Here is the edit for your statement of purpose. Overall, I found this to be an interesting and well-written statement. My focus while editing was on clarity in word choice and syntax.&nbsp;<br /><br />You will see that I did alter many of the sentences. The content was certainly there in the writing. I just wanted to make sure that the communicative intent of your ideas and thoughts came out more readily and smoothly.<br /><br />I wish you luck, and thank you for your trust in my work!