I would like to requset for editing my writing sample(for garduate school application) which consists of my master's thesis.<br />I wonder if it delievers my intention right, and &nbsp;I want it to be more polished, cogent and free of grammatical error. &nbsp;<br /><br />There is a limitation in length, so it would be fine if it will become shorter, but not become longer.&nbsp;<br />Also,I think that the references in sentence always need to follow the original sentence when the sentences are modified. <br /><br />(I skipped the "METHOD", because I think that part is OK)<br /><br />I think you may know a lot about health science which is the field of the writing sample. &nbsp;<br />Thank you for editing my writing sample!<br /><br /><br />