Hi, Brandon:<br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document, and I hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />Thanks for doing all the hard work, leaving me just to fuss and finesse. I haven't seen the movie, but you painted a clear picture, and I'm naturally lazy -- so, well done!<br /><br />Best wishes - George (TypeRighter)<br />I am usually available for editing between 6:00 am and 10:30 pm (EST). If my status is set to 'unavailable', you can still reach me via Editor World.<br /><br /><br /><br /><br />