Hi,Laura. I guess you are almost at the end of your work on the first installment. Will you please replace A on pape 2 with B? 

A:We dance like nobodys watching. We love like shes never been hurt before. We share passion, poetry, amusement, bliss, ups and downs, fear and pain, and twists of fate.

B:I learn to dance for her; she takes tennis lessons for me. We share passion, poetry, amusement, bliss, ups and downs, fear and pain, and twists of fate. We love like shes never been hurt before.

After I sent you the manuscript, I changed a few lines, which I hope you will replace A with B and see if it's okay. 
I'm sorry to trouble you, but you said it is a cliche. Thanks a million. James