Would you please pay special attention to my&nbsp;word choices. Since English is my second language, I don't have a lot of confidence on some of the&nbsp;words/expressions I used in my writing. I always have the feeling that&nbsp;there are better (more natural) words/expressions for what I am trying to say but, for the life of me, I just cannot think of a better one. As a result, I always feel that my writings are amaturish and lack sophistication. Any feedback&nbsp;you may have would be greatly appreciated. Thanks.<br /><br />Kwan