Hi, Mohammed:<br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document, and I hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />I agree completely with your estimation of Apple products: functionally beautiful!<br /><br />Although I was careful not to change the content of your document, please review it carefully, and run spell-check using your dictionary language.<br /><br />You did the heavy lifting with the ideas. Thanks. I simply fussed and finessed.<br /><br />Best wishes - George (TypeRighter)<br />I am usually available for editing between 6:00 am and 10:30 pm (EST). If my status is set to 'unavailable', you can still reach me via Editor World.<br /><br />