Dear Sir/Madam,<br /><br />This is a vision document for building an electronic voting systrem. The professor told me that I need to rewrite and correct all of the writing I marked with a "red color". It's a lot and I totally understand. it will take effort. He suggested to use more formal writing to explain every step in a better and clear way, flow of my writing and also to use&nbsp;more formal&nbsp;vocabluraries. This is the first time, I contact you but I'll be working with you weekily in other assignments.&nbsp;<br />Hopefully you help me throw this.<br /><br />Thank you,<br />Naif