Hello! <br /><br />For this document, I focused on ensuring that the sentences were grammatically sound and coherent as befitting an academic paper. I edited in-text citations and the bibliography at the end, but I didn't create footnotes, as they are typically not recommended for MLA style formatting, which this paper seemed to most closely follow. As before, I left several comments on the sides either explaining certain edits or offering suggestions for your consideration, so be sure to look out for those. Feel free to message me if you have any questions! Thanks. =)