Hi JKang,<br />Your document is attached with my suggested edits showing in red using Word's track changes feature. It's easiest if you read it in "final" view or "accept all changes" in the document rather than try to read through all the red.<br /><br />This assignment was perfect for me because I worked as a legal assistant in litigation for 20 years! It was great to get back at it. Legal writing is a little different because lawyers don't like to use pronouns or leave anything open to alternate interpretation. <br /><br />Your overall approach to the topic is fine as far as flow. I had a few comments that are highlighted in yellow for you to consider. I really hope you find my suggestions helpful. Thank you so much for choosing me as your editor! I enjoyed working on this. I hope to hear from you again in the future.