Hi, Ivan:<br /><br />Having read your message, carefully this time, I see you just want to know about a particular section. Here's what I wrote as a comment.<br /><br />
<p>I like the negativity part because it suggests she&rsquo;s taking charge of her life, but I think it&rsquo;s better to tone down the &lsquo;negative people&rsquo;. It sounds too much like she blames others. This way we dampen the criticism a bit. <br /><br />I think I&rsquo;ve slightly improved the flow about going to school etc. I agree that it&rsquo;s not the greatest philosophical reflection, but it&rsquo;s probably the best any of us mere mortals can give. <br /><br />I sort of like the punchier end. It sounds as if she really likes being thought of as three years younger. We should take the compliments we&rsquo;re offered.&nbsp;<br /><br /><br />Best wishes - George</p>
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