Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your dissertation. Because I am completely unfamiliar with the topic, I had some difficulties, but hope I have done a good job interpreting and editing the material. At minimum, I have identified the sentences that require clarification.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc