Please submit the edited paper by Thursday 2pm (Eastern Daylight Time), which is in 2days 2hours. <br /><br />Please feel free to remove or change any odd/akward sentence. Also please feel free to remove or add any section you think is in/appropriate for the paper. Please make this paper ready to be published. Feel free to do whatever you want with the paper, so it becomes a high quality paper. <br />Add and remove anything you wish.<br /><br />Thank you much for working on my paper