Thanks for choosing my services. I heavily edited and rewrote your article. I'm unsure of your target audience,&nbsp;so I cannot suggest much in the way of style or formatting. However, I do suggest using some type of formatting to make each restaurant paragraph stand out -- whether it's a bullet or number or using boldface font for the restaurant names. Also, adding website links would be an asset to your readers.<br /><br />Lastly, I think you need a concluding paragraph to bring the article together and to give it a sense of finality.<br /><br />