Hi, Ivan:<br /><br />This one reminds me of J.D. Salinger's <em>Catcher in the Rye, </em>where Holden Caulfield wonders where all the fish go in winter. It's amazing how simple stories have universal appeal. I couldn't improve your document by much, even after several read-throughs, because the narrator's voice is central to the storytelling, and the few edits I made had to do with paragraphing, itself a fine art. Still, this was a nice editing request to start the day with.<br /><br />Best wishes - George