<p>Thank you for the opportunity to edit for you.<br /><br />I've made a number of changes for readability and clarity, mostly grammatical - fixing tense shifts, tone, article usage, etc.<br /><br />I also attached a picture of the format of an official business letter, which might be how you want yours to look too.<br /><br />Please consider me for any future editing needs!<br /><br /></p>
<p>Thanks,<br />Ryan</p>