Good Morning,<br />I saw your profile, and I'm excited to get your feedback. This is a research paper which is due for my master class in communication.<br />The required pages for this paper is 18 pages as maximum, and I exceeded this number :(. I appreciate it if you can help me to revise and shorten my paper to meet the requirement. English is not my first language; I did my best to correct the grammar, spelling and punctuality mistakes to save you some time. Nevertheless, there are maybe many sentences that needs further revision.<br /><br />Thank you in advance, and I look forward to getting your appreciated feedback.<br /><br />Best,