Hi, <br />I have looked at your profile regarding lot of experience in medical research related writing. <br />I have choosed you to  edit my personal statement I need a smooth flow of the story in the 1st para, <br />2nd para slow transition to the my journey through my medical school and my medical case that inspired me to perceive internal medicine as my career. <br />3rd para is about my clinical rotations in us that made me to apply for residency in us <br />4rt para my positives and strengths <br />5th my expectations about the programs I will be looking out for<br />I want a clear expression of my thought process. and also smooth transition of my story, <br />The incident I described was a true story in my life<br />If you have any questions please let me know. <br />thanks 