Hi, this is my statement of purpose for graduate school.&nbsp;&nbsp; I had&nbsp;a sorted start to my undergraduate experience (which you will read about) and have been told by the graduate school to address that.&nbsp; The statement has to be between 300 and 500 words. This statement goes over a little bit, but I've been told not to worry about it.&nbsp; I understand that the nature of the statement is unorthodox; however, my undergraduate experience was as well so I believe it is fitting.&nbsp; I've also read enough to know that comittees get tired of reading the same statements over and over again.&nbsp; I'm worried about you paying attention to comma placement and tenses, other than that I'm comfortable with what I've said.&nbsp; Thank you!