Hello, <br />Thank you so much for your sample editing. <br />I would like to try this paper with you. <br />This one will be submitted to a well-known journal soon after getting your feedback, so I would need your extra help!<br />Here are some things I would like you to know for editing/proof reading:<br />1. It shouldn't be over 8,000 words.<br />2. Please let me know each section/paragraph&nbsp;smoothly connects to each other. <br />3. Any issues of the&nbsp;topic discussions: if you find any illogical explanations or insufficient discussions, please let me know as well. <br /><br />Thank you again and look forward to hearing from you soon!<br /><br />Isabelle<br /><br /><br />