Hi, Dbotchford:<br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document, and I hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />This was a very enjoyable and informative editing request. Your style, which I have not altered, made it a pleasure to read. Because your document is in pdf form, I haven't used track changes, but if you need a MS-Word version, please let me know. <br /><br />Please proofread your edited document carefully.<br /><br />Best wishes - George (TypeRighter)<br />I am usually available for editing between 6:00 am and 10:30 pm (EST). If my status is set to 'unavailable', you can still reach me via Editor World.<br /><br /><br />