Hi, Valeria--Here's a bit of feedback on the outline. I think you are in a fine place to start. I can edit chapters as you submit them, and keep a folder of all files, in order, of edited text. When there is a lot of back and forth, files tend to get lost, renamed, merged, and replaced. It gets a bit crazy.<br /><br />Again, I only made a few edits (habit) as I went through, but the text (everything except what I did on your first submission--but I'll look at that again, too) needs to be thoroughly edited.<br /><br />Thanks, Valeria--I think your book will help a lot of people.<br /><br />Laura