Hello!<br /><br />This is a summary of a web series. I'm mostly worried about content, understanding of the plot, and an emphasis on style. I have plenty of experience writing scripts, but not much experience with this type of piece. Please tell me any section that might need clarification or if I should expand on any topic. Also, do you think I should explain more about the individual characters?<br /><br />Thank you so much!<br />Olivia