Thank you very much, Nyanidoc! No, I haven't changed them, but the document didn't show any changes to the 3 deleted sections. Perhaps because they were deleted, the edits&nbsp;aren't showing up? <br /><br />I have attached the&nbsp;file with just the 3 paragraphs. If you could please take a look and give any feedback to make those paragraphs as powerful as possible, I would really appreciate it!&nbsp;<br /><br />Thank you!&nbsp;<br />Sadeea