Hi, <br />Thank you for assisting me in my MA thesis edit. The table of contents page I have not yet completed but it is not something that I am asking to be reviewed, as I will be able to adequately address its construction upon the completion the text editing. My MA thesis is on instructional methods applied at the Barnes Foundation in the mid-twentieth century. Therefore, from pages 59-79 you will find images referenced in the text. The bibliograph and the images are not something that I am seeking to be editted as again, I will manage to resolve those.<br /><br />The sytle of footnotes is to follow the Chicago Manuel style, however, there are many instances of footnotes that I am checking, and this is not a primary concern, as I have not, after carefrul revising, not received comments on my work about inadequate citations.<br /><br />The main issue that I need help in editing centers around the structure of my sentences. I have been told that often my sentences turn into run-on sentences that do not identify clear subjects and verbs. The first 35 pages of the 55 pages I have re-worked over and over, probably to a fault! The last 20 pages were hastily re-read and a bit editted. I am working to sort out still a five page concluding paragraph, which is not yet included here, and likely something I will work on with a collegue.<br /><br />Many thanks for your help!