Hello again, Valeria,<br /><br />Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your proposal. I like the direction the book is going, and think it will be helpful for a wide range of people. <br /><br />In thinking about your comments, I did not really change the structure at all, but I believe what you have presented is in very good shape now. <br /><br />With that said, in my admittedly limited experience, a proposal is a much shorter document that consists of a cover letter, an outline w/ a short synopsis of each chapter--some of what you have for various chapters would be fine for that purpose--and a sample of a complete, early chapter. If I were you, I would consult with others who have written successful book proposals and get their feedback. The only proposal I wrote was pre-9/11, after which everything changed, including the publishing industry.<br /><br />Also, have you considered self-publishing? That surely must be much easier and you can still achieve a wide distribution on Amazon.&nbsp;<br /><br />All food for thought.<br /><br />Thank you again and as before, ratings are much appreciated.&nbsp;<br /><br />Very best regards and success in getting the book published,<br /><br />Nyanidoc