I received your message, and have no idea to what you are referring. The sentences in the first paragraph are correct. Miriam is her (Moses') brother, and Miriam saved Moses. I did change one phrase from 'the song of Miriam' to 'Miriam's song,' although I know, technically, it is referred to as 'the song of Miriam,' or probably more correctly, 'the Song of Miriam.' It's up to you whether you capitalize song when you use that construction.<br /><br />I also finally figured out how to insert the footnotes into my previously edited version.<br /><br />You should not by any means have to pay to have the entire paper reedited, although I have spent an hour working on it. I'll ask Patti what she thinks we should do, but you will definitely have most of that refunded.<br /><br />Thank you for your patience,<br /><br />Nyanidoc<br /><br /><br />