Hi, Dana:<br /><br />Hi Dana:<br /><br />I've uploaded your document and hope that you find the corrections and suggestions helpful.<br /><br />Just a couple of things...<br /><br />Point 19 in this document was missing - that is, the number is there but there were no instructions after it. I left it in place in case you intended a blank paragraph. But if that's not the case, all you need to do is delete the number and the other numbers will renumber automatically. <br /><br />I noticed this time that I could use Track Changes which wasn't enabled on the last document. This will make accepting or rejecting the changes much easier for you. Initially, I just made a recommendation in a comment in the margin, but then I decided to go over the document and include the changes anyway, which you can accept or reject. <br /><br />One other point. To get around the spelling issue, which can be quite tricky, I sometimes suggested using a different word. For example, "using" or "use" substitutes well for "utilizing" or "utilize". With words like "colour" and "behaviour" there is of course no substitute so I followed UK spelling where appropriate. <br /><br /><br />Thank you for sending your documents to me.&nbsp;I really enjoyed my training.<br /><br />If you have any questions, or I can be of further help, please let me know via Editor World.&nbsp;<br /><br /><br />Best wishes - George<br /><br />P.S. If you decide to go with the suggestions, please let me know and I'll send you a revised version early tonight.&nbsp;