<p>Hello again, </p><p>I am applying to the University of Vermont College of Medicine (UVM), and the school has asked me to answer the following question on my application:</p><p><strong>"Additional Information: Please list any additional information that you feel the admissions committee should be aware of during the application evaluation process (1000 character limit)."</strong><br /><br />Now, this is not exactly a question that possesses an answer; however, I wanted to use this space on the application as a way to drive home the point that I am greatly interested in UVM and that I would love to be a student there. </p><p>I have attached a document which contains my response to the prompt. Again, I primarily want to emphasize the point that UVM would be a great fit for me and that I would love to study medicine there. That being said, there are a few things I need addressed. </p><p>1) I am a few hundred characters over the limit on this document (1000 character w/spaces limit). If you could please help me decrease the character count, while retaining the meaning of the content, that would be great. If you can eliminate redundancy, restructure complex sentences into more simple ones, etc... to make the document more concise, that would be ideal. I especially think the first 2 paragraphs can be made more concise, since the 3rd and last paragraph is already pretty concise.</p><p>2) I want to ensure my grammar and word choice is perfect.</p>Thank you very much!