Hi mr10321,<br />Your document is attached with my edits in red using Word's track changes feature. You mention a "JP" a "WE" and a "TOI" in the results section without having explained the meanings of those acronyms anywhere else. I assume that there is a body of work that will be inserted in the document before the "results" section in which those acronyms are defined. But, I felt I should make note of it anyway.<br /><br />I hope that you find my edits useful. Thank you very much for choosing me to be your editor! I appreciate it and hope to hear from you again.