There were a few places where you used multiple versions of one word- 5A model and 5As model. I chose one of the options and used it consistently throughout the paper.&nbsp;<br /><br />There are also a few places in the Appendices where I couldn't make an edit, but I did put a comment for what needed to be changed.<br /><br />Please feel free to message me with any questions or concerns that you have. Thank you for allowing me the opportunity to work with you.