Okay--<br /><br />No, don't say to be continued--when you publish, you can put in an afterword or on the back cover that this is the first in a trilogy (along the lines of: keep an eye out for Passion's Cry (or the actual title), book two of the Passion Trilogy<br /><br />One diva = diva's impulse &nbsp; &nbsp;two divas= divas' impulse<br /><br />If the second part of a sentence has a subject (in the example below, "she"), then there's a comma. If not, and there is just an objective clause, then no comma. Example of each:<br /><br />Jan ran down the street, but she wasn't very fast.<br /><br />Jan ran down the street but wasn't very fast.<br /><br />The single quotation marks only go around the dialogue being quoted within dialogue. Let's say Ivy is telling Yashani something his mother told him:<br />"My mother always said, 'The sun comes up, the sun goes down. Means nothing.' I don't know why she would say that all the time."<br /><br />You don't put the single quotation mark at the end unless the whole thing ends with what mama was saying. Does that make sense?<br /><br />The clean doc is attached :)