Hi there,<br />Thanks for another opportunity to edit for you.<br /><br />My edits today were primarily regarding the following:<br />*Conciseness: When I write I tend to be too wordy, with long sentences that are a bit flowy and nice to read, but not necessarily the best for professional or academic purposes. With this in mind, I think you do a bit of this too, so I worked to shorten some sentences and remove unnecessary 'fluff' words.<br />*Article usage: Some changes and additions on these.<br />*Tense shifts: I worked to ensure the paper stays in one tense, instead of switching between past and present, and back and forth.<br />*Verb agreement: There were some minor disagreements of verbs and subject, which are now fixed.<br /><br />As always, your research is strong and you make very valid, well thought-out arguments. Great job!<br /><br />Thanks again and hope to edit more of your work soon!<br /><br />Ryan