Hi Andrew.<br /><br />Here is the prologue. I'm working on chapter 1 but may not finish it today, so thought I'd give you a head start.<br />It flows very nicely and I'm looking forward to the stories. I promise not to change your style, but a couple of notes in that regard: "as" and "because" are not interchangeable grammatically, so I changed it in several places. If you don't mind being ungrmmatical, I can change it back. Also, you have to decide between&nbsp;'whilst' and 'while'.<br /><br />Let me know what you think about the editing (and what your wife thinks, if you're letting her read it).<br /><br />Back in a day or maybe two.<br /><br />Regards,<br />Arnie