Hi, Oh-Jong:<br /><br />Many thanks for the message. I have reviewed your sentences, which you'll find edited below. I would keep the first sentence unchanged. For the second I would change&nbsp;'driving force' to 'impetus' and delete 'scope'. 'Diverging&nbsp;patterns' covers the scope, too. If you think 'scope' is necessary, I would use 'range' as a preferred term. I hope this helps. I also changed&nbsp;'that' to 'this' for a softer effect.<br /><br />Best wishes - George&nbsp;<br /><br />
<p>The literature of Asian skilled migration has not sufficiently compared multiple countries under particular themes.</p>
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<p>I started with the general debate on the impetus behind skilled immigration and link this issue to the question of what are the contributing factors to the diverging patterns of importing skills in the three countries."&nbsp;</p>
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