Hi, thank you for letting me read this and I hope my edits are helpful! The one thing I would suggest again (I included a note in the document about this as well) is that you give a specific example in your second paragraph about the projects you were involved with during your internship. It doesn't need to be anything too major, just something to give your audience a quick glimpse into your experience working for the company. It will make the speech more personal, and that's always a good thing! I wish you the best of luck with it!