Hello!<br /><br />This is the marketing blurb for a forthcoming book. This document has the 20, 50 and 150 word version.<br /><br />I need the highlighted text to be catchy and non-jargonistic, but after staring at it for so long, need an outside perspective. Could you help me smooth this down a bit?<br /><br />With thanks,<br /><br />Thomas