Hi, Sanchezha:<br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document and hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />Your document was well written to begin with, and most of my changes were simply cosmetic, neither better nor worse, just different. Here and there, I offered a slightly different &nbsp;choice of word, but I hope I didn't change your meaning. Of course, with track changes it's easy to revert to the original&nbsp;if you think I made a mistake.<br /><br />If you have any questions or require additional changes, please send a message to me. I'm usually available from 6:00 am until 10:00 pm (EST).<br /><br />Best wishes - George (TypeRighter)