Hi Hanyoung:<br /><br />(I hope I am addressing you correctly. I know that Western names are the reverse of Korean names (i.e., given name first, family name last, so please correct me if I've made a mistake.)&nbsp;<br /><br />I am impressed by your CV. You certainly make a strong applicant.<br /><br />Apart from making a few stylistic changes, I have only one query, which concerns your thesis title. Is it possible to re-word it slightly. I wasn't absolutely sure that it's in the most lucid form possible. If you do change it and would like to send it to me, just copy and paste it into a message. &nbsp;I can the send an edited version back to you by the same method, at no charge.<br /><br />Meanwhile, I wish you a very happy holiday season.<br /><br />George<br /><br />