Hi, Emilia:<br /><br />
<p>I have uploaded your edited document and hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />You wrote a nice heartfelt essay, which I simply polished, as usual.&nbsp;<br /><br />I hope you have a wonderful summer.<br /><br />Best wishes - George</p>
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