hi again,<br />the following sentence you edited seems to be a bit "odd" becuase, the word I wrote "fate" is missing.<br /><br />What I tried to say was that "results from the fate and transport processes of P have shown the major...."<br /><br />But you wrote it as follows. As you can see, the word "fate" is missing. Please confirm how the sentence should be writte,<br /><br />you wrote it as follows<br /><br />..."because the results of P and transport processes in sediments have shown the major factors affecting P"<br /><br />here "fate" is missing.