Hello, this is Mohammed 


I would like to apply for a Ph.D. Degree in Political science for several universities. 

I am writing my statement of purpose, and I am trying my best. but you know I won't be able to make 6 people on a rounded table remember my statement. 

But I wonder as one have a Ph.D. degree could edit it. I want you to do more than editing. If there is a sentence is bad to change it to something good in the English language. I wanted it to be good statement of purpose that will be remembered. 

Thank you

and thanks for your big help in the last time