Hello,<br /><br />Your statement of purpose clearly shows the genesis of and dedication to your course of study, as well as your passion for the subject. I made corrections for word usage and grammar. I also removed such phrases as "I believe" (this is implicit because you are writing the statement) and "I hope" (more direct language shows confidence without arrogance). Please feel free to reject any changes and to contact me if you have any questions or concerns.&nbsp;<br /><br />Thank you very much, and best of luck to you with your important work!<br /><br />Laura Kenney