I would like the editor to&nbsp;give the statement a better flow while illustrating the main ideas.&nbsp;I dont mind if substantial changes are made to accomplish this, and obviously i would like the statement checked for puntuation, grammer etc. The main ideas are as follows <br /><br />reason applying for a commision as a naval officer and nurse<br /><br />personal and professional goals <br /><br />stregnths/ personal characteristics you possess which will contribute to success in the program <br /><br />any other relevant information or substantial accomplishments not already covered. <br /><br />thank you