Dear Mr. Jackson,<br /><br />Thanks so much. Can you please see my comments? (I deleted old comments)<br /><br />BTW, how is my English writing? I see that everytime you change my text a lot, does it mean I make a lot of mistakes, or my version is good and you just suggest something better? How do you evaluate my English?<br /><br />Are you a native English speaker? I was thinking you might be Japanese.<br /><br />Thanks,<br />Ramin