Hello!<br /><br />For this document, I focused on ensuring that grammar, especially passive voice, was correct and appropriate for an academic paper. I also focused on deleting repetitions and ensuring a consistency in presentation of data, phrases, terms, and formatting of charts. I left several comments on the sides throughout the document either explaining certain edits or offering suggestions for your consideration, so be sure to look out for those. Feel free to message me if you have any questions! Thanks. =)