Hi, Elizabeth,<br /><br />No, not intentional. I probably lower-cases the first one as I would normally default to, and when I saw that they were all upper, decided to leave them. I scrolled back once to check they were all capped and I must not have gone far enough. This is why I like to offer a second edit on longer works at no charge: I can get author's feedback and double check for inconsistencies. In the old days, there was much more back and forth collaboration between author and editor, and although EW is not really set up for this, I like to do at least one round if possible.<br /><br />Make any any notes you'd like and send back whenever you are ready.<br /><br />Thank you!