Hi Lindsay,<br /><br />Thanks for sending this over for me to edit! I've gone through the texts and cleaned up sentence fragments, grammar, etc. I also suggested corrections for a few passive-voice instances. All the corrections can be viewed in Track Changes.<br /><br />On a completely unrelated note, Neil Young's "Harvest Moon" is one of my absolute favorite songs. :)<br /><br />Cheers!<br />EM