So I fixed the extra spacing (a lot of double spaces in text) and checked grammar/punctuation/spelling.&nbsp;<br /><br />Also, checked consistency issues (ex. FY 15 vs. FY 2015).<br /><br />You mentioned repetition, but I didn't get that sense as each section describes a program or programs and provides numbers. So the pattern is similar, but the contents are different.<br /><br />I certainly learned a lot about the NPS activities.<br /><br />Thank you.