Hello, Ms. Rotan,<br /><br />I don't want to hand back your paper with superficial edits and have you be unhappy, so I'd like to check in with you before working on it. Please let me know if you are a student in high school or secondary school, as there are ethical implications when it comes to professionally editing the work of students. I can make suggestions (as you suggested) and I can look for minor errors and typos, but I cannot make significant changes to the text. You have the option to cancel the doc if you are looking for structural change.<br /><br />I want you to be happy with the service and also understand our limitations. Let me know how you would like to proceed.<br /><br />Thank you,<br /><br />Laura Kenney