Urna,<br />&nbsp; Thanks for the feedback and compliments.<br />&nbsp; As to your additional questions:<br />
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<li>I have many years' experience with editing several different types of writing, from light-hearted magazine articles all the way to technical documents and reports. &nbsp;I'd describe my own style as eclectic since I've worked with so many different approaches.</li>
<li>Yes, I can help you with development and content editing.</li>
<li>I can assist you with determining whether what you have written is funny or interesting, but since I'm not part of your target audience, I may not be the best source of assessment. &nbsp;As far as marketability is concerned, I can provide some suggestions,but you may want to try it out on a friend who is part of your market.</li>
<li>I generally prefer to take some time with a piece, since I am fairly detail-oriented; however, I also perform well under pressure when needed. &nbsp;You'll note that EditorWorld specifies 7+ days as the turnaround time for anything over 34K words long.</li>
<li>My hobbies include music (conducting, singing, recording, and playlist development), stamp collecting, gardening, hiking, and photography. &nbsp;I'm sorry, but EditorWorld doesn't let us divulge our real names - but you may call me Bob.</li>
<li>I prefer to avoid overuse of profanity since I think it can be crude and disrespectful to some potential readers, and can reflect poorly on the author's ability to find and use more appropriate language. &nbsp;You can still be colorful without usng lots of profanity. &nbsp;And yes, I'll be happy to try to help you find the right balance. &nbsp;As you remember from the first round, I've provided alternatives where I think your original choices might be to strong.</li>
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&nbsp; I can't wait to see your next few chapters.<br /><br />Sincerely,<br />Bob<br />
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