Hi, Vita:<br /><br />I didn't need to panic, after all. In fact, I needed the time to go over your document several times and find something -- <em>anything</em> -- to change. There are a few changes, though, mostly stylistic and minor. Where possible, I defended them in a comment.&nbsp;<br /><br />This certainly reads like an important study.&nbsp;When it's published and you're as famous as Noam Chomsky, I'll tell my friends that I was Vita's co-experimentalist. They like a good laugh.<br /><br />If you have any questions, please send a message via Editor World. I can run but I can't hide.&nbsp;<br /><br />Best wishes - George<br /><br />Actually, I can't run either. Knees need replacing.