<p>Notes:</p>
<p>(1)&nbsp;&nbsp; All the block quotations were translated from Chinese into English by the author, so they require editing too, although they do not require major structural changes.</p>
<p>(2)&nbsp;&nbsp; Regarding the total count of words, I deducted the number of Chinese characters and Chinese Pinyin (roughly 110). I paid for the rest of the words (6684).</p>
<p>Editing Instructions</p>
<p>(1)&nbsp;&nbsp; Grammar: please make sure there is no mistake.</p>
<p>(2)&nbsp;&nbsp; Expressions and choice of words: if there is a way to make any sentence sound better, please suggest.</p>
<p>(3)&nbsp;&nbsp; Punctuations: please check my punctuations and correct mistakes.</p>
<p>(4)&nbsp;&nbsp; Flow and Connection: please pay attention to the organization of the article and suggest ways to make it better (if needed).</p>
<p>(5)&nbsp;&nbsp; Content: Is the argument convincing to you? Does it make sense? Any suggestion to improve?</p>
<p>(6)&nbsp;&nbsp; It would be nice if the article gets a total boost up by your editing. &nbsp;</p>
<p>Thanks!&nbsp;</p>