Hi, Vita:<br /><br />
<p>I have uploaded your edited document and hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.</p>
I've been over the document very thoroughly (not an easy topic, P3 mesaurements) and probably made more edits than necessary, but you can easily reject those you think unnecessary using tracked changes. I also included the DOI reference in your bibliography, where available.<br /><br />Another great essay!<br /><br />Best wishes for the new year - George&nbsp;