Please correct anything you feel needs correcting. Whether it's syntax, diction, grammar, flow, connectedness, etc.<br /><br />Feel free to edit it without any inhibitions. I am open to every form of criticism, I just want a nice, flowing, and concise paper. I trust your judgment, so I will appreciate any feedback and insights from you. Please tailor this and polish it to the best of your ability.<br /><br />Thank you!