I am in the process of completing final edits on a dissertation in anthropology of religion, an ethnographic study of a campus parachurch ministry. &nbsp;I am hoping to receive detailed feedback on grammar/syntax/flow. &nbsp;I also think the dissertation could benefit from editing which could make points more concise and in active voice rather than passive. &nbsp;I am not in need of advice on broad structural changes. &nbsp;Any feedback is greatly appreciated. &nbsp;Thank you for your time on this sample. &nbsp;