Hello WriteNow,<br /><br />Could you kindly check to see if this template is correct that you edited. I know it is the template that I gave you, but somehow it doesn't seem correct (see the education section. Is it suppoed to written like that). Can you let me know or can you put it in another template that you would choose for yourself? Thanks. Kindly do this at your earliest convenience. Thanks. <br /><br />Your statement letter was well done. However, do you think that this sentence should be broken down that you edited? It seems too long. Second paragraph, "This is a nonprofit... dance and music.<br /><br />Thank you :-)