Hi!!<br /><br />I looked it over, and think it's great. My only 2 changes would be to look through the citations and make sure the pages are mentioned like "p. 33". There was at least 2 spots where there was no period after p, and no space between. Also, for the sentence you added started with "Thus" toward the end, I would actually make that continuous with the last sentence, and put a comma before the thus (..., thus...).<br /><br />Thank you so much for the great rating :-) I was really happy to help! I am excited to find out where I match in several weeks, and hopefully it is good news! Feel free to send me any other documents in the future.<br /><br />Sincerely,<br /><br />Katrina