Quite a achievement to write almost 300 pages. Congratulations.<br /><br />The main things I see are formatting (inserted some comments in the text) such as indents, chapter headings, and other items.<br /><br />Edited a couple of pages of text and am pleased you've handled the dialogue well (often an issue in stories).&nbsp;<br /><br />Would be willing to edit the entire text after we work out the particulars, notably the schedule&nbsp;as it is a large document.<br /><br />Thank you.<br /><br /><br /><br />