I accidentally uploaded your paper before writing any comments. Great work, here - I particularly enjoyed this paper, as it has such a positive message. It seems to me as though you may not have addressed several of the required points: Describe past experiences (from your life or another person's life) when experiencing this positive emotional state moved you or the person from languishing in negativity towards flourishing. Evaluate areas for further research, highlighting questions that remain unanswered or unexplored entirely, or aspects of the research that are still inconclusive or unclear. Describe, from your own perspective, some of the strengths and weaknesses of this positive psychology research. An assessment of how this positive emotional state could impact specific aspects of your current and future personal or professional life. Include a reflection on how focusing on this positive emotional state could help you flourish. Otherwise, a stellar job! Hope the new year is starting off well for you. :)