Hello, Laura,&nbsp;<br /><br />Sorry for getting back to you late, but I'm tied up trying to prepare for my perfume launch in February, using items from my novel. The perfume also relates to the novel.&nbsp;<br /><br />I don't understand what I need to correct other than removing the last names and the bold. Please clarify why there are lines on pages but no notes.&nbsp;<br /><br />Also the reason for the break when Yashani leaves the hotel, the POV changes to objective&nbsp;view. &nbsp;She is not telling that part of the story. And certain things that are said, she doesn't know about it, like the man owing a debt why they killed him. If it's wrong, please let me know. &nbsp;<br /><br />Are you able to edit 200 pages within one week? That's what I will be sending on the 23rd-next week.&nbsp;<br /><br />Again, thanks so much.&nbsp;<br /><br /><br />