Hi,&nbsp;Nagatomi:<br /><br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document, and I hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />At first, I gave your syllabus a light edit, knowing that it needed nothing more. Then I went back and fussed and fiddled and gave it a more rigorous edit. With track changes, it's easy, of course, to accept or reject the editing suggestions, and you can always cut and paste, keeping the parts you like, if any. Your course sounds so interesting&nbsp;that I wouldn't mind signing up for it myself, but I'm sure it would be a long commute from southern Ontario.<br /><br />Although I was careful not to change the content, please proofread the edited document carefully.<br /><br />Best wishes - George<br />I am usually available for editing between 6:00 am and 10:30 pm (EST). If my status is set to 'unavailable', you can still reach me via Editor World.