I corrected the grammar, spelling, and punctuation. I left the British spellings ("centre" and "symbolise" instead of the American "center" and "symbolize"), but used a more American style of punctuation (with commas and the like inside of the quotation marks instead of outside of them). I tried not to alter your voice too much, but I did take out a couple redundant phrasings for the sake of clarity. Please let me know if you have any questions or would like me to look over this again or explain anything.<br /><br />Best,<br />Tori