This is for a radical political blog. It should be more or less in journalistic style.  Pleas, cut the unncessary words, and improve the pros to that it will be easy for a divers audiance to read. Feel free to ad better terms or phrases. I prefer more active voice.  It should be very forceful and provocative.  There might be repetiton.  If there is an transiton sentence needed, please make note or feel free to suggest.  cheers Jadon 