Hello, Matthew. Thank you for choosing my services. Your writing is crisp and clear, and I commend you for it. The introduction on your second essay is especially noteworthy; it immediately grabbed my attention. The supporting facts and experiences that you use substantiate each essay.<br /><br />My main suggestion involves the final paragraph of your first essay. Please review&nbsp;my comment.<br /><br />I wish you the best on your application. FYI: I live about 35 miles from Fort Bragg.