1.&nbsp; Your revision looks fine. <br />2.&nbsp; Again, your revision seems good.<br />3.&nbsp; "exhibits attractive" does not make sense, don't use that phrase.&nbsp; Do you mean that manufacturers like to use siloxane coating?&nbsp; "Appears attractive" might work, if that's what you mean.&nbsp;&nbsp; Suggest "appears attractive&nbsp;for use in the manufacture of nanoproducts for&nbsp;purposes of&nbsp;stabilization even in small quantities, due.."<br />4.&nbsp; If the only previous mention of this study was&nbsp;the reference [96], you couldn't refer to it as just "the study."&nbsp; However, I inserted "in one study" at the beginning of the paragraph, so then you can go ahead and say "the study" or "the results of the study..."&nbsp; <br />5.&nbsp; Your revision looks good.<br />6.&nbsp; The revision seems okay. <br />7.&nbsp; This revision looks good.&nbsp;