Hello there,<br /><br />This is a short excerpt from the beginnings of a novel that I am working on. I am currently in the process of applying to MFA programs for fiction and intend to submit a 25 page sample which I am currently in the process of reworking and fine-tuning. I am looking for editing help, mostly and grammar issues that stand out. Also any suggestions with structure, content, and anything that isn't clear. I would be looking to send the other pages over as well and have the whole piece worked on. I am looking to send the applications over the next two months. <br /> I look forward to hearing back and will be happy to provide more information.<br /> Also the novel is set in a fictional/somewhat dystopian New York. The story involves a plague that is affecting the city and some other fictional elements. <br /> Thank you and hope to hear from you.<br /><br /> Robert Rich