Hi&nbsp;akitone24!<br />Your paper is attached with my edits in red using Word's track changes feature.&nbsp;<br /><br />This was fun! I made a ton of suggestions but it is really easy for you to just reject the changes if you don't like them. I couldn't put in any page numbers for Gogol's quotes or references because the pdf didn't have any page numbers. I'm sure you have a copy that does, so those will still need to be added.<br /><br />Your instructor wanted you to flesh out this paragraph: &nbsp;Gogol uses the ghost at the end of the story to show that Akaky could resist injustice and attempt to reinstate justice. He could even get his overcoat back, but it cost him his life.&nbsp;<br /><br />I agree it needs more&nbsp;work&nbsp;but didn't know what you might want to say about it. You could just delete it if you don't want to build more out of it. I thought I had a good idea of what you were saying in the rest of the paragraphs, so I added to some of those.&nbsp;<br /><br />I hope you find my suggestions helpful! I tried to help out as much as possible, and I remember writing a lot of papers like this in college. Thank you so much for choosing me as your editor!<br /><br />