I'm about 3/4 of the way through, and it's good. there are some places that might need a few more details. You say you work in geriatrics, but don't give any details about what your specific position or responsibilities are.&nbsp;<br /><br />You also talk about how your course has led you to Marylhurst, but not about what exactly led you there. If you could work on a couple of detail sentences about that, I can get them added into the essay. I should be done in about an hour. Is that okay?