Joan,<br />&nbsp; Thank your for the opportunity to edit this portion of your planned dissertation. &nbsp;Please view the document in Word's Final: Show Mark-up mode, and with Comments shown.<br />&nbsp; I've provided some format suggestions for reading clarity, as well as wording and grammar corrections. &nbsp;I've also raised some questions/suggestions in the Comments for you to consider.<br />&nbsp; I look forward to working with you on the complete dissertation.<br /><br />Sincerely,<br />NTexasEditor