I read that you are retired lawyer. I am taking a Ph.D. class called Introduction to Criminal Justice. I am writing my paper on excessive force. If you could review this document for grammar, punctuation, wordiness. Additionally, I am looking for your legal expertise to ensure my thoughts match with the law. If you have better advice to add, (please do).&nbsp;<br /><br /><br />Also, I am trying to ensure that my Reference page is APA 6th edition compliant&nbsp;