Hello Yvette. <br /><br />I'm sorry I didn't get this done last night but I had computer problems. Up and running now.<br /><br />I'd be happy to work on your blogs and have edited your sample. There really aren't as much changes as it looks; most are style corrections, i.e., single space after a period.<br /><br />Overall, your writing is quite good and has the conversational feel of a blog.<br /><br /><br />