Hi, Di (or should I say, 'Auspicious sister'):<br /><br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document, and I hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />A great paper and a valuable&nbsp;contribution to the field! I've reviewed&nbsp;it so many times, I could practically recite it, but I don't think there are any typos. Even so, please review carefully, and send a message if you have any concerns. I'll reply as soon as possible.<br /><br />Best wishes - George<br />I am usually available for editing between 6:00 am and 10:30 pm (EST). If my status is set to 'unavailable', you can still reach me via Editor World.