Hi, Ryan - I hope this edit meets your requirements.&nbsp; I did follow APA style with the refs.&nbsp; I had a bit of technical difficulty in that I wasn't able to edit the in-text citations for some reason, but I did make comments indicating how they should be revised.&nbsp; I also noted in Comments some items in the references that seemed unclear to me and might need clarification for your readers.&nbsp; In my opinion your writing is clear and skillful, but I did make some word choice suggestions and did the routine copy editing.&nbsp; I was not sure what format you are going for in terms of headings, so I pretty much left that alone.&nbsp; Let me know if you have any questions, and thanks for the privilege of working with you.&nbsp; RebeccaTDE