<p>Thank you for the opportunity to review this proposal. It&rsquo;s very persuasive.</p>
<p>You are clearly an experienced subject matter writer and editor, so the edits are not overly extensive.</p>
<p>My main concern is the layout, which will shift after all changes are made. I couldn&rsquo;t decide if you wanted each major section on a new page, no matter how short the previous page, or as text flowing as the spacing permitted.</p>
<p>The graphics were a bit problematic as well and I had to re-paste one into the text.</p>
<p>I suggest you accept all of the changes and then set up the layout as you intended it to be (or tell me and I&rsquo;ll do it).</p>
<p>If you have any questions, please email me.</p>