Sorry for the delayed response. I got my wisdom teeth pulled and was out of the game fro a few days.&nbsp;<br /><br />I may end up sendint the edits to you. It depeends on how many words I end up adding because the way this site prices things I couldn't get the same 0.014 per word rate if I only send say 5000 words.<br /><br />We'll see what happens. either way I'll let you know.<br /><br />In the meantime I have a question about some of the edits you've done.&nbsp;For the word 'Toward' you've added an S at the end of it in some places and not in others and I was wondering what distinction you made when deciding whether to add it or not. I hadn't put any because of advice I'd gotten from a book on self-editing about always removing the 'S' as it was unnecesary for the understanding of the word. When do you add it and when do you not?<br /><br />Also one line you changed was 'I feinted to its left.' This is when Sterling is fighting the larger wolf demon in the cave. I like how it sounds, but do you think people will confuse that as Sterling is fainting? I had to read that line twice because my gut reaction was 'Wait, Sterling doesn't faint here!" Do you think htats just me or should I change feinted to something else?&nbsp;<br /><br />Thanks,<br />Christian