<p>Hi there,<br />Thanks so much for choosing me to be your editor today.<br /><br />Your paper is well-written and I think your suggestion of using VR technology sounds really fascinating and like a wonderful idea.<br /><br />Most of my editing was grammatical, including changes of tone, tense shift, and consistency. I reworded and added some sentences for context and clarification. I think your organization as a whole is fine as it is.&nbsp;<br /><br />Overall, I think your paper is well-written and conceptualized. I expect you to get a nice grade, assuming it matches up to the prompt!<br /><br />Please keep me in mind for any future editing needs.<br /><br />Cordially,<br />Ryan</p>