Hi Noga,<br /><br />Yes, just light editing. Mostly I cleaned up the punctuation, to improve readability, tweaked a few other things, changed some formatting, and added a lot of comments/questions. Forgive me if I missed any of your instructions; sometimes it was hard to tell to what they referred. I really hate underline. How bout, in the italics, you put them in " ", and in the quoted passages, in single quotes? Up to you.<br /><br />I look forward to working on the rest of it. How much more is there? I have my availability turned off still, as I have to work on a 200+ pp novel now, so let me know when you want to send it.<br /><br />Best,<br /><br />Debra<br /><br />