I am looking in particular for help with my structure. I have different ideas (due to the unresolved differences in the research) but need them to flow and not sound so mis-matched and clunky. I want the reader to be able to understand me. As well, at times I tend to run-on and am not as concise as I could be. I hope that these instructions make sense and if not please feel free to email me <a href="mailto:kameranm@uindy.edu">kameranm@uindy.edu</a>. This is my first time using an editing service so I don't know if you can but if so I don't mind. I just would like my dissertation to be more readable while still professional, to present all the ideas but not sound wishy-washy, and generally have improved flow. I appreciate all your help. Thank you!