Hi, Rachel:<br /><br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document and hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />I apologize but, for some reason, I lost the track&nbsp;of the edits. You can, of course, easily compare the edited version with the original using split screen.<br /><br />You didi an excellent job, though! All I had to do was polish.<br />&nbsp;<br />MS Word includes track changes by default. Before sharing this document, please consider running Document Inspector. To do this, click File/Info/Check For Issues/Inspect Document on the Microsoft Word menu bar.<br /><br />Please proofread your edited document carefully. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World. I'll get back to you as soon as I can.&nbsp;<br /><br />Best wishes - George (TypeRighter)