Hello! <br /><br />For this document, I focused on grammar, consistency in terminology and spelling/capitalizaiton, as well as overall paper formatting and structure. Per your comment, I did not delete the parenthetical misisng citations under the assumptiont that those would be reinserted. I left several comments on the side throughout the document either explaining certain edits or offering suggestions for your consideration, so be sure to look out for those. Feel free to message me if you have any questions! Thanks. =)