Yes. You do have a really good book in the making! I really like the title and the angle you are going for. It's a complete inspiration.<br /><br />Brevity is the key, though! You could probably get the same exact message across in about a half to three quarters of what you have already written.&nbsp;<br /><br />I forgot to mention: I would lose the slang. Though slang can be effective in certain cases; here, it is detracting from the overall tone of good feeling. It goes out of character, too.&nbsp;<br /><br />Best!<br /><br /><br />