Hi, Elizabeth,<br /><br />I am glad you let me know that you were looking for more extensive editing. I usually go by what the author is looking for in addition to what I think is necessary. Some books need a lot of work, while others are pretty well written to start with. Yours was one of the latter. You were very thorough in covering possible issues and contingencies and cross-referencing your chapters. The sections were well organized and presented in a logical progression, from planning stages to actual trip advice. You included website and book references on every subject. I think there were only one or two sections where I thought you might add a list, e.g. foreign country 911 numbers. I am honestly unsure of how to improve on the job you did. I can't fix what is not broken.&nbsp;<br /><br />I understand your concerns, however. Sometimes if a book is well done to start with it feels as though you're paying a lot for a small amount of work. Please rest assured that there being fewer edits than you were expecting is not an indication that careful, thorough attention was not paid to your MS. This is another reason for doing a second edit on longer works, so we can cover together any additions, questions, changes. I offer this free of charge as it is not part of EW's services, but I feel it is necessary with longer works.<br /><br />If you are truly unhappy, you can feel free to request a refund or to have another editor look at your MS. I am glad you contacted me, though, and I would like the chance to try to give your book the attention you are looking for.<br /><br />Thank you,<br /><br />Laura