Hi,&nbsp;Nurah Alamro:<br /><br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document and hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />This is a very nice personal reflection, and I hope I have helped. Just a couple of minor points. If you want to keep it to two pages, you can either select all and reduce the font size by one point or remove&nbsp;the second to last paragraph. I didn't want to delete it myself in case it's important. The only other point is that, after your recommendation by the minister, I added&nbsp;advisor to the minister of health. I thought you might have omitted it. If the mistake was mine, just delete it.<br /><br />Please proofread carefully. I tried not to change your meaning but it happens.&nbsp;<br /><br />MS Word includes tracked changes by default. Before sharing this document, please consider running Document Inspector. To do this, click File/Info/Check For Issues/Inspect Document on the Microsoft Word menu bar.<br /><br />When you open a document that contains tracked changes, the document appears in the Final Showing Markup view to show that the document contains tracked changes. To review the edited document without showing tracked changes, click Review on the Microsoft Word menu bar. Then select Final: Show Markup and click the drop-down arrow. Choose Final. To show tracked changes again, click Final: Show Markup.<br /><br />Good luck with your career. You clearly deserve every chance for success.<br /><br />Best wishes - TypeRighter (aka George)<br />I am usually available for editing between 6:00 am and 10:30 pm. If my status is set to unavailable, you can still send a message to me via Editor World.