Hi Arnie,<br />I started reading your edited clean copy and there are still some jumbled spots...I will review your copy that I can edit tomorrow. Must have been very frustrating...Hope this does not happen to you again. Obviously it is much easier to review in the context I wrote it with your highlighs...Sort of like hunting doing it this way..lol..Happy holiday.Any critiques on content or flow at this juncture?...I know it is a lazy entry into the main story line but I want to set up a clear picture of the world it all takes place in and the personality of the main character...Are you bored or finding it to drawn out?...or are you enjoying the ride?<br />Best,&nbsp;<br />Andrew