	(15488,3265,484,'Is this what you sent to technical support?<br /><br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-04 18:44:56','2015-09-04 18:49:37',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15489,484,3265,'<div class=\"rmTop t_mbgc\" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px; position: relative; padding: 5px 0px 0px; z-index: 35; margin-right: 17px; color: #444444; font-family: \'Microsoft JhengHei UI\', \'Microsoft JhengHei\', Pmingliu, \'Segoe UI\', \'Segoe UI Web Regular\', \'Segoe UI Symbol\', \'Helvetica Neue\', \'BBAlpha Sans\', \'S60 Sans\', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 14.0799999237061px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: 1; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; background-color: #ffffff;\">\r\n<h2 class=\"rmSubject\" style=\"line-height: 29.9904003143311px; font-size: 21.1200008392334px; font-family: \'Microsoft JhengHei UI Light\', \'Microsoft JhengHei\', Pmingliu, \'Segoe UI Light\', \'Segoe UI Web Light\', \'Segoe UI Web Regular\', \'Segoe UI\', \'Segoe UI Symbol\', HelveticaNeue-Light, \'Helvetica Neue\', Arial, sans-serif; font-weight: normal; margin: 0px 0px 13px; padding-top: 2px;\">I sent this...<br /><br />(URGENT)Please walk me through how to \"Begin the Project\"&rlm;</h2>\r\n</div>\r\n<div id=\"ReadMessageScrollableSection\" class=\"rmMessages ClearBoth\" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px; clear: both; position: absolute; left: 0px; right: 0px; top: 0px; bottom: 0px; padding-right: 20px; overflow-y: scroll; outline: none; color: #444444; font-family: \'Microsoft JhengHei UI\', \'Microsoft JhengHei\', Pmingliu, \'Segoe UI\', \'Segoe UI Web Regular\', \'Segoe UI Symbol\', \'Helvetica Neue\', \'BBAlpha Sans\', \'S60 Sans\', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 14.0799999237061px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: 1; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; background-color: #ffffff;\" tabindex=\"-1\">\r\n<div class=\"rmTopSpacer rmTop\" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px; position: relative; padding: 5px 0px 0px; z-index: 0; margin-right: 0px; opacity: 0;\">\r\n<div class=\"rmButtons\" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px; float: right; white-space: nowrap; margin-top: 8px; margin-right: 0px;\"><span class=\"rmPrev\" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px; display: inline-block; vertical-align: middle; padding: 0px 3px;\"><img class=\"i_rm_p_d\" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px; width: 16px; height: 16px; overflow: hidden; background-image: url(\'https://a.gfx.ms/strip_metro7.png\'); background-attachment: scroll; background-color: transparent; background-position: -86px -74px; background-repeat: no-repeat;\" src=\"https://bay182.mail.live.com/ol/clear.gif\" alt=\"\" data-link=\"class{prevImgClass:~tag.HasPrevious}\" /></span><span class=\"rmNext\" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px; display: inline-block; vertical-align: middle; padding: 0px 3px;\"><img class=\"i_rm_n\" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px; width: 16px; height: 16px; overflow: hidden; background-image: url(\'https://a.gfx.ms/strip_metro7.png\'); background-attachment: scroll; background-color: transparent; background-position: -79px -160px; background-repeat: no-repeat;\" src=\"https://bay182.mail.live.com/ol/clear.gif\" alt=\"\" data-link=\"class{nextImgClass:~tag.HasNext}\" /></span><span class=\"rmFull \" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px; display: inline-block; vertical-align: middle; padding: 0px 0px 0px 6px;\"><img class=\"i_r_fv\" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px; width: 16px; height: 16px; overflow: hidden; background-image: url(\'https://a.gfx.ms/strip_metro7.png\'); background-attachment: scroll; background-color: transparent; background-position: -86px -57px; background-repeat: no-repeat;\" src=\"https://bay182.mail.live.com/ol/clear.gif\" alt=\"\" /></span><span class=\"rmClose \" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px; display: inline-block; vertical-align: middle; padding: 0px 0px 0px 6px;\" data-link=\"class{closeBtnClass:~tag.layout.IsFullView}\"><img class=\"g_close\" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px; width: 11px; height: 11px; overflow: hidden; background-image: url(\'https://a.gfx.ms/strip_metro7.png\'); background-attachment: scroll; background-color: transparent; background-position: -86px -1px; background-repeat: no-repeat;\" src=\"https://bay182.mail.live.com/ol/clear.gif\" alt=\"\" /></span></div>\r\n<h2 class=\"rmSubject\" style=\"line-height: 29.9904003143311px; font-size: 21.1200008392334px; font-family: \'Microsoft JhengHei UI Light\', \'Microsoft JhengHei\', Pmingliu, \'Segoe UI Light\', \'Segoe UI Web Light\', \'Segoe UI Web Regular\', \'Segoe UI\', \'Segoe UI Symbol\', HelveticaNeue-Light, \'Helvetica Neue\', Arial, sans-serif; font-weight: normal; margin: 0px -20px 13px 0px; padding-top: 2px;\">(URGENT)Please walk me through how to \"Begin the Project\"</h2>\r\n</div>\r\n<div id=\"readMessagePartControl2103f\" class=\"c-ReadMessagePart ReadMsgContainer HasLayout ClearBoth HideShadows FullPart NoHistory Read RmIc\" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px; clear: both; border-top-width: 1px; border-top-style: solid; border-top-color: #cccccc; margin-bottom: 20px; position: relative;\" data-link=\"class{:~tag.getHeaderCssClass(IsConversationPart, IsRead, IsDraft, IsTrustedSender, Items.length)}\">\r\n<div class=\"paddingtop paddingbottom\" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px;\">\r\n<div class=\"c-ReadMessagePartHeader\" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px;\">\r\n<div class=\"t_hov MsgHover MsgPartGradient ia_hc Expanded\" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px; overflow: hidden; background-color: transparent;\" data-link=\"class{fromContainerClass:IsBodyExpanded Collapsible}\">\r\n<div class=\"ReadMsgFrom FloatLeft\" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px; float: left; display: inline-block; width: 1658px; height: 64px;\">\r\n<div class=\"MsgPropertiesWrapper\" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px;\">\r\n<div class=\"MsgProperties\" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px; margin-left: 75px; overflow: hidden;\">\r\n<div class=\"SenderLine FloatLeft\" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px; float: left; display: inline-block; white-space: nowrap; overflow: visible; width: 1583px; margin-top: 5px;\">\r\n<div class=\"SenderLineLeft\" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px; overflow: hidden;\">\r\n<div class=\"MessageHeaderItem\" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px; display: inline-block; vertical-align: top;\"><a class=\"t_atc ICName\" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px; font-weight: inherit; text-decoration: none; color: #000000; cursor: pointer; padding-right: 2px;\">LI Angela</a></div>\r\n<span class=\"Apple-converted-space\">&nbsp;</span><span class=\"Apple-converted-space\">&nbsp;</span>\r\n<div class=\"MessageHeaderItem\" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px; display: inline-block; vertical-align: top;\"><span class=\"Date TextSizeSmall\" style=\"line-height: 17.1944961547852px; font-size: 12.1087999343872px; color: #666666; margin-right: 4px; display: inline-block;\">?? 02:46</span></div>\r\n<span class=\"Apple-converted-space\">&nbsp;</span></div>\r\n</div>\r\n<div class=\"ReadMsgTo TextSizeSmall ClearLeft\" style=\"line-height: 17.1944961547852px; font-size: 12.1087999343872px; clear: left; color: #666666; overflow: hidden; white-space: nowrap; text-overflow: ellipsis;\">\r\n<div class=\"recip_c\" style=\"line-height: 17.1944961547852px;\">\r\n<div class=\"recip_to FloatLeft\" style=\"line-height: 17.1944961547852px; float: left; margin-top: 4px; max-width: 90%; white-space: nowrap; overflow: hidden; text-overflow: ellipsis;\"><span style=\"line-height: 17.1944961547852px;\">????<span class=\"Apple-converted-space\">&nbsp;</span>info@editorworld.com</span></div>\r\n</div>\r\n</div>\r\n</div>\r\n</div>\r\n<div id=\"icTmReadMessageContact0\" class=\"c_ic c_ic_h_mxl icpwc\" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px; position: absolute; width: 60px; height: 60px; margin: 0px; float: left; top: 0px; z-index: 0;\">\r\n<div class=\"c_ic_img_h c_ic_img_mxl\" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px; float: left; zoom: 1; width: 60px; height: 60px; margin: 0px;\">\r\n<div id=\"icTmReadMessageContact0_usertilecontainer\" class=\"c_ic_img_sub c_ic_img_mxl\" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px; position: absolute; top: 0px; left: 0px; width: 60px; height: 60px; margin: 0px; z-index: 0;\">\r\n<div class=\"c_ic_tile_clip\" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px; overflow: hidden; position: absolute; z-index: -1; width: 60px; height: 60px; left: 0px; top: 0px; cursor: pointer;\"><img id=\"icTmReadMessageContact0_usertile\" class=\"c_ic_tile\" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px; border: 0px none; position: absolute; top: 0px; left: 0px; max-width: 100%; max-height: 100%; z-index: 25; width: 60px; height: 60px;\" src=\"https://cid-21a9adfa9ea1e41e.users.storage.live.com/users/0x21A9ADFA9EA1E41E/myprofile/expressionprofile/profilephoto:UserTileStatic,UserTileMedium/2573022367937681311?ck=1&amp;ex=1\" alt=\"\" /></div>\r\n</div>\r\n</div>\r\n</div>\r\n</div>\r\n</div>\r\n</div>\r\n</div>\r\n<div class=\"c-ReadMessagePartBody\" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px;\" data-link=\"class{getClass:IsBodyExpanded}\">\r\n<div class=\"readMsgBody\" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px; overflow-y: hidden; overflow-x: auto; padding: 16px 0px 0px;\">\r\n<div id=\"bodyreadMessagePartBodyControl2105f\" class=\"ExternalClass MsgBodyContainer\" style=\"line-height: 21.2999992370605px; font-size: 15px; font-family: ????, sans-serif;\" data-link=\"class{:~tag.cssClasses(PlainText, IsContentFiltered)}\">\r\n<div dir=\"ltr\" style=\"line-height: 21.2999992370605px;\">Dear Sir,\r\n<div style=\"line-height: 21.2999992370605px;\">&nbsp;</div>\r\n<div style=\"line-height: 21.2999992370605px;\">I found a tutor.</div>\r\n<div style=\"line-height: 21.2999992370605px;\">He told me to &nbsp;press \"Begin the Project\"</div>\r\n<div style=\"line-height: 21.2999992370605px;\">Where is it?</div>\r\n<div style=\"line-height: 21.2999992370605px;\">How do I start!!</div>\r\n<div style=\"line-height: 21.2999992370605px;\">&nbsp;</div>\r\n<div style=\"line-height: 21.2999992370605px;\">&nbsp;</div>\r\n<div style=\"line-height: 21.2999992370605px;\">Angela.</div>\r\n</div>\r\n</div>\r\n</div>\r\n</div>\r\n</div>\r\n</div>','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-04 18:51:50','2015-09-04 18:56:31',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15490,484,3265,'<div class=\"rmTop t_mbgc\" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px; position: relative; padding: 5px 0px 0px; z-index: 35; margin-right: 17px; color: #444444; font-family: \'Microsoft JhengHei UI\', \'Microsoft JhengHei\', Pmingliu, \'Segoe UI\', \'Segoe UI Web Regular\', \'Segoe UI Symbol\', \'Helvetica Neue\', \'BBAlpha Sans\', \'S60 Sans\', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 14.0799999237061px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: 1; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; background-color: #ffffff;\">\r\n<h2 class=\"rmSubject\" style=\"line-height: 29.9904003143311px; font-size: 21.1200008392334px; font-family: \'Microsoft JhengHei UI Light\', \'Microsoft JhengHei\', Pmingliu, \'Segoe UI Light\', \'Segoe UI Web Light\', \'Segoe UI Web Regular\', \'Segoe UI\', \'Segoe UI Symbol\', HelveticaNeue-Light, \'Helvetica Neue\', Arial, sans-serif; font-weight: normal; margin: 0px 0px 13px; padding-top: 2px;\">&nbsp;</h2>\r\n</div>\r\n<div id=\"ReadMessageScrollableSection\" class=\"rmMessages ClearBoth\" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px; clear: both; position: absolute; left: 0px; right: 0px; top: 0px; bottom: 0px; padding-right: 20px; overflow-y: scroll; outline: none; color: #444444; font-family: \'Microsoft JhengHei UI\', \'Microsoft JhengHei\', Pmingliu, \'Segoe UI\', \'Segoe UI Web Regular\', \'Segoe UI Symbol\', \'Helvetica Neue\', \'BBAlpha Sans\', \'S60 Sans\', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 14.0799999237061px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: 1; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; background-color: #ffffff;\" tabindex=\"-1\">\r\n<div class=\"rmTopSpacer rmTop\" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px; position: relative; padding: 5px 0px 0px; z-index: 0; margin-right: 0px; opacity: 0;\">\r\n<div class=\"rmButtons\" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px; float: right; white-space: nowrap; margin-top: 8px; margin-right: 0px;\"><span class=\"rmPrev\" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px; display: inline-block; vertical-align: middle; padding: 0px 3px;\"><img class=\"i_rm_p_d\" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px; width: 16px; height: 16px; overflow: hidden; background-image: url(\'https://a.gfx.ms/strip_metro7.png\'); background-attachment: scroll; background-color: transparent; background-position: -86px -74px; background-repeat: no-repeat;\" src=\"https://bay182.mail.live.com/ol/clear.gif\" alt=\"\" data-link=\"class{prevImgClass:~tag.HasPrevious}\" /></span><span class=\"rmNext\" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px; display: inline-block; vertical-align: middle; padding: 0px 3px;\"><img class=\"i_rm_n\" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px; width: 16px; height: 16px; overflow: hidden; background-image: url(\'https://a.gfx.ms/strip_metro7.png\'); background-attachment: scroll; background-color: transparent; background-position: -79px -160px; background-repeat: no-repeat;\" src=\"https://bay182.mail.live.com/ol/clear.gif\" alt=\"\" data-link=\"class{nextImgClass:~tag.HasNext}\" /></span><span class=\"rmFull \" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px; display: inline-block; vertical-align: middle; padding: 0px 0px 0px 6px;\"><img class=\"i_r_fv\" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px; width: 16px; height: 16px; overflow: hidden; background-image: url(\'https://a.gfx.ms/strip_metro7.png\'); background-attachment: scroll; background-color: transparent; background-position: -86px -57px; background-repeat: no-repeat;\" src=\"https://bay182.mail.live.com/ol/clear.gif\" alt=\"\" /></span><span class=\"rmClose \" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px; display: inline-block; vertical-align: middle; padding: 0px 0px 0px 6px;\" data-link=\"class{closeBtnClass:~tag.layout.IsFullView}\"><img class=\"g_close\" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px; width: 11px; height: 11px; overflow: hidden; background-image: url(\'https://a.gfx.ms/strip_metro7.png\'); background-attachment: scroll; background-color: transparent; background-position: -86px -1px; background-repeat: no-repeat;\" src=\"https://bay182.mail.live.com/ol/clear.gif\" alt=\"\" /></span></div>\r\n<h2 class=\"rmSubject\" style=\"line-height: 29.9904003143311px; font-size: 21.1200008392334px; font-family: \'Microsoft JhengHei UI Light\', \'Microsoft JhengHei\', Pmingliu, \'Segoe UI Light\', \'Segoe UI Web Light\', \'Segoe UI Web Regular\', \'Segoe UI\', \'Segoe UI Symbol\', HelveticaNeue-Light, \'Helvetica Neue\', Arial, sans-serif; font-weight: normal; margin: 0px -20px 13px 0px; padding-top: 2px;\">(URGENT)Please walk me through how to \"Begin the Project\"</h2>\r\n</div>\r\n<div id=\"readMessagePartControl2103f\" class=\"c-ReadMessagePart ReadMsgContainer HasLayout ClearBoth HideShadows FullPart NoHistory Read RmIc\" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px; clear: both; border-top-width: 1px; border-top-style: solid; border-top-color: #cccccc; margin-bottom: 20px; position: relative;\" data-link=\"class{:~tag.getHeaderCssClass(IsConversationPart, IsRead, IsDraft, IsTrustedSender, Items.length)}\">\r\n<div class=\"paddingtop paddingbottom\" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px;\">\r\n<div class=\"c-ReadMessagePartHeader\" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px;\">\r\n<div class=\"t_hov MsgHover MsgPartGradient ia_hc Expanded\" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px; overflow: hidden; background-color: transparent;\" data-link=\"class{fromContainerClass:IsBodyExpanded Collapsible}\">\r\n<div class=\"ReadMsgFrom FloatLeft\" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px; float: left; display: inline-block; width: 1658px; height: 64px;\">\r\n<div class=\"MsgPropertiesWrapper\" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px;\">\r\n<div class=\"MsgProperties\" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px; margin-left: 75px; overflow: hidden;\">\r\n<div class=\"SenderLine FloatLeft\" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px; float: left; display: inline-block; white-space: nowrap; overflow: visible; width: 1583px; margin-top: 5px;\">\r\n<div class=\"SenderLineLeft\" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px; overflow: hidden;\">\r\n<div class=\"MessageHeaderItem\" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px; display: inline-block; vertical-align: top;\"><a class=\"t_atc ICName\" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px; font-weight: inherit; text-decoration: none; color: #000000; cursor: pointer; padding-right: 2px;\">LI Angela</a></div>\r\n<span class=\"Apple-converted-space\">&nbsp;</span><span class=\"Apple-converted-space\">&nbsp;</span>\r\n<div class=\"MessageHeaderItem\" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px; display: inline-block; vertical-align: top;\"><span class=\"Date TextSizeSmall\" style=\"line-height: 17.1944961547852px; font-size: 12.1087999343872px; color: #666666; margin-right: 4px; display: inline-block;\">?? 02:46</span></div>\r\n<span class=\"Apple-converted-space\">&nbsp;</span></div>\r\n</div>\r\n<div class=\"ReadMsgTo TextSizeSmall ClearLeft\" style=\"line-height: 17.1944961547852px; font-size: 12.1087999343872px; clear: left; color: #666666; overflow: hidden; white-space: nowrap; text-overflow: ellipsis;\">\r\n<div class=\"recip_c\" style=\"line-height: 17.1944961547852px;\">\r\n<div class=\"recip_to FloatLeft\" style=\"line-height: 17.1944961547852px; float: left; margin-top: 4px; max-width: 90%; white-space: nowrap; overflow: hidden; text-overflow: ellipsis;\"><span style=\"line-height: 17.1944961547852px;\">????<span class=\"Apple-converted-space\">&nbsp;</span>info@editorworld.com</span></div>\r\n</div>\r\n</div>\r\n</div>\r\n</div>\r\n<div id=\"icTmReadMessageContact0\" class=\"c_ic c_ic_h_mxl icpwc\" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px; position: absolute; width: 60px; height: 60px; margin: 0px; float: left; top: 0px; z-index: 0;\">\r\n<div class=\"c_ic_img_h c_ic_img_mxl\" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px; float: left; zoom: 1; width: 60px; height: 60px; margin: 0px;\">\r\n<div id=\"icTmReadMessageContact0_usertilecontainer\" class=\"c_ic_img_sub c_ic_img_mxl\" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px; position: absolute; top: 0px; left: 0px; width: 60px; height: 60px; margin: 0px; z-index: 0;\">\r\n<div class=\"c_ic_tile_clip\" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px; overflow: hidden; position: absolute; z-index: -1; width: 60px; height: 60px; left: 0px; top: 0px; cursor: pointer;\"><img id=\"icTmReadMessageContact0_usertile\" class=\"c_ic_tile\" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px; border: 0px none; position: absolute; top: 0px; left: 0px; max-width: 100%; max-height: 100%; z-index: 25; width: 60px; height: 60px;\" src=\"https://cid-21a9adfa9ea1e41e.users.storage.live.com/users/0x21A9ADFA9EA1E41E/myprofile/expressionprofile/profilephoto:UserTileStatic,UserTileMedium/2573022367937681311?ck=1&amp;ex=1\" alt=\"\" /></div>\r\n</div>\r\n</div>\r\n</div>\r\n</div>\r\n</div>\r\n</div>\r\n</div>\r\n<div class=\"c-ReadMessagePartBody\" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px;\" data-link=\"class{getClass:IsBodyExpanded}\">\r\n<div class=\"readMsgBody\" style=\"line-height: 19.9935989379883px; overflow-y: hidden; overflow-x: auto; padding: 16px 0px 0px;\">\r\n<div id=\"bodyreadMessagePartBodyControl2105f\" class=\"ExternalClass MsgBodyContainer\" style=\"line-height: 21.2999992370605px; font-size: 15px; font-family: ????, sans-serif;\" data-link=\"class{:~tag.cssClasses(PlainText, IsContentFiltered)}\">\r\n<div dir=\"ltr\" style=\"line-height: 21.2999992370605px;\">Dear Sir,\r\n<div style=\"line-height: 21.2999992370605px;\">&nbsp;</div>\r\n<div style=\"line-height: 21.2999992370605px;\">I found a tutor.</div>\r\n<div style=\"line-height: 21.2999992370605px;\">He told me to &nbsp;press \"Begin the Project\"</div>\r\n<div style=\"line-height: 21.2999992370605px;\">Where is it?</div>\r\n<div style=\"line-height: 21.2999992370605px;\">How do I start!!</div>\r\n<div style=\"line-height: 21.2999992370605px;\">&nbsp;</div>\r\n<div style=\"line-height: 21.2999992370605px;\">&nbsp;</div>\r\n<div style=\"line-height: 21.2999992370605px;\">Angela.</div>\r\n</div>\r\n</div>\r\n</div>\r\n</div>\r\n</div>\r\n</div>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-04 18:52:46','2015-09-04 18:52:46',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15491,3265,484,'Okay. I have never submitted a project before, since I am an editor here. So I would not really be able to help you with that part. Someone will get back to you shortly, I am sure.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-04 18:57:17','2015-09-04 19:01:43',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15492,484,3265,'Do you know? <br />Tech support did not answer me.<br />Can you walk me through the HOME page and Begin the Project....<br />I don\'t see the button...','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-04 18:57:51','2015-09-04 19:51:34',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15493,484,3265,'It\'a been an hour...<br />the clock is ticking...<br /><br />I did not sleep last night...<br />Because I am so worry...','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-04 19:02:50','2015-09-04 19:02:50',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15494,3260,1173,'Here is your free sample edit. I did the first two paragraphs. Thank you!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-04 19:06:39','2015-09-04 19:06:39',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15495,2348,904,'Fine, but instead of \"and then the stuck-out tips of the blades may ...\", how about \"the tips of which may ...\" and change \"due to\" to \"because of,\" which is gramatically correct.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-04 19:14:37','2015-09-07 06:23:45',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15496,65,3265,'Dear Editor,<br /><br />My professor said that we should not use \"that.\"<br />It\'s really hard to aviod them.<br />I found 17 thats in my paper.<br /><br />Thank you,<br />Angela.<br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-04 19:23:18','2015-09-04 19:48:44',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15497,2706,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your piece.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-04 19:30:20','2015-09-04 19:30:20',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15498,484,3265,'Thanks for answering my message.<br />I\'ve looked under \"document\" and it showed that someone else had \"downloaded.\"<br />Thanks for your patience.<br />I really appreciate it!!<br /><br />Have a wonderful weekend :)<br />Thanks again.<br /><br /><br /><br />Angela.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-04 19:47:33','2015-09-04 19:47:33',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15499,3265,484,'Hi - like I said I never did this before, either. But if you go to the home page and look to the bottom right, you can see a the PRICE CALCULATOR. I am pretty sure this is where you want to begin.&nbsp;<br /><br />I have attached a file, so you can see what it looks like','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-04 19:54:29','2015-09-04 21:12:31',NULL,'upload_55e9beb5cbc439.82294945_Screen Shot 2015-09-04 at 8.52.05 AM.png','Screen Shot 2015-09-04 at 8.52.05 AM.png'),
	(15500,3265,65,'<p>Would like to know why your professor said this.</p>\r\n<p>Might be related to the which/that restrictive/non-restrictive uses in independent/dependent clauses (let me worry about the grammar).</p>\r\n<p>I&rsquo;ll look for all 17 and suggest rewordings. Not a problem.</p>','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-04 19:55:50','2015-09-04 21:19:23',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15501,3198,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your personal statement.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-04 20:00:26','2015-09-04 20:00:26',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15502,3047,3260,'<br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-04 20:15:26','2015-09-06 01:01:17',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15503,856,1493,'Hi Rebecca, <br />One more help for the last manuscript. <br />I am trying to rewrite the words with italic as the ones, boldic lined. <br />Anything bothering you? Thank you and have a nice weekend.<br /><br />Jaehoon, <br /><br /><br />Title<em>: Korean Neolithic Pottery Cultures and Their Implications for the</em><br /><em>Origin of Korean Ethnic Identity</em><br /> <br /><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><strong>The Role of Neolithic and Bronze Pottery Cultures in the </strong></span><br /><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><strong>Formation Process of Korean Identity</strong></span><br /><br /><br />Abstract<br /> At present, <em>while more Korean archaeologists propose the possibility of an indigenous Korean pottery culture</em> (<strong><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">while more Korean archaeologists focus on the development process of an indigenous Korean pottery culture</span></strong>), fewer scholars are directly concerned in the discussion on the origin and formation of Korean peoples among Neolithic specialists. Instead, scholars place more emphasis on the great distance from northern cultures, especially in Siberia, and try to build up a more detailed understanding of regional Korean Neolithic cultures. While this paper mostly introduces some major theoretical issues underlying traditional arguments about Neolithic and Bronze pottery cultures in Korea, those issues are articulated with topics pertinent to the origin of Korean ethnic identity.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-04 21:13:31','2015-09-04 23:54:13',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15504,144,3267,'Dear NYANIDOC:<br /><br />This document is to adere to strict APA publiction manual requirements.<br /><br />2-day tirn around appreciated on 9/6/15.<br /><br /><br />Thank you kindly,<br />Patricia','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-04 21:21:07','2015-09-04 21:21:07',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15505,65,3265,'Thanks, professor.<br />I really appreciate it :)','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-04 21:21:32','2015-09-04 21:33:35',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15506,65,3265,'<br />Thanks for working on my Curriculum Improvement Project (CIP). The final draft has to be viewed by my professor and upload to Blackboard in by 9/6. It has to be in APA formatting. The following is the guideline and the rubic. Please contact me at <a href=\"mailto:apli@hotmail.com\">apli@hotmail.com</a> or 925-323-1486 for if I need to clarify meanings. Thanks :)<br /><br />.<br />? Component 1: The Problem <br />Identify an educational problem related to curriculum. <br /> Analyze the problem- explain why it is important. <br />Criteria for grading include:<br /> -Analysis of Problem<br /> -Explanation as to its importance <br /><br />? Component 2: Literature Review <br />What do experts say about the curricular problem you have identified? Review the literature and find out! Review at least five high quality research articles published in peer-reviewed journals that relate to your CIP. Identify key topics in the articles and synthesize the information. <br />Provide a conclusion to your Lit Review explaining what you have learned from your inquiry. Include a reference list at the end of your paper. Bring a copy of your literature review to class on the designated date for peer editing.<br />Criteria for grading include:<br /> -Relevance and quality of research articles<br /> -Organization and clarity of research synthesis<br /> -Conclusion and insights<br /><br />? Component 3A: Addressing the Problem <br /> -Explain your approach to solving the problem<br /> -Describe the theoretical underpinnings of your CIP<br /> -Discuss how research supports your approach to the problem<br /><br />? Component 3B: Implementation Plan <br />How is this going to work? Develop a plan for implementing your project. Include a timeline and suggestions for working with teachers and key stakeholders (principals. directors, school boards). Describe the resources that would be needed in order for your CIP to be successfully implemented.<br />Criteria for grading include:<br /> -Timeline<br />-Suggestions for working with stakeholders<br />-Resources needed for CIP<br /><br />? Component 3C: Conclusion <br /> -Return to the problem identified in Component One. Explain how your CIP will address the problem<br /> -Explain how your CIP contributes to the knowledge base in your field <br /> -Summarize what you have learned<br /><br />CURRICULUM IMPROVEMENT PROJECT GRADING RUBRIC\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<table width=\"743\">\r\n<tbody>\r\n<tr>\r\n<td width=\"150\">\r\n<p>COMPONENT SCORES</p>\r\n</td>\r\n<td width=\"142\">\r\n<p>UNNACEPTABLE</p>\r\n<p>1</p>\r\n</td>\r\n<td width=\"142\">\r\n<p>PARTIAL</p>\r\n<p>2</p>\r\n</td>\r\n<td width=\"152\">\r\n<p>ACCEPTABLE</p>\r\n<p>3</p>\r\n</td>\r\n<td width=\"156\">\r\n<p>PROFICIENT</p>\r\n<p>4</p>\r\n</td>\r\n</tr>\r\n<tr>\r\n<td width=\"150\">\r\n<p><strong>COMPONENT 1: Problem (5 points)</strong> <br /> -Analysis of Problem</p>\r\n<p>-Explanation as to its importance</p>\r\n<p><strong>&nbsp;</strong></p>\r\n<p><strong>COMPONENT 2: Lit Review (15 points)</strong></p>\r\n<p>- Relevance and quality of research articles</p>\r\n<p>-Organization and clarity of research synthesis</p>\r\n<p>-Conclusion and insights</p>\r\n<p><strong>&nbsp;</strong></p>\r\n<p><strong>&nbsp;</strong></p>\r\n<p><strong>&nbsp;</strong></p>\r\n<p><strong>Component 3A: Addressing the Problem </strong></p>\r\n<p><strong>(10 Points)</strong></p>\r\n<p>-Approach to solving the problem</p>\r\n<p>-Description of theoretical underpinnings of CIP</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p><strong>COMPONENT 3B: Implementation Plan (10 points)</strong></p>\r\n<p>-Timeline</p>\r\n<p>-Suggestions for working with stakeholders</p>\r\n<p>-Resources needed for CIP</p>\r\n<p><strong>&nbsp;</strong></p>\r\n<p><strong>COMPONENT 3C: Conclusion (10 points)</strong></p>\r\n<p>- Explanation of how CIP will address the problem</p>\r\n<p>-Contribution to the knowledge</p>\r\n<p>-Summary of what has been learned</p>\r\n</td>\r\n<td width=\"142\">\r\n<p>Curriculum issue is not important; little or no &nbsp; analysis or explanation of the problem&rsquo;s importance is provided</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>Fewer than five appropriate research articles are reviewed;</p>\r\n<p>Synthesis is missing or inadequate;</p>\r\n<p>conclusion and insights are missing or inadequate</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>Approach to solving the problem is missing or inappropriate; theoretical underpinnings are not described or do not match the problem</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>Timeline is missing or incomplete;</p>\r\n<p>suggestions for stakeholders and/or resources needed for CIP missing or inadequate</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>Little or no explanation of how CIP addresses the problem; missing or inadequate explanation of CIP&rsquo;s contribution to the knowledgebase; summary of what has been learned missing or inadequate</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n</td>\r\n<td width=\"142\">\r\n<p>Curriculum issue is somewhat important; a partial attempt is made to analyze the problem and explain its importance</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>Five partially appropriate research articles are reviewed;</p>\r\n<p>Synthesis is superficial or does not discuss key points; conclusion and insights are superficial or unclear</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>Approach to solving the problem is marginally appropriate; theoretical underpinnings are inadequately described or do not fully match the problem</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>Timeline is included but lacks detail;</p>\r\n<p>suggestions for stakeholders and/or resources needed for CIP are marginally adequate</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>Minimal explanation of how CIP addresses the problem; marginally adequate explanation of CIP&rsquo; contribution to the knowledge base; superficial summary of what has been learned</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n</td>\r\n<td width=\"152\">\r\n<p>Curriculum issue is important; an adequate analysis and description of the problem&rsquo;s importance is provided</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>Five appropriate research articles are reviewed; synthesis is adequate and discusses key points;</p>\r\n<p>conclusion and insights are clear</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>Approach to solving the problem is appropriate; theoretical underpinnings are adequately described and match the problem</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>Adequate timeline is included;</p>\r\n<p>suggestions for stakeholders and resources needed for CIP are provided</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>Adequate explanation of how CIP addresses the problem; acceptable explanation of CIP&rsquo;s contribution to the knowledge base; adequate summary of what has been learned</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n</td>\r\n<td width=\"156\">\r\n<p>Curriculum issue clearly important;</p>\r\n<p>A detailed and scholarly analysis and explanation of the problem&rsquo;s importance is provided</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>Five appropriate research articles are reviewed; synthesis is detailed and discusses key points;</p>\r\n<p>conclusion and insights demonstrate a high level of clarity and depth</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>Approach to solving the problem is clearly appropriate; theoretical underpinnings are described in detail and fully match the problem</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>A detailed timeline is included;</p>\r\n<p>suggestions for stakeholders and resources needed for CIP are described clearly and in detail</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>Clear and detailed explanation of how CIP addresses the problem; Thorough explanation of CIP&rsquo;s contribution to the knowledge base; Detailed and scholarly summary of what has been learned</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n</td>\r\n</tr>\r\n</tbody>\r\n</table>','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-04 21:30:55','2015-09-04 21:34:00',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15507,3265,65,'This is great information and I think you have structured your paper accordingly.<br /><br />As for the \"that\" issue, I\'ve worked around most of them, but as I noted in a comment, I cannot change text in a direct quote.<br /><br />Should have the edited draft to you this afternoon.<br /><br />Thank you.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-04 21:37:46','2015-09-04 21:38:50',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15508,65,3265,'Wow, that\'s excellent!<br />Thank you :)','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-04 21:39:55','2015-09-05 02:13:15',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15509,904,3160,'These are the first couple of pages of a 50,000-word story. It is part of a series called <em>Stories of Narcotics</em>. These are stories that revolve around the illegal drug trade and money laundering. &nbsp;Even though they\'re fictional, they are inspired by actual events I\'ve seen on the news or that I\'ve witnessed firsthand. Over the last few months I have written several and now would like to make them e-books and self publish them. I\'d appreciate your editing and, if possible, a brief comment on the writing style and how the story and characters are introduced. I have several of these and I love to write. But I think I need the help of a good editor. Thank you.&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-04 23:03:16','2015-09-04 23:03:16',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15510,3259,904,'Here\'s a sample of my editing so you can how my skills can help. If you want the rest edited, just submit it through Editor World.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-04 23:09:25','2015-09-04 23:09:25',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15511,3260,904,'Here a sample to show how my editing skills can improve your paper(s). If you want more done, submit it through Editor World.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-04 23:15:11','2015-09-04 23:15:11',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15512,1493,856,'<p><span style=\"font-family: Open Sans Bold;\">Hi, Jaehoon - <span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><strong><br /><br /><br />The Role of Neolithic and Bronze Pottery Cultures in the </strong></span><br /><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><strong>Formation Process of Korean Identity</strong></span></span><br /><br />This is good, except I would take out \"Process\" - you don\'t need it.&nbsp; So:&nbsp; \"The Role of Neolithic and Bronze Pottery Cultures in the Formation of Korean Identity\"<br /><br /><br />&nbsp;(<strong><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><span style=\"font-family: Open Sans Bold;\">while more Korean archaeologists focus on the development process of an indigenous Korean pottery culture</span></span></strong>),<br /><br />Likewise here you should take out \"process\"&nbsp; - unnecessary.&nbsp; Otherwise this seems good.&nbsp;<br /><br /> \"Process\" is not exactly wrong, either here or in the previous example, but it sounds a bit clumsy.&nbsp; <br />RebeccaTDE</p>','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-05 00:04:06','2015-09-05 05:13:00',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15513,904,884,'Director of the state departments of education and higher education<br /><br />What are other names for director of the state departments of education and high education?<br /><br />higher<br /><br />What are other names for director of the state departments of education and higher education?','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-05 00:33:47','2015-09-05 00:45:48',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15514,884,904,'Yes','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-05 00:46:19','2015-09-05 00:46:19',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15515,3261,454,'<p>Hi!<br /><br />I\'m so glad the&nbsp;changes helped! I&nbsp;often offer novelists a second edit at no charge because I think there has to be an opportunity for a back-and-forth dialogue. I took a look at your additions and threw in my two cents.<br /><br />Thanks again!</p>\r\n<p>Laura</p>','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-05 01:19:35','2015-09-05 01:58:54',NULL,'upload_55ea0ae7e323c4.36752059_upload_55e940d72a76a4.73443929_Flies and Yellow eyes 2nd draft.docx','upload_55e940d72a76a4.73443929_Flies and Yellow eyes 2nd draft.docx'),
	(15516,3160,904,'As soon as I saw your paper, I knew it was the kind of manuscript I\'d like to edit. As my profile says, I believe that an editor\'s job is to hone a writer\'s words, not make them what the editor might have written. Your style is clear and I like it, and I\'d be pleased to work with you to make it as good as it can be. I\'m a nitpicker, so not many errors get past me. I can use a lot of punctuation or just a little, whatever you like. Incidentally, while editing this sample, I also made some formatting corrections, such as making the spacing after a period consistent at one space, which is what most style guides recommend.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-05 01:28:48','2015-09-05 01:28:48',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15517,3265,65,'Well, I was too optimistic. <br /><br />I\'m well into the text and got sidetracked. I\'ll send my edited version either later tonight or more likely tomorrow morning.<br /><br />I read all texts at least twice and that adds time.&nbsp;<br /><br />Just wanted to update you.<br /><br />I know you have a Reference list (as per APA). If you want to send that, I\'ll attach it to this&nbsp;draft.<br /><br /><br /><br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-05 02:17:02','2015-09-05 03:36:22',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15518,3260,484,'Nice job on this. Well written and interesting. Not too much to edit, but I went through the first few paragraphs and tweaked a few things. Let me know if I can help you further with this project. I am available.&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-05 02:48:27','2015-09-05 02:48:27',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15519,904,2588,'This is a newspaper article. Please edit using AP style. ','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-05 03:48:42','2015-09-05 03:48:42',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15520,65,3265,'Thank you. <br />Two of my friends fell asleep reading my paper.<br />And the other one had a headache after reading two paragraphs...<br /><br />You are so busy editing my paper.<br />I can attach my reference myself.<br />I still need to attach the method, the timeline, and a table into the paper...<br /><br />Tomorrow morning will be fine.<br />Thank you again for your patience :)','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-05 04:44:31','2015-09-05 04:44:31',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15521,856,1493,'Thank you so much, Rebecca. <br />I will talk to you soon. <br /><br />Jaehoon,','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-05 06:18:53','2015-09-05 07:55:17',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15522,65,3269,'Hi! Please revise the grammer erros and make it sound more logical and motivational. Thank you very much!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-05 06:51:21','2015-09-05 06:51:21',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15523,3260,3047,'Dear ddggn,<br /><br />For your free editing sample, I edited the first three paragraphs of your document. Please let me know what you think! I will gladly address any concerns you may have. I look forward to working with you again in the future.<br /><br />All the best,<br />TheWriteEditor','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-05 07:19:00','2015-09-05 11:14:48',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15524,904,3219,'Hi Arnie,<br />A few changes that you missed and a few small revisions for your consideration. Also, I thought starting a sentence with And was considered verbotten? Three friends and me sounds awkward, your thoughts? Otherwise, I have done my first edit return. Make any additional fixes you feel are needed and I will hand over to Phoebe for her edit input and then you can do final edit like before. This seems to work pretty well as long as you are happy too!<br />Thanks Arnie<br />Andrew<br />Your thoughts on content and readability, interest etc...any advice??','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-05 07:33:53','2015-09-05 17:19:08',NULL,'upload_55ea62a1665753.57742029_ HOMEWARD BOUND- AWO Edit.docx',' HOMEWARD BOUND- AWO Edit.docx'),
	(15525,904,3219,'Final note, when a setence is underlined in green...is that still okay???','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-05 07:34:50','2015-09-05 19:00:44',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15526,3047,3260,'Hi<br /><br />Many thanks for the edit. You have really done a great job in making the sentences crisper by changing the invisible errors.<br />I will contact you with future works. <br />Is there any option to opt for editing with longer time frames, at cheaper rate (i.e. if a 1000 word doc is needed in 7 days in stead of 24 hours?)<br /><br />regards<br />Debbasish','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-05 11:18:02','2015-09-05 19:05:47',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15527,144,3260,'Hi<br /><br />Thanks for the excellent edit. Is there a cheaper rate for slower jobs, i.e. 2000 word in 7 days, in stead of 1 day?<br /><br />kind regards<br />D Das','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-05 11:26:14','2015-09-05 18:28:09',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15528,904,3259,'Launching our new needed service geared to all types of businesses. Want to polish it so that editors will find this interesting for its readship. <br />Not sure of the headline. I am open for any alternative. <br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-05 16:46:47','2015-09-05 16:46:47',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15529,3260,144,'I have no idea, but I imagine that\'s the case. You\'ll have to ask Patti.<br /><br />Best,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-05 18:28:51','2015-09-05 19:20:40',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15530,3219,904,'Hi Andrew. I\'ll go back over it and send it back when I\'m done. I don\'t know about green underlining because there\'s none on my copy, so I wouldn\'t worry about it. As for \'and\", anything goes in writing these days and many, if not most, writers start sentences with \'and\'. Sort of like not ending a sentence with a preposition, about which Winston Churchill famously commented, \'ending a sentence with a preposition is something up with which I will not put.\' That ban, too, has gone by the wayside as has split infinitives, though I try to avoid them. I\'m also moving ahead well on Chapter 2.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-05 19:07:20','2015-09-05 22:40:38',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15531,3260,3047,'Dear Debbasish,<br /><br />Please refer to the following link for pricing: <a href=\"../../prices\">https://www.editorworld.com/prices</a>&nbsp;<br /><br />You can type in the number of words and choose one of the time frames that applies, and the price will be shown to you. For example, the longest time frame that applies to a 1,000-word document is 2 days, and this price is $20.00 (US dollars).<br /><br />I hope this helps!<br /><br />Sincerely,<br />TheWriteEditor','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-05 19:19:41','2015-09-05 19:22:46',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15532,3270,65,'Thank you.<br /><br />Most of the changes were word choices or connecting two sentences whenever&nbsp;possible.<br /><br />Did wonder about adding direct quotes from the interview....','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-05 19:35:05','2015-09-05 19:35:05',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15533,3265,65,'Tried to preserve as much text as I could while smoothing out the flow.<br /><br />Good paper. If you have questions about the edits or comments, please ask.<br /><br />Thank you.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-05 20:32:16','2015-09-06 02:24:41',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15534,2424,65,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-05 20:52:10','2015-09-05 20:52:10',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15535,2424,65,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-05 21:04:07','2015-09-05 21:04:07',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15536,3267,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your chapters. I found them very interesting, given that I suffer from a severe mental illness that is, mostly, controlled pharmacologically.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-05 22:34:05','2015-09-05 22:34:05',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15537,904,3219,'Thanks Arnie,<br />Hope you are getting some enjoyment out of it.Before you start the next chapter, let me resend because there are small changes that I am working ahead on.<br />Best,<br />Andrew','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-05 22:43:21','2015-09-06 00:27:11',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15538,2537,1772,'There are two parts that need your attention, and I highlighted both of them. One is a quotation that needs a page number (or, if you don\'t access to the source material, you need to rephrase the quotation). The other is towards the end of the article, when you have question marks for the number of articles included in the appendix. Let me know if you have any questions.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-05 23:47:34','2015-09-05 23:47:34',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15539,3260,1772,'The article jumps around a bit, and there is no year at the begining when describing the events to put it in perspective. I edited for grammar and concision, and made the sentences flow.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-06 00:19:30','2015-09-06 03:18:27',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15540,3219,904,'Yes, I\'m enjoying. You must\'ve been a good-looking boy, with all those guys wanting to put their hands on your body. Hmmm. Here\'s a clean copy of Chapter 2. I\'ll hold up on 3 until you send the new one.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-06 00:30:28','2015-09-06 00:32:04',NULL,'upload_55eb50e4f10515.37361941_2b HOMEWARD BOUND.docx','2b HOMEWARD BOUND.docx'),
	(15541,904,3219,'Indeed I was...luckily the girls were pretty forthcoming as well. Now that would be a book that would make Shades of Grey look pretty sad in comparison..lol..I keep this book fairly tame and in the theme of coming of age and the experiences of that era..mostly never shared, we were so naive in comparison to todays kids...This is the first chapter...yes?...I will forward to Phoebe who has deigned to only look at it after major edits are done...talk about task master!...<br />I am a little confused, are you working on the second chapter THE ONE THAT GOT AWAY ???...do you want me to forward latest greatest..or is it indeed the third chapter,ALL WORK NO PLAY you are waiting for me to forward..Please revert.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-06 00:48:04','2015-09-06 01:13:12',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15542,2424,65,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-06 01:13:59','2015-09-06 01:13:59',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15543,3219,904,'Yes, the first chapter -- misnumbered. I\'ll correct that.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-06 01:15:00','2015-09-06 01:19:15',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15544,904,3219,'Hi Arnie,<br />Here is the latest Second Chapter','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-06 01:25:19','2015-09-06 01:26:28',NULL,'upload_55eb5dbf185214.12630334_THE ONE THAT GOT AWAY 2.docx','THE ONE THAT GOT AWAY 2.docx'),
	(15545,3219,904,'Got it.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-06 01:26:57','2015-09-06 01:31:05',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15546,65,3039,'This writing for replying discussion on-line. <br />I don\'t need to be too polite but still should be academic. ','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-06 01:40:02','2015-09-06 01:40:02',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15547,3269,65,'Thank you. See page 3, which shows how the essay looks/reads with all the changes input.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-06 02:01:42','2015-09-06 02:01:42',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15548,65,3265,'Dear Professor,<br /><br />I forgot to attach this format yesterday for you too see, but I think that my paper is following the format. <br /><br />What I don\'t understand is on \"Component 2: Literature Review\"...\" Intro, Body, and Conclusion. In the Active Voice, you are writing in the past tense. This section is NEVER in the passive voice.\" Am I okay? Do I need to write a conclusion to this? It\'s kind of late, but should I add anything and send it to you to edit? <br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-06 02:33:59','2015-09-06 02:41:57',NULL,'upload_55eb6dd7c9e635.11982326_Format CIP paper.docx','Format CIP paper.docx'),
