Hi, Dominic:<br /><br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document and hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />The document is just shy of 10 pages. I don't know&nbsp;enough about the novel to flesh it out further, but if you increase the font from 12 to 13, or even 12.5, that&nbsp;should do it.<br /><br />If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br /><br />Best wishes - George