Hi, Di:<br /><br />Great to see you back!<br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document, and I hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />I think you have addressed both of the concerns in your Client Comments. There wasn't much for me to add. It's a very clear paragraph.<br /><br />I substituted&nbsp;'migrants' for 'immigrants' and explained why in a comment. It's not an important issue, just a &nbsp;preference, and then I edited for flow.<br /><br />If the rest of your paper is as good, I see an A on the horizon.<br /><br />Best wishes - George (TypeRighter)<br /><br />I am usually available for editing between 6:00 am and 10:30 pm (EST). If my status says 'unavailable', you can still reach me via Editor World.<br /><br />Don't forget:&nbsp;When you open a document containing tracked changes, it appears in the Final Show Markup view. To see the document without markups, do the following:<br /><br />For PCs, on the Microsoft Word (2010) menu bar, click Review. Then select Final: Show Markup (All Markup) and click the drop-down arrow. Choose Final.<br /><br />For Word 2013, click Review, then from the All Markup drop-down box, select No Markup.<br /><br />For Macs, on the Review tab, under Tracking, click Track Changes to turn on or off. Choose No Markup from the drop-down menu in Show Markup.<br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br />