Good morning, Andrew. <br />As you can see, I changed your file from pdf to Word because it is much easier to edit and lets you see my changes and comments. I like your style and promise not to change it. My credo as an editor is to hone an author's words, to make them sing, not to change the writing to my own style. I have been doing this a long time and have a long list of very satisfied writers who will attest to my expertise. FYI, my name is Arnold (Arnie, preferably) Friedman. I am a born-and-bred New Yorker who worked for the Long Island Press right out of Syracuse University and in 1975 was sent&nbsp;by the publisher (Newhouse) to edit the Springfield (Mass.) Republican, which got its name from the party of Lincoln, not McConnell. After I retired in 1992, my wife and I moved to Louisville at the invitation of our lawyer son and psychotherapist daughter-in-law&nbsp;to watch their then 2-year-old grow up. I like to keep my mind active and now can pick and choose&nbsp;when and what I want to edit. I'd be delighted to work with you on your book and look forward to your response.&nbsp;<br />Regards, Arnie