Hello:

Please see my answers below. I know this email system doesn't keep hard returns very well, so I apologize if it is difficult to locate my answers. I began each with "A:".

I have a few questions. "....test scanner options (a standard scanner and HoverCam) recommended by "the" Columbia Light House." Q. Do not need to use "the"? That is the the company name. A: It is absolutely fine to eliminate the “the.â€ 

Ms. B. had difficulty navigating to the Gmail login/password screen. In addition, she did not recall her password, which was normally saved on her computer at home. Q. I added which was normally saved on her computer at home. Should I use "because"? Please advise. A: I suggest “which she has saved on her computer at home.â€ I suggest this because we really can’t assume that the reason she forgot her password is because it is saved on her home computer, and I would suggest avoiding “normally,â€ because then you are implying that it isn’t saved there now, even though it “normallyâ€ is.

A ZoomText Magnifier/Reader may be suitable for Ms. B. than Jaws, since Jaws requires memorizing more keystroke combinations unless her eye condition becomes worth. Q. I am not sure what I should use to make it clear. As long as her eyes stays with the same condition (she can see some with her one eye), ZoomText software is O.K. to magnify and see whatever on the screen. Jaws sofware is suitable for people who are totally blind and who is able to memorize many keystroke combinations. I am not sure if she can memorize all combinations. (Jaws is not a good software to use as of today and is not certain that she can use it later. (senior above 70 years old). Please advise. A: I suggest the following rewrite of this part: “A ZoomText Magnifier/Reader may be more suitable for Ms. B. than Jaws, because Jaws, typically used by those who are totally blind, requires the memorization of keystroke combinations. As an elderly user, Ms. B. may have difficulty memorizing the keystroke combinations of Jaws. In addition, Ms. B. still has vision in one eye, and thus is able to use a magnifier at this time.â€


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