Hi. Thanks for the chance to help...Interesting piece. I've made some minor text changes (mostly tightening sentences) -- the one big thing to highlight is your subject line. I would recommend something a little more conversational...i.e. "Our Commitment to You on Earth Day" or "Our Commitment to the Earth on Earth Day" ...<br /><br />The other thing to consider in the body is adding a sentence or two that explains "why customers should care." The points you raise are exceptionally valid and interesting, but i just wonder if a consumer would grasp what it means for them...could be a statement as simple as "what do these initiatives mean: That you can now that the t-shirts you wear are held to the highest standards environmentally." (not exactly that, but you get the idea.)<br /><br />Ben