Good morning,<br />Thank you for choosing me as your editor today.<br /><br />This is a well-written and well-researched paper. And very interesting!<br /><br />Overall, most of my edits were grammatical, especially focusing on tense shifts, parallel structure, and verb/subject agreement. Some were for clarity as well. There were a couple of sentences that were unclear to me, including one that was a fragment, and I left notes in the document about those that I think need a little clarity and revision.<br /><br />But generally speaking I imagine you'll be getting great feedback on this!<br /><br />Please keep me in mind for any future editing needs and consider rating me a 5/5 if you were pleased with today's edits.<br /><br />Thanks so much,<br />Ryan