Good morning, Mai:<br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document and hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />Please proofread carefully. Editors are not infallible, especially yours truly.<br /><br />Best wishes - George<br /><br />I am usually available for editing between 6:00 am and 10:30 pm. If my status is set to unavailable, you can still send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />Don't forget:&nbsp;Microsoft Word displays tracked changes and comments by default. <br /><br />To review the edited document without showing tracked changes, click Review on the Microsoft Word menu bar. Then select Final: Show Markup and click the dropdown arrow. Choose Final. To show tracked changes again, click Final: Show Markup.<br /><br />Best wishes - George