Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your paper. I think it is in relatively good shape now, although you need to include a discussion of workplace daycare, and one of the paragraphs ends w/ an incomplete sentence.<br /><br />Your refs also need work, although I have fixed them for the most part. Authors first names are never used and date of publication follows the authors. They must have the web address in all cases and vol and pp #s, if available, are missing in many. Also, I don't know what n.p. means.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc