Hi George,<br /><br />This is another statement of purpose for Johns Hopkins University. I'm currently customizing my personal statement for each school, and this school requires me to answer&nbsp;specific questions:<br />1) Discuss your goals for graduate study and for your professional career. (this belongs to 5th paragraph for my document)<br />2) What experiences have contributed to your desire to study international relations? (belongs to 1-4th paragraphs)<br />3) How will Johns Hopkins SAIS and your intended concentration serve to meet your academic and professional goals? (belongs to 6th paragraph)<br />4) This essay should be no more than 600 words in length.&nbsp;<br /><br />So the essay should less than 600 words, but for mine, I think the portion for the experience is quite long than other parts, so I tried to shorten that part, but it is really demanding for me. So I definitely need your help on this part. <br />If you have any other suggestion in the part division, please feel free to let me know. <br /><br />Thank you and have a good night sleep. &nbsp;<br /><br />Sincerely,<br />Jaeyoung