Hello George,&nbsp;<br />For this paper, I know the introduction is a little lengthy, however, I need my arguments to be clear and precise about what I will be arguing in the paper at the beginning and it needs to be more detailed than other papers I have written. Other than that, feel free to shorten it as much as you need to, I know I tend to repeat myself.<br />Any questions please let me know.<br />Thanks again, you're the best!&nbsp;