Hi Nyanicdoc,<br /><br />Please fix any grammatical and syntax errors, and leave me any comments/suggestions to make the writing more coherent. Also, the writing is a statement of purpose, so it will be great if you can check whether the writer's purpose of graduate study is clearly written throughout the writing.&nbsp;Lastly, I used terms such as "multi-scale approaches", "micro- and macro-scale approaches". I cannot write the definitions for those terms in the writing because it will only make the writing too long. I just want to make sure that those words do not sound strange.<br /><br />Thanks for your service!<br /><br /><br />Best,<br /><br />Viv