Hi,&nbsp;<br /><br />Thanks for getting in touch. I've corrected a few small grammatical errors while also trying to emphasize your hard work. You may want to check and see if they want you to elaborate a bit more on your semester (by giving some more details on your activities, coursework, and teaching). You could even offer an example or two if you think that would strengthen your statement. Just make sure you have your timing right-- whether you've already prepared/passed the exam and what you are currently studying or teaching. Let me know if you have any questions or need clarification.&nbsp;<br /><br />Thanks!<br />Katie&nbsp;