Hi again,<br />Your document is attached. As with the last document, most chanbes are for conciseness, simplicity, parallel structure, and clarity. Some sentences needed some additional punctuation to make reading a bit more user-friendly.<br /><br />You will notice that this time my corrections show as blue, because your notes you left appear red.<br /><br />Great writing, as before, and before detailed, knowledgable work.<br /><br />Thanks again for selecting me!<br /><br />Ryan