	(15549,3039,65,'Not sure about the main points of reference (clips and books), so I\'m at a disadvantage.<br /><br />Hope the edits help.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-06 02:41:12','2015-09-06 02:41:12',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15550,3265,65,'This is interesting. Of course, I would like to have seen these guidelines earlier, but I think you\'ve followed them.<br /><br />Your paper already has a conclusion, so I\'m not sure what else you could add.<br /><br />I suggest submitting the paper with a note expressing your&nbsp;concerns and then evaluating what your professor says.&nbsp;<br /><br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-06 02:57:56','2015-09-06 05:49:28',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15551,65,3265,'I\'ll fix up my paper first before due date tomorrow :)<br />I don\'t understand why we need the conclusion in the literature reviews where we already need a conclusion at the end...','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-06 03:05:58','2015-09-06 16:18:27',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15552,65,3265,'Thank you,<br />I love the work that you\'ve done my CIP!!!','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-06 03:06:57','2015-09-06 16:21:21',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15553,1772,3260,'Hi<br />Thanks for the excellent edit, and suggestions. I will contact you for future requirements<br /><br />regards<br />D Das','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-06 03:19:23','2015-09-06 03:28:38',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15554,2764,1541,'It was a pleasure to edit your well-written and most interesting document. I focused on correcting the grammar, elevating the language, and enhancing clarity, flow, and eloquence. Overall, however, very nicely done! I hope to have the opportunity to work with you again in the future. In the meantime, best of luck to you with all your current and future endeavors.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-06 11:48:45','2015-09-06 11:48:45',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15555,541,3272,'','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-06 13:08:18','2015-09-06 13:08:18',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15556,904,2536,'Dear EIC,  Good Morning.  Hope u r having a wonderful Labor Day weekend.  Her\'s another one for the Daily Caller. My deadline for this is Monday morning.  Hope this is ok with u.  Warmly from your new friend from Queens, :) John','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-06 16:01:45','2015-09-06 16:01:45',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15557,3265,65,'That\'s my question: Why have two conclusions? I suggest you ask the professor to clarify that on the instructions. Might be confusing to other students as well.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-06 16:21:02','2015-09-06 16:30:50',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15558,3265,65,'Glad to hellp. I know you put a lot of time and effort into the research, and I hope the papeer is well-received by everyone.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-06 16:22:24','2015-09-06 16:29:48',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15559,1090,65,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-06 16:58:50','2015-09-06 16:58:50',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15560,1021,1173,'Hello!<br />Here is your edited document. For some reason, I was unable to put a bullet on the paragraph that begins \"If you have any concerns ...\" Seems to be some kind of formatting issue.<br />Other than that, the rest of your document is clean and ready to go. Thank you!<br />Karen Z.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-06 19:49:03','2015-09-06 19:49:03',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15561,3260,3034,'Let me know if you have any questions.<br /><br />Oren','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-06 23:27:18','2015-09-06 23:27:18',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15562,904,3256,'Hi,<br /><br />Attached please find an un-edited Bio. The current goal is to; engage reader to read, proper flow, sentence structure and grammar.<br /><br />Please let me know if capable to render this article into a masterpiece.<br /><br />** Please provide complete revision price','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-07 00:04:39','2015-09-07 00:04:39',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15563,454,3256,'Hi,<br /><br />Attached please find an un-edited Bio. The current goal is to; engage reader to read, proper flow, sentence structure and grammar.<br /><br />Please let me know if capable to render this article into a masterpiece.<br /><br />** Please provide complete revision price','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-07 00:07:45','2015-09-07 00:07:45',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15564,541,3256,'Hi,<br /><br />Attached please find an un-edited Bio. The current goal is to; engage reader to read, proper flow, sentence structure and grammar.<br /><br />Please let me know if capable to render this article into a masterpiece.<br /><br />** Please provide complete price if additional editing will be needed revision','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-07 00:12:22','2015-09-07 00:12:22',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15565,474,3256,'Hi,<br /><br />Attached please find an un-edited Bio. The current goal is to; engage reader to read, proper flow, sentence structure and grammar.<br /><br />Please let me know if capable to render this article into a masterpiece.<br /><br /><br />','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-07 00:17:21','2015-09-07 00:17:21',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15566,1173,3256,'Hi,<br /><br />Attached please find an un-edited Bio. The current goal is to; engage reader to read, proper flow, sentence structure and grammar.<br /><br />Please let me know if capable to render this article into a masterpiece.<br /><br /><br />','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-07 00:21:25','2015-09-07 00:21:25',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15567,1772,3256,'Hi,<br /><br />Would you be able to render these two sentences into a masterpiece?&nbsp;<br /><br />Thanks','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-07 01:41:36','2015-09-07 01:41:36',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15568,1173,3256,'Hi,<br /><br />Could you render this into a masterpiece? Grammar, structure, readability and flow...','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-07 01:46:17','2015-09-07 01:46:17',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15569,904,3273,'Hello! This is my Common Application Essay. The prompt is as follows:<br /><strong>\"Some students have a background, identity, interest, or talent that is so meaningful they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, then please share your story</strong>.\"<br /><br />I am looking for this essay to be improved stylistically and to be proofread to have maximum appeal for prospective colleges. Thank you!<br /><br />','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-07 01:50:07','2015-09-07 01:50:07',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15570,2588,904,'Nicely done. Glad I could help.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-07 03:12:21','2015-09-07 03:12:21',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15571,3259,904,'This is fine. Glad I could help. Good luck.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-07 03:22:30','2015-09-07 03:22:30',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15572,2536,904,'What are you smoking, my friend? Hillary will eat \'em up, email server or not.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-07 03:36:17','2015-09-07 08:34:35',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15573,454,3276,'Hi, I am nearing the final stages of writing my personal statement for plastic surgery residency applications. This might be the most important document I have ever written. I am feeling comfortable with the majority of the statement -- I am a little unsure of the strength of the first paragraph. I would like help with making the statement as concise as possible and typo/grammatical error-free.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-07 04:05:30','2015-09-07 04:05:30',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15574,2424,65,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-07 04:23:40','2015-09-07 04:23:40',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15575,1792,454,'Love love love!!!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-07 05:01:51','2015-09-07 05:01:51',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15576,904,2348,'Dear EditorionChief,<br /><br />Thank you for your suggestions. But why do&nbsp;you think \"because of\" is better than \"due to?\" I\'ve seen \"due to\" is very widely used, and probably accepted.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-07 06:30:14','2015-09-07 06:36:02',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15577,3256,1772,'If you have something different in mind, let me know!','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-07 07:26:48','2015-09-07 07:49:49',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15578,1772,3256,'Hi,<br /><br />You did an awesome job! Do you also edit Bio\'s? It\'s 230 words, will post to my website<br /><br />With the recommended change, it appears as follow:<br /><br />\r\n<p>As a global medical equipment and clinical services provider, Family Health Medical Equipment, LLC strives to provide the highest-quality products and consulting services, ensuring that our clients&rsquo; satisfaction remains the foundation for our success.</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>The FHME leadership team maintains this focus and drives our commitment to delivering first-rate results to our clients. From innovative minds with an extensive and diverse array of industry experience and expertise, our leadership team fosters a common culture focused on excellent service and quality in order to assure the best possible outcome for each and every project.&nbsp;&nbsp;</p>','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-07 07:54:48','2015-09-07 07:58:37',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15579,3256,1772,'I think with the adjustment it works really well. Having the full company name in there can help with recognition.<br /><br />I do edit bios. If you would like to submit yours, I would love to work on it.&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-07 08:01:49','2015-09-07 08:04:43',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15580,65,3223,'<p>Review: <a href=\"http://www.veoh.com/watch/v19243569aQj7ZexY?h1=Sick+Around+the+World\">http://www.veoh.com/watch/v19243569aQj7ZexY?h1=Sick+Around+the+World</a></p><p>Choose a country (England, German, Switzerland, Taiwan, or Japan), view TR Reid’s report and compare their system to ours in United States.   Reflect on the similarities and differences.  Consider public health and the three levels of prevention in your response <b>“Health Care For All”<br />please check the citiation and the refreances<br /> <br /><br /></b></p>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-07 08:14:21','2015-09-07 08:14:21',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15581,1772,3256,'Hi,<br /><br />Attached please find document mentioned earlier. I will be posting to the website, and would like to captivate audience/clients with details, without providing excessive info.<br /><br />If additional info is needed (CV) please advise.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-07 08:14:40','2015-09-07 08:15:43',NULL,'upload_55ed0f303dfea6.22630486_FHME BIO.docx','FHME BIO.docx'),
	(15582,904,2536,'Just trying to be fair and balanced. : J','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-07 08:35:16','2015-09-08 01:15:46',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15583,1709,617,'Hi,<br /><br />Please make it more comprehensible and presentable, with special attention to sentence structure and transitions. If you can suggest a different opening to the first paragraph (more catchy) it would be great. Thanks a lot.<br /><br /><br />','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-07 08:45:16','2015-09-07 08:45:16',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15584,904,3262,'I was wondering if it would be possible to get help with putting in chapters.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-07 16:31:40','2015-09-08 01:16:19',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15585,3223,65,'I added a version with all changes input after the edited one.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-07 18:28:28','2015-09-07 18:28:28',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15586,1772,3256,'Hi,<br /><br />I wanted to add the following to the Bio, but not sure of where to fit it in<br /><br />\r\n<p>Managed and coordinated clinical trials for various pharmaceutical sponsored phase II-IV studies on indications including oncology, &nbsp;osteoarthritis, pain management, irritable bowel syndrome, bacterial conjunctivitis, migraine, shingles, community acquired pneumonia, ankle sprain in adolescents, and opioid&nbsp;studies,&nbsp;among others.</p>\r\nNot sure of the structure','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-07 19:50:34','2015-09-07 19:51:00',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15587,3256,1772,'All right. I will figure out how to work it in.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-07 19:51:33','2015-09-07 19:51:33',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15588,3256,1772,'All right. I will figure out how to work it in.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-07 19:51:38','2015-09-08 23:25:33',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15589,1772,3256,'Thanks. If you feel that adding this may take away from the overall message, please let me know. &nbsp;I want to show my clients that I am well versed, but don\'t want to over flood the reader','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-07 19:57:52','2015-09-07 20:14:32',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15590,1709,617,'Hi,<br /><br />Thanks for your editing.&nbsp;<br /><br />I have added the following sentence to close my thought. Could you please see if it needs some proofreading? Thanks a lot.&nbsp;<br /><br />\"The least interesting reading was the <em>Evolution of Cooperation </em>by Robert Axelrod, perhaps because I couldn&rsquo;t see why political behavior has to be conformed to a specific theory, usually drawn from other fields like economics, rather than interpreting such behaviors independently within their cultural and historical context variations.\"<br />\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-07 20:26:08','2015-09-07 20:51:37',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15591,2424,65,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-07 20:36:08','2015-09-07 20:36:08',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15592,617,1709,'my thought would be that the sentance is too long. break it into two thoughts.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-07 20:53:12','2015-09-07 20:54:23',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15593,1709,617,'How about this? Please edit:<br /><br />\r\n<p>The reading from the <em>Evolution of Cooperation </em>by Robert Axelrod, did not amuse me much. &nbsp;Perhaps I refuse to see why political behavior should conform to a specific theory, usually drawn from other fields like economics, rather than understanding such behaviors independently within their cultural and historical context variations.&nbsp;</p>','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-07 20:59:24','2015-09-07 23:51:59',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15594,3256,1772,'I would include the schools where you got your two degrees, and possibly the one where you are pursuing your MBA. In the comments, I made a suggestion about the list of clinical trials, and gave you the wording for how to include the schools in your introduction.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-07 21:24:44','2015-09-07 21:36:19',NULL,'upload_55edc85c15b916.65983039_FHME BIO.docx','FHME BIO.docx'),
	(15595,1772,3256,'With much respect, two thumbs up!! A stellar editors performance, five stars.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-07 22:18:58','2015-09-07 22:26:49',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15596,2699,144,'Thank you, Shannon, for the opportunity to read and edit your piece.<br /><br />As always, ratings are much appreciated.<br /><br />All the best,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-07 22:34:02','2015-09-07 22:34:02',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15597,3270,144,'Thank you, Samantha, for the opportunity to read and edit your paper.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-07 22:55:06','2015-09-07 22:55:06',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15598,2424,65,'A bit late here. Sorry.<br /><br />Always good to see the picture.<br /><br />Thank you.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-07 23:11:35','2015-09-08 00:15:08',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15599,1709,617,'Another question on my previosuly edited work:<br /><br />\"It shed light on how people\" Is \"shed\" here in the correct verb form without \"s\"?<br /><br /><br />\"Survey research reported in this book show how Americans\" Is it correct to say \"show\" or \"shows\"?<br /><br />Thanks','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-07 23:20:02','2015-09-07 23:53:36',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15600,144,3277,'This paper is the cumulative work of 3 graduate students under the advisement of 2 assistant professors.  We are all in Mechanical Engineering.  This paper\'s purpose was to provide a review of some important research accomplishment and challenges with regard to thermal management of ground vehicles.  The paper is not exhaustive, but meant to give a \"flavor\" of the issues (hence the \"Overview\" name).<br /><br />Although I edit many papers on a daily basis, I would like to have this paper reviewed by someone trained in English.  I feel this paper needs to be revised for flow, coherence and succinctness.  Further, since three students helped write it, the overall voice of the paper may not be consistent.  A thorough review for these style issues, in addition to grammar, spelling etc. - is being sought.  Note that the manuscript is going to be sumitted to a technical journal with an engineering audience.  However, we would like to keep the target audience broad - so that any technical person can understand.  A Word document is provided, and if the Editor can please track changes and include only mandatory comments - it is appreciated.<br /><br />If the Reviewer would like editting credit for the paper, he/she can provide their name to-be-included in the Acknowledgement section.<br /><br />Please do contact me for further instructions or clarifications as needed.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-07 23:32:24','2015-09-07 23:32:24',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15601,617,1709,'that makes sense and looks good.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-07 23:52:49','2015-09-07 23:52:49',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15602,617,1709,'it can be both.&nbsp;<br />&nbsp;it depends on if the research is singular or plural. in this case you\'d say shed and shows.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-07 23:55:43','2015-09-08 02:42:24',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15603,144,3276,'Hi, I am nearing the final stages of writing my personal statement for plastic surgery residency applications. This might be the most important document I have ever written. I am feeling comfortable with the majority of the statement -- I am a little unsure of the strength of the first paragraph. I would like help with making the statement as concise as possible and typo/grammatical error-free.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-08 00:00:28','2015-09-08 00:00:28',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15604,1772,2412,'*I really cannot understand about Chicago style paper. please work on the with the format and flowness, grammar, organization, structure. Please make it perfect well developed thingking essay. Professor really wants a depth concent essay. I think my sentence is too light to address this thesis. Please work on the phrase as high quality. Thank you so thank you so much and I really like and love your eiditing style!!~ If you have any question please message me!*<br />Paper Requirements In order to complete the assignment, you will need to: <br /><br />1. Choose 1 painting, print, sculpture or a piece of architecture created between 1848 and 1888. Although you don’t have to limit yourselves to the works of art found locally, it is highly recommended that you try to work with a ‘live’ object. <br /><br />2. Carefully study the chosen work in order to develop a question that will drive your analysis/research. <br /><br />3. Compile a bibliography of appropriate theoretical and factual sources. In the least, the bibliography should include works of scholars referenced in this course (Berger, Boime, Broude, Chu, Clark, Crow, Eisenman, Foucault, Fried, Garb, Greenberg, Herbert, Nochlin, Pollock, Rubin, Silverman, Thomson, to name a few). The following partial reading list should provide an initial direction. You don’t have to limit yourself to it. <br /><br />4. Conceptualize your paper and write an introduction. The intro should consist of 4 parts/paragraphs. The following examples are excerpted from Darcy Grimaldo Grigsby, “Nudity à la grecque in 1799,” The Art Bulletin, Vol. 80, No. 2, 1998 <br /><br />I. <strong>Captivating Description.</strong> Present the work of art and/or its detail that intrigued you. Wake up the women at the right of Jacques-Louis David\'s Oath of the Horatii of 1785 and place them between the male warriors. Now remove the men\'s clothes. This is the startling, even preposterous, double move of David\'s Intervention of the Sabines of 1799. … The [painting]\'s awkward character derives from the tensions not only between female dress and male nudity but also between the women\'s action and the men\'s frieze-like [stillness]... <br /><br />II. <strong>Research Question.</strong> Introduce the question/problem//issue that you would like to investigate. David\'s martyr portraits of isolated, unconscious, and eroticized male bodies, like his Death of Joseph Bara of 1793, astutely and economically offered an iconography for the radical fraternal Republic. [However], his transposition of the solitary male nude into a [composition] that prominently included dressed [and forceful] women proved problematic. Is there a way to elucidate this novel conjunction of naked male bodies and newly central female protagonists? <br /><br />III.<strong>Literature Review.</strong> Summarize how other scholars dealt with this specific issue or similar ones. Scholarship has for the most part treated these … as separate issues. While the nudes have been described in terms of …, the Sabine women\'s prominence has been interpreted as ... Historians have also typically emphasized the success rather than the tensions of David\'s theatrical painting. That success, we have been told, hinged on … This has been the emphasis of scholars like [A.A.], who has argued that …, and [B.B.], who has characterized the work as … By contrast, [C.C.] has emphasized women\'s feminist activism during the French Revolution and David\'s reliance on women as figurations of disorder. However, she, too, has argued that the Intervention of the Sabines ultimately contains … According to [C.C.], David\'s painting represents above all … These accounts take as their premise the success of David\'s painting in matching its audience\'s needs [and in bringing the audience together]. <br /><br />IV.<strong>Thesis Statement</strong>. Outline your argument as it builds upon the previous scholarship. … In fact, David\'s Intervention of the Sabines did not reconcile its fractured audience. … [T]he painting was certainly a box-office success ... But the votes made by admission fees are evidence less of consensus than of interest, and that interest, this paper will argue, derived from the work\'s controversy, its failure to deploy antiquity as a unifying metaphorical language. Ironically, David\'s very success in giving revolution antique form ultimately led to classicism\'s loss of authority. Nudity à la grecque in 1799 could not be disengaged from the dramatic return of women to center stage. <br /><br />5. Present your introduction and bibliography to the professor in a one-on-one meeting during the office hours. This meeting is required and will count toward your participation grade. <br /><br />6. Write the body of the paper substantiating your claims with significant research and detailed analysis. Conclude by summarizing all of your main points. <br /><br />7. Proof-read your text for grammatical errors and make sure that all of your arguments and their support flow well. If English is not your first language (and even if it is), take your draft to the writing center and ask them to edit/proof-read it. <br /><br />8. Footnote the paper in the Chicago Style with a bibliography attached at the end of the paper. (http://www.chicagomanualofstyle.org/tools_citationguide.html See point 1: notes and bibliography) <br /><br />9. Submit the paper on Thu Sept 9 @turnitin.com (by 11:00 pm).<br /><br />','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-08 00:06:48','2015-09-08 00:06:48',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15605,3262,904,'Thanks for sending me your paper. I\'ll take good care of it and will break it into chapters. Also, a quick look makes me think&nbsp;you want UK English (colour). Am I correct?','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-08 01:18:57','2015-09-08 08:53:37',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15606,454,3274,'','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-08 01:22:10','2015-09-08 01:22:10',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15607,2348,904,'Yes, due to is widely used but it is gramatically incorrect to language purists. And I\'m a purist. To me and many other purists, \'because of\' and \'due to\'&nbsp;are not interchangeable. Even though something is widely used doesn\'t make it correct. For example, I don\'t say that a food is health; rather, it is healthful.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-08 01:27:05','2015-09-08 04:19:35',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15608,1541,3274,'Please assist with suggestions for turning this pretty decent statement into a FABULOUS statement. The general recommended word limit is 650, though this is not a hard, fast rule. Thanks!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-08 01:29:57','2015-09-08 01:29:57',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15609,3273,904,'Very nicely done and I\'m glad I could help. I have too many friends in places like Dover, so I can relate.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-08 01:40:30','2015-09-08 01:40:30',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15610,1709,617,'Then the version you edited still needs revision. Unfortunately I submited it already with that mistake.&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-08 02:44:22','2015-09-08 02:59:29',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15611,2424,65,'Quite a story.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-08 02:54:15','2015-09-08 02:54:15',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15612,904,2348,'Thank you for your wonderful explanations!<br /><br />Yas','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-08 04:20:25','2015-09-08 05:43:55',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15613,1173,617,'<p>Hi,</p><p> </p><p>I am looking for more accurate editorial services, as I am trying various editors on this board, hopefully to find one I can work with in the long run. I have weekly papers to submit that I need to edit. This particular one, I am submitting it shortly. Because of this, I will rely on your talent to edit it thoroughly for me. Please feel free to make changes, with special attention to sentences structure, transmissions, organization, etc. I truly appreciate your effort and your timely submission. </p><p>Thanks!</p>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-08 05:28:28','2015-09-08 05:28:28',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15614,1173,1131,'<b>Seeking to Volunteer for <strong>Michigan Immigrant Rights Center (MIRC).<br /><br />400 word max. </strong></b>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-08 07:01:13','2015-09-08 07:01:13',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15615,904,3262,'Thank you for your message.<br /><br />i honestly do not mind, i just went to a british school, so it stuck with me.<br /><br />thank you again','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-08 08:55:52','2015-09-08 16:47:54',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15616,3272,541,'A pleasure to read.&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-08 16:04:53','2015-09-08 16:04:53',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15617,1173,617,'Hi,<br /><br />I am still waiting to receive my paper back. Can you tell me if when are you going to send it please? I am a little worried because I have a deadline.&nbsp;<br />Thanks','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-08 16:49:51','2015-09-08 16:49:51',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15618,617,1173,'Here is your edited document. Thank you for the opportunity!<br />Karen Z.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-08 17:11:43','2015-09-08 17:11:43',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15619,1131,1173,'Editing domplete - best of luck to you!<br />Karen Z.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-08 17:24:31','2015-09-08 17:24:31',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15620,2424,65,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-08 17:29:19','2015-09-08 17:29:19',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15621,3256,1173,'Edits done - thank you!<br />Karen Z.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-08 17:30:31','2015-09-08 17:30:31',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15622,2424,65,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-08 17:31:31','2015-09-08 17:31:31',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15623,1173,617,'Hi,<br />Thanks for the edit. I still have some doubts about my words and redundency. Can you see if you can find other expressions for the following:<br /><br />-&nbsp;&nbsp;\"by adding the stamp of scientific status\"<br /><br />\"qualitative tents \"<br />\"might prove to be fruitful.\"<br /><br /><br />Verb and subject agreement issue here : \" Authors such as Lijphart, who has addressed the reoccurring problems in conducting comparative methods, suggest \"<br /><br />\" He says a problem with the comparative method is the abundance of variables and the inadequate number of \"<br /><br /><br />can you check this sentence here and tell me if it makes sense to teh native speaker, is it clear enough?:<br /><br />\"Much to their dismay, comparativists are left in diaspora; exonerating their work from the stigma of the area-studies approach at times of high tension&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;<br /><br /><br />can you find another expression instead of this:<br /><br />\"\r\n<p>should progress without worrying too much about systemization and affiliation.\"<br /><br />Again, thank you for your work. But I really wanted to perfect my job further than basic editing. The reason I chose you is your title (More than words\"...<br /><br />Please response.&nbsp;</p>\r\n<br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-08 17:32:42','2015-09-08 17:38:33',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15624,3256,1173,'Here is your free sample edit. I have done the first two paragraphs for you. Thank you for the opportunity!<br />Karen Z.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-08 17:37:08','2015-09-08 17:37:08',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15625,2424,65,'I think I just sent two blank messages. Let me get better organized on my side.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-08 17:37:54','2015-09-08 17:43:31',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15626,2424,65,'This is to replace the earlier blank email. One more to follow, then back on track.<br /><br />Thank you.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-08 17:47:35','2015-09-08 17:51:12',NULL,'upload_55eee6f7196ab7.46770493_EW_63274.docx','EW_63274.docx'),
	(15627,2424,65,'The second misfire.<br /><br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-08 17:53:09','2015-09-08 17:56:22',NULL,'upload_55eee845e737e9.39667135_SDEW_63284.docx','SDEW_63284.docx'),
	(15628,617,1173,'Hello-<br /><br />Happy to help!<br /><br />I think \"by adding the stamp of scientific status\" and \"might prove to be fruitful\"&nbsp;are both&nbsp;perfectly understandable to native speakers. <br /><br />Perhaps the term quantitative and qualitative&nbsp;<strong>camps</strong> would be better than tents.&nbsp;<br /><br />This sentence should read: \"Authors such as Lijphart, who&nbsp;<strong>have</strong> addressed ...\"<br /><br />This sentence reads fine: \" He says a problem with the comparative method is the abundance of variables and the inadequate number of \"<br /><br />Here\'s a better word for this sentence: \"Much to their dismay, comparativists are left in <strong>a state&nbsp;of confusion</strong> ...<br /><br />This sentence has been rewritten: \"Comparative methods, regardless of their theory affiliation, should progress without<strong>&nbsp;being impeded by</strong>&nbsp;systemization and affiliation.\"<br /><br />Thank you so much - hope that clears things up!<br /><br />Karen Z.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-08 17:53:10','2015-09-08 17:55:24',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15629,2424,65,'I see the confusion now. EW63274 and SDEW63286 are both about the post of the young girl. You should have&nbsp;the edited&nbsp;EW63274 now, and I\'ll edit the&nbsp;SDEW63286 next.<br /><br />Then I\'ll send two more documents received this morning.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-08 18:04:09','2015-09-08 18:09:29',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15630,904,2706,'Just a breif proofread&nbsp;and&nbsp;edit will do.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-08 18:08:24','2015-09-08 18:08:24',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15631,2424,65,'Sorry for the multiple emails. I got tripped up by what I thought were duplicate files. They are not.<br /><br />I also hope your explanation of this difficult situation with the young girl resolves the issues.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-08 18:13:53','2015-09-08 18:13:53',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15632,2424,65,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-08 18:34:30','2015-09-08 18:34:30',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15633,2424,65,'Seems to be a third variation on the situation with the young girl.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-08 18:45:52','2015-09-08 18:45:52',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15634,2424,2083,'Hello! <br /><br />This had a few ambiguities, so I left some comments noting those areas for clarification. Don\'t hesitate to message me if you have any questions! Thanks. =)','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-08 19:22:56','2015-09-08 19:22:56',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15635,3276,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your sample. I hope the last sentence of the first paragraph meets with your approval.<br /><br />Best of success with your application,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-08 19:39:31','2015-09-08 19:43:30',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15636,3256,904,'Here\'s a sample of how my editing can help. If you want it all edited, submit it through Editor World.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-08 19:47:17','2015-09-08 19:47:17',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15637,2386,144,'Thank you, Daniel, for the opportunity to read and edit another of your pieces.<br /><br />As always, ratings are much appreciated.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-08 20:07:27','2015-09-08 20:07:27',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15638,2386,144,'Again, Daniel, thank you for the opportunity to read and edit this piece.<br /><br />And you know about the ratings :)<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-08 20:08:26','2015-09-08 20:08:26',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15639,144,2583,'Dear Editor,<br /><br />I would like to have your professional expertise for our recent paper to be edited. Before proceeding the payment, appreciate if you could edit the attached sample document. Your cooperation is highly appreciated.<br /><br />Thank you.<br /><br />Regards,<br />Mumtaz','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-08 20:20:55','2015-09-08 20:20:55',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15640,2583,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your piece.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-08 21:13:10','2015-09-08 22:01:39',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15641,3256,541,'A pleasure to read.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-09 00:28:01','2015-09-09 00:28:01',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15642,144,3257,'Hello, <br /><br />I am applying to Virginia Tech Medical School (VTCSOM), but this is not an admissions essay. The school wants me to answer the following prompt: <br /><br />\"<b>The mission of VTCSOM is, in part, to educate physician thought leaders through inquiry, research, and discovery. Thought leaders are individuals who are recognized for innovative ideas and who demonstrate leadership in sharing, promoting, and implementing those ideas.</b><br /><br /><b>A. VTCSOM\'s curriculum fosters a culture of compassion through its community service learning initiatives. Through their inter-professional learning group projects (IPL), students demonstrate leadership and innovation while making a positive difference in the community. Describe an event or a time when your personal contribution was instrumental to the success of a team or made a positive impact on someone else\'s life.\"<br /><br /><br /></b>I have attached a document which contains my response to the aforementioned prompt. That being said, there are a few things I need addressed you, the editor. <br /><br />1) I am 150 words over the word limit on this document (600 word limit). If you could please help me decrease the word count, while retaining the meaning of the content, that would be great. If you can eliminate redundancy, restructure complex sentences into more simple ones, etc... to make the document more concise, that would be ideal. I especially think the first 2-3 paragraphs can be made more concise, since these paragraphs essentially \"set-up\" the main idea of the document and thus dont necessarily need to be using up too much of the word count. Overall, I would like you to remove anything that you think does not directly ANSWER the above prompt. Also, I would like you to remove anything that you think does not add anything productive to the response and is just \"fluff\". <br /><br />2) I want to ensure my grammar and word choice is perfect. <br /><br />Thank you very much!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-09 01:32:35','2015-09-09 01:32:35',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15643,3277,144,'Hello,<br /><br />I have just reached the reference section and am not familiar with this format.<br /><br />You have not been consistent in your application of the formatting, so you need to give me an example of one that is completely correct, so that I can follow it. The ref # will be sufficient.<br /><br />Many thanks,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-09 02:07:18','2015-09-09 02:39:06',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15644,65,1280,'I have to write a memo report to the professor.<br /><br />I am not sure whether I used the correct memo report.<br /><br />and free from errors as well.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-09 02:09:26','2015-09-09 02:09:26',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15645,3257,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your statement. I believe you have addressed the issues well.<br /><br />Thank you as well for your rating. As always, they are much appreciated.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-09 02:36:47','2015-09-09 02:36:47',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15646,904,3276,'Hi, I am nearing the final stages of writing my personal statement for plastic surgery residency applications. This might be the most important document I have ever written. I am feeling comfortable with the majority of the statement -- I am a little unsure of the strength of the first paragraph. I am also wondering if the first paragraph seems disjointed from the rest of the statement. In general, I would like help making the statement as concise as possible and typo/grammatical error-free. Thanks!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-09 02:49:18','2015-09-09 02:49:18',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15647,144,3280,'I\'m as much interested in whether the big-picture narrative comes through as I am about smaller things like grammar, etc. So feel free to comment on whether the overall argument is making sense.<br /><br />Of course, sentence level help would be great as well.<br /><br />Don\'t worry too much about the references list for now. I have them all formatted through EndNote, and I\'ll take care of things on submission.<br /><br />The style is basically described here: <a href=\"http://socpro.oxfordjournals.org/for_authors/index.html,\">http://socpro.oxfordjournals.org/for_authors/index.html</a>, for what it\'s worth.<br /><br />Please feel free to contact me if you have questions: cchild@byu.edu','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-09 02:50:33','2015-09-09 02:50:33',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15648,484,3276,'Hi, I am nearing the final stages of writing my personal statement for plastic surgery residency applications. This might be the most important document I have ever written. I am feeling comfortable with the majority of the statement -- I am a little unsure of the strength of the first paragraph. I am also wondering if the first paragraph seems disjointed from the rest of the statement. In general, I would like help making the statement as concise as possible and typo/grammatical error-free. Thanks!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-09 02:51:05','2015-09-09 02:51:05',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15649,144,3277,'No problem. &nbsp;Please follow the below styles. &nbsp;Thanks.<br /><br />Journal<br />[#] S.K. Roy, S. Sengupta, Gravity-assisted melting in a spherical enclosure: effects<br />of natural convection, Int. J. Heat Mass Transfer 33 (6) (1990) 1135-1147.<br /><br />G. Burban, V. Ayel, a. Alexandre, P. Lagonotte, Y. Bertin, C. Romestant, Experimental investigation of a pulsating heat pipe for hybrid vehicle applications, Appl. Therm. Eng. 50 (2013) 94&ndash;103. doi:10.1016/j.applthermaleng.2012.05.037.<br /><br />Proceedings<br />[#] T.S. Saitoh, H. Kato, H. Hoshina, Theoretical analysis for combined closecontact<br />and natural convection melting in ice storage spherical capsule, in:<br />Proc. Energy ConversionE ngineering Conference 1996. IECEC 96, vol. 3IEEE,<br />1996, pp. 2104-2108.<br /><br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-09 03:26:37','2015-09-09 03:49:46',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15650,3277,144,'Thank you. I\'ve never seen a format where the first author\'s last name did not appear first.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-09 03:50:53','2015-09-09 03:51:15',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15651,3276,454,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-09 03:56:38','2015-09-09 03:56:38',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15652,3274,454,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-09 04:18:44','2015-09-09 04:18:44',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15653,144,3213,'My professor wanted me to add infomation in my paper. I added the information, but unsure if it flows. I have my professor\'s comment and my paper','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-09 05:35:42','2015-09-09 05:35:42',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15654,144,3213,'Here are my professor\'s comments','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-09 05:39:42','2015-09-09 09:54:11',NULL,'upload_55ef8ddeec63d3.03035572_coomentsREVDrMcClure.docx','coomentsREVDrMcClure.docx'),
	(15655,454,2259,'Hello Laura,<br />I have revised the previously edited document and would like you to<br />edit the revised portion again. The text highlighted in gray need not be edited.<br />Thank you as always,<br />Taka','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-09 07:06:20','2015-09-09 07:06:20',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15656,3274,1541,'It was a pleasure to edit your stellar personal statement! I focused on correcting the grammar, elevating the language, and enhancing clarity, flow, and eloquence. Overall, very nicely done indeed! I believe that your statement will stand out. Best of luck to you with all your current and future endeavors. I hope to have the opportunity to work with you again in the future.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-09 09:40:30','2015-09-09 09:40:30',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15657,856,1090,'the draft must be very well-wrttien as it is confidentail document for submission to federal agency.<br />please edit it thoroughly and feel free to edit as much as you can to have the best written draft.<br />Look forward to your excellent edits on the document.<br /><br />p.s. I have several more documents to submit to you by early next week','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-09 10:05:03','2015-09-09 10:05:03',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15658,65,3265,'Dear Professor,<br /><br />I guess that one conclusion is sufficent. My professor asked us to send our final drafts before uploading to signature assessment on school\'s blackboard. I asked him through email if I needed to make any modification last Sunday. My professor emailed me to submit it without giving me further instruction. I got a 60 out of 60 for my CIP assignment today.<br /><br />I am so happy :)<br />Thank you for your help!<br /><br /><br />Sincerely,<br />Angela.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-09 12:55:22','2015-09-09 16:03:33',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15659,3265,65,'Congratulations! Always good to hear good news.<br /><br />Great work.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-09 16:04:47','2015-09-10 03:00:41',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15660,904,2066,'UK/British spelling please. i.e. recognise','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-09 16:07:24','2015-09-09 16:07:24',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15661,904,2066,'UK/British spelling please. i.e. globalisation','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-09 16:20:46','2015-09-09 16:20:46',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15662,2424,65,'Thank you','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-09 16:44:02','2015-09-09 16:44:02',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15663,1280,65,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-09 17:00:44','2015-09-09 17:00:44',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15664,2424,2083,'Hello! <br /><br />I modified the first piece based on the edits that I had made from the previous document (from yesterday). I integrated the new material into the old, so let me know if you have any questions! Thanks. =)','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-09 19:12:24','2015-09-09 19:12:24',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15665,2424,2083,'Hello again! <br /><br />I modified this piece a bit based on the edits from the previous version that you sent me, so let me know if you have any questions! Thanks. =)','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-09 19:17:22','2015-09-09 19:17:22',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15666,65,3223,'please i am ganna post the article here and if you have note please let me know becuase this is big assighnment. check the citation and the reference. please do what ever u can to make this assighnment good. Thank you.<br />DDT Exposure in Utero and Breast Cancer<br />Barbara A. Cohn, Michele La Merrill, Nickilou Y. Krigbaum, Gregory Yeh, June-Soo Park, Lauren Zimmermann, and Piera M. Cirillo<br />Child Health and Development Studies (B.A.C., N.Y.K., L.Z., P.M.C.), Public Health Institute, Berkeley, California 94709; Department of Environmental Toxicology (M.L.M.), University of California, Davis, California 95616; Environmental Chemistry Laboratory (G.Y., J.-S.P.), California Department of Toxic Substances Control, Berkeley, California 94710; and Public Health Institute (G.Y.), Oakland, California 94607<br />Context:Currentlynodirectevidencelinksinuterodichlorodiphenyltrichloroethane(DDT)exposure to human breast cancer. However, in utero exposure to another xenoestrogen, diethylstilbestrol, predicts an increased breast cancer risk. If this finding extends to DDT, it could have far-reaching consequences. Many women were heavily exposed in utero during widespread DDT use in the 1960s. They are now reaching the age of heightened breast cancer risk. DDT exposure persistsandusecontinuesinAfricaandAsiawithoutclearknowledgeoftheconsequencesforthe next generation.<br />Hypothesis: In utero exposure to DDT is associated with an increased risk of breast cancer.<br />Design:Thiswasacase-controlstudynestedinaprospective54-yearfollow-upof9300daughters in the Child Health and Development Studies pregnancy cohort (n  118 breast cancer cases, diagnosed by age 52 y and 354 controls matched on birth year).<br />Setting and Participants: Kaiser Foundation Health Plan members who received obstetric care in AlamedaCounty,California,from1959to1967,andtheiradultdaughtersparticipatedinthestudy.<br />MainOutcomeMeasure:Daughters’breastcancerdiagnosedbyage52yearsasof2012wasmeasured.<br />Results:Maternalo,p-DDTpredicteddaughters’breastcancer(oddsratiofourthquartilevsfirst 3.7,95%confidenceinterval1.5–9.0).Mothers’lipids,weight,race,age,andbreastcancerhistory did not explain the findings.<br />Conclusions:ThisprospectivehumanstudylinksmeasuredDDTexposureinuterotoriskofbreast cancer.Experimentalstudiesareessentialtoconfirmresultsanddiscovercausalmechanisms.Findings support classification of DDT as an endocrine disruptor, a predictor of breast cancer, and a marker of high risk. (J Clin Endocrinol Metab 100: 2865–2872, 2015) Diethylstilbestrol (DES) is a synthetic estrogen, which wasprescribedtopregnantwomenuntilitwasbanned in the United States in 1971 and is a seminal example of a transplacentalcarcinogen(1).ThediscoverythatDESexposure in utero causes clear-cell carcinoma of the vagina and cervix(2)andalsopredictshigherriskforbreastcancer(3) raisesthepossibilitythatotherman-madechemicals,particularlythosethatdisruptnormalestrogen-relatedfunctions, couldcausebreastcancerinlaterlife.AlthoughDES(4)and otherexogenousestrogenicchemicals(5,6)havebeenshown tocausemammarycancerexperimentally,nootherinutero chemical exposures have been quantified and related prospectivelytoriskofbreastcancerinahumanpopulation.The present study addresses this gap. Theinfluenceoftheseinuteroexposuresincancerrisk informed an Endocrine Society scientific statement em<br />ISSN Print 0021-972X ISSN Online 1945-7197 Printed in USA Copyright © 2015 by the Endocrine Society Received April 2, 2015. Accepted June 1, 2015. First Published Online June 16, 2015<br />Abbreviations: CCR, California Cancer Registry; CERLab, Clinical and Epidemiologic ResearchLaboratory;CHDS,ChildHealthandDevelopmentStudies;CI,confidenceinterval; DDE, dichlorodiphenyldichloroethylene; DDT, dichlorodiphenyltrichloroethane; DDTs, DDTcompoundssuchastheisomersp,p-DDTando,p-DDT;DES,diethylstilbestrol;DMV, Department of Motor Vehicles; OR, odds ratio.<br />O R I G I N A L A R T I C L E<br />doi: 10.1210/jc.2015-1841 J Clin Endocrinol Metab, August 2015, 100(8):2865–2872 press.endocrine.org/journal/jcem 2865<br />The Endocrine Society. Downloaded from press.endocrine.org by [${individualUser.displayName}] on 04 September 2015. at 09:39 For personal use only. No other uses without permission. . All rights reserved.<br />phasizing that the timing of an exposure either to a hormoneoranendocrinedisruptordeterminesitseffects(7). For this reason, human studies of adult exposure to estrogenicchemicalsinrelationtobreastcancerriskarenot sufficient(8,9).Indeed,priorstudiesthatinvestigatedthe association between midlife exposure to the pesticide dichlorodiphenyltrichloroethane (DDT) and breast cancer were largely negative (10). Wereportedtheonepriorprospectiveandquantitative study to consider the implications of young age at DDT exposure on breast cancer risk. This study was based on incidentbreastcancerdiagnosedbeforeage50yearsinthe mothers’generationoftheChildHealthandDevelopment Studies (CHDS) pregnancy cohort over a 17-year follow-up(11).Weusedagein1945,whenDDTwaswidely introducedintotheUnitedStatesasaproxyforearliestage at DDT exposure to evaluate whether there was an increasedsusceptibilitytobreastcanceramongwomenwith early life exposure to DDT. We found that mothers who were exposed to DDT prior to age 14 years showed a 5-fold increase in risk of breast cancer (66th percentile of serump,p-DDTcomparedwiththe33rdpercentile);risk wasgreatestforwomenwhowereexposedevenearlier,by age 4 years, and the DDT association with breast cancer wasobservedonlyforwomenwhowereexposedpriorto age 14 years (P  .02 for interaction between p,p-DDT and age in 1945). These findings clearly support the need to further investigate the role of early-life DDT exposure in later breast cancer risk. Other than the present study, there is an absence of human breast cancer studies of in uteroexposuretotheDDTs(DDTcompoundssuchasthe isomers p,p-DDT and o,p-DDT that are found in technicalDDTandalsocompoundsthatarebreakdownproducts of DDT such as dichlorodiphenyldichloroethylene (DDE), the most prevalent and persistent metabolite of p,p-DDT)(12)dueinparttothelogisticbarriersofquantitative assessment of gestational exposure coupled with follow-up of at least 50 years needed to identify breast cancercases(13),giventhatthemedianageatdiagnosisis 61 years (14). DDTremainsrelevanttolivingpopulationsfornumerous reasons. First, most women born while DDT was extensivelyusedworldwidearestillalivetodayandarehence at risk for breast cancer. Second, DDT remains in active useforcontrolofmalariainAfricaandAsiainaccordance with World Health Organization recommendations despite intense debate (15, 16). Third, because of its persistent presence in the environment, people worldwide continuetobeexposedtoDDTsthatarealreadypresent(17). Environmental contamination and human exposure are greaterwhereusewasrecentandwheresaferuse,storage, and disposal are challenging (18), such as in China (19)<br />andareasinMexico(20,21)andAfrica(22,23).Indeed, DDThealtheffectswillremainrelevantfortheforeseeable future, given that the distribution of malaria vectors is predicted to expand with climate change (24). Melting glaciers release DDTs into arctic waters in which it is knowntobioaccumulateto1million-foldhigherconcentrations in people, reaching levels found among populations with endemic malaria in tropical regions in which DDT use remains in effect (25, 26). Hereweconductedthefirstprospectivestudytorelate quantitativemeasuresofinuteroDDTexposuretoriskof breast cancer in daughters.<br />Materials and Methods<br />Subjects Thisuniquestudyismadepossiblebya54-yearfollow-upof 20 754pregnancies,resultingin9300live-bornfemaleoffspring in the CHDS pregnancy cohort. TheCHDSwasdesignedtoexaminetheassociationbetween prenatal exposures and health and development over the life course for parents and children. The CHDS recruited women residing in the area of Oakland, California, who were members oftheKaiserFoundationHealthPlanandreceivedobstetriccare forpregnanciesbetween1959and1967(27).Morethan98%of alleligiblewomenenrolled.CHDSfoundingmothersvoluntarily participated in an in-person interview and gave permission to researchers for medical record access for themselves and their children. Their blood specimens were collected at several times through pregnancy and 1–3 days after delivery. The present study was reviewed and approved by the Institutional Review Board of the Public Health Institute (Oakland, California), and we have complied with all federal guidelines governing use of human subjects.