Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your most interesting first chapters. I have studied Chinese dynastic history, but know nothing of its modern history, so this is quite illuminating. I also congratulate you, in that it is written quite well overall, except for errors in grammar/syntax common among even native English speakers. I look forward to editing the remainder of the thesis. Can you tell me how many pages it is in its entirety?<br /><br />I do recommend that you have me edit all of the footnotes, as they all need reformatting--see those you asked me to edit--as well as some content editing.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc