<p class="p1"><b>Hi Jon. Thank you for the opportunity to edit your work. Please let me know if there are any issues, and I will address them asap.<br /><br />I did my best to maintain the short sentences structure - though it some cases, I think it works better by combining sentences and to avoid using conjunctions to start so many of your sentences, since it will start to read like you are running out of breath.&nbsp;<br /><br />I am always willing to address concerns, so if you have any doubts, thoughts, etc, please get back to me, and I will review.&nbsp;<br /><br />You have several links in the copy, which are fine. I italicized those, but it would be best to change the color of the type, so it looks like something to click on, as opposed to using underlines or italics.&nbsp;<br /><br />let me know what you think. Thanks!<br /></b></p>