I'm doing a last look over of this last chunk right now, so I should have that back to you in just a bit. &nbsp;<br /><br />I don't have any kind of holiday plans, so whichever editing option you would like to choose is fine. Once I get all of it done, I'll work on&nbsp;putting the whole thing together, which will probably take me one day, just to get it in the right order and give it a final check. &nbsp;Have you given any thought to what you want the names changed to? I've gone through and highlighted all of the name mentions, so that when the time comes to change them I won't miss any.<br /><br />I think as far as the officers/detectives go, there's Hagen, Haynes, Zilky, Mathiljohne, Street...<br /><br />And then, do you want to change Jordan Stevenson's name? I couldn't remember if you had mentioned him or not.<br /><br />I can come up with new names if you want. I know you were thinking about using synonyms for "brave" or "strong" for the detectives. I just wanted to make sure you didn't have specific choices for those.<br /><br />In the section that I'm doing now, I've gone ahead and changed all mentions of Edward Ji's name to [Defendant] (or [Defendant's father] where applicable). So, his name has basically been redacted. Is that alright, or did you want a pseudonym for him also?<br /><br />i've enjoyed working on this project, and look forward to working with you more in the future.