Thanks for getting back to me about follow-up. I'm always glad to hear that my edits have been helpful!<br /><br />I think you might have misunderstood my second comment, which may be the source of your confusion about what my suggestion is. The comment is about the text highlighted in your final paragraph, not your second paragraph. I'm recommending you change "Along with my Korean, Japanese, and French language skills, I believe my talents and experiences would bring a positive outcome to your organization" to something more like "Along with my Korean, Japanese, and French language skills, I believe my background in organizing online information and creating promotional material will help you keep your website up-to-date and increase your website traffic."<br /><br />As for the third comment, I agree that the word "open" is a bit vague (and probably not what they're looking for, since they requested you give them hours of availability). You could go with a more specific description of what open availability would entail for you, such as: "I am available to work from 9AM to 6PM (EST) during the week, but my hours of availability are flexible and I would be open to discussing work hours outside of this range." Or you could be even more broad in your description of your availability, encompassing all hours you anticipate being awake rather than describing typical business hours (for instance: "I will be available to work from the hours of 7AM to 11:30PM (EST) every day, and would be happy to discuss specific times when my skills will be most needed for the 20 hours you are looking to fill every week"). A more succinct option would just be "I am available to work from 9AM to 6PM (EST), Monday through Friday, as soon as needed." (However, this final option describes a 45-hour availability, whereas they're only looking to fill 20 hours with their intern and may want you to describe a specific 20-hour-a-week potential schedule. If you want to communicate openness and flexibility about your hours, this last option doesn't do it as well as the first two I've given here.)<br /><br />Hopefully this explanations are helpful, but if you need further clarification don't hesitate to send me another message.