Hi there -<br />This is excellently written and really details your passions and interests on the topic at hand. It is so clear in your writing that these are topics you are connected to and truly care about.<br /><br />My edits are generally for clarity, including some extra articles like you mentioned, along with some word changes and rearrangements for clarity. There were a handful of sentences that were a bit tricky to understand without reading more than once, so I tried to clarify or simplify as necessary. I would encourage you to read sentences out loud, as sometimes hearing it (or stumbling through reading it ourselves) helps to realize that there's something a bit 'off'. There were also some punctuation issues.<br /><br />Overall though, once again great piece of personal writing.<br /><br />Thank you for selecting me as your editor today. Have a great rest of the weekend!<br /><br />Ryan