Hi,<br /><br />I have a few questions. In the essay I submitted to you:&nbsp;<br /><br />It should be&nbsp;<br />"In my case, I have always wanted to be a versatile and independent woman." Instead of&nbsp;&nbsp;"In my case, I have always want to be a versatile and independent woman."<br /><br />Am I correct?<br /><br />Also,&nbsp;<br /><br />I wrote: "Compared to most peers in my age, I have read a lot of psychology books." You changed to "Compared to most of my peers, I will have read a lot of psychology books, which is fine." This is not what I meant.&nbsp;<br /><br />Please let me know what you think. Thanks.