Hi,&nbsp;Nagatomi:<br /><br />Thank you for your editing request. I have downloaded your document, and if I have any questions, I'll be in touch via Editor World.<br /><br />Great to see you back!<br /><br />(Hardly a document&nbsp;for correction. With your submissions, it's more a case of simple proofreading, of fussing and finessing, and always a pleasure.)&nbsp;<br /><br />Best wishes - George<br /><br />I am usually available for editing between 6:00 am and 10:30 pm (EST). If my status is set to 'unavailable', you can still reach me via Editor World.<br /><br /><br /><br />