Hello,

I just composed a message to you, but I'm not sure if it was sent. At the risk of repetition, I'm sending another--as I edit your manuscript, I am wondering whether you are married to the narrative being in the present tense. It is okay to use, but it is tricky to pull off and the past usually reads better. Please don't take offense; you are the author and it is totally up to you. I just thought I'd see how you felt about it before completing the job. If you'd like, I can provide you with a sample of your text with both tenses and see what you think.

Loving your story!

Thanks,
Laura