Hi Rebecca,<br /><br />This is the last document I need for this class. Its a summary based on a peer review article. He wants its concise leading the most important data in the first sentence. First paragraph explains results of the study findings (5-6 lines). Second paragraph are strengths you found with examples (5-6lines). Third paragraph is weaknesses of the article with examples (5-6 lines). Last paragraph just relates this topic to what was covered is class (1-2lines).  Again please fix flow, grammar, and make sure its concise. His complaints about my writing are structrue/writing and to add additional examples.  I tried doing this for the second paragraph, but for the 3rd, when the information is junk, I felt jsut saying it was cluttered was enough. No need to worry about citing. <br /><br />Stephanie Platt