Last thing: I need a strong thesis statement stating my 3 or 4 body paragraphs at the end of my introduction like a example like this - At least 25 percent of the federal budget should be spent on helping upgrade business to clean technologies, researching renewable energy sources, and planting more trees in order to control or eliminate pollution. Also need Begin each Body Paragraph with a topic sentence. You will need a supporting detail to prove the point raised in the topic sentence. Finally, you need to explain and analyze by answering the so what? readers always raise. Don't forget transition sentences too.