Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your paper. Although I said I didn't really see any places to increase the length, later I noted some instances where you might elaborate. If you do so and would like me to take another look at it, I'll be happy to do so free of charge--as long as you don't add a great deal :). You would just need to submit it as a free sample request.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc