Hi again Diane,<br />Thanks for selecting me again. Seems like the beginning of a great working relationship!<br /><br />This book sounds fascinating, and your review made me interested in checking it out. Here were my major concerns:<br />1) I think - based on any research I can find online - you have the title of the book wrong. I changed it. If I'm wrong, my apologies but I search the publisher's site, Amazon, and a couple other sites.<br />2) Tense. You switched back and forth between present and past, which can be very easy to do but also rather confusing. Typically, in a book review we want to stick with present tense, as the action is happening&nbsp;<em>in the present</em>&nbsp;indefinitely, whenever the reader reads it. The major exception would be a historical biography or something like that.<br />3) Pronoun confusion. Because both main characters are women, there were some confusing uses of "she" and "her" where it's unclear which one you mean (mother or daughter). I did my best to clear them up, but being unfamiliar with the book it was at times difficult (particularly when the other daughter and granddaughter are mentioned. Too many ladies!).<br /><br />Overall, great job yet again.<br /><br />Ryan