<div style="text-align: left;">Dear Laura, thank you! Sorry to interrupt your vacation with work:( I hope these go quickly for you. I have already revised them several times(!) and hopefully they are much smoother read now with the editor comments I tried to include. The same issues from Phase I are needed to be corrected in Phase II. Be watchful for smooth flow, clear and understandable text and APA citations. I know in both Phases, I was missing some APA citations in my references section that were cited in the text, please keep an eye out for those. I also change verb tense, not sure if it should all be one tense? So much information was taken from my dissertation which was both tenses. <br /><br />One note on Phase I, that I just caught when creating my author table, it looks like they would prefer my participant demographic information in a simple table in the beginning of the methods section. I don't know if putting something into a table is included in your editing services, don't worry if not, I will put into a table. I just didn't want you to spend too much time on the demographic information since I am going to put it into a table. <br /><br />For Phase II, I will send you the t-test table and teacher attrition table since I don't detail the table information in the narrative since I have a table for it. You do not need to edit these tables but wasn't sure if you want to see the information on them to better understand the narrative. Thank you Laura! -Tara<br /><br /></div>