Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit (this section of) your engaging novel. Now that I'm hooked, I certainly hope you'll send me the remainder!<br /><br />As this is the first time I have edited for you, I would like to recommend that you click on the review tab and then on the window to the right of 'balloons' that has a drop-down menu that allows you to view the ms. in various forms. Select final and read it through to see what you think. You may switch back and forth at any time while you're reading, but if you try to read it in 'Final showing markup,' you'll go blind or crazy, or both :)<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc