Dear Ms. Kim,<br /><br />Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit these sections of your dissertation. However, if you turn on all the features in your grammar checker, you will see that there are many significant problems in the unhighlighted text. I do not know whether I have not edited this material or whether you have not accepted changes that I made previously. However, as it stands now, the quality of the document is very uneven. As a consequence, either you need to incorporate all changes I have made in sections I've edited already, or allow me to work on all as yet unedited material before you submit your dissertation.<br /><br />Kind Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc<br /><br />