Dear Editor, <br /><br />Thanks for helping edit my paper. A previous submission of the paper got some bad reviews regarding the presentation, e.g., "The manuscript needs editing for language. It is carelessly written to the extent that it interferes with the comprehension of its content. For example on p.27 there is a sentence that says:" ..with each successive generation... parental practice gradually shifts from authoritative parenting to authoritative parenting...." I would greatly appreciate it if you could help resolve these issues. Thanks a lot. <br /><br /><br />Sincerely Yours,<br /><br />Kathy