Hi, Dominic:<br /><br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document and hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />I really just polished and improved the flow, as you requested. I haven't read the two novels, so I didn't change the essay's content, but I did cut some repetitive passages. I believe the word count is now around 2800 words. I hope that's ok. If you need more, let me know.<br /><br />I think you have a fine paper, but please proofread carefully.&nbsp;<br /><br />Best wishes - George<br /><br />I am usually available for editing between 6:00 am and 10:30 pm (EST). If my status says 'unavailable', you can still reach me via Editor World.<br /><br />