I enjoyed reading tis story. Fox is certainly a tragic figure, and Vera is a sad figure. The children still seem innocent, except the boy is acting out a bit with his car (crashing into the wall).<br /><br />The symbolism of the crack, train, and snow is presented well, with some restraint.<br /><br />The ending is appropriate. There is really nothing else the narrator can do. Only Fox and Vera can change their lives and those of their children.<br /><br />Thank you.<br /><br /><br />