Dear Word Doctor,<br /><br />I liked the great improvements in the flow that you have achieved!<br /><br />There are 4-5 minor items, that I marked in yellow highlight AND added a comment. These are things like deleting a preposition or noun&nbsp;that may need to stay. Could you please take a quick look and let me know if you agree with my comments?<br /><br />You have done such a good job that I don't want to risk making inaccurate changes.<br /><br />Thanks,<br /><br />Mario