Hi,<br /><br />You have a great start here on a&nbsp;fantastic topic. I've put in quite a few comments to help guide you in revising this for your course. Lit reviews are hard to get the hang of and can take a few goes before they actually read like a review and not like a short paper. You have done excellent research, though, so you should be able to get this finished up quite well. <br /><br />Need to check the formatting of your footnotes, though. It's crucial in a lit review to give your reader the details of your intellectual journey with complete and meticulous citations. Since your argument demonstrates a judicious use of sources, you want to compliment it with a scholarly presentation of your ideas.<br /><br />Good luck.