Hi,<br /><br />Thanks for editing my document. I appreciate the changes you made and I am happy with the overall quality. Just a couple of things:<br /><br />1- You inserted "Dubai" instead of Baghdad.<br /><br />2- In the first paragraph "as well as the threat posed by the religion ideology", is it better to say religion instead of religious?<br /><br />3- I am not sure if we can use two ajdectives at once like in the first paragrah "&nbsp;aggressive unrest"... Would it be more succinct and logical to keep only "unrest" in this case?<br /><br /><br />Thank you for your feedback.<br />Miaad<br /><br /><br />