Hi, Ramzan:<br /><br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document, and I hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />I realize that this is a work in progress, but I've tried to incorporate as many new ideas for you as I can while correcting the vocabulary and grammar. In fact, you provided an excellent draft to work with. I know you will polish it as the PPP comes together, but if there's anything else I can do, or if you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me at Editor World.<br /><br />Best wishes - George