Hi, this is my first draft for submitting my journalism writing class.&nbsp;I am pretty sure that I made tons of mistakes in grammar, pucnuations, and sentence structures. It doesn't have to be super perfect like native&nbsp;english speaker does,&nbsp;but I want to make&nbsp;it clear and well organized essay.&nbsp;&nbsp;I wish I could carefully read and edit it&nbsp;before submitting,&nbsp;but have no time to reread or write it unfortunately. Thank you for your service!<br /><br />