Hello again,

Thanks for your edits, comments and critique of The Motivational Speaker (title is back).  I have included your edits.  Your comment about leap of faith, is well taken.  Ill work on another angle.  I enjoyed your comment about the guys probably not aware of the Gay Nineties.  Ill find a new lead into the hippie-looking sign-lady.  Ill work on the Charlie Chaplin angle and will wind down the story to a more natural conclusion (I hope).  I plan to have a revised version to you by early next.  Thanks,
Dan