Katharinoe -<br /><br />There you go, I have edited the paper as per your specifications. What you had was pretty good, there were only a couple sentences that needed major work and the rest were just minor spelling or grammar corrections. I did have some trouble with your reference page, I do not know what happened there but no matter what I tried it wouldn't format properly. But I was able to get it to work for you.<br /><br />Thank you for selecting The Word Doctor, I hope you will come to us again.<br /><br />Sincerely,<br /><br />TWD