Hi, Janice:<br /><br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document, and I hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br /><br />MS Word includes tracked changes by default. Before sharing this document, please consider running Inspect Document. To do this, click File/Info/Check for Issues/Inspect Document on the Microsoft Word menu bar.<br /><br />When you open documents containing tracked changes, they appear in the Final Show Markup view. To see the document without markups, do the following:<br /><br />For PCs, on the Microsoft Word (2010) menu bar, click Review. Then select Final: Show Markup (All Markup) and click the drop-down arrow. Choose Final.<br /><br />For Word 2013, click Review, then from the All Markup drop-down box, select No Markup.<br /><br />For Macs, on the Review tab, under Tracking, click Track Changes to turn on or off. Choose No Markup from the drop-down menu in Show Markup.<br /><br />I have proofread your document very carefully but please proofread it yourself in case I missed any errors. As I mentioned, there are some words missing in Appendix 6 and 7. They're at the end of each sentence and you'll know what they are when you see them. I can't think of anything else at the moment but if I do, I'll be in touch.<br /><br />You have a very interesting thesis and it's genuinely original in the one way you mentioned. I'm the first to admit that I'm two generations too old for K-pop, but I did check it out on YouTube and was impressed.<br /><br />Anyway if there's anything else I can do please let me know. I haven't heard back from Editor World's system administrator about your request for an editing confirmation document, but as soon as I hear I'll be in touch.&nbsp;<br /><br />Best wishes - George<br /><br />I am usually available for editing between 6:00 am and 10:30 pm (EST). If my status says 'unavailable', you can still reach me via Editor World.