Hi Vivian,<br /><br />Just wanted to give you an update. I'm about 1/3 of the way through the novel and it's looking great. The biggest change I've made so far is to trim your prose so that the amount of description doesn't detract from the narrative (but better to have too much than too little!). I'll let you know as I approach a return date. I'll definitely make it before July.<br /><br />Hope you're having a wonderful summer!<br />-Reina&nbsp;