<p>Dear nyanidoc,<br />This is my second time to work with you. <br />This is a part of my sample writing that I asked you to edit before. <br />I will use this material as a part of my graduate school application document. <br />I have no concern&nbsp;because you have a plenty of experience to conduct this kind of study in field of social science.<br />This is an ongoing research project&nbsp;but I use past tense because I ended&nbsp; finding subjects and manupulating experimental conditions. <br />But I am worry that I make some mistakes on using proper tense. <br />Please check the grammar, research procedures, and expecially for the entire flow of the material. I am also more than welcome to fix additional mistakes except the grammar. <br /><br />Many thanks you for your efforts. <br /><br /><br /></p>