Good evening,<br />Thank you for the potential opportunity to be your editor. I hope you might consider me for any future editing needs you might have.<br /><br />The letter is very well written. My editing changes are for clarification and ease, as well as some basic word changes. A few of the changes were for style (i.e. not using contractions). I made a few&nbsp;of changes for consistency in tone and tense as well.<br /><br />My suggestions for further edits are minimal:<br />*I might suggest a bit more detail about your history with rheumatoid arthritis. What symptoms did you have, and did they completley disappear? (You mention the symptoms, but specifics would be powerful.) I would try to make your story a bit more personal.<br />*There were a number of words or phrases used repeatedly close together - prescription, benefits, mind. I changed a handful of these to add variety.<br />*I would encourage you to try and find the editor's name, to make this even more tailored for him/her.<br /><br />Overall, I think this is a very well written letter - I would be happy to include your article if I were the editor!<br /><br />Thanks again,<br />Ryan