Sorry for keep coming back with more revisions, but I just caught an akward sentence that I have changed but need to see what you think of the my change:<br /><br />Your 1st edit: <br /><br />" One can imagine that the bourgeoisies were crucial in setting forth the path of democracy in England, and they might have well&nbsp;served as the bump "<br /><br />My revision:<br /><br />"One can imagine that the bourgeoisies were crucial in setting forth the path of democracy in England, and they might have as well served as the bump"<br /><br />Also, I caught another error...Popkin describe(s)..was missing the s.<br /><br /><br />