Re: everything up to your questions, yes, that's all clear and what I meant. Thanks for making the citations easily accessible for editing.

Re: your questions. I don't know what you mean by what is going on w/ the citations. Can you clarify that?

As for what you are paying for now, that is a thorough edit of both chapters minus the quotes (I've reformatted the long quotes, but other than that I have only inserted [sic] where there are grammatical errors or [and/the, etc.] to add missing words in the quoted material. I am on p 85 of my first pass through the document. As I understand it, I have until the 11th to complete the job. However, I will have it back to you before that date, after I have gone through it at least one more time.

I am putting everything in past tense. You have many spots where it is written as a proposal would be: I will, interviewees will, etc. As the project is finished, it all belongs in past tense.

Hope this helps.

Best,

Nyanidoc