Hi, Maya:<br /><br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document, and I hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />I hope I haven't altered your meaning, but please proofread carefully. It makes sense to me, but then I'm politically naive -- not so naive, though, that I would support Donald Trump.<br /><br />BFN - George