Hi there,<br /><br />Thanks for sending this over for a free sample edit. As it is a sample edit, not a complete one, I have only completed the first paragraph. This should be sufficient for you to get an idea for how I edit.<br /><br />If you are interested in having me finish the paper, please note I am running a 15% coupon right now on my editor page.<br /><br />Cheers!<br />EM