<br />Breast cancer cases AllmembersoftheCHDScohortarelinkedtotheCalifornia DepartmentofMotorVehicles(DMV)filesonaregularbasisto determine California residence history, allowing us to update anynamechanges.AllnamesregisteredwiththeDMVareused inestablishingamatch.Simultaneouslinkageofmultiplefamily members enhances matching. The regular DMV matching provides a history of location for each subject, which is used to determinethepopulationatriskforcancer,correspondingwith geographic surveillance by California’s cancer registries. Breast cancer cases were identified by linkage to the California Cancer Registry and the California Vital Status Records as previouslydescribed(11,28)andbyself-reportduringasurvey ofCHDSdaughtersconductedfrom2010to2013.Allnamesfor each CHDS subject were submitted for cancer linkages using fixed (ie, birth date, sex, race, and name) and changeable (ie, address and patient record number) identifiers. A rigorous protocol was used to verify cases, comparing fixed vs changeable identifiers by manual review. The California Cancer Registry (CCR) is reported to be greater than 99% complete after a lag time of about 2 years (29). We ascertained 80% (n  94) of the cases via CCR linkage as of 2012 and 20% (n  24) via selfreport as of 2013. Due to the CCR lag time, the self-reported<br />2866 Cohn et al In Utero DDT and Breast Cancer J Clin Endocrinol Metab, August 2015, 100(8):2865–2872<br />The Endocrine Society. Downloaded from press.endocrine.org by [${individualUser.displayName}] on 04 September 2015. at 09:39 For personal use only. No other uses without permission. . All rights reserved.<br />casesaremorerecentlydiagnosedthanthosefromCCR.Tumor characteristicswereavailablefor87%ofCCRcasesandfor50% of self-reported cases. Thus, we expect to have more complete informationontumorpathologywithcontinuingCCRlinkage. CasesweredefinedasCHDSdaughterswithincidentinvasive or noninvasive breast cancer diagnosed by age 52 years, identifiedthroughsurveillanceandthroughself-reportthroughMarch of 2013. There were 137 cases who met this case definition, diagnosedasof2012.Tobeincludedinthepresentstudy,cases were required to have a maternal perinatal blood sample for measurement of DDT exposure, resulting in inclusion of 118 cases(86%).Threecontrols,matchedonbirthyearandtrimester of maternal blood draw, were selected at random for each case from among those who were under cancer surveillance and known to be free of breast cancer at the age of diagnosis for the matchingcase.Inclusioninthepresentstudyalsorequiredavailabledataforthefollowingvariablesknowntobecorrelatedwith DDT exposure and potentially daughters’ breast cancer: maternallipids,age,race,earlypregnancyweight,height,andhistory of breast cancer and whether the daughter was breast-fed, resulting in a final sample size of 103 cases (87% of those with serum samples) and 315 controls (83% of those with serum samples).<br />Serum assays In 2014, we measured DDTs and serum lipids in nonfasting maternal perinatal serum samples that had been collected from 1959 through 1967. The mean age of subjects when blood was drawnwas26.9years.Wepreferredtousetheearlypostpartum samples(collectedwithin1–3dafterdelivery)whenavailableto conserveserumforfuturestudieswhentimingwithinpregnancy is more critical. Early postpartum samples were available and used for most case-control strata (77.8%); third-trimester samples were used for 17.7%; second-trimester samples were used for3.8%;andfirst-trimestersampleswereusedfor0.7%.Prior work has established that organochlorine levels are consistent acrossalltrimestersofpregnancyandsoonafterdeliverywithin women(30).Serumsampleshadbeenstoredat20ºCandwere firstthawedtoprepareanaliquotof1.5mLfororganochlorine assays.Aliquotswerethenshippedfrozentothelaboratoryofthe CaliforniaDepartmentofToxicSubstancesControlwherethey wereassayedforDDTs,includingp,p-DDTando,p-DDT,the primaryconstituentsoftechnicalDDT,andtheprimarymetaboliteofp,p-DDT,DDEusingmethodsdevelopedpreviously(31). Briefly, human serum samples (1 mL) spiked with surrogate standards(tetrachloro-m-xylene,polychlorinatedbiphenyls-14, -65,and-166)weredenaturedwithformicacid,extractedusing Oasis HLB SPE cartridges (Waters Corp) and subsequently cleaned up with 33% sulfuric acid silica using an automated sample extraction system (RapidTrace; Biotage). DDT compounds(o,p-DDT,p,p-DDT,andp,p-DDE)wereanalyzedon a DB-5ms column (30 m  0.25 mm inner diameter, 0.25  m film thickness; Agilent Technologies) installed in an Agilent gas chromatograph-tandem mass spectrometer (7890/7000B series). Chromatographic conditions included pulsed splitless injection at 250°C and helium carrier gas at 1 mL/min. The gas chromatographtemperatureprogramstartedwithaninitialtemperature of 90°C, a hold for 1 minute, a ramp of 50°C/min to 150°C,aholdfor1minute,arampof8°C/minto225°C,ahold for 6.5 minutes, and a final ramp of 14°C/min to 310°C, a hold for 6 minutes. The mass spectrometer was operated in electron<br />impact ionization mode using multiple reaction monitoring, source temperature of 275°C, ionization energy of 70 eV, and massresolutionof1.2amu.Acalibrationcurve,consistingoffive to eight standards with concentrations ranging from 0.1 to 30 pg/  L(DDTs)orfrom0.1to800pg/  L(DDE)andanR2 value of 0.990 or greater, was used for quantitation. Eachbatchof10sampleswasanalyzedusingastandardqualityassessmentandcontrolprotocol:alaboratorymethodblank (HyClonebovineserum;FisherScientific),amatrixspikeinbovine serum, and a standard reference material (1958; National InstituteofStandardsandTechnology).Matrixspikerecoveries frombovineserumforp,p-DDE,p,p-DDT,ando,p-DDTcongeners ranged from 93%  14%, 102%  19%, and 101%  12%, respectively. Precisions from 51 standard reference material samples were reasonable, eg, coefficients of variation were 12%, 19%, and 14% for p,p-DDE, p,p-DDT, and o,p-DDT, respectively. The method detection limits, calculated as 3 times the SD of the concentrations in method blanks (n  51), were 0.013 ng/mL o,p-DDT, 0.054 ng/mL p,p-DDT and 0.158 ng/mL p,p-DDE. Sample order was randomly assigned within and across batches. Case-control strata were analyzed in the samebatchestominimizedifferencesduetolaboratorydrift.The laboratorywasblindastocaseorcontrolstatusofthesamples. Interbatchandintrabatchcoefficientsofvariationwere15%and 5%forp,p-DDT,6%and5%forp,p-DDE,and11%and7% for o,p-DDT, respectively. The proficiency of the laboratory is demonstrated through regular successful participation in the ArcticMonitoringandAssessmentProgram(32)testingrounds (z-score  1). Using 150  L undiluted serum, total cholesterol and triglyceridesweremeasuredenzymaticallyonaRochePModularsystemusingreagentsandcalibratorsfromRocheDiagnosticsatthe Clinical and Epidemiologic Research Laboratory (CERLab) at BostonChildren’sHospital,whichiscertifiedbytheCentersfor Disease Control and Prevention/National Heart, Lung, and Blood Institute Lipid Standardization Program. For cholesterol the method combines the specificity of the enzymatic reaction with peroxidase/phenol-4-aminophenazone indicator reaction (33).Cholesterolestersarehydrolyzedbycholesterolesteraseto produce free cholesterol. In the presence of oxygen and cholesterol oxidase, cholesterol is oxidized to cholest-4-en-3-one and H2O2. The latter product then reacts with a dye to generate a quinoneimine dye. The intensity of the generated color is measuredat505nmandisdirectlyproportionaltotheconcentration ofcholesterolinthemeasuredsample.Atcholesterolconcentrations of 132.8 and 280.4 mg/dL, the day-to-day reproducibility in the CERlab, reflected by coefficient of variation, is 1.7% (SD  2.4 mg/dL) and 1.6%, respectively (n  693). Triglycerides were measured enzymatically with correction for endogenous glycerol (34). In a preliminary reaction, the endogenous glycerol is phosphorylated in the presence of glycerol kinaseandATP.Theformedglycerol-3-phosphateisoxidizedto generateH2O2,whichreactswith4-chlorophenoltoproducean oxidative product. Then in the actual assay reaction, triglycerides are hydrolyzed by lipase mixture to generate glycerol and fattyacids.Similarlytothepreliminaryreaction,glycerolisphosphorylated by the action of glycerol kinase and the generated glycerol-3-phosphate is oxidized to produce H2O2. The latter product reacts with a dye to generate a colored product. The intensity of the generated color is measured at 505 nm and is directlyproportionaltotheconcentrationoftriglyceridesinthe measured sample. Triglycerides at concentrations of 84.0 and<br />doi: 10.1210/jc.2015-1841 press.endocrine.org/journal/jcem 2867<br />The Endocrine Society. Downloaded from press.endocrine.org by [${individualUser.displayName}] on 04 September 2015. at 09:39 For personal use only. No other uses without permission. . All rights reserved.<br />201.8mg/dLaredeterminedinintheCERLabwithaday-to-day reproducibility of 1.8% (SD 1.6 mg/dL) and 1.7% (SD 3.5 mg/ dL), respectively (n  675).<br />Statistical analysis Data analyses were performed using age-matched, conditional logistic regression. Each DDT variable (o,p-DDT, p,pDDT, and p,p-DDE) was categorized in quartiles of the logged distributionbasedonthecontrolpopulationandrepresentedas three nominal variables in models: quartile 2, quartile 3, and quartile 4 in which quartile 1 was the reference category. We used a likelihood ratio criterion (P  .05) to choose the bestmodelfromamongthefollowingnestedmodels:1)allthree DDT compounds were entered into the model, 2) terms for one of the three compounds was deleted beginning with the compoundshowingthehighestPvaluesandsmallesteffectsizes,and 3) models with only one DDT compound included. Trends acrossquartilesofDDTcompoundsinthebestmodelweretested using natural log-transformed continuous variables. All models were adjusted for serum total cholesterol and total triglycerides enteredasnaturallogs,maternalage(continuous),race(African American vs non-African American), overweight in early pregnancy(codedasoverweightvsnot,basedonabodymassindex 25 kg/m2), parity (primiparous vs multiparous), maternal history of breast cancer (yes vs no), and whether the daughter was breast-fed.Thefinalmodeldeletedadjustmentvariablesthathad littleornoinfluenceontheDDTpredictorsasevidencedbylessthan 10% change in the DDT coefficient(s) when removed from the model.Saturatedinteractionmodelswerealsotestedforthethree DDTvariables(codedascontinuouslogtransformedvariables)and for the DDT variables in the final model with each potential confounder. These were not significant and are not reported.<br />Results<br />Distributions of study variables are shown in Table 1. There were significant correlations among the DDT vari<br />ables. However, the correlation of o,p-DDT with p,pDDT was higher (Spearman rank correlation coefficient 0.78) than the correlation of either of these compounds withp,p-DDE(0.60and0.66,respectively).Comparison ofDDTassociationsinnestedmodelsareshowninTable 2, in which the best model included o,p-DDT and p,pDDE (model 4, Table 2). Independent of a maternal history of breast cancer, elevated maternal serum o,p-DDT significantly predicted a nearly 4-fold increase in the daughter’sriskofbreastcancer(Table3).Maternaloverweightinearlypregnancywasassociatedwithalowerrisk ofbreastcancerindaughtersbutwithmarginalstatistical significance. Maternal lipids, age, race, and parity and whether the daughter was breast-fed did not confound these findings and were not significant predictors of daughters’ breast cancer. No interactions were statistically significant. Most cases in this cohort were estrogen receptor positive (83%), progesterone receptor positive (76%), and HER2-negative (74%). In human breast cell lines, DDT activates HER2, a clinically relevant protein expressed in some breast cancers (35, 36). Therefore, we evaluated whether in utero DDT exposure was associated with HER2-positive breast cancers in this cohort of women with available stage at diagnosis (73%) and available HER2 status (59%). We found that o,p-DDT was significantly, positively associated with advanced stage at diagnosis (regional or distantdiseasevslocalorinsitu)andwiththeoccurrence of HER2-positive tumors, independent of maternal overweight, history of breast cancer, and p,p-DDE. Despite small sample sizes for these analyses, 22 advanced-stage tumors and 16 HER2-positive tumors, respectively, re<br />Table 1. Maternal Variables by Daughters’ Breast Cancer Status<br />Controls (n  315) Cases (n  103)<br />Percentile Percentile Maternal Variables 25th 50th 75th 25th 50th 75th Age, y 22 26 30 23 27 31 o,p-DDT, ng/mL 0.27 0.46 0.78 0.32 0.52 1.06 p,p-DDT, ng/mL 8.38 12.98 18.57 9.47 13.18 20.11 p,p-DDE, ng/mL 29.29 42.81 57.56 30.91 43.13 58.08 Cholesterol, mg/dL 182 222 278 188 227 283 Triglycerides, mg/dL 139 183 227 136 182 227 Percent n Percent n History of breast cancera 4.44 14 20.39 21 Primipara 29.84 94 26.21 27 African-American 25.08 79 23.30 24 Overweight (BMI  25 kg/m2) 25.08 79 17.48 18 Breast-fed her daughter 26.03 82 31.07 32 Abbreviation: BMI, body mass index. a P  .0001 for difference between controls and cases.<br />2868 Cohn et al In Utero DDT and Breast Cancer J Clin Endocrinol Metab, August 2015, 100(8):2865–2872<br />The Endocrine Society. Downloaded from press.endocrine.org by [${individualUser.displayName}] on 04 September 2015. at 09:39 For personal use only. No other uses without permission. . All rights reserved.<br />sults were statistically significant. The estimated odds ratio(OR)fordiagnosisatanadvancedstagewas2.2[95% confidence interval (CI) 1.1–4.2, P  .02] for a doubling of o,p-DDT. The estimated OR for a HER2-positive tu<br />morwas2.2(95%CI1.0–4.6,P.04)foradoublingof o,p-DDT. Levels of o,p-DDT not only doubled but also tripledforwomeninthefourthquartileofthestudycompared with those in the first quartile (as seen in Table 1). Thecorrespondingriskofadvanced-stageandHER2-positivebreastcancerforthesewomenismorethan4-fold(for latestage,OR4.6;95%CI1.3–16.6forthefourthquartile of o,p-DDT vs the first quartile; for HER2 positive, OR 4.6, 95% CI 1.1–19.7). These results suggest a strong effect of in utero o,p-DDT on breast cancer stage, and HER2statusinthispopulation,andtherelevanceofthese findings is discussed below.<br />Discussion<br />Strengths Exposure timing Human and animal evidence establish the existence of developmental windows when the breast is more vulnerabletoxenoestrogens,suchasDDT(9).Oneofthesewindows is in utero. The present study is the first to quantify exposuretoDDTinuteroandlinkittosubsequentbreast cancer risk.<br />Quantifying exposure DDT was introduced in the general population in the United States in 1945 and was most heavily used worldwide in the late 1950’s and 1960’s (37). The CHDS enrolled pregnancies during 1959–1967, which, by coincidence, covered the years of highest DDT exposure (26, 38).Consistentwiththesedata,theCHDSmaternalserum samples, which were collected during the peak years of DDT use in the United States, show the highest levels of DDT compared with other studies of breast cancer in<br />Table 2. DDT Results for Nested Models<br />o,p-DDT p,p-DDT p,p-DDE<br />OR OR OR<br />Univariate models Model 1, o,p-DDT Quartile 2 1.8 Quartile 3 1.6 Quartile 4 2.8a P trend 0.054 Model 2, p,p-DDT Quartile 2 1.9 Quartile 3 1.5 Quartile 4 2.2b P trend 0.074 Model 3, p,p-DDE Quartile 2 1.3 Quartile 3 1.1 Quartile 4 1.3 P trend NS Co-adjusted models Model 4, o,p-DDT plus p,p-DDE Quartile 2 2.0 1.0 Quartile 3 1.8 0.7 Quartile 4 3.7c 0.7 P trend 0.048 NS Model 5, p,p-DDT plus p,p-DDE Quartile 2 2.0 1.1 Quartile 3 1.7 0.8 Quartile 4 2.9d 0.8 P trend 0.037 NS Model 6, o,p-DDT plus p,p-DDT plus p,p-DDE Quartile 2 1.9 1.7 1.0 Quartile 3 1.7 1.2 0.7 Quartile 4 3.5e 1.4 0.6 P trend NS NS NS Abbreviation: NS, not significant p  .15. All models are adjusted for maternal cholesterol and triglycerides, maternal overweight in early pregnancy, and maternal history of breast cancer. P trend is based on continuous log-transformed DDTs. Model 4, containing o,p-DDT and p,p-DDE, is chosen as the best model. The addition of p,p-DDT does not make a significant, independent contribution to risk beyond that shown for o,p-DDT (compare Model 4 with Model 6). This is likely due to the high correlation between o,p-DDT and p,p-DDT (see text). The association for o,p-DDT is partly masked by p,p-DDE (compare Model 1 with Model 4), which is why both terms are retained in the best model. Although p,p-DDE is not itself significant, it is inversely associated with daughters’ breast cancer while being positively correlated with o,p-DDT. a P  .007. b P  .058. c P  .004. d P  .054. e P  .019.<br />Table 3. Maternal Predictors of Daughters’ Breast Cancer<br />OR 95% CI<br />P Value History of breast cancera 6.4 2.8–14.3 .0001 Overweight in early pregnancya 0.6 0.3–1.1 .077 o,p-DDTb Quartile 2 2.0 0.9–4.3 .083 Quartile 3 1.8 0.8–4.0 .160 Quartile 4 3.7 1.5–9.0 .004 P trend .048<br />Quartile cut points are given in Table 1. This table is based on a single model adjusted for variables shown and also adjusted for the maternal serum p,p-DDE, total cholesterol, and total triglycerides, which were not significant predictors. Test for trend was based on log-transformed o,p-DDT entered as a continuous variable instead of quartile variables. a Yes versus No. b Quartile 1 is reference category.<br />doi: 10.1210/jc.2015-1841 press.endocrine.org/journal/jcem 2869<br />The Endocrine Society. Downloaded from press.endocrine.org by [${individualUser.displayName}] on 04 September 2015. at 09:39 For personal use only. No other uses without permission. . All rights reserved.<br />which samples were collected in later decades (11, 13). Thus, the present study uses unique historic samples to quantify typical in utero exposure when DDT use was at its peak. Our laboratory methods were able to quantify threeDDTtargetcompoundsinallsamples,includingthe lower concentration o,p-DDT, a 15%–20% contaminant of technical DDT. This strength is due to state-ofthe-art laboratory methods, which optimized the detection of all compounds, but is also due to collection of serum samples in the 1960’s during a time period when there was high use of technical DDT.<br />Relevance to countries in which DDT is now banned DDTwasbannedinthe1970’sintheUnitedStatesand westernEurope(39).However,thewomenexposedmost heavily while in utero during the 1960’s are currently reaching the age of heightened breast cancer risk. Recent cases of breast cancer in daughters (F1) in the CHDS cohort represent the leading edge of birth cohorts heavily exposedtoDDTwheninutero.Thus,thefindingsofthis present study are relevant to breast cancer, even in countriesinwhichDDTisnotcurrentlyused.Inaddition,DDT remains a global environmental contaminant due to its environmental persistence and semivolatility (25).<br />Relevance to countries in which DDT is still used In those countries that continue to use DDT to control malaria,humanexposureremainshigh(26).Thus,thefindingsofthisstudyarerelevanttocurrentpopulationsinwhich highinuteroexposureiscertainlyoccurring,suchasinSouth Africa(23).TheimpactofDDTuseonunborngenerations hasbeenrecentlyraisedasanethicalconsideration(40).Our findings are relevant to this debate.<br />Plausibility DDTs have been studied as possible endocrine disruptors on the basis of observed deleterious reproductive effects in wildlife (39, 41) and based on demonstrated endocrine-active effects including estrogen activity, particularlyforo,p-DDT(42,43).Remarkably,independent of estrogen, there is likely a biological basis for the putative association of in utero DDT and HER2-positive cancers(36,44,45).Forexample,low-doseo,p-DDT(1 nM) enhanced the tyrosine kinase activity of HER2 in human MCF-7 breast cancer cells irrespective of tamoxifen exposure or estrogen depletion of culture media (36, 45).o,p-DDTalsogaverisetoincreasedMCF-7foci(abnormal concentric piling up of cells in postconfluent cultures) (45). The effects of o,p-DDT on tyrosine kinase activityofHER2andMCF7fociformationwereblocked by a mononuclear antibody specific to HER2. These experimental results are consistent with the hypothesis this<br />paper supports that o,p-DDT can cause human mammary tumor formation that depends on the activation of HER2 (36, 45). Although this hypothesized effect of in uteroDDTexposureonmammarycancerhasnotyetbeen tested experimentally in vivo, when exposure to its metabolitep,p-DDEwasinitiatedatweaning,thelatencyof HER2-positive mouse mammary tumors was shortened (46). Our nested analysis also suggested that high exposurewassignificantlyassociatedwithadvancedstage.Although no in vivo studies have evaluated this, a recent study of human breast cancer cell lines suggested o,pDDT caused estrogen-dependent invasion (47). PrioritizingtheacquisitionoftumorblocksandtheirimmunohistochemicalanalysisofestrogenreceptorandHER2inthe ongoing CHDS and in parallel experimental models will likely aid in resolving which receptor is the mechanistic target of in utero DDT on mammary carcinogenesis. DES is the most well-studied perinatal xenoestrogen exposure in humans and is known to be associated with increasedriskofbreastcancerinbothF0(exposedinpregnancy)(48)andF1(exposedinutero)(3).SimilartoDES, we found that maternal serum p,p-DDT was associated with an increased risk of breast cancer in CHDS mothers (F0)(11).Weusedbirthyearasaproxyforearliestageat DDT exposure and found the strongest association was observed in mothers who were initially exposed to DDT beforetheageof4years(11).Thepresentstudyprovides a direct, quantitative measure of exposure in utero for daughters(F1)intheCHDSandalsofindsanassociation between in utero DDT exposure and breast cancer.<br />Limitations Outcome window Thepresentstudyinvestigatesbreastcancerdiagnosed before age 52 years. Thus, these results do not address DDT associations with breast cancer diagnosed at a later age. One prior study of dioxin exposure to girls and women after a chemical explosion in Seveso, Italy, reported a significant association for breast cancers diagnosed within the first 20 years, which then declined over the subsequent 10 years of follow-up (49). Continuing follow-up in our cohort will be required to determine whetherinuteroDDTassociationswithbreastcancerare observed for cases diagnosed in the future.<br />Exposure window Whereas we have measured exposure directly relevant tofetallife,wecannotruleoutacontributionofpostnatal exposure. We did not observe a contribution or synergy with breast-feeding, even though this is a major maternal route of DDT exposure to offspring. However, this negative association may be partly explained by the low fre<br />2870 Cohn et al In Utero DDT and Breast Cancer J Clin Endocrinol Metab, August 2015, 100(8):2865–2872<br />The Endocrine Society. Downloaded from press.endocrine.org by [${individualUser.displayName}] on 04 September 2015. at 09:39 For personal use only. No other uses without permission. . All rights reserved.<br />quency of breast-feeding in the CHDS and the relatively small sample size.<br />Unmeasured confounders We cannot rule out a contribution of other exposures that are correlated to DDT, including other unmeasured DDT metabolites. However, we were able to account for the DDTs that are present in the highest concentration in women.<br />Small sample This study investigates the first cases observed in CHDS daughters.Althoughthesamplesizewasadequatetoobserve a sizable association with in utero DDT, we are unlikely to have had the power to observe smaller associations with other risk factors or synergy among variables. To date, incompletedataontumorpathologylimitstheinterpretation ofthecorrelationbetweenDDTandtumorswithmoreaggressive features.<br />Summary Weobservedasizable,statisticallysignificantassociation betweeninuteroDDTexposureandriskofbreastcancerin youngwomenandapossibleassociationwithmoreaggressive tumors. These findings are the first ever reported for a prospectiveobservationofalargepregnancycohort.Experimentalstudiesareessentialtoconfirmfindingsanddiscover causalmechanisms.Ifconfirmed,thesefindingscouldleadto discoveryofbiomarkersandinterventionsforDDT-associatedbreastcancer.Ourfindingsarerelevanttotheinternational debate on the costs and benefits of DDT use for malaria control.<br />Acknowledgments<br />We acknowledge the late Jacob Yerushalmy, who founded the ChildHealthandDevelopmentStudiescohort;thelateBarbara van den Berg, the second Director of the Child Health and Development Studies; and her colleague, Roberta Christianson, who ensured its quality and longevity.<br />Addressallcorrespondenceandrequestsforreprintsto:Barbara A. Cohn, PhD, Child Health and Development Studies, 1683 Shattuck Avenue, Suite B, Berkeley, CA 94709. E-mail: bcohn@chdstudies.org. Thepointofviewandconclusionsexpressedinthispaperare thoseoftheauthorsanddonotnecessarilyrepresenttheofficial position or policies of the funding agencies. The ideas and opinions expressed herein are those of the author(s)andendorsementbytheStateofCalifornia,Department of Public Health the National Cancer Institute, and the Centers forDiseaseControlandPreventionortheircontractorsandsubcontractorsoranyofthefundersofthisresearchisnotintended nor should be inferred.<br /> ','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-09 22:17:28','2015-09-09 22:17:28',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15667,3277,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your paper.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-09 23:20:54','2015-09-09 23:20:54',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15668,144,3286,'Hello! This text is for different pages of my web,<br />so paragraphs in this text are not suppose to go one after another,<br />no need to tide them together by meanings of discribed info:)<br />If you want you could look my web for pages\' text.<br /><br /><a href=\"http://www.happy-art.us\">www.happy-art.us<br /><br />T</a>hank you very much!<br />Lana Titarenko<br />Happy Art','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-09 23:21:33','2015-09-09 23:21:33',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15669,3223,65,'Here is the short file.<br /><br />I cannot do anything with the longer text included in the Client Comments unless you submit it as a regular project.<br /><br />Even if I could do something now, the time frame is too short.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-09 23:36:01','2015-09-09 23:36:01',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15670,2699,144,'Thank you, Shannon, for the opportunity to read and edit your statement. Are you returning to college? How exciting if that\'s the case.<br /><br />As always, ratings are much appreciated.<br /><br />Warm Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-09 23:39:45','2015-09-09 23:39:45',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15671,541,3275,'','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-10 00:38:23','2015-09-10 00:38:23',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15672,1772,3275,'','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-10 00:40:14','2015-09-10 00:40:14',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15673,3286,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit these excerpts from your website.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best of Success in your endeavors,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-10 00:46:53','2015-09-10 00:46:53',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15674,3270,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your essay.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-10 01:03:55','2015-09-10 01:03:55',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15675,1439,3287,'Hello, <br /><br />It looks like you have experience writing legal documents. Could you please help me with this short statement? I would consider it is as partial legal document where I need to convince the USCIS to approve my visa application with business purpose. I need help with word choices and a bit of grammar to make it sounds more persuasive and more professional. Please feel free to send me messages with any questions. I have one week from now to complete this statement, and it is vital for my business, so I really hope to get it right the first time and not having to do back and forth editing. Since I do not have much time flexibility, please ask me if anything is unclear. Thank you very much for your help. I look forward to hearing back from you. <br /><br />Regards, <br /><br />Anh','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-10 01:07:13','2015-09-10 01:07:13',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15676,3219,904,'Hi. Moving along on Chapter 2 and should have it in your hands tomorrow. Has your bride seen Chapter 1?','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-10 01:41:48','2015-09-10 03:10:19',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15677,904,3219,'Not yet...I am chasing her up on it!<br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-10 03:10:51','2015-09-10 05:20:26',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15678,3213,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your revised prospectus.<br /><br />As always, ratings are much appreciated.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-10 03:28:18','2015-09-10 08:05:54',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15679,541,2606,'<p>I would like for the editor to edit the course descriptions for sentence structure, grammar, conciseness as well as making sure the course description corresponds with the learning objectives. All learning objectives should show action (Bloom Taxonomy). Each new course description begins with a title in<strong> bold</strong>.<br /><br />Thanks</p>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-10 03:38:44','2015-09-10 03:38:44',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15680,541,2606,'I would like for the editor to edit the course descriptions for sentence structure, grammar, conciseness, as well as making sure the course descriptions corresponds with the learning objectives. All learning objectives should begin with an action verb (Bloom Taxonomy). Each new course description begins with a title in <strong>bold</strong> print.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-10 03:59:24','2015-09-10 03:59:24',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15681,454,2659,'Hi,<br /><br />This is for my grad class in ecology. This article that I got was original peer review research. My criteria is 5-6 sentences on the most important findings in the paper, not the methods or approaches they used. What is significant about the research and be specific enough to distinguish it from another in the same field. 5-6 sentences each on major strengths/major weakness in the article and provide support. 1-2 sentences why this reading is relevant to class.<br /><br />Along with making sure I hit the mark, I\'d like to make sure I\'m concise with good flow. Of course also any grammar issues or hard to understand sentences are fixed.  My add prevents me from seeing many of these things unfortunately, so thanks in advance.<br /><br />Stephanie Platt ','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-10 04:01:15','2015-09-10 04:01:15',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15682,2259,454,'Hello, Taka. Please see comment within doc--I need to make sure I understand what the author meant before I finalize the edit.<br /><br />Thank you!<br /><br />Laura','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-10 04:32:50','2015-09-10 04:44:36',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15683,454,2259,'Hello Laura,<br />Thank you for the comment and the message.<br />I will check with the author and get back to you when I hear from her.<br />Thank you,<br />Taka','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-10 04:48:28','2015-09-10 07:26:43',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15684,2659,454,'Thank you!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-10 04:55:06','2015-09-10 04:55:06',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15685,2412,1772,'Read over it and make sure that the changes I made still make sense for what you mean for the paper to say. In the footnotes, I added page numbers as placeholders to some of the entries, but you\'ll need to find the actual page numbers (for the Mack entry, etc.).','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-10 05:50:44','2015-09-10 05:50:44',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15686,2745,2083,'Hello! <br /><br />For this document, I focused on ensuring that grammar ran in a smooth, coherent fashion both within and between sentences. I looked primarily on eliminating passive voice, as well as putting proper headings for each section. I left several comments on the side througout the document either explaining certain edits or offering suggestions for your consideration, so be sure to look out for those. Feel free to message me if you have any questions, and please don\'t forget to rate my service! Thanks. =)','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-10 06:34:33','2015-09-12 07:32:39',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15687,2659,454,'You\'re welcome!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-10 07:25:56','2015-09-10 07:25:56',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15688,2259,454,'Great. Thank you, Taka.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-10 07:27:15','2015-09-10 08:16:48',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15689,144,3213,'Hello,<br />Thanks for editing my paper. I wanted to know if I addressed the professor\'s comments in my paper. If not, what section do I need to revise?','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-10 08:04:44','2015-09-10 14:23:56',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15690,144,3213,'You are welcome. I want to know if I addressed the professor\'s comments, if not, what sections do I need to revise','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-10 08:06:55','2015-09-10 14:23:10',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15691,144,3257,'<p>Hello,</p><p>I am applying to the University of Illinois School of Medicine, but this is not an admissions essay. The school wants me to answer the following prompt:</p><p><b>\"<b>Describe a situation in which you were really stressed.  Tell us how you dealt with it.  Please detail your reaction(s), and how it affected you.  If this situation, or a similar one, were to happen again, how would you handle it?</b></b><b>\"</b></p><p>I have attached a document which contains my response to the following prompt. That being said, there are a few things I need addressed by the editor.</p><p>1) I am about 150 words over the word limit on this document (250 word limit). If you could please help me decrease the word count, while retaining the meaning of the content, that would be great. If you can eliminate redundancy, restructure complex sentences into more simple ones, etc... to make the document more concise, that would be ideal. Overall, I would like you to remove anything that you think does not directly ANSWER the above prompt. Also, I would like you to remove anything that you think does not add anything productive to the response and is just \"fluff\".</p><p>2) I want to ensure my grammar and word choice is perfect.</p>Thank you very much!<br /><br />PS: Please send me a comment if you believe my response does not accurately answer the prompt fully. Thanks again. ','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-10 09:17:58','2015-09-10 09:17:58',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15692,904,3259,'This is our features list for our subscription plans. It will be used on our website and for printed materials. <br />I just needed to have someone clean it up.<br /><br />Thanks,','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-10 12:23:34','2015-09-10 12:23:34',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15693,3213,144,'You do not address any of the comments, all of which are related to a basic and clear statement of the problem at the local/rural level. We don\'t have any idea why you are studying this pop. of students in this school, in this state. In other words, you have not provided any justification for your study, or its purpose or significance','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-10 14:31:23','2015-09-10 23:05:43',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15694,3257,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit this statement. 250 words exactly! Whew. I didn\'t think I\'d be able to pare it down enough, but you can\'t say it\'s not concise :)<br /><br />As always, ratings are much appreciated.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-10 15:04:18','2015-09-10 15:04:18',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15695,65,1090,'hi again,<br />Do you mind checking the following sentences (just three sentences) to see any better ways to express, etc...As usual, I\'ll send some more documents submitted online to you later around late Sept or Oct.<br />Look forward to hearing from you. thanks in advance.<br /><br />1. I plan to foster __ to grow in terms of research productivities (publications, presentations, experiences in writing research proposals). <br /><br />2. I aim to produce high quality papers (e.g. at least two papers per year), present research outcomes in national and international conferences, and have research grants. <br /><br />3.&nbsp;&nbsp;I also plan to develop new __ modules in the cutting-edge multidisciplinary area where my research is introduced into __ for them to be highly motivated in learning and consider STEM as their future careers and/or engaged in research activities for their professional growth.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-10 15:41:10','2015-09-10 16:16:32',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15696,1090,65,'Hope these suggestions are helpful.<br /><br />\r\n<p>1. I plan to foster __ to grow in terms of research productivities (publications, presentations, experiences in writing research proposals).&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>I plan to explore (____) to increase my research productivity, specifically in the numbers of publications, presentations, and research proposals.</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>2. I aim to produce high quality papers (e.g. at least two papers per year), present research outcomes in national and international conferences, and have research grants.&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>My goal is to produce at least two high-quality papers per year, present my research results at national and international conferences, and receive research grants.</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>3.&nbsp;&nbsp;I also plan to develop new __ modules in the cutting-edge multidisciplinary area where my research is introduced into __ for them to be highly motivated in learning and consider STEM as their future careers and/or engaged in research activities for their professional growth.</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>I also plan to introduce new (____) modules into my cutting-edge multidisciplinary area to highly motivate others into learning more about STEM and considering it as a career or at least as research activities that support their professional growth.</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-10 16:32:26','2015-09-10 18:09:32',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15697,454,3289,'Dear WRITEAID,<br /><br />thank you so much for proving this free sample service. I\'m a writer from Asia with English as my second language and would like to submit this chapter of writing to you for editing. <br /><br />This is actually a scene where the female character(Xiao Ying)&nbsp; meet her love interest in a grocery store, after sneaking away from her mum because she is bored of recuperating at home. <br /><br />I wanted to make this into a romantic subplot, where she bump into the Male lead not knowing that he\'s the gynecologist that carry her to the hospital bed, after she fainted at his department for a checkup.<br /><br />I would love to know if the settings(grocery store) is too bland for the romantic subplot and how should I write to make it more exciting and more romantic.<br /><br />Thank you!<br /><br />Warmest regards,<br /><br />Ying','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-10 18:00:49','2015-09-10 18:00:49',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15698,541,3289,'Dear EDITWRITE,<br /><br />thank you for proving this service. I would like to refine and make my writing more concise in this scene. This is the scene when the female lead discover that her doctor is actually the man she met in the grocery store that saved her from moving trolleys.<br /><br />I want to know how to make it more alive more emotional (he\'s telling her she\'s infertile in the scene) and less long-winded. Please guide me on how to change it and make the english in it better.<br /><br />Thank you.<br /><br />Warmest regards,<br /><br />Ying','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-10 18:11:22','2015-09-10 18:11:22',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15699,65,1090,'This is great suggestion. Thanks a million!','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-10 18:17:56','2015-09-10 18:23:44',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15700,3280,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your very interesting paper. They are spin doctors extraordinaire in a schizophrenic industry.<br /><br />I thought the arguments came across very well, no problems there.<br /><br />I forgot what you said about the references and edited those as well. I\'ve noted where there is missing info either w/ highlighting or a comment.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-10 18:59:14','2015-09-10 18:59:14',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15701,2706,904,'Here is a sample of how my editing can help make your paper even better than it is, which is quite good. Just submit your paper if you want it all edited.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-10 19:10:17','2015-09-10 19:10:17',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15702,3276,904,'Ylour writing is good and I\'d be happy to help make your paper as good as it can be. Just submit it through Editor World and I\'ll get to work on it.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-10 19:15:03','2015-09-10 19:51:07',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15703,144,3220,'Please make this document as readable as possible -- bulleted lists, numbered lists, bolding, subheaders -- so the reader can scan and find relevant information for their project. <br /><br />It\'s going to live on this website when finished:<br /><br />http://www.homeadvisor.com/emc.Windows-directory.-12080.html','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-10 20:32:19','2015-09-10 20:32:19',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15704,904,3220,'Please make this document as readable and scannable as possible. Use bulleted or numbered lists, bolding, subheaders or underlining whenever needed so the reader can find relevant information to their project quickly and easily. <br /><br />The information will live on this page when complete:<br /><br />http://www.homeadvisor.com/emc.Cleaning-Maid-Services-directory.-12014.html','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-10 20:38:47','2015-09-10 20:38:47',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15705,144,3290,'Hi,<br />English is my second language. I am preparing my research grant. This is a part of my research aims.&nbsp;<br />Thanks. I look forward to your feedback.<br />Jun','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-10 20:56:57','2015-09-10 20:56:57',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15706,65,617,'Hi again!<br /><br />Please edit my document. <br />I am particulary looking for rewording/improving the first paragraph as I think it doesn\'t make a complete sense to the native reader. Let me know if the whole document has any grammatical or structural issues. <br /><br />Thanks a lot!<br />Mia','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-10 21:42:51','2015-09-10 21:42:51',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15707,3290,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your sample.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-10 21:43:36','2015-09-10 21:43:36',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15708,144,3213,'What do you suggest?','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-10 23:06:45','2015-09-11 00:37:27',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15709,144,3213,'What do you suggest?','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-10 23:06:47','2015-09-10 23:06:47',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15710,144,3213,'What do you suggest?','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-10 23:06:49','2015-09-10 23:06:49',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15711,3276,484,'Hello! I gave you a sample edit of the first three paragraphs. The text is mostly well written and executed, so it did not require significant changes. Let me know if you need additional help/editing with this project.<br /><br />Thank you','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-10 23:07:50','2015-09-10 23:11:19',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15712,3213,144,'I have no suggestions except to think about why you are conducting this study and what the rural problem is that you are addressing. I would recommend that you discuss it with your advisor.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-11 00:38:50','2015-09-11 00:38:50',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15713,2424,65,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-11 01:09:49','2015-09-11 01:09:49',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15714,2699,144,'Hello Shannon,<br /><br />For some reason, this doesn\'t look like something you would write??? But in any case, thank you for the opportunity to read and edit it.<br /><br />As always, your kind ratings are much appreciated.<br /><br />All the Best,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-11 01:11:24','2015-09-11 01:11:24',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15715,617,65,'Elegant.<br /><br />I included a text with all changes input at the end of the document.<br /><br />Wonderful tone throughout.&nbsp;<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-11 01:23:54','2015-09-11 01:23:54',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15716,144,2957,'Please edit, thank you.<br /><br />Ling Ling','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-11 02:13:58','2015-09-11 02:13:58',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15717,454,3255,'I own and operate a movie review website, and these are a collection of 8 of my most recent reviews.  AMovieGuy.com has been around for about 4 years, and due to traction, my sloppy editing is no longer doing the trick.  Some things that I can use help with is creativity with adjectives, flow, and punctuation.  Provided that this works out, I have over 300 reviews that need editing, in addition to my new reviews each week!','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-11 02:25:36','2015-09-11 05:24:09',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15718,2424,65,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-11 04:24:55','2015-09-11 04:24:55',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15719,3255,454,'Haven\'t completed your doc yet, but I want to let you know I am very excited. Big movie fan--can\'t wait to get to it!<br /><br />Thanks for landing on my profile.<br /><br />Laura','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-11 05:25:33','2015-09-11 05:41:01',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15720,454,3255,'Fantastic! This may be a great fit! I was hoping to choose someone who has a passion for film, as that always comes through.&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-11 05:42:20','2015-09-11 07:02:07',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15721,1541,3213,'Hello,<br />I am messaging you to see if you can help me revise this document before paying. I have recieved comment from my professor stated certain items that should be included in the document, but I am unsure of the specifics. I have revised this document and only need pages 2-3 revised/edited. I ill send you a message with the professor comments','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-11 06:22:51','2015-09-11 07:25:33',NULL,'upload_55f23afbc242e5.75580398_Prospectus_template_1(prospectusrevised)9-11-2015.docx','Prospectus_template_1(prospectusrevised)9-11-2015.docx'),
	(15722,1541,3213,'Here are my professor\'s comments','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-11 06:25:26','2015-09-11 07:27:06',NULL,'upload_55f23b96e89591.14038921_coomentsREVDrMcClure.docx','coomentsREVDrMcClure.docx'),
	(15723,904,3219,'Hi Arnie,<br />How are you making out?<br />I will send chapter 3 as soon as I receive Chapter 2. Phoebe is reviewing Capter one still...her first comment was there was not a lot of changes from her perspective. That sounds good to me!<br />Andrew<br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-11 06:36:37','2015-09-11 16:47:59',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15724,3213,1541,'If you would like, I can certainly edit pages 2-3 for style and clarity. As for the content, however, I cannot alter it and am thus unable to add the information your professor is asking you to provide. You would need to address his specific questions and comments yourself. Best of luck to you!','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-11 07:30:57','2015-09-11 10:07:30',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15725,454,3255,'Looking to edit another movie review like my previous submissions. ','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-11 08:49:17','2015-09-11 08:49:17',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15726,1541,3213,'Can you offer suggestion on what it is I am missing because I am unsure&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-11 10:09:10','2015-09-11 17:59:52',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15727,904,3292,'Hi there,<br /><br />Please you please help me with the grammar, follow, word, and sentence. Making it more English native.<br />This is a work I am going to submit to academic website.<br /><br />Many thanks,<br /><br />Best regards,<br /><br />Yu-Hua<br /><br />','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-11 11:25:11','2015-09-11 11:25:11',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15728,144,3293,'I just need it cleaned up. Also, I need to get it down to 600-800 words. It is currently at 907, so if you see unneccessary things, feel free to cut them. Around the 800 mark would be perfect. <br /><br />Thank you,<br />Iqra','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-11 17:39:36','2015-09-11 17:39:36',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15729,65,617,'Hi,<br /><br />Thanks so very much for your great work and kindness. I truly appreciate the&nbsp;comments you made on my work. I would really like to continue our business as I have more to come this season.&nbsp;<br /><br />Best Regards,<br />Mia','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-11 17:53:52','2015-09-11 17:59:32',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15730,617,65,'Mia,<br /><br />Thank you for your kind words.<br /><br />I look forward to continuing to work with you.<br /><br />Jackson<br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-11 18:01:32','2015-09-13 15:40:43',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15731,2745,2083,'Hello again! <br /><br />As with the previous document, I focused on grammar, eliminating passive voice, and ensuring that the sentences were flowing and clear. As before, I left several comments on the side througout the document either explaining certain edits or offering suggestions for your consideration, so be sure to look out for those. Feel free to message me if you have any questions, and please don\'t forget to rate my service! Thanks. =)','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-11 18:51:31','2015-09-11 18:51:31',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15732,2424,65,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-11 18:52:08','2015-09-11 18:52:08',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15733,65,3294,'Please rewrite these sentance and try to eliminate redundance vocabularies.  ','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-11 18:55:44','2015-09-11 18:55:44',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15734,3287,1439,'Hello and thank you for your submission! You did a good job here, I just made a few adjustments for grammar and flow. I doubt you will need another draft, so rest assured. Nice work.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-11 19:01:45','2015-09-11 19:01:45',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15735,1541,754,'<div>Dear Editor,</div>\r\n<div>&nbsp;I have paid for the edit&nbsp;for my manuscript soon (I choice you as the editor). But the last web page said there is something wrong in the deal. And I have not accept any message in my account. I Don\'t know if it is right to connect you. Please tell me who can I ask to deal this problem.</div>','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-11 19:20:04','2015-09-11 19:22:53',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15736,3219,904,'Hi Andrew:<br /><br />Four pages to go. I\'ll send it in a couple of hours. And I guess I\'d better not call you Andy.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-11 20:05:28','2015-09-11 21:33:42',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15737,2606,541,'Fluent, professional and concise. A pleasure to read.&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-11 20:10:42','2015-09-11 20:10:42',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15738,3294,65,'Have reworded and restructured, as requested.<br /><br />Thank you.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-11 20:28:14','2015-09-11 20:34:29',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15739,2424,65,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-11 20:39:44','2015-09-11 20:39:44',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15740,904,3219,'Ha!','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-11 21:34:03','2015-09-11 22:01:55',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15741,3220,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your website text. I had fun trying to make this \'pop.\' Of course it will really come together as you and your web master work on a color palette, at which time you will probably want to change the colors of the bullets. However, I think that colored bullets give a better effect.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-11 21:46:24','2015-09-11 21:46:24',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15742,2957,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your piece.<br /><br />As always, ratings are much appreciated.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-11 21:48:12','2015-09-11 21:48:12',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15743,65,3295,'Greetings,<br /><br />Please edit the following sections. <br />Section 1 - first page (introduction and backgound)<br />Section 2 - complete<br />Section 2 - complete except for the last page \"flow chart of methodology\" <br /><br />This is a working document for a dissertation at Fuller Theological Seminary - Chicago Style of Writing. <br /><br />The main things I am interested in are: Academic language usage, grammar, sentence structure and anything else you suggest (-: <br />Spanish is my first language. <br /><br />I need this by 6pm today - limited time today. <br />Hopefully you will be able to do it but let me know otherwise. <br /><br />Thank You and regards, <br /><br />','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-11 22:02:46','2015-09-11 22:02:46',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15744,144,3296,'this is a part of my personal statement I am trying to get it edited I thought you would be the best person who can help me to express myself <br />This 1st para is true incident that happened to me when I was young that is what made me to pursue medical career <br />I am now applying for residency. English is my second language. I was express my thought and story in a nice smooth readable manner <br />also please feel free to correct the gramitical errors and I will submit you my final summary once I get this sample back <br />thanks','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-11 22:07:39','2015-09-11 22:07:39',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15745,1709,3296,'Hi, <br />I was browsing through the editor profiles and I found it very interesting that you claim that you have experience in editing the medical research<br />I am currently in medical school and planning to apply for residency <br />This is the part of my personal statement. Here&nbsp;I am describing about a case that really inspired to me to pursue the internal medicine and then smooth trasition to my strengths and my expectations from the program. I want to express my thoughts carefully and effectively and so I need your help. <br />English is my second language, <br />thanks','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-11 22:20:09','2015-09-11 22:20:09',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15746,3293,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your personal statement. I have cut it to 800 words.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best of success in your endeavors,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-11 22:42:51','2015-09-11 22:42:51',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15747,2699,144,'Hi Shannon,<br /><br />Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit another of your pieces.<br /><br />As you know well by now, I always appreciate your ratings :)<br /><br />All the best,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-11 22:44:01','2015-09-11 22:44:01',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15748,3270,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit this piece.<br /><br />As always, if you could take a moment to rate my work, I would be grateful.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-11 22:56:10','2015-09-11 22:56:10',NULL,NULL,NULL);

