<p>Hi, Jacob,<br /><br />Here's the paper (phew!). Please note that I went through your references and marked where I thought info was missing, but references are not my strong point :( &nbsp;Also, although there were errors, I did not change your appendices, as they represent the actual documents that were used in the study.<br /><br />PLEASE let me know if you have any questions about any of my comments or changes, and I will be happy to do whatever you need me to in gettin gthis baby submitted :)<br /><br />Thanks!</p>
<p><br />Laura</p>