Hi I'm not sure what your name is but wanted you to know how much I like what you've done. Your writing style is just what I&nbsp;imagined when I was writing this story. I don't know how much you are into the Bible but I just had a friend who was reading the same chapter emailed me that I made some mistakes&nbsp; when I quoted the bilble and that using the words,"Oh my god!" Some poeple may take thay as using Gods name in vain. "Yikes!"&nbsp;I got to make sure I'm quoting the bible&nbsp;right by doing a good review of the story so I do not&nbsp;make any mistakes.&nbsp; I don't know your back ground with the Bible and that's ok I like the way you write so I am considering with&nbsp;you very strongly.&nbsp;Oh, Ice axe! Thanks I will make the change.