Did you turn on the track changes to view everything, and then select all the different subcomponents to view? If you did, you should seeplenty of changes. If this still does not work, try comparing it ti your original work a d you should notice various changes. Anything that is not edited means it is fine as is!<br /><br />As for&nbsp;more feedback, it appears that you are either a non-English speaker who has good mastery of the writing, or a native speaker who can use a little improvement on word and sentence structure. Either way, at baseline you appear to be an above average writer, and you have a good "voice."<br /><br />For improvement, I suggest you work on reducing wordings--i.e. do not use two words when one word will do. In addition, you made several typos in author names and elsewhere that you likely would have detected with another read, but please be sure to detect for those. There are several instances as well where commas were needed, so i added them. Finally, I suggest double-checking which words, such as those in theories, must be capitalized, and which should not be. Generally Google is good for this. On general, you also did a good job organizing the information and starting new paragraphs at the right spots. Are there any other questions you have?<br /><br />