Hi,<br /><br />I am from India.<br />This is regarding my statement of purpose for graduate program admission in Computer science (in USA).<br /><br />I have only the starting paragraph and the ending paragraph of my statement of purpose given to you for editing.<br />I sincerely request you to make the content more inspiring/strong/motivating and also sincere at the same time. (Also, grammatical errors can be corrected)<br /><br />Thanks a lot,<br /><br />Prashanth<br /><br />