Thank you for selecting me again to edit this important document.<br /><br />Things to consider:<br />*Throughout your document, sometimes you use "health care" as two words, and sometimes "healthcare" as one word. I've done some research on it and there doesn't seem to be a true preferred choice between the two. But I would try to use the same version throughout. So I'd suggest you pick one and go with it, and change&nbsp;the opposite so they all match.<br />*Oxford Comma: Forgive me if you already know this, but the Oxford comma is the comma used in a list before the word and (Such as: "I like apples, bananas, and pears.") Some people use this comma, some don't. Most professional organizations recommend using it. This again is really a matter of consistency, and sometimes you did use it and sometimes you didn't. I believe I caught all instances, and added it in.<br /><br />As with last time, this sounds like a wonderful pilot, and your passion, dedication, and deep knowledge on your topic shine through. I continue to wish you the best with this!<br /><br />And again, please do keep me in mind for any future editing needs.<br /><br />Have a wonderful night,<br />Ryan