The lit review is much smoother and reads excellently! &nbsp;My professor hates the word "that" because it is not active or in the present! Could you reword those few sentences? Also, could you reword the sentences that begin with- furthermore, howerever, hence, therefore- &nbsp;he is not fond of those words either! &nbsp;I appreciate your work, and besides those few changes- I love the flow! &nbsp;Thank you and look forward to the changes! &nbsp;Thanks Ray