Wanted to get this draft to you early, in case you have questions.<br /><br />Several points:<br /><br />1. I opted to lowercase "county" unless it was part of a formal name. Starting to wonder about this as often in corporate reports "company" is always "Company" when referring to the report's owner. You can search and replace easily if you prefer caps.<br /><br />2. Table numbering is a mystery (see comments in text). Figure titles need minor revisions (particularly 1 and 2).<br /><br />3. I tend to divide longer paragraphs, if deemed necessary, and this will cause the text to shift, which, in turn, throws off the ToC. But you just need to update the ToC automatically after each revision.<br /><br />4. I did not copyedit extensively because it was not necessary. I did untangle some sentences for clarity.<br /><br />5. Used the serial comma.<br /><br />The edits are as shown and I hope the comments are helpful. Let me know if you have questions.<br /><br />Thank you.<br /><br />Jackson