Hi Arnie,<br />A few changes that you missed and a few small revisions for your consideration. Also, I thought starting a sentence with And was considered verbotten? Three friends and me sounds awkward, your thoughts? Otherwise, I have done my first edit return. Make any additional fixes you feel are needed and I will hand over to Phoebe for her edit input and then you can do final edit like before. This seems to work pretty well as long as you are happy too!<br />Thanks Arnie<br />Andrew<br />Your thoughts on content and readability, interest etc...any advice??