<p>Guide: The Personal Statement is a statement about the effects of your life experiences, such as volunteer work, leadership activities, cultural and educational background, on your decision to pursue a graduate degree. It is limited to 500 words.<br /><br />I need some help in proofreading and change my awkward sentences to nice and concise sentences.<br />You could delete or change sentences that does not fit&nbsp;personal statement.<br />Also, I want the final letter meet the word limit (500).<br />Thank you very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,</p>