Hi again<br /><br />Thank you for your sample. You greatly improved my writting. I am very grateful :)<br />Atttached is the disucussion chapter of my PhD. thesis. Please you only need to review the writting sections that are <strong>hilighted with yellow.</strong><br />As I explained you before, I really apreciate if you can make my writting more engaging, without repetitive sentence structures and connectors. Attention to grammar is also important because my first language is spanish.<br /><br />Few things you need to know:<br /><br /><strong>TDF</strong> means Therorethical Domains Framework<br /><strong>HCPs</strong> means health care professionals<br /><strong>NEC</strong> means Necrotizing enterocolitis<br /><strong>NICUs</strong> means Neonatal Intensive Care Untis<br /><br />if you have any questions let me know.&nbsp;<br /><br />Yenly<br /><br />