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<li>&nbsp;Ryan,</li>
<li>Thank you for my sample query letter. I liked your edits and loved your comments. I noticed you are a magaine editor. I love writing book reviews and articles for magazines. Are you familiar with the format for book reviews? I am glad you are good with writing/editing press release, this is another format I want to master. Will you be willing to work ith me on format, style and grammar for these types of documents?</li>
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<li>I now have another piece, a devotional fo Advent. Please edit and provide feedback.</li>
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<li>Please, let me know if my piece satisfies the assignment.</li>
<li>Assignment: 1. Begin with a Scripture that has meaning for you. The Focus is Advent, a time of preparing ourselves to receive Christ into our lives today.2. The scripture will be written followed by your comments and interpretation, or a story that illustrates the verse. 3.Add a short prayer that lifts up the meaning you have found in the chosen verse and 4. Conclude by a &ldquo;A thought of our day&rdquo; that distills all of the above.</li>
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Thank you,<br />Diane