Hi!<br /><br />It's sometimes tough to edit books that are written in a unique and artistic style--some editors are hellbent on perfect grammar, and I think one should make allowances for art. You might not have standard sentence structure, but this adds to the mystery of the story.<br /><br />I'm not sure whether I know completely what Yashani was trying to say, but it seemed to me like she loves him almost too much, that she is afraid of the force of her own passion, and that she is sometimes powerless and lets him do things she might not really want to do.&nbsp;<br /><br />I have an interest in reading any fictional genre!<br /><br />Thanks,&nbsp;<br />Laura