Happy New Year to you as well. &nbsp;You do such an excellent job. I'm so relieved once you get my work in your hands.&nbsp;<br /><br />&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; Questions: &nbsp;<br /><br />1. I'm confused about the side comments whether I should add them or it's your comment as a whole. &nbsp;Ex. Hate that, &nbsp; Okay, maybe this is enough &nbsp; &nbsp; How indeed?&nbsp;<br /><br />2. I didn't intend to make Macbeth references when Yashani was in her room. How did I do that?&nbsp;<br /><br />3. I always do your changes with the exception of stuff I made up. Oralynn is done purposely. How do I NOT change what you gave me so it'd be easier for the second edit?&nbsp;<br /><br />4. Cack means cock also. &nbsp;What sounds better? &nbsp;<br />&nbsp;&nbsp;