Thanks for your help on Men Working.  The piece flows much better, and youve given me some good writing tips as well.  I was not an English major, nor was my high school English teacher particularly fond of my writing.   I see you only use one space between sentences, whereas I have always used two spaces.  I assume that is for publication purposes (save print space)?  Thanks again.  Ill get bak to you in a couple days with another short piece (under 7500 words).  Enjoy your day.
Dan