Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit these sections of your dissertation. My primary goal, in addition to correcting the grammatical and syntactic errors, was to reduce the pervasive repetition in the text. I was fairly, although not completely, ruthless in this respect, as it weakened the document profoundly. Thus, there are still places where I have made a comment suggesting that you delete a passage. You may be tempted to restore some of what I have deleted, but I urge you to resist.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc