Please proof and edit the attached email. It's too wordy. I'd like to have it less than 300 word if possible without losing meaning.  I want it to sound light and entertaining, not boring and dry.   <br /><br /><br />This email is informing TollPtag holders of the cool thing coming in October. <br /><br />The North Texas Tollway Authority just launched, TollPerks, a rewards program to thank  nd reward Dallas/Forth Texas drivers for for helping create North Texas? world-class toll road system and for continuing to use NTTA toll roads. TollPerks member will earn points for driving on the rollroads.  They can redeem their points for discount offers and savings from participating merchants. Some offer require points to redeem while others don't<br /><br /><br id="tinymce" class="mce-content-body  mce-visualblocks" contenteditable="true" spellcheck="false" />