	(21787,1090,65,'Hope this is helpful.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-02-29 00:06:15','2016-02-29 00:31:10',NULL,'upload_56d34527390da0.72349885_Responses.docx','Responses.docx'),
	(21788,1090,65,'This is well-written text, so the edits are minor. Suggest not using italics in the chapter abstracts (not easy to read).<br /><br />Thank you.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-02-29 00:08:25','2016-02-29 00:32:06',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21789,2056,144,'Thank you, Dr. Kim, for the opportunity to read and edit another of your ms. It was very interesting.<br /><br />Please note that APA format is dbl-spaced.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-02-29 00:31:10','2016-02-29 00:31:10',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21790,65,1090,'ok, thanks','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-02-29 00:32:21','2016-02-29 00:32:21',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21791,3558,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your statement of purpose.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-02-29 00:47:14','2016-02-29 00:47:14',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21792,2559,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your precis.<br /><br />As always, your ratings are much appreciated.<br /><br />Best of success with the book,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-02-29 00:59:29','2016-02-29 00:59:29',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21793,3904,2750,'Hi, Emilia:<br /><br />Thank you for the new document. I\'ll start on this first thing tomorrow. The other two are coming along, and I\'ll have them for you later tonight.<br /><br />Best wishes - George&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-02-29 01:22:58','2016-02-29 01:22:58',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21794,3544,2750,'Well, Deanna, you did such a fine job on this document&nbsp;that I felt guilty about making any changes at all. I thought of myself more as a proofreader than an editor, but then I fell into my old habit of - well, polishing. Most of the edits are cosmetic, though. Happily, you can easily accept and or reject them using track changes.<br /><br />Thanks for doing most of the heavy lifting. You did an excellent job!<br /><br />I hope you enjoyed your visit to Montreal.<br /><br />Bonne journ&eacute;e&nbsp;- George<br /><br />I am usually available for editing between 6:00 am and 10:30 pm. If my status is set to unavailable, you can still send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br /><br />','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-02-29 02:11:18','2016-02-29 02:11:18',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21795,144,4109,'Hello:<br />Attached is the draft copy of a book we are working on with one of our clients. &nbsp;<br />We need proofreading/editing done to clean it up and ensure he looks professional without fundamental mistakes.<br />Please only communicate with me directly and not the author as he is our client. &nbsp;<br /><br />I can also be reached at <a href=\"mailto:Jeff@paradigmimpactgroup.com\">Jeff@paradigmimpactgroup.com</a>&nbsp;<br /><br /><br />We also need layout services to format the book itself with pages, headings, subheads etc. &nbsp;<br />The book will be a 6x9 format. &nbsp;I\'m not sure as to how that part of the service works to get this done of if it is completely seperate from the editing side. &nbsp;Please advise. &nbsp;&nbsp;<br /><br />Please let me know what else you need from our side.&nbsp;<br /><br />Thank you!<br /><br />-Jeff Dousharm&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-02-29 03:02:34','2016-02-29 03:02:34',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21796,3737,1772,'I marked a couple of sentences that could be removed if yuo need to shorten the letter. Make sure that the specific projects you mention are the most important, or most applicable to the requirements of the position.&nbsp;<br /><br />Please let me know if you have any questions.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-02-29 04:04:57','2016-02-29 04:04:57',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21797,3197,454,'Here you go, Victoria. I made changes without using the tracking feature. I hopw I caught everything you wanted me to. Take a look when you get a chance and let me know.&nbsp;<br /><br />Off to figure out how to post a review!<br /><br />Thanks,<br />Laura','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-02-29 05:15:23','2016-02-29 05:34:01',NULL,'upload_56d38d9b9ace52.91422968_upload_56d0f8c29e8ac7.12320252_Last chapters for Laura.docx','upload_56d0f8c29e8ac7.12320252_Last chapters for Laura.docx'),
	(21798,3197,454,'Okay--posted a review under laura g helms. Also, consider sending me your descriptive blurb to edit--I might be able to tweak it a bit to sell more copies :)','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-02-29 05:31:20','2016-02-29 05:37:26',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21799,454,3197,'Okay. I\'ll send it this week. Thank you, sis because I have no idea what I\'m doing sonce this is my first novel when it comes to promoting.&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-02-29 05:40:11','2016-02-29 05:43:57',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21800,3197,454,'You are doing pretty well so far!','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-02-29 05:44:37','2016-02-29 19:56:18',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21801,65,2559,'Hello!<br /><br />I need editing service just on the abstract part of the book and each chapters.<br /><br />Thank you!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-02-29 05:55:25','2016-02-29 05:55:25',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21802,3544,2750,'Thank you, Deanna. I was really quite pleased with the result myself. I know you\'ll make it perfect.