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	(15749,65,3297,'Hi TEXTPRO,<br /><br />Here is one of my application essays that I need some help. Attached the prompt below:<br /><br />\"There is much discussion regarding multicultural competency and diversity within veterinary education. What does this mean to you? How might you add to the diversity of the program? Why is diverse population important in a classroom setting and perhaps in your work life? Please feel free to share personal stories as examples.\"<br /> <br />Thanks!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-11 23:19:57','2015-09-11 23:19:57',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15750,3296,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your sample.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-11 23:30:31','2015-09-11 23:30:31',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15751,904,2066,'Disappointed not to have received back from you the two documents we uploaded on Wednesday. Please advise','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-12 00:24:56','2015-09-12 00:29:41',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15752,2066,904,'Not due until midnight tonight, but I\'ll return them edited shortly.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-12 00:30:14','2015-09-12 00:37:36',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15753,2066,904,'Here\'s one. The other one will follow shortly.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-12 01:11:13','2015-09-12 01:11:13',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15754,454,1792,'<p>Hi Laura,</p>\r\n<p>Glad you liked &ldquo;The Morning-After Card,&rdquo; and as always thanks for your edits and contributions.&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>Wanted you to know that I have been writing a piece on the San Diego guy\'s orientation day at Bernie&rsquo;s Bagel shop (so he can take over when Bernie goes to Cleveland). I expect it to be about 6 to 7+K words. I&rsquo;ve had to take time to understand how commercial quantity bagels are made and the times involved: make dough, chill dough, boil dough, shape bagel, bake bagel.&nbsp; As a result, I have added another character, young woman, bagel baker, who the San Diego guy meets as he comes in for his orientation day at Bernie&rsquo;s, and she is leaving from baking bagels all night.&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>Also, I am working on a timeline for this story. As you know, there is no reference to computers, cell phones, internet&hellip;a deliberate effort. There are a few instances where the period of time may be determined (e.g. bus fare amount from Scranton to Syracuse.) &nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>There can be a reference point for this story, however: Tuesday, May 6,1997, the first time inductions were made into the Rock and Roll Hall of Fame in Cleveland. Prior to that LA and NYC were the induction cities. From that date, I can reconstruct dates for previous events (Joey&rsquo;s 16th birthday, etc). I have a timeline, based on the 5/5/97 date that can produce dates of earlier stories, if you like to see it. &nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>I&rsquo;m also writing a piece about the Smithereens last concert (held in Scranton on January 25, 1975 at the Masonic Temple Theatre in downtown Scranton (at actual place). Neal cuts a deal to bump Barry Manilow concert date for the Smithereens. Manilow actually played there. This is one piece that I am not sure if it helps or detracts from the story.</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>Another issue I am thinking about is that there are a number of voices in the 29 or 30 pieces that we have gone through.&nbsp; How do we not confuse the reader? Novel broken down in sections based on who is telling the story? There\'s a lot of back and forth between stories,and I am trying to write this thing as it, in an overall sense, progresses in time. Maybe it&rsquo;s one of those things that will be answered at the end, when we have 80k words or so to works with.</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>Hope I haven&rsquo;t taken too much of your time. Hope all s well.</p>\r\n<p>Thanks,</p>\r\n<p>Dan</p>','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-12 01:21:45','2015-09-12 01:47:25',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15755,3295,65,'I see that you are building a dissertation and have certainly chosen an interesting topic.<br /><br />I think I\'ve reviewed the requested sections (1, 2, 3), and if I\'ve missed any&nbsp;parts, let me know. <br /><br />Looking forward to seeing all of the missing parts in due time.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-12 01:26:31','2015-09-12 01:26:31',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15756,2066,904,'Nicely written. Sorry for the time misunderstanding.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-12 01:34:18','2015-09-12 01:34:18',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15757,3219,904,'I don\'t know what happened, but after I completed the editing, I rechecked and found that the computer had garbled several sections. I\'m in the process of ungarbling.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-12 01:37:04','2015-09-12 02:04:26',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15758,3259,904,'This is fine. Lower case usally works best because it is more readable.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-12 01:52:28','2015-09-12 01:52:28',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15759,1792,454,'Dan, please feel free to write anytime with anything that\'s on your mind. I appreciate this info, as it will definitely help with putting the story together. Send the timeline, too--that\'s often a hard thing to put together. I love the idea of the masonic temple Barry Manilow thing--sounds like it could be a hilarious addition. Aas far as the bagel baking girl, will she need to be inserted to all the pieces that are set at the bagelry? Or at least some--for continuity so she doesn\'t just pop up out of nowhere. I love that you did bagel research, too--those are the details that anchor good stories. I am dying for a good bagel. I grew up on Long Island, and something to do with the water they use makes the bagels the best!<br /><br />Keep going!<br />Laura','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-12 01:54:36','2015-09-12 02:00:22',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15760,2083,2745,'Thank you for your work. However, it seems like your understanding for socialization is somewhat different from what I have. Here is my definition for socialization: \"Socialization is &ldquo;the process by which persons acquire the knowledge, skills, and dispositions that make them more or less able members of their society.&rdquo; Can you please check your edited draft again?<br /><br />Jongwook','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-12 01:59:59','2015-09-12 02:19:04',NULL,'upload_55f34edf2561c2.66378910_EW_63365_edited.docx','EW_63365_edited.docx'),
	(15761,1090,856,'Hello, Dr. Joo - Here\'s the short one.&nbsp; Let me know if you have questions. I\'ll look forward to more next week or so. &nbsp;RebeccaTDE','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-12 02:06:09','2015-09-12 04:27:33',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15762,904,3219,'I noticed last chapter you sent letters that should have been gone needed to be removed...because they had remained after your edit..I do not know if that was just an oversight...Hopefully it is fixed moving forward...saves the triple edit...because most of my fixes were just small little oversights during the edit process.<br />Thanks Arnie,<br />Andrew<br /><br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-12 02:08:06','2015-09-12 03:21:23',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15763,904,3219,'I noticed last chapter you sent letters that should have been gone needed to be removed...because they had remained after your edit..I do not know if that was just an oversight...Hopefully it is fixed moving forward...saves the triple edit...because most of my fixes were just small little oversights during the edit process.<br />Thanks Arnie,<br />Andrew<br /><br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-12 02:08:10','2015-09-12 03:22:05',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15764,2745,2083,'Hello!&nbsp;<br /><br />Would you mind referring to a specific moment in the text that you\'re having trouble with? There were moments that I changed \"socialization\" to \"socialize\" for grammatical purposes, but I can\'t seem to find a particular moment when the text deviates from the definition you mentioned. Thanks! =)&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-12 02:21:48','2015-09-12 02:31:06',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15765,3275,1772,'I look forward to the opportunity to work with you in the future.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-12 03:14:27','2015-09-12 03:14:27',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15766,3220,904,'This is nicely done. But I think you need to clarify how the cost is determined -- working time,&nbsp;travel time, square footage, number of rooms?&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-12 03:19:19','2015-09-12 03:19:19',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15767,3297,65,'Good essay. Flows well now. Just accept all of the changes and then review/revise.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-12 04:32:28','2015-09-12 04:32:28',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15768,2424,65,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-12 04:39:01','2015-09-12 04:39:01',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15769,1709,2537,'Hi there,<br /><br />This is a journal submission cover letter. Please check for any grammatical error, and sentence clarity. Feel free to reword the sentences if they are not clear.<br /><br />Thanks,','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-12 04:47:51','2015-09-12 04:47:51',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15770,1709,3296,'Hi, <br />I have looked at your profile regarding lot of experience in medical research related writing. <br />I have choosed you to  edit my personal statement I need a smooth flow of the story in the 1st para, <br />2nd para slow transition to the my journey through my medical school and my medical case that inspired me to perceive internal medicine as my career. <br />3rd para is about my clinical rotations in us that made me to apply for residency in us <br />4rt para my positives and strengths <br />5th my expectations about the programs I will be looking out for<br />I want a clear expression of my thought process. and also smooth transition of my story, <br />The incident I described was a true story in my life<br />If you have any questions please let me know. <br />thanks ','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-12 05:57:14','2015-09-12 05:57:14',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15771,856,1090,'hi,<br />I have a few questions regarding your comments. Can you please answer to my questions below? thanks in advance<br /><br />\r\n<p>RM2: Whose future mentors? Who are the mentors and who are the mentees? I&rsquo;ve just taken this out because I don&rsquo;t understand it and it seems a bit superfluous, but if you want to include it, suggest you clarify.<br /><br />My response: I meant to say that by involving graduate students interacting with teachers would enable for graduates to learn the skill necessary to teach students since graduates are likely to be teachers/mentors in their future careers. So then how would you suggest to write this in a clear and concise way? Can you provide me suggested sentences? <br /><br />Lastly, there are no comments on the sentences in the figure (see the last page). Did you also check all the words/sentences in the figure to make sure there are free of errors?<br /><br /></p>\r\n<p>RM6: Please clarify this. What is going to be done and who is going to do it? What do you mean by \"precedent\" here? Do you mean that extraction of MNPs will precede the laboratory practice? The phrase \"translate laboratory practice\" does not make sense to me.<br /><br />My response: What I meant to say here is that &ldquo;Extraction of MNPs from the three model products will come first and these experiences (laboratory practices) will enable teachers to bring into this course module. So do you think the above sentence now makes sense? Or do you see it still needs a revision?<br /><br />Lastly there is a figure (please see the last page) and inside the figure there are no comments and wonder if you ahve checked all the words.sentences in the figure? Can you please let me know on this too?<br /><br /><br /><br /><br /></p>','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-12 06:37:53','2015-09-12 06:45:14',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15772,65,3297,'Hi TextPro,<br /><br />First, thank you for the previous editing, and it was a great work! I have put more of my essays together, and the prompts are included in the file (in red color). Please feel free to provide you comments - I will highly appreciate your feedback, especially for my personal statement! Thanks a lot. <br /><br />P.S. I hope the essays won\'t overwhelm you! Thanks!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-12 06:43:59','2015-09-12 06:43:59',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15773,3289,454,'Hello, Ying,<br /><br />I love your piece! I converted the file to MSWord to edit it, and then I converted it back to a PDF. I am going to send you a message with the word file as well, because you won\'t be able to read my comments in the PDF version. If you have the capability to work in Word, it would help a lot!<br /><br />Thank you very much for allowing me to work on your piece.<br /><br />Laura Kenney','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-12 06:46:31','2015-09-12 06:46:31',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15774,3289,454,'Here is the MS Word version :)','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-12 06:49:29','2015-09-12 07:52:36',NULL,'upload_55f392b9b3b5d3.31135256_FSEW_63351.docx','FSEW_63351.docx'),
	(15775,1541,3248,'<p>This paper has already received comments from the reviewers. One reviewer suggests improving the English writing of the paper as: \"Overall, the level of English writing in the paper needs serious improvement. Please check the grammar throughout the paper. But more importantly,  improve paragraph writing and sentence structuring. Currently, the manuscript is hard to read, also because of the use of acronyms throughout the text (so avoid unnecessary acronyms). Check consistency of tenses\".<br /> <br /> I have already revised the paper according to the reviewers\' comments and tried to improve the English writing. Please refer to the comments above and help to improve the English language of the paper.</p>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-12 06:54:31','2015-09-12 06:54:31',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15776,1090,856,'Yes, I did look at the figure, although I am not able to make any corrections inside of it.&nbsp; You might consider making the A in&nbsp;\"Evaluations and Assessments\" lower case, to conform with the other titles in this figure.&nbsp; <br /><br />Suggest:&nbsp; \"research into classroom learning. Involving graduate students in interactions&nbsp;with teachers would enable graduates to learn important teaching and mentoring skills that they can carry forward into their own careers.&nbsp; More...\"<br /><br />Suggest&nbsp;switching the last 2 bullet points&nbsp;for Module 1 and revising&nbsp;as follows:\r\n<ul>\r\n<li>Various extraction methods and validation approaches will be introduced and the pros and cons discussed in terms of different size and morphology.</li>\r\n<li>Following extraction of MNPs from the model products, the significance of MNPs in consumer products will be discussed, with material that will be presented by teachers and students who participated in the summer research.</li>\r\n</ul>\r\n<p>I don\'t see exactly why you need to include a reference to \"laboratory practice,\" but if you need to do so, you could add a sentence.&nbsp; \"In this way, laboratory practice will be seamlessly integrated into the module.\"<br /><br />Hope this answers your questions! RebeccaTDE</p>','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-12 07:10:21','2015-09-12 07:51:10',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15777,3255,454,'Hi!<br /><br />I hope you don\'t mind that I worked on this one first--I\'m a big M. Night fan and couldn\'t resist! Please take all and any edits knowing that they can be rejected or accepted. And please feel free to let me know if you have any questions. <br /><br />Thanks!<br /><br />Laura','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-12 07:26:39','2015-09-12 08:23:42',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15778,2083,2745,'Thank you for your help. I re-read your revisions and it looks good to me. I have a question for the first sentence as below. <br /><br />\"This study provides a deeper understanding of mentoring and the socialization process among doctoral students.\" &nbsp;&nbsp;<br /><br />You used the term, \"among\" instead of \"of\" but how about using \"for\"? Because I&nbsp;examined mentoring between advisors and their doctoral students, which is a socialization process for doctoral students.<br /><br />Again, thank you for your great work.&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-12 07:40:53','2015-09-12 08:49:56',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15779,856,1090,'yes, I like your suggestion. One last thing, can you answer to my questions below? thanks in advance.<br /><br />\r\n<p>Do you consider I should add &ldquo;the&rdquo; before \"release of MNPs\"? in the following sentence? &ldquo;what are the ways to minimize&nbsp;release of MNPs?</p>\r\n<p>Also in the following phase &ldquo;exposure of MNPs to aquatic organism? Should the &ldquo;aquatic organism&rdquo; be singular? OR, plural (e.g. organisms)??</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-12 08:17:49','2015-09-12 21:32:08',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15780,454,3255,'I love it!<br /><br />2 things:<br /><br />1. I tried to give you a 5 star review for it, and it loaded a 1 star review and won\'t change. That needs to be fixed, I want to give a stellar review! Since I like all of the edits, what is the next step? &nbsp;Do I go back to the original and copy your edits, or will we receive a final, edited copy that I can simply paste onto my website?<br /><br />Lastly, I think I will adopt the italicized format for movie names across all of my reviews, and eliminate the quotation marks. &nbsp;I have never known which it should be, so thank you for clearing that up!<br /><br />I look forward to seeing the other reviews submitted, and for continuing to work with you in the future!','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-12 08:27:38','2015-09-12 09:14:23',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15781,144,2875,'This is for my psychology class. It has to be 300 words.<br />Yalom described 11 therapeutic factors in his book.  Although all 11 factors are important for a positive group experience, which 1 factor do you feel trumps the others?','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-12 08:47:04','2015-09-12 08:47:04',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15782,454,3289,'Dear WriteAid,<br /><br />thank you so much for your valuable advice and for taking your time to painstaking edit my work. I really feel so touched by it....<br /><br />I love the way you edit the dialogue to make it come more alive. I\'ll be getting my paycheck at the end of the month and I\'ll finally be able pay for your great help to me.<br /><br />Thank you.<br /><br />Best regards,<br /><br />Ying','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-12 08:50:03','2015-09-12 09:24:30',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15783,3255,454,'Hi! That\'s so great--thank you! I\'ve asked the managing editor to take a look at the rating. I really appreciate it!<br /><br />If you accept all the changes in the doc, it will be a final, clean copy. You can do this under the review tab, track changes, accept all. Or you can accept/reject one by one. Also, if you\'d like to see what the final copy looks like before accepting changes, you can just hit no markup or final (this tab is different with different word versions).<br /><br />If you have trouble with ANY of this, let me know. I can always send you a copy with changes accepted.<br /><br />So glad you\'re happy! I look forward to reading your reviews--hope you don\'t mind if I go to your site!<br /><br />Laura','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-12 09:24:04','2015-09-12 19:35:18',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15784,3289,454,'You are very welcome! It\'s a great piece!????','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-12 09:25:06','2015-09-12 09:46:53',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15785,3289,454,'There shouldn\'t be any question marks in that last email! Sorry!','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-12 09:26:47','2015-09-12 09:47:17',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15786,454,3289,'Dear Laura,<br /><br />No worries! I\'m sorry that I\'ve just read your valuable comments on my work; this is intended for an European audience but sometimes I just mix up my words...So sorry about that.<br /><br />Thank you!<br /><br />Best regards,<br /><br />Ying','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-12 09:48:34','2015-09-12 12:03:22',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15787,144,3299,'I need help proofreading. I appreciate some commets and if something doesnt make sence I will also appreciate if you let me know. I am very excited to have found Editor World. I am looking forward to get your help for my future assigements.&nbsp;<br /><br />Thanks','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-12 10:03:33','2015-09-12 10:03:33',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15788,2424,65,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-12 18:29:14','2015-09-12 18:29:14',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15789,3219,904,'Hi, Andrew.<br /><br />You would not believe what the computer did to my document. I\'ve been going back and forth between the original and the screwed-up edited manuscript, which ate some parts and added others, trying to just correct those parts. Aagh. Methinks it\'ll be easier to just re-edit it, so it\'ll probably be tomorrow before I can send it to you. Very frustrating.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-12 19:13:30','2015-09-12 21:56:34',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15790,454,3255,'Ok wonderful! I\'ll let you know if I have any trouble. Please do visit the site! Since we will be working together for a while, the more familiar you are with my writing, the better!','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-12 19:37:37','2015-09-12 22:00:57',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15791,454,3255,'Alright, I have searched everywhere and cliked on everything, and I don\'t see a \"review tab\". The document is a read-only, and when I click the drop down on your comments, it only gives me the option to reply to you, or delete the comment.<br /><br />We are using Libre Office, which is a crappy Word clone. Could that be the problem?','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-12 19:48:26','2015-09-12 22:01:20',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15792,3297,65,'Let me know if you have any questions. Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-12 20:19:24','2015-09-12 20:19:24',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15793,3291,904,'This is fine. Glad I could help.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-12 20:24:04','2015-09-12 20:24:04',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15794,65,3297,'Hi TextPro,<br /><br />Thank you for your super effieient editing. It was great for both grammar fix and concept enhancement. However, this way makes all paragraph much longer, and I do have limitation on the number of words or characters. Will you be able to make the essays bit more concise? Thanks!','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-12 20:40:16','2015-09-12 20:44:38',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15795,3299,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your essay.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-12 20:40:40','2015-09-12 20:40:40',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15796,2875,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your assignment.<br /><br />As always, ratings are much appreciated.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-12 20:41:35','2015-09-14 07:07:47',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15797,3297,65,'I need to know the word counts for each section.<br /><br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-12 20:46:24','2015-09-12 21:00:47',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15798,2745,2083,'Hello!<br /><br />\"For\" would work as well. I used \"among\" to denote that the study fell within the scope of the academic community, but \"for\" works perfectly well too. Let me know if you have any other questions! Thanks. =)','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-12 20:49:37','2015-09-12 21:11:07',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15799,65,3297,'Hi TextPro,<br /><br />Thanks for your message. I have put the word/char limits after each prompt. I am sorry that I did not specify that in the beginning. Thanks!','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-12 21:07:39','2015-09-12 23:20:34',NULL,'upload_55f45bdb8382a4.85692076_EW_63418_edited.docx','EW_63418_edited.docx'),
	(15800,144,2386,'Dear Nianidoc,<br /><br />Thank you very much for editing my papers.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-12 21:30:06','2015-09-12 21:30:06',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15801,1090,856,'Hello again, Dr. Joo - With regard to first question, I would not add \"the\" - you don\'t need it, and in fact here you\'re talking about MNPs in general, yes? Given that, it\'s better to leave \"the\" out.<br /><br />Second, I couldn\'t find the phrase \"exposure of MNPs to aquatic organism\".&nbsp; I did see, in the schematic diagram Task 2,&nbsp;\"exposure of MNPs to aquatic environment.\" If this is what you\'re referring to, in this case because this is a phrase not in the text but in a table-like setting,&nbsp;the article&nbsp;would be optional.&nbsp; However, in Task 1 we have \"extraction of MNPs from the model products,\" and over in the other column I added \"an\" before&nbsp;\"aquatic\" under Module 2, you could add&nbsp;an article here, too&nbsp;- \"exposure of MNPs to an aquatic environment\" to be&nbsp;consistent.&nbsp; &nbsp; Rebecca TDE','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-12 21:43:41','2015-09-12 22:13:11',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15802,65,3039,'It is my comment on videos and question after reading Frobel\'s books. ','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-12 23:02:45','2015-09-12 23:02:45',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15803,2424,2083,'Hello! <br /><br />I left a few notes about contractions and whatnot, but nothing too major for this piece. Let me know if you have any questions! Thanks. =)','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-12 23:12:48','2015-09-13 00:45:30',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15804,3292,904,'It reads fine. Glad I could help.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-13 00:54:06','2015-09-13 00:54:06',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15805,3255,454,'Sure, that could be it. Can you send me a screen shot of the doc when it\'s open with the toolbar on top, if it has one? In the meantime, I\'ll send you the edited doc with changes accepted. Also, just so you know, I live in Hawaii (tough duty) so I am six hours behind EST--I don\'t want you to think I\'m taking my time in getting back to you!<br /><br />Thanks!','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-13 01:04:06','2015-09-13 03:40:00',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15806,2424,2083,'Hello! <br /><br />Nothing too much to remark upon here, just a few minor edits. Let me know if you have any questions! Thanks. =)','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-13 01:11:51','2015-09-13 05:36:55',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15807,2386,144,'Hello Daniel,<br /><br />Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit another of your pieces.<br /><br />As always, your kind ratings are much appreciated.<br /><br />All the Best,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-13 01:16:42','2015-09-13 01:16:42',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15808,3270,144,'Thank you, Samantha, for the opportunity to read and edit your paper.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-13 01:17:47','2015-09-13 01:17:47',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15809,3039,65,'Of course, I\'m at a disadvantage because I haven\'t seen the video.<br /><br />Suggest you skip the heavily edited text and look at page 2 with all the changes made.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-13 01:54:25','2015-09-13 01:54:25',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15810,3297,65,'So I made some cuts and now all the sections fit within the limits, as I\'ve noted in the comments.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-13 02:35:19','2015-09-13 06:57:36',NULL,'upload_55f4a8a7c68c61.24295372_EW_63418_edited2.docx','EW_63418_edited2.docx'),
	(15811,904,1280,'Please check the grammar part<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-13 03:02:33','2015-09-13 03:02:33',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15812,1021,2083,'Hello! <br /><br />For these test questions, I checked to make sure that each question was clear in what it was asking of the respondent. I left a few comments on the side either explaining certain edits or offering suggestions for your consideration, so be sure to look out for those. Feel free to message me if you have any questions, and please don\'t forget to rate my service! Thanks. =)','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-13 03:21:00','2015-09-13 03:21:00',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15813,3262,904,'Hello Steph.<br />Your writing is excellent and you\'re a wonderful storyteller -- and what a story you have to tell. I have read the entire paper through and I\'m in the process or re-reading it. I particularly want to make sure your&nbsp;tenses are consistent, your singulars and plurals&nbsp;are accurate, and your punctuation is right. This copy is completed only halfway; the rest will be completed tomorrow, and then I\'ll work on putting it into chapters. Back to you soon.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-13 03:24:50','2015-09-13 17:20:11',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15814,3219,904,'I just thought you\'s like to see what my computer did to me. I\'m halfway through editing it all over again. <br />Back tomorrow.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-13 03:32:46','2015-09-13 04:57:04',NULL,'upload_55f4b61e0e5e88.94765034_new document.doc','new document.doc'),
	(15815,777,65,'Apologies for being a bit late. Minor changes.<br /><br />Longer text to follow tomorrow morning.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-13 04:33:14','2015-09-13 04:33:14',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15816,144,2520,'Hello. Please find the attached file. The file included the structured abstract and executive summary of a manuscript. If you have any questions while editing, please let me know. Thanks for your work. Regards, <br /><br /> ','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-13 05:19:42','2015-09-13 05:19:42',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15817,904,1648,'This is for a radical political blog. It should be more or less in journalistic style.  Pleas, cut the unncessary words, and improve the pros to that it will be easy for a divers audiance to read. Feel free to ad better terms or phrases. I prefer more active voice.  It should be very forceful and provocative.  There might be repetiton.  If there is an transiton sentence needed, please make note or feel free to suggest.  cheers Jadon ','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-13 05:33:57','2015-09-13 05:33:57',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15818,2083,2424,'I did combine a couple of different ideas somewhat artificially. The first sentence was about her reluctance to share something personal with all my followers. (She didn\'t say \"followers\" (she didn\'t have to) plus I was trying to avoid the word, but it seems necessary for clarity. Then she gave an example of her being a very private person who is finding it hard to share something even with her band members. It\'s good to have you back. ','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-13 06:34:28','2015-09-13 06:34:28',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15819,65,2647,'This is not a formal document. I am just providing feedback on a short report I read. ','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-13 07:15:08','2015-09-13 07:15:08',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15820,65,2647,'I have submitted a short writing for your review, but it was not submitted as word document. I checked my attachment and it is missing part of my writing. Below is what I would like you to edit. It is not a formal paper, just &nbsp;feedback on the report I read. Please feel free to paste it in microsoft word document and submitted back to me as a microsoft word document. I just do not have access to microsoft words at this moment. Thank you so much for your help. And I am very sorry for the inconvenience.&nbsp;<br /><br />***************<br /><br />First of all, I really like the report. It is coherent and descriptive. I believe by reading it all the adjusters will have a clear understating of the change that will take place.<br /> <br /><strong>Feedback:</strong><br /><br /><strong>Create new assignment in ClaimCenter:</strong> Since we are not creating a &ldquo;real&rdquo; assignment in ClaimCenter I believe that, at first, this could be just a bit confusing to the adjusters. In the following tables you direct the user to &ldquo;Select Assignment Type - Adjuster Desk Review in ClaimCenter.&rdquo; Perhaps here you can also state it the same way you have stated below, but with directions on how to get to the &ldquo;Assignment Type&rdquo; screen, and informing the user early on of the type of assignment he/she will be creating in ClaimCenter. How about something like this?<br /> <br /><strong>Create new assignment in ClaimCenter</strong> (click on the &ldquo;Assessment&rdquo; tab and select &ldquo;Assignment Type&rdquo; &ndash; &ldquo;Adjuster Desk Review - Update&rdquo;).<br /> <br />Note: Before we can get to &ldquo;Assignment Type&rdquo; we have to click on &ldquo;Assessment&rdquo; tab.<br /> <br /><strong>New Information learned:</strong><br /> <br />If interested in DRP: I didn&rsquo;t know that the body shop will be contacting the customers to set up appointments. I thought that was done by ACE or CEI representatives. One suggestion I have for all of us adjusters (instead of relying on the shop) is calling the selected shop to schedule an appointment while we have the customer on the phone.<br /> It may take three extra minutes, but at least we know that the appointment is scheduled, and we will not get upset insureds and claimants calling us because they never heard from the shop. Additionally, it will save a phone call to the shop or the customer to confirm that the appointment has been scheduled. Moreover, by knowing when the appointment is we can create a more accurate diary to check if the estimate is ready to be paid in CCC. Here is how this can be done:<br /> <br />Before we can recommend a shop to a customer we have to make certain that the shop location is convenient for him/her. We cannot get to the list of the shops in a customer&rsquo;s area until we input his/her state and zip code into CCC&rsquo;s system. Thus, we have to keep the customer on the phone with us while searching for the shops in their area. Once the customer chooses the shop we can conference the shop to advise of the assignment, and schedule an appointment.<br /> <br /><strong>Question:</strong> <br /> <br />For example, if ACE or CEI find a lot of red flags while reviewing an estimate from a DRR or non DRP shop, and they believe we should send out an independant appraiser (IA) for inspection, do they submit the assignment to an IA, or will they ask for our permission first?<br /> <br />Some representatives from our prior vendor services would email me to ask for permission to assign an IA others just assigned one without permission.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-13 07:30:16','2015-09-13 15:36:02',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15821,65,2647,'I have submitted a short writing for your review, but it was not submitted as word document. I checked my attachment and it is missing part of my writing. Below is what I would like you to edit. It is not a formal paper, just &nbsp;feedback on the report I read. Please feel free to paste it in microsoft word document and submitted back to me as a microsoft word document. I just do not have access to microsoft words at this moment. Thank you so much for your help. And I am very sorry for the inconvenience.&nbsp;<br /><br />***************<br /><br />First of all, I really like the report. It is coherent and descriptive. I believe by reading it all the adjusters will have a clear understating of the change that will take place.<br /> <br /><strong>Feedback:</strong><br /><br /><strong>Create new assignment in ClaimCenter:</strong> Since we are not creating a &ldquo;real&rdquo; assignment in ClaimCenter I believe that, at first, this could be just a bit confusing to the adjusters. In the following tables you direct the user to &ldquo;Select Assignment Type - Adjuster Desk Review in ClaimCenter.&rdquo; Perhaps here you can also state it the same way you have stated below, but with directions on how to get to the &ldquo;Assignment Type&rdquo; screen, and informing the user early on of the type of assignment he/she will be creating in ClaimCenter. How about something like this?<br /> <br /><strong>Create new assignment in ClaimCenter</strong> (click on the &ldquo;Assessment&rdquo; tab and select &ldquo;Assignment Type&rdquo; &ndash; &ldquo;Adjuster Desk Review - Update&rdquo;).<br /> <br />Note: Before we can get to &ldquo;Assignment Type&rdquo; we have to click on &ldquo;Assessment&rdquo; tab.<br /> <br /><strong>New Information learned:</strong><br /> <br />If interested in DRP: I didn&rsquo;t know that the body shop will be contacting the customers to set up appointments. I thought that was done by ACE or CEI representatives. One suggestion I have for all of us adjusters (instead of relying on the shop) is calling the selected shop to schedule an appointment while we have the customer on the phone.<br /> It may take three extra minutes, but at least we know that the appointment is scheduled, and we will not get upset insureds and claimants calling us because they never heard from the shop. Additionally, it will save a phone call to the shop or the customer to confirm that the appointment has been scheduled. Moreover, by knowing when the appointment is we can create a more accurate diary to check if the estimate is ready to be paid in CCC. Here is how this can be done:<br /> <br />Before we can recommend a shop to a customer we have to make certain that the shop location is convenient for him/her. We cannot get to the list of the shops in a customer&rsquo;s area until we input his/her state and zip code into CCC&rsquo;s system. Thus, we have to keep the customer on the phone with us while searching for the shops in their area. Once the customer chooses the shop we can conference the shop to advise of the assignment, and schedule an appointment.<br /> <br /><strong>Question:</strong> <br /> <br />For example, if ACE or CEI find a lot of red flags while reviewing an estimate from a DRR or non DRP shop, and they believe we should send out an independant appraiser (IA) for inspection, do they submit the assignment to an IA, or will they ask for our permission first?<br /> <br />Some representatives from our prior vendor services would email me to ask for permission to assign an IA others just assigned one without permission.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-13 07:30:19','2015-09-13 15:37:43',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15822,3289,541,'An fluent and well-pced piece of dialogue. A pleasure to read.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-13 07:49:35','2015-09-13 09:17:13',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15823,65,777,'Good morning, <br /><br />I believe you have sentme the wrong file. This is the second document I sent you yesterday and it does not contain any evidence of editing. The first file I sent is very short. <br /><br />--J','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-13 11:58:02','2015-09-13 15:39:42',NULL,'upload_55f52c8a4c9b12.78179209_EW_63445.docx','EW_63445.docx'),
	(15824,777,65,'You are correct. My apologies. I\'ll be sending the longer file later this morning.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-13 15:44:04','2015-09-13 16:13:33',NULL,'upload_55f56184472581.18156441_SDEW_63444.docx','SDEW_63444.docx'),
	(15825,2647,65,'I\'ve copied and pasted this new text into a Word document. Will edit it soon.<br /><br />Thank you.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-13 15:52:13','2015-09-13 18:09:39',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15826,454,3255,'We figured it out! In Libre Office, you select \"edit\" and then \"changes\".<br /><br />Even from Hawaii (lucky!), you have been very responsive! I don\'t expect immediate responses either way, since I know that we aren\'t your only client.<br /><br />Thanks again!','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-13 18:27:27','2015-09-13 21:56:20',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15827,2424,65,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-13 19:07:58','2015-09-13 19:07:58',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15828,777,65,'Thank you for your patience.<br /><br />Several style notes:&nbsp;<br /><br />1. Capitalize University throughout the text; same with President; Office of the President<br /><br />2. Council and Committee are used interchangeably; should consider picking one and using it throughout.<br /><br />3. Change shall to&nbsp;will<br /><br />All changes are as marked in red.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-13 20:13:42','2015-09-13 20:13:42',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15829,3262,904,'I\'m two-thirds of the through the second reading and hope to complete it this afternoon. Thanks for your kind words.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-13 20:37:36','2015-09-13 22:18:34',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15830,2424,2083,'Hello again! <br /><br />I left a note or two for the beginning sentence and \"followers\", which still felt a bit unnatural. Just so you know, I\'m going to be doing my best to be on same-day editing for the weekends. Let me know if you have any questions! Thanks. =)','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-13 21:16:53','2015-09-16 17:07:06',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15831,2647,65,'Converted document to a Word.doc. Hope it goes through.<br /><br />Thank you.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-13 21:22:12','2016-11-26 21:46:56',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15832,3270,144,'Thank you, Samantha, for the opportunity to read and edit your paper.<br /><br />As always, ratings are much appreciated.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-13 22:04:13','2015-09-13 22:04:13',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15833,2520,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your paper.<br /><br />As always, ratings are much appreciated.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-13 22:05:15','2015-09-13 22:05:15',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15834,484,2066,'British spelling please i.e. summarise','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-13 22:12:04','2015-09-13 22:12:04',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15835,2424,65,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-13 23:01:57','2015-09-13 23:01:57',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15836,484,2066,'British spelling please','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-13 23:14:58','2015-09-13 23:14:58',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15837,3255,454,'So glad you guys were able to figure it out. Let me know if you run into any issues!<br /><br />Laura','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-13 23:16:31','2015-09-14 02:10:53',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15838,484,2066,'British spelling please i.e. honour','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-13 23:37:49','2015-09-13 23:37:49',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15839,454,3305,'','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-14 00:05:59','2015-09-14 00:05:59',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15840,65,3297,'Thanks for your help, this speeds up everything! I also appreciate your availablity during the weekend and all these prompt responses. Thank you!!','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-14 01:10:00','2015-09-14 01:50:03',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15841,856,1090,'<p>yesterday &nbsp;I submitted my document to you EW online.</p>\r\n<div>Just a few notes: the abstract needs to be 200 words (I wanted to let you know since your edited version should not exceed the word limit; I hope this helps) and also the section (\"Research Plan\") should have 3 page-limit; since your edition may or may not exceed the page limit, I also wanted to let you know.</div>\r\n<div>&nbsp;</div>\r\n<div>The yellow highlighted several sentences on page 5 do not have the 3 page limits. So feel free to edit as you see any errors.</div>\r\n<div>&nbsp;</div>\r\n<div>The document is extremely important - again this must be very very.. well-written, for that reason I always want you to edit my documents.</div>\r\n<div>Look forward to excellent edited version from you.</div>\r\n<div>&nbsp;</div>\r\n<div>Regards,</div>','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-14 01:38:56','2015-09-14 21:02:18',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15842,3297,65,'I enjoy working with you. You can email me at anytime, as I get alerts on my phone.<br /><br />Have a good evening.<br /><br />Jackson','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-14 01:51:36','2015-09-14 01:55:55',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15843,454,2299,'Hi,<br /><br />Here is my personal statement for internal medicine residency application in U.S.. Hope you could help me about it and make it perfect.<br /><br />Thanks! Have a good one!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-14 01:54:25','2015-09-14 01:54:25',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15844,2424,65,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-14 02:01:16','2015-09-14 02:01:16',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15845,454,3255,'This one looks great! &nbsp;I\'m trying to solve a bit of a mystery though. &nbsp;I was pretty positive I uploaded 8 total reviews, and this is only showing 1. &nbsp;I also paid $76, assuming that all 8 were in the uploaded doc. &nbsp;Do you have the other 7 still? &nbsp;Or did I somehow think that I sent you 8 reviews in this upload and only send you 1?','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-14 02:12:17','2015-09-14 02:12:17',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15846,454,3306,'Please pay extra attention to comma splices.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-14 02:14:52','2015-09-14 02:14:52',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15847,454,3255,'We are having one additional issue. &nbsp;After we accept the changes, the sections that you highlight and comment on remain highlighted, and when we try to remove the highlight, it says \"cannot be edited, read only content\". &nbsp;That means that when we paste it onto the website, those sections remain highlighted, and it looks bad.<br /><br />I\'ve attached a screen shot of the Visit review, so you can see. &nbsp;In the first sentence, the movie title appears whiter than the rest. &nbsp;Any idea how to clear the document of all edits and remove the highlights so we can paste onto the site? &nbsp;We have already tried pasting it into a new word doc, un formatting it, and changing the backround and font color.<br /><br />If those highlights can not be undone, we can\'t use the edited version.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-14 02:26:51','2015-09-14 02:43:27',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15848,454,3255,'screen shot now attached, forgot to. My brian is fried trying to fix this, haha.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-14 02:27:31','2015-09-14 02:43:05',NULL,'upload_55f5f85362b5f6.68215837_Screen Shot 2015-09-13 at 5.22.50 PM.png','Screen Shot 2015-09-13 at 5.22.50 PM.png'),
	(15849,904,884,'Receptionist is many regions is also called desk clerk.<br />in<br />Receptionist in many regions is also called desk clerk.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-14 02:34:17','2015-09-14 05:41:11',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15850,144,3213,'My professor sent my paper back that their were several errors in my paper. I am not talking about the other content I added, but the references etc that i paid you to review and edit for me&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-14 02:38:43','2015-09-14 18:32:21',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15851,1648,904,'This is a fascinating and well-written paper, but it needs very carefully editing which I could not complete today (it\'s the Jewish New Year and I\'m on my way to synagogue). I\'ll have the completed paper for you tomorrow afternoon. I hope that\'s okay.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-14 02:39:28','2015-09-14 02:39:28',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15852,3255,454,'I\'m on it--when I get home I\'ll send you clean copies so you can get them on the site, then we can see if we can resolve the read-only (drives me nuts) issue.<br /><br />thanks for your patience!','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-14 02:46:38','2015-09-14 02:52:15',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15853,454,3255,'Perfect! &nbsp;We found a work around, which is basically copy and pasting in a new doc all the way up to the highlighted section, then manually typing whats in the highlighted section(s), and then copy and pasting the rest. &nbsp;No need to send a clean copy, we got it done!<br /><br />I\'m not sure if you saw my message about the recent upload. &nbsp;The first one I uploaded, before the single <em>The Visit</em> review, should have had 8 reviews in total all within one doc. &nbsp;We only reveived one edited review back (<em>She\'s Funny That Way</em>). &nbsp;Either I thought I submitted 8 to be reviewed, and only submitted 1, or we are still waiting on the other 7. I paid for the words for all 7 reviews, so hopefully I included all of them. If not, let me know what we should do to get the rest to you that I paid for.<br /><br />Thank you for being so responsive! Once we sort out these bugs, it\'ll be smooth sailing.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-14 02:56:21','2015-09-14 04:33:18',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15854,3255,454,'Okay--but you having to go through all that to end up with a clean copy is an awful lot of work.&nbsp; From now on, I will send a clean copy with the marked up version.<br /><br />Regarding the other reviews, I only got one --She\'s Funny, and I had a note in to my boss asking why you were charged so much for a one-pager. Now it makes sense. Can you send me a doc with the other seven through the sample edit feature? That way I can get them and complete them without you being charged again. Not sure what happened there. Is tomorrow okay to have them back to you?<br /><br />Thanks!<br />Laura','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-14 04:38:22','2015-09-14 04:44:16',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15855,454,3255,'Thank you so much, you are great! I\'ll send the other 7 to you in a message tomorrow, and the same 3 day window is totally fine. If we can have them by Thursday night, that would be great!<br /><br />Thank you again!','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-14 04:46:40','2015-09-14 07:54:14',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15856,904,884,'<p class=\"western\" align=\"left\">I instead of you<br /><br />&nbsp;What standard of human <span style=\"color: #000000;\"><span style=\"font-family: Arial, serif;\">Blood Serum Chemistry Normal Values </span></span></p>\r\n<p class=\"western\" align=\"left\">do I follow?</p>\r\n<p class=\"western\" align=\"left\"><span style=\"color: #000080;\"><span lang=\"zxx\"><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><a href=\"http://www.qureshiuniversity.com/BloodSerumChemistryNormalValues.pdf\">http://www.qureshiuniversity.com/BloodSerumChemistryNormalValues.pdf</a></span></span></span></p>','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-14 04:52:25','2015-09-14 05:42:25',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15857,884,904,'Yes','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-14 05:41:39','2015-09-14 07:56:23',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15858,884,904,'Yes','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-14 05:41:41','2015-09-14 07:56:42',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15859,884,904,'Ok','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-14 05:43:22','2015-09-14 07:56:59',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15860,3262,904,'Hi: Not quite finished. Tonight was the start of the Jewish New Year so I was in synagogue and couldn\'t work. Tomorrow, for sure.&nbsp;&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-14 05:53:04','2015-09-14 13:03:34',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15861,3219,904,'Hi Andrew:<br /><br />Attached should be the edited chapter 2, plus a clean copy of the same chapter. Please read the document very, very, very carefully to&nbsp; be sure no gremlins are left in it. It was the most mysterious thing that has ever happened to me in all my years on the computer. I\'ve accidentally deleted things but never had a document get garbled like this one. You should have seen me going back and forth between the original and the garbled copy because there were many parts that escaped untouched.<br /><br />I\'m keeping my fingers crossed. Tomorrow is Jewish New Year so I won\'t get to Chapter 3 until Tuesday, so you can send it at your leisure.<br /><br />Regards,<br />Arnie','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-14 06:00:40','2015-09-14 06:06:15',NULL,'upload_55f62a48e89e37.99046576_2a - THE ONE THAT GOT AWAY.docx','2a - THE ONE THAT GOT AWAY.docx'),
