Soo -<br /><br />I've completed editing your document. Overall, I thought it was quite&nbsp;well done. Despite the technical language being used, I found it very easy to follow your arguments and make sense of your conclusions. Most of my edits are simple things such as word use or&nbsp;gramar and&nbsp;punctuation, I don't believe there was anything really significant, other than that one sentence I messaged you about earlier. I've left a few short comments about things that are beyond the scope of my work. Thank you very much for choosing The Word Doctor for your editing needs, and I wish you good luck with getting it published!<br /><br />Sincerely,<br /><br />- TWD&nbsp;