Hi there,<br /><br />Thank you so much for selecting me for a sample edit! As it is a sample and not a full edit, I have made some notes and suggestions on the first paragraph ONLY. I checked syntax/grammar/spelling etc and had a few thoughts on alternate wording to help the sentences flow a little more smoothly. All suggested changes can be reviewed with the Track Changes option on.<br /><br />If you have any questions or concerns, please don't hesitate to let me know!<br /><br />Thanks,<br />EM