Hello George,<br /><br />I got your message about putting in another paragraph on historical examples of genocide. I was reading over the essay and I was thinking to maybe put in a small paragraph elaborating on Lemkin's point of focus on the cultural aspects of genocide (how its not just about physical extinction but cultural extinction as well). What do you think? If I send it back you to edit should I send it through a message as an attached document of just the paragraph or resend you the entire essay with the new paragraph in it?<br /><br />Thank you :)