It looks like you&rsquo;re using MLA formatting, but you&rsquo;ve omitted the headers with your last name and the page number (in the top margins of every page), as well as the left-aligned heading with your name, the name of the instructor and class, and the due date.<br /><br />I&rsquo;m also not certain whether your citations are accurate. I don&rsquo;t know what source you used, but its citation should conform to MLA conventions on the works cited page (EasyBib.com can create a citation for you, with you just providing the relevant information). You were also inconsistent about actually citing your source. I&rsquo;ve included parenthetical citations for every sentence where the information you&rsquo;re providing is not your own, as is fitting an academic paper.<br /><br />I would recommend that you expand on your analysis of the source, since most of your sentences are requiring citation as it is. Most academic papers (particularly MLA-formatted ones) require you to provide a significant amount of original analysis in addition to your source material. Your paper, in its current state, is just a summary of a TED talk.