<p>Hi there,<br />Thanks for selecting me to edit your document.<br /><br />I made a number of changes for readability - fixing tense shifts, missing articles, and grammar changes for confusion.<br /><br />Oveall your paper is well-written, though there is some confusion for me in the middle sections. I would encourage you to read some sentences out loud and see how you feel they sound.<br /><br />Your points are well argued, though.&nbsp;<br /><br />Thanks again,</p>
<p>Ryan</p>