Hello:<br /><br />Thank you for choosing me as your editor. I have made many adjustments within the document, and did not display them on the version I am sending to you. However, if you wish to see the changes, please let me know and I will send you a version that shows them.<br /><br />Also, I did not adjust this because it was not highlighted, but in the title, I suggest you correct the spacing to be truly centered, remove the serial comma (you for the most part did not use a serial comma throughout the text, and I corrected any instances in which there was one), and use a lowercase "A" in "Are."<br /><br />If you have any questions or concerns, please don't hesitate to contact me.<br /><br />Thank you,<br />EditPro