<p>Hi Jody:</p>
<p>I believe I enjoyed reading your book more this time than I did last time. It really is an inspiring read!</p>
<p>A few notes:</p>
<p>I carefully reviewed the text and I believe there are no typos, but please proofread carefully. I added an automatic table of contents, replacing the manual one. Generally, this is a good idea because any changes you make in future will automatically be updated in the TOC. All you have to do is close the document and open it again for the TOC to change. Since this book is to be published, even a small change in font size can throw the page numbering off, and publishers have been known to change things, but this isn&rsquo;t a problem with an automatic table of contents.</p>
<p>I created a couple of tables for your lists to make the page more attractive. I have also suggested in a comment that if you have your signature saved as a jpeg we could insert it into your document where appropriate. It would add a nice personal touch. For now, I&rsquo;ve just used a script font to make your signature look as if it was written.</p>
<p>Most of the other changes are minor. Happily, we did most of the work the last time and the text needed only light editing this time. I would recommend that you review it with track changes on so that you can see the edits. There aren&rsquo;t many, and none is critical.</p>
<p>I&rsquo;ll probably think of some other things after sending this message to you, but they should be evident as you look over your document. If you have any questions or need any additional changes please send a message to me via Editor World and I&rsquo;ll reply as soon as possible. We can do this without further charge. Let's make it perfect!&nbsp;</p>
<p>What struck me most about your book is your infectious enthusiasm. I&rsquo;m sure your clients will benefit from your can-do approach. It really is a valuable addition to the library of self-help books. Such is your influence, I might even forego the Mars bar I was looking forward to tonight! Don't bet on it. 'Weakness' is my middle name.<br /><br />I checked your web links and converted them to hyperlinks for eBook publication. &nbsp;I can&rsquo;t believe that you&rsquo;re in your 50s. You look 30 and not unlike JK Rowling. As for me, I&rsquo;m in my 60s and my son says I look 90! He's now my former son. Luckily, I have a kinder, gentler daughter.&nbsp;</p>
<p>Bye for now - George</p>