Hello, TextPro :)&nbsp;<br />Thank you very much for your thorough proofreading.&nbsp;<br />Unfortunately, I couldn't reflect your advice and had to submit older version before I got this from you.&nbsp;<br />But I will peruse it and I am sure it would be helpful a lot for improving my writing skill.<br />Thank you so much again.&nbsp;<br />I hope I can get help from you again.&nbsp;<br /><br />Ina