Thank you.  Here is my edit for the summary section.  Please also advise that I should not use an independent clause where but appears.  Is it more easy to read for readers?

Please review the section, Summary, below.  Am I explaining it clearly? Please review the following as if you were a Rehab Counselor. I appreciate it if you review the rest of the section as well. I am trying to stress 4 things as my recommendations: 
1. She has not explored all features of assistive technology aids and will benefit from practicing them by using her college materials forwarded from the college.
2. Taking her aids to school and use it on campus while working with the assistive technologist on campus.
3. Discuss the video magnifiers options with her counselor (I cannot specify a product name.)
4. She will benefit from using Audio format as her reading method instead of reading with her eyes.

Thank you.

Summary
Mrs. M P is doing very well currently in the child development program at her college. Although she became tired from time to time, she was very cooperative throughout the entire evaluation. 

She is already equipped with several assistive technology aids but reported a few problems with her devices and software. The CCTV (SmartView Xtend) power could be turned on, but it appeared that the image was misaligned. The CCTV has been scheduled to be brought to the NB I to examine it further. She also has a various distance video magnifier (Transformer). The advantage of using a various distance video magnifier like Transformer is that she can use for document reading at home and in classroom. She should be able to use her transformer with a laptop and display the images onto a larger monitor (32 or larger). However, she stated that her transformer magnifier is the first version model and does not refresh the magnified view of what she writes immediately on her computer. It is recommended that she discuss about her additional video magnifier options with her counselor.

Additionally, she reported having problems using certain features (App/Doc Reader) in her ZoomText software. The rehab technology specialist updated her Zoom-Text software from 9.1 to 10.0, modified the Adobe Reader settings, and taught her how to use hotkeys in ZoomText. The App Reader and Doc Reader were repaired during the visit. M was able to demonstrate her ability by reading her book at a speed rate of 60 with 11x magnification. She preferred using the reading setting with blue font on a black background. She also has ZoomText 10.1 USB but will not be able to use it until the ZoomText 10.1 version becomes compatible with the Windows 7 system. 

The rehab technology specialist forwarded the information pertaining to her assistive technology aids to the assistive technologist.She will benefit from becoming more familiar with the OCR features available in OpenBook and ZoomText with the electronic format textbooks provided by her college while working with the technologist on campus. She likes the OCR/Audio conversion feature and plans to use the study materials forwarded to her by her college. She may benefit from reading materials from audio format than visually reading from her eyes.