Dear NYANIDOC,&nbsp;<br /><br />This manuscript passed the first review by an academic journal (Asian Pacific Journal of Human Resources). I heavily revised (marked in blue color) and will submit it for final decision on publication, which is very important for me. Clarity and natural flow are my top priorities. I used present tense as I felet it necessary. &nbsp;Please give special attention on conclusion. <br /><br />Thank you in advance for your wonderful job as always!<br /><br />Sincerely, <br /><br />Kwon&nbsp;