Hi Joan Wang,<br /><br />Above, I submit two paragraphs of an edit that is free to you. The two paragraphs constitute one full page of your paper. <br />You have a wonderful voice, and it is my great pleasure to work with you. If you like my work at all, please provide me a good rating. I will also be very happy to help you with the rest of your paper.<br /><br />Again, it is my great pleasure to work with you. Thank you so much!<br /><br />Sincerely,<br />WordMaven aka Shireen Stephenson