Extraordinaryedit,<br />  This is for an entry level position in the business world. <br />I know that the layout needs, fixing but I will do that after you revise it.<br />I would like you to revise the sentences that are written in red. I would also<br />like you to revise the rest of the document (content, grammar etc.)<br /><br />Thank you,<br />Shelly Greaves