Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your thesis. I certainly would like to hear the Jubilee Singers sometime! It was never clear to me whether Fisk is an all-male U, so you may need to delete my ref. to sororities. It is something you should clarify in any case. Typically, I am absolutely ruthless about redundancy, but allowed you much more leeway than I do normally, so be grateful :) However, I did attempt to reduce the tendency to use the same phrases repeatedly. There are some organizational issues. I did not take the liberty of doing a lot of reshuffling, but have indicated where I think you need to make changes.<br /><br />I just now noticed your reference to MLA. I am afraid I don't know what style that is, so if I have failed to follow it, please do let me know what it stands for, I'll look it up, and will correct the Biblio accordingly.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc