Hi:<br /><br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document and hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />This is an interesting and valuable study, and it's clear that you've worked hard on it. I managed to cut the paper to the required length, but please proofread carefully. There were a few paragraphs whose meaning I had to guess, and I've indicated which with a comment.<br /><br />I assume this is a paper for publication so I've included a running head.<br /><br />My recommendation now would&nbsp;be for you to do a line-edit (that is, proofread&nbsp;very carefully) for clarity. You can always send me the paragraphs that you think need revision, or which you have re-written yourself for final polishing. I'm afraid that I'm not a healthcare&nbsp;expert, but I can help with the&nbsp;presentation.<br /><br />Although I made numerous edits to your document, by hovering over the sentence and right clicking the mouse you can revert to the original if you prefer.<br /><br />Well done! It's&nbsp;an excellent paper. You're almost&nbsp;there.<br /><br />Best wishes - George<br /><br /><br />I am usually available for editing between 6:00 am and 10:30 pm (EST). If my status says 'unavailable', you can still reach me via Editor World.