Hi, Chad,<br /><br />I got your message but not til late, and I've been out all day. I'm on vacation visiting my kids whom I only see once a year. Sorry for the delay.<br /><br />I think that maybe I am not the best choice for you, as I do not seem to be giving you what you are looking for. I think the chapter is scary and suspenseful, but it is hard to tell without the context of the chapters that come before. Plus, the reader knows that the Ark is what they are looking for, so that won't be a surprise--the action that leads up to it and the relief they feel will have the necessary impact if we see the sacrifices they've made to get there, and this happens in back story and preceding chapters.<br />&nbsp;<br />I am happy to try, but I will not be able to get to it until I get home next week.&nbsp;<br /><br />Thank you.<br /><br />Laura