Hello, Mai:<br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document and hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />I have only one query, which concerns the phrase "... allies well with our design." Because I wasn't sure of your intent, I deleted it, believing that it's better to be safe than sorry with studies such as this. Perhaps you meant 'aligns well with our design', in which you can easily put back in. But I don't think anything is lost by leaving it out.<br /><br />Best wishes - George<br />I am usually available for editing between 6:00 am and 10:30 pm. If my status is set to unavailable, you can still send a message to me via Editor World.