Hi Hangsan:<br /><br />Please proofread both documents carefully. When you're not an expert, like me, it's easy to lose the meaning of a sentence when you change its structure.<br /><br /> Good luck with your application. If I had any influence with the admissions officer, you would be reading your accptance email as I write.<br /><br />Best wishes - George<br /><br /><br /><br /><br />