Hi there,<br /><br />I am submitting a long article for editing. Please let me know if the title doesn't make sense or the subtitles don't make sense. Or if you feel that there is anything that is not clear. I don't know how to do the dialogue in this article. I don't want to to a Q and A thing. Should I put his name by his quotes? Please also give me your opinion on this article, it is quite long and there are many subjects, I hope that I have written them clearly and with some level of cohesiveness.<br /><br />Thank you.<br /><br />Ling Ling