Hi,<br /><br />This script will be narrated by a voice-over talent. It is for a mini-documentary Im creating and is split into mini chapters. <br /><br />You can watch the one I have made last year to give you an idea. See it here: <a href="https://vimeo.com/93332896">https://vimeo.com/93332896</a><br /><br />The first line of the script might be confusing to you but I shot a time-lapse of the convention center where the event was held with the sun rising over it and then some shots of people lining up before they get in the event..hopefully that makes more sense of what I’m trying to convey...<br /><br />See if you can make it flow better, prettier :)<br /><br />Thanks very much<br /><br />Robino Jones