Just accept all the changes and then review and revise (if necessary). A wide-ranging paper, by which I mean the tone changed, the sentence structures changed (particularly the baby-related parts). The edits are intended to weave together this undulating text.<br /><br />The topic/subject matter is certainly original (at least to me) and I commend you for getting on stage and trying to get people to listen and then laugh. That's an achievement.<br /><br />Thank you.