Hello:

I just noticed that you asked me to do another editing job--thank you! But I also noticed that you gave me four, not five, stars for the last job. Can you tell me what you found lacking in the first job? It is very important to me to understand this, not only because it affects my ranking, but also because it will help me hone my efforts for the job you just sent. If you could please let me know, I would greatly appreciate it. 

Thanks again,
EditPro