Hi&nbsp;Jaeyoung:<br /><br />Here is your edited document. I'm not always happy with an edit, particulary if I'm unfamiliar with the topic, but this time I'm pleased. You provided the narrative and I polished.<br /><br />I think the admissions office will want to see that you are passionate, fluent, and qualified, all of which we've covered. I assume also that you have an academic CV and maybe a covering letter, which you can, if you wish, include in the body of an email. I would convert attached documents to pdf, though. They look better.<br /><br />Please proofread carefully. Because I go over and over a document, revsing and rewriting, I sometimes (all right often) miss a typo.<br /><br />My usual advice about running Document Inspector etc still applies.<br /><br /><br />Good luck with your application. You certainly are qualified. I wish I could speak Korean. (I had a Korean girlfriend once, long ago.)<br /><br />Best wishes - TypeRighter (aka George)<br /><br />I am usually available for editing between 6:00 am and 10:30 pm. If my status is set to unavailable, as it was while I was editing this document, you can still send a message to me via Editor World, if need be<br /> &nbsp;&nbsp;<br /><br />