Dear Researcher,<br />&nbsp; Here's your edited sample. &nbsp;Please view in Word's Final Show Markup mode, with Comments revealed - since I have a couple of questions/suggestions for you in the comments.<br />&nbsp; Note that I've assumed, since it is a geology-related paper, that you are expected to use the modified MLA format promoted in Rossbacher &amp; Rhodes'&nbsp;STYLE MANUAL FOR WRITING IN GEOLOGY.<br />&nbsp; Thanks for the opportunity to edit your report. &nbsp;I look forward to working with you on the complete paper.<br /><br />Sincerely,<br />NTexasEditor