Here are the instructions:
<p><span style="font-size: 12pt;">ORGANIZATION</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: 12pt;">1.</span><span style="font-size: 12pt;">Is</span><span style="font-size: 12pt;"> the paper title interesting and does it describe the </span><span style="font-size: 12pt;"> contents of the paper?</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: 12pt;">2. Does the paper have a theme </span><span style="font-size: 12pt;">and</span><span style="font-size: 12pt;"> a clear thesis statement at the beginning of the paper and in the conclusion?</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: 12pt;">3. </span><span style="font-size: 12pt;">Is</span><span style="font-size: 12pt;"> the presentation logical?</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: 12pt;">4. Does the paper have an introduction? Is it effective in creating interest and drawing the reader into the topic?</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: 12pt;">5. Are the paragraphs well organized?</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: 12pt;">6. Are the transitions smooth?</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: 12pt;">WRITING</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: 12pt;">1. Is the writing clear?</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: 12pt;">2. Is the writing concise?</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: 12pt;">3. Is word use appropriate?</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: 12pt;">4. Are there any overly long or awkwardly phrased sentences?</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: 12pt;">5. Does the writing demonstrate enthusiasm?</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: 12pt;">SCHOLARSHIP</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: 12pt;">1. Is the paper documented sufficiently?</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: 12pt;">2. Are the author's conclusions logically derived from the sources?</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: 12pt;">3. Are the citations accurate? Does the paper use too many or too few quotations?</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: 12pt;">4. Is there a variety of types of sources, with an emphasis on primary sources?</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: 12pt;">MECHANICS</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: 12pt;">1. </span><span style="font-size: 12pt;">Is</span><span style="font-size: 12pt;"> the form of endnotes or footnotes correct?</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: 12pt;">2. Are the bibliography entries in proper form?</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: 12pt;">3. Are</span><span style="font-size: 12pt;"> there any spelling or typing errors?</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: 12pt;">4. Is the grammar correct?</span></p>
<br /><br />I am to write a twenty page page on Women in The Nonpartisan League. I think my main areas of concern are organization and clarity. I have been told that I over use the passive voice. Those are my biggest concerns. Chicago Manual of Style is used.