Hello, Alyssa,<br /><br />I attempted to address your concerns in addition to providing regular editing. If you would like to resubmit your paper either after you address VLU's comments or after you've submitted it to VLU for another look, please let me know. I will be happy to look at the paper again at no charge after changes are implemented. You can submit via the messaging system so you do not get charged.<br /><br />Please feel free to contact me if you have any questions.&nbsp;<br /><br />Thanks,<br /><br />Laura Kenney