I have sveral questions and attached it for you. Please answer as SOON as you see my message since I must submit tomorrow mornning.<br /><br />p.s. I'm disappointed with your edits at this time since it doesn't sound like thorough edits. I asked you to thoroughly check the draft since it must be very well written, but nontheless, several sentences do not seem to be correct and have many questions as you can see it.