<p>Good day,<br /><br />This is a signature project for my MBA. As you can see, this has been reviewd by my advisor. I am struggling with writing in an active voice and i was advised to use and edictor to change the structue from passive to active. AS I am working full time and have hundreds of hours in this paper, I need help with polishing this paper.<br /><br />Comments from my advisor. include a weak abstract and conclusion, a revision of my charts and writng this document in an active voice.</p>
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<p>Steph</p>