Hi Vivian,<br />Your document is attached edited as I would suggest. The PDF form is throwing me off. I always download and upload Word documents. My edits are always visible in red through using Word's track changes feature. But, this platform will only let me send back the same type of document you sent originally. And the PDF doesn't show my changes. I will try to go into the messages section here at Editor World and send you the Word version with all the redlined edits showing so you can see the edits. At any rate, I hope you like my suggestions. Thank you so much for choosing me as your editor! Please let me know if you have any concerns. Like I said, I will attempt to send the Word version to you.