<p>Dear Karen/MoreThanWords,</p>
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<p>Please know that I have received my paper back from my advisor-- the one&nbsp;you edited last week on the 7th of Sept--with negative comments and tons of grammatical, organization, and word choice which my advisor called "awkward word choice", such as the word "ill science perception" that you didn't take the time to correct it for me regardless of my effort trying to ask you to take a good care of my document for wish I paid about $27.00 for a sloppy and thoughtless work. I trusted you on good faith basis and thought I was taken care of, but I was obviously mistaken. Because of your negligence, I was punished and my grade was significantly reduced because of simple grammar issues that would have been solved by the very novice editor. I have seen your work and the time you took to edit from the first comment to the last was about 10-15 minutes in total for a 5-page paper! It tells me that you were not doing a good job. I asked you again in a follow up message to correct my word choice and make it intelligible for the English native speaker, and you said you did, but you did not. Here are examples on your sloppy editing:</p>
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<p>The subdiscipline ((OFF))comparative politics, and the field of political science, are...</p>
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<p>, and capitalizing on case study ((CAPTILIZING CASE STUDY))</p>
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<p>casual inference ((CAUSAL))</p>
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<p>the dynamic human nature&nbsp;((THE DYNAMICS OF HUMAN NATURE))</p>
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<p>AND MANY MORE.........I have a long list that I don't have time to go through.</p>
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<p>I am filing a complaint against your service with Editor World.&nbsp;</p>
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<p>Thanks,</p>
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