<p>Hi there,<br />Thanks so much for allowing me to edit for you today.<br /><br />Things I noticed:</p>
<p>*Sometimes you used pre-service and sometimes you used preservice. I don't think either is exactly wrong or right, but I made sure you stayed consistent.<br />*I changed and added a number of articles for clarity.<br />*Also maintained tense within the paper, and got rid of the tense shifts throughout.<br />*Subject-verb agreement was maintained.<br /><br />Overall this is well-researched and documented. You make many great points and your study sounds valuable.<br /><br />My only last suggestion before you submit your paper would be to read this out loud. Find any sentences that sound awkward to you and reconsider. And note if you repeat any concepts too many times for your liking.<br /><br />Great job over all. Have a great week ahead.<br /><br />Ryan</p>