Hello Thomas,<br /><br />Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your dissertation. I think (hope) I have addressed all of the questions you had in the comments section, but if I missed anything, please let me know.<br /><br />You will need to include the transcript page for each of the quotes and so I have highlighted those to remind you.<br /><br />Due to the length of the document, I recommend that you set the view to 'Final' and read it in plain text without all of the changes to distract you. Then you can switch it over if there is a change you want to address (reject, for example).<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best of Success,<br /><br />Nyanidoc