<p>Hello, Sharon,<br /><br />I have not completely finished editing your manuscript, but I wanted to get it back to you so we can address certain issues. It would be great if you could send me a list of the full names of the organizations you present as acronyms so I can be sure to include them. I need to make sure that the first instance of citation of books or articles by more than three (and, subsequently, six) authors have all names listed. I want to double check with you whether you would like drug names to be capped or lower case--both are acceptable but should be consistent throughout a single doc.&nbsp;<br /><br />As for your graphics, I don't know how much help I can be in formatting them--I don't usually handle that. I can try, but I have to say that as long as the information is presented clearly, the formatting is not usually an issue. I will try, though. One thing that drives me crazy about importing graphs and charts from sites like Survey Monkey is that I am unable to edit the text within the graphic. There are many text inconsistencies, and I can't change them. Again, this is usually not a deal breaker for dissertaition committees. Speaking of text within graphs, your "comments" graph includes a transcript of respondents' exact words, right? Do you want me to correct them or leave them as is for authenticity?&nbsp;<br /><br />When I hear back from you, I will also go over your references for accuracy. Please look at the attached doc and send it back to me with the additional info I need. Send it through this message system as an attachment. This way you will not be charged.&nbsp;<br /><br />Sometimes there is some back-and-forth required between author and editor to make sure everything is clear. I appreciate your patience and cooperation! And thank you for the crucial work you are doing.</p>
<p>Laura Kenney</p>