Dear, textpro<br />Hello, this is my personal statement for applying for the UC graduate programs.<br />They want me to describe my personal history such as&nbsp;past achievements, contributions, and my major(communication).<br />I am not sure this is a right form of the personal statement, so I would really appreciate it if you give me a direction or any valuable advice to make this statement more persuasive and perfect.<br /><br />I also hope you to check the overall flow of the sentence structure and grammar mistakes. And I welcome to fix or add some words to look my statement more concise and clear. <br /><br />I worked with another editor in this website, but I did not fully satisfy with the work. So, I really hope you are my right choice to overcome the applying proceduer. <br /><br />Thank you so much for your efforts.<br /><br />Best regards, <br />Aiden<br /><br /><br /><br />