Hi, Hsin:<br /><br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document, and I hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />Lots of changes and suggestions, but what a fascinating study! I did some background reading on&nbsp;Syundz.&nbsp;He was quite the thinker, and I believe you have done him justice. If only more teachers in the West knew about him and his philosophy. You (and he) really opened my eyes.<br /><br />Although I was careful not to change the content, please proofread your edited document carefully.<br /><br />Best wishes - George (TypeRighter)<br />I am usually available for editing between 6:00 am and 10:30 pm (EST). If my status says 'unavailable', you can still reach me via Editor World.