Hi Qureshi university,<br />Your document is attached with my suggestions shown using Word's track changes feature. I show the changes in green and highlight them as you requested in your previous message. As I mentioned before, if you go into the "Review" menu and view the document in "Final," it will remove all of the green. But it will leave the highlighting because that had to be manually applied. I hope you find the edits helpful. I struggled with a sentence and wrote a note to you in the document about it. Thank you so much for choosing me as your editor!