Good afternoon,<br />Thank you for choosing me to do your editing!<br /><br />I made some significant changes to the wording. Here's my reasoning:<br />-At the beginning, you explained that 'you' means the trainer and 'they' means the trainee. But in going through the sample steps, those terms switched and 'you' because the trainee. I get why, as when you actually do the training you say "You learn to do this by..." But when speaking to non-native English speakers, I think that switch would be confusing. I worked to clarify that.&nbsp;<br />-Later on you seemed to switch these references, but I went with what you first explained as that seems to make more sense (that you're giving this presentation to trainers).<br /><br />Overall, the four steps make a lot of sense to me and seem practical and applicable. It is clear that you know what you're writing/speaking about and will be giving some great advice.<br /><br />Thanks again and let me know if you ever need anything else.<br /><br />Ryan