Hello again,<br /><br />&nbsp; &nbsp; I'm submitting my novel excerpt here. I am sending this sample to MFA creative writing programs and would appreciate any editing and content help you have. I sent you the sample before and have had it edited once already. I am looking for another round of edits now and to see if there are things that can be improved and maybe to help make the writing more appealing.&nbsp;<br />&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;Again it is a slightly dystopian novel that takes place after a financial collapse. I am still debating whether to call it New York or 'New City'. I have it as the latter for now. There is a mysterious plague rising through the underbelly and later a militia group that the MC gets involved with. I look forward to seeing your feedback and any advice you might have in regards to submitting this for applications. Thank you.<br /><br />Robert