Hello!<br /><br />First of all, I thank you very much!<br />I need help!<br /><br />I need to abridge this (less than 500 words) + make it more coherent (I had not enough time to, due to my business schedule) + have it <span style="text-decoration: underline;"><strong>streamlined (flowing!).<br /><br />You can get rid of things you think are less vital to the purpose of this SOP for graduate school of communication.<br /><br /></strong></span>Thank you very very much!<strong><br /><br /><br /></strong>Very sincerely,<br />Hangsan Ahn