I'm as much interested in whether the big-picture narrative comes through as I am about smaller things like grammar, etc. So feel free to comment on whether the overall argument is making sense.<br /><br />Of course, sentence level help would be great as well.<br /><br />Don't worry too much about the references list for now. I have them all formatted through EndNote, and I'll take care of things on submission.<br /><br />The style is basically described here: <a href="http://socpro.oxfordjournals.org/for_authors/index.html,">http://socpro.oxfordjournals.org/for_authors/index.html</a>, for what it's worth.<br /><br />Please feel free to contact me if you have questions: cchild@byu.edu