This is the first chapter of a novel I've been working on. I can't see it objectively so I decided to seek out your help! Especially with all grammer related issues because I dropped out of highschoo,l and stared out the window all through my schooling so its safe to say I'm grammatically challeneged! But I love reading and writing all the same, and have since got my ged and am working my way through college as well. Thanks for helping and I look forward to your feedback.