<p>Thank you for being so mindful. I know what happened.<br /> <br /> The text&nbsp;is&nbsp;fully edited in your version, but the edits don't show up after page 7 or 8. Here's why.<br /> <br /> At that point, I turned off the tracked changes (which I often do for changes like extra spaces as I don't want to clutter up the screen), and I forgot to turn&nbsp;the tracking&nbsp;function back on (hard to edit with a lot of red text on the screen).<br /> <br /> So just now, I retrieved the original text and ran a document compare against the edited file (your file) to create a new, third file with&nbsp;<span>all</span>&nbsp;the changes in red.<br /> <br /> That version is attached here.<br /> <br /> I apologize for the inconvenience.&nbsp;</p>