Hi George,<br /><br />Here is the paper you edited with all changes being accepted, and I added one paragraph in red font. You can paraphrase it and improve it as you see fit. I just didn't want to lose points for not answering the full question.<br /><br />You may delay this after you finish the second paper you are working on which I understand how convoluted is, and I thank you for your great effort working on it.&nbsp;<br /><br />Thanks!<br />Maya