Hi there,<br />Thanks so much for selecting me.<br /><br />Not sure as to your prompt or details, but perhaps paragraphs should be indented?<br /><br />There are a number of sentences I'm confused by, and while I worked to edit them there were a few where I was unable to discern a meaning strong enough to edit. I did continue to edit the grammar, but left comments when I was confused, particularly in the opening paragraph. I rewrote and deleted a couple of sentences, but a few I couldn't attempt as I just don't know what you were intending to mean.<br /><br />Beyond that, most edits were made for clarity, ease of reading, issues with article usage, and avoiding tense shifts. I can say for certain this is fixed.<br /><br />Thank you again.