Well, I must say&nbsp; ..you put a great deal of work into this .... I didn't think I was that bad of a writer&nbsp; ... but ... being dyslexic does have it draw backs ..<br /><br />So far I have no major concerns with the changes ... with the exception of making Alyssa's writing too good ... and there fore "less authentic "&nbsp;(she is 22, so her text should be well&nbsp; ... filled with young person's errors??? &nbsp;I have to think about that one some .... but I will plug away and be in touch ... but for now thank you very much. <br /><br />So I've been quite busy and have just started working my way throgh the changes&nbsp; ... and I noticed one little thing you&nbsp; may want to check in your system&nbsp; ... every time (or almost every time) I used the world "us" it shows up in your changes as "U.S." .... <br /><br />The other thing that I could ask&nbsp; ... but know that you are supposed to be neutral in this&nbsp; ... Did you like the book?&nbsp; Did you find it interesting and "compelling in any way."&nbsp; Its alright&nbsp; ... you can tell the truth ... since I paid you already and I am going to publish it anyways.<br /><br />I know its not great literature but .... did you like it?<br /><br /><br />