Hello Tina,<br /><br />Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your paper. I have cleaned it up following Harvard Emerald style, which I find very odd and cumbersome. You did a good job on the reference section, so there was not much I needed to correct.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc