Good afternoon,<br />Thanks so much for selecting me to edit your assignment.<br /><br />Your research is well done and your points are intelligently thought out. I made some grammatical edits as well as a few comments.<br /><br />For the first 4/5 or so you have great info and great insight. At the end, though, I would encourage you to take the next step. By that I mean, you present great information about women-owned companies, but don't really tell the reader what that all means. I would like to see you explain a bit more about the impact of those facts.<br /><br />Otherwise, great job! Thanks again for selecting me and if you ever have any more editing needs please keep me in mind.<br /><br />Ryan