Hi, Ivan:<br /><br />Not a lot to change, really. I wasn't sure if the document is a verbatim transcript, so I just put some alternative suggestions in the margin as comments. If you prefer them to the original, just copy and paste. Other than that, the grammar, syntax, punctuation and style are perfect. It has a very touching&nbsp;tone, promising further revelations, which you wouldn't want to lose.<br /><br />Best wishes - George