Hey George,<br /><br />I have modified previously written passages for this application.<br /><br />This application&nbsp;is tricky since it has prompts that are completely diffrent from ones from other schools.<br /><br />I tried my best to make the passage fit to the prompts, but I am not sure whether they are convincing.<br /><br />Please proofread them for me and let me know if you have any suggestions.<br /><br />Thank you very much!<br /><br />Viv