Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your dissertation. What a lot of work! Please pay careful attention to my comments, as there were some instances when I wasn't sure if I stated something correctly. I also had some trouble at times figuring out whether you were talking about your work, which must be in past tense, or findings established in the literature, in which present tense is sometimes appropriate.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc