Hello!<br /><br />First of all, thank you so much!<br />Translated&nbsp;at the request of my recommender. the sentences sound&nbsp;either too simplistic or copy-and-pasted.<br /><br />My requests are:<br />1. Could you please change it to&nbsp;sound <strong>as "beautiful" and "neat" as possible</strong>?<br />2. Please <strong>suggest anything</strong> <strong>with real examples</strong>.<br />3. Could you please make it <strong>as succinct as possible</strong>? If you deem anything needless, you can erase it without thinking twice.<br />4. <strong>Any additional modification</strong> is always welcome. I trust your editing skills. Please make it sound powerful and professional<br /><br />Thank you! I deeply appreciate your help.<br /><br />Very sincerely,<br />Hangsan Ahn