Hi:<br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document and hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />As you requested, the document contains no visible changes, but you will know where they are by comparing it to the original.<br /><br />I wasn't sure if BBF is up-and-running yet or if you are still at the proposal stage. In any case, it will be easy to change the wording if there's any ambiguity - from past to present tense, for example.<br /><br />You did an excellent job on the first draft of your presentation.&nbsp;I wish you every success with your proposal, and BBF a prosperous and successful new year.<br /><br />Best wishes -- George<br /><br />&nbsp;&nbsp;