Hi Gina. I generally try to: 1. Make sure the grammar is correct.&nbsp; 2. Help make sure your meaning is clear to the reader.&nbsp;3. Make changes so that the wording flows smoothly. As for organization, I would be glad to make suggestions for you to consider, but probably would not jump into major changes to your organization, because at some point that almost becomes a total re-write. <br /><br />I hope this helps. Please feel free to follow up with any other questions if you wish.