Barbara, I'm just about done with editing this first chunk. I've totally done all of the grammar and usage and some of the wording, I just need to read through it again to make sure that details are consistent throughout and that they are in the best order.&nbsp;<br /><br />To that end, I have a question for you. In what you mentioned might serve as the prologue (Near-Miss, and I agree. It introduces the "characters" and situation nicely), you mention that Simon is your boyfriend. You do that a few other times, including saying that you thought he might be holding back from marriage until the boys were all out of the house. And then in a couple of other chapters, you refer to him as your husband, or as the boys' stepdad. Which would you like to do throughout?&nbsp;<br /><br />Also, twice you say that Bryan was 6'5", and the other times you say he is 6'4". Was he 6'4" back then, and 6'5" now? Again, this is just for consistency's sake.<br /><br />Let me know!