Hi there!<br /><br />Thanks for sending this over for me to edit! All suggestions can be viewed in Track Changes. The bulk of the writing was clear enough; the main things I suggested involved deleting a few repetitive words and a few other small things like that. On the whole the edits weren't too major.<br /><br />If you have any questions or concerns please don't hesitate to let me know!<br /><br />Cheers,<br />EM