Hi,&nbsp;Nagatomi:<br /><br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document, and I hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />I find the subject matter fascinating. I studied Marx and Lenin at university, so I have a little background, but I'm the first to admit that I really just proofread your material and occasionally offer an alternative suggestion, neither better nor worse, just different. Forgive the inclusion of a running head; I know you know about this. I just add it automatically.<br /><br />Best wishes - George<br />I am usually available for editing between 6:00 am and 10:30 pm (EST). If my status says 'unavailable', you can still reach me via Editor World.