<p class="p1"><b>Thank you for the opportunity to edit your work. Please let me know if there are any issues, and I will address them asap.<br /></b><br /><br /><strong>I did my best to follow your requests. However, there are a few concerns. First, I did a lot of work to this paper to get it to read well. However, since I don't know much about the subject, it is not really my place to organize the paragraphs for you -- though I did my best to make everything make sense.<br /><br /></strong><strong>Second, many of the name spellings had two or three variations. Please go through all the names and make sure they are spelled correctly and uniformly.<br /><br /></strong><strong>Third, after you do all this, plus making sure it reads how you want, I am more than happy to give this paper another look. Just send it back to me through the messaging system so you don't have to pay another editing fee. I probably won't have to do much, so long as you don't rewrite too much.<br /><br /></strong><b>Let me know what you think!</b></p>