Dear Editright,<br /><br />Thanks for sending me your editing sample. I have, therefore, attached my article to be edited to be published in one of the major newspaper in Liberia. This very, very paramount that my arguement logically flow and make a compelling care to all Liberians, especially the government, new generations of Liberians and future leaders.<br /><br />The central arguement here is that Liberia is blessed, not poor. Did I prove that. It is strong institutions and good government that build a powerful nations. Did I prove? It is Liberia historical development that continue to be carried over and bottlenecks its development. Did I prove that? It is Liberians dislike of each other and love for foreigners than themselves that caused them to suffer. Did I prove?<br /><br />My next point is that Liberia is suffering becuase those who come to help to be united are also taking advantage. And because Liberia is devided and dislike each, the people who came to their expolit them. I want to be able to say this without making enemies with the government and Liberians. "Jack the fact Joe," as one would say in the USA.<br /><br />That is the cumutative analyses. The summative analyses is that Liberians have come to see their condtions as normal. My point is it is not normal.<br /><br />Now, i want to you to help me sharpen the points I am driving home. Look at my title, discussion, transtion and conclusion. Revised sentneces if need me to make the article easily disgestable. Delete words, sensentce or paragraphs that are un related.<br /><br />Tahnks, again, for the sample editing and willingness to edit my work.