Hi there,

I just added that because he was such an evil person and I thought that putting that in made an interesting contrast, showing another side of his personality. If you don't like it, that's fine.

I'm glad you were happy with the other editing and I definitely encourage you to self-publish. We generally write for ourselves and often it doesn't matter how many people read it. Getting pleasure from writing it and knowing that others, no matter how many, will appreciate it are the things that count.

Best Regards and keep writing!

Nyanidoc