<p><span style="font-family: Open Sans Bold;">Hi, Jaehoon - <span style="text-decoration: underline;"><strong><br /><br /><br />The Role of Neolithic and Bronze Pottery Cultures in the </strong></span><br /><span style="text-decoration: underline;"><strong>Formation Process of Korean Identity</strong></span></span><br /><br />This is good, except I would take out "Process" - you don't need it.&nbsp; So:&nbsp; "The Role of Neolithic and Bronze Pottery Cultures in the Formation of Korean Identity"<br /><br /><br />&nbsp;(<strong><span style="text-decoration: underline;"><span style="font-family: Open Sans Bold;">while more Korean archaeologists focus on the development process of an indigenous Korean pottery culture</span></span></strong>),<br /><br />Likewise here you should take out "process"&nbsp; - unnecessary.&nbsp; Otherwise this seems good.&nbsp;<br /><br /> "Process" is not exactly wrong, either here or in the previous example, but it sounds a bit clumsy.&nbsp; <br />RebeccaTDE</p>