Hi Jaeyoung,<br /><br />The cover letter looks really strong, and most of the edits I made were for pretty minor things (e.g., a few mistakes with article usage). I've also responded to the notes you left in the document for me, and given you a few suggestions and prompts on how to provide more specific details and improve a couple transitions.<br /><br />Please let me know if you have further questions about my&nbsp;edits, since I always want to be sure I provide&nbsp;a five-star editing job.<br /><br />Best,<br />Tori