Hi, Maya:<br /><br />Here it is.<br /><br />Although I say it myself, the document reads well, but I had trouble extending the length by more than a paragraph or two. I'm not really an expert on Islamic law. Still, it sounds like an exciting, and worthwhile&nbsp;project, and perhaps I'll revisit it after I've done some background reading.<br /><br />Speaking of Islam, I was thinking today that I haven't been consistent in your documents about ISIS. Is it ISIS, ISIL, IS, Daesh or Islamic State. From now on, I'll take my lead from you, but I think we should be consistent, perhaps explaining the preference in a footnote.<br /><br />Anyway, I hope the edits help. I just keep coming back to the document until it sounds right.<br /><br />Best wishes - George<br /><br />I am usually available for editing between 6:00 am and 10:30 pm. If my status is set to unavailable, you can still reach me via Editor World.