Hi, Dana:<br /><br />First, thank you for your very generous ratings. I am, I promise, running on all four cylinders here in Canada, and I&nbsp;hope my edits and suggestions aren't too confusing. Sometimes it is easier to rewrite, but your documents are almost perfect as they are.<br /><br />Anyway, here is No 3.<br /><br />For me, the only troubling point is the word 'verbiage.' It was only at the end of the document&nbsp;that I&nbsp;thought that 'responses' might be a good alternative. I offer more alternatives in the comments.&nbsp;<br /><br />Also, would it be ok if I have a small extended deadline? I like to give each document the same time, but, as you can see, I'm slightly behind schedule. I should have the last one finished by 7:00 pm EST or thereabouts. It's now 5:25. I apologise (British spelling) for the delay.<br /><br /><br /><br />Best wishes - George