Hello,<br /><br />I have submitted your completed document! Your grammar and natural-sounding English was much improved compared to the last manuals I have edited for you. I have made several wording changes and corrected small typos. Certain comments to note: using "approximately" in front of numbers instead of "about" sounds most technical. In addition, using "in order to prevent" is often clearer than simply "to prevent" after warnings and cautions - because the latter wording can actually be misread in certain sentences.<br /><br />Please let me know if you have any further questions on this manual or any edits. Please also feel free to send me any more manuals you have - I enjoy working on them!<br /><br />Thank you,<br />Kk