Hi Arnie,<br />First blush, I am very comfortable with your editing style...note..Mr. Patraquin was mistyped in editing...Your comments are clear, and give me the right sort of direction for cleaning up and improving . That is what I am looking for. My skill is in storytelling, my grammar is often weak...but...I take critisism in stride, so do not be shy, I want this story to sing.<br />Best,<br />Andrew