Dear NYANIDOC,<br /><br />I forgot to send instructions for your edit. &nbsp;This document will be using in an online magazine marketing directly to women between the ages of 35-50. &nbsp;The language seems a little strong, leaning toward being "male-heavy". &nbsp;It may need a "softer touch" when discussing the subject matter, without losing the value of the content. &nbsp;Please do the best you can (smile).<br /><br />Additionally, I am sure as part of your edit, you will do the usual spelling, punctuation, and grammar revisions.<br /><br />Thank you for your support!<br /><br />BJ