Hi, Ernie:<br /><br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document and hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />Just two minor issues: 1) I wasn't sure if InsideNPS is one word or two so I made it two, and 2) I made a pdf, which I'll send separately, because it highlights the white space in your document. I didn't want to change your layout, which is very nice, but we might be able to reduce the white space towards the end of the document. Please let me know if you'd like me to try, and I'll send a revised document ASAP. &nbsp;<br /><br />Best wishes - George