Thank you, Desiree, for the opportunity to read and edit your case review. It seemed to me to contain many redundancies and to have problems with organization. I don't know if the order of the sections is required or if they were your choice. Please see comments.<br /><br />As always, if you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc