<p>Hello!</p><p>I am applying to the University of Arizona School of Medicine, but this is not an admissions essay. Actually, the school wants me to answer four prompts on unique topics. <br /><br />I have attached a document which contains each of these four prompts and my response to each prompt. The prompts on the document are bolded (the word count for the prompts was not included in the final word count because they are not to be edited) and the reponses are directly below the prompts. The document is four pages in total and each page has a prompt and a respective response.<b><br /></b><br /><strong>I want the editor to address a few concerns:</strong><b><br /></b></p><p>1) Each prompt has a 350 word limit and all of my responses are over the limit. If you could please help me decrease the word count, while retaining the meaning of the content, that would be great. If you can eliminate redundancy, restructure complex sentences into more simple ones, etc... to make the document more concise, that would be ideal. Overall, I would like you to remove anything that you think does not directly ANSWER the respective prompt. Also, I would like you to remove anything that you think does not add anything to the response and is just "fluff".</p><p>2) I want to ensure my grammar and word choice is perfect.</p><p><b>Thank you very much!</b></p>