Hello,<br /><br />Here is your edited essay. I made a lot of changes structurally, and I like to offer the client the opportunity for a second edit when this is the case. I also want to check with you on whether you are using British or US English (if the former, I need to change some edits).&nbsp;<br /><br />Please feel free to reject any changes, make additions based on suggestions, and ask any questions, and then send the doc back to me through the sample edit feature so you don't get charged.<br /><br />Thank you!<br /><br />Laura Kenney