Hi Nyanidoc.<br /><br />I wondering if you can help me with storytelling. This might become a fiction book.<br />I am writing an outline - list of events for my story and would like you to edit it for me but more important, tell me where are the flaws of my story. What is missing from my outline. How I can improve it.&nbsp;<br /><br />Please let me know.&nbsp;<br /><br />If you can help me with this, I will send you the file next week.<br /><br />Thank you,<br />Valeria&nbsp;<br /><br /><br /><br /><br />