Hi, Vaughn:<br /><br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document and hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />I made more edits to your document than were strictly necessary -- but better more than fewer. And with Track Changes, you can easily keep or reject any or all of the edits.<br /><br />It was a well-written document&nbsp;to begin with. I hope you find it slightly better.<br /><br />Best wishes - George (TypeRighter)