Hi there,<br />Thanks so much for choosing me to edit your work today.<br /><br />Your document is well-written and extremely well-researched. Your examples make a lot of sense and clear up questions. Most of my editing was organizational, fixing tense shifts, tone, and for consistency.<br /><br />Things to consider:<br />*Do you need a blank line in between sections or not? Sometimes you did it (after your first Purpose or Sample) and sometimes you didn't (second study's Purpose). I would try to stay consistent.<br />*Same goes for in between sentences. Occasionally you went with 2 spaces, but generally you used 1.<br />*I also wasn't sure about the ": " starting certain sections. If those need to be there, my apologies.&nbsp;<br />*Sometimes you seem to write in past tense, as in "The survey was conducted by..." and sometimes it's in a future tense "The survey will be conduct by..." This makes it unclear if the surveys/studies have already happened or are just planned. I would try to stay consistent.<br /><br />Overall, I am very interested in your studies. As a bit of a germaphobe, I'm not sure if I want to know how well employees are washing their hands! And I would certainly be curious about charitable donations by companies and how consumers view this. I look forward to seeing what you discover!<br /><br />Please keep me in mind if you have any other editing needs. Keep up the good work!<br /><br />Ryan