<div style="text-align: left;">This is my first draft for an article that I need to provide for a real estate journal. &nbsp;The audience will be property managers primarily and I want to use the piece as educational but also convince readers to contact my company for assistance with technology consulting. &nbsp;I don't love the opening paragraph and need to work on the text for each bullet point. &nbsp;Can you provide some assistance into where to take it from here to make it a good educational article?<br /><br />Thanks,<br />Cole Dunsmore</div>