Hi, Hsin (I really mean Hsin's wife):<br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document, and I hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />This looks like it will be a valuable paper. I wish I were one-tenth as fluent in Mandarin or Cantonese&nbsp;as you are in English.<br /><br />Best wishes - George<br />I am usually available for editing between 6:00 am and 10:30 pm (EST). If my status says 'unavailable', you can still reach me via Editor World.