Hi, HK:<br /><br />I think your document's coming along nicely, but I want your opinion to make sure I'm on the right track.<br /><br />I actually like the word 'microfilming', so I haven't changed it. I made it the subject of the preface, though, and think the preface should be an introduction.<br /><br />I've tried not to make changes to the ci poems, and then only to make them sound more poetic in English.<br /><br />We should consider this a work in progress. We can exchange documents via Editor World's messaging system so there's no additional cost<br /><br />&nbsp;I'm much further ahead -- this is just a sample -- but I would value your opinion. I'm not too familiar with ci (though I love it) or making films, so I'm a little worried that I might change your meaning when I change a word. So please proofread carefully. Meanwhile, I'll press on.&nbsp;<br /><br />Please let me know if you want any changes or have included some yourself. Just send me the revised document. That way we'll be on the same page, literally.<br /><br />Best wishes - George<br /><br /><br /><br /><br />