There are a few instances of quotations that you have without giving the page number from the source. I believe that I marked all of those. I added some thigns for clarity and explanation, so make sure that they are actually correct and say what you want to say.&nbsp;<br /><br />For the section that has the results and the figures, would you consider changing the format a bit so that each question and corresponding figure is its own page? It can get a little confusing having the figure for one question on the page with the next question. You can do this by doing a hard return, or a page break, after each figure.&nbsp;<br /><br />Let me know if you have any questions or concerns. I will upload the dissertation form in just a few minutes.<br /><br />Thank you.