Hello.<br />I have six questions.<br />I want to get feedback from you so that I can finish my application.<br />I answered your comment as below.<br />your comment (or Q) is<strong> bold.</strong><br />Please send me message again including your "right sentences."<br /><br /><br />1.Original: I will also concentrate on comparative East Asian cinemas, focusing on how people in this region of the world express their own cultures and <strong>which aspects affect other cultures.</strong><br />Your comment: <strong>Which aspects of their cultures</strong>?<br />My comment: Which factors affect others (other cultures)<br />=&gt;<br /><br />2. I <strong>specialized</strong> in electronic media and digital imaging.<br />Q:<strong> In your undergraduate studies?</strong><br />A: Yes. Major is electronics engineering, but I wrote it specifically.<br />=&gt;<br /><br />3.<strong> I will work to increase my English academic ability before the program starts.</strong><br />Q: <strong>How do you plan to do this?</strong><br />A: From English courses (eg. ESL)which the school provides<br />=&gt;<br /><br />4. At the same time, she is to be admired for the inner<strong> reserve</strong> she has developed in order to be successful.<br />Q: <strong>Do you mean &ldquo;perseverance&rdquo;? Or &ldquo;inner reserve of strength&rdquo;?</strong><br />A: I don&rsquo;t understand &lsquo;inner reserve of strength&rsquo;. I have to write &nbsp;&lsquo;inner reserve of strength" ?<br />=&gt;<br /><br />5. Since she <strong>returned</strong> from a successful work experience in the US, Chan has continued in her English classes throughout her career.<br />Q: <strong>Returned to where specifically?</strong><br />A: Came back to Korea<br />=&gt;<br /><br />6. <strong>Without</strong> these media products, there are lots of methods to enjoy media contents.<br />Q:<strong> Do you mean &ldquo;With these media products, media contents can be enjoyed in many ways&rdquo;?</strong><br />A: In addition to these products (Blu-ray player etc.) mentioned above, there are lots of methods to enjoy media contents.<br />=&gt;<br /><br />Thank you.