Hello,&nbsp;<br />I'm satisfied with the previous one! Thank you for your fast and meticulous editing.&nbsp;<br /><br />Even though I already submitted my thesis to a panel, I need to keep revising before the final submission date.&nbsp;<br />So, I uploaded general discussion part of my thesis.&nbsp;<br /><br />I will appreciate if you send me a revised version as soon as possible.<br />Thank you agian :)&nbsp;