Hi. Thank you for the chance to give you a free sample edit. I edited the first two paragraphs, which should give you a general idea of the editing approach I would take. Two concerns, in general. First the sentences need to be broken up into shorter sentences to make for easier reading (I tweaked quite a few of these). Second, the long paragraphs also need to be broken up into shorter paragraphs, which will also make the text easier to read. Also, when you use a foreign word, it should be italicized on the first use, and the definition should be put into paranethesis. I am not sure what uke is, in this case...<br /><br />Let me know if I can help with the rest of your work...