Hi july15,<br />Your document is attached with my suggested edits marked in red using Word's track changes feature. I struggled to fully understand what you were saying, so I did make quite a few suggestions for edits even though you said not to change the contents too much. I hope I've understood your meaning well and kept this true to what you are trying to say. If I haven't, please let's work together to edit this some more and get your meaning and intent across. If you don't like my edits, write back to me and tell me where I misunderstood. I will re-edit until we get it just right for you. Thank you for choosing me as your editor! &nbsp;