Hi yuchan,<br />Your document is attached with my suggested edits in red using Word's track changes feature. I kept all the answers still very simple and between 55 - 60 words. One thing I noticed was that you put two spaces after the period ending a sentence. That used to be the right way to do it, but the rule&nbsp;has changed. We now use only one space after the period ending a sentence. English can't just be simple. It has to always change! Thank you for choosing me as your editor! I appreciate it and hope you will send more work to me. If you'd like me to draft another set of answers for you, I would be happy to do that as well.