Hi Stephanie,<br /><br />I think that your professor probably wants your assignment to be formatted like a letter, so I've added a salutation and a signature (as well as a concluding statement of your goal in the letter) for you.<br /><br />Your letter is a little long, but it seems like you're spending a lot of time restating what was written in the proposed plan you're meant to be responding to and could therefore cut the letter down by cutting at this part of the letter. You should be more explicit about what you want to accept from the proposed plan and what you want to change in it, but in general it seems like you're being pretty specific about the details of the plan you're discussing.<br /><br />I've included prompts as to where you should specify that this is your plan or the original proposed plan, and in the conclusion I added I made it slightly clearer that you're suggesting that the regulatory agency accept the plan (while implementing a few modifications, which you outline near the end of your letter). I've tried to clarify your wording wherever possible (and have included some prompts to help you clarify your wording), but if you need further help please don't hesitate to ask.<br /><br />Best, Tori