Hi, Dominic:<br /><br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document and hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />The paper reads well and you give plenty of examples. It is still a little short of your required 10 pages (it is 10 with bibliography), but if you think it needs an additional paragraph or two, let me know and I'll see what I can do. I'm not familiar with the novels, but I might be able to flesh it out by, say, a hundred or so words. Otherwise, great job! Well done!<br /><br /><br />Best wishes - George&nbsp;