Hello GrammarGoddess,<br /><br />First, thank you so much for your help! I really appreciate your help.<br />I have several questions about your comments.&nbsp;<br /><br />1) So for the second paragraph, do you mean that I can eliminate the whole first sentence? Is it okay for me to eliminte that sentence when you look at the overall flow?<br />2) Also in the same paragraph, does it make sense if I correct "specifically for the firms" to "specifically for <strong>firms</strong>"? I was meaning that the general firms in the economy.&nbsp;<br />3) For the following sentence: "These firms will receive fewer investments, which may eventually lead to a lower employment rate. Thus, higher interest rates could have a deleterious impact on employment in the U.S.", so I did not mean that firms will "receive" investment, but the firms will "invest" fewer than before, because firms have to pay more for the borrowing. So in this context, can I change "will receive" to "will provide"?<br />4) for the third paragraph, I used the word "denominated". So what I was meaning here is that the U.S. exports that are priced&nbsp;in foreign currency. Does that make sense?<br /><br />I would really appreciate if you could provide reply to the above questions.&nbsp;<br />Again, thank you for your help.&nbsp;<br /><br />Jaeyoung&nbsp;<br /><br /><br />