<div>I need help with the grammer, here are the notes i have recieved from my professor<br /><br />Here are your most typical errors:</div><div><ul><li><b>Use of “, and" and “, but" - throughout.</b></li><li><b>How to use a quote correctly. </b></li><li><b>run on sentence</b>s (particularly in the material section).</li><li><b>The ‘Material Section'</b> needs the most work for proper grammar. Sentences are crammed together with no punctuation at all, and words like “yawl” (a two-masted fore-and-aft-rigged sailboat) have been added by dragon that are the wrong word (y’all).  This needs the most work</li></ul></div>