Hi:<br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document and hope that you find the suggestions helpful.<br /><br />Although they're short, yours are the most interesting submissions I receive. Thanks.<br /><br />Best wishes - TypeRighter (aka George)<br /><br />I am usually available for editing between 6:00 am and 10:30 pm. If my status is set to unavailable, you can still send a message to me via Editor World.