There are two areas where I would consider expanding. One is simple&mdash; just give a definition of "Holding in&nbsp;the Light," so that your readers who are not familiar will understand. The other is in the first subsection when you talk about peace engineers needing to remold the war technologies into peaceful ones. Give some concrete examples of exactly what you mean.&nbsp;<br /><br />Please let me know if you have any questions or concerns.<br /><br />Thank you.