<h3>1. I choose you because you have anthropological background since this study is based on the anthropological method.  So I want you to<strong> change my terms in more academical tone especially ralated with anthropological theory</strong> rather than to correct grammatical error.  (you can rewrite some of the theory I mentioned if you know better about it.)</h3><h3>2. If you can, feel free to remove few sentences which is not needed. (this article has to be published in truncated form) 6258 to 5000</h3><h3>thank you.</h3>