Hi George,&nbsp;<br /><br />Attached file is the revised version for the anecdotal essay for the grad school. (I have been&nbsp;busy having interviews, so I didn't have enough time to review your comments on the last edited version for past several days.)<br />As you might remember, the school requires me to write a personal anecdote. So I wrote about my homesickness and how I overcame it. There are some memos in the file as always, so I would really appreciate if you could refer to those and provide some suggestions. If you have any questions regarding to the content, please let me know.&nbsp;<br /><br />Thank you for your help.&nbsp;<br />Have a great evening.&nbsp;<br /><br />Best,&nbsp;<br />Jaeyoung&nbsp;