Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit another of your chapters. I need to have you execute a find/replace in the chapter I edited before, as at the first mention of NK defectors in this chapter, I indicated that hereinafter, they would be referred to as defectors. This will eliminate much redundancy in your thesis, as we know quickly that you are referring only to NK defectors. In case you are unfamiliar with this procedure, the 'replace' function is on the far right on the home tab. Click on that and type 'North Korean defectors' in find, type 'defectors' in replace, click on options and then on Match Case, and then select replace all. That will make a huge difference and improve the readability of the thesis.<br /><br />As before, ratings are much appreciated.<br /><br />All the Best,<br /><br />Nyanidoc