Hello! <br /><br />After reading the comments you left, I edited the document for consistency in grammar (especially capitalization and passive voice), as well as making sure that the sentences flowed in a more colloquial, flowing fashion from one idea to the next. I left comments on the side throughout the document either explaining certain edits or offering suggestions for you consideration, so be sure to look out for those. Feel free to message me if you have any questions! Thanks. =)