<p>Hi,<br /> <br /> I haven&rsquo;t received your response earlier. That&rsquo;s okay. Thank you for your suggestion. I will add it in the final copy. I will also acknowledge your full name in my book. <br /> <br /> I liked your editing. You did get into the skin of the writing and expressed yourself along with the author.</p>
<p>I did notice some issues:<br /> <br /> 1. Overall the contents must be presented in present tense except when it is otherwise. For example, eating food or satiating our taste receptors is not something that brings us eternal happiness. This is a universal truth. It would be better to present it in simple present tense.&nbsp;<br /> <br /> 2. There were some inconsistencies with the grammar.<br /> <br /> 3. I did not notice any comment from you anywhere in the edited text. I understand each editor has a unique style. However, it would be better if you add some comments as you edit the text so that the author can consider them. The editor is in a way a reader so it would be nice if you add your comments (positive, negative or suggestions). Of course, it is up to the author to consider or reject those comments or suggestion but comments are always welcome. I can&rsquo;t imagine any author not appreciating the editor&rsquo;s comments.<br /> <br /> I have corrected issues 1 and 2. So it is okay.<br /> <br /> "You and me" or "you and I"? Which one is&nbsp;grammatically correct? Isn&rsquo;t it &ldquo;you and I&rdquo;?<br /> <br /> Overall I liked your editing. It is my humble understanding that a little more detailed attention on the grammar and punctuation would make you a best editor. &nbsp;&nbsp;</p>
<p>Thank you</p>
<p>Sajith Buvi</p>