Hey George,<br /><br />I was going to send you a thank-you note!<br /><br />I do like my second draft more than the first one, and I hope admission committees like them too. As a premed, it is always hard to talk about yourself without being too generic. Because there are tons of stories who want to become a physician to make positive impacts around the world. As one of them,&nbsp;I really tried to write my stories, and I think this is the best I can do.<br /><br />Really, thank you very much for your encouraging comments and editing! Also, I really appreciate that you finished this job so early. I did not expect to hear from you that quickly.<br /><br />I will contact you soon with other writings!<br /><br />Best,<br /><br />Viv