Hi Arnie,<br />I agree it reads much better and it appears at first blush to have come through unscathed! Thank you Mr. Editor. I am sending you chapters 5 &amp; 6 for your mighty sword to swashbuckle through with piercing accuracy. With regard to the second payment...do not panic...it will magically appear in about a week when I return from Bermuda. The following payment will be about four weeks later in early December. The plan is to try to get through to a clean manuscipt for this book by Christmas, and then a final review and minor refinements by my boss before your final okay...That is the plan.<br />Thanks Arnie,<br />Andrew O