Hello,<br /><br />Before I return your sample edit, I thought you should know that the issues you refer to in your messages would be addressed if you were to submit the document for editing. For a sample, we just look at the first few paragraphs for a one-page doc and the first page for one that is longer.<br /><br />I'm happy to to the sample edit, but it will not include the full paper.<br /><br />Thank you,<br /><br />Write Aid