Hello, Five:<br /><br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document and hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />I tried not to change any content, but the insertion or deletion of a single word can do that quite easily, so please proofread carefully.<br /><br />Where I could I changed the possessive plural noun to a single collective noun, which is current practice. For example, "The librarians' perspectives are important ... " sounds awkward, so it becomes, "The librarian perspective is important..."<br /><br />I added one source as a footnote&nbsp;because it wasn't in your bibliography.<br /><br />Although I re-read the document several times, it's possible I missed a typo here and there, so please check carefully.<br /><br />Overall, though, it's a first-rate paper. I'm looking forward to editing part 2. I lost track of how&nbsp;many hours went into part 1, but I'll have the second part for you later tonight, probably close to the deadline.<br /><br />If you have any questions or concerns, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />Best wishes - George&nbsp;<br /><br />By the way, apropos your note, you're easily more fluent than the majority of native English speakers. English is a hard language to master.