Hi Laura,
Sorry about the confusion with my short-cut revision piece for "o Not San Diego." I think it best to send you an full revvised version for your consideration (to make sure everything stays in context).  I appreciater your cconcern for the cost.  We're close to a good story and I think the 2nd full-look is worth the expense.  I didn't see your name on the Editors list this morning, so I'll check back in a day or so to see if are back into your editing work.
Thanks,
Dan