Hello, my sweetiepie,&nbsp;<br /><br />How have you been? IMPORTANT: I formatted everything in book form and it's ready to go. However, I noticed things you may have missed and the last couple of chapters, maybe 5 or 6, I'm unsure, I think you were probably tired because it was a bit of confusing and not edited like the previous chapters. Just go over the last 5 or 6 chapters and you'll see what I mean. I do understand when one is tired. It happens to me. &nbsp;I removed some of the semicolons. For fiction, the rule is they don't want too many colons and semicolons. &nbsp;I separated the sentences. Was that okay? &nbsp;&nbsp;<br /> <br />Anyway, I took your advice on adding the sex scene at the end. I did some changing and will be sending the last two chapters over tonight. &nbsp;<br /><br />Also, if you could leave a review of my book on Amazon about the story and the characters under a pet name, perhaps, I'd appreciate it.<br /><br />In March, I'll be sending over the first couple of chapters in Book 2. Don't forget, sweetie. Thank you so much, Laura. You're the best.&nbsp;