Hi, Ivan:<br /><br />These comments apply&nbsp;to both documents,&nbsp;so I'll just write them, once, here. As you know, a lot of editing is subjective, neither better nor worse than the original, just different. With you submissions, so much depends&nbsp;on timing and the voice. While I try not to change&nbsp;the latter, timing is crucial. A well-considered thought, such as about parenting, for example, can lose its effect if it's rendered verbatim from speech to prose. That's why I've made these changes. Nothing critical. Just a preference.<br /><br />Still feeling miserable, but I hope you're well.&nbsp;<br /><br />Sorry for the delay - George