Hello,<br /><br />Here is your edited paper. You did an absolutely stellar job--thouroughly researched, well supported by figures, and interestingly written. I helped you here and there with the structure of the paper, moving some sections of text to more appropriate places and creating a new heading. I edited your text in red; if you are happy with it you may change it to black. Feel free to reject any changes you feel are in error, and also feel free, as free as the flying squirrel, to contact me if you have questions. You may also resubmit after you have gone over and implemented my changes; send the revised paper as an attachment to a message so you do not get charged. I will be happy to take a second look, which I offer when there have been extensive edits made.<br /><br />I thoroughly enjoyed learning about the flying squirrel in your informative and engaging paper.<br /><br />Thank you,<br /><br />Laura Kenney