It may not be perfect so if you could get an extension for a couple of days, that would help. But I'm making many corrections, adding commas where needed, being sure of APA style throughout. Incidentally, I took a quick look at the references (no charge) and corrected the hyphens to en dashes for page numbers, as per APA. I suggest that you go through the references to be sure the titles are lower-case to conform with APA. I noticed some that were not. Back to you tomorrow.