RE: "Hello"
Hi again,
Thanks again for your help.  You made no comments about the ending, and Im curious what you thought of it.  Since Rose was the only one who called John, Jay, did the idea of a dead person communicating with John through the Internet help or take away from the story?
Would a better ending be somewhere in the previous paragraph? Exactly three years later, St. Patricks Day, John sat, staring at the blinking cursor. Or,
Exactly three years later, St. Patricks Day, John sat, staring at the blinking cursor. To his astonishment, the cursor started to move, leaving a trail of letters behind it.
Also, would you suggest I weave some pieces of family history into the piece where it seem to be a more natual fit, or are you okay with the latest version?
Thanks,
Dan