Hi, this is my capstone paper to complete my MBA program.  We were to evluate a company and give our opinion of there 2-3 and 5-10 year outlook from an investors perspective.  I tend to get redundant so I need help making sure it flows well and makes sense.  I have not cited anything yet, but we do have to make sure to cite and provide a bibliography.  Other than the editing, any suggestions or advice you might have would be greatly appreciated.