Hi, Preetha,

Yes, the paper makes perfect sense. It is very difficult, with papers written on this level, to avoid repetition of salient facts and terms, so it can sometimes seem as though one is saying the same thing over and over--I run into this issue a lot! Your paper is well organized and your research on multimodalities and their usefulness in the science classroom is very well presented. Once you have had a chance to go through the edits, please let me know if there is anything that was unsatisfactory or whether you would like additional changes.

Thank you so much,
Laura