Hello<br /><br />This is a part of my dissertation including introduction and literature review.<br />My area is organizational behavior and this dissertation is about social network effects on abusive supervision.<br />Although this is my dissertation, this will be potentially submitted to one of the major management journal.<br /><br />So, if you can give comments and revise this focusing on points below, that will be great<br /><br />1. whether each paragraph is coherenet enough<br />2. whether each sentence sound right. I got comments from my advisor such as "some sentences are very awkward, sounds weird"<br /><br />Please feel free to edit as much as you want. even structure of sentences or paragraphs.<br /><br />Thank you!<br /><br />