Hello,&nbsp;<br /><br />You&nbsp;may remember my paper.<br />Fortunately, I passed the thesis defense, but I received some feedback, so I made some changes before the final submission.&nbsp;<br />Please proofread and revise some inappropriate expressions. <br />(I marked with&nbsp;memos where my advisor told me that there are awkward expressions)<br /><br />Thank you.&nbsp;<br /><br /><br />