Hi, PaulBeat:<br /><br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document, and I hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />Although I was careful not to change the content, please proofread the edited document carefully.<br /><br />This is an impressive application summary. Needless to say, it lies well outside my ambit of experience, but I have, I believe, improved the idiom and flow. If I can be of further assistance, please send a message to me via Editor World and I'll reply as soon as I can<br /> &nbsp;<br /><br />Best wishes - George (TypeRighter)<br />I am usually available for editing between 6:00 am and 10:30 pm (EST). If my status is set to 'unavailable', you can still reach me via Editor World.