Dear editor,<br /><br />First of all, thank you for your help. This is an academic writing and I do not want any of the contents to be altered.<br />I just want it to be grammatically error-proof. and sound okay&nbsp;overall, because I cannot make it sound streamlined since English is my second language.<br /><br />In short, please make it sound coherent, okay, and non-awkward.<br /><br />Thank you so much!