Dear Nyaindic,<br /><br />I'm planning to submit this manuscript to an academic journal (sociology discipline).&nbsp;<br />Please make the Introduction and Literature Review clarified and engaging if possible (my top priority).&nbsp;<br />I am frustrated by that I repeat some words so many times (i.e. settlement propensities/ intention/ plans.., human capital, etc) but don't know what to do with it. &nbsp;I also wonder if my descriptions of statistical analysis would make sense to readers who have basic knowledge of statistics.<br /><br />I've always appreciated your excellent editing. Thank you in advance!<br /><br />Kwon<br />&nbsp;&nbsp;