Hi Laura!&nbsp;Thank you.&nbsp;Here is the full proposal with my revisions.<br /><br />The query is also included in there. I made new changes to it, hope you haven't edited yet the one I sent before.&nbsp;<br /><br />I changed the outline too. I've decided to include my personal stories in the chapters of "My Ideas Of Thriving Health." What do you think?<br /><br />Will focus now on preparing the three chapters to you send. I also chose different ones to present agents. I hope you like them.&nbsp;<br /><br />Thank you again,<br />Valeria&nbsp;<br /><br /><br /><br /><br />