<p>Hello, Gloria,<br /><br />This is an impressive paper. I made changes to cut down on repetition and to increase clarity. Please let me know if you have any questions or if you would like me to take another look (just send the file through this messaging system so you don't get charged) after you have had a chance to look the doc over.&nbsp;<br /><br />Thank you!</p>
<p>Laura</p>