When you open the file, open up the comment section.&nbsp; My instructor inserted quite a few suggestions and comments.&nbsp; The format is AMA style 10.&nbsp; I'd appreciate the help due to a family emergency and this is the rewrite.&nbsp; I appreciate all you could do to make this lit review to end my semester with a bang.&nbsp; He is a competitive ironman and wants the paper to be written in an active voice.&nbsp; I would appreciate you help.&nbsp; Also he would like the lit review to end dramatically if that is at all possible.&nbsp; He seems to like the last statement of my Abstract and feels it should end with that statement.&nbsp;&nbsp; It is 60% complete, just needs an editors touch.&nbsp;&nbsp; Thank you so much<br /><br />Ray Gazaille