Good afternoon,<br />Thanks for choosing me to edit for you once again.<br /><br />This is a very well-researched document and your points are strong, valid, and well thought out.<br /><br />The editing made is generally for comprehension. There were some confusing parts, so words were rearranged, tenses changed to avoid shifts, punctuation corrected, etc. Spelling got a bit sloppy in the second half, so those changes were made too.<br /><br />There were a few more technical sentences that were a bit confusing to me. Obviously I am not expert in the subject, so it could be my lack of knowledge of certain terms, but I left notes for a few sentences I felt might need a bit of rewording for clarity.<br /><br />Please keep me in mind for any future editing needs and have a great week ahead.<br /><br />Thanks,<br />Ryan