Hello. I did this right away because you said you have to submit it by tomorrow. Your writing is quite good so don't be frightened by the changes I made. They are to show you how your writing can be made even better and how I can help. I look forward to working with you. I'm at your beck and call except this coming Sunday and Monday, when I'll be away. Please let me know what style of editing you want (CMS, APA, MLA ...)