Hi, Jinyoung:<br /><br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document, and I hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />You did the heavy lifting - I simply fused and finessed - but you have a very nice research proposal.<br /><br />Good luck with your application!&nbsp;<br /><br />Best wishes - George (TypeRighter)<br />I am usually available for editing between 6:00 am and 10:30 pm (EST). If my status is set to 'unavailable', you can still reach me via Editor World.<br /><br /><br />COMPATIBILITY MODE<br />Please remember that not everyone uses the same version of Microsoft Word. New features in Word can cause documents to look and behave differently when viewed with earlier versions of Word. In some cases, part of a document that is created using new features can't be edited in earlier versions of Word. So, please check your edited document carefully.<br /><br /><br />TRACK CHANGES<br />When you open a document containing tracked changes, it appears in the Final Show Markup view. To see the document without markups, do the following: <br />For PCs, on the Microsoft Word (2010) menu bar, click Review. Then select Final: Show Markup (All Markup) and click the drop-down arrow. Choose Final.<br />For Word 2013, click Review, then from the All Markup drop-down box, select No Markup.<br />For Macs, on the Review tab, under Tracking, click Track Changes to turn on or off. Choose No Markup from the drop-down menu in Show Markup.<br /><br />ACCEPT OR REJECT TRACK CHANGES<br />If you see an edit you dislike, place the cursor anywhere on the marked change, click Reject (on the menu bar), then choose Reject Change from the list box (or right-click to see your options). When finished, click Accept &gt; Accept All Changes to globally accept all the remaining edits.<br /><br />INSPECT DOCUMENT<br />MS Word includes tracked changes by default. Before sharing this document, please consider running Inspect Document. To do this, click File/Info/Check for Issues/Inspect Document on the Microsoft Word menu bar.<br /><br />PLEASE PROOFREAD<br />Although I was careful not to change the content of your document, please review the document carefully, and run spell-check using your dictionary language.<br /><br />