Hello!<br /><br />Thank you for editing my manuscript. I am in need of your expertise.<br /><br />I want to submit this manuscript to <a href="http://scholarcommons.usf.edu/gsp/"><em>Genocide Studies and Prevention: An International Journal.</em></a> However, it is a bit short of the required number of words that journal requires.<br /><br />I am not an historian; however, I am interested in Catholic Church involvement in world events. I have published 3 articles and one book.<br /><br />As you read this manuscript, consider this: what areas need to be "beefed up" and added to in order to lengthen and better argue this paper? What issues are misleading or not correct? How can this manuscript add a much needed--and neutral--voice to the discussion on the Catholic Church's role in the Ustashe Genocide?<br /><br />Please rip and tear to your editor's delight! I am in need of an historian's point of view. <br /><br />Thank you!<br /><br /><br />