Hi, Daniel:<br /><br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document, and I hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />You did a fantastic job, to which I made some modest&nbsp;changes. I hope I've helped.<br /><br />It's sweltering&nbsp;here in southern&nbsp;Ontario. We're used to the cold, not the heat.&nbsp;<br /><br />Best wishes - George<br /><br />I am usually available for editing between 6:00 am and 10:30 pm (EST). If my status says 'unavailable', you can still reach me via Editor World.