Good evening,<br />What a great little story! Sounds like you were a very intelligent - if mischievous - young man.<br /><br />Overall this is very well written and the details are fantastic. It helps the reader really feel as if he's there watching it all happen.<br /><br />I did make a number of corrections for grammar, punctuation, and clarity. A lot of basically rearranging words and replacing some for easier, more comeplling reading. I also added a few more uses of figurative language.<br /><br />Again, fun story! Thanks again for choosing me to edit today.<br /><br />Ryan