Thank you so much for all the time and expertise you put into my book review.<br /><br />I saw your changes but I didn't see your comments. Where can I find them?<br /><br />My objective is to write a LA Times book review (crique/analysis of the book) Does the review read like a LA Times review?<br /><br />I shorten and revised a few areas, please review and provide feedback.<br /><br />Thank you,<br />Diane Williams&nbsp;