Yes there are big chunks of the paper that are highlighted with a comment asking you to paraphrase the meaning of that section. &nbsp;I included in the comment box who the author should be. &nbsp;That's why there were authors you noted ithat weren't in the references - I thought that who section would be deleted and the meaning of if would be cited to only one author. &nbsp;<br /><br />It may be best to explain this over the phone; as I want to make sure the message, flow and tone in the paper is correct. &nbsp;<br /><br />If you are not able to do this please let me know as I need someone else from editor world to help. &nbsp;If you are able, then you arleady have my paper. &nbsp;