Hi Ryan,<br /><br />Thank you very much for your edit. &nbsp;It was very helpful and I like your suggestions. &nbsp;My only issue is that the maximum is 2000 words and I'm over that so I have to figure out how to shorten the paper now. &nbsp;<br /><br />I would love to have you edit my final research paper in December for this same course. &nbsp;The topic is torture in the framework of global governance... I still need to narrow the topic down though and will be meeting with my professor to figure that out.<br /><br />Gina