Hi Andrew:<br /><br />It's much better without what you deleted. I've made a couple of minor language changes and it's good to go. Let me know if you agree. Also, I'll follow this with the final corrected copy. Keep your fingers crossed on the transmission.<br /><br />Are you back in the States? I'm ready for more, either a chapter at a time or a few.<br /><br />Regards,<br />Arnie