Hi Hangsan<br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document and hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send me a message via Editor World.<br /><br /><br />I usually make more edits to a document than necessary, believing that it&rsquo;s better to over than under edit. The number of changes is not a comment on the quality of original. With Microsoft Word&rsquo;s tracked changes feature, the author can accept or reject any or all of the edits.&nbsp;<br /><br />Microsoft Word displays tracked changes and comments by default. <br /><br />To review the edited document without showing tracked changes, click Review on the Microsoft Word menu bar. Then select Final: Show Markup and click the dropdown arrow. Choose Final. To show tracked changes again, click Final: Show Markup.<br /><br />Your CV is very impressive and I was relucatnt to cut too much. I certainly understand why you would want it to be brief - some Admissions Officers have a short attention span - but your achievements have a cumulative effect , and I think you should go with it.<br /><br />I introduced the second document as a sort of footnote to your CV. Again, this adds to the cumulative effect and I believe usefully highlights what you have done.<br /><br />Two things: I would combine the documents into a single pdf. Pdfs look so much better than Word documents, and anybody, Mac or PC, can open them.<br /><br />The other thing is, a brief well-written cover letter, which can be incorporated into an email, wouldn't go amiss.<br /><br />In general, I've tightened the sentences and polished the presentation. It's an enviable CV that I'd be happy to have myself. &nbsp;<br /><br />Best wishes - TypeRighter (aka George)<br /><br />I am usually available for editing between 6:00 am and 10:30 pm. If my status is set to unavailable, you can still send a message to me via Editor World.<br />&nbsp;<br />&nbsp;<br /><br />