<p>Hi Lindsay,<br /><br />Ah, I remember this novella, at least a little! I smoothed out the wording&nbsp;as made sense to me - see if my suggestions make sense to you too. :) And if the assignment is for it to be longer, I would suggest adding a little more about what Al-Qurani's position is, and what made the article useful to you in interpreting the story. If it's supposed to be just a short summary of the article (around the length you have here), then I think this would work well.</p>
<p>Hope this helps, and good luck in your studies this month!</p>
<p>Cheers,</p>
<p>Molly</p>