Hi there,<br />Thanks for selecting me to edit your document - you caught me at a good time so you're getting it nerly 48 hours early!<br /><br />Your document is well-written and you clearly know your subject.&nbsp;The majority of my edits were grammatical in nature, including fixing some tense shifts, dangling participles, passive voice, and punctuation issues. Beyond that, I have two major suggestions:<br /><br />1) You address selling head on, but don't seem to really discuss marketing much by name. I know that you are discussing marketing ideas, but I think it might be a good idea to use the specific word a bit more.&nbsp;<br />2) It feels a bit repetitive, with mention of a few concepts multiple times.<br /><br />But again, overall it's a nice paper with good information.<br /><br />Please let me know if you have any questions, and do keep me in mind if you have any future editing needs.<br /><br />Thanks,<br />Ryan