Please make sure this article (submitting for an academic journal) follows APA style and check language (e.g., sentence construction and word choice), grammar, consistency, terminology, and format. One of reviewer&rsquo;s feedback to this paper is this &ldquo;Though the much of the paper is very readable &ndash; there are sections that need to be edited for the grammar and proper English.&rdquo; Unfortunately, I do not have detail feedback on this comment. Also, any contradictions or confusions you can point out in the text would be greatly appreciated. Thank you.