Hello, nyanidoc. This is my second request for your professional editing service :)<br />I am planning to pursue a Ph.D program in the U.S. and to apply for a Fulbright scholarship.<br />The first&nbsp;1-2 pages are my <em>Personal Statement</em>&nbsp;and 3-4 pages are <em>Research Objective.<br /></em>I am worried that the text is too wordy and not understandable by the judges.<br />I want&nbsp;the text to be concise&nbsp;and&nbsp;to the point.<br />I really welcome the deletion of&nbsp;unnessary/inappropriate information and&nbsp;comments to improve&nbsp;its contents or style.<br />Thanks in advance.<br /><br /><br />