Hello,

I noticed that the rating of my work on the first go-round of the Nine Approaches paper was just 2 stars out of 5, yet you then asked me to to edit a later draft of it.

I would very much appreciate it if you would let me know about any specific concerns or deficiencies you noted in my work, so that I can be sure to address them going forward.

Thank you,
MMC (TheWriteStuff)