Hi there!<br /><br />Thanks for sending this over for a sample edit. As it is a sample, I have edited the first two paragraphs to give you an idea for how I work.<br /><br />If you decide to work with me, my schedule is pretty open over the next few days and I am running a 15% off special - you can find details on my editor page.<br /><br />If you have any questions or concerns, please don't hesitate to let me know!<br /><br />Cheers!<br />EM