Thanks for your comments. I like your suggestions. I will add some chapters. I will talk about their childhood. I will add Diane to the story or eliminate her. She is one year older. Your comments have been very helpful. 

I wrote a children's book, Billy don't be a bully. Amazon-create space edited it. 

This is my first attempt at writing a novel. I have accepted and deleted ninety percent of your edits. Now I will work on the plot. Your comments and suggestions will be considered.

Thanks,

Sherelyn Duhart