Hi, Ali:<br /><br />I'm sending you this now in case you need it to work on. It is finished, more or less. I want to work on it a bit more tonight after a break.<br /><br />It is now one continuous introduction, which I think you wanted. At 2000 words it's the right length. Iniitally, I included paragraph&nbsp;headings, but then I thought they were unnecessary.<br /><br />I added a couple of references in the bibliography. Please make sure they're correct.<br /><br />I deleted any redundant paragraphs.<br /><br />It reads well, though, but the conclusion might need an additional &nbsp;sentence or two.<br /><br />Anyway, I'll carefully review the document tonight&nbsp;and attach the revised version to a message. If you have any suggestions meanwhile, just let me know and I'll make the changes tonight.<br /><br />So we don't work against each other, may I suggest that you save your document with a new name? This way you can copy and paste your changes&nbsp;into the document&nbsp;I'll send tonight. &nbsp;<br /><br /><br />Best wishes - George<br /><br />&nbsp;