Hi CopyChief,<br /><br />I greatly appreciated the services you provided during my first trial with Editor World! I have a full length journal manuscprit this time. All edits are, of course, welcome. I am particurlyinterested in edits&nbsp;that make the writing sharper and more concise. I tend to be wordy and sometimes do not see where I could use a&nbsp;word&nbsp;instead of a phrase.&nbsp;I'll be sumitting the paper to a journal specializing in psychiatry and the law.&nbsp;Beyond editing, I'd appreciate any feedback on areas of my writing that need improvement.&nbsp;<br /><br />My thanks in advance,<br /><br />Joe