Hello,<br /><br />I have a personal document that is written for my family to read. I need your help with the following:<br /><br /> reducing the word count<br />using persuasive language with a humble tone<br />formating the columns and if possible formatting the logos to be clearly visible on 1 page (maybe 2 x 2 layout)<br />easier to read and follow (please revise titles, headings, etc.)<br /><br />fix all grammar mistakes and anything you feel needs to be corrected! <br /><br />Thank you!<br />Kevin