Hi, Ivan:<br /><br />It's funny, really, but the more&nbsp;I review something, the more I find to change. The first time I read your latest submission, I couldn't see anything that needed changing. By the third read-through, I found one small edit. Then, by the fifth, several small ones. Months ago, when we started doing this together, I believe I changed&nbsp;quite a lot. Now I try to retain the author's voice&nbsp;as much as improve the flow. The old ways (of completely re-writing) were easier. I hope the suggestions help.<br /><br />If you make any additional changes and want it re-checked, just&nbsp;attach&nbsp;to a message. You know the routine.&nbsp;<br /><br />Bye for now - George&nbsp;