<div id="yiv1649717167yui_3_16_0_1_1452996917600_5670" dir="ltr"><span id="yiv1649717167yui_3_16_0_1_1452996917600_5669">Thanks again for your work. I would like for you to take a look at this is a small sample of a pevital point in the story, my word count is 65983 and my time frame is 4 to 6 week if possible.&nbsp; Attached below is a sample chapter of my work, please review and see if you would like to work with me on the project. What I am sending you is a chapter for reference so you can have some back ground on what's going on. The pages I would like to see edited are page 5 and half of 6. These pages are when she finds the Ark but they seem to fall flat and not as exciting as they should be as they are the pages of where she&nbsp; finds what she has been looking for. Question is how would you make it better, how would you make it more climactic so that the reader who was holding their breath and biting their nails jump for joy in relief when they read Clara found&nbsp; it? I think your work is great and you made the 1st&nbsp;sample so much better, I loved it. Oh by the way I could not find how to rate your work. I'm on the document page&nbsp;but cant&nbsp;I can't find the star I should click on.</span></div>
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