Here is the rubric the teacher sent no to long ago make sure all of this is done please if not fix it for me to before you turn my paper back to me at midnight thank you:2014 Research Essay 1 This I Believe Grading Guide 
Student: _________________________________			Grade__________
This I Believe Narration:

The main point is clearly communicated		                 	10   9    8    7    6  
The writer develops the essay with vivid details			10   9    8    7    6  
The writer builds excitement with careful pacing			10   9    8    7    6  
Thesis Statement:
The thesis statement contains essays controlling idea		10   9    8    7    6  
Development:
The essays topics adequately develop thesis statement		10   9    8    7    6  
The essay is developed logically					5    4     3   2     1
Unity:
The essays topic sentences relate directly to thesis statement 	5    4    3   2     1 
Sentences in each body paragraph support the topic sentence  	5    4   3    2     1          
All paragraphs are relevant to the thesiss controlling idea 	   	5    4   3    2     1
Organization:
Paragraphs within the essay are organized logically			5    4      3    2     1 
Sentences are organized logically					5    4      3    2     1 Coherence:
Paragraphs move smoothly from one to another			5    4     3     2     1 
Sentences move smoothly from one to another 			5    4     3    2     1 
Grammar & MLA Format: Student remains in control of sentences and follows MLA format 	10   9    8    7    6  
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