<p>This required an extensive edit because of the numerous acronyms, word choices, dividing overly long and twisted sentences, among other edits.<br /> <br /> Perhaps you should reconsider the format of some many long bullet points (just use regular paragraphs).<br /> <br /> After all changes are made, the text will need a careful reading.<br /> <br /> Thank you,</p>
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