Thank you for the feedback. I am looking to have around 30 pp edited. I'm again in the process of applying to MFA programs and am using this for my writing sample. Please continue to make suggestions and if there are any questions concerning the material I would be happy to help with. Thank you and please let me know if you are available for the edit. I would be looking at the 5 day turnaround time. Thanks.<br /><br />Robert