this is a part of my personal statement I am trying to get it edited I thought you would be the best person who can help me to express myself <br />This 1st para is true incident that happened to me when I was young that is what made me to pursue medical career <br />I am now applying for residency. English is my second language. I was express my thought and story in a nice smooth readable manner <br />also please feel free to correct the gramitical errors and I will submit you my final summary once I get this sample back <br />thanks