hello<br /><br />The document is very important and it's past deadline, I need it within some hours<br />It is a university admission essay which I have to write answering the questions<br />I Feel like it is very badly written and not very creative. the last question was not even completed as I couldn't&nbsp;find more work<br />the required word number is 800 so you can delete and add as you wish&nbsp;<br />British or American English does not matter much to me and the university<br /><br />please help...