I understand there was a lot there! It's perfectly normal to feel a little overwhelmed at this point. The insertions at the beginning about the Bible versions are meant to be in the final copy. The notes that appear in comment balloons in the margins are not, so you will delete them before sending the edited version to your publisher. It may be easier to use the "Show Markup" command in Word's Review ribbon to look just at the comments, then just the formatting changes, then the insertions and deletions, instead of trying to take it all in at once. I am not able to get on the phone at the moment, but I will try to call you within an hour or two. Thanks! -- Kristen