Good morning,<br />Your passage is attached with my redlined edits. I took quite a bit of liberty in my edits. But your feelings resonated with me and, of course, you are free to reject any edits you don't like. I felt like what was missing was a catalyst for your change of feelings, so I made one up. Or, perhaps you actually did see a "for sale" sign, but only your subconscious registered it, and that's what brought the change in feelings without you consciously being aware of it. At any rate, what a pleasure this was! I truly enjoyed it! I hope you will send more work my way. Let me know if you have any troubles with the document. Thank you, and have a great day!