If you click on Review and then choose All Markup, you will only see the formatting changes (and more were made than are shown, but I decided not to track them all). 

I didn't make any content-related comments, having done so in the previous draft. I would be curious about the intent/purpose of this text. The paper ends on a very controversial point, which I assume is anti-war (more bodies, more coffins). 

After being so critical early in the text of making a profit on others' difficulties (the one man's trash is another man's treasure), you weaken your argument by the closing quote, which if paraphrased: Heck, somebody has to do it and if they get a buck, that's a good buck.

You could put that quote first and then refute it in the text (as that seems to be the rhetorical thread). 

All in all, this is a bold and somewhat strange text, and if I knew your purpose, then I'd be "less dumb."