Good morning,<br />What an insightful piece of research, with so much relevance to the current world of online news.<br /><br />There was some confusion for me - which is mentioned in the document notes - mostly occurring from technical jargon I may not be familiar with. I would encourage you to try reading the paper out loud, as it does feel a bit repetitive at times.<br /><br />With that said, my changes were mostly for tense, punctuation, tone, and rearranging word order for clarity and ease of reading. You have a really fascinating subject here and are clearly on the right track!<br /><br />Great job and have a great week ahead. Thanks again for choosing me!<br /><br />Ryan