Hi, Melody,<br /><br />Your ppt is well done--thorough (the only possible missing element to me is a slide on ethical considerations, but you do mention aspects of this in other slides, so maybe you don't need a whole slide for ethics), concise, and beautifully presented. I don't work in powerepoint often, and I mentioned in my first comment that you will not be able to see edits directly (as you would in Word with strike-throughs in red, etc.) because powerpoint does not have a track-changes feature. You can see what I did by comparing to the original ppt. I made comments when necessary; I did not enter a comment for every change (making caps consistent, inserting or deleting commas, or changing phrasing and usage, etc.). Please feel free to change things back if you do not like them, and feel free to contact me if you have questions or concerns. <br /><br />I work on a Mac, and there was a message that came up when I saved the document mentioning that "embedded fonts not supported by Mac would not be saved," but I did not see any visible evidence of this. If you should have a problem, please let me know.&nbsp;<br /><br />Again, thank you so much for conducting this important research, and best of luck with it.&nbsp;<br /><br />Thank you,<br /><br />Laura