As you can see, I'm working very hard to make the words more conversational and less stilted; in other words, more the way people really talk. Also, I'm eliminating extraneous wording and repetition. That's what's taking so long because I'm going over it three times. This part is ready to go, and I'll have another piece this long later today. You get all my attention tomorrow, too, so I expect to finish it. Arnie