This sample has been edited for grammar and general readability. I suggested a few punctuation shanges and divisions of long sentences into multiple sentences for the sake of clarity, but there are still a few places where the writing could be clearer. For example, the description of the dancing (by turning around in circles) was a little vague. And there are a few instances of pronouns without clear referents, which I tried to clear up based on the context. If you choose to hire me for the full project I would definitely want to follow up with you about these issues.