Hi, Kathleen!<br /><br />So great to hear from you, and I am so excited to be working on another of your books. I still tear up when I think of Spirit!<br /><br />I'll take a look at the dialog--we'll figure out something that differentiates ghost talk from thoughts and thoughts from living person talk that doesnt look too awkward.<br /><br />As far as the blurb goes--that's fine!<br /><br />Yay!