Hi there,<br /><br />Thanks for sending this along for me to edit! Per your request I have cleaned up the text not only from a grammatical standpoint, but also tried to help the content flow better. I didn't change any of the facts as you stated them, just added/deleted words as necessary. <br /><br />I hope this meets with your expectations.<br /><br />If you are pleased with my work, please consider rating me on my Editor page! I strive for five-star ratings at all times. :)<br /><br />Thanks,<br />EM