Hello, Mercedes,<br /><br />I'm so glad we'll be able to take a second (maybe even third!) look at your dissertation. It is an impressive piece of work--especially that literature review! I made many corrections and suggestions; take a look and don't feel bound by them. Some are straight grammatical issues, like using "as well" at the beginning of a sentence, and others have to do with structure and content.<br /><br />I'll take a more careful look at references and formatiing on the second go.<br /><br />When you're ready, send the file back to me woth any notes or questions at <a href="mailto:lckenney@hotmail.com">lckenney@hotmail.com</a>.<br /><br />Thank you!<br /><br />Laura&nbsp;