Hello, again, <br /><br />I am giving you the second part of my thesis, unlike the first here you will find alot of gramatical mistake. Please, give a work similar to your last work. Because I liked it. thank bellow the instructions. <br /><br /><br />1- Edit the gramatical mistakes and Fluency of the sentences or the flow of the sentence or meaning. <br />2- proofread it, and leave me comments on any mistakes.<br />3- follow my university thesis guideline about the Layout and citation formating (provided in the PDF link bellow)<br /><br />http://www.esu.edu/documents/thesis_guidelines.pdf<br /><br />4- My citation formating is the APA style.<br /><br /><br /><br /><br />Thank you,