Dear WRITEAID,<br /><br />thank you so much for proving this free sample service. I'm a writer from Asia with English as my second language and would like to submit this chapter of writing to you for editing. <br /><br />This is actually a scene where the female character(Xiao Ying)&nbsp; meet her love interest in a grocery store, after sneaking away from her mum because she is bored of recuperating at home. <br /><br />I wanted to make this into a romantic subplot, where she bump into the Male lead not knowing that he's the gynecologist that carry her to the hospital bed, after she fainted at his department for a checkup.<br /><br />I would love to know if the settings(grocery store) is too bland for the romantic subplot and how should I write to make it more exciting and more romantic.<br /><br />Thank you!<br /><br />Warmest regards,<br /><br />Ying