Nice job, Dominic!<br /><br />You marshalled&nbsp;your evidence and arguments really well, which made my job easier, and I'm too lazy to like hard work. I know you know the routine about track changes but here's reminder:<br /><br /><br />When you open a document containing tracked changes, it appears in the Final Show Markup view. To see the document without markups, do the following:<br />For PCs, on the Microsoft Word (2010) menu bar, click Review. Then select Final: Show Markup (All Markup) and click the drop-down arrow. Choose Final.<br />For Word 2013, click Review, then from the All Markup drop-down box, select No Markup.<br />For Macs, on the Review tab, under Tracking, click Track Changes to turn on or off. Choose No Markup from the drop-down menu in Show Markup.<br /><br />I was careful not to change the content of your document but please proofread carefully. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />By the way:&nbsp;MS Word includes tracked changes by default. Before sharing this document, please consider running Inspect Document. To do this, click File/Info/Check for Issues/Inspect Document on the Microsoft Word menu bar.<br /><br />Best wishes - George<br /><br />I am usually available for editing between 6:00 am and 10:30 pm (EST). If my status says 'unavailable', you can still reach me via Editor World.<br /><br /><br /><br />&nbsp;<br />&nbsp;