I am writing bits and pieces on a possible memoir, the story arc being my marriage, which was falling apart. I am trying to piece it back together by examining parts of my childhood.  Other themes that I am exploring will be passion versus harmony in regards to relationships.  <br /><br />After the last piece, I realized I struggle with commas and sentences structure. <br /><br /><br />Any theme, creative ideas, or stucture comments are helpful. 