Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your story. I think you did basically a good job for an ESL writer, except for your stylistic use of present tense, which is awkward: I am driving, etc. I have changed that. I didn't see anything that needed to be eliminated entirely.<br /><br />It's always interesting for me to read pieces by my fellow travelers. Be grateful that you don't hop the express train from mania to psychosis as I do. I've had three breaks in my life, at 9-11 yr intervals. My doctor told me that w/ age, it's more common to experience depression than psychosis. I hope he's right, because if I have another one, I think it will kill me. The last one in 2011 almost did. A couple of times I've had benign episodes of mania in which one's brilliance can really shine forth, but those are few and far between.<br /><br />I wish you all the best in managing your illness and in life in general :)<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc