Hi, Lindsay:<br /><br />There are some very good sentences in this essay. Some others I've reworked for coherence. Not being an expert, of course, on mental disorders, apart from probably having several, I hope I haven't misrepresented your argument.<br /><br />Keep up the good work!<br /><br />Best wishes - George<br /><br />I am usually available for editing between 6:00 am and 10:30 pm (EST). If my status says 'unavailable', you can still reach me via Editor World.