the draft to my supervisor.