I would like you to go over the whole manuscript once more and suggest ways to make it more concise and an easier read. The material is sometimes repetitive and some of the concepts need to be better summarized. Your recommendations will be most likely retained as I trust your professional judgment as an editor. I could send you half the document over the weekend, pay for it, and you let me know later on the final cost and how we will proceed for the second half. Is this fine?

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