Thank you.  I have a few questions about grammar. This is a part of the file you worked on in the past. I reworded some areas, but I was not sure the usage after I changed.

When you use the phrase, it is recommended... Can I use it is recommended to...? or you have to use it is recommended that .... For example,

A newer Braille note devices are available on the market, but it is recommended to review how he responds to different note taking methods and determine the most appropriate technology. 

Another question, when you use most importantly, can I use First and most importantly or is it too wordy? I am trying to get a point across that he needs someone as a mentor not a trainer coming 10 times.  So I changed it to:

First and most importantly, MJ would maximize his learning experience by guidance from a mentor. 
MJ will benefit from adapting new technology options from an individual who shares the same challenges and knows how to apply technology in daily tasks.

If you do not mind answering questions, I appreciate it.