This looks like a very interesting study. &nbsp;It's well-written, too. &nbsp;As you will see, all of the changes that I made were quite minor.<br /><br />In many places, you have extra space between words in the tables, but I expect you're aware of that -- it's probably a computer issue, which I'm sure you can correct.<br /><br />I did notice the distinction you make between "advisors" and "mentors." &nbsp;The subjects were asked to assess the qualities of their current advisor, but then asked to describe the charcteristics they would wish to see in an ideal mentor. &nbsp;Do you regard these two words as being synonomous? &nbsp;If not, it would be a good idea to explain the distinction you're making early in the paper (the first paragraph, for instance).<br /><br />Best of luck in finding a publication outlet for your study. &nbsp;If I can be of other service, now or in the future, I hope you will get in touch with me.<br /><br />ProfessorNovelist