<p class="p1"><b>Thank you for the opportunity to edit your work. Please let me know if there are any issues, and I will address them asap.<br /></b><br /><br />The ony real comment I have for you is that you might want to use fewer words to get your meaning across. Take note of how I changed your intro sentences to achieve brevity.<br /><br />I edited the first paragraph of this document, plus a few sentences of the next paragraph, which should give you an idea of the editing approach I would take.&nbsp;<br /><br />Thanks!</p>