	(15862,856,2490,'Dear Rebecca,<br /><br />You may remember the work you did a few months back on my monograph on religion in Manchuria. That book has now been accepted to Cambridge University Press, and I would like to include you in the acknowledgements.<br /><br />The paper I am sending now is an introduction to a book on empire in Asia. It is meant to draw readers in and frame the individual chapters (basically one chapter per empire), but I would also like it to work as a standalone piece. The writing is a bit wordy - if you see something that does not fit or repeats, it probably deserves to be cut.<br /><br />The footnotes that are initials refer to chapter titles - I am awaiting advice on how the book editors want to handle those.  <br /><br />With thanks as always,<br /><br />Thomas','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-14 06:03:44','2015-09-14 08:26:38',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15863,904,3219,'I see a clean edited copy and the other is two pages that were garbled..FYI..I will review the clean edited copy<br />Andrew. I alrady sent you the next chapter..correct?<br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-14 06:10:27','2015-09-14 06:19:17',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15864,3219,904,'I\'ll send the edited copy showing changes in the morning. You said you send chapter 3 after you got this one. I\'ll check that too in AM. Gotta sleep now, off to Temple in the morning.<br />Arnie','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-14 06:23:30','2015-09-14 07:04:31',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15865,1541,754,'Please modify the English of this article as a native English, and can\'t be see as a article wrote by a Chinese. Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-14 06:54:16','2015-09-14 06:54:16',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15866,144,2875,'Hi,<br />I have an assignment that is due in 45 min. &nbsp;Very short 235 words would you be able to do it in that time &nbsp;frame? &nbsp;If not I understand. &nbsp;<br />thank you.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-14 07:08:39','2015-09-14 18:33:21',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15867,144,2818,'Dear editor Nyanidoc,<br /><br />You have helped me edit my doctoral thesis before and I\'m very satisfied with your work. I have a government report to edit, which is attached. It is a consulting report for Australian government, so the English style should be Australian. Because of a very tight deadline, I generated this report in a short time. I really appreciate your helping with editing the report. Since I need to submit the report on this Thursday (Melbourne time), could be please give it back to me before Wednesday? Much appreciate.<br /><br />Cheers,<br /><br />Karen','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-14 07:21:48','2015-09-14 18:34:13',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15868,144,2818,'Sorry Nyanidoc,<br /><br />I think I didn\'t make corret payment last time, here it is.<br /><br /> Karen','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-14 07:26:19','2015-09-14 18:35:06',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15869,1163,3078,'Please edit for grammar, flow, and APA format.<br /><br /><br />','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-14 07:28:01','2015-09-14 07:28:01',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15870,904,3219,'Hi Arnie,<br />I started reading your edited clean copy and there are still some jumbled spots...I will review your copy that I can edit tomorrow. Must have been very frustrating...Hope this does not happen to you again. Obviously it is much easier to review in the context I wrote it with your highlighs...Sort of like hunting doing it this way..lol..Happy holiday.Any critiques on content or flow at this juncture?...I know it is a lazy entry into the main story line but I want to set up a clear picture of the world it all takes place in and the personality of the main character...Are you bored or finding it to drawn out?...or are you enjoying the ride?<br />Best,&nbsp;<br />Andrew','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-14 07:30:11','2015-09-14 07:30:11',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15871,904,3219,'too!!!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-14 07:31:18','2015-09-14 07:31:18',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15872,541,3289,'Dear Editwrite,<br /><br />thank you for your editing of my work!<br /><br />Best regards,<br /><br />Ying','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-14 07:44:51','2015-09-14 16:20:22',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15873,2490,856,'Thomas, of course I remember your interesting ms., and congrats on Cambridge U. Press!&nbsp; (I myself&nbsp;wrote a couple chapters of an edited volume on the ancient Maya&nbsp;published by them back in 1991.)&nbsp; I think I understand what you\'re doing with this current ms., and am looking forward to working on it.&nbsp; Thanks so much for the acknowledgement, that\'s extremely nice of you!&nbsp; My full name is Rebecca McSwain, if you want to use that.&nbsp; RebeccaTDE','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-14 08:31:50','2015-09-14 08:49:44',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15874,3219,904,'Let\'s try again. Here\'s the edited version. I\'ll send the clean one in a separate message.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-14 16:47:59','2015-09-14 16:48:14',NULL,'upload_55f6c1ffa89775.21413392_2 - THE ONE THAT GOT AWAY.docx','2 - THE ONE THAT GOT AWAY.docx'),
	(15875,3219,904,'Here\'s the clean copy. I\'m off to greet the New Year 5776.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-14 16:49:07','2015-09-14 16:53:29',NULL,'upload_55f6c2431446c2.33816143_2a - THE ONE THAT GOT AWAY.docx','2a - THE ONE THAT GOT AWAY.docx'),
	(15876,454,3255,'Ok, I reattached it to this message, and deleted <em>She\'s Funny That Way</em>. It should be 7 reviews in total, across 7 pages.<br /><br />Let me know if you receive all of it. Have a great day!','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-14 17:33:34','2015-09-15 00:56:58',NULL,'upload_55f6ccaea38772.48673250_She\'s Funny That Way.docx','She\'s Funny That Way.docx'),
	(15877,1709,3308,'This writing is to submit to the conference so, please revise very carefully. <br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-14 18:23:51','2015-09-14 18:23:51',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15878,3213,144,'What was the name of the file?','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-14 18:32:54','2015-09-22 04:50:06',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15879,2875,144,'I just now got this msg. I\'m sorry.<br /><br />Best,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-14 18:33:43','2015-09-14 18:33:43',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15880,3213,144,'If this was file EW_63312, I did edit the refs. What is wrong with them?<br /><br />Thank you,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-14 18:40:11','2015-09-14 18:40:11',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15881,3132,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your personal statement.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best of success in your endeavors,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-14 19:29:43','2015-09-14 19:29:43',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15882,904,1648,'Hi<br /><br />I inserted a few paragraphs and made some changes in the document. I have highlighted all of them.&nbsp; Let me know if you could redit them.<br /><br />Cheers<br />Jude','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-14 19:53:52','2015-09-14 20:36:37',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15883,904,1648,'Here is the document. All changes and the inserts are in bold.&nbsp; Let me know how much more I owe you.<br /><br />Cheers<br />Jude','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-14 19:57:52','2015-09-14 20:37:46',NULL,'upload_55f6ee8008e2f9.99538287_Master editor-UNHCR-2.docx','Master editor-UNHCR-2.docx'),
	(15884,144,3309,'I would like a streamlining of the story, proofreading any comments that you might have to change the pace and content of the story, probably parts of ii- paragraphs even to be taken out. It is one of my first stories and I am not sure how I did with it so seeing the eddited version I think will help me to improve on my writing. English is my second language so if you have any comments on any common occuring stylist or grammar mistakes will be appreciated.<br /><br />Thank you!<br /><br />Rosko Tzolov','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-14 20:32:06','2015-09-14 20:32:06',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15885,144,2737,'Dear Editor, <br /><br />Thank you very much for working on my document in advance!<br /><br />Please focus on the grammar, word choice, and the flow of the text. Please feel free to point out anything that does not sound logical to you. Please ignore the format of the citations. I will fix that on my own. If you have any suggestions on the improvement of the content (e.g. something can be more clearer, need more evidence for a point, etc.), please also do not hesitate to make any notes. <br /><br />Thank you again!<br /><br />Best regards,<br />Lily','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-14 21:01:59','2015-09-14 21:01:59',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15886,1090,856,'Hello, Dr. Joo - Here is the latest instalment.&nbsp; As usual, your questions and comments are welcome.&nbsp; RebeccaTDE','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-14 23:41:44','2015-09-15 04:59:28',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15887,904,2956,'Please check for error. I have to submit to a CEO for a healthcare position.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-14 23:44:29','2015-09-14 23:44:29',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15888,2386,144,'Thank you, Daniel, for the opportunity to read and edit another of your inspirational pieces.<br /><br />As always, your kind ratings are much appreciated.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 00:04:50','2015-09-15 00:04:50',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15889,3262,904,'I thoroughly enjoyed&nbsp;your story. That\'s probably a bad word -- I enjoyed your telling of your story, and I\'m glad you dcided to do so. I\'m also pleased that I could help. By the way, my younger son lives in Minneapolis, only 80 miles from Rochester, and we have friends whose children work at Mayo. It\'s a great hospital.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 00:05:38','2015-09-15 00:29:56',NULL,'upload_55f728924c8680.35566580_EW_63250.docx','EW_63250.docx'),
	(15890,1648,904,'I am putting all your inserts in and making whatever changes are needed. I hope to have it finished by midday tomorrow. Your paper is 1300 words longer than the original, so just submit a document (any document because I won\'t read it; it\'s just for bookkeeping purposes) and we\'ll be even, okay?','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 00:12:34','2015-09-15 00:13:10',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15891,904,1648,'Thanks a lot.&nbsp; Will do.&nbsp; Please look for reperition.&nbsp; Also see each section as a smooth flow. I wrote this in a might hurry.<br /><br />Jude<br /><br />Will I be charged twice, if I upload it again?<br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 00:15:40','2015-09-15 00:16:37',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15892,1648,904,'No, you\'ll just be charged for the 1300 words. Just submit it as that length.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 00:17:35','2015-09-15 00:17:51',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15893,904,1648,'Ok. will do.&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 00:18:18','2015-09-15 00:18:18',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15894,3219,904,'Hello again, Andrew.<br /><br />Yes, I have chapters 3 and 4, unless you\'re changing them. Back in the saddle tomorrow.<br /><br />Regards,<br />Arnie','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 00:22:46','2015-09-15 03:18:13',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15895,2066,484,'<p class=\"p1\"><b>Thank you for the opportunity to edit your work. Please let me know if there are any issues, and I will address them asap.</b></p>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 00:23:28','2015-09-15 00:23:28',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15896,2066,484,'<p class=\"p1\"><b>Thank you for the opportunity to edit your work. Please let me know if there are any issues, and I will address them asap.</b></p>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 00:23:45','2015-09-15 00:23:45',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15897,2066,484,'<p class=\"p1\"><b>Thank you for the opportunity to edit your work. Please let me know if there are any issues, and I will address them asap.</b></p>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 00:24:05','2015-09-15 00:24:05',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15898,904,3262,'Thank you once again.<br /><br />it is truly a great Hospital and i was lucky to go there. But to be honest very different from European doctors.<br /><br />it means a lot thst you enjoyed the story.<br /><br />i will defenitly recommend you to my friends and if possible use your services again for my next book.<br /><br />steph<br /><br />P.s. Sorry for my mistakes, i tend to translate Greek to English.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 00:35:37','2015-09-15 00:36:36',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15899,3262,904,'Not many mistakes, and that\'s what editors are for. I left your UK English in many places but thought they fever part needed explanation. Also, I\'m not sure if its clear that the tumor was on the new kidney. Check it out. You\'re one brave girl. How old are you?','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 00:42:25','2015-09-15 01:14:35',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15900,904,1648,'<p>This is a reedit of new insters the previous document for which I already paid.  Please chage me only for that amount.</p>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 00:44:49','2015-09-15 00:44:49',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15901,904,1648,'I just uploaded and paid.&nbsp; Hope you are curring words as much as possible. thanks','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 00:45:56','2015-09-15 00:45:56',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15902,2066,484,'<p class=\"p1\"><b>Thank you for the opportunity to edit your work. Please let me know if there are any issues, and I will address them asap.</b></p>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 00:47:00','2015-09-15 00:47:00',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15903,904,3262,'I am not sure which part you mean about the tumor.<br /><br />i am 28 and going for what i hope is my last operation.<br /><br />may i ask your opinion on the ending','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 01:16:44','2015-09-15 01:16:44',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15904,454,2299,'Hey....I submitted a document (personal statement) yesterday. The application date is tomorrow. I hope your can help me as soon as possible. Thanks.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 01:57:17','2015-09-15 04:48:44',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15905,904,3262,'I would like to add that you were the editor for my book.<br /><br />Would that be ok?!<br /><br />steph','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 02:33:10','2015-09-15 03:05:20',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15906,904,1648,'I hope I can get the document before too late today. &nbsp;Cheers<br />Jude','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 03:02:34','2015-09-15 03:07:37',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15907,3262,904,'I\'d be honored. It\'s Arnold Friedman&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 03:06:42','2015-09-15 10:24:58',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15908,1648,904,'I\'m afraid it will be midday tomorrow&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 03:08:51','2015-09-15 03:25:19',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15909,904,1648,'Thanks. &nbsp;I am runing out of time &nbsp;COuld you please upload what you have done so far and then finish it tomorrow. &nbsp;I can go through what what you have done tonight. &nbsp;I really need the full document tomorrow miday<br /><br />Cheers<br />Jude','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 03:27:21','2015-09-15 04:43:30',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15910,904,1648,'Thanks. &nbsp;I am runing out of time &nbsp;COuld you please upload what you have done so far and then finish it tomorrow. &nbsp;I can go through what what you have done tonight. &nbsp;I really need the full document tomorrow miday<br /><br />Cheers<br />Jude','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 03:28:32','2015-09-15 03:28:32',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15911,904,1648,'Thanks. &nbsp;I am runing out of time &nbsp;COuld you please upload what you have done so far and then finish it tomorrow. &nbsp;I can go through what what you have done tonight. &nbsp;I really need the full document tomorrow miday<br /><br />Cheers<br />Jude','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 03:28:37','2015-09-15 03:28:37',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15912,904,1648,'Thanks. &nbsp;I am runing out of time &nbsp;COuld you please upload what you have done so far and then finish it tomorrow. &nbsp;I can go through what what you have done tonight. &nbsp;I really need the full document tomorrow miday<br /><br />Cheers<br />Jude','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 03:28:37','2015-09-15 03:28:37',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15913,904,1648,'Thanks. &nbsp;I am runing out of time &nbsp;COuld you please upload what you have done so far and then finish it tomorrow. &nbsp;I can go through what what you have done tonight. &nbsp;I really need the full document tomorrow miday<br /><br />Cheers<br />Jude','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 03:28:38','2015-09-15 05:22:43',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15914,3309,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your story. I think you did basically a good job for an ESL writer, except for your stylistic use of present tense, which is awkward: I am driving, etc. I have changed that. I didn\'t see anything that needed to be eliminated entirely.<br /><br />It\'s always interesting for me to read pieces by my fellow travelers. Be grateful that you don\'t hop the express train from mania to psychosis as I do. I\'ve had three breaks in my life, at 9-11 yr intervals. My doctor told me that w/ age, it\'s more common to experience depression than psychosis. I hope he\'s right, because if I have another one, I think it will kill me. The last one in 2011 almost did. A couple of times I\'ve had benign episodes of mania in which one\'s brilliance can really shine forth, but those are few and far between.<br /><br />I wish you all the best in managing your illness and in life in general :)<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 03:30:26','2015-09-15 03:30:26',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15915,904,3219,'&nbsp;Could you wait for me to send the revised version later this evening. My first concern is the amount of garbled information that was still found in THE ONE THAT GOT AWAY. Also, I was concerned because certain information was added in the rendition I sent you to edit, but information from the previous version was showing up on your edited copy...This causes a great deal of double work...In short, I am hoping this glitch has been resolved because I am busy on so many fronts and I felt like I was hunting, checking, rewriting and gathering information that was already done. Also, I was hoping you could answer my questions that I was interested in your opinion on.<br />All in all we are making progress<br />Happy Rosh Hashana.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 03:43:45','2015-09-15 04:44:30',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15916,904,3219,'&nbsp;Could you wait for me to send the revised version later this evening. My first concern is the amount of garbled information that was still found in THE ONE THAT GOT AWAY. Also, I was concerned because certain information was added in the rendition I sent you to edit, but information from the previous version was showing up on your edited copy...This causes a great deal of double work...In short, I am hoping this glitch has been resolved because I am busy on so many fronts and I felt like I was hunting, checking, rewriting and gathering information that was already done. Also, I was hoping you could answer my questions that I was interested in your opinion on.<br />All in all we are making progress<br />Happy Rosh Hashana.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 03:43:47','2015-09-15 03:43:47',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15917,3255,454,'Got em! Working on them! :)','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 04:50:58','2015-09-15 05:12:18',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15918,3255,454,'Got em! Working on them! :)','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 04:50:59','2015-09-15 05:12:34',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15919,1280,904,'This is fine now.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 05:07:01','2015-09-15 05:07:01',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15920,856,1090,'Dear Rebecca,<br />I have the following questions and would appreciate if you can quickly check and answer to the questions due to the due date I must submit soon.<br /><br />Q1. In your comment, RM4: In the ms. that I\'m looking at, something is wrong here - the figure blocks out part of the final sentence under \"Innovation\"<br /><br />The following is what was written and so can you please check if there are any errors on the following sentence?<br /><br />--&gt; \"This study will provide new information and critical data essential for assessing environmental and human health toxicity\".<br /><br />Q2. Also, in the figure 1 (since there are no comments, I wonder what I wrote is ok and need to check with you), <br /><br />Fig. 1 Effect of existing contaminant (siloxane) on deposition and transport behavior of ZnO NPs in porous media,<br /><br />Here do you see any errors on the above subtitile of Fig. 1?<br /><br />Also I\'m still confused if I should write \"Effect\" or \"Effects\"<br /><br />please check all the questions I have and let me know.<br /><br />thanks in advance,<br /><br />p.s. I expect to send you 15 pages document sometime next week and 30 pages in the following next week, and subsequently more documents in October... hope your schedule is fine with the rest of Sept. and October...<br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 05:07:58','2015-09-15 08:24:44',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15921,2299,454,'Hello,<br /><br />I got your message--your doc is not due until tomorrow, but I had some extra time and completed it early. :)<br /><br />Thank you!<br /><br />Laura','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 05:10:09','2015-09-15 05:10:09',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15922,454,3255,'Great, thanks!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 05:12:52','2015-09-15 05:12:52',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15923,3305,454,'Hello,<br /><br />Really enjoying working on your sample text. Editing in notepad, though, is all but impssible. Do you have any objection to me converting it to MSWord? If you don\'t have Word, I can convert it back when I\'ve finished, but you won\'t be able to see the actual edits and I\'ll send my comments separately. Just wanted to let you know.<br /><br />Thanks!<br /><br />Laura','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 05:15:05','2015-09-15 07:33:03',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15924,1648,904,'Much of what I have done is in the parts where you added inserts. I\'ll get to work on it first thing in the AM.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 05:23:32','2015-09-15 06:22:38',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15925,3078,1163,'Hi, there:<br /><br />I edited the document in the areas of grammar, sentence structure, flow, punctuation, clarity, consistency, spelling, detail, word choice, and organization as well as APA style.<br /><br />Thank you!<br />MasterEditor','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 05:26:18','2015-09-15 05:26:18',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15926,856,1090,'<p>Rebecca,<br /><br />In addition to my previous questions to your comments, I ahve the following question. </p>\r\n<p>Do you consider&nbsp; &ldquo;consumer metal oxide nanoproducts&rdquo; sounds better than&nbsp;&ldquo;metal oxide nanoparticles in consumer products?<br /><br />please let me know<br />thanks</p>','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 05:35:08','2015-09-15 09:55:40',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15927,144,2259,'Please edit and proofread this abstract as you see fit. Thank you as always.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 06:34:06','2015-09-15 06:34:06',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15928,454,3305,'Nope i dont have any quarrels at all. I tried uploading it from an .ODT file and it says it was invalid for some reason so i tried notepad. Im glad to hear your enjoying it. Its my first book. Just throwing it out there, if you like it, send me a like on facebook under this link:&nbsp;<a href=\"https://www.facebook.com/JosephMFlintAuthor\">https://www.facebook.com/JosephMFlintAuthor</a>. Shoot me a message and id be happy to send you an ARC for all your hard work.&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 07:35:35','2015-09-15 08:45:05',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15929,541,2993,'','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 08:31:15','2015-09-15 08:31:15',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15930,144,3311,'<p>Hi,<br /><br />Thank you for your help. Attached are two personal statements (cover letters) for training in plastic surgery and general surgery. I look forward to your help in perfecting them, write me an email or call me at 319 594 3602 if you have any questions.<br /><br />Thanks.<br /><br /></p><p>Alex</p>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 09:40:48','2015-09-15 09:40:48',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15931,1090,856,'No, I don\'t, personally.&nbsp; However, you\'re the expert and you know the literature!&nbsp; Logically to me \"consumer nanoproducts\" makes me think of microscopic-size bottles of shampoo!&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 10:09:47','2015-09-15 15:56:54',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15932,144,2680,'','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 11:06:34','2015-09-15 11:06:34',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15933,904,2680,'Please edit this article in APA format. Thanks very much.&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 11:22:36','2015-09-15 11:22:36',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15934,144,3312,'<p>This is a narrative script for a kickstarter video that I am piecing together.   I have previously kickstarted a sketchbook call \'The Perfect sketchbook\' .</p><p> </p>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 12:10:20','2015-09-15 12:10:20',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15935,3248,1541,'It was a pleasure to edit your well-written and most interesting document. I focused on correcting the grammar, elevating the language, and enhancing clarity, flow, and eloquence. I hope to have the opportunity to work with you again in the future. In the meantime, best of luck to you with all your current and future endeavors.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 13:21:59','2015-09-15 13:21:59',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15936,144,3257,'<p>Hello!</p><p>I am applying to the University of Arizona School of Medicine, but this is not an admissions essay. Actually, the school wants me to answer four prompts on unique topics. <br /><br />I have attached a document which contains each of these four prompts and my response to each prompt. The prompts on the document are bolded (the word count for the prompts was not included in the final word count because they are not to be edited) and the reponses are directly below the prompts. The document is four pages in total and each page has a prompt and a respective response.<b><br /></b><br /><strong>I want the editor to address a few concerns:</strong><b><br /></b></p><p>1) Each prompt has a 350 word limit and all of my responses are over the limit. If you could please help me decrease the word count, while retaining the meaning of the content, that would be great. If you can eliminate redundancy, restructure complex sentences into more simple ones, etc... to make the document more concise, that would be ideal. Overall, I would like you to remove anything that you think does not directly ANSWER the respective prompt. Also, I would like you to remove anything that you think does not add anything to the response and is just \"fluff\".</p><p>2) I want to ensure my grammar and word choice is perfect.</p><p><b>Thank you very much!</b></p>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 14:04:41','2015-09-15 14:04:41',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15937,856,1090,'Hi, previously I asked you about the following questions. Can you please answer to my questions? I have the due that need to submit it soon.<br /><br /><br />Q1. In your comment, RM4: In the ms. that I\'m looking at, something is wrong here - the figure blocks out part of the final sentence under \"Innovation\"<br /><br />The following is what was written and so can you please check if there are any errors on the following sentence?<br /><br />--&gt; \"This study will provide new information and critical data essential for assessing environmental and human health toxicity\".<br /><br />Q2. Also, in the figure 1 (since there are no comments, I wonder what I wrote is ok and need to check with you), <br /><br />Fig. 1 Effect of existing contaminant (siloxane) on deposition and transport behavior of ZnO NPs in porous media,<br /><br />Here do you see any errors on the above subtitile of Fig. 1?<br /><br />Also I\'m still confused if I should write \"Effect\" or \"Effects\"<br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 16:02:46','2015-09-15 20:42:38',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15938,904,2956,'Can you please give me a status on this project?','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 16:29:14','2015-09-15 17:08:43',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15939,2956,904,'This paper isn\'t due until midnight tonight. It\'ll be done sometime this afternoon.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 17:09:19','2015-09-15 17:13:51',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15940,904,2956,'I apologize, I thought I picked the 2 hr deadline.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 17:14:37','2015-09-15 19:27:52',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15941,3313,65,'Thank you. I\'m from Conway, SC.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 17:51:41','2015-09-15 17:51:41',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15942,144,3314,'','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 17:53:41','2015-09-15 17:53:41',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15943,144,3314,'','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 17:53:58','2015-09-15 17:53:58',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15944,144,3314,'','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 17:54:07','2015-09-15 17:54:07',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15945,144,3314,'This is Acedemic performace evalution provided from my college . i need to give them feed back by editing. <br /><br />Please edit the same as acedemic Performance evalution document','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 18:00:48','2015-09-15 18:00:48',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15946,1648,904,'Good morning. The whole paper should be done in another hour or so. Meanwhile, I\'m sending it edited through the first paragraph on page 7 so you can get a head start. It\'s really interesting and well done.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 18:06:40','2015-09-15 18:52:56',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15947,904,1648,'Thanks.&nbsp; Do you think the the 6 questions I have in the second and third paragraps are too many and distractive, from a journalistic point of view.&nbsp; I appreciate your opnion after you do the entire paper.&nbsp; remember this is for a radical political blog.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 18:55:00','2015-09-15 19:19:25',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15948,1648,904,'Here\'s the completed paper. I\'m glad I could help. Sorry it took so long, but it needed very careful reading.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 19:00:56','2015-09-16 01:50:36',NULL,'upload_55f832a800a4f1.39940405_EW_63502.docx','EW_63502.docx'),
	(15949,1648,904,'I think they\'re fine. And it doesn\'t seem terribly radical to me.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 19:27:16','2015-09-15 19:51:24',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15950,904,3219,'Hi Arnie,<br />Here is Chapter 3, please use this version only','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 19:29:53','2015-09-15 20:09:32',NULL,'upload_55f839710f0c50.04510647_ALL WORK AND NO PLAY 3.docx','ALL WORK AND NO PLAY 3.docx'),
	(15951,904,3219,'Here is Chapter 4...Do a quick check to make sure everything is legible','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 19:32:45','2015-09-15 20:10:46',NULL,'upload_55f83a1dc4f6f9.19336932_DIVING THE WRECK4.docx','DIVING THE WRECK4.docx'),
	(15952,904,3219,'Here is Chapter 4...Do a quick check to make sure everything is legible','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 19:32:48','2015-09-15 19:32:48',NULL,'upload_55f83a203f6842.76607741_DIVING THE WRECK4.docx','DIVING THE WRECK4.docx'),
	(15953,904,3219,'Hi Arnie,<br />Please confirm receipt and clarity of content.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 19:33:24','2015-09-15 20:11:45',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15954,904,1648,'<p>Thanks Do they distract the reader?</p>','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 19:52:02','2015-09-15 20:08:23',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15955,1648,904,'I don\'t think so. They lay the groundwork for the rest of the paper.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 20:08:59','2015-09-15 20:09:19',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15956,3219,904,'Hi Andrew.<br /><br />At first glance, everything looks fine. We\'ll keep our fingers crossed, but I rhink the other problem was just as aberration. Let\'s hope so.<br /><br />Regards,<br />Arnie','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 20:14:38','2015-09-15 22:09:46',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15957,1090,856,'OK, sorry, this slipped through cracks. <br />Text that I couldn\'t see sounds fine. <br />Yes, figure 1 text looks okay.<br />As for \"effect\" versus \"effects\" there\'s no hard and fast rule, but&nbsp;- \"effect\" if you\'re talking about some kind of general concept OR a single effect, and \"effects\" if you\'re talking specifics OR more than one effect.&nbsp; \"What effect does X have on Y?\"&nbsp; is fine, a generality.&nbsp; \"What is the effect of X on Y?\"&nbsp; is also okay, even if there are going to be more than one - again, you\'re speaking in genaralities.&nbsp; But you could also correctly say \"What are the effects of X on Y?\"&nbsp; particularly if you know there\'s more than one.&nbsp;<br />Examples: \"The <b>effect</b> of global warming is that glaciers will melt and sea&nbsp;levels will rise\"&nbsp;is correct, but so is \"The effects of global warming are that glaciers will melt and sea levels will rise.\"&nbsp; I didn\'t see any misuse of the word/words in your ms.&nbsp; But it\'s a fuzzy word.&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 20:56:06','2015-09-15 23:23:03',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15958,904,1648,'Ok, I have gone through the seven pages, and I am waiting for the rest. Try to cut as much as possible.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 21:01:26','2015-09-15 21:01:26',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15959,904,3219,'Agreed....Here is my edit and confirmation of your edits back at you...<br />I am going to do one final review of this chapter later to ensure I did not lose any content.<br />Andrew','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 22:12:13','2015-09-15 23:45:41',NULL,'upload_55f85f7d7a51b8.74115191_THE ONE THAT GOT AWAY EDIT AWO D.docx','THE ONE THAT GOT AWAY EDIT AWO D.docx'),
	(15960,904,3219,'Agreed....Here is my edit and confirmation of your edits back at you...<br />I am going to do one final review of this chapter later to ensure I did not lose any content.<br />Andrew','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 22:12:16','2015-09-15 22:12:16',NULL,'upload_55f85f80a2f3b6.75110816_THE ONE THAT GOT AWAY EDIT AWO D.docx','THE ONE THAT GOT AWAY EDIT AWO D.docx'),
	(15961,2424,65,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 22:19:00','2015-09-15 22:19:00',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15962,856,1090,'thanks for clarifying this confusion.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-15 23:24:26','2015-09-16 04:11:17',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15963,2956,904,'Sorry for the time misunderstand but here it is long before the deadline. Please note that I changed the tense of work you\'re still doing. Good luck.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-16 00:03:59','2015-09-16 00:22:28',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15964,2993,65,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-16 01:06:56','2015-09-16 01:06:56',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15965,3313,65,'I\'ve included a \"clean\" copy on page 3 with all changes input.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-16 01:29:27','2015-09-16 01:29:27',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15966,1709,3316,'I am running for my class\'s senate at Suffolk. For my election, I had to write a 25 word personal statement about why I am running. I now look to you to make this statement as effective and convincing as possible within the 25 word count. Thanks so much. I am open to all creative, word, and other changes. ','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-16 01:33:32','2015-09-16 01:33:32',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15967,904,1648,'<p>I hope you will send rest of the paper today. I really need it.<br /><br />Cheers<br />Jude</p>','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-16 01:43:18','2015-09-16 02:21:32',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15968,904,1648,'Thanks.&nbsp; These are my free time writing.&nbsp; No much time to spend on it.&nbsp; Anyways, hope it reads well for general readerships. Any comments?','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-16 01:54:56','2015-09-16 02:22:34',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15969,1648,904,'I hope this note means that you have it. I sent it before noon. I surely learned a lot and think that you touched on the issues very well.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-16 02:25:55','2015-09-16 03:02:17',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15970,904,3160,'Hello Editor in Chief,<br /><br />I sent you this document as a sample a couple of weeks ago. I liked what you did to the document that\'s why I\'m sending you the whole thing.<br />I have this idea to publish these stories as ebooks, two on each book. Other stories have different settings. I\'d appreciate your editing and your personal opinion on the idea behind the whole project. I\'m a little hesitant due to the main topic of the stories. Anyways, here it goes. Thanks.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-16 02:33:19','2015-09-16 02:33:19',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15971,2818,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to edit your report. I noticed that the symbols for yuan were not in a consistent font, but none of the fonts appeared in my list, so I was unable to make them consistent. I did reduce the font size, b/c they were adding extra space b/t lines, which bothers me :)<br /><br />As always, ratings are much appreciated.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-16 03:44:26','2015-09-16 03:44:26',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15972,3312,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your web announcement.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-16 03:59:14','2015-09-16 03:59:14',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15973,2259,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your abstract. A couple of phrases confused me, as you will see from the comments. I hope I interpreted them correctly.<br /><br />As always, ratings are much appreciated.<br /><br />All the best,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-16 04:10:28','2015-09-16 04:10:28',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15974,1709,3316,'Are you going to be able to complete this by the deadline?','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-16 04:10:54','2015-09-16 04:10:54',NULL,'upload_55f8b38e2fd208.56453540_SOP.docx','SOP.docx'),
	(15975,2680,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your sample.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-16 04:20:29','2015-09-16 04:20:29',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15976,3311,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your personal statements.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-16 05:03:03','2015-09-28 21:56:32',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15977,454,2259,'Hello Laura,<br />This is a translation of the abstract of a paper concerning investment property.<br />Please edit and proofread it as you see fit. I would appreciate it if you could<br />edit it so the word count would be 200 words or less (currently 207).<br />Thank you,<br />Taka','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-16 06:21:24','2015-09-16 06:21:24',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15978,904,759,'Personal letter','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-16 08:58:26','2015-09-16 08:58:26',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15979,474,3318,'Sampling services, to see how this fits with my needs.  ','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-16 14:46:01','2015-09-16 14:46:01',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15980,3316,8,'Thank you for your submission. Good luck!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-16 16:41:26','2015-09-16 16:41:26',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15981,3160,904,'Good morning. Thanks for choosing me to edit your document. I\'ll make it the best it can be, and also answer your question after I\'ve read it. Cheers.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-16 17:21:40','2015-09-16 17:31:54',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15982,65,3191,'Hi,<br /><br />Would you be able to provide prompt editing services on this short piece, comments on overall flow, and if the paragraphs need to be swapped around? Always helps to have a fresh eye. Any other suggestions would be great too.<br /><br />Thanks very much, and looking forward to your feedback!<br /><br /><br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-16 18:39:43','2015-09-16 18:59:18',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15983,65,3319,'<p>Instructions:</p><p>Write an essay (including an introduction that previews your points and presents a thesis statement as well as a conclusion that summarizes your points) answering the questions listed below for the assigned article from Annual Editions Business Ethics. </p><p>Your essay should be 2-3 pages, double-spaced, 1-inch margins, Calibri 12-point font.  You are required to integrate course concepts (as indicated in the questions provided) and are encouraged to consult additional resources (each article lists some Internet references).  Make sure you appropriately cite any idea/concept taken from the textbook or from an Internet or other source (APA format).  Include a Works Cited section at the end of your essay (ok if goes to 4th page).</p><p>Your assignment should be uploaded to Canvas before class on the due date (see class calendar).  Your assignment will be late if the class has started before you upload your document. Late work received on the due date, but after class has started will be accepted with a 5% penalty and will be accepted up to a week after the due date with a 10% grade penalty per day. </p><p><strong>Ethics Writing Assignment #1</strong></p><p>Assigned article (BE): Opting to Blow the Whistle or Choosing to Walk Away p. 60</p><p>Questions to address in your essay:</p><ol><li>Is reporting unethical behavior ever an unethical act? Why or why not?</li><li>What are the challenges inherent in whistleblowing?</li><li>How might a person’s personality characteristics (Chapter 5) impact his or her choice to be a whistleblower?</li><li>What advice would you give to someone who is considering whistleblowing?</li></ol>Here is the RUBRIC i haven\'t finished the last paragrpah which asnwers the last question and conclusion. Please send back to me as soon as possible<br /><p>Here is the rubric Jamie will use when grading your Ethics Writing assignment:</p><p><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">Rubric</span></p><p>Format: -2 for any missing element (up to a max of 10)</p><ul><li>12-point font</li><li><strong>Double-spaced</strong></li><li>1” margins</li><li>Document title - centered</li><li>Left-justify only</li><li>Indent of paragraphs</li><li>1 line between paragraphs</li><li>Page numbers (upper right)</li></ul><p>Grammar, punctuation, spelling: -2 for each error (up to a max of 30)</p><ul><li>Resource: <span class=\"instructure_file_link_holder link_holder\"><span class=\"instructure_scribd_file_holder link_holder\"><a title=\"BA324 Style Guide (2).docx\" href=\"https://utexas.instructure.com/courses/1148779/files/37064040/download?wrap=1\">BA324 Style Guide (2).docx</a><a class=\"scribd_file_preview_link\" tabindex=\"-1\" title=\"Preview the document\" href=\"https://utexas.instructure.com/courses/1148779/files/37064040/download?wrap=1\"><img src=\"https://utexas.instructure.com/images/preview.png\" alt=\"Preview the document\" /></a></span><a title=\"View in a new window\" href=\"https://utexas.instructure.com/courses/1148779/files/37064040/download?wrap=1\" target=\"_blank\"><img src=\"https://utexas.instructure.com/images/popout.png\" alt=\"View in a new window\" /></a></span></li></ul><p>Content: up to 50 points; 10 extra points may be awarded for superior performance as noted below</p><ul><li>Length of memo less than 2-pages (-5 if ends more than 2” from bottom of page)</li><li>Questions answered (-10 if missing; -5 if weak, undeveloped)</li><li>Class concepts integrated (-10 if none; -5 if only one; +1-5 if three or more)</li><li>Works cited (-10 if none; -5 if only one; +1-2 if three or more)</li><li>Opening (-2 for any missing element)</li><ul><li>Reason for writing/purpose of essay (present tense)</li><li>Thesis statement (main point)</li><li>Organization of essay (present tense)</li></ul><li>Body (-2 for any missing element; +1-3 based on flow, interesting approach)</li><ul><li>Topic sentences for each paragraph</li><li>Direct method (main point then supporting material)</li><li>One topic per paragraph</li><li>Use of course concepts are relevant and smoothly integrated</li><li>Simple, conversational, clear, concise language</li></ul><li>Closing (-2 for any missing element)</li><ul><li>Purpose of essay (past tense)</li><li>Organization of essay (past tense)</li><li>Concluding thought/summation</li></ul></ul>','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-16 18:42:23','2015-09-16 19:00:07',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15984,65,3319,'&nbsp; &nbsp;Hi textpro I need help with the 3rd sentence in my introduction paragraph. i Don\'t know how to tie the 4th question to it at the end. I have this&nbsp;<br /><br /> The following model was derived from supporting works and my experience with identifying unethical behaviors, acknowledging challenges in whistle blowing, and understanding my personality characteristics to report an unethical act.&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-16 18:47:53','2015-09-16 19:01:34',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15985,3191,65,'Can do. Thank you.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-16 18:59:43','2015-09-16 19:59:03',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15986,3319,65,'I have downloaded the text and will see how this fits in.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-16 19:02:06','2015-09-16 19:04:05',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15987,2424,1772,'I am so sorry for your loss. Let me know if you want me to take another look over anything in this.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-16 19:16:03','2015-09-16 19:21:50',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15988,65,3319,'great! and im very concerned about grammer to','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-16 19:32:12','2015-09-16 19:32:12',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15989,2424,65,'I am deeply sorry for your loss. Your friend would most certainly want you to carry on.<br /><br />I\'ve put the clean version first, followed by the edited one. I tried re-formatting and some other editorial tricks to add emphasis, which is difficult to do when the original text is so powerful.<br /><br />As always, thank you.<br /><br />Jackson','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-16 19:50:48','2015-09-16 19:52:33',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15990,3132,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit another of your statements.<br /><br />As always, ratings are much appreciated.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-16 19:56:48','2015-09-16 19:56:48',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15991,3191,65,'Interesting topic. Not sure if you need UK/US English (but that affects on a few terms).<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-16 20:35:50','2015-09-16 20:35:50',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15992,65,3319,'Hi I sorry I really need this essay right now....','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-16 20:43:16','2015-09-16 20:47:40',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15993,3314,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your performance evaluation.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-16 20:45:17','2015-09-16 20:45:17',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15994,3319,65,'Within 10 minutes. I got overloaded.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-16 20:48:29','2015-09-16 20:49:34',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15995,3319,65,'Thank you for your patience.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-16 20:56:36','2015-09-16 20:56:36',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15996,3305,454,'Hello Mr. Flint,<br /><br />Sorry for the delayed response--I thank you and will like your FB page. I will have your sample to you shortly.<br /><br />Thank you!<br /><br />Laura<br /><br />ps. What\'s an ARC? :)','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-16 21:34:30','2015-09-17 06:11:53',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15997,3257,144,'Thank you, Tony, for the opportunity to read and edit another of your statements. I also changed my habits and lost 50#. It\'s a good feeling, I know.<br /><br />As always, ratings are much appreciated.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-16 21:34:36','2015-09-16 21:34:36',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15998,3305,454,'Hi, <br /><br />I\'ve attached your sample piece here without any changes, as I edited it in Word and the system will not allow me to upload a file with a different extension to the main listing. I am sending you the edited version in Word through the messaging feature. If you have any problems opening it, I can convert the text back to notepad, but you might not be able to see the actual edits in red or my comments.<br /><br />Hope this makes sense--LOVE the piece.<br /><br />Laura','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-16 23:47:01','2015-09-16 23:47:01',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(15999,3305,454,'Let me know if there are any problems! Thank you!','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-16 23:48:21','2015-09-17 06:11:38',NULL,'upload_55f9c7853ae0f9.43258641_Rooksample.docx','Rooksample.docx'),
