Odazedo,<br /><br />I've finished my edit of your proposal. As I said before, I think what you have here is very strong. I didn't need to make any really significant edits, just a lot of small ones. The subject matter was really interesting, and I thought you presented the matter in a very compelling and fascinating way. I do have three suggestions for you, however.<br /><br />I would try and define the concept of Compressed Shifts early on, probably in the "Statement of the Problem" section. You mention it several times throughout gut don't define it until the end, which I found a bit confusing.<br /><br />Second, I'd make sure that your citations are correctly formatted. Right now you're giving the name of the author and the year of publication, but in an APA&nbsp;style document it's more proper to give the name and the page number in the source you're referring to.<br /><br />Finally, I would make a separate page or pages just for your charts and other images. It can really help with your formatting, which can otherwise be a real problem.<br /><br />That's just what I would suggest, but I think that your proposal is very well done. If you need help with the final, I would be happy to edit it for you. Good luck!<br /><br />- The Word Doctor