Dear Mastereditor,<br />&nbsp;I am sending you a copy of my nursing portfolio to edit. The text has not been formatted because it will be <br />formatted by a graphic designer. This portfolio is going to be used for the following purposes: academic application,<br />nurse externship and future employment.<br /><br />1) I would like you to revise punctuation and grammar.<br />2) I would also like you to improve on the way that I explained my experiences when possible.<br />3) I highlighted a few words in yellow. Can you take a look at these highlighted areas? <br />4) Nursing Philosophy - there is a fragment in this part of the portfolio. I am placing this text in a design<br />that has a picture. So the format must stay the same. But can you tell me if it is okay to leave the fragment. <br />It is supposed to be poetic. <br />5) Value and Beliefs - same as above.<br />6) The areas highlighted in fuscia are terms that I have to look up. You do not have to worry about these highlighted areas.<br /><br />Thank you,<br />Shelly <br /><br />