Hi, July15 (Hyunsun):<br /><br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document, and I hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />This should be a delightful children's story! Although I wasn't always sure who was speaking (mushroom or person), I inserted quotation marks where I thought it was the mushroom. If I was mistaken, just delete the quotes. Send a message via Editor World if you have any questions. Like you, I would like to make it perfect!<br /><br />Best wishes - George<br />I am usually available for editing between 6:00 am and 10:30 pm (EST). If my status is set to 'unavailable', you can still reach me via Editor World.