Hi:<br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document and hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />Your document listed some very impressive accomplishments. I've given the page a contemporary look, which should enhance your personal appraisal. Please proofread carefully, though. Although I tried not to change the content, sometimes a typo slips in here and there. Also, at the top of the page, check the date covering the period of your accomplishments. I just guessed. &nbsp;<br /><br />MS Word includes tracked changes by default. Before sharing this document, please consider running Document Inspector. To do this, click File/Info/Check For Issues/Inspect Document on the Microsoft Word menu bar.<br /><br />When you open a document that contains tracked changes, the document appears in the Final Showing Markup view to show that the document contains tracked changes. To review the edited document without showing tracked changes, click Review on the Microsoft Word menu bar. Then select Final: Show Markup and click the drop-down arrow. Choose Final. To show tracked changes again, click Final: Show Markup.<br /><br />Best wishes - TypeRighter (otherwise known as George)<br /><br />I am usually available for editing between 6:00 am and 10:30 pm. If my status is set to unavailable, you can still send a message to me via Editor World.