Hi again,<br /><br />Here's part two back! Again, per your request I looked over not only grammar and usage but suggested a few changes to help the content flow better.<br /><br />One small point of confusion - you refer to a course "lease" in one sentence and then to a course "release" in the next. I changed the first to "release" in Track Changes, but go ahead and skip that if it should be "lease." :)<br /><br />I look forward to the third part of your document!<br /><br />Cheers,<br />EM