Happy Friday,<br />Thanks again for choosing me to edit your letter today.<br /><br />The majority of changes were for consistency in tone and tense, along with removing a few repeated words for variety's sake, and some minor punctuation and grammatical errors. Overall this is a very well-written letter, and your passion and experience shines through.<br /><br />Your font switched back and forth a couple of times between Times New Roman and Cambria, then back again - something I did not fix because I want to make sure you get to pick the font you prefer.<br /><br />In short - I'd hire you!<br /><br />Thanks again,<br />Ryan