Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your articles.<br /><br />The restaurant article is fine, given what you have to work with. Except for the dessert place, the restaurants all have a boringly similar theme and I suspect the competition will cause a couple of them to fail. It's hard to imagine Californians being so attracted to meat!<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc