Hi Liz,&nbsp;<br /><br />Thanks for checking in. The manuscript is coming along well. I've found that it needs less line editing (punctuation and grammar) than developmental editing (narrative flow and overall structure). I'll be able to give you some all-encompassing notes once I finish, of course, but for now I'm focusing on smoothing out the narration from paragraph to paragraph and identifying areas that could use a little more character (such as those comedic comments I mentioned in my sample edit).&nbsp;<br /><br />-EE