Hi Ernie:<br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document and hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />I really didn't have to make that many changes. Your memorandum&nbsp;was well-written, far better than most, and all I did was just tighten here and there. For dates, the current preference is day month year (13 June 2016), which eliminates one comma. I also prefer, though not everyone agrees, to use 'effect' rather than 'impact'. To me, meteors impact, policies have effects. But with tracked changes you can easily choose which edits to keep, so there's no harm having an alternative suggestion.<br /><br />That's about it. The rest was just capitalizing. I prefer to use small case where I can. &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;<br /><br />MS Word includes tracked changes by default. Before sharing this document, please consider running Document Inspector. To do this, click File/Info/Check For Issues/Inspect Document on the Microsoft Word menu bar.<br /><br />When you open a document that contains tracked changes, the document appears in the Final Showing Markup view to show that the document contains tracked changes. To review the edited document without showing tracked changes, click Review on the Microsoft Word menu bar. Then select Final: Show Markup and click the drop-down arrow. Choose Final. To show tracked changes again, click Final: Show Markup.<br /><br />Best wishes - TypeRighter (aka George)<br />I am usually available for editing between 6:00 am and 10:30 pm. If my status is set to unavailable, you can still send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />