Yes, commas confuse me. Thanks for giving me some guidance there. I wasn't sure what to do with Sweet Cheeks either and that's why it was inconsistent in the ms. I do agree with you though; I like Sweet Cheeks. I love the changes you made where Casey says, "Guinness-it's good for you." How you changed Casey to Seer Bitch at the point where Austin was fully possessed was perfect. I don't know why I didn't think of it. I took out the demonic puppeteer. I agree it is cliche.<br /><br />Were there chapters or paragraphs that needed to be deleted? Did the plot slow down at points?<br /><br /><br />I am going through and reading it slowly and looking at each correction and suggestion carefully, but I will email you questions as they come up. <br /><br />Thanks again.<br /><br />Kathleen