Hello, I am glad that you are available at this moment. :)<br /><br />This is my thesis proposal, and it has been delayed a lot due to my poor&nbsp;writing.&nbsp;<br /><br />I am currently doign advertising MA, and thesis is about a corporate health-promotion marketing.&nbsp;<br /><br />I am not confident about gramma, definite articles, singular and plural, and some expressions.&nbsp;<br /><br />I know that this proposal is length and 8 hrs is not quite enough to look into it closely, please take this seriously and improve it :)<br /><br />Thanks you again.<br /><br />Best,<br />Hanyoung