Good morning George,&nbsp;<br /><br />This season flu/cold made my youngest daughter sick twice. It is little difficult for me to add some sections while she was crying for me constantly. However, I was able to finish it. (I apologize if I made to many errors.)&nbsp;<br /><br />Here are professors' comments.<br /><br />*&nbsp;Go through your essay and for each goal change the language from&nbsp; &ldquo;I would&rdquo; to &ldquo;I will&rdquo; &ndash; and make sure you&rsquo;ve set up an &ldquo;experiment&rdquo; for yourself to put into place during the weeks leading up to the end of the trimester. Here you might create a journaling practice for the next several weeks where you note strong emotions, your reaction and write up a reappraisal.&nbsp;<br /><br />*&nbsp;What specific experiments can you put in place with respect to your daughters and your husband?&nbsp;<br /><br />*Can you create a specific experiment for this goal? What actions might you take to build a stronger relationship with yourself?<br /><br />*
<p>(1)&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; In the sections of the paper where you identify specific goals change the language from &ldquo;I would &hellip;.&rdquo; to &ldquo;I will&hellip;.&rdquo; and name specific actions you will take during the next few weeks to move a bit closer to your desired future. I&rsquo;ve given a couple of suggestions, but haven&rsquo;t made notes on each paragraph.</p>
<p>(2)&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Include one or two outside references to short articles or online posts that aren&rsquo;t on the syllabus. This will move your paper squarely into the A range. Perhaps something that relates to your daughters?</p>
<br />Thank you always!&nbsp;<br />
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