RE: EW 52002 At the End of the Day
Hello again,
Thanks for your help and direction on this piece.  It certainly moved around quite a bit, and I am pleased that you feel it finally settled into a story.  I am a little confused on the last few paragraphs:  I understand your reasoning for taking out the paragraph that talks about Hardings integrity. You have the paragraph before the one you took out, starting with a blank space and then: , and in fact, Harding always appeared to stay on th surface like a puppy.  Am I missing some beginning text here?  Im not sure what you are recommending here.  I guess I would like to see the last 3 paragraphs as you see them.  Thanks, Dan