It was a pleasure to edit your well-written and interesting document. I do apologize for the delay in getting the free sample edit to you - as you can see, the Editor World website has been completely revamped, and the transition made it impossible to upload free sample edit documents, an issue that has now been resolved. In your document, I focused on correcting the grammar, elevating the language, and enhancing clarity and flow. Overall, nice work! I hope to have the opportunity to work with you again in the future. Best of luck to you with all your current and future endeavors.