Dear editor,<br /><br />thank you so much for getting back the sample to me. I'm happy with most of the revisions, and I would like to send you my two thesis chapters for editing. Since I don't need any formatting or referencing style check, may I get a discount rate for my 17,000 words chapters? <br /><br />If you're happy with helping me edit my chapters, I would like to ask you pay special attention to the following issues, based on my supervisors' feedback on my writing. I really hope with your help, I can improve the writing.<br /><br />1. please pay attention to any repition of my writing since this is a big problem identified by my supervisors.<br /><br />2. please help me look at the tense I used in the two chapters. They are finding chapters, so the interview and survey actually happened two years ago. <br /><br />3. my third concern is about the quotation. I really appreciate your editing the quotation in the sample since some of them are translated from Chinese, and others are actually transcribed by research assistants. I think there will be some grammar mistakes in the quotations. It's good that you can help me check them.<br /><br />4. the final one is about the heading and sub-heading. if you find any errors with the section heading, your advices are more any welcome.<br /><br />Looking forward to your reply. Many thanks.<br /><br />Karen<br /><br />