1.&nbsp; Your revision seems good. <br />2.&nbsp; As a caption, it sounds fine.&nbsp; <br />3.&nbsp; Suggest:&nbsp; The PI plans to have&nbsp;a 3-week summer session&nbsp;for on-site teacher research each year, for 2 years. <br />4.&nbsp; Suggest:&nbsp; "We will conduct surveys after workshops&nbsp;and&nbsp;after public lectures, and a tour of the PI's laboratory will be offered to policy makers and manufacturers."<br />5.&nbsp; Suggest:&nbsp; "Motivation of individuals to learn more in this field."&nbsp; This is more succinct,&nbsp;fits the expression of the other points in this list&nbsp;and you don't need the rest of it - the readers already know what field you're talking about.&nbsp;