Hello there,<br />Your intro section is great, just a couple of really minor edits.<br /><br />For the rest, there were a few sentences I did some revisions on for clarity and making it a bit easier and user-friendly to read. I made a change to the sentence you were struggling with, and it reads better to me now.&nbsp;<br /><br />I also wrote a long explanation about whether or not to capitalize institute. It's really a matter of preference, and I think you could argue for either option - which I attempted to explain in the document.&nbsp;<br /><br />Beyond that, similar little changes to grammar, punctuation, and mostly working with articles. It's looking great!<br /><br />Happy Sunday,<br />Ryan