- Please improve the grammar and language<br />- reduce the words and make it more sweet and concise.<br /><br />The idea is to write a pain letter to an employer, I was interviewed last Monday.<br /><br />You may want to refer, this document, to understand what I am trying to do:<br /><br />http://www.forbes.com/sites/lizryan/2015/03/01/how-to-write-your-first-pain-letter/#b4ede7743430