	(16000,1173,617,'<p>Dear Karen/MoreThanWords,</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>Please know that I have received my paper back from my advisor-- the one&nbsp;you edited last week on the 7th of Sept--with negative comments and tons of grammatical, organization, and word choice which my advisor called \"awkward word choice\", such as the word \"ill science perception\" that you didn\'t take the time to correct it for me regardless of my effort trying to ask you to take a good care of my document for wish I paid about $27.00 for a sloppy and thoughtless work. I trusted you on good faith basis and thought I was taken care of, but I was obviously mistaken. Because of your negligence, I was punished and my grade was significantly reduced because of simple grammar issues that would have been solved by the very novice editor. I have seen your work and the time you took to edit from the first comment to the last was about 10-15 minutes in total for a 5-page paper! It tells me that you were not doing a good job. I asked you again in a follow up message to correct my word choice and make it intelligible for the English native speaker, and you said you did, but you did not. Here are examples on your sloppy editing:</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>The subdiscipline ((OFF))comparative politics, and the field of political science, are...</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>, and capitalizing on case study ((CAPTILIZING CASE STUDY))</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>casual inference ((CAUSAL))</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>the dynamic human nature&nbsp;((THE DYNAMICS OF HUMAN NATURE))</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>AND MANY MORE.........I have a long list that I don\'t have time to go through.</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>I am filing a complaint against your service with Editor World.&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>Thanks,</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-16 23:52:08','2015-09-17 17:34:32',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16001,2424,65,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-17 01:10:48','2015-09-17 01:10:48',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16002,2259,454,'Hello, Taka.<br /><br />Reduced the word count to 199 without, I think, affecting the content.<br /><br />Thanks!<br /><br />Laura','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-17 01:38:50','2015-09-17 01:38:50',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16003,2737,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit another of your papers on this critical topic.<br /><br />As always, your kind ratings are much appreciated.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-17 01:58:18','2015-09-17 01:58:18',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16004,144,3212,'Hi nyanidoc,<br />I had you proofread my manuscript on Aug 17, 2015. I truely enjoyed having you as my editor. But I just heard back from the reviewer, recommending me to send the manuscript to a professional editor: &nbsp;&nbsp;<br />\"That said, it would be helpful for the authors to read through the paper and--perhaps with assistance from a professional editor--enhance readability\"<br />I understand you have already done your work, but please take a look at it one more time so that the paper is ready for the final review. I have been through many professional editors, and you have been my favorite. I plan keeping you with other manuscripts in the near future. Please help me out. Thank you for considering it. Jenna &nbsp;<br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-17 05:10:18','2015-09-17 08:50:02',NULL,'upload_55fa12fade4e84.14865675_Manuscript-Revised.docx','Manuscript-Revised.docx'),
	(16005,454,3305,'An arc is an Advanced Reader Copy. Basically its the book without the final cover, that is given to very special people. Its the final draft. I only get 30 of them and Id like you to have one.&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-17 06:16:00','2015-09-17 08:46:49',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16006,144,3257,'Hello,&nbsp;<br /><br />Half the document I submitted for editing was overlooked and was not edited. I am sure this was just an honest mistake but please let me know how we can resolve this. Thank you!<br /><br />Best,&nbsp;<br />Tony Ham','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-17 06:31:00','2015-09-17 08:47:20',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16007,144,2259,'I have revised a couple of sentences according to your comments and would like you to recheck them.<br />I have grayed out the text that need not be edited. Thank you.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-17 06:35:42','2015-09-17 08:49:26',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16008,1772,3317,'In British English and remain the present formatting!<br /><br class=\"Apple-interchange-newline\" />','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-17 06:50:03','2015-09-17 06:50:03',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16009,144,3257,'<p>Hello again!</p><p>I am applying to the University of Vermont School of Medicine, but this is not an admissions essay. The school wants me to answer the following prompt:</p><p><strong>\"Please write a short response to the following question. (1000 characters maximum.)</strong></p><p><strong>\'Two roads diverged in a yellow wood. And sorry I could not travel both…\'</strong></p><p><strong>--Robert Frost, The Road Not Taken</strong></p><p><strong>Tell us about a time when you were at a crossroads and had to make an important choice. What do you think would have happened if you had made a different choice?\"<br /><br /></strong></p><p>I have attached a document which contains my response to the following prompt. That being said, there are a few things I need addressed by the editor.</p><p>1) I am 200 characters over the character limit on this document (Limit: 1000 character w/spaces). If you could please help me decrease the character count, while retaining the meaning of the content, that would be great. If you can eliminate redundancy, restructure complex sentences into more simple ones, etc... to make the document more concise, that would be ideal. Overall, I would like you to remove anything that you think does not directly ANSWER the above prompt. Also, I would like you to remove anything that you think does not add anything to the response and is just \"fluff\".</p><p>2) I want to ensure my grammar and word choice is perfect.</p>Thank you very much!<br /><br />PS: I had a concern with the last document I had you edit and I sent you a message about it. If you could please address my concern, that would be amazing! Thanks again!','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-17 07:01:32','2015-09-17 08:48:56',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16010,3257,144,'I\'m so sorry, Tony. My mistake. I saw a lot of white space and thought I had reached the end. I will get right to it tomorrow, along with your other document.<br /><br />Again, my apologies!<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-17 08:48:08','2015-09-17 09:17:07',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16011,3305,454,'Wow! I am really honored. Thank you. Were you able to open the doc okay?','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-17 08:48:31','2015-09-17 20:56:37',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16012,3212,144,'I must say I am very surprised by that recommendation, unless you made substantial changes to it after I sent it back, or did not accept many of my changes. With that said, however, I will definitely look at it again and see if I can address whatever might be an issue.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-17 08:52:23','2015-09-17 15:50:55',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16013,144,3321,'The paper is about summary of a lecture and my opinion. It should be over three pages, first two pages is about summary of lecture and rest should be about my opinion. Since English is my second laguage please focuse on grammar and sentece structure. If you can exapand the opinion part that would be great!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-17 10:15:51','2015-09-17 10:15:51',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16014,754,1541,'It was a pleasure to edit your well-written and most interesting document. I focused on correcting the grammar, elevating the language, and enhancing clarity, flow, and eloquence. I hope to have the opportunity to work with you again in the future. Best of luck to you with all your current and future endeavors.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-17 11:43:21','2015-09-17 11:43:21',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16015,144,3257,'Hi again,&nbsp;<br /><br />Sounds good. Thank you!<br /><br />Best,&nbsp;<br />Tony Ham','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-17 11:57:18','2015-09-17 18:36:44',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16016,144,3257,'<p>Hello again, </p><p>I am applying to the University of Vermont College of Medicine (UVM), and the school has asked me to answer the following question on my application:</p><p><strong>\"Additional Information: Please list any additional information that you feel the admissions committee should be aware of during the application evaluation process (1000 character limit).\"</strong><br /><br />Now, this is not exactly a question that possesses an answer; however, I wanted to use this space on the application as a way to drive home the point that I am greatly interested in UVM and that I would love to be a student there. </p><p>I have attached a document which contains my response to the prompt. Again, I primarily want to emphasize the point that UVM would be a great fit for me and that I would love to study medicine there. That being said, there are a few things I need addressed. </p><p>1) I am a few hundred characters over the limit on this document (1000 character w/spaces limit). If you could please help me decrease the character count, while retaining the meaning of the content, that would be great. If you can eliminate redundancy, restructure complex sentences into more simple ones, etc... to make the document more concise, that would be ideal. I especially think the first 2 paragraphs can be made more concise, since the 3rd and last paragraph is already pretty concise.</p><p>2) I want to ensure my grammar and word choice is perfect.</p>Thank you very much!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-17 12:40:52','2015-09-17 12:40:52',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16017,617,1173,'Hello -<br /><br />I am sorry you received a poor grade on your paper. <br /><br />Just so you know, none of the specific errors that you mentioned were in the document I submitted to you - which I have a copy of.&nbsp;I also addressed all your&nbsp;previous concerns in a reply email.<br /><br />The document I received to edit was less than two pages long, not five.<br /><br />I will attach it again so you can see that it was accurate, and has not been altered since my edits of Sept. 8.<br /><br />Again, I\'m sorry you are unhappy.<br /><br />Karen','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-17 17:55:24','2015-09-17 22:06:05',NULL,'upload_55fac64cefa053.11818143_SDEW_63271.docx','SDEW_63271.docx'),
	(16018,3212,144,'What was the filename on the original that I edited? I\'d like to take a look at it.<br /><br />Thanks,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-17 18:37:52','2015-09-17 19:54:26',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16019,3257,144,'Hello Tony,<br /><br />Here is the <em>fully</em> edited statement.<br /><br />Please let me know that you have received it. For some reason, I\'m nervous about sending files via messages.<br /><br />Again, I apologize for the inconvenience.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-17 19:32:55','2015-09-17 23:54:39',NULL,'upload_55fadd272ace13.97101233_EW_63520.docx','EW_63520.docx'),
	(16020,3257,144,'Thank you, Tony, for the opportunity to read and edit this statement. I\'m afraid I draw the line at counting characters--such a stupid thing for institutions to ask for--but I have streamlined the statement considerably and believe it should be within the limit.<br /><br />As always, ratings are much appreciated.<br /><br />All the Best,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-17 19:58:10','2015-09-17 23:56:03',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16021,144,3212,'<p>Hi,<br />See the attached file. This is the original copy that I have received from you. Please note that I accepted all of your suggestions.<br /><br />Thank you,<br /><br />Jenna</p>','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-17 20:05:51','2015-09-17 20:34:46',NULL,'upload_55fae4df5419c2.75152450_EW_62786_edited.docx','EW_62786_edited.docx'),
	(16022,3257,144,'Word would not give me an accurate character count. It kept saying it was much longer than it was. However, I have uploaded here an even more abbreviated version should you care to look at it. I was so frustrated that I did count the characters and spp.<br /><br />Best,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-17 20:34:17','2015-09-17 23:56:04',NULL,'upload_55faeb89ce1819.76376590_EW_63576.docx','EW_63576.docx'),
	(16023,2259,144,'Hello. I have edited the two sentences, and hope that I got the second one right, as I am not quite sure what you meant.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-17 20:46:41','2015-09-17 20:46:41',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16024,454,3305,'Yes i was, and wow it looked great. Ive gotta wait for my paycheck to come in, but if you ae free id like you to do the rest of it. As soon as you like the facebook page, send it a PM and we can go from there for your ARC.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-17 20:58:08','2015-09-17 21:11:48',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16025,3321,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your paper.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-17 21:40:52','2015-09-17 21:40:52',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16026,454,3255,'Hi!<br /><br />I just wanted to check in.&nbsp; Do you think they will be ready by the end of the day today?','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-17 21:45:39','2015-09-18 00:27:24',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16027,759,904,'Is this for real or an exercise in creative writing? Anyway, glad I could help.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-17 22:55:29','2015-09-18 03:59:35',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16028,144,3325,'This is a fellowship proposal. The reviewers are from different disciplines, but all focus on education. The following is information the selection committee provided:<br />Keep in mind the more specific questions that Selection Committee members consider in their deliberations: <br />-To what extent does the narrative discussion of the dissertation show knowledge of relevant research in the field? To what extent is it grounded in pertinent theory? <br />-To what extent is the study’s argued relevance to education convincing? To what extent is the study likely to yield new knowledge about an important educational issue? <br />-To what extent does the proposal explicate the following (as relevant your project): design and logic of the study; sources of evidence; measurement and classification; and nature of analysis and interpretation? To what extent are the methodology and analysis plans described in sufficient detail to evaluate their appropriateness for this specific study? <br />-To what extent does the proposal (whether by rationale for data analysis or by a discussion of preliminary results) make a case that the dissertation is likely to be compelling and important to the broader field of education research? <br />-To what extent does the narrative discussion display strong authorship skills, with clear organization and structure? <br />-Is the applicant likely to complete his/her doctoral studies within the time-frame the fellowship allows (one year full-time or two years half-time), or soon thereafter? <br />-What is the likelihood that the applicant will continue to conduct research and scholarly activities in the field of education? ','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-17 22:58:11','2015-09-17 22:58:11',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16029,2680,904,'I\'ve edited part of your paper so you can see how I can help. If you want more edited, just submit it through Editor World.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-17 23:01:57','2015-09-17 23:01:57',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16030,144,3257,'I did receive it. Thank you!<br /><br />Best, <br />TonyHam','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-17 23:55:35','2015-09-17 23:55:35',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16031,3257,144,'Here you are, Tony.<br /><br />Best,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-18 00:26:51','2015-09-18 00:26:51',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16032,3255,454,'Hi!<br /><br />I\'ll be uploading them shortly--sorry for the delay! I\'m so deadline oriented that when you mentioned Thursday it stuck in my brain.<br /><br />Thanks!<br /><br />Laura','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-18 02:16:14','2015-09-18 02:32:32',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16033,3305,454,'That\'s great. I\'m free--and I love working on fantasy so much that I wish I could edit it for free, but a girl\'s gotta eat! ;)<br /><br />Just so you know, you could always submit it a few chapters at a time.<br /><br />Thanks!<br /><br />Laura','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-18 02:19:08','2015-09-18 03:11:40',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16034,454,3255,'Thank you! No problem at all. We will have a few more for you soon!','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-18 02:33:01','2015-09-18 04:13:31',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16035,3325,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your proposal.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-18 02:56:44','2015-09-18 02:56:44',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16036,454,3305,'I know. Its just for me i just got out of a bad, very abusive relationship. Living with friends now. This is my job. Ive tried finding work outside this, but to no avail. Though to hear you are free makes me happy to hear, you did such a great job on the preview.&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-18 03:13:20','2015-09-18 04:15:04',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16037,904,759,'Haha, I wonder why you ask if it is for real...?','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-18 04:00:09','2015-09-18 04:10:17',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16038,3255,454,'Here you go--again, let me know if there are any tech problems or questions about the edits. <br /><br />Yay!<br /><br />Laura','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-18 04:14:22','2015-09-18 04:35:07',NULL,'upload_55fb575ed61525.86363582_upload_55f6ccaea38772.48673250_She\'s Funny That Way.docx','upload_55f6ccaea38772.48673250_She\'s Funny That Way.docx'),
	(16039,3305,454,'Sorry to hear--it\'ll get better. Hang in there!','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-18 04:16:00','2015-09-18 04:25:20',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16040,759,904,'If it\'s real, it\'s sad and good; if not, it\'s just good.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-18 05:44:37','2015-09-18 06:03:28',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16041,904,759,'It\'s real, and very sad, and I hoped it\'s good.<br />Thank you!','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-18 06:04:31','2015-09-18 06:29:20',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16042,2083,3226,'Hi, I experienced your editting. I need to inform you of the followings;<br />- the format is fixed; the titles, forms such as bulleted lists and so on. <br />- the draft has no references but only introduction. <br />- I\'m not a native, so I believe that you can revise my sentences as well as checking grammars. <br /><br />Thanks<br /><br />Junghyo','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-18 07:43:43','2015-09-18 07:43:43',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16043,144,695,'Please note this is my third time to submit. Ignore the rest and concentrate with this document.  I also want you to know that you have my permission to make changes when you think it is necessary.  Also, please see the flow is OK. Thank you as always. Wolde','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-18 16:48:02','2015-09-18 16:48:02',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16044,1021,1173,'Here is your edited document - thank you!<br /><br />Karen Z.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-18 19:20:41','2015-09-18 19:20:41',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16045,695,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your paper on the sad state of affairs in Ethiopia. I have lived in Tanzania and Kenya, worked briefly in Rwanda, and have visited other countries, so I know some of the problems that plague that beautiful continent.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-18 21:26:50','2015-09-18 21:26:50',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16046,3324,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your paper.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-19 00:34:37','2015-09-19 00:34:37',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16047,144,3109,'This is the first submission of a journal for a research that will be conducted for the discipline Historiography and Methods graduate course.<br />I am a second language learner. Please, pay atention in the use of pronoun as well as the mechanics.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-19 03:20:48','2015-09-19 03:20:48',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16048,3039,65,'Thank you. A version with all changes input follows the edited one.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-19 04:01:13','2015-09-19 04:01:13',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16049,3315,1439,'Hello! For this document, I focused on eliminating passive voice, consistency in terminology, and ensuring that the data was presented in a smooth, organized fashion. I left several comments on the side either explaining certain edits or offering suggestions for you consideration, so be sure to look out for those. Thank you for your submission!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-19 04:28:42','2015-09-19 04:28:42',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16050,3109,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit the beginning of your journal. Please pay particular attention to the comments, as I am afraid there were phrases that I did not understand.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-19 04:29:39','2015-09-19 04:29:39',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16051,904,3327,'Hi,<br />This document is the teaching statement required for academic faculty application process. Since I understand this is for free sample service, I would like to know if I can choose not to&nbsp;publicize my document. Thank you!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-19 05:02:45','2015-09-19 05:02:45',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16052,904,884,'My<strong> twice yearly</strong> re-determination form was not mailed to me.<br /><br />My once in tow years re-determination form was not mailed to me.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-19 07:54:30','2015-09-19 18:17:26',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16053,904,884,'Correct<br /><br />My once in two years re-determination form was not mailed to me.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-19 07:55:16','2015-09-19 18:20:59',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16054,454,2259,'Hello Laura,<br />This is a paper concerning e-learning system, which has previously been edited by another editor.<br />The author revised some parts of the document, so I would like you to check only the revised<br />text indicated in yellow marker (P. 1, 2, 4, and 10).<br />Thank you,<br />Taka','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-19 08:47:56','2015-09-19 08:47:56',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16055,65,3257,'<p>Hello, <br /><br />I am applying to the Univeristy of Arizona School of Medicine, but this is not an admissions essay. The school wants me to answer the following prompt: <strong><br /><br />\"<b><strong>Please share a meaningful experience you have had working or volunteering in the health professional field or a time in your past in which you were responsible for the care and well-being of someone else. What did you learn from this as it relates to becoming a physician? (Limit: 350 words)</strong>\"<br /><br /></b></strong>I have attached a document which contains my response to the aforementioned prompt (the prompt is also in bold at the top of the document and the word count was not included in the total word count as it is not to be edited). That being said, there are a few things I need addressed you, the editor. <br /><br />1) I am about 80 words over the word limit on this document (350 word limit). If you could please help me decrease the word count, while retaining the meaning of the content, that would be great. If you can eliminate redundancy, restructure complex sentences into more simple ones, etc... to make the document more concise, that would be ideal. Overall, I would like you to remove anything that you think does not directly ANSWER the above prompt. Also, I would like you to remove anything that you think does not add anything productive to the response and is just \"fluff\". <br /><br />2) I want to ensure my grammar and word choice is perfect. <br /><br />Thank you very much!<strong> <br /></strong></p>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-19 09:42:38','2015-09-19 09:42:38',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16056,65,3328,'Hi.  This is the first time I have used this website.  From reading it, it looks like you edit seven days a week?  I have a 2 page limit for the text and the paper must be in APA style.  I am new to APA style.  I need this back on Sunday.   Thanks so much.  Lynn','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-19 17:45:05','2015-09-19 17:45:05',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16057,3257,65,'Got the word count to 345, while retaining the story of your grandmother.<br /><br />You\'ve answered the second part of the prompt (caring for someone), and I think you\'ve ansered it well.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-19 18:13:58','2015-09-19 18:13:58',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16058,884,904,'<p>My biennial redetermination ... means once every two years<br /><br />Semiannual means twice a year<br /><br />And there no hyphen in redtermination</p>','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-19 18:20:33','2015-09-19 22:01:03',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16059,3328,65,'Minor edits. Fixed the APA formatting for you (first page header, spacing, References).<br /><br />Had a couple of questions as shown in the comments.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-19 20:02:14','2015-09-19 20:02:14',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16060,144,2821,'Hi, I am attaching last document.<br />Can you please give me in track changes. Can you please give this to me asap. <br />Regards','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-19 20:56:54','2015-09-19 20:56:54',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16061,144,2821,'Hi, I have submitted one last document. Can you please give this to me as soon as possible.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-19 20:57:51','2015-09-19 20:57:51',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16062,3270,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your summary.<br /><br />As always, ratings are much appreciated.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-19 21:14:01','2015-09-19 21:14:01',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16063,1163,1759,'Hi Mastor Editor.&nbsp;&nbsp;I am sorry.&nbsp; As I am just now working on my dissertation again.&nbsp; My father had a heartattack and emergency 5 bypass surgery, while at the same time my mother is getting cancer treatment and my only sibling is in Texas just had a baby and was unable to come back to help with my parents.&nbsp; So after we have all the drama settled here I was diagnosed with Lyme\'s disease.&nbsp; geesh!&nbsp; <br /><br />But I refuse to quit and so here&nbsp; I am again.&nbsp; ;) I am hoping to continue to use you as my main editor throughout this dissertation process and will be sending bits and peices that I will be pasting back into my main draft.&nbsp; <br /><br />As for the text boxes....there are several of them that cut off the text at the bottom of the box and so they are not all readable.&nbsp; Also, for APA format on tables i think I am supposed to have just one line at the top and bottom of the page.&nbsp; There are some pages with two solid lines, and of those the two lines are not even links.&nbsp; I am unable to remove them?&nbsp; Can you help with these things please?&nbsp; <br /><br />Also, with the boxes....would be be easier to have the boxex go across the table under the columns it is referring too.&nbsp; So rather than being just under the numbers column it would go across the width of the table under both columns?&nbsp;&nbsp; I am fine either way (as long as my chair is fine with it) but didn\'t know if that would help the text being cut off issue....<br /><br />Thanks so much!&nbsp; I look forward to continuing to send you more chapters for edits!','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-19 21:37:28','2015-09-20 03:31:25',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16064,3212,144,'Hello Jenna, <br /><br />I had forgotten how long your paper is, and I am also getting a lot of other work at the moment. Therefore, I\'m afraid I won\'t be able to re-edit it for free--that is not a typical practice on the site in any case. However, if you would like me to work on it, I\'ll be happy to give you a 20% discount.<br /><br />Just let me know.<br /><br />Best,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-19 22:10:55','2015-09-20 01:40:04',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16065,65,617,'Hi again!<br /><br />I need full edit to the document attached, please. If changes need to be done, please do them. I will have another document tomorrow as well.<br /><br />Thanks alot,<br />Mia','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-19 22:17:50','2015-09-19 22:17:50',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16066,3226,2083,'Hello! <br /><br />Per your comments, I did not alter the headings or font styles of the headings and bullets. I focused on consistecy of termiology, eliminating passive voice, and making sure that the sentences were comprehensive within the logic flow of the argument. As with before, I left several comments on the side either explaining certain edits or offering suggestions for your consideration, so be sure to look out for those. Feel free to message me if you have any quesitons, and please don\'t forget to rate my service! Thanks. =)','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-19 22:41:19','2015-09-19 22:41:19',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16067,695,144,'Pardon me, but I am just curious. If I am \'super,\' why did you give me such a low rating? Low ratings pull down my overall rating.<br /><br />As I said, just curious.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Your (female) editor,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-19 22:45:04','2015-09-21 02:31:41',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16068,3150,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your paper.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-19 23:24:45','2015-09-19 23:24:45',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16069,65,1090,'Dear Editor,<br />long time ago when you checked my documents, I forgot to ask you if the following sentences make sense. Would you mind checking the following two sentences?<br />Look forward to hearing from you soon. Thank you in advance..<br /><br />\r\n<p>1. Removal and transformation of metal oxide nanoparticles (MNPs) from three model consumer products (donuts, toothpaste, sunscreens: TiO<sub>2</sub>/ZnO <em>widely used</em> in the food and cosmetic industries as a whitening agent) in environmental media will be examined.</p>\r\n<p>2. Moreover, public lecture and workshops will be provided to outreach manufacturers and relevant policy makers.</p>','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-20 01:18:03','2015-09-20 01:24:53',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16070,1173,3329,'I need this in 8 hours. Pls advise if able to do this. ladynicolas@live.com','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-20 02:23:27','2015-09-20 04:33:20',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16071,1173,3329,'I just need a cover and APA style please. Thank you.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-20 02:25:29','2015-09-20 04:34:10',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16072,1090,65,'<p>1. The removal and transformation of metal oxide nanoparticles (MNPs) from three model consumer products will be examined using the environmental media. These products are donuts, toothpastes, and sunscreens, as TiO2/ZnO&nbsp;is widely used&nbsp;as a whitening agent in the food and cosmetic industries.</p>\r\n<p>2. Moreover, public lectures and workshops will be provided to reach out to manufacturers and relevant policy makers.<br /><br /><br />I hope these revisions help. The first sentence requires your expertise to be sure it says what you wanted to say.<br /><br />The second one is simpler and clearer...at least to me.</p>','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-20 03:52:00','2015-09-20 04:09:54',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16073,617,65,'Wow. This was a deeply analytical text and I read it several times to be sure I understood the main points. You are the subject matter expert.<br /><br />I think I clarified a few points (see comments).&nbsp;<br /><br />Will look forward to the next text tomorrow.<br /><br />Thank you,<br /><br />Jackson','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-20 04:05:51','2015-09-20 05:22:19',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16074,2745,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your statement.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-20 04:16:23','2015-09-20 04:16:23',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16075,65,1090,'Thanks a milion! the revision helps.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-20 04:17:01','2015-09-20 04:23:57',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16076,3329,1173,'I will do this now - thank you!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-20 04:33:41','2015-09-20 04:33:41',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16077,2821,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit this final section of your paper.<br /><br />As always, ratings are much appreciated.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-20 05:02:00','2015-09-20 05:02:00',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16078,3329,1173,'Here you go - editing complete. Thank you!<br /><br />Karen Z.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-20 05:02:49','2015-09-20 05:54:19',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16079,65,617,'Hi Jackson.<br /><br />Thanks a lot for your edit and helpful suggestions.<br /><br />I am working on my next paper and I hope to send it out to you by either tomorrow or Monday morning.&nbsp;<br /><br />Thanks again for the great work.<br />Mia','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-20 05:24:12','2015-09-20 16:17:38',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16080,2386,144,'Thank you, Daniel, for the opportunity to read and edit another of your pieces.<br /><br />As you know, ratings are always appreciated :)<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-20 06:13:01','2015-09-20 06:13:01',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16081,2083,2424,'Please, ignore the TK\'s (\"To Come\"). Thank you. ','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-20 07:57:31','2015-09-20 07:57:31',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16082,856,1090,'hi, this document is extremely important that must be very well-written. Please edit it thoroughly and check it for everything including all figures and tables. Lookf roward to having excellent edited document.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-20 09:16:16','2015-09-20 09:16:16',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16083,904,884,'<p class=\"western\" align=\"left\">Express editing required<br />------------------------------------------------------<br /> &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;Public input sought for this incident.</p>\r\n<p class=\"western\" align=\"left\">Sagipora 18 kms from main town of Sopore, Kashmir, Asia.</p>\r\n<p class=\"western\" align=\"left\">&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p class=\"western\" align=\"left\">September 19, 2015</p>\r\n<p class=\"western\" align=\"left\">&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p class=\"western\" align=\"left\">What is the profile of the victim or victims?</p>\r\n<p class=\"western\" align=\"left\">&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p class=\"western\" align=\"left\">On Friday, September 18, 2015 Sopore, Kashmir.</p>\r\n<p class=\"western\" align=\"left\">Father-son duo Bashir Ahmed Bhat and Burhan 3 years old were murdered by gunman on Friday, September 18, 2015 at Sagipora 18 kms from main town of Sopore, Kashmir.</p>\r\n<p class=\"western\" align=\"left\">Three years old Burhan was hit by a bullet in his abdomen when unidentified gunmen fired indiscriminately at the father-son duo on Friday evening.</p>\r\n<p class=\"western\" align=\"left\">&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p class=\"western\" align=\"left\">Accused, Guilty</p>\r\n<p class=\"western\" align=\"left\">&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p class=\"western\" align=\"left\">Do you already know the accused, guilty?</p>\r\n<p class=\"western\" align=\"left\">What is the profile of the accused, guilty?</p>\r\n<p class=\"western\" align=\"left\">Do you already know the suspect?</p>\r\n<p class=\"western\" align=\"left\">What is the profile of the suspect?</p>\r\n<p class=\"western\" align=\"left\">What is the name, place of birth, further identity of gunmen involved in these two murders?</p>\r\n<p class=\"western\" align=\"left\">Where did they stay within 24 hours of the incident?</p>\r\n<p class=\"western\" align=\"left\">Where did they stay 10 days before the incident?</p>\r\n<p class=\"western\" align=\"left\">What was their mailing address from birth until their arrest and detention?</p>\r\n<p class=\"western\" align=\"left\">What is their likely political affiliation?</p>\r\n<p class=\"western\" align=\"left\">Who is behind these murderers?</p>\r\n<p class=\"western\" align=\"left\">Is this is any manner Hindu criminals behind the scenes utilizing locals?</p>\r\n<p class=\"western\" align=\"left\">What was the motive behind this incident?</p>\r\n<p class=\"western\" align=\"left\">Who provided weapons to them?</p>\r\n<p class=\"western\" align=\"left\">Who are the manufacturers of weapons utilized in this incident?</p>\r\n<p class=\"western\" align=\"left\">&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p class=\"western\" align=\"left\">Local police block all routes so that these criminals do not escape.</p>\r\n<p class=\"western\" align=\"left\">Make public announcements through public speaking systems.</p>\r\n<p class=\"western\" align=\"left\">Arrest, detention immediately.</p>\r\n<p class=\"western\" align=\"left\">Utilize all techniques and technologies to arrest, detention of these criminals.</p>\r\n<p class=\"western\" align=\"left\">&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p class=\"western\" align=\"left\">Everyone mus be reminded Mufti sayed and mebooba mufti will be put to judicial death penalty at any point. Transfer dead body of mufti sayed and mehbooba mufti for dissection to Srinagar medical college. Mufti sayed has remained Class 1 felony. Mehbooba mufti has remained class 1 felon.</p>\r\n<p class=\"western\" align=\"left\">&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p class=\"western\" align=\"left\">&nbsp;</p>','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-20 11:53:56','2015-09-20 20:40:45',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16084,617,65,'Glad you are happy. Send the next text whenever you are ready.<br /><br />Jackson','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-20 16:18:32','2015-09-20 16:18:32',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16085,904,2811,'Please advise on the natural flow of sentense and clearity','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-20 17:07:46','2015-09-20 17:07:46',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16086,884,904,'you can\'t \'require\' express editing, but if you submit as a one-day paper, I\'ll get it done.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-20 20:42:58','2015-09-20 23:50:46',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16087,144,2875,'It is a summary of a chapter I read. ','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-20 22:12:26','2015-09-20 22:12:26',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16088,2259,454,'Thank you, Taka.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-20 23:14:09','2015-09-20 23:14:09',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16089,3313,2083,'Hello! <br /><br />After receiving your document, I was wondering if you can please send the file as a .doc or .docx file? That way I can track my changes as I edit your text and leave comments on the side. Thanks! =)','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-20 23:24:58','2015-09-21 04:42:46',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16090,804,65,'I received your text but the order shows 1 word for $0.1, which is not correct.<br /><br />Can you please resubmit your text and enter 1,177 as the word count?<br /><br />I\'ve already edited the text and will return it promptly after this issue is resolved.<br /><br />Thank you.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-20 23:52:19','2015-09-21 05:58:57',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16091,3324,904,'Very nicely done. Glad I could help.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-20 23:55:38','2015-09-20 23:55:38',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16092,904,884,'Take a look at this.<br />EW_63597.docx<br /><br />This is an unedited document.<br />Edited document needs to be uploaded.<br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-21 00:49:11','2015-09-21 01:13:58',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16093,2424,2083,'Hello! <br /><br />I left quite a few comments, so just message me if you\'d like any clarification or have questions. Best of luck with the book! If you need an editor, let me know! Thanks. =)','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-21 00:51:46','2015-09-21 00:51:46',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16094,904,884,'Take a look at this.<br /><a class=\"documentLink\" href=\"../document/download/63637\" target=\"_blank\">EW_63632.docx</a>&nbsp;<br /><br />Unedited document has been uploaded.<br />Edited document needs to be uploaded.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-21 01:07:09','2015-09-21 01:15:18',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16095,884,904,'try again','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-21 01:14:53','2015-09-21 01:21:48',NULL,'upload_55ff21cd158b19.93271386_EW_63597.docx','EW_63597.docx'),
	(16096,884,904,'try again','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-21 01:17:32','2015-09-21 01:20:46',NULL,'upload_55ff226c360cd8.84192284_EW_63632.docx','EW_63632.docx'),
	(16097,2490,856,'Hi, Thomas - Here\'s the edited ms. Thanks again for the pleasure of reading your work. <br /><br />You\'d mentioned feeling that it is too wordy, but really I didn\'t find all that much to cut, and it didn\'t seem tremendously wordy to me.&nbsp; If you have a specific word-count or page-number goal, we could be more aggressive in cutting it down, but absent that type of requirement, I think it\'s pretty succinct, particularly given your writing skills.&nbsp; <br /><br />Another comment, for you to take or leave:<br />I wonder if you might consider a restructuring of this ms. Your material in the section &ldquo;Overlapping empires&rdquo; has a delicious flavor, offers a fascinating personal view of the reality of Hulunbuir, strongly draws a reader into the narrative. What if you began the piece with this material? Focus on&nbsp;the specific place and your experience of that place, then pull back and begin asking your questions: what is empire? Etc etc. Maybe this is more in the style of &ldquo;creative nonfiction&rdquo; than pure scholarly writing, but I don&rsquo;t see anything wrong with that &ndash; it&rsquo;s still a work of scholarship, but written in a possibly more engaging manner. And getting the reader engaged, whether the reader is a scholar or a dilettante, can&rsquo;t be a bad thing, can it? I don&rsquo;t think the material about Hulunbuir is too personal &ndash; you don&rsquo;t talk about where you bought a beer or met a friend or anything &ndash; but it makes the facts of the history vividly alive.<br /><br />So for example in an initial section you would describe Hulunbuir using the material that is presently in paragraphs 2 and 3 of the Overlapping empires section, then you pull back and say something like: But what is meant by &ldquo;empire&rdquo;, the concept and the reality &ndash; introduce your topics formally? So maybe you have 3 paragraphs (fairly long) for your first section, then segue into the following sections for&nbsp;&ldquo;what is empire&rdquo; and your scholarly discussions. &nbsp;You could call this new first section &ldquo;Legacy of empire&rdquo; for example.<br /><br />Then the section on Overlapping empires could begin with referring back to Hulunbuir briefly (&ldquo;What we see in Hulunbuir today is the cumulative reflection of overlapping imperiums&hellip;&rdquo; &ndash; something like that only better expressed!) and then go on to the CER discussion etc. &ldquo;To appreciate the diversity of interest&hellip;&rdquo;I think this revised structure could also strengthen the ms. as a stand-alone piece.&nbsp;&nbsp; <br /><br />I look forward to reading more.&nbsp; RebeccaTDE','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-21 01:17:38','2015-09-21 04:08:48',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16098,904,884,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-21 01:33:45','2015-09-21 01:33:45',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16099,144,695,'Hi Ms. Nyanidoc,<br />I am sorry addressing you as a man. I was not sure Nyanidoc is female or male.&nbsp; I appologize&nbsp; for that.&nbsp; When I said you&nbsp;are&nbsp;\"super\" I meant to say that you gave me an excellent editing services.&nbsp; In fact, you did a super job for me.Thank you again, again and again. If you have any questions, please send me an email.<br />regards.<br />Wolde','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-21 02:44:38','2015-09-21 04:43:27',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16100,65,3328,'Hi. I have a second project that needs editing.  This portion is going into another document which includes the actual interview transcript and other information required by the professor. THis document needs to be APA style.  No references are required for this one and the headers and page number will be part of the full document so not contained here.  Again, this document is my reflexsion of the actual interview.  Any suggestions on how to format the sections is appreciated.  Thanks.   Lynn','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-21 02:49:24','2015-09-21 04:08:12',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16101,3328,65,'Hello, Lynn,<br /><br />I\'ve downloaded your text and will review it early tomorrow morning. Thank you for all of the details, as these are very helpful.<br /><br />I work with APA almost daily, so no worries there. I\'m sure I can&nbsp;figure out how to&nbsp;format the sections for you.<br /><br />Jackson','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-21 04:11:39','2015-09-21 05:46:40',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16102,65,3332,'This is a diversity statement for an application for an assitant professor position in an American university. Thanks.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-21 04:28:34','2015-09-21 04:28:34',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16103,695,144,'Oh, don\'t be sorry! It\'s not a problem, I was just letting you know. Nyanidoc is an alias, not indicative of male or female.<br /><br />Is it possible for you to ask Patti to change your rating? That would be appreciated.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-21 04:44:50','2016-12-03 07:18:55',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16104,65,804,'Yes, I will do so.&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-21 06:00:31','2015-09-21 06:00:31',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16105,1163,3078,'Please edit this discussion board response for grammar, punctuation, APA format.  No title page, etc. is required.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-21 06:45:57','2015-09-21 08:41:22',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16106,3327,904,'I\'ve edited part of your paper so you see how my work can help. If you want more done, just submit it through Editor World. And, of course, your work is confidential.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-21 07:13:36','2015-09-21 21:31:02',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16107,856,3333,'<h3>1. I choose you because you have anthropological background since this study is based on the anthropological method.  So I want you to<strong> change my terms in more academical tone especially ralated with anthropological theory</strong> rather than to correct grammatical error.  (you can rewrite some of the theory I mentioned if you know better about it.)</h3><h3>2. If you can, feel free to remove few sentences which is not needed. (this article has to be published in truncated form) 6258 to 5000</h3><h3>thank you.</h3>','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-21 08:12:37','2015-09-21 09:57:37',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16108,65,3332,'I\'d like to cancel my request. It\'s past due, and I no longer need editing for the document.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-21 08:36:59','2015-09-21 14:14:34',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16109,1759,1163,'Hi, Iowa:<br /><br />It is very good to hear from you. I am so sorry to hear about your father and mother; I will keep them in my prayers. And I hope that your sibling and new nephew or niece are doing very well! And I\'m so sorry about your being diagnosed with Lyme disease--it seems like when it rains, it pours. But I hope you are feeling better, and I admire your persistence and can-do attitude! I applaud you for refusing to quit in your dissertation process! <br /><br />Sure, I would be more than happy to review the other sections of your dissertation as your produce them. I will be on the lookout for them. I can take a look at the text box issue during the editing process as well; it will be a bit easier for me to understand what you are describing when I see the table firsthand.<br /><br />Again, I look forward to working with you further!<br /><br />Sincerley,<br />MasterEditor','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-21 08:46:56','2015-10-16 16:56:04',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16110,3333,856,'Dear author - Thank you for selecting me to work on your manuscript.&nbsp; Just to clarify, is your absolute word limit 5000 words?&nbsp; That is, does my editing include the need to reduce total word count from 6258 to 5000?&nbsp; RebeccaTDE','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-21 09:59:33','2015-09-21 10:37:18',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16111,856,3333,'Dear editor<br /><br />No, you don\'t have to reduce words to 5000.<br />It\'s the approximate number.&nbsp;<br />please reduce words as many as possible.&nbsp;<br />Under 5500 would be perfect...but it doesn\'t matter if you can\'t.&nbsp;<br /><br />Thanks.&nbsp;<br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-21 10:44:19','2015-09-21 23:46:02',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16112,3332,65,'My apologies. I thought I had turned off my same-day availability, when, in fact, I had not.<br /><br />I\'d be happy to do this as a free edit if you resubmit it today as a free edit.<br /><br />Again, I usually sign out at about 8 p.m. but neglected to do so last night.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-21 14:16:09','2015-09-21 15:35:43',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16113,804,65,'Thank you for re-uploading the file with the correct wordcount.<br /><br />Here are the edits for your review.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-21 16:50:23','2015-09-30 21:33:40',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16114,3332,65,'I\'m sending this edited file to you free of charge because of my mistake.<br /><br />I hope the edits prove helpful to you.<br /><br />I\'ve contacted customer services to request a full refund for you.<br /><br />All the best, and again, I apologize for missing the deadline.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-21 17:17:41','2015-09-21 17:17:41',NULL,'upload_5600037528a346.30364616_SDEW_63640.docx','SDEW_63640.docx'),
