Hi, Samatha:<br /><br />Here it is. It reads ok to me. I hope I've helped.<br /><br />If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />Best wishes - George (TypeRighter)<br />I am usually available for editing between 6:00 am and 10:30 pm (EST). If my status is set to 'unavailable', you can still reach me via Editor World.<br /><br />Best wishes - George