Good afternoon,<br />Thanks for selecting me to edit again! Never a problem - keep 'em coming!<br /><br />I like your topic and your points about a subject that has certainly been rehashed again and again. You brought great insight and ideas to the table in a well-written document.<br /><br />Overall, my corrections are mostly for ease of reading - grammar, some word changes, and parallel structure. There was one really long sentence I struggled with - I made a notation and gave you one possibility for correction, but there are many other ways you could restructure it to make sure it remains user friendly.&nbsp;<br /><br />One general writing tip: Try reading your work out loud. If you struggle to get through a sentence, it usually means the reader will do the same. This can be a really helpful technique for catching your own mistakes - hope that doesn't put me out of business!<br /><br />Thanks again for choosing me and please keep me in mind for future needs!<br /><br />And P.S. I sure hope we're done talking about the emails!!