Hi,&nbsp;Sunkeun:<br /><br />I've uploaded your edited document, and I hope you find the suggestions helpful.<br /><br />I cut the length to one page, the preferred length for a statement of purpose (unless otherwise specified.) I understand why you want to include some of your background&nbsp;- it's impressive - but it's covered well in your CV. What they're looking for is &nbsp;a sense of commitment and passion, which I think the statement of purpose expresses well, largely because of your experience and credentials. I certainly didn't want to interrupt the flow.<br /><br />Best wishes - George