Hi - <br /><br />This file is a compilation of files that I am submitting for a tenure packet. (We refer to tenure at my university as "Continuing Faculty Status" or CFS). <br /><br />I am mostly interested in having you help identify any grammar, style, and consistency issues. <br /><br />Please don't worry about formatting. I did not write it in Word, and in exporting it to Word some inconsistencies were introduced (unaligned bullets, etc.). I'm not worried about this kind of stuff.<br /><br />Unless you see glaring problems with the structure of the arguments, I think you can focus mostly on sentence-level stuff. I probably don't have enough time to rearrange the structure of some of the larger parts of the file, anyway.<br /><br />Please try not to over-edit: I want it to read in a clean, straightforward way, but I mostly just don't want to be embarrassed by stupid errors. (In other words, I won't rate you poorly if there aren't a lot of edits.)<br /><br />I think that's it, but feel free to contact me directly if you have questions.<br /><br />Also, I want to be a good writer, so if at the end of editing this you notice that I consistently make the same errors, then I'd love for you to mention it to me.<br /><br />Thanks!<br /><br />Curtis Child<br />cchild@byu.edu