Hi,&nbsp;<span lang="EN-US">Hangsan Ahn:<br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document, and I hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />Good luck with your letter, your studies, and your new young family! I was there myself many years ago.<br /><br />Great to see you back!&nbsp;<br /><br />Best wishes - George<br />I am usually available for editing between 6:00 am and 10:30 pm (EST). If my status is set to 'unavailable', you can still reach me via Editor World.<br /></span>