hi<br /><br />any suggestions for clearity and succentness appreciated.&nbsp;<br /><br />pls don't let any personal beliefs or political preferences impact the quailty of your editing services. &nbsp;<br /><br />I say this with the bad experience of a few editors that have said that they did not agree with my comments or conclutions...and this resulted in a less than satisfactory and complete edit. &nbsp;Sorry to have to make this comment, but sometimes people take things personally...and this impacts their judgement.&nbsp;<br /><br />Thanks!&nbsp;<br /><br />Vaughn&nbsp;