Hello, goo,<br /><br />I've completed the edit of your document. There are some more extensive edits than what I usually would do, but I tried to ensure that everything you asked for was done, including making sure it has a good flow and few divergences from the topic. I tried to keep the meaning of the paper the same, although in a few cases it was a bit technical for me. I hope that it is to your liking.<br /><br />Sincerely,<br /><br />- TWD