Thanks for sending me more of your paper. &nbsp;You are making great progress with it. &nbsp;With this section, I suggested changing the term "dissenter" to "dissident." &nbsp;In the paper, I explain the difference beetween the two words. &nbsp;It is a slight difference but an important one in this context. &nbsp;Towards the end of the paper there was some repetition. &nbsp;There werre two accounts of some events, sometimes in the same words and at other times with different details. &nbsp;It gave the the impression that some things happened twice. &nbsp;With those section, either one of the duplicates should be removed, or the two accounts should be combined into one. &nbsp;This is an easy fix, once you decide where in the paper each event needs to be discussed. &nbsp;Thanks again, and good luck with your research. &nbsp;I look forward to reading another section. &nbsp;