Hi Textpro,<br /><br />thanks for edited copy. I am now outside and unable to access using laptop to view the changes. I could only view the clean copy using iPhone. Few clarifications needed for the below:<br /><br />1) the word omitted means removed. Correct? But what I am trying to say here is overlook coz we missed out his name<br />2) "...and they appreciated being among PETRONAS&rsquo;s partners." Do u think that by adding a word "felt" between "they" and "appreciated" sounds better?&nbsp;<br />3)"He was to remain formal and keep the crowd engaged." "He was to remain" here sounds wrong. i just want to say that he is formal in his delivery and able to keep the crowd engaged.&nbsp;<br />4) "Customers&rsquo; remarked that they...". The Customer Should not have apostrophe right?&nbsp;<br />5) "The video was did well in capturing the key..." Isn't it should be "the video was done well"?&nbsp;<br /><br />Thanks and look forward to your reply.<br /><br />regards&nbsp;<br />&nbsp;<br /><br />