Hi Jaeyoung,<br /><br />I'm not positive I understand what you're trying to say in that sentence with the phrase "the international market trend."&nbsp;It might be that the&nbsp;sentence the phrase popped up in was trying to say more than one thing, and I interpreted the second half based on what the first half seemed to be saying.<br /><br />The sentence I left the comment on began, "In a more practical sense, when I was at University of Michigan-Flint as an exchange student, I was a Secretary of the International Business Student Organization (IBSO), which is designed to enhance..."<br /><br />My edits of this sentence were based on the premise that the latter half of the sentence was giving your reader an idea of what IBSO does (i.e., that it is something that enhances the studies of students like yourself and prepares them for careers in business). Based on that interpretation, it made more sense to me for you to write that the organization enhances "international market studies" rather than claiming that it helps the global market situation itself. I don't see how IBSO as an organization helps the international market, since it seems like what the organization does is help students of the international market better understand it. I presumed that by "international market trend" you meant to say that students were studying trends in the international market, and edited accordingly. If this is not what you meant to say, please let me know and I can take another look at how to talk about international market trends in relation to the organization.<br /><br />Best,<br />Tori