Please fix the following (not limited to these, in addition to the things listed below fix whatever else you think needs fixing):<br /><br />Grammar and punctuation<br />Spelling mistakes<br />Readability (editing poor sentence structure)<br />Repetition (there's nothing worse)<br />Syntax errors<br />spelling<br />grammar<br />punctuation<br />sentence structure<br />clarity<br />flow<br />tense<br />readability<br /><br />Anything else. Please also consider word choice. Feel free to take out sentences, or make your own and rewrite them. Thanks.<br /><br />Please do it the way you did it for my last paper, I liked how systematic it was. It was in blue and I just had to click accept insertion/deletion. Thank you.