Dear Laura,<br /><br />Thank you very much for your quick work and very useful suggestions. I have some questions.<br /><br />You suggest to modify the sentence, &ldquo;Controlling the shear flow of molten plastic to give enhanced properties to the certain areas of products&rdquo; to &ldquo;Controlling the shear flow of molten plastic to enhance the properties of certain products.&rdquo;<br /><br />This technology utilizes shear flow, which is normally unable to control in favor, so that the certain, intended portion of a product can have a particular property. So the technology is not intended to improve a whole product, but a certain target portion of a product. If you say &ldquo;enhance the properties of certain products,&rdquo; then an important essence of this technology may not be conveyed properly.<br /><br />What do you think?<br /><br />You suggest to take out &ldquo;Potential of&rdquo; from the sentence, &ldquo;Potential of creating a whole new category of injection moulding technology.&rdquo; There is a technology Nisshin Industrial Ltd. has, however, such technology (of utilizing shear flow) is not limited to a certain product. It can even go beyond the conventional injection moulding technology to establish a whole new category. So they are talking about &ldquo;potential.&rdquo; Could you give me a suggestion for the right expression?<br /><br />Also, please refer to the "hidden texts.docx" attached. It contains all the texts hidden under overlapped texts and objects. Because I use a lot of animation, some texts are hidden under some objects. Those hidden texts are, of course, clearly displayed as the animation progress.<br /><br />Thank you for your help!<br /><br />Yas