Without a doubt, the best title I've seen&nbsp;on this website.&nbsp;<br /><br />All edits are as shown. You tended to over use the "not only but also" structure and I changed most of them. Another "writer's tic" was the use of parentheses ( ). Took most of those out.<br /><br />Otherwise, a brillant text. I enjoyed reading it and will now get the movie and re-read the book.<br /><br />Jackson