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<div>I have carefully read your document and edited it, not the content, but just to improve the flow. Occasionally, the English did not quite conform to idiomatic English, so I made changes where necessary. For example, "human activity" rather than "human activities" is the preferred usage. This is an excellent&nbsp;study, which I assume is intended for publication.</div>
<div>I tried hard not to change your meaning but to express it more naturally in English. Once or twice I guessed at the meaning but with Microsoft Word Track Changes it is easy to revert to the original if necessary.&nbsp;</div>
<div>MS Word includes track changes by default. Before sharing this document, please consider running Document Inspector. To do this, click File/Info/Check For Issues/Inspect Document on the Microsoft Word menu bar.<br /><br />When you open a document containing track changes, the document appears in the Final Show Markup view to show the edited document.<br /><br />(PC) To check the edited document without markups, click Review on the Microsoft Word menu bar. Then select Final: Show Markup (All Markup) and click the drop-down arrow. Choose Final (No Markup). Brackets apply to MS Word 2013.<br />(Mac) On the Review tab, under Tracking, click Track Changes to turn on / off track changes. Choose No Markup from the drop-down box in Show Markup.<br /><br />Please proofread your edited document carefully. <br /><br />Best wishes - George (TypeRighter)<br /><br />I am usually available for editing between 6:00 am and 10:30 pm (EST). If my status says 'unavailable', you can still reach me via Editor World.</div>
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