Yes that what I was saying and ok I&nbsp;will resend it through the system right now. Oh and that Chapter was called&nbsp;, "Knock away the Ice."&nbsp;You will remember it when I send it again. This is the chapter that should&nbsp;hold the most Suspense and excitment and action! It's when they find the Ark. In your notes to me you said I should not write about what they doing but write about the action I don't understand how to do that? Please help me with this chapter it's about 4 pages long. let me know how much&nbsp;I will have to pay you.<br /><br /><br />Thanks again<br /><br />Chad