Hi Ma'am,<br />Thanks, your nice editing gave it much-needed smoothness by adding few lines that reflects on the situation. <br />One thing I would request to help me is as below.<br /><br />1. Kindly note Shah Alam did not get any support from Najib Khan, but he received supportfrom the other two. So can you suggest the last sentence once again?<br /><br />//<br />
<p>Going to the neighboring provinces one by one to seek support, Shah Alam contacted Najib-ud-Daulah, Shojaa-ud-Daulah &ndash; son of Safdarjung and the Nawab of Oudh at Lucknow, and Mohammad Kuli Khan &ndash; the Nawab of Allahabad. He was attempting to strengthen his own claim of power by receiving the promise of backup from the men who were already unquestionably powerful.&nbsp;</p>
<p>During this period, the prince Shah Alam got married to Mubarak Mahal. His efforts to seek support from the powerful men like Najib-ud-Daulah unfortunately did not bear any fruit, as Najib did not want to risk his own position in Delhi by supporting the struggling prince. <br /><br /><strong>Shah Alam was going to have to go it alone.</strong><br /><br /></p>
2. //<br />If this is indeed true, it just shows how Shuja-ud-Daulah believed his father should be honored above all other &ldquo;great men.&rdquo;<br />//<br />The motivation of doing so, might be to save cost, as the empire was dissipating at that time. Also, there are many other tombs which he did not strip. So, can we rephrase / delete the sentence?<br /><br /><br /><br />regards<br />D Das