Hi Nyanidoc,<br /><br />You helped me with my rhetorical analysis about "tar sands" last month, and I learnt a lot from it. I really appreaciated it, because I am not native speaker. I found your editing very helpful, so I know where my expression is awkward and how native spearkers talk about it concisely.&nbsp;<br /><br />Can you help me edit my new work? This is a research paper and I really struggle with it. I hope you can help me as much as possible, especially my thesis statement, topic sentences and grammar. Thank you very much.<br /><br />Cleo&nbsp;