I had taken out the sentence because it repeats a great deal of the previous sentence ("will take a great leap forward"), but I integrated what was effective in the blue sentence within the previous sentence (i.e., choosing to apply herself). Thus, I combined the two, and didn't really cut the blue sentence out completely. 

However, if you wish the blue sentence to remain intact, I can certainly do that by the due date/time. Please let me know, and I will be happy to do so.