Hi, Waynew:<br /><br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document, and I hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />This is an excellent proposal, beautifully laid out. I removed the reference to Friedrich Nietzsche. not because&nbsp;it isn't an interesting introduction--I'm a Nietzche fan myself-- but because of his post-war reputation and insistence on the Ubermensch and "will to power." It might be too controversial for a design school. You can always put it back in if you disagree. <br /><br />The other changes mainly improve the flow and correct the idiom. Please review carefully, though. Editing a pdf can be tricky. It's easy to throw the page alignment off. If I can help in any way,&nbsp;please let me know. &nbsp;&nbsp;<br /><br />Best wishes - George (TypeRighter)<br />I am usually available for editing between 6:00 am and 10:30 pm (EST). If my status is set to 'unavailable', you can still reach me via Editor World.