<br /><br />Best wishes - George','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-02-29 06:00:29','2016-02-29 06:00:29',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21803,65,3904,'Hello,<br />If you can please try and keep this at one page minimum.<br />Thank you so much :)','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-02-29 06:01:20','2016-02-29 06:01:20',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21804,3904,2750,'Hi, Emilia:<br /><br />Here are both your documents. It was a hard&nbsp;topic, I know, but I think you have a coherent paper. One point: a source&nbsp;from Mitchell is needed towards the end of the paper. You\'ll find it where it says Source needed. Other than that, no problems.<br /><br />I hope my edits help.<br /><br /><br />Best wishes - George<br /><br /><br />','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-02-29 06:31:19','2016-02-29 06:31:19',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21805,3904,2750,'Hi, Emilia:<br /><br />Here is the other paper. If you have any questions, please contact me via Editor World. I\'m usually online until 10:30 pm, but I will reply as soon as possible.<br /><br />Part III tomorrow, so I\'ll be in touch.<br /><br />Best wishes - George<br /><br />','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-02-29 06:31:38','2016-02-29 06:31:38',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21806,3889,3321,'I want the cover letter to look professional. Please reorgainize the letter and correct grammar. <br />Thank you','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-02-29 08:48:49','2016-02-29 08:48:49',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21807,144,3355,'This is a blog post by our CEO which we will target specific executives of companies we are selling to. We want it to be compelling, we hope it helps communicate the value proposition of writing text vs. using visual tools. Thank you!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-02-29 09:01:28','2016-02-29 09:01:28',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21808,3321,3889,'Hello,<br /><br />Here is your edited cover letter. I hope you find it more professional and that it communicates your enthusiasm and qualifications for the position. I would be happy to edit anything else for you in future.<br /><br />Good luck,<br /><br />KK','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-02-29 09:59:23','2016-02-29 09:59:23',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21809,3350,131,'I hope you to proofedit this manuscript so that it may be free of grammar errors and awkward sentences. I expect your high level of professionalism. Thanks for your works in advance.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-02-29 10:21:43','2016-02-29 10:21:43',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21810,144,4103,'This is a transfer essay I wrote for transferring to another school. I hope you can help me revise the whole essay. 1. Help me keep a strong argument 2. Revise my dazzling sentences. 3.&nbsp;Beware of inappropriately elevated language&mdash;words and phrases that are stilted, pompous, or jargony. 4. &nbsp;Try to find the perfect words, the most precise and specific language.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-02-29 11:08:11','2016-02-29 11:08:11',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21811,144,4113,'This is my english class homework at college.<br />Here is the instruction that my professor gave me.<br /><br />Task<br />For this essay, you will use shakespeare\'s tragedy Macbeth as the basis of your analysis, along with our class discussions any other experiences you have had with his plays and sonnets. Do you think Shakespeare serves a useful purpose in a english calss? that is, is there value in studying shakespeare\'s work? you can examine this question on a general level or you might even think about this question in a specific context like our class. Is there value in trying to glean themes and ideas out of difficult versions of english? could students glean the intended ideas more effectively from a different text?<br /><br />I got 85/100 in this essay and I really need to get at least 93-95 to pass this class.&nbsp;<br /><br />My Professor commented at my work, so you can have a look. I was just wondering if you could revise my work based on my professor\'s comment and adivce.&nbsp;<br /><br />1. Go to Turnitin.com<br /><br />2. ID: <a href=\"mailto:konancars77@hotmail.com\">konancars77@hotmail.com<br /></a>&nbsp; &nbsp; password : Bugatti77<br /><br /><br /><br /><br />','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-02-29 17:45:11','2016-02-29 17:45:11',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21812,1772,4079,'I am looking for your expertise in revising the sentences, ensuring my punctuation is correct and that the beginning of this story has a good flow and is engaging.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-02-29 17:48:06','2016-02-29 17:48:06',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21813,2750,4113,'This is my English Homework essay at &nbsp;college.<br />I got 90/100 on this task and I need to revise to get a better grade.<br />I attatched the professor\'s comment in the file.&nbsp;<br />I was just wondering if you could revise this essay based on the professor\'s comment and make a better quality of essay.&nbsp;<br /><br />I appreciate your help.&nbsp;<br /><br /><br />','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-02-29 18:11:50','2016-02-29 18:11:50',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21814,4113,2750,'Hi:<br /><br />I\'ll do my best. If I have any questions, I\'ll be in touch.