Dan,<br /><br />Would be glad to get the broader context via email. As a standalone piece, it's a short-short story (there is actually a book or books of these short-shorts).<br /><br />I took on the rant as a challenge to keep it as one sentence and, if it fits your gonzo character, then let him&nbsp;go on a bit more.&nbsp;<br /><br />Send me your thoughts and we'll&nbsp;put the pieces together as you see them (I'll just be looking over your shoulder and making suggestions).<br /><br />Jackson