Hi, Maya:<br /><br />Well, here it is. The first part is fairly strong and shouldn't need much attention. The second part, the Literature Review, is still a bit iffy. I wasn't very successful in finding the sources online, but I did what I could. Of course, I know it's still a work in progress, so the paragraphs&nbsp;can always be copied into the penultimate version of your paper. I'm confident about the relevance of the paragraphs but it's hard for me to see the big picture, not being an expert.&nbsp;My first concern, in any case, is always &nbsp;to keep your meaning and not to diverge from it.<br /><br />I know it's close to your deadline, but if I can be of further help, please let me know. A paper as complex and nuanced as this needs care and massaging, one sentence at a time.<br /><br />Best wishes - George&nbsp;