vmon -<br /><br />I've edited your resume, there weren't a lot of grammatical errors. There were a few sections I thought could be expanded upon. When you say "Represented high school student in expulsion hearing," I feel as though that may too brief, if I were an employer I would want to know more. When you say "Graded and recorded assignments for over 100 students in Government courses," it seems as though you're saying that the courses are sponsored by the government. It would be helpful to be more specific about the content of the classes, or to call it something like "Government Studies." Otherwise, it seems very good. Good luck on your job search.<br /><br />- TWD