I would appreciate your correction of grammars, especially with the articles (a &amp; the's), which is my biggest weakness. I would also appreciate your review of the general flow of my writing and help with discarding any unnecessary words/sentences. As you mentioned, the authoritative voice is important as well for this document, as it will be submitted for the PhD admission.&nbsp;<br /><br />Thank you very much!<br /><br />Best,<br /><br />Jamie