Thank you so much. I really appreciate your corrections. I think men had a difficult time because some of the corrections were okay but overdone or make any sense to me or my husband. &nbsp;And one changed air conditions to air conditioners when the scene was outside. That was the first chapter. &nbsp; <br /><br />The scene prior to what you read, Yashani's husband was searching for her and he thanks she's dead. The chapter title is, "Distant Lover." &nbsp;The book title is, "Passion Whispers an Execution." &nbsp; It's an Erotic Romance/Psychological Thriller Trillogy. The first book has 330 pages. The other two books will be less pages.&nbsp;<br /><br />One last question, were you able to understand what Yashani was trying to say? <br /><br />Are you interested in reading the genre?&nbsp;<br /><br />