<p>Hi Clarity <br />Thanks for reading my paper and appreciate it.</p>
<p>I have been rewriting this paper last 9 months and every week I spent 6 to 9 hours in one to one sessions to check my writing with three different&nbsp;writing consultants. They are highly motivated and energetic who want my writing shine. They did not notice that &ldquo;A study &hellip;and another study&rdquo; may make reader confuse.</p>
<p>I already changed the word &ldquo;Mansion&rdquo; in many places. So far as I know, it is now in a reasonable ratio. If I said mentioned in one or two places that should not sounds bad. However, if you are a native English speaker than you may suggest more appropriate similar words that a native speaker uses.</p>
<p>From your note I understand there is not much editing and proof reading I left for you rather than formatting the paper. Is that correct?</p>
<p>Please make it clear and let me know what you can do for my paper? I need to understand where is my satisfaction and why should I come back to Editor World.</p>
<p>Please note, my deadline is time sensitive. Thank you for your kind understanding.</p>
<p>Please enjoy your time and break.<br /><br /><br />Best<br />Selina</p>