Thank you so much for editing my paper so quickly. Yes, I will definitely rate your work.<br /><br />Can you please review my paper a last time and give me feedback if you have any.&nbsp;Please pay particular attention to the sentences highlighted in yellow and my references--although I would hope you would read all the paper :)<br /><br />I am also attaching a one and half page on three authors that my committee chair asked me to mention them in my paper. This is what I tried to do in my highlighted sentences (these are the only sentences I added today, besides incorporating your comments and suggestions). Please feel free to read this one page and half and let me know if you think I should not mention it or if I should mention it somewhere else in the paper. Please feel free to edit or remove sentences in the highlited sections. Also, please feel free to change or move things around. Right now, I am not confident of the sentences I added, especially where I placed them in the paper. Also, please let me know about my references list.<br />Please let me know. Every critique will be welcome, any edit will be very much appreciated.<br />I have to submit the paper tomorrow at 2pm. Again, thank you so much for editing my paper. I am sure this will be the first of many others to come.