<p>Hi there,<br />Thank you for the opportunity to edit for you today.<br /><br />This was admittedly a tough assignment, because your letter is so well-written and passionate. Cutting out information, which is necessary to get to your desired length, was not easy.<br /><br />So here's what I did so far:</p>
<p>*Re-formatted your header to put your address there. This saved you significant length, but if it doesn't work for you we can change it.<br />*I did a lot deleting words that seemed unneeded. Some of that do add emotion or context, but something had to give.<br />*I deleted a few sentences that felt, to me, either a bit repetitive or the least necessary. You have SO much information and background that really sells your abilities and experiences, so you may have a difference of opinion on what should be cut, but these are my suggestions.<br /><br />With that said, I am about a sentence short from getting you to two pages. Essentially, I think you're going to need to pick one more sentence to cut... or change your margins a tiny bit? Desperate times may call for desperate measures?<br /><br />I wish you all the best and please keep my in mind for any future editing needs,<br />Ryan</p>