Hello, Jaehoon - I focused on your revised areas, but I also quickly skimmed the whole ms. and made a couple minor edits.&nbsp; There was one area where I noted I wasn't sure of your meaning (my comment RM1).&nbsp;If you feel my suggested edit doesn't capture your meaning correctly, feel free to send me your own rewrite of that small section through the EW Message function for a last quick edit, if you want to.&nbsp; Again thanks for the pleasure of working on your very interesting manuscript.&nbsp; RebeccaTDE