Hi, Dana:<br /><br />Here's Document No 2.<br /><br />Again, not a lot to improve. If I were 40 years younger I might have enjoyed being one of your employees, except for the fact that I'm prone to motion sickness.<br /><br />A couple of points about UK usage: 1) they tend to say enquire rather than inquire, although both are acceptable, 2) Words ending in ize&nbsp;are often spelt with ise&nbsp;although there's some movement now towards the former.&nbsp;The same is true of analyze and analyse.<br /><br />I wasn't sure about "the optional thing being an everyday thing" at the beginning of the document, but, after several read-throughs, I've warmed to it, so it's up to you. Now that I think about it, the repetition works, at least orally.<br /><br />Where I had to change a word or a tense, I changed it, but, more often, I added comments in the margin.<br /><br />Now for Document 3.<br /><br />Again, please proofread carefully<br /><br />Best wishes -- George<br /><br />&nbsp;&nbsp;