<p>Hello, <br /><br />I am applying to the Univeristy of Arizona School of Medicine, but this is not an admissions essay. The school wants me to answer the following prompt: <strong><br /><br />"<b><strong>Please share a meaningful experience you have had working or volunteering in the health professional field or a time in your past in which you were responsible for the care and well-being of someone else. What did you learn from this as it relates to becoming a physician? (Limit: 350 words)</strong>"<br /><br /></b></strong>I have attached a document which contains my response to the aforementioned prompt (the prompt is also in bold at the top of the document and the word count was not included in the total word count as it is not to be edited). That being said, there are a few things I need addressed you, the editor. <br /><br />1) I am about 80 words over the word limit on this document (350 word limit). If you could please help me decrease the word count, while retaining the meaning of the content, that would be great. If you can eliminate redundancy, restructure complex sentences into more simple ones, etc... to make the document more concise, that would be ideal. Overall, I would like you to remove anything that you think does not directly ANSWER the above prompt. Also, I would like you to remove anything that you think does not add anything productive to the response and is just "fluff". <br /><br />2) I want to ensure my grammar and word choice is perfect. <br /><br />Thank you very much!<strong> <br /></strong></p>