Great job, George. Just one question: How bad would it be if I were to omit the second "window" in that sentence? "...came through the window and formed a cross as it was setting." &nbsp;It's just that they are in such a close proximity. Or maybe I can omit the first one: "... the sun came through and formed a cross in the window as it was setting?"<br /><br />Maybe you've explained all this in the comments but right now I am looking at the text on a phone onc again. Sorry and thank you!<br /><br />