Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit these sections of your business proposal. You have the habit of using commas where you don't need them, and semicolons where you need commas. Commas separate two phrases; as illustrated here, semi-colons separate two related, but complete sentences.<br /><br />I am nearly finished with the second document.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best of success in your venture,<br /><br />Nyanidoc