Thank you for your revising my SOP. The reason I review my essay again&nbsp;is&nbsp;I revised a few part on my own. especially introduction.<br />Furthermor, it is very important essay for me to enter the graduate school<br /><br />So, I am grateful if you review again and fix some awkward part.<br />Also I want you to reform some passage&nbsp;if you think you need it.<br /><br />Thank you for reviewing my SOP again.<br /><br /><br />