Hello,<br /><br />Your message indicated only what you did not want me to edit, not what you did. Therefore, I began with Chapter 1 and edited/reedited quite a bit before I realized I was definitely going to be editing more words than you indicated. Therefore, I looked through Patti's msgs and finally found one that indicated that you only wanted the last two chapters edited, at which point I addressed those. However, I suggest that you take a look at the changes in the earlier parts as well (there are also some changes I had to make throughout as the result of a global format change I made).<br /><br />If you need more editing, please copy, paste, and send only the material that you would like to have edited.<br /><br />As always, ratings are much appreciated.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc