<p>I rarely get to edit texts like this, and as an old English major, I really enjoy poetry and other creative writing.&nbsp;<br /> <br /> You interpretations of the poems are splendid, as are your two poems (the first being my favorite).&nbsp;<br /> <br /> This was a&nbsp;pleasure&nbsp;to read and I hope the edits and comments prove useful.<br /> <br /> Keep writing.<br /> <br /> Jackson</p>