As in the past, please continue to use your expertise experience in editing my blog. &nbsp;In paragraph 4, the 3rd sentence, "When my stories.....", is very long. &nbsp;Per your judgement, it may need to be broken into 2 sentences or use different punctuation within the sentence?<br /><br />Thanks.<br /><br />Darlene Green<br />"The Storytelling Queen"&nbsp;