Hi, Waleed:<br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document, and I hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />Let's see: I added a few things - if they're incorrect just change or delete them. I played down the Mobily scandal (it's still mentioned), but I didn't want to get too political. Instead, I emphasized Saudi Arabia's plans for diversification.<br /><br />Generally, graduate schools are looking&nbsp;for passion and fluency, and you have both of those aplenty. The actual&nbsp;topic for your dissertation&nbsp;will probably come six months after you start the program, in consultation with your advisor.<br /><br />Anyway, your Statement of Interest sounds great. If you have any questions, please send a message via Ediror&nbsp;World and I'll&nbsp;get back to you as soon as I can.<br /><br />Best wishes - George<br /><br /><br />