There are a few details that I'm not positive I've interpreted correctly in my edits (mostly pertaining to timeframes, but also in a few instances where I've come across unfamiliar jargon). I've flagged these details in the Track Changes comments for the edits, and if there are any issues that you see (either in the areas I've flagged or otherwise) please let me know so I can correct my errors and give you the five-star editing service you deserve.