Hi! This is for a blog post. I would like to keep the tone light, but serious. I think in this draft I go a little overboard with using non-classic&nbsp;grammar and it comes off too juvenile. &nbsp;If you have any questions about tone or audience, please let me know. The last post, Pt 1 garnered 1000's of views, so I would like pt 2 to be good too!<br /><br />Here's a link to Pt 1<br /><a href="https://medium.com/course-studies/why-i-left-medical-school-for-a-career-in-analytics-cfba7285528#.qym4w0nbn">https://medium.com/course-studies/why-i-left-medical-school-for-a-career-in-analytics-cfba7285528#.qym4w0nbn<br /><br /></a>Please edit for syntax, tone and grammar.<br /><br />Looking forward to reading the corrections!<br /><br />z<br /><br /><br /><br />