I like what you've done! It doesn't fit with what follows in the story, but its a great example of what you can do.&nbsp;<br /><br />My plan on this project is to send it to two editors (One on this site as well as a cheaper one from Guru.com). Once I get feedback from the first I'll do another run through of edits and additions myself, then I'll send it to the other editor for finalization before I publish.&nbsp;<br /><br />Would you recommend I send it to you in the first round or second round?