<p>Good afternoon,<br />Thanks so much for choosing me to edit your work today.<br /><br />You have a very thoughtful response to the play written in your work. I added a few sentences and phrases to extend the writing a bit as you requested. Beyond that, edits were made for grammatical purposes, to keep consistent tone, to correct tense shifts, and some just for clarification purposes.<br /><br />Overall you have a really well written response. Please see a few additional comments in the document.<br /><br />Please keep me in mind for any future editing needs!<br /><br /></p>
<p>Ryan</p>