Thanks for choosing me again. :)<br /><br />I edited this response similarly. I'm finding your topic very interesting! There was one sentence&nbsp;that I was very confused by, and didn't really know what you meant. I edited it grammatically and left a comment as I think it needs some clarification.<br /><br />The rest of it was grammar and organizational.<br /><br />Keep up the good work!<br /><br />Ryan