<p>Hi Laura,</p>
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<p>I hope all is well. Thanks for your help on &ldquo;Warm Butter Oozing.&rdquo; However, I think connecting Bernie to the Smithereens is now a mistake. I already have a coincidental to Geronimo betweenJimmy Smithers and tattoo girl. Making another connection, this time with Bernie (of Bernie&rsquo;s Bagel Shop) as Jimmy&rsquo;s sax player may be too convenient for the story.&nbsp; Something tells me <i>no&mdash;too cute.&nbsp;</i></p>
<p>So, I have taken out the last paragraph of Warm Butter Oozing (EW-61838) and have inserted two ending paragraphs that total about 200 words.&nbsp;</p>
<p>I will send you the new ending two paragraphs (replacing the final paragraph that you read which made the connection to Bernie). The revised ending I believe is more plausible and may help advance the story, I&rsquo;ll also send you the next piece after Warm Butter Oozing, titled: &ldquo;After Cleveland.&rdquo;&nbsp;</p>
<p>Take care,</p>
<p>Dan</p>