Hi there,<br /><br />Thank you so much for selecting me for this transaction! Based on your notes, I made sure the paper was in proper APA format, as well as corrected syntax/grammar/punctuation. I inserted a few comments of potential corrections you could also consider. However, I did not change the overall tone of the paper - also based on your notes. All suggested corrections can be viewed with the Track Changes option turned on in Microsoft Word.<br /><br />I hope this edited paper meets with your satisfaction. If you have any questions or concerns, please don't hesitate to contact me.<br /><br />Thanks!<br />EM