I'm sorry you're not happy, but I do believe the final text is very good.<br /><br />Send me the original file&nbsp;via email and I will merge it with the edited file and this should, I think, show the changes.<br /><br />The only alternative during the first edit was for me to change every edit into a different color and then you'd have to change each&nbsp;one back to black as&nbsp;you accepted or rejected them. This seemed unecessary to me, but clearly I was wrong.<br /><br />Let me know.<br /><br /><br /><br />