Hi Laura, Sorry to get back to you so late, but I have been working alot on this book, and my other job. I am self publishing this book and had someone working with me on it but I am not really happy with the edit work. This is the sample that you helped me with early and I really liked the way you write particularly the action that you added. The editor that I hired 6 months ago can't write&nbsp;as well and leave the sceen lacking. It should be all of the things you put in the side&nbsp;note and more. I would like to know if you could help me with this sceen and the action as it is a very important part of the story. I would like to know how much would you charge me to fix it and make it better&nbsp;and more gripping and exciting? I know you may not do it that way, but the rest of the story I paid the other editor to do&nbsp; 6 months ago and he is working on that but the way you write is what&nbsp;I like.&nbsp;Oh this is about a group of sienctist trying to find the remains of <br />noah's Ark. And when they find it it's going to change them and the world. There are five more action scenes I will also need your help. Please let me know.