<br /><p>Dear EditorinChief,<br /> <br /> Here are the two finding chapters of my PhD thesis. And the English style is Australian. You don't need to worry about the referencing style and as we discussed before, please pay attention to:<br /> <br /> 1. any repition of my writing since this is a big problem identified by my supervisors.<br /> <br /> 2. the tense I used in the two chapters. They are finding chapters, so the interview and survey actually happened two years ago. <br /> <br /> 3. the quotation. I really appreciate your editing the quotation in the sample since some of them are translated from Chinese, and others are actually transcribed by research assistants. I think there will be some grammar mistakes in the quotations. It's good that you can help me check them.<br /> <br /> 4. the heading and sub-heading. if you find any errors with the section heading, your advices are more any welcome.<br /> <br /> I appreciate your accepting to help me with editing the chapters. Look forward to the edited version.<br /> <br /> Cheers,<br /> <br /> Karen</p>