I took care of some of the "weird phrases" that you mentioned. I tried to vary some of the repeated phrases, but because "intensity of concerns" is such a specific phrase, I couldn't vary all of them. I rearranged some of the wording to try to keep from repeating the exact phrase. There is one issue that you need to make a decision on. The first few times you use the phrase "one-two split" you capitalize it. After that, you don't, and you dont capitalze the "tailing-up Stage 6." I would either capitalize all of these special pattern names, or none of them.&nbsp;