Thank you Jackson.<br /><br />I feel the cover letter doesn't highlight the major, important points of my book.<br /><br />What makes my work different from others? Would this information trigger real interest in a agent? Why? The way you put it together is concise but doesn't say much about the work itself and how compelling it is.&nbsp;<br /><br />If I were an agent I wouldn't be curious to open the file.<br /><br />Also, the first chapter might not be the best sample of my writing but instead one or more of my stories. Or perhaps another chapter.&nbsp;<br /><br />I understand if you can't help me further but I would still like you to create another cover letter, if possible.&nbsp;&nbsp;What part of my book proposal is more interesting to you? Would you represent me if you were an agent? Why?<br /><br />A vote for a tooth &nbsp;- ithat s right. You might need to read the story to understand it. I should change the title.<br /><br />Thank you,'Valeria&nbsp;