Hi,

Thank you for selecting me to edit your e-learning script. Am I correct in my assumption that this is an audio script that will accompany visuals that will appear on screen? Will the text of the script be presented on screen as well as being read aloud?

Also, I noticed that there are a lot of line breaks in odd places. Is this intentional for purposes of how the text will appear on screen or for timing purposes? Or would you like me to clean up the formatting to create standard paragraphs?

If there is any other information you can provide about how this text will be used and presented, it will help me to ensure that I edit the document to best suit your needs.

Thank you,
MMC ("The Write Stuff")