Hello,<br /><br />Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit this section, although I am not sure how it can be described as a paragraph! I am pleased to know that my work has been helpful to you.<br /><br />I recommend strongly that you engage in an exercise in which you try your level best to write like a 10 year old, in short, clear sentences that the masses you hope to engage might have a faint hope of understanding. Your writing is largely inaccessible to the vast majority of people and needs much work to be comprehensible. You might also benefit from reading Hemingway, e.g., 'The Old Man and the Sea.' He was a master of brevity and clarity.<br /><br />As always, your ratings are much appreciated.<br /><br />Congratulations on finishing your dissertation!<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc