Hello!<br />I first want to say I deeply appreciate your help.<br /><br /><br />1.&nbsp;Could you please MODIFY, POLISH, and STREAMLINE these pieces of writing? Thank you so much!<br /><br />2. PLEASE&nbsp;CHANGE ANYTHING in&nbsp;ANY WAY YOU WANT. (I TRUST YOUR EXPERTISE!)<br /><br />3. If necessary, please give me alternative expressions, BUT NO&nbsp;comments that are without alternatives, please.<br /><br /><br />Thank you very, very much.<br /><br /><br />Very sincerely,<br />Hangsan Ahn