Hi Michael! I have attached the version showing the tracked changes. I will upload the second file showing a clean copy in a separate message, but the system makes me name the documents the original name, so be careful when you save them. I had no idea there was so much to learn about the aerotropolis world! I mosty edited for readabiilty, syntax, punctuation and clarity. I tried my best not to change the meaning of any ideas. Though this was written by two collaborating authors, I thought the voice seemed consistent. I was unable to pull out the graphics, but thought they looked fine. If there are specific things within the graphics you would like me to work on, I will be happy to if you send me the Power Point file.<br /><br />I noticed toward the end of the article you abbreviated aerotropolis master plan with AMP. I when ahead and added it at the beginning when you first use aerotropolis master plan so if you choose to use the abbreviation throughout you can.<br /><br />If there are specific sections you would like me to work on further, I am happy to--just let me know.<br /><br />Amy<br />