Hi Michelle!<br /><br />Here is what I think to be a great paper that follows your rubric guidelines. Take a look and see what you think. Thank you for choosing me to edit! It is fun having you send your work to me. Also, yes, I would be happy to edit any admissions materials you have down the line - I am pretty familiar with those at this point. :-)<br /><br />Sincerely,<br /><br />Katrina