	(16115,144,3334,'Hello,<br />I am working on a board handbook for our nonprofit organization and need help in editing and formatting.  Spelling, grammer, syntax and formatting are not my strength and my Board is looking for this document to look professional.  I know there are a lot of formatting issues from the table of contents to the section about Bylaws.  Various inconsistancies in the bullets fonts, sizes of text, and other inconsisticencies that make the text harder to read than need be.  If you could review the text for all of these mentioned issues that would be great.  You will see that I often capitalize words within a sentence that don\'t need capitalization.  Thanks so much for your support on this.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-21 18:08:44','2015-09-21 18:08:44',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16116,2083,3313,'No I have already paid to have it done in a PDF formate.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-21 18:10:57','2015-09-21 18:49:12',NULL,'upload_56000ff168de55.63571570_SCAAResourceGuide2016.e$S_Layout 1.pdf','SCAAResourceGuide2016.e$S_Layout 1.pdf'),
	(16117,3313,2083,'I understand! Just so you know, we cannot edit PDF files, as we need to be able to both edit and leave comments for the text. What I can do is copy the text from the PDF to a Word doc, edit the text with notes, and send that to you. If that doesn\'t work however, I can certainly ask our manager to speak with you about refunding the job. Just let me know what you would like!','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-21 18:56:53','2015-09-21 19:05:44',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16118,2386,144,'Hello Daniel,<br /><br />Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit this piece.<br /><br />As always, your kind ratings are much appreciated.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-21 18:58:48','2015-09-21 18:58:48',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16119,2875,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your summary.<br /><br />As always, ratings are much appreciated.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-21 18:59:35','2015-09-21 18:59:35',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16120,2083,3313,'That doesn\'t work for me your profile said that you could edit PDF\'s and that is what I paid for. &nbsp;The cost would be much lower if it was a word doc.,','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-21 19:09:04','2015-09-21 19:10:35',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16121,3313,2083,'Right, I just spoke with our manager. She suggested leaving comments within the PDF--these will provide you all the notes and changes!','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-21 19:12:02','2015-09-21 19:14:04',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16122,2083,3313,'ok','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-21 19:15:13','2015-09-21 19:16:00',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16123,3313,2083,'Hello! <br /><br />For this PDF, I put several comments (which appear as yellow boxes) throughout the file with edits or suggestions for you consideration. Some of the comments have entire paragraphs (for the main body of text, specifically) that edit the entire section, while others are smaller comments about margins or grammar. Feel free to message me if you have any questions! I\'m availabe through the Editor World messaging system. Thanks! =)','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-21 19:52:54','2015-09-21 19:52:54',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16124,2424,65,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-21 20:52:30','2015-09-21 20:52:30',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16125,904,2956,'Hello,<br />You have worked with me before, I would like to hire you again. &nbsp;I have a short 2 paragraph document that need revision. &nbsp;Is it possible you can do it for me in a couple of hours? &nbsp;Please let me know, so I can put in the order and request you.<br /><br /><br />Regards,<br /><br />Chris','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-21 21:01:08','2015-09-21 21:39:36',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16126,3328,65,'Suggest you \"accept all\" and then review and revise.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-21 21:19:10','2015-09-21 21:19:10',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16127,1709,2956,'Hello,<br />You have worked with me before, I would like to hire you again. &nbsp;I have a short 2 paragraph document that need revision. &nbsp;Is it possible you can do it for me in a couple of hours? &nbsp;Please let me know, so I can put in the order and request you.<br /><br /><br />Regards,<br /><br />Chris','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-21 21:27:03','2015-09-21 22:08:31',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16128,3034,2956,'Hello,<br />You have worked with me before, I would like to hire you again. &nbsp;I have a short 2 paragraph document that need revision. &nbsp;Is it possible you can do it for me in a couple of hours? &nbsp;Please let me know, so I can put in the order and request you.<br /><br /><br />Regards,<br /><br />Chris','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-21 21:28:43','2015-09-21 22:00:29',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16129,482,2956,'<strong><strong></strong></strong>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>Good afternoon,</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>My name is Chris Doret,&nbsp; I recently graduated with a Master&rsquo;s of Healthcare Administration from Seton Hall.&nbsp; I have a solid experience in Project Management, with, contract negotiation and compliance.&nbsp; James Broadway, referred me to you please advise on how I should proceed. I would appreciate whatever you can do to assist.</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-21 21:34:56','2015-09-21 21:53:20',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16130,482,2956,'<strong><strong></strong></strong>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>Good afternoon,</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>My name is Chris Doret,&nbsp; I recently graduated with a Master&rsquo;s of Healthcare Administration from Seton Hall.&nbsp; I have a solid experience in Project Management, with, contract negotiation and compliance.&nbsp; James Broadway, referred me to you please advise on how I should proceed. I would appreciate whatever you can do to assist.</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-21 21:34:59','2015-09-21 21:52:49',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16131,144,3327,'','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-21 21:36:59','2015-09-21 21:36:59',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16132,2083,3327,'Hi,<br />this is a teaching statement required for faculty position searching. Please keep it in confidential. Thanks!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-21 21:39:39','2015-09-21 21:39:39',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16133,2956,904,'I\'ve made myself available for 2-hour editing so send it along&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-21 21:43:17','2015-09-21 21:43:17',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16134,2956,482,'Hi, Chris &mdash; I\'m not sure what kind of help you\'re looking for exactly. It sounds like you are looking for work. Resume writing is not a service I provide, though if you write your own resume I can proofread it for you.<br /><br />I\'m currently offlne with Editor World because I have a bunch of other projects keeping me busy through the end of the month. But if you let me know when you have an editing job to upload, I can turn on my availability long enough to accept it.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-21 21:59:40','2015-09-21 21:59:40',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16135,482,2956,'Sorry!! I meant to send an email asking if you can edit that for me within the next 1 hour. If so, I will assign to you.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-21 22:00:26','2015-09-21 22:13:35',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16136,2956,3034,'Hi Chris. I can do this. I\'ll make my profile available now. Just choose the appropriate timeline when you submit it. Thanks,<br /><br />Oren','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-21 22:01:12','2015-09-21 22:03:06',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16137,3034,2956,'Perfect!!<br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-21 22:04:46','2015-09-21 22:07:10',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16138,2956,1709,'Yes, I can do it today if you choose same day editing. I\'ll get a rush notification.<br />Thanks!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-21 22:09:03','2015-09-21 22:09:03',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16139,2956,482,'OK, yes, I can do that. I just turned my availabiliy on. Thanks!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-21 22:15:57','2015-09-21 22:15:57',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16140,3034,2956,'Thanks a million','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-21 22:17:39','2015-09-21 22:17:39',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16141,2956,3034,'Let me know if you have any questions!<br /><br />Oren','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-21 22:28:49','2015-09-21 22:28:49',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16142,2811,904,'Nicely done. I\'ll edit the other paper soon.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-21 22:49:19','2015-09-21 22:49:19',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16143,2956,904,'I guess you\'ve found someone else so I\'m signing out of 2-hour editing. If you still need me, let me know and I\'ll go back on.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-21 22:56:24','2015-09-21 22:56:24',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16144,2811,904,'This is fine, too. Good luck.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-21 23:10:04','2015-09-21 23:10:04',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16145,454,3255,'Same as usual!!  Thanks!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-22 00:41:23','2015-09-22 00:41:23',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16146,2424,65,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-22 00:58:49','2015-09-22 00:58:49',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16147,2956,482,'I\'m going to have to clock out at 5:30 because I have a class tonight. Maybe tomorrow? Or one of the other editors may be available.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-22 01:09:44','2015-09-22 01:09:44',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16148,65,617,'Hi Jackson,<br /><br />Please edit for clarity, grammar, transitions, etc. This is a graded paper, and would highly appreciate your attention. Last time, I used different editor and lost scores because my grader thought that some word choice was awkward. I would like to sound like native speaker in my papers please. <br /><br />I would appreciate if you can turn it in by tomorrow\'s afternoon because I have  a deadline (I couldn\'t see the option of 4-8 hours editing next to your name this time).<br /><br />Thanks a lot,<br />Maya','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-22 02:11:46','2015-09-22 02:11:46',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16149,3317,1772,'There are a few empty parentheses, and I wasn\'t sure if a formula belonged there, or if you needed wording to go there. I highlighted each set of empty parentheses and left them blank.<br /><br />Several of the graphs and figures have small errors that I could not fix. I made notes in the caption of each affected graph to let you know what issues I saw.<br /><br />Please let me know if you have any questions or want me to look something over again.&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-22 03:19:37','2016-07-05 06:41:55',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16150,3334,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your handbook. It sounds like a wonderful org, with programs we desperately need for our young people--and many adults, for that matter.<br /><br /> I have added pp # to the TOC, as those are quite helpful :) and I believe I\'ve dealt with the issues of formatting, font size, spacing, etc., all of which have improved readability. I\'ve jazzed up the look as well w/ varied bullets and color, which you may or may not like. I have also addressed the usual editing issues.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it greatly.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-22 03:26:41','2015-09-22 17:34:14',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16151,3327,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your sample.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-22 03:44:49','2015-09-22 04:07:10',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16152,2083,3336,'Hi!<br /><br />I\'m seeking that professional shine for my statement of teaching philosphy. Judging by your bio you\'re familiar with these documents, and what they need to communicate.<br /><br />I feel like the draft is close, but I could use another set of eyes. I\'d like you to concentrate on clarity while maintaining the overall enthusastic tone.<br /><br />Please let me know when I can expect the draft.<br /><br />Thanks,<br />Andrew ','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-22 04:35:32','2015-09-22 04:35:32',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16153,144,3213,'I got the paper approved, but there was a lot of comments&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-22 04:50:56','2015-09-22 06:46:28',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16154,2083,2537,'Hi there,<br /><br />Please check for any gramatical errors, or sentence ambiguity. Feel free to re-word the sentence if it increase clarity.<br /><br />Thanks,','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-22 05:20:50','2015-09-22 05:20:50',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16155,3034,2800,'<p>Hello,<br /> <br /> I am writing this paper for sports management course as an undergraduate student. The assignment was to read an article about a player–agent relationship and write about the ethics, fee, and services mentioned in the article. I would like the paper to be condensed to 1 1/2 pages as my instructor set the limit at one page but she did specifically mention that quality versus quantity was the more important concern and we could go a little bit above the page limit. <br /> <br /> If at all possible, I would like to place this as rush order as my papers is due by 11:59 PM US central time. I would like to have my paper back at 10:30 PM US central time so that I may make any necessary corrections.<br /> <br /> I can add in references later as the paper was based off of only one article. give feedback with a critical eye as I do not know how lenient or strict the instructor will grade the paper.<br /> <br /> Thank you and have a great night!</p>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-22 06:20:23','2015-09-22 06:20:23',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16156,3078,1163,'Hi, there:<br /><br />I edited the document in the areas of grammar, sentence structure, flow,&nbsp; punctuation, clarity, consistency, spselling, detail, word choice, and oranization. Very informative topic!<br /><br />Thank you!<br />MasterEditor','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-22 06:25:51','2015-09-22 06:25:51',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16157,3213,144,'Well, I\'m glad to hear that!<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-22 06:47:00','2015-09-22 06:47:00',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16158,2800,3034,'This looks good. So, you aren\'t supposed to have a thesis, right? It\'s a bit like a book report: an article report. If that\'s the case, I think this looks good. There are some points at which I made comments suggesting more details. Also, the final paragraph has some text that\'s cut and pasted from the opening paragraph. I\'d think of a new way to close it.&nbsp;<br /><br />You should probably mention at the beginning that this is a summary/report on the article you\'re reading.<br /><br />Let me know if you have any questions or concerns.<br /><br />Oren','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-22 06:59:04','2015-09-22 06:59:04',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16159,617,65,'Wanted a \"jump\" on this in case you had questions.<br /><br />Will be at my desk almost all day tomorrow.<br /><br />Jackson','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-22 07:11:43','2015-09-22 16:44:04',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16160,65,617,'Hi Jackson,<br /><br />Thanls a lot for editing my document. Would you please take a final look at the document to revise it after I accepted the changes. I need to use APA, and I have included the citation within the text as my grader requests. Please let me know what do you think Thanks. Maya','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-22 16:46:30','2015-09-22 16:55:27',NULL,'upload_56014da6ae0da2.28644842_EW_63666_edited.docx','EW_63666_edited.docx'),
	(16161,617,65,'A few more changes for your review. Thank you.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-22 17:10:52','2015-09-22 19:23:33',NULL,'upload_5601535c15df97.17903758_63666_edited.docx','63666_edited.docx'),
	(16162,2424,65,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-22 18:30:33','2015-09-22 18:30:33',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16163,65,2298,'Good morning Jackson. Looking forward to the next round of editing! Have a great day! Juli ','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-22 18:35:35','2015-09-22 18:35:35',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16164,3332,65,'This file was also sent, free of charge, yesterday at 9:17 a.m.<br /><br />I hope the edits prove to be helpful.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-22 19:11:56','2015-09-22 19:11:56',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16165,3336,2083,'Hello! For this document, I focused on eliminating passive voice, the tone of the piece overall, and ensuring that the sentences were comprehensive both within the narrative and on their own. I left several comments on the side througout the document either explaining certain edits or offering suggestions for your consideration, so be sure to look out for those. Feel free to message me if you have any questions! Thanks. =)','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-22 19:41:39','2015-09-22 19:41:39',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16166,65,2424,'In the section quote, the part in yellow is the only part I am interested in possibly corercting. Everything else will stay the same.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-22 20:27:55','2015-09-22 20:27:55',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16167,2386,144,'Thank you, Daniel, for the opportunity to read and edit this piece.<br /><br />As you know, I appreciate your kind ratings.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-22 20:37:39','2015-09-22 20:37:39',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16168,2424,65,'Shouldn\'t we adjust the fee? Only edited about 20 words.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-22 21:32:53','2015-09-22 21:58:56',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16169,65,617,'Hi again,<br /><br />Is this sample looks ok?<br /><br /> She states, &ldquo;It is the breakdown of a societal mode of social control which allows and promote social revolution to unfold&rdquo; (Skocpol, p.181).&nbsp;<br /><br />Looking at the period position?<br /><br />Thanks a lot.<br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-22 21:46:29','2015-09-23 00:38:31',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16170,65,2424,'Somehow I wrote \"section quote\" instead of \"second quote.\" Plus, i didn\'t separate them. You can edit this one. Don\'t worry about the fee. Thank you. ','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-22 22:02:34','2015-09-22 22:03:03',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16171,2424,65,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-22 22:14:41','2015-09-22 22:14:41',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16172,65,3212,'Hi,<br />I am submitting this paper to an academic journal. Please proofread it and enhance readability.<br />Jenna','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-22 22:50:24','2015-09-23 00:31:17',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16173,65,617,'Also, please confirm if this term I used \" I almost heard Moore implying...\" makes sense to a native speaker as a word choice? Do you have an alternative?<br /><br />Thanks,<br />Maya<br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-22 23:23:23','2015-09-23 00:32:01',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16174,3212,65,'Will do. Thank you.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-23 00:31:38','2015-09-23 00:50:05',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16175,617,65,'I did pause at that sentence, hence the query about \"implying.\" Suggest this revision:<br /><br />Through his historical analysis, Moore takes us on a journey to explore the transition from agrarianism to modernization. <span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">According to&nbsp;Moore,</span> democracy and dictatorship <span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">are</span>&nbsp;byproducts of social and economic situations in countries we consider today as advanced politically and economically.\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-23 00:38:01','2015-09-23 02:36:44',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16176,617,65,'With a direct quote, as shown here, the closing punctuation goes AFTER the citation. The citation is part of the sentence, which therefore means the period goes at the end of the&nbsp;sentence, as is the case here.<br /><br />Just noticed that your citation is missing the year. The pattern is (name, year, p. x).','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-23 00:42:03','2015-09-23 02:35:39',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16177,1541,3337,'Hallo,<br /><br />the attached document contains parts of an application and cv for a professorship in meteorolgy. Only language / grammar check is required.<br /><br />Thank you, kind regards<br />Michael','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-23 00:54:00','2015-09-23 00:54:00',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16178,2424,65,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-23 01:04:50','2015-09-23 01:04:50',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16179,144,1280,'Please look at the grammar, and fix me whether I have a correct business memo report format.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-23 01:19:29','2015-09-23 01:19:29',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16180,65,3223,'chick grammar, if any word not acadmic please chang it. this is important assighnment. please do your best. I am ganna give you the reference for the seconed part 2Q.  CDC.  2013.  <em>Facts about Benzene</em>. Retrieved from: <a href=\"http://www.bt.cdc.gov/agent/benzene/basics/facts.asp\">http://www.bt.cdc.gov/agent/benzene/basics/facts.asp</a>. Also, please chick the reference. Thank You.   ','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-23 01:46:41','2015-09-23 01:46:41',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16181,2548,454,'Thank you! Hope you are well!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-23 03:17:19','2015-09-23 03:17:19',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16182,65,617,'Sorry for keep coming back with more revisions, but I just caught an akward sentence that I have changed but need to see what you think of the my change:<br /><br />Your 1st edit: <br /><br />\" One can imagine that the bourgeoisies were crucial in setting forth the path of democracy in England, and they might have well&nbsp;served as the bump \"<br /><br />My revision:<br /><br />\"One can imagine that the bourgeoisies were crucial in setting forth the path of democracy in England, and they might have as well served as the bump\"<br /><br />Also, I caught another error...Popkin describe(s)..was missing the s.<br /><br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-23 03:18:54','2015-09-23 03:20:34',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16183,3223,65,'I think the text is clearer now. Thank you for including the reference materials (always helpful).','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-23 03:20:08','2015-09-29 20:28:26',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16184,617,65,'\"One can imagine that the bourgeoisies were crucial in setting forth the path of democracy in England, and <span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">they might have served as the bump as well.\"</span><br /><br />Also, I caught another error...Popkin describe(s)..was missing the s. (no debate here; error).','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-23 03:24:23','2015-09-23 03:24:23',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16185,3255,454,'Thank you!<br /><br />Laura','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-23 03:33:47','2015-09-23 03:33:47',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16186,2104,3292,'Hi Clarity,<br /><br />Nice to meet you. This is a book review I am going to send to a journal and will be published. So, please help me polish the word, sentence, grammer, and the tone I used. Thank you very much.<br /><br />Best,<br /><br />Yu-Hua','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-23 05:34:12','2015-09-23 05:34:12',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16187,3313,541,'A pleasure to read.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-23 05:37:46','2015-09-23 05:37:46',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16188,2537,2083,'Hello! <br /><br />For this document, I focused on eliminating passive voice, structuring paragraphs in a cohesive manner, and ensuring that the sentences were structured to give a clean, smooth argument throughout the research presetnation. I left a few comments on the side througout the document either explaining certain edits or offering suggestions for your consideration, so be sure to look out for those. Feel free to message me if you have any questions, and please don\'t forget to rate my service! Thanks. =)','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-23 07:13:12','2015-09-23 07:13:12',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16189,144,3338,'I require a substantive editing.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-23 15:31:00','2015-09-23 15:31:00',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16190,2298,65,'Good to hear from you. I enjoyed the lessons herein and have decided to re-read the Book of Romans (been a long time).<br /><br />Thank you.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-23 18:27:36','2015-09-24 04:59:27',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16191,2424,65,'Thank you','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-23 18:50:10','2015-09-23 18:50:10',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16192,1280,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your memo.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-23 20:05:15','2015-09-23 20:05:15',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16193,2386,144,'Thank you, Daniel, for the opportunity to read and edit this piece.<br /><br />You know I appreciate your ratings :)<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-23 20:11:14','2015-09-23 20:11:14',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16194,3338,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your sample.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-23 20:25:11','2015-09-23 20:25:11',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16195,454,3255,'Thank you!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-23 22:00:28','2015-09-23 22:00:28',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16196,144,2957,'Hi there,<br /><br />I am submitting a long article for editing. Please let me know if the title doesn\'t make sense or the subtitles don\'t make sense. Or if you feel that there is anything that is not clear. I don\'t know how to do the dialogue in this article. I don\'t want to to a Q and A thing. Should I put his name by his quotes? Please also give me your opinion on this article, it is quite long and there are many subjects, I hope that I have written them clearly and with some level of cohesiveness.<br /><br />Thank you.<br /><br />Ling Ling','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-23 22:17:23','2015-09-23 22:17:23',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16197,2424,65,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-23 22:52:43','2015-09-23 22:52:43',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16198,904,884,'What are the types of physicians?<br />Physician Primary care<br />Physician Intensive care unit<br />Physician Medical Emergency Room<br />Physician Surgeon Medical Emergency<br />Physician Anaesthetist Medical Emergency <br />Physician Guide to physician or physicians<br />Physician hospitalist (Takes care of hospital ward patients)<br /><br />Prefix of Physician is essential.<br />If an indviidual knows surgical technique without knoeing correct diagnosis and treatment he or she is a technician not a Physician Surgeon Emergency Room.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-23 23:43:15','2015-09-24 04:20:55',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16199,2957,144,'Hello,<br /><br />Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit another of your interview articles.<br /><br />I have made a suggestion for the title and have added a couple of subheadings. It appeared that most of the article was quoted material, which I hope is the case, because I edited it very lightly by comparison to what I would have done if they weren\'t quotes.<br /><br />I think it hangs together just fine and is as clear as something can be when it\'s mostly quotes. I did suggest that you add some interpretive or introductory comments more often. You do it in a couple of places and it\'s helpful.<br /><br />As always, ratings are much appreciated.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-24 00:28:01','2015-09-24 00:28:01',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16200,454,3255,'Thank you!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-24 01:27:31','2015-09-24 01:27:31',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16201,904,884,'Physician should not be replaced or changed.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-24 01:44:10','2015-09-24 04:24:01',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16202,2745,2104,'Good luck!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-24 02:29:56','2015-09-24 02:29:56',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16203,884,904,'Your question relates to physicians. Therefore, no need to repeat it.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-24 04:22:56','2015-09-24 04:46:36',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16204,884,904,'You do what you like, but the repetition is not necessary.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-24 04:25:15','2015-09-24 04:47:00',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16205,904,884,'Where is it?<br />Repetition is not necessary: Can you give more details?<br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-24 04:48:16','2015-09-24 04:58:20',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16206,65,2298,'Excellent! enjoy it! It\'s a good read.<br /><br />Thank you so much for the excellent work! I appreciate it.<br />Juli','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-24 05:00:40','2015-09-24 05:42:14',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16207,884,904,'Once the question refers to physicians, you don\'t need to repeat the word. But do what you like.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-24 05:00:46','2015-09-24 06:02:39',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16208,1090,856,'Hi, Dr. Joo - Thanks again for the pleasure of working with you.&nbsp; I did quite a bit of editing of the first section to try to make it a little more succinct and clearer.&nbsp; Let me know if you have questions of course.&nbsp; RebeccaTDE','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-24 05:36:51','2015-09-24 07:05:25',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16209,2298,65,'Juli,<br /><br />One of the great attractions of the Bible for me is that the truth is true universally. Sure, the stories have specific details (places, names, miracles) echoed worldwide in other religious texts, but now at 57 I accept the truth and don\'t worry about whether the details are&nbsp;true (walking on water, water to wine).<br /><br />My mother just turned 90 and is delightful and her \"secret\" is so simple most people cannot grasp it: Faith.&nbsp;<br /><br />Reminds me of a favorite quote (Lao Tzu in The Way of Life):<br />The way to do is to be.&nbsp;<br /><br />Continue your good work and teachings. I have the utmost respect for all ministries as without them the world would be a lesser place.<br /><br />Jackson<br /><br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-24 05:52:26','2015-09-24 05:53:31',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16210,904,884,'I will have to forward to another editor if this gets changed.<br />Do not change, delete, or replace word physician.<br />Physician Primary care<br />Physician Intensive care unit<br />Physician Medical Emergency Room<br />Physician Medical Emergency Responder<br />Physician Surgeon Medical Emergency<br />Physician surgeon Elective surgery. <br />Physician Anesthetist Medical Emergency <br />Physician Guide to physician or physicians<br />Physician hospitalist (Takes care of hospital ward patients)<br />Physicain forensic psychiatry<br />Physicain Internet<br />There are many more.<br /><br />I completed my medical college education in 1990. I have more than 7 years of experience in medicine. I have experience in multiple fields. <br />My real world experience in other fields I display through Qureshi University.<br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-24 06:09:08','2015-09-24 06:24:03',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16211,884,904,'Whatever you like','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-24 06:25:05','2015-09-24 13:49:44',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16212,856,1090,'Dear Rebecca,<br />I have the following questions to your comments. Can you please check and answer to my questions below? thanks in advance.<br /><br />\r\n<p>Q&amp;A:</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>1. Comment 8: Do you mean \"the way in which siloxane was mixed...\" ??</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p><strong>Answer</strong>: Yes, I meant it like what you said. Then can I write it as follows?</p>\r\n<p>&agrave; Interestingly, the way in which siloxane was mixed also influenced removal and mobility of ZnO NPs.</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>2. Comment 13: Is this a caption? It seems to be out of place here.</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p><strong>Answer</strong>: Yes. You&rsquo;re correct. So in this case is the following sentence is fine? When you read, was there anything awkward meaning?</p>\r\n<p>&agrave; Effect of porous media (beach sand) on the removal and release kinetics of the nano-metal oxides under various environmental parameters</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>3. Comment 14: One session of 3 weeks each year? Or 3 sessions of 1 week duration each year?</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p><strong>Answer</strong>: I meant &ldquo;One session of 3 weeks each year&rdquo; so total two sessions for two years.</p>\r\n<p>So then, is the following sentence correct to say what I meant?</p>\r\n<p>&agrave; The PI plans to have one session of 3-week summer per year (for 2 years) for teacher on-site research.</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>4. Comment 15: I believe this is your first mention of a lab tour, so you probably need to explain it here or earlier - is a tour of your lab going to be offered to policy makers and manufacturers?</p>\r\n<p><strong>&nbsp;</strong></p>\r\n<p><strong>Answer: </strong>yes, so then, is it fine writing it as follows?</p>\r\n<p>&agrave; We will conduct survey from workshops held at the end of the public lecture, workshop, lab tour of the policy-maker and manufacturer. <strong>A tour of the PI&rsquo;s laboratory is going to be offered to policy makers and manufacturers</strong>.</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>5. Comment 16: Suggest you clarify meaning of \"potential applications.\" Do you mean application to graduate school, for example?</p>\r\n<p><strong>Answer: </strong>No, I meant nanotechnology application, so in this case, can I write it as follows?</p>\r\n<p>&agrave; Motivation of individuals to learn more in this field for minimizing environmental impacts in nanotechnology applications</p>','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-24 07:08:13','2015-09-24 09:57:16',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16213,3337,1541,'It was a pleasure to edit your well-written and most interesting document! I focused on correcting the grammar, elevating the language, and enhancing clarity, flow, and eloquence. I hope to have the opportunity to work with you again in the future, as your research is most fascinating. Best of luck to you with all your current and future endeavors. Alles Gute!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-24 09:32:47','2015-09-24 09:32:47',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16214,856,1090,'hi, I previously sent a message to you to check my answers to your comments, but have not heard from you. I need to get this revision done soon due to the due date. If you happen to skip through, please make sure to check all of my answers to your comments and let me know soon after you see my message.<br /><br />Below is a copy of what I sent to you yesterday.<br /><br />\r\n<p>Q&amp;A:</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>1. Comment 8: Do you mean \"the way in which siloxane was mixed...\" ??</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p><strong>Answer</strong>: Yes, I meant it like what you said. Then can I write it as follows?<br /><br />--&gt; &nbsp;Interestingly, the way in which siloxane was mixed also influenced removal and mobility of ZnO NPs.</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>2. Comment 13: Is this a caption? It seems to be out of place here.</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p><strong>Answer</strong>: Yes. You&rsquo;re correct. So in this case is the following sentence is fine? When you read, was there anything awkward meaning?</p>\r\n<p>--&gt; Effect of porous media (beach sand) on the removal and release kinetics of the nano-metal oxides under various environmental parameters</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>3. Comment 14: One session of 3 weeks each year? Or 3 sessions of 1 week duration each year?</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p><strong>Answer</strong>: I meant &ldquo;One session of 3 weeks each year&rdquo; so total two sessions for two years.</p>\r\n<p>So then, is the following sentence correct to say what I meant?</p>\r\n<p>--&gt; The PI plans to have one session of 3-week summer per year (for 2 years) for teacher on-site research.</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>4. Comment 15: I believe this is your first mention of a lab tour, so you probably need to explain it here or earlier - is a tour of your lab going to be offered to policy makers and manufacturers?</p>\r\n<p><strong>&nbsp;</strong></p>\r\n<p><strong>Answer: </strong>yes, so then, is it fine writing it as follows?</p>\r\n<p>--&gt; We will conduct survey from workshops held at the end of the public lecture, workshop, lab tour of the policy-maker and manufacturer. <strong>A tour of the PI&rsquo;s laboratory is going to be offered to policy makers and manufacturers</strong>.</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>5. Comment 16: Suggest you clarify meaning of \"potential applications.\" Do you mean application to graduate school, for example?</p>\r\n<p><strong>Answer: </strong>No, I meant nanotechnology application, so in this case, can I write it as follows?</p>\r\n<p>--&gt; Motivation of individuals to learn more in this field for minimizing environmental impacts in nanotechnology applications</p>','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-24 17:31:55','2015-09-24 20:54:37',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16215,2424,65,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-24 17:58:56','2015-09-24 17:58:56',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16216,856,1090,'Also, in addition to my previous questions to your comments (please check and let me know soon), I have the following opinion.<br />While you mentioned you deleted much contents in the introduction due to repetition, I\'m asking you should consult with me prior to deleting the contents, because I need to keep the introduction section as it was due to several reasons. So I need you to edit the introdctuion again without chaging any structure, please.<br />I have the due and need to get this soon. please edit the following introdction and send it to me as soon as possible I need to hurry up.<br /><br />I attached it as a word file<br /><br />INTRODUCTION<br />\r\n<p>Despite the significant release of NPs, information and knowledge on the fate and transformation of MNPs are still in infancy. Transformed MNPs, in particular CeO<sub>2 </sub>needs to be re-examined since it is considered to be toxic to plants once it is transformed in plant, though CeO<sub>2 </sub>is generally stable<sup>30</sup>. Such concerns also involve detrimental impact on soil microbial community (e.g. application of biosolids on agricultural land as fertilizer and application of MNPs in plant protection products)<sup>31-32</sup> from influencing factors such as release of metal ions and generation of free radicals (CuO)<sup>33-34</sup>, in addition to visible cytotoxicity, oxidative stress, and genotoxicity of CeO<sub>2</sub> NPs<sup>35-36</sup>, showing CeO<sub>2</sub> NPs to be the most toxic among CeO<sub>2</sub>, TiO<sub>2</sub>, and Fe<sub>3</sub>O<sub>4</sub> NPs<sup>37</sup>.</p>\r\n<p>Released NPs into the environment may interact with contaminants, which then affect the fate, transport, and transformation of NPs. Studies indicated that major transformation of NPs occurs in natural systems, interacting with biota thereby NPs become unstable<sup>38-39</sup>. Toxicity of MNPs is found to be related to existing contaminants and the types of MNPs as shown in the studies - decreased soil microbial mass by two model NMPs (TiO<sub>2</sub> and ZnO); significant deposition of Fe<sub>3</sub>O<sub>4</sub> and CuO on soil, leading to low porosity (low hydraulic conductivity)<sup>40-41</sup>.</p>\r\n<p>Such discrepancy in results may be ascribed to various parameters including but not limited to exposure dose and time, the types of microbes, soil organic matter, pH, Eh, ionic strength, and moisture content<sup>40,42-45</sup>. As per influencing factors on the environmental dynamics in fate, transport, and transformation of MNPs, several parameters have been investigated, including the presence of natural organic matter (NOM), salts, other ions, pH, temperature, release of metal ions from dissolution of MNPs. Among them, the presence of NOM was found to influence physicochemical properties of NPs through surface functionalization and modification by increasing, decreasing, or neutralizing electric charge in the presence of salts, Ca<sup>2+</sup> as an example<sup>47</sup>.</p>\r\n<p>Agglomeration showed different toxicity effects, either increase or decrease of the toxicity of microbes as an example, whereas increased dissolution reveals augmented toxicity due to release of metal ions<sup>47-50</sup>. Stability of MNPs can also influence on the fate, toxicity, transformation of MNPs in aqueous media exemplified by amorphous silica (aSiO<sub>2</sub>) coated CeO<sub>2</sub>, which showed reduced toxicity of CeO<sub>2</sub><sup>51</sup>. Joint effects from mixed NPs with surfactants on <em>photobacterium phosphoreum</em> were found to be complex, exhibiting antagonism, additive, and synergistic results from the mixtures with ZnO, NiO, and iron oxide correspondingly<sup>52</sup>.</p>\r\n<p>In fact, many NPs have applied surfactants for modification, thereby often detected in places near NPs manufacturing plants<sup>52-53</sup>. Recent studies revealed that increase of temperature induced aggregation, thereby decreasing dissolution, though the temperature effect was insignificant at higher ionic strength<sup>54</sup>, indicating aggregation was affected by water chemistry than temperature.</p>\r\n<p>The effects of dissolution, which may depend on nanoparticle type, but also concentration, size, coatings, and pH<sup>55</sup>, seems to be the parameter essential in assessing toxicity due to interaction with organisms that could be more toxic than the solid form of NPs. Other than pH, ionic strength, and NOM, other anions (Cl<sup>-</sup>, SO<sub>4</sub><sup>2-</sup>, PO<sub>4</sub><sup>3-</sup>, HCO<sub>3</sub><sup>-</sup>) present in natural water may affect physicochemical characteristic of NPs (aggregation and dissolution) through complexation with metal ions released from NPs. Few studies have investigated the environmental dynamics of NPs under various environmental parameters.</p>\r\n<p>Environmental media as the ultimate sink may also influence the adsorption and accumulation of NPs. Exposure modeling studies showed the significant accumulation of NPs in soils and sediments, while concentration ranges from 10 to 500 (ng/L) of ZnO NPs were detected in surface waters and sewage sludge<sup>56-58</sup>. Physicochemical transformation of NPs under various environmental conditions may be changeable over time and may affect the toxicity of organisms.</p>\r\n<p>Transformation of MNPs occur through chemical transformations (oxidation-reduction processes; ligand exchange; complexation; dissolution), physical reactions such as aggregation / disaggregation and adsorption on organic macromolecules, and biological interactions<sup>59</sup> and would also be influenced by the aforementioned environmental parameters. Subsequently, the transport mechanisms of NPs in the aquatic environment are also not clearly understood, because of different ways of NPs, which are transformed and redistributed through sedimentation<sup>60</sup>. The physicochemical properties of bare or transformed NPs may consequently influence the removal and transport of contaminants attached to the NPs.</p>\r\n<p>While concerns about the potential hazard to the environment and public health have been intensified and more research is encouraged, no studies have been done in looking at how industrial MNPs are different including but not limited to their fate, interaction with contaminants, and transport behavior in comparison to nano-metal oxides embedded in consumer products, especially food. In particular, the interaction between MNPs and contaminants in environmental media needs to be well understood to determine the implications of NPs released into the environment.</p>\r\n<p>Few studies have carried out the effects and potential influence of contaminating MNPs, in particular the impact of contaminants on the fate and transport of MNPs. In this proposed research, particular attention is given to the potential interaction between contaminants and MNPs, looking at their influence on mobilizing MNPs extracted from three model products (classified into edible and non-edible items), alongside the effects of such contaminations on the fate of MNPs from environmental matrices.</p>\r\n<p>The different types of contaminants would undergo transformation in a heterogeneous system that can alter mobility, fate, and toxicity. Very limited studies are available in particular how the coexisting surfactant and NPs behave in complex systems (under various environmental conditions). In this proposed research, types of contaminants to look at are organic molecules that often have been used in various types of consumer products.</p>\r\n<p>Investigating the effects of coexisting contaminants on MNPs, especially the three model MNPs (CeO<sub>2</sub>, TiO<sub>2</sub>, ZnO NPs) will particularly focused in this proposed research. Investigating factors affecting the fate and transport behavior has relatively been new as an initial stage of research. This proposed research will provide <strong><em>transformative knowledge</em></strong> in identifying the interfacial phenomena occurring on MNPs from the physicochemical properties influenced by contaminants and various environmental conditions such as pH, flow rate, types of contaminants, and their concentrations.</p>\r\n<p>Moreover, no information is available on how MNPs in consumer products are different under various environmental conditions, in comparison to industrial MNPs. Overarching questions arising from the potential influence of contaminants on MNPs (both industrial and MNPs extracted from consumer products) include:</p>\r\n<ol>\r\n<li>How are MNPs transformed, and what are their effects on contaminants present under environmental conditions?</li>\r\n<li>What effects could they influence their toxicity to humans and the environment, as well as their mobility?</li>\r\n<li>How do industrial MNPs behave differently in comparison to MNPs from consumer products? Would be their fate and mobility similar or if not, how such discrepancy would affect their fate and transformation upon release into the environment?</li>\r\n<li>Would their toxicity behave in a similar way? if not, what are the possible processes that make such a discrepancy responsible on this?</li>\r\n</ol>\r\n<p>The <em>hypothesis</em> underlying this research effort is that when existing contaminants present in the aquatic environment interact with NPs (e.g., TiO<sub>2</sub>, ZnO, CeO<sub>2</sub> proposed in this research) extracted from the consumer products might result in differences in toxicity, transformation, and retention in environmental media under various influencing factors, compared to the industrial NPs (the three model MNPs chosen in this study).</p>\r\n<p>To address this hypothesis, the research plan proposes three research objectives: (1) investigate the environmental dynamics of MNPs when interacting with existing contaminants; (2) examine the removal and transformation of metal oxides nano-products under various environmental conditions; (3) assess the effect of porous media on the removal and transformation of metal oxides nano-products. This transformative research topic is not only timely, but also critical in assisting manufacturers to design products safely, guiding policy decision-making, and assessing toxicity, since no studies have investigated the transformation of consumer nanoproducts in heterogeneous systems.</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-24 18:15:52','2015-09-24 21:09:30',NULL,'upload_56040598370e57.79814420_Introduction (original).docx','Introduction (original).docx'),
