Dear Sir/Madam,<br /><br />Please focus on grammers, word selections,structure, especially on voice.&nbsp;<br /><br />And i really hope you could give me some suggestions on this recommendation letter and tell me what do you think of it.&nbsp;<br /><br />Please reply me as soon as possible.<br /><br />I appreciate for your help.<br /><br />Best wishes,<br /><br />Edward