Hi, Ivan:<br /><br />First, an apology. I edited this document yesterday&nbsp;but held off submitting it because I sometimes&nbsp;make changes the next day. It's so similar&nbsp;to your second submission, I won't change&nbsp;the second one. I'll just return it to you. By the way, if you do think of something after you've submitted a document,&nbsp;just send an attachment with a&nbsp;message. There's no charge. I feel guilty about this second submission of yours. If you contact Patti Fisher at Editor World, I'm sure she'll refund the charge. Say I fully support the refund. I'm afraid I don't have the authority or the means to do it myself, but there's no point you&nbsp;paying twice for the same (or almost the same) document.<br /><br />I really like the picture you included. It made the editing so much more personal: a face behind the philosophy.&nbsp;<br /><br />Best wishes - George<br /><br />The other document (unchanged) will follow in a minute