Hi,<br /><br /><br />&nbsp;&nbsp; I attached to this message two documents. Part on the introduction for m dissertation. I need your help not only with editing it but drafting the ideas in it in a better way. (Thus you might need to add some sentences.) <br /><br />&nbsp;&nbsp; I attached also a conclusion for my diessration. You will notice that in few sentences I copied and pasted some of it in the intro. So I would appreciate if you can paraphrase the these sentances so it does not look wierd that I have the exact same santences in the intro and in the conclusion. <br /><br />&nbsp; Meanwhile I will be working on the rest of the introduction and will send it to you as soon as I finish it. Maybe around 6-7 pm ETS.