<p>Hello,</p>
<p>I&rsquo;m almost finished the artwork for the Agency of Supernatural Protection and will be getting it edited soon, but I&rsquo;m afraid I will be finding someone else to do the edit due to errors you made when I sent the book to you last time.</p>
<p>I will try to word this in the most polite way I can, but I have some issues to point out with the work you sent me.</p>
<p>Upon further reading into the changes you made I found that you inconsistently changed &lsquo;toward&rsquo; to &lsquo;towards,&rsquo; you added the term &lsquo;shepherding&rsquo; and spelt it wrong, and you added lines that didn&rsquo;t make sense in the context of the story such as a line about how Alexis not wearing her helmet is a common thing when it first happens, which is implied nowhere else in the book and was an incorrect assumption on your part.</p>
<p>You also added terms that general audiences wouldn&rsquo;t understand. I showed two people the sentence in which you replaced &lsquo;rappelled&rsquo; with &lsquo;fast-roped&rsquo; and like me, none of them understood the term until I looked it up.</p>
<p>I realized in our messages I made the error of never mentioning that the target audience was young adults so there is some fault on me and you likely would have done some things differently if you&rsquo;d had that information, but that doesn't explain the other errors in the edit.</p>
<p>Looking back, you also gave very little insight as to how to edit the book aside from saying it was too short.&nbsp; You only gave some suggestions after I pressed you for them.</p>
<p>I apologize if I sound rude in this message, I mean you no ill-will, but I felt the need to express these grievances so that you know why I will be getting another editor going forward with my series.</p>