Hello, I'm a little confused by this edit. I mentioned it is a book proposal and that I wasn't looking for grammatical edits. I am looking to reformat the structure to be a more professional book proposal format, as well as developmental feedback on how to optimize the content for a popular audience. Not a single header was changed (even my very messy ones with four backslashes) and only minor grammatical changes were made in your edit? I selected you because of your 25 years of experience, and because you specified experience with nonfiction books. Please advise..