Hello, my friend<br /><br />Could you please edit the rest of the thesis. it has 12 pages. <br /><br />about your comments, yes I did update the outline.<br /><br />There is aparagraph in the last of the document, this is an addition to the body of the thesis. <br /><br /><br />----<br />instructions<br />1- you don't have to do the Layout for these pages. <br />2- you don't have to look at the rerfernces, (there is very little number of rerferences)<br />3- I need you instead to focus on the gramatical and the flow of the sentences, especailly the last chapter (conclusion): <br /><br />Since you read all my thesis, I need you to give me your openion, on the conclusion, what is weak and what is not. <br /><br /><br />---- Finaly <br />the last document I didn't order 1 day service, I think the office staff was mistaken. (although I was happy with the mistake lol), But I have increased the number of words to cover some of this day's service. <br /><br />Happy to work with, please give me the best you can do. <br />and have agreat day<br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br />