Arnie,

This looks like the same document you sent me before. I'm used to getting running commentary, I thought that's what I paid for, at least that's what I wanted. I think your editing is excellent, but I wanted specific commentary. If something works, and you find it funny or intriguing, it's useful to know those kind of things. I want to know what you think as you read, not generalized comments afterwards. I'm not asking you to rewrite or be overly critical. Any feedback is good feedback because your the only person who has read the book.