Hi, Juanita:<br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document, and I hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />Inspired by your draft, I did quite a bit of re-writing, thinking that it's better to over than under edit with a letter that's as important as this. You can, of course, choose which parts you like and reject or modify anything you dislike.&nbsp;<br /><br />I was careful not to change the letter's content, but please proofread the edited document carefully.<br /><br />Best wishes - George (TypeRighter)<br />I am usually available for editing between 6:00 am and 10:30 pm (EST). If my status is set to 'unavailable', you can still reach me via Editor World.