Hi George,<br /><br />Excellent version!<br /><br />I just have to tell you that my advisor in the proposal is not going to be on campus this summer, but I didn't clearly indicate that because this might be a personal matter. So I don't want to be too obvious about it in this paper. Can I change it to say:<br /><br />
<p>I am staying in town&nbsp;this summer, so I will be available to commit full time, and interact daily with Dr. Anderson, or as often as she recommends and to progress, under her supervision, one cautious step at a time.&nbsp;</p>