Hello,<br />I need help editing and revising my personal statement for my med school applications. The prompt is pretty much the standard admissions question: "Why do you want to be a doctor?" / "What makes you a good candidate?" There are a lot of grammatical errors and areas of awkward phrasing that need to be addressed. Additionally, I would appreciate it if you could give me notes on the content of my personal statement. I know that my conclusion is not very strong, and I'm sure there are&nbsp;areas&nbsp;througout that could be closed out better or expanded upon. Please let me know if there is anything else I could tell you!&nbsp;<br /><br />Agnes Park