I'm glad you found my feedback helpful. To answer your questions:<br /><br />1. Yes, I believe that eliminating that sentence (as well as "first" and "second" at the beginning of that paragraph and the next) would be fine with the overall flow.<br /><br />2. Changing "specifically for the firms" to "specifically for firms" makes the wording more general, which I believe is what you want to be saying. The wording of "the firms" implies, with the article, that you are talking about specific firms. Eliminating the article makes the subject in question less specific.<br /><br />3. Yes, if you meant that the firms will invest less than before, then "will provide" is better than "will receive."<br /><br />4. If you were using the term "denominated" to mean expressed in a certain monetary unit, then it's fine as-is. I just wanted to double-check with you that you were using the word you wanted to be using, since it was close in spelling to another, more common, word.<br /><br />Hopefully this addresses your concerns. If you have further questions, let me know.