Thank you for your submission! I did a very large amount of rephrasing here to improve grammar and flow, and I left multiple comments regarding sources. Make sure that each reference you make to work that is not your own is amply cited, or you will be plagiarizing. Additionally, avoid phrase such as "some people" or "recently," as these are vague and discredit you as an author. You will notice that I removed many portions of this document--I did so because they were repetitive and oftentimes comfusing. Please be sure to read my in-text comments for further detail.&nbsp;