I usually provide all my clients with both the Track Changes version of a document and the clean, edited version. However, Editor World's site will only allow me to upload the Track Changes version. Once you have opened the document, if you will simply click on the Review tab, then the down arrow uncer the Accept button, and finally Accept All Changes and Stop Tracking, then you will have the clean, edited version.<br /><br />You will note there are 2 comments in the document. On all academic projects, one of the first things I do is to crosscheck citations and references. Out of that habit, I looked up several (not all) of your citations, and believe I found some corrections that need to be made. If I had access to your complete article, and the list of references, I would do a very thorough review to identify any mis-matches between citations and references, as well as an APA check on the style of all citations and references.<br /><br />If you are happy with the outcome of this edit, I would be more than happy to work on the remainder of the article.<br /><br />Elizabeth Belasco, PhD<br />elizabethbelasco@thegradcoach.com