Thank you for your submission! Most of my edits here focused on taking the sentiment you express throughout the paper and condensing it into clear, concise statements. You argue strongly for your point, but in your fervor you lose a bit of clarity. You'll notice in my in-text comments that I'm constantly asking for explanations, specifically about the definitions of the terms you use.&nbsp;Focusing on identifying not only that there is a problem, but how it functions and what we can do to solve it. Please let me know if you have any questions!