Hi:<br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document and hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />I have used both highlights and track changes to edit your document. I apologize for the number of edits but I think it is better to over than under edit and, of course, you, as the author, can accept or reject any or all of the suggestions.<br /><br />Microsoft Word displays tracked changes and comments by default. <br /><br />To review the edited document without showing tracked changes, click Review on the Microsoft Word menu bar. Then select Final: Show Markup and click the drop-down arrow. Choose Final. To show tracked changes again, click Final: Show Markup.<br /><br />My best wishes to you for the holiday season - TypeRighter (aka George)