Hello! <br /><br />After reading your comments and looking at the Coast Guard's requirements, I focused on formatting to make sure that both the statement and the resume catered to CG standard memorandum format. I also edited for streamlining the application so space wasn't wasted on repetitions and that sentences flowed together in a smooth, even manner. I left several comments on the side throughout the document either explaining certain edits or offering suggestions for your consideration, so be sure to look out for those. Feel free to message me if you have any questions, and please don't forget to rate my editing! I thank you for your service, and best of luck. =)