It is a&nbsp;part of my SOP.<br />I need it to be edited to show this to&nbsp;professors to ask&nbsp;them a letter of recommendation.<br /><br />My research background during the university courses&nbsp;is edited by my advisor, so I omitted it.<br />Please help me with other parts. <br />Red words are the ones that I am not sure about it. I couldn't find the proper words.<br /><br />I want my work to be well organized.<br />Thanks a lot.<br /><br />Best regards,<br />Sooyeon.