Hi again!<br /><br />Thanks for this second document. As you requested I've gone through and suggested deletions and some rephrasing to make the memo more concise - and I have it down to 745 words if you accept the edits I proposed. All meanings are the same; I have just switched some word orders and done some basic trimming.<br /><br />I hope this is satisfactory!<br /><br />Cheers,<br />EM