Hi Sir,<br />I uploaded personal statement that you edited yesterday, I deleted some words and added some words to make my ideas clear and up to the point. I request you to go through it again and make it look more professional in terms of grammar and punctuation errors. It seems like my sentences are too long with lot of commas, if possible please break them and connect them with transitional words or paraphrase them without changing the ideas<br /><br />Thank you so much for your help.