Good news. I'll work on this Word file so you can readily see any&nbsp;changes in red.&nbsp;<br /><br />You are absolutely correct in passing the content evaluation first, then doing the edit&nbsp;now to avoid a second edit.<br /><br />In the pdf, I see&nbsp;"Lulu Publishing Services rev. date: 12/30/2015" This must be the company that did the layout, although I wonder why they did so before the edit was completed (i.e., laid out&nbsp;a draft).<br /><br />Let me at least get through the Word line-by-line edit due Wednesday.&nbsp;<br /><br />Jackson