Hi, Josh:<br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document and hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />A very nice letter of intent. Good luck with your application to Concordia. I wish I understood more about film, but we have one thing in common. I went to Brock, too, way back in 1974, before they had a film department.<br /><br />Please proofread carefully. I tried not to change the meaning of your letter of intent, but it happens. In any case, you can easily change it back using Word's Tracked Changes.&nbsp;<br /><br />MS Word includes tracked changes by default. Before sharing this document, please consider running Document Inspector. To do this, click File/Info/Check For Issues/Inspect Document on the Microsoft Word menu bar.<br /><br />When you open a document that contains tracked changes, the document appears in the Final Showing Markup view to show that the document contains tracked changes. To review the edited document without showing tracked changes, click Review on the Microsoft Word menu bar. Then select Final: Show Markup and click the drop-down arrow. Choose Final. To show tracked changes again, click Final: Show Markup.<br /><br />Best wishes - TypeRighter (aka George)<br />I am usually available for editing between 6:00 am and 10:30 pm. If my status is set to unavailable, you can still send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br /><br /><br />