I'm sorry not to have been available for the 8 hour edit. I'm in North Carolina (EST) and I typically log in at 8:00 a.m. and continue until I can log off in the evening. I had a 2-hour meeting this morning, which is why I haven't sent the text sooner.<br /><br />In the future, please send me an&nbsp;email and I'll try to meet your deadlines.<br /><br />The edits here are extensive. I changed the layout of the stories so that they were clearer, sort of like in a book (dialogue separated from the background of the story).<br /><br />Thank you.