Hi,

Are you the person who requested the sample edit? I only edited the first couple of paragraphs because it was a "free sample edit" request. If you turn on the "Show Markup" options in Word's Track Changes menu, you will be able to see the changes that I made. They were not very extensive.

If you would like me to edit the entire document, you can submit an order through the Editor World system, and I would be happy to do the job.

Regards,
MMC (TheWriteStuff)