I like this one, Ivan. I liked it so much I practically wrote my own version.&nbsp;<br /><br />I tried to imagine an actor saying the lines. It would be hesitant and disjointed and the listener wouldn't be sure of what the speaker meant. An implied point is sometimes more compelling than a stated one.<br /><br />I certainly don't mean to say that my version is better that yours. Just different. Blue and green. Hot and cold. Sad and melancholic.<br /><br />I hope this helps - George&nbsp;