Please edit my personal statement for copy editing mistakes like grammar and sentence structure. <br />Also please do/ give me any feedback you can that can improve my essay whether that means taking away things or adding them to my essay.<br />Make the essay more concise without it losing the emotion/tone of the personal statement,<br />This is VERY IMPORTANT please do anything you can to make it better! It's my personal statement for law school<br />Thank You!&nbsp;