Hello, Heidi,<br /><br />Enclosed please find your one-page revised doc. There were, as you know, many previous revisions, and this made the text difficult to deal with, so I sort of started over--I accepted all your previous changes and then began the edit. I restructured the essay and removed what I thought might be superfluous to keep the doc to one page. Finally, I adjusted the margins to contain all the text. Please know that if you make changes or move paragraphs, the text might bounce out of the margins--Word gets a little wonky after you make repeated changed and space additions. If you read through it and find there are changes you'd like to make, add comments, and then send the doc back to me as an attachment to this email--that way you won't get charged--and I will make them and make sure the margins stay intact.<br /><br />Feel free to let me know if you have any other questions, and the best of luck to you in becoming a Citation Captain.<br /><br />Laura&nbsp;<br /><br /><br />