Good morning, Maya:<br /><br />I had no idea that The Guardian translation was so bad. I suggest, then, that you copy and paste yours back in. I think most of your analysis is still there. Perhaps it would be better to italicise your comments to distinguish the&nbsp;two. Please let me know if there's anything I can do this end. I know I'm not much help with the content, but I can polish.<br /><br />Best wishes - George