Thank you so much for the excellent job editing the first chapter of Colossians. I will look forward to continue to work with you. I think I picked up somethings that I will try to pay attention to and learn from in the future. I'm very pleased.

And thank you for the kind words about my writing and passion.

It look me a while to get through this document as I've been traveling, but I wanted to get back to you with just a few questions and observations.

1. Not italicizing verses: I have been doing this for years, so this is a big adjustment, but I will take your professional opinion on not doing this if it makes it better. Thank you. 

2. No edits need to be made to verses. I copy (& triple check) them directly from the Bible, so I'm thinking my content needs to be true that that.

3. In my copyright, I mention the version of the Bible unless otherwise noted. Is this sufficient? Or do I still need the translation noted on the first instance of a verse?

4. Pg. 5 first bulleted list there are no periods, second bulleted list there are periods, then page 9 has periods. Which is right?

5. I am a designer too and I was pretty much thinking that the & in the titles would be used as part of the design in the book layout... but I don't want them to be used incorrectly... is that incorrect to use even for a design element?

6. Church vs. church. This is my thinking behind this... When I'm using the a capital C for church I'm referring to the global Church. Lower case I'm referring to a local body or assembly. Is this confusing? And suggestions?

7. Jesus's vs. Jesus' - I thought when something ended with s, you only needed the ' not the 's. I see you marked that in my text. Is this a style preference or am I using this incorrectly?

8. You had a question about this in the style sheet: "Capitalize He, His in references to God and Jesus, except in Bible verses?" That is correct, I guess I've always capitalized He and His. Is this correct, what is your suggestion. I want it to make sense for the reader and not trip them up.

Also, in your experience do you recommend several passes of editing or do you feel confident that most errors have been identified? I want a good final product so I am open to the possibility of this needing a second pass. I just wanted to hear your thoughts on this.

Again, thank you so very much for the excellent work. I will write a review for you.

Thanks, Juli