About Capricorn:<br /><br />Yes, I said it. But he didn't pay attention. In online dating it is quite impossible to actually see everything that's there, especially if both parties write a lot. When you are saying something, the other person might be&nbsp;answering something you said 4, 5 paragraphs before.<br /><br />The novel is reasonably organized and in sequence, but the original dialogues were not.<br /><br />I worked on this for more than a year.<br /><br />There are things that Alan said that I'm only seeing (and fully understanding) now, because for this English Edition I'm working simultaneously with the Portuguese version, which is the finalized novel, AND the original dialogues.<br /><br />That's why it is not a&nbsp;translation. I'm reworking the original text, &nbsp;which was in English. After your remark, I changed the title of the preface to "English Edition," instead of "American Edition."<br /><br />Best,