<p class="p1"><b>Thank you for the opportunity to edit your work. Please let me know if you have any concerns, and I will address them asap. <br /><br />A few notes: First, this is a very well presented and written work. I learned something from it, and I enjoyed reading it! It was a pleasure to edit this for you.<br /><br />Second, I made a few notes for you in the text regarding word choice. Please review those.<br /><br />Third, I did very little formatting, as that is best left for whoever is publishing the book.<br /><br />Fourth, a few terms were not used properly. For example breakdown is a noun, as in "The car had a breakdown on the highway." For your text, in many cases you are using breakdown as a verb, when it should be written as break down (two words), as in "If we break down the system."&nbsp;<br /><br />There were a few other misuses of terms, but I believe I have fixed all of them for you.&nbsp;<br /><br />I wish you the best success with your book!<br /></b></p>