Hello, this is recommendation letter for my admission.<br />One of my recommender required me to write&nbsp;the&nbsp;draft of LoR, so I wrote for recommending myself....<br /><br />I wonder if there woule be&nbsp;better expressions to make this letter more strong.<br />I'm worried that what if it seems to be&nbsp;unconvincing and boring of just listing some facts.&nbsp;<br /><br />I'll really appreciate your suggestion&nbsp;on expressions and flow/content.&nbsp;<br /><br />Thank you.&nbsp;<br /><br /><br /><br />