<p>To whom it may concern,<br /> <br /> When it comes to this piece, I'm looking for three attributes; clarity, proper grammar and syntax, and appropriate diction.  I believe I have a particular weakness when it comes to the use of modifiers; I sometimes misplace them and miss those mistakes in review.  Also, if you can keep any eye out of consistency of tense - I think it's all right in that regard, but I've reread it so many times I may have dulled my eyes to that kind of mistake.<br /> <br /> Any recommendations as it concerns content would also be appreciated; particularly in regards to clarity.  If you see an awkward sentence or have a suggestion as how to better articulate a thought, I welcome criticism, harsh or otherwise.  Not that it's particularly relevant, but this piece means a lot to me, and I want to improve it as meaningfully as I can.<br /> <br /> You have the most stellar reviews among all of the editors, and through sheer quantity of entries reviewed, seem to be the most experienced.  That being said, I'll take your suggestions very seriously, and moreover, I appreciate the opportunity to be reviewed by such experienced eyes.<br /> <br /> Thank you for your time.<br /> <br /> With Sincerity,<br /> <br /> Adam</p><br /><br />