<p class="p1">I edited the first page as a sample, and will provide a full edit should you decide to hire me as your editor. There are a few overarching issues that you should pay attention to whether or not you hire me as an editor, though. The first issue I'm seeing is a lack of clarity with your terms. Specifically, "patient and client" are not clearly presented in the first sentence as being synonymous, and the rest of the document therefore rests on uncertain terms. Abbreviations (namely IPE) should also not be used at the beginning of a sentence, and should only be used to stand for that which they are defined to mean in their first use (e.g., "SP" standing for "speech pathology" and not "speech pathologist"). There are also a few issues with subject-verb agreement, and an overarching problem with misuse of possessives. Perhaps the biggest issue is that I'm not seeing much of an argument being made. You cite several sources but give hardly any explanation of or elaboration on these citations.</p>