Hi, Ivan:<br /><br />This one <em>was</em> a challenge. I wanted to slow the rhythm&nbsp;down a bit&nbsp;because it's clearly an important memory, and the reader&nbsp;needs time to take it in. Memories like this make us who we are. I hope I solved the "search the sheets and blankets" problem. Sometimes a simple verb does the heavy lifting, and it isn't always necessary to say why an action is undertaken. Anyway, I know you know how to accept or reject edits using track changes.<br /><br />Very nice writing!<br /><br />Best wishes - George