Attached are the first 10 chapters for review. &nbsp;My wife and I have been over these a dozen time, but I am sure problems persist. &nbsp;I have endeavored to develop several consistent themes, arcs and drama throughout the book, which start in this first section. &nbsp;Much of this is sports-related, but there is much more to the book, including a much deeper relationship between Rockne and Kentuck, than I intitially anticipated, thanks to a treasure trove of correspondence between the two over many years,&nbsp;from the&nbsp;Notre Dame archives.<br /><br />My major goal is to publish and promote this prior to the Olympics. &nbsp;At least to me the Olympic chapters are fascinating, which I hope others will find eqally appealling.<br /><br />Since, based on previous experience, I will likely sell no more than a few hundred books, I am not sure I will be able to justify having the entire book of 32 chapters edited.<br /><br />Thank you,<br />Rob Oberst