As far as "Back to School," and the negativity towards the school, I think we can temper that by throwing in some sentences about your own frustration with the situation as a whole, and just wanting Bryan's struggles to be appreciated, even though you understood where the school was coming from on some points. Does that make sense? I'll go back and look at it a little more closely to see exactly where/what could be added.<br /><br />I think having the trial transcripts as add-ons to related chapters makes sense. It gives the readers the background on your view of what was going on, and then lets them see what was happening on the legal side of things. <br /><br />Question for you: You said that some of the names needed to be changed. Do you want me to do that, or do you want to do that, or am I totally misunderstanding and they've already been changed?&nbsp;<br /><br />With the further submissions, I think what might be easiest/the least confusing is for me to go ahead and upload this document when I'm done with it, and then the new submissions according to their due date. If you would like, once I have everything, I can combine it into a final document in the order we decide on and upload it all together as one document at the end. In other words, give you back the pieces the same way you give them to me, but then in a message, give you a final, full document.<br /><br />As always, let me know what you would prefer, or if you have any questions.