Hi, Michael:<br /><br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document and hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />MS Word includes track changes by default. Before sharing this document, please consider running Document Inspector. To do this, click File/Info/Check For Issues/Inspect Document on the Microsoft Word menu bar.<br /><br />When you open a document containing track changes, the document appears in the Final Show Markup view to show the edited document.<br /><br />(PC) To check the edited document without markups, click Review on the Microsoft Word menu bar. Then select Final: Show Markup (All Markup) and click the drop-down arrow. Choose Final (No Markup). Brackets apply to MS Word 2013.<br />(Mac) On the Review tab, under Tracking, click Track Changes to turn on / off track changes. Choose No Markup from the drop-down box in Show Markup.<br /><br />Please proofread your edited document carefully.<br /><br />You document was so well written, all I had to do was polish. Clearly you are a strong candidate&nbsp;for an Ed.D. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor&nbsp;World and I'll get back to you as soon as possible.<br /><br />Best wishes - George (TypeRighter)<br />I am usually available for editing between 6:00 am and 10:30 pm (EST). If my status says 'unavailable', you can still reach me via Editor World.