Hi Tee33,<br />Your document is attached with my suggested edits in red using Word's track changes feature. It's always so much easier to read if you change the view to "final" or accept all the changes before you read the document.<br /><br />I hope you find my edits useful. I did not change your voice at all. It is thoughtful and honest and I wouldn't want to change that. You'll see most changes were breaking up run-on sentences or switching the phrasing order to aid&nbsp;in the flow. Thank you so much for choosing me as your editor! I hope to hear from you again in the future.