Hi Keely:<br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document and hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />I made more changes than were necessary. The document was well written, I caught a couple of typos and generally made changes only to smooth the flow. Please check the section where you mention Verizon. I wasn't sure what they did, but took a guess. Anyway, a very nice business plan cum summary.<br /><br />Before sharing this document, consider running Document Inspector. To do this, click File/Info/Check For Issues/Inspect Document on the Microsoft Word menu bar.<br /><br />Microsoft Word displays tracked changes and comments by default. <br /><br />To review the edited document without showing tracked changes, click Review on the Microsoft Word menu bar. Then select Final: Show Markup and click the drop-down arrow. Choose Final. To show tracked changes again, click Final: Show Markup.<br /><br />Best wishes - TypeRighter (aka George)<br /><br />I am usually available for editing between 6:00 am and 10:30 pm. If my status is set to unavailable, you can still send a message to me via Editor World.