Dear Amy,<br /><br />Million thanks for your effort, and I apologize I failed to notice that you had already uploaded the finished document for me. Attached is my document after I accepted your changes. I want to ask you a favor please. Would you look it over for revision please? I added one sentences in blue font in the last paragraph, please edit it for me if it needs clarification. I asked you to check and see if my paper has proprly answered the question (I added the question in the bottom for your information.&nbsp;<br /><br />I truely appreciate your good work with me Amy!<br /><br />Maya