Dear Mr. Editor (NYANIDOC),<br /><br />I am deeply grateful for your help last December.<br />Were it not for your help, I wouldn't have been able to be accepted to any school.<br />I really have a deep respect towards you. Your efforts and skills were more than amazing.&nbsp;<br />(I wish I could write somewhat like you do if only possible.)<br /><br />I have been waitlisted in my dream school (UW in Seattle.) <br />I know. The situation is not good.<br /><br />Still, the purpose of this one letter to the communication department chair is to show<br />my passion and reasons why I want so badly&nbsp;to get into the MA program of my dream school: UW in Seattle, instead of <br />a doctoral program in another school (UW-Madison).<br /><br />Could you, please, read this carefully first and see what my circumstances are (in the writing)&nbsp;and make it<br />(1) <span style="text-decoration: underline;"><em>truly expressing my strong desire</em></span>, (2)&nbsp;<em><span style="text-decoration: underline;">stylish,</span></em> and&nbsp;(3) <em><span style="text-decoration: underline;">more</span></em><i><span style="text-decoration: underline;">&nbsp;coherent</span></i>?&nbsp;<br /><br /><span style="text-decoration: underline;"><em>Please feel free to edit anything as much as you want</em>. </span><br />Since English is not my native language, though I have spent many days<br />on this,&nbsp;I could not&nbsp;quite give&nbsp;the nuances I wanted.<br /><span style="text-decoration: underline;"><em>Again, please feel free to change, add, and delete any words, sentences, or paragraphs at your will</em>.</span><br /><br />Thank you very very much.<br /><br />Very sincerely,<br />Hangsan Ahn