Good morning,<br />Thanks for choosing me to edit today.<br /><br />This was a great document with some well-researched information, and you make your points well. I'm assuming you know that the last sentence ends without being completed, so I'm not sure if there's just a sentence to finish or additional parts of the whole paper.<br /><br />Most edits were grammatical, or to avoid tense shifts or tone changes. Overall it's quite good!<br /><br />Thanks and please keep me in mind for any future editing needs,<br />Ryan