Hi there, I'm very satisfied with your sample edit and would like you to continue. Please advise on how I may submit payment for your services.

As you are working, I would also like to request for you to highlight every word of profanity you may encounter. I am thinking of changing their use since I was advised to include young adults among my targeted readers. 

This is my very first novel, and thus, I understand that I may have a lot to learn. Please feel free to include any comments, criticisms, or suggestsions you may come up with, no matter how honest (or to the extent that you may perform your services). 

Thank you again for your help, I really appreciate it. 

Vivian.