Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your very interesting paper. I have always loved this fascinating subject.<br /><br />The paper was organized improperly, so you will see that I have done a lot of cutting and pasting. However, it is in good shape now.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc