Hi there, Urna - <br /><br />Thanks for sending this along for me to sample edit! As it is a sample, I did the first three paragraphs to give you an idea for how I edit documents. All suggested changes can be seen in Track Changes.<br /><br />If you decide you'd like to work with me further on the manuscript, I am offering a 15% discount right now and my schedule is pretty open, so I can guarantee quick turnaround.<br /><br />If you have any questions or concerns, please don't hesitate to let me know!<br /><br />Cheers,<br />EM