Hello, Daran - Here's the edited ms.&nbsp; I hope I got the formatting right after being so confused about what exactly was required.&nbsp; In terms of other requirements, such as appropriate number of pages in Findings and Analysis, as well as the tone of the writing, I think it looks excellent.&nbsp; Let me know if you have questions or comments.&nbsp; FYI, I'll be unavailable for the next 2 weeks, so if you need additional editing services, I'd be very happy to work with you again when I return, but if the time frame doesn't work for you, I'm sure there are other excellent editors at Editor World who can help you.&nbsp; It's a privilege to assist with your interesting manuscripts.&nbsp; RebeccaTDE