Dear Nyanidoc,<br /><br />I attached my writing sample, and I could not finish the general discussion part.&nbsp;<br />I need to confirm some look up more references, and ask some advice of my advisor.<br />But, I want to edit my document before show this to my advisor. <br /><br />Please edit figure descriptions too (these are also included in word counts. I checked it :))<br /><br />If you have any opinion regarding the flow or content, please let me know.<br /><br />Thank you,<br /><br />Sincerely<br /><br />Yeaeun Chung &nbsp;<br /><br />