Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your paper.<br /><br />I did not cut out the 100 +/- words you need to eliminate--not counting refs--as I didn't really see where material could be deleted--except for preface, as noted. That's 70+ words.<br /><br />Many refs in the paper were not in the refs section.<br /><br />Something is very wrong with your figure and I cannot fix it.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc