Hi, Emilia:<br /><br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document and hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />Although it looks like I made a lot of edits, I really just tightened here and there, being&nbsp;unfamiliar with the books under review. Even though you make some excellent points in the essay, please proofread carefully to catch any typos I might have made.<br /><br />If you have any questions, you can reach me at Editor World. I'm usually available from 6:00 am to 10:30 pm EST.<br /><br />Best wishes - George&nbsp;<br />&nbsp;