Really enjoyed reading this (I use a Callaway driver and matching 3 and 5 woods).<br /><br />You mentioned not having any in-text citations and that you needed them. You do&nbsp;need them&nbsp;because you have some many sales figures and percentages that cannot be considered as "common knowledge."&nbsp;Those sources, of course, will go into&nbsp;your Works Cited/References page.<br /><br />You did not include any graphics (tables or charts). Adding&nbsp;sales tables/charts for the rising and falling numbers of golfers and the annual sales of industry leaders would make it easier for the readers to see where Callaway ranks in its industry.<br /><br />