Hi there,<br /><br />I was wondering about one paragraph in the essay. The one that begins with:<br />&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; "When I was not offered the positions I had hoped for (teaching English in a high school), I sought out other ways to achieve this end, and, as I waited to hear back from the programs, Eventually, I decided to take a route that so many others in the restaurant industry do: become an actor."<br /><br />I wasn't sure if this was meant to be broken into two sentences where the "Eventually" is capitalized? Or if it is meant to be one sentence since it seemed a little long. Thank you for any clarification and thank you for the edit!<br /><br />Robert