Hi, <br />&nbsp;OK, we should be all set. I've gone through the document, and it's a fluent and engaging piece. I've included some margin notes for instances where I think some ideas can be more developed. Overall, this is quite nicely done. <br />There's a new Table of Contents, List of Figures and List of Tables, all of which are dynamic (just right-click and update page numbers if you need to). <br />&nbsp;There was some inconsistencies in font, so I made everything Times New Roman, but, should you want something else, that's an easy fix. <br />&nbsp;Also, after you accept/reject changes, just make sure the Tables and Figures don't move too much. Most should be static, but one never knows.