Hello,<br /><br />This is a section of my chapter 4 for my disseratation. The disseration style is APA 6th edition. I know that I often have weak transisitions, so any additional advice would be greatly appreciated. I will have more work from chapter 4 with in the coming weeks, so if we work well together I would like to continue using the same editor for continuity.<br /><br />Thank You