Sorry, I had a few urgent requests and could not get back to this document. While I was reviewing the document, I could not find a better way describing the following sections.

1.  Is there any better way to describe the following sentences?

This student has trouble concentrating for more than two minutes and is working on eye gazing at people, localizing objects, and communicating by using the AAC device.

==> due to his health condition, he has problem to continue.  The section, "is working on..." may not be clear to be in one sentence?

The student's cognitive level of functioning and the overall state of his health affect his ability to access the general education. (I am not sure if I am clearing stating this section.)

2. STAGES is the evaluation process from the product called STAGES.

http://www.intellitools.com/files/Stages_Skills_Checklist_FINAL.pdf

I would like to make sure to explain that I used the stage one of STAGES.  

I would appreciate it if you can review the section of my document, Stages (Access Skills and Entry Level Skills).  Thank you.