Hello,<br />Your document is attached with my suggested edits in red using Word's track changes feature. Except for a few stray commas and the occasional misplaced article, everything was grammatically correct. I wanted you to get a little extra bang for your buck, though, so I made some suggestions that you can take or leave as you see fit. I shifted some words around, spiced up some nouns, added a couple adjectives, that sort of thing. You are a very capable writer and since my edits are easy to accept or reject, I just thought I'd throw them out there for your consideration. Mostly, I can confirm for you that your work is typo and error free. Thank you very much for choosing me to be your editor! I hope I can be helpful to you in the future.