Hi, there:<br /><br />As requested, I have included the correct forms of the sentences abou which you inquired:<br /><br />1. New: I will also concentrate on comparative East Asian cinemas, focusing on how people in this region of the world express their own cultures and which factors of their cultures affect other cultures.<br /><br />2. New: I specialized in electronic media and digital imaging as an undergradate student.<br /><br />3. New: I will work to increase my English academic ability by taking ESL courses provided by the school before the program starts.<br /><br />4. Keep the Same: At the same time, she is to be admired for the inner reserve she has developed in order to be successful.&nbsp; (you can keep this sentence as the original one; it will work here as well)<br /><br />5. New: Since she returned to Korea from a successful work experience in the US, Chan has continued in her English classes throughout her career.<br /><br />6. New: In addition to using the abovementioned media products, there are many other ways to enjoy media contents.<br /><br /><br />Thank you; please let me know if you have any questions. It has been a pleasure!<br /><br />Sincerley,<br />MasterEditor