Thank you, fellow Bruin :), for the opportunity to read and edit your introduction/preface. Frankly, I wouldn't worry too much about the title.<br /><br />I believe I have edited it so that the 'voice' sounds consistent. It really didn't sound very disconnected to me to begin with, so well done, both of you. I am neither an economist, nor familiar with the subject, but I found it clear. I have also formatted the footnotes and indicated where changes need to be made. You need to include the full ref each time a work is cited--in my opinion at least.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc