Helen,<br /><br />I offer my&nbsp;sincerest apologies for the slight delay in getting this sample back to you.<br /><br />While looking over this sample, I only found very minor mistakes in grammar and word choice. I have provided my edits and comments in the attached document. Should you have questions, please let me know.<br /><br />I hope that you will be happy with my sample and will consider using my services for any future projects. Thank you very much for requesting this sample.<br /><br /><br />Best,<br />Mackenzie