I fixed the grammar, and switched some of the wording around to make some points clearer. I also added some clarifying sentences in that I believe stay with your voice and your message, but please look over them to make sure.<br /><br />I made sure the formatting for the chapter headings is the same throughout. Your table of contents was missing a chapter, and I got it added back in. The only thing that might be weird about that is that it won't automatically update the page numbers for 17, 18, and the conclusion if you update the draft further (font, spacing, etc.)<br /><br />Let me know if you have any questions.&nbsp;<br /><br />Thank you for letting me edit&nbsp;your work.