Thank you for editing! 
 
I have added some sentences to increase the flow after removing first, second... when starting off each paragraph. Would you take a look at them for me? 

(FYI, I have changed the order of paragraph. President of student association comes first, and then teaching assistant comes next. Research work follows. Church fund raising event is the last)


1. (The following sentence is located right after the president role paragraph and starts the teaching experience paragraph) 

"Both diversity and harmonization needs of ethnic groups also exist off campus. I tried to connect myself to the needs of local diversity as a member of the campus." ...


(A finishing sentence of this paragraph)
"We can develop ideas together and provide programs to build such mutually beneficial relationships between faculty, staff, and students and the local communities."  

2. (A starting sentence about church event paragraph)

"Besides involvement in diversity of ethnic communities on and off campus I learned how to ...."

"This is an annual event for helping local poor households and supporting mission trips and I have participated in the event for 4 years"

Thank you so much in advance!!