Russage -&nbsp;<br /><br />I have your finished paper. There were a few instances of repetition and some formatting issues, but overall your paper was good, and I was able to follow it despite not being familiar with the topic. However, you do tend to utilize "we" quite a bit, statements such as "we studied" or "we examine." That's not incorrect, but it's not the best practice in a paper such as this either, it's better to use "we" as little as possible.<br /><br />Now I did make a rather significant change to your paper, you'll see it mentioned as a comment with some of my reasoning. Because of that, I prepared an alternate version without that one change, but everything else edited as you see here. I will send that to you as a message, if you do not recieve a document with the file name "EW_67333_a.docx", please let me know and we can work out an alternate delivery system.<br /><br />Thank you for choosing the Word Doctor, feel free to contact me with any concerns.<br /><br />- TWD