dear editor,<br /><br />I revised the previous document you edited as follows. Can you please check it? (it's just a few sentences). I also plan to submit my new document to you online next week and continuously thereafter and hope you are available.<br /><br />thanks in advance,<br /><br />
<p>title: Community-based rainwater harvesting system for potable water supply in Vietnam</p>
"Using the novel technology that we have invented, the proposed project aims at supplying safe drinking water and train local communities in Vietnam. Africa and Asia are suffering economic waterscarcity, which will become continuous issues caused by urbanizationand climate change. Consequently, this project aims at meeting the &ldquo;Sustainable Development Goals&ndash;<em>SDG6.</em><em>&rdquo;</em><br /><br />"Moreover, we will also collaborate with local companies and Vietnamese government (cost-sharing up to $__).&nbsp;&nbsp;<br /><br /><br />