	(16217,2424,65,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-24 20:04:42','2015-09-24 20:04:42',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16218,1090,856,'1.&nbsp; Your revision seems good. <br />2.&nbsp; As a caption, it sounds fine.&nbsp; <br />3.&nbsp; Suggest:&nbsp; The PI plans to have&nbsp;a 3-week summer session&nbsp;for on-site teacher research each year, for 2 years. <br />4.&nbsp; Suggest:&nbsp; \"We will conduct surveys after workshops&nbsp;and&nbsp;after public lectures, and a tour of the PI\'s laboratory will be offered to policy makers and manufacturers.\"<br />5.&nbsp; Suggest:&nbsp; \"Motivation of individuals to learn more in this field.\"&nbsp; This is more succinct,&nbsp;fits the expression of the other points in this list&nbsp;and you don\'t need the rest of it - the readers already know what field you\'re talking about.&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-24 21:09:08','2015-09-24 22:01:32',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16219,1090,856,'Dr. Joo, OK, but&nbsp;I can\'t edit easily in this messaging environment, so I will go back to your original Intro and just do a strict copy edit and send it to you in a couple of hours.&nbsp; RebeccaTDE.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-24 21:11:04','2015-09-24 21:59:26',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16220,856,1090,'thank you! look forward to having your edited version for the introduction only.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-24 22:01:04','2015-09-24 23:12:15',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16221,144,3340,'The chapter is already formatted as per the editors via font size/type, headings, justification, how the editors want block quotes, etc. Please review/edit the text and the reference list only using Chicago Style.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-24 22:16:53','2015-09-24 22:16:53',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16222,144,3340,'Only edit text and reference list using Chicago Style<br /><br />The chapter is formatted as requested by the editors','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-24 22:32:55','2015-09-24 22:32:55',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16223,144,3299,'Thank you so much !! please feel free to comment on anything.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-24 23:42:29','2015-09-24 23:42:29',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16224,2424,65,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-24 23:47:46','2015-09-24 23:47:46',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16225,144,2056,'I think you are expert at this topic working with me. Please let me know content is comprehensive. Thank you,','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-25 00:09:37','2015-09-25 00:09:37',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16226,3212,65,'A great text (would like to have seen the tables to cross-check the in-text numbers). I tried to avoid too much copyediting as the text read very well. So the changes are as marked.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-25 00:58:54','2015-09-25 00:58:54',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16227,2056,144,'Thank you, Ms. Kim, for the opportunity to read and edit your abstract.<br /><br />As always, ratings are much appreciated.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-25 01:00:00','2015-09-25 01:00:00',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16228,3299,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your memo.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-25 01:22:57','2015-09-25 01:22:57',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16229,2537,2083,'Hello! <br /><br />For this document, I foucsed on consistent terminology, eliminating passive voice, and making sure that repetition of phrases didn\'t get in the way of comprehension. As with before, I left several comments on the side throughout the document either explaining certain edits or offering suggestions for your consideration, so be sure to look out for those. Feel free to message me if you have any questions! Thanks. =)','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-25 01:40:05','2015-09-25 01:40:05',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16230,144,3327,'Hi,<br />Thanks very much for the free sample editing of the previous document. It was very helpful.<br />I am submitting another document for you to edit. Please keept it confidential. Many thanks!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-25 02:07:25','2015-09-25 02:07:25',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16231,3341,65,'A bit late on this one, but I could not rush it. Your quiet tone is important. You\'ll notice that I divided many of the longer paragraphs because each point is important. Most of the edits are word choices, which, of course, you can decide.<br /><br />I think&nbsp;that overall this&nbsp;is an elegant statement.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-25 02:52:40','2015-09-25 02:52:40',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16232,3333,856,'Dear Author - Thank you for the pleasure of editing your interesting paper.&nbsp; I did reduce the word count by about 350 words to just over 5900 words. Otherwise it didn\'t seem overly wordy,&nbsp;seemed well written,&nbsp;and I hesitated to cut out more.&nbsp; I moved&nbsp;quite a bit of text out of the Abstract (which&nbsp;should normally be no more than 200&nbsp;words) into the Introductory section. I changed some of the spacing between sections,&nbsp;just to make it easier to read, but you should set that up according to the&nbsp;specific style you\'re following. &nbsp;Let me know if you have any questions or comments.&nbsp; RebeccaTDE','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-25 02:54:29','2015-09-25 02:54:29',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16233,3255,454,'Thank you!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-25 03:00:42','2015-09-25 03:00:42',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16234,3255,454,'Thanks!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-25 03:01:30','2015-09-25 03:01:30',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16235,3327,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your research statement.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-25 03:22:08','2015-09-25 20:40:03',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16236,541,3342,'<p>Write a 6- to 8-page paper (not including title page and reference page) that addresses the following:</p><p>•Describe an existing non-profit or public organization of interest to you.</p><p>•Explain why the organization is in need of strategic change.</p><p>•Conduct a SWOT analysis for the organization. Explain the results of the analysis and how the results might influence the strategic planning process.</p><p>•Conduct an Appreciative Inquiry 4-D Cycle analysis for the organization. Explain the results of the analysis and how the results might influence the strategic planning process.</p><p>•Compare organizational outcomes when using SWOT to organizational outcomes when using Appreciative Inquiry.</p><p> </p><p>Use proper APA formatting and include the following:</p><p>•A title page and running head</p><p>•An introduction that states the purpose of the paper</p><p>•Level 1 headings to define each part of the paper</p><p>•A conclusion to synthesize the entire paper</p><p>•A minimum of six scholarly sources to support your paper</p><p>•In-text citations as appropriate</p><p>•A reference list. Please proofread for grammar, punctuation, and plagarism. I am attaching a clean copy as well, but a section out of the clean copy was not edited. Also, (formating) please ensure the paper is properly formatted according to APA standards.</p>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-25 05:27:46','2015-09-25 05:27:46',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16237,541,3342,'<p>Attached is edited version of the original paper that I sent you so that you can compare the two.</p>','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-25 05:30:29','2015-09-25 05:42:20',NULL,'upload_5604a3b5cbdcf8.37271930_Christopher Wilson WEEK 4 PAPER.edited COPY.docx','Christopher Wilson WEEK 4 PAPER.edited COPY.docx'),
	(16238,1163,3078,'Please edit for grammar, punctuation, flow, etc.  No references or cover page is required.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-25 07:20:04','2015-09-25 07:20:04',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16239,1173,1964,'this is for a pypothetical studio program.  ','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-25 13:38:19','2015-09-25 13:38:19',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16240,1964,1173,'Here is your edited document. Sound like a very interesting center. Best of luck to you!<br /><br />Karen Z.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-25 19:25:44','2015-09-25 19:25:44',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16241,2424,65,'Thank you','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-25 19:44:13','2015-09-25 19:44:13',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16242,144,3327,'Hi Nyanidoc,<br /><br />Thanks very much for your help.<br /><br />I have a minor question here:<br /><br />For your third comment for the \"readlized\" in the first paragraph of the past and current research section, by realized, I mean understood/learned/compreheneded.<br /><br />Can you help me choose which&nbsp;word that serves better here?<br /><br />Many thanks!','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-25 20:44:40','2015-09-25 21:51:51',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16243,2083,3260,'Kindly suggest sentence-reframing and words/synonym replacement to make this part more fluid and esay to read. This is not for any academic submission, rather it is for my hobby blog.<br /><br />regards<br />D Das','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-25 21:15:06','2015-09-26 20:22:43','2015-09-26 16:22:43',NULL,NULL),
	(16244,1138,3260,'Kindly help with sentence reframing/synonym replacements etc as well for this part.<br />This is not for any academic submission, rather for my blog<br /><br />regards<br />D Das','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-25 21:20:54','2015-09-28 01:53:42',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16245,454,3260,'Kindly help with sentence reframing, synonym replacements, etc to make this part of the document more fluid and interesting.<br />This is part of a blog, not for any academic submissions.<br />Many thanks for your support<br /><br />regards<br />D Das','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-25 21:32:22','2015-09-25 21:32:22',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16246,1709,3260,'Dear Sir<br /><br />Kindly help with sentence reframing, synonym replacements etc to make the part more fluid and interesting. This is not for any academic submission<br /><br />regards<br />D Das','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-25 21:38:40','2015-09-25 21:38:40',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16247,144,3260,'Hi<br />Kindly help with sentence reframing, synonym replacements, etc to make this part of the document more fluid and interesting to read.<br /><br />many thanks<br />D Das','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-25 21:40:15','2015-09-25 21:40:15',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16248,1772,3260,'Hi<br /><br />Greetings<br />Kindly help with sentence reframing, synonym replacement wherever required to make this part of the doc more fluid and interesting. This is not an academic submission.<br /><br />Does the discount of 20% fixed, can I have a better price. I checked with <a href=\"http://www.skylighteditorial.com/\">http://www.skylighteditorial.com/</a>&nbsp;and their rate for 3 days turn-around is $0.01/word<br /><br />kind regards<br />D Das','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-25 21:46:40','2015-09-25 21:46:40',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16249,1173,3260,'Hi<br />Greetings<br />I am submitting a part of a write-up for free-edit, with request to firm-up/reframe sentences/synonym use, wherever required, to make it more fluid. This is not an academic paper.<br /><br />May I ask if there is any discount available? I checked with <a href=\"http://www.skylighteditorial.com/\">http://www.skylighteditorial.com/</a>&nbsp;and their rates for 3-days turn-around is $0.01/word, and lesser with 7-days. It would be nice if you could give a discount code to match that price, if not better that. Hope I did not offend you by asking the same.<br /><br />Many thanks<br />D Das','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-25 21:53:26','2015-09-25 21:53:26',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16250,3327,144,'I would say learned, but then that paragraph is left hanging. What did you do b/c of that realization?<br /><br />Best,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-25 21:54:31','2015-09-25 22:47:24',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16251,144,3260,'Hi<br />The document submitted was for free sample edit.<br /><br />However, is it possible to give some discount coupons on the rack rate? I checked with <a href=\"http://www.skylighteditorial.com/\">http://www.skylighteditorial.com/</a>&nbsp;and their rate is $0.01/word for 3-days, and even lower than longer time-frames. Hope you dont mind, but is it possible to match that rate, if bettering is not possible.<br /><br />I saw some editors offering discount codes in this portal, so thought of asking you.<br /><br />regards<br />D Das','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-25 22:00:05','2015-09-25 22:08:16',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16252,3260,144,'I am happy to offer a 10% discount, but not on a permanent basis if you should become a regular client.<br /><br />Best,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-25 22:09:50','2015-09-25 22:19:35',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16253,3047,3260,'Hi<br />Greetings<br />This is a free sample request of 600 words for suitable sentence reframing, synonym use, etc to make this part of the doc more fluid and interesting. This is not for academic submissions.<br /><br />Kind Regards<br />D Das','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-25 22:17:46','2015-09-25 22:41:36',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16254,3260,3047,'Dear ddggn,<br /><br />Because I already completed a free sample for you on September 4, 2015, I cannot edit another document for you for free. If you would like to use my services again, please submit a document to me for paid work.<br /><br />Best regards,<br />TheWriteEditor','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-25 22:44:41','2015-09-26 04:16:46',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16255,1709,2956,'Hi,<br /><br />I am back can you take a 302 word editing for same day turn around? Please let me know so, I can submit.<br /><br /><br />Thanks,','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-25 23:32:31','2015-09-25 23:43:27',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16256,474,2956,'Hi,<br /><br />I am back can you take a 302 word editing for same day turn around? Please let me know so, I can submit.<br /><br /><br />Thanks,<br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-25 23:33:00','2015-09-25 23:37:05',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16257,8,2956,'Hi,<br /><br />I am back can you take a 302 word editing for same day turn around? Please let me know so, I can submit.<br /><br /><br />Thanks,','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-25 23:33:23','2015-09-25 23:33:23',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16258,2956,474,'Sure thing. I\'ll get started as soon as you submit it.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-25 23:40:34','2015-09-25 23:43:12',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16259,3260,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your sample.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-25 23:42:27','2015-09-26 04:17:48',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16260,474,2956,'Thanks a million! I need it as soon as possible, I am submittingit now.&nbsp; The section in bold is what I need editing.&nbsp; The other is just the questions, I left for your referral.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-25 23:44:12','2015-09-25 23:44:12',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16261,2956,1709,'Hello, I\'m actually traveling today so I would not be able to work on it until around 9pm. &nbsp;If you are ok with getting it back later tonight, I can do it for you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-25 23:45:03','2015-09-25 23:45:03',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16262,474,2956,'It will only let me pick 8 hrs turn around time, but I need it asap.&nbsp;&nbsp; I will pick the 8 hrs, and put more words for the document, so it can generate a higher cost.&nbsp; I want to pay you fairly. <br /><br />Thx.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-25 23:52:44','2015-09-25 23:55:56',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16263,474,2956,'Hi dear,<br /><br />My document contain 337, however I entered 457 since it will only let me pick an 8 hour turn around time.  I actually need it as soon as possible.  Iwanted to make sure the cost was fair to you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-25 23:56:09','2015-09-25 23:56:09',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16264,2956,474,'I\'ve attached your document for your review. most of the changes were minor modification to verb conjugation and noun pluralization, but I also made a couple notes of where you might want to expand your responses. Also, you used \"comprise\" where you meant \"compose\" (a common error, and one I still have to double-check for myself because the words are so commonly mis-used). I hope this helps!<br /><br />-Tori','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-26 00:12:34','2015-09-26 00:26:22',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16265,474,2956,'Thank you for the quick turn- around. In the 2nd question, you have indicated, response does match the answer. &nbsp;Is there a different way you would answer it. &nbsp;I could re-assigned and pay for the revision? please advise<br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-26 00:27:49','2015-09-26 00:46:00',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16266,3340,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your chapter.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-26 00:35:59','2015-09-26 00:35:59',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16267,2942,2956,'Hi,<br /><br />Would you be able to edit a document of 250 words as soon as possible? I might not be able to choose any option less than 8 hrs, however, I will add extra words to the order to make up for the difference in price of rush. &nbsp;Please advise.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-26 00:41:08','2015-09-26 01:01:54',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16268,482,2956,'Hi,<br /><br />Would you be able to edit a document of 250 words as soon as possible? I might not be able to choose any option less than 8 hrs, however, I will add extra words to the order to make up for the difference in price of&nbsp;rush. &nbsp;Please advise.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-26 00:41:39','2015-09-26 05:42:43',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16269,2309,2956,'Hi,<br /><br />Would you be able to edit a document of 250 words as soon as possible? I might not be able to choose any option less than 8 hrs, however, I will add extra words to the order to make up for the difference in price of&nbsp;rush. &nbsp;Please advise.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-26 00:42:05','2015-09-26 01:29:50',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16270,1163,2956,'Hi,<br /><br />Would you be able to edit a document of 250 words as soon as possible? I might not be able to choose any option less than 8 hrs, however, I will add extra words to the order to make up for the difference in price of&nbsp;rush. &nbsp;Please advise.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-26 00:42:40','2015-09-27 07:50:43',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16271,2956,474,'I\'m not sure I can answer for you, but I\'d assume that after setting the timeline for people you would allocate them the required resources to meet the timeline. Or maybe your way of managing roadblocks involved allocating resources. What resources were you allocating, exactly, and in which step of the process? I would assume managing roadblocks involves allocating resources (and managing scope changes) as well, but I don\'t want to presume specifics. Scope changes might also come up in the \"constant contact with the client\" bit. If you want to insert the needed specifics, I\'ll be happy to look over it again. I\'ll adjust my availability so I can be hired for two-hour-turnaround for you.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-26 00:51:45','2015-09-26 00:52:45',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16272,474,2956,'That is exactly what I need to cover. &nbsp;Being trilingual takes away from being an effective writer :-) I will work on it in the next hour and send it to you. &nbsp;THX<br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-26 00:54:48','2015-09-26 00:58:43',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16273,474,2956,'That is exactly what I need to cover. &nbsp;Being trilingual takes away from being an effective writer :-) I will work on it in the next hour and send it to you. &nbsp;THX<br /><br />','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-26 00:54:50','2015-09-26 00:54:50',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16274,2956,2309,'Hi,&nbsp;<br /><br />We would be happy to help you with your request. You will have to submit your order through Editor World.com in order to get everything done.&nbsp;<br /><br />Thanks!','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-26 01:33:59','2015-09-26 02:01:20',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16275,2309,2956,'will do so shortly!&nbsp;<br /><br /><br />thx','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-26 02:02:14','2015-09-26 02:02:14',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16276,474,2956,'Hi,<br /><br />I have made the changes, please feel free to let me know what you thinkg','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-26 02:52:00','2015-09-26 02:52:00',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16277,3219,904,'Hi Andrew:<br /><br />Ten pages to go but I thought I\'d let you get a head start. It sure is nice getting back in the saddle. I took a heck of a knock in the back of the head and it led to traumatic vertigo, but my docs all say I\'m good to go. Good thing I have a hard head. I\'ll send the clean copy of this edited version next. And don\'t worry about spelling errors. I\'ll do a spell check when I\'m done.<br /><br />Regards,<br />Arnie','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-26 02:54:18','2015-09-26 11:00:04',NULL,'upload_5605d09a72b2f9.27735590_3 - ALL WORK AND NO PLAY.docx','3 - ALL WORK AND NO PLAY.docx'),
	(16278,3219,904,'Here\'s the clean copy. Beck to you tomorrow with the completed chapter; I already have the fourth so I\'ll get right on it when this one is done.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-26 02:56:28','2015-09-26 17:37:03',NULL,'upload_5605d11c940862.54150582_3 - ALL WORK AND NO PLAY clean.docx','3 - ALL WORK AND NO PLAY clean.docx'),
	(16279,3260,454,'Thank you!','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-26 03:00:04','2015-09-26 04:18:17',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16280,904,2956,'Only the bold section needs to be edited. <br /><br />thx','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-26 03:01:56','2015-09-26 03:01:56',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16281,2956,474,'This version is much more detailed, and seems to answer the question more fully. There are a couple instances of vague wording that might require a little elaboration, but overall it is pretty clear. I flagged the areas that might need elaboration, and I gave you questions to answer that should clarify these sections.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-26 03:06:27','2015-09-26 03:56:09',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16282,2424,65,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-26 04:10:50','2015-09-26 04:10:50',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16283,2956,482,'I\'m really sorry, but I am teaching at a conference this weekend, so I\'m unable to take anything right now. I\'m sure one of the other editors can help. They are all highly qualified.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-26 05:44:45','2015-09-26 05:44:45',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16284,144,3260,'Hi<br />Thanks you. You are always so perfect.<br /><br />Could you kindly share the discount coupon code that I can apply at check-out for the next document(s)?<br /><br />Kind Regards<br />D<br /><br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-26 06:40:27','2015-09-26 08:14:00',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16285,2147,1163,'Hi, there:<br /><br />I edited the document in the areas of grammar, sentence structure, flow, punctuation, clarity, consistency, spelling, detail, word choice, and organization.<br /><br />Thank you!<br />MasterEditor','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-26 06:49:03','2015-09-26 06:49:03',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16286,3260,144,'You need to ask Patti about that. Just let her know I said I\'d give you the discount. I don\'t handle any of the arrangements.<br /><br />Best,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-26 08:14:49','2015-09-26 08:50:40',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16287,144,3260,'Hi<br /><br />I just sent an email to <a href=\"mailto:info@editorsworld.com\">info@editorsworld.com</a>, addressed to Patti, on the same.<br />Some editors on this platform have mentioned code names in their intro.<br /><br />I write blogs as my hobby : <a href=\"http://www.lighteddream.wordpress.com\">www.lighteddream.wordpress.com</a><br />Have a look whenever free &amp; feel free to share feedback either through here, or through the email mentioned in my blog.<br /><br />In the meantime, I will await her reply.<br />Have a nice day<br /><br />regards<br />D Das','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-26 09:05:44','2015-09-26 18:50:20',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16288,2424,65,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-26 19:15:30','2015-09-26 19:15:30',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16289,65,2794,'Hi Jackson - Here goes (hopefully) an Op-Ed to \"The Times\". I look forward to your always excellent editing . Best, Carl.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-26 21:16:50','2015-09-26 21:16:50',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16290,3160,904,'Hi. I have read&nbsp;your paper completely and find it really interesting and a different way to approach an important topic. One problem at my end: I had a nasty fall last Sunday, hit my head, and ended up in the emergency room. Luckily, no permanent damage; just bumps and bruises and a glued-together laceration at the top of my head. Because of this, I fell behind on the actual editing so it will&nbsp;take me a couple&nbsp;more days to complete it. I\'m going full speed ahead&nbsp;even though the paper I send in tonight won\'t look it; I have to send it for Editor World deadline records. Rest assured, you\'ll get a great paper before much longer. I\'ll keep you informed of progress and perhaps send you a chapter at a time so you can work on it. Thanks for understanding. Arnie Friedman (that\'s EIC\'s real name).','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-26 23:30:10','2015-09-27 07:47:12',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16291,3342,541,'An engaging piece. I\'ve made some margin notes to suggest places where the argument could be strengthened or further developed. <br />A pleasure to read.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-26 23:30:41','2015-09-26 23:30:41',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16292,2424,65,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-26 23:32:36','2015-09-26 23:32:36',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16293,2956,904,'This is fine now. Always glad to help.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-27 00:03:01','2015-09-27 00:03:01',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16294,144,3327,'Hi Nyanidoc,<br /><br />Thanks for your reply.<br /><br />I was trying to say that because of the realization of inability of CMOS, I used MEMS technology rather than CMOS in my doctorial work to address this task/goal.<br /><br />I wonder if this information&nbsp;wasn\'t clearly conveyed to the audience.<br /><br />Thanks for your time.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-27 00:32:35','2015-09-27 08:37:31',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16295,65,3039,'Comments for a child home video and assumed advices from Piaget to contemporary parents and educators. ','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-27 02:18:02','2015-09-27 02:18:02',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16296,144,3299,'Here is another one for you. I will write a review this weekend. Thanks so much ','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-27 02:37:35','2015-09-27 08:42:43',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16297,2424,65,'Finished it at 4 and didn\'t send it. Getting old...<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-27 03:13:14','2015-09-27 03:13:14',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16298,3039,65,'Always good to hear from you.<br /><br />Just accept all changes and then review.&nbsp;<br /><br />Thank you,<br /><br />Jackson','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-27 03:51:46','2015-09-27 03:51:46',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16299,3219,904,'Ok, Andrew, here\'s chapter 3. Clean copy to follow. Arnie','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-27 04:09:30','2015-09-27 07:23:18',NULL,'upload_560733bad41999.64242892_3 - ALL WORK AND NO PLAY.docx','3 - ALL WORK AND NO PLAY.docx'),
	(16300,3219,904,'And here\'s the clean copy. Off to Chapter 4 tomorrow. And the head\'s slowly feeling better.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-27 04:10:37','2015-09-28 09:14:59',NULL,'upload_560733fd0cc556.22637417_3 - ALL WORK AND NO PLAY clean.docx','3 - ALL WORK AND NO PLAY clean.docx'),
	(16301,3160,904,'Hello Again. As I said earlier, this is just for bookkeeping purposes so don\'t bother to read it. I should be able to send at least Chapter 1 tomorrow and finish in a couple of days.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-27 04:12:55','2015-09-27 07:50:44',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16302,904,3347,'Can you edit everything, making grammar free, making the sentence clear.<br />English is my 2nd language<br />Please put your best work in it <br />get back to me on when you think it will done','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-27 06:10:29','2015-09-27 06:10:29',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16303,144,2875,'After yesterday\'s group activity, what does your interaction in the group say about you as a person as you heard feedback about your behavior.  For those outside of the group (those who were observing), what did you learn about providing others with feedback. Make sure that you integrate your experience and some knowledge from chapters 1-4.  This is what I am trying to answer','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-27 07:25:48','2015-09-27 08:43:10',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16304,3078,1163,'Hi, there:<br /><br />I edited the document in the areas of grammar, sentence structure, flow, punctuation, clarity, consistency, spelling, detail, word choice, and organization.<br /><br />It has been my pleasure. Thank you!<br /><br />Sincerely,<br />MasterEditor','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-27 07:49:42','2015-09-27 07:49:42',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16305,2956,1163,'Hi, there:<br /><br />Thank you for your email! Yes, I can review a 250-word document for you as soon as possible if you still need this done.<br /><br />Thank you,<br />MasterEditor','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-27 07:51:57','2015-09-27 07:51:57',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16306,3327,144,'Yes, I think that needs to be clarified. As you say it now, it makes sense. But perhaps your audience would understand??<br /><br />Best,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-27 08:38:34','2015-09-28 04:02:52',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16307,144,1550,'Dear Editor,<br /><br />Thank you very much for your help!<br /><br />The authors','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-27 10:06:34','2015-09-27 10:06:34',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16308,144,1964,'This is a designer\'s statement (abstract) for an academic conference. maximum word count is 500 word. there is a sentende of 25 word summary. it is not part of the 500 word limit.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-27 11:12:03','2015-09-27 11:12:03',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16309,2794,65,'Carl, <br /><br />This will surely spark responses. You have a right to your opinion, which post-editing, is well stated.<br /><br />Let me know what happens.<br /><br />Thank you.<br /><br />Jackson','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-27 17:44:18','2015-09-28 16:05:32',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16310,2424,65,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-27 19:31:58','2015-09-27 19:31:58',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16311,2875,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your assignment.<br /><br />As you know, I appreciate your ratings.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-27 20:04:48','2015-09-27 20:04:48',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16312,2386,144,'Thank you, Daniel, for the opportunity to read and edit another of your pieces. They pick me up!<br /><br />As always, your ratings are most appreciated.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-27 20:17:46','2015-09-27 20:17:46',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16313,904,2811,'It is to complex a complex policy issue in very short space. Clarity and reability is key.<br /><br />Deadline approaching, appreciate if can be edited ASAP','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-27 20:38:09','2015-09-27 20:38:09',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16314,1964,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your abstract.<br /><br />Ratings are always appreciated.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-27 20:41:58','2015-09-27 20:41:58',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16315,3299,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your piece.<br /><br />As always, ratings are much appreciated.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-27 21:08:25','2015-09-27 21:08:25',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16316,2083,3348,'Hello, <br /><br />I writing letters for students who are applying for a competitive full ride scholarship program. They are selected to apply so they are really at the top of their selection. This letter can make a difference. I really would appreciate if you can look over my grammer, that my sentences make sense, editing format. <br /><br />Thank you','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-27 21:24:04','2015-09-27 21:24:04',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16317,2083,3348,'Letter of rec for a student applying for a full ride scholarship to a very competive program. I would appreciate your help in editing, checking my grammar. <br /><br />Thank you','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-27 21:28:30','2015-09-27 21:28:30',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16318,3348,2083,'Hello! <br /><br />For this document, I focused on consistency of terms, eliminating passive voice, and making sure that the grammar led to smooth, flowing sentences. I left several comments on the side either explaining certain edits or offering suggestions for your consideration, so be sure to look out for those. Feel free to message me if you have any questions! Thanks. =)','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-27 22:19:26','2015-09-27 22:19:26',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16319,2338,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your document.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-27 22:33:29','2015-09-27 22:33:29',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16320,3348,2083,'Hello! <br /><br />For this document, I focused on grammar, ensuring specificity in the points made for the letter, and sentence structure. As with the previous document, I left a few comments on the side either explaining certain edits or offering comments for your consideration. Feel free to message me if you have any quesitons, and please don\'t forget to rate my service! Thanks. =)','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-27 22:44:02','2015-09-27 22:44:02',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16321,3270,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your essay.<br /><br />As always, ratings are much appreciated.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-27 22:59:35','2015-09-27 22:59:35',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16322,3270,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your essay.<br /><br />As you know, ratings are much appreciated.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-27 23:00:31','2015-09-27 23:00:31',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16323,2745,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your survey.<br /><br />As always, ratings are much appreciated.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-27 23:16:30','2015-09-27 23:16:30',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16324,144,1280,'higher scores for reports relatively free from mechanical errors (Spelling, punctuation, grammar errors)<br /><br />I have to wrtie a memo format report to the instructor analyzing the interview that I have watched as a role of observer.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-28 00:25:59','2015-09-28 00:25:59',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16325,65,2894,'Please proof and edit the attached email. It\'s too wordy. I\'d like to have it less than 300 word if possible without losing meaning.  I want it to sound light and entertaining, not boring and dry.   <br /><br /><br />This email is informing TollPtag holders of the cool thing coming in October. <br /><br />The North Texas Tollway Authority just launched, TollPerks, a rewards program to thank  nd reward Dallas/Forth Texas drivers for for helping create North Texas? world-class toll road system and for continuing to use NTTA toll roads. TollPerks member will earn points for driving on the rollroads.  They can redeem their points for discount offers and savings from participating merchants. Some offer require points to redeem while others don\'t<br /><br /><br id=\"tinymce\" class=\"mce-content-body  mce-visualblocks\" contenteditable=\"true\" spellcheck=\"false\" />','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-28 01:04:45','2015-09-28 01:04:45',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16326,1163,3178,'The document is a teaching statement that will be included in the application for tenure and promotion at my school.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-28 01:20:44','2015-09-28 01:20:44',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16327,3260,1772,'I shifted around the order of things a slight bit, and added some transition sentences.<br /><br />The prices are set by Editor World, so they are what is listed. I hope you choose to work with us in the future.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-28 01:21:44','2015-09-28 01:21:44',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16328,1280,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your report.<br /><br />As always, ratings are much appreciated.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-28 02:56:13','2015-09-28 02:56:13',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16329,2894,65,'More an edit than a proof. I followed your instructions to reduce the text to about 300 words. This required substantial cuts (about 173 words). If I\'ve overdone it, then I\'ll re-do it.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-28 03:37:52','2015-09-28 03:37:52',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16330,904,3178,'This is a research paper to be sent to a professional accounting journal.  The journal\'s name is Strategic Finance and  the <span style=\"font-size: 10.0pt; font-family: \'Arial\',\'sans-serif\'; color: #1f497d;\">VP/Editor-in-Chief expressed interest in the topic. While I have experience in empirical academic research, I have less experience with professional journals. This is also my first experience with this journal. I include below the link to the submission guidelines. I would like to send a copy of an article from this publication. Thanks.</span><br /><br /><a href=\"http://sfmagazine.com/editorial-guidelines-submissions/\">http://sfmagazine.com/editorial-guidelines-submissions/<br /></a>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-28 08:06:16','2015-09-28 08:06:16',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16331,144,3311,'Hi,<br /><br />Thanks for your help with the previous document. This document is an email I would like to send to programs to get interviews after applications submitted. Please feel free to edit and add any suggestions if you have any.<br /><br />Alex','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-28 08:18:47','2015-09-28 08:18:47',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16332,904,3219,'Hi Arnie....<br />Finding quite a few areas where words were jumbled again....what\'s up with that? Also...some parts were changed that did not make sense...I have reviewed, approved all your edits other than the misses and changed where neccessary...Please review carefully and make sure everything is correct and reads smoothly...<br />Hope you are feeling better...and wondering if you have any commentary about content and holding interest...<br />Best,<br />Andrew O','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-28 09:26:32','2015-09-28 16:52:21',NULL,'upload_5608cf88972114.86314971__3 - ALL WORK AND NO PLAY .A.docx','_3 - ALL WORK AND NO PLAY .A.docx'),
	(16333,1772,3260,'Hi<br />Requesting a thorough editing & proof-reading with sentence reframing, use of alternate words.<br />My target audience is history blog readers ( my site: <a href=\"http://www.lighteddream.wordpress.com\">www.lighteddream.wordpress.com</a>), and would like every sentence/word of mine to sparkle in the article!<br /><br />Many thanks<br />regards<br />D Das','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-28 10:31:32','2015-09-28 10:31:32',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16334,144,3260,'Hi<br />As discussed previously, the target audience is history buffs.<br />Kindly edit/proof-read thoroughly using sentence reframing or using more emphatic words /synonyms/proverbs that would best suit the tone, for the article to sparkle!<br /><br />regards<br />D Das','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-28 10:35:58','2015-09-28 10:35:58',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16335,144,2875,'I need the summary edited asap<br />Thanks!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-28 10:47:23','2015-09-28 10:47:23',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16336,65,3257,'Hello, <br /><br />I am applying to Rush Medical College, but this is not an admissions essay. The school wants me to answer the following prompt: <strong><strong><br /><br /></strong></strong><p><strong><em>Based on these experiences, please describe what you have learned through your involvement, the attributes you would bring to Rush Medical College, and the impact you would have on the greater Rush Community (2000 characters). </em></strong></p><strong><b><br /></b></strong>I have attached a document which contains my response to the aforementioned prompt (the prompt is also in bold at the top of the document and the word count was not included in the total word count as it is not to be edited). That being said, there are a few things I need addressed you, the editor. <br /><br />1) I am way over the character limit on this document (2000 characters w/spaces). If you could please help me decrease the character count, while retaining the meaning of the content (as much as possible), that would be great. If you can eliminate redundancy, restructure complex sentences into more simple ones, etc... to make the document more concise, that would be ideal. Overall, I would like you to remove anything that you think does not directly ANSWER the above prompt. Also, I would like you to remove anything that you think does not add anything productive to the response and is just \"fluff\". <br /><br />2) I want to ensure my grammar and word choice is perfect. <br /><br />Thank you very much!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-28 13:49:26','2015-09-28 13:49:26',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16337,65,2794,'Thanks, Jackson. Great job, as always. I\'ll let you know if and when the article is published. Best, Carl.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-28 16:08:46','2015-09-28 16:30:39',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16338,2794,65,'Good luck with it. Do let me know.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-28 16:31:08','2015-09-28 18:51:37',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16339,1541,3337,'Dear Eloquence,<br /><br />I really apprechiated your last edit of my application. Therefore, I would like to ask you to edit a scientific paper on hail hazard assessment. <br /><br />The manuscript originally was written in Latex. However, I converted it into a docx file, where you can do the edit. You can simply ignore the remaining latex code (i.e., \\ref{xxx}, \\citep{xxx}, \\citet{xxx}, \\begin{equation} - \\end{equation}, $xxx$, ~). Is this o.k. for you?<br /><br />If you have any questins, you can ask me directly via <a href=\"mailto:kunz@kit.edu\">kunz@kit.edu<br /><br />T</a>hank you very much, best regards<br />Michael','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-28 16:46:44','2015-09-28 16:46:44',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16340,3257,65,'As you noted, you were over the character count (3,715 vs. 2,000 goal). I have made extensive cuts because 2,000 characters equals about 320 words plus spaces.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-28 17:07:56','2015-09-28 17:07:56',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16341,904,2811,'I was infomed by the website team there is a issue with the uploaded file. Hope this one works','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-28 18:46:39','2015-09-28 20:12:09',NULL,'upload_560952cfd52c93.78640805_Current Affairs Essay.docx','Current Affairs Essay.docx'),
	(16342,2424,65,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-28 18:59:29','2015-09-28 18:59:29',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16343,904,3353,'I am looking to start a blog about engineering&nbsp;and spiriutality. &nbsp;I am goign to be wriitng about my own spiritual journey in engineering, and also provide a space for others to share their stories.<br /><br />I am looking for it to be easy to read, to flow, and to also be grounded and sound intelligent. &nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-28 19:49:22','2015-09-28 19:49:22',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16344,904,3353,'I am looking to start a blog about engineering&nbsp;and spiriutality. &nbsp;I am goign to be wriitng about my own spiritual journey in engineering, and also provide a space for others to share their stories.<br /><br />I am looking for it to be easy to read, to flow, and to also be grounded and sound intelligent. &nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-28 19:49:35','2015-09-28 19:49:35',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16345,2424,65,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-28 20:44:38','2015-09-28 20:44:38',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16346,2875,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit another of your essays.<br /><br />As always, ratings are much appreciated.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-28 20:54:27','2015-09-28 20:54:27',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16347,651,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your letter.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best of success with your application,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-28 21:36:33','2015-09-28 21:36:33',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16348,144,3354,'I am writing this manuscript for an acdemic journal. I need editig help. I am also concerned about how to handle stating teh authors name when citing in AMA style.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-28 21:48:06','2015-09-28 21:48:06',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16349,3311,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your letter.<br /><br />As always, ratings are much appreciated.<br /><br />Best of success with your application,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-28 21:52:45','2015-09-28 21:52:45',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16350,144,3311,'<p>Hi&nbsp;Nyanidoc,<br /><br />The document was two pages. It looks like you did not see the second page, can you please &nbsp;have a look at it and edit it please. Thank you.<br /><br /></p>\r\n<p>Alex</p>','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-28 21:58:21','2015-09-29 00:04:59',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16351,2338,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your research summary.<br /><br />As always, ratings are much appreciated.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-28 22:05:46','2015-09-28 22:05:46',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16352,3260,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your piece.<br /><br />As always, ratings are much appreciated.<br /><br />Best Regards,]<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-28 22:33:27','2015-09-28 22:33:27',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16353,3270,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit another of your pieces.<br /><br />As always, ratings are much appreciated.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-28 22:48:44','2015-09-28 22:48:44',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16354,1550,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit another of your papers.<br /><br />As always, ratings are much appreciated.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-29 00:03:59','2015-09-29 00:03:59',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16355,3311,144,'My sincere apologies! I did indeed fail to see that there were two letters.<br /><br />I\'m sorry for the inconvenience.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-29 00:13:59','2015-09-29 00:13:59',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16356,3219,904,'Hi Andrew:<br />I\'ll check it out and get back to you. I\'m not having this problem with any other documents so I don\'t know why this is happening, but I\'m going to try something different on the next chapter, creating a whole new document and workintg on that. We\'ll see what happens. So far, you have kept my interest and I want to know what happens next, and not only with your love life.<br />Cheers,<br />A','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-29 00:19:26','2015-09-29 00:53:18',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16357,3178,1163,'Hi, there:<br /><br />I edited the document in the areas of grammar, sentence structure, flow, punctuation, clarity, consistency, spelling, detail, word choice, and organization. It was a pleasure! Good luck!<br /><br />Thank you!<br />MasterEditor','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-29 00:30:58','2015-09-29 00:30:58',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16358,904,3219,'Hi Arnie<br />My edits back to you are mostly corrections due to words left in or open dialogue...Have you had a chance to see my Edits back...a few word changes here and there but very few...too few to mention..<br /><br />Andrew','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-29 00:56:23','2015-09-29 00:56:23',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16359,2083,2537,'Hi there,<br /><br />This is a response to the editors. I\'d like professional, respectful, and free from erros.<br /><br />Thanks,','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-29 01:19:52','2015-09-29 01:19:52',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16360,144,2745,'Thank you for your work! ','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-29 01:59:53','2015-09-29 01:59:53',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16361,65,3355,'<p>Hello!</p><p>This is my very first post to a forum for my masters degree. The writing prompt was:</p><p>Parts I and II of Schellenberg provide background and consider categories of theories: individual characteristics, social processes, social structures, and formal theories. In about 500 words for your original posts, please choose a category and discuss how it explains many of the conflicts you experience. The conflicts might occur in the workplace or in more personal situations. Explain what about this category of theories is most pertinent.</p><p>I chose to focus on Formal Theories. Posts are supposed to be in APA style, but I have no idea how you do that on a BlackBoard forum!<br /><br /></p><p>Cheers!</p>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-29 02:33:24','2015-09-29 02:33:24',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16362,2745,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your paper.<br /><br />As always, ratings are much appreciated.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-29 03:59:10','2015-09-29 03:59:10',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16363,3355,65,'A bit over the word count. Added comments about some of the word choices.<br /><br />Let me know if you have any questions.<br /><br />Thank you.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-29 04:07:51','2015-09-29 04:12:05',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16364,65,3355,'I apologise for going over the word count! I believe this site is a little more confusing than I realized. There were two different places to put word counts, and I guessed the first time, and put the actual number (or so I believed) the second time! I won\'t make the mistake again.<br /><br />This was very nicely edited and I genuinely appreciate it!<br /><br />Cheers!','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-29 04:23:27','2015-09-29 05:06:23',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16365,3347,904,'The full title is The Tragedy of Hamlet, Prince of Denmark, so of course it is tragic. Shakespeare wrote tragedies and comedies, as well as sonnets. Operas also have many characters die. Your paper is in good shape now.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-29 04:35:15','2015-09-29 04:35:15',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16366,3355,65,'Glad you\'re happy, as that\'s most important. Thanks for the kind note.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-29 05:08:05','2015-09-29 20:26:25',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16367,65,3223,'APA format and APA-style references. Please do every thing you can to make this paper good. chick the citiations and the references. please give me your opinion what the things that i have should work on it in the paper. Also, please, chick the citation if Iat least one peer-reviewed journal article  my prof asked us to do so. <br /><br />this is my email if you need to know more inf <a href=\"mailto:uth.sungly@hotmail.com\">uth.sungly@hotmail.com<br /><br />t</a>he instructions for this assighnment are:<br /><p>1)   Brief introduction to the disease you chose.  What makes this disease so terrible? (1 point)</p><p>2)      What aspects of this infectious disease leads to increased morbidity and mortality? Use the epidemiological triangle to describe what influences transmission and elaborate on each point on the triangle.  What particular aspects of host (e.g. risk factors), agent (e.g. drug resistance), and environment (e.g. lack of public health infrastructure) promote the spread of disease?  (4 points)</p><p>3)     Describe the distribution of the disease worldwide, in the US, and in high risk areas.  Utilize frequencies, incidence and prevalence as appropriate in your description.  (4 points)</p><p>4)     What is a \"pump handle\" for the infectious disease you chose?  Describe an evidenced-based public health strategy to prevent this infectious disease.  This evidence should be cited from a peer-reviewed journal.  Is the intervention you described a primary, secondary or tertiary prevention strategy? (4 points)</p><p> Provide citations including at least one peer-reviewed journal article (hint:  Morbidity and Mortality Weekly Reports are certainly acceptable and found at <a href=\"http://www.cdc.gov/\">www.cdc.gov</a>). </p> <br />Please let me know do I answerd in all her questions?<br />Thank you, and I appreciate your work. ','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-29 06:44:27','2015-09-29 17:19:54',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16368,144,1443,'Please proofread the document. Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-29 10:45:12','2015-09-29 10:45:12',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16369,904,3357,'Hi, <br />My main problem is the citations. This paper is due today and APA is kicking my butt. I used my personal knowledge and then paraphrased the rest, but I needed to use 4 peer-reviewed and a total of at least 8 total references. I attempted to cite, but that did not go so well. I have just run out of time so if you could possibly do this today I would be forever grateful! Like I said the citation and plagiarism are the most important part, and of course time frame. Thank you in advance!<br /><br />','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-29 14:59:13','2015-09-29 14:59:13',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(16370,904,3357,'Hi,<br />I just realized the paper wouldn\'t be edited before tonight and it is due by midnight tonight. If you cant complete it can we switch it to another editor by chance? Thank you and my username is jennifermartin9555','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2015-09-29 15:06:23','2015-09-29 17:44:00',NULL,NULL,NULL);

