Thank you for choosing my services once again! You cleared up some plot points in this revision, however there are still a few details left to consider (see my in-text comments). One pertinent addition you might make is Milady addressing her inability to kill. For a solidier, she shows quite a bit of vulnerability. She could use some emotional toughening up earlier on (e.g. perhaps being raped makes her become cold and unfeeling), so that her degredation back into the girl she once was is more dramatic at the end. This would also help support the general assertion that she is the best of the Miladies. Please let me know if you have any questions!&nbsp;