I'm not sure which paragraph you intended for the end of the introduction section, but the current last paragraph works best as the final paragraph of the conclusion. It sums up everything and offers a sort of next step for everything.&nbsp;<br /><br />The left margin will need to be changed to 1.5", and the page numbers will need to be added.&nbsp;<br /><br />I added a few clarifying sentences. As always, just make sure that they say what you want to say.<br /><br />I think that each section details all of the facts well, and that each chapter flows in a logical way. Just read through again and make sure that you think that each section ends with conclusions, not just facts.&nbsp;<br /><br />Good luck!