Awesome edits. Quick question if I may. He did't say "in terms of social costs." He said 'in terms of" then didn't finish the sentence and gave the example of trying to be friends with Black women. I feared that the phrase "somewhat tortuous" was a bit incomplete, so I added "social costs" based on his example, but now it seems heavy and inaccurate. I don't like it. Do you think 'somewhat tortuous" stands well on its own? Thank you.