Hello,<br /><br />The file has been copied and pasted from this page of my website: <a href="http://highperformanceheatingandairconditioning.com/educational-essays/show-me-the-money/">http://highperformanceheatingandairconditioning.com/educational-essays/show-me-the-money/<br /></a>It looks like the Word file has retained the webpage's formatting with a few minor exceptions. My version of Word dates back to 2003. If I have to update it I will.<br /><br />Correcting awkward and hard to read language is my primary goal. I like writing that flows. I've watched a very smart friend of mine read my writing. It's mostly smooth sailing and then she'll suddenly have to stop and reread something a few times to understand what I'm saying. I'd like to remove most of those proverbial speed bumps.<br /><br />Having said that, I'm willfully informal in certain places and hope to stay that way. The most obvious example would be the third paragraph of the section titled "High prices aren't the real problem." I'm going to cling stubbornly to those fragments. :)<br /><br />If there was a 7 or 10 day turnaround option, I'd be fine with that. I'm in no hurry. That's not to suggest I want to pay less. In fact, I'm surprised at how low the price is. (This is my first time using this type of service.) That is to suggest that if you happen to be busy you don't need to work late on my account.<br /><br />Thanks so much. I look forward to your notes and can't wait to get my ego crushed. ;)<br /><br />John