Thank you very much, I love the edited version. As for the 233, I think I can delete some of them. 

I have few more questions below:

1. Since, you have made many small paragraphs, is it possible for me to put "sub heading"? the sub heading will be labelled as below 

Introduction
Evaluation of Different Perspectives
Positivism Perspective
Intepretivism Perspective
Critical Perspective
Conclusion

*Note that the location of sub heading is prior each paragraph of old document (unedited version)

2. Thank you very much for pointing out about Atlanta and Georgia!! OMG I totally made mistake copying the name! So in final version I will fix from Atlanta and Georgia => Atlanta and LaGrange!

3. Just a formatt and grammar question; I normally just put really long paragraph (to represent Introduction, Body1, Body2, Body3, and Conclusion), so this way which you have edited is breaking down paragraph into smaller subs. From now on I should try to do the same right? 

Sorry if the question is too long, but this will definitely help me!