Truly here with an update. I'm still 'polishing the prose' , and will plan to submit my work - probably the entire essay - to you soon. In the meantime, let me ask you a question: would you edit the essay, not only line by line, but also as a whole? That is, suggesting I delete paragraphs; use a new approach to specific sections; making sure the prose flows and gets to its logical conclusion? Also, will I be able to get back to you, after you've done your editing, to discuss a point or two? Best, T.