Focused on obvious errors and consistency of terms. <br /><br />Took out the automatic hyphenation to avoid dividing so many words at the end of lines.<br /><br />Added comments when unsure about a term.<br /><br />The original had many uses of "thus" and many have been changed.<br /><br />Added the serial comma.<br /><br />If you have any questions, please contact me.<br /><br />Thank you.<br /><br /><br />