Thank you for your help. I re-read your revisions and it looks good to me. I have a question for the first sentence as below. <br /><br />"This study provides a deeper understanding of mentoring and the socialization process among doctoral students." &nbsp;&nbsp;<br /><br />You used the term, "among" instead of "of" but how about using "for"? Because I&nbsp;examined mentoring between advisors and their doctoral students, which is a socialization process for doctoral students.<br /><br />Again, thank you for your great work.&nbsp;