A heavy edit here, which increases the risk of me changing the text into something you didn't intend.<br /><br />I don't know the full context here, but any discussion of race in America is a delicate matter.<br /><br />I need you to read the version with changes all in, and read it carefully. This response is about what you want to say, not what I want to say.<br /><br />As an editor, I try to be fair and impartial as the text&nbsp;belongs to the author.<br /><br />Jackson<br /><br />