Hi Bryce,<br /><br />Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your packet. I'm not sure why you thought it was such a mess, as I didn't really find it so, although the layout was unappealing and inconsistent. Perhaps it is because the majority of my client base is ESL and I spend as much time translating as editing. I also am accustomed to working on highly technical academic papers in fields that range from robotics to neuroscience, the latter of which is at least familiar to me.<br /><br />If you feel it needs any more work, do let me know, as I would really like to help you get this job.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc