Thanks for your previous edits.<br /><br />As English is my second language, it would be helpful if you can improve on the&nbsp;grammar, spelling and language use.<br /><br />It is also appreciated if you can help improve the logical flow of language from one idea to another, connecting different parts.<br /><br />In addition, the word limit is 700, but i have written 760, i would be appreciate if you can advise on reducing words without undermining the information conveyed.<br /><br /><br />*PS: The colorful part in the end is requirements which don't need to be edited.