<br /><br />Best wishes - George (TypeRighter)','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-02-29 18:14:31','2016-02-29 18:28:41',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21815,144,4114,'this draft is an abstract in 250 words. I provided the instructions in the draft. I asked for the minimum deadline 2 hours but if could do it in less than this time I would appreciate it and please do it in word document','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-02-29 19:17:06','2016-02-29 19:17:06',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21816,144,4114,'I sent you an order and chose that I need it to be done within 2 hours when I submit the order I realised that you changed the deadline. if you cannot do it within 2 hours please refund me','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-02-29 19:23:14','2016-02-29 19:23:14',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21817,3904,65,'Thank you','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-02-29 19:25:31','2016-02-29 19:25:31',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21818,3904,65,'Thank you','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-02-29 19:46:45','2016-02-29 19:46:45',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21819,2750,3958,'Good morning! &nbsp;<br /><br />Hope you had a great weekend.<br /><br />I got my review from my professor. &nbsp;She said everything looked perfect but I missed to add specific experimentsituation to each goals and maybe one or two more outside source as reference.&nbsp;<br /><br />As soon as I am done adding theses, I will send the draft to you. She said it is a definitelyrics an A paper after the revision.<br /><br />I am so excited!!<br /><br />Thank you again and talk to you soon.<br /><br />Julie<br /><br /><br /><br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-02-29 19:52:08','2016-02-29 19:53:06',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21820,3958,2750,'That\'s wonderful news, Julie, for which you deserve the credit. After all, you did the heavy lifting. Hope to hear from you soon.<br /><br />Best wishes - George','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-02-29 19:54:40','2016-02-29 19:56:36',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21821,454,3197,'Thank you for the awesome review. <br />I will send the description from Amazon and you and fix it the way you think will sale. &nbsp;I\'ll send it through the system tonight.&nbsp;<br /><br />The attached document above is the one that has been edited?&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-02-29 20:08:40','2016-02-29 22:28:18',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21822,4114,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your abstract. As you can see, to stay within the word limit, I had to eliminate a great deal of the information, but I believe I have included the critical details.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-02-29 21:14:00','2016-02-29 21:14:00',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21823,3355,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your blog.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-02-29 21:44:24','2016-02-29 21:44:24',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21824,4103,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your personal statement.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best of success in your transfer application,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-02-29 21:57:35','2016-02-29 21:57:35',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21825,4113,2750,'Hi:<br /><br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document and hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />Where I made edits, I tried to keep your voice -- that was paramount. I wanted to keep the essay as it was. However, I made more changes than were strictly necessary, but you can easily accept or reject them using track changes. I agree with your instructor. You did an excellent job. You just needed to flesh out your answers here and there&nbsp;<br /><br />MS Word includes tracked changes by default. Before sharing this document, please consider running Document Inspector. To do this, click File/Info/Check For Issues/Inspect Document on the Microsoft Word menu bar.<br /><br />When you open a document that contains tracked changes, the document appears in the Final Showing Markup view to show that the document contains tracked changes. To review the edited document without showing tracked changes, click Review on the Microsoft Word menu bar. Then select Final: Show Markup and click the drop-down arrow. Choose Final. To show tracked changes again, click Final: Show Markup.<br /><br />Best wishes - TypeRighter (otherwise known as George)<br />I am usually available for editing between 6:00 am and 10:30 pm. If my status is set to unavailable, you can still send a message to me via Editor World.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-02-29 22:20:36','2016-02-29 22:20:36',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21826,3197,454,'Great! And yes :)','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-02-29 22:28:59','2016-02-29 22:45:28',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21827,2559,65,'This is so well written that the edits are minor.<br /><br />1. 10 vs Ten: Could use ten throughout or the number 10 as shown. Of course, the paintings\' actual titles stay as Ten.<br /><br />2. Centuries: A style point to either spell out or&nbsp;use numbers, just be consistent.<br /><br />I confirmed the word count limits are fine.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-02-29 22:58:56','2016-02-29 22:58:56',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21828,4113,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your paper. Shakespeare is one of my favorite authors, although it has been many years since I have read his work.<br /><br />I read your professor\'s comments and agree with them, although they are not issues I am able to address.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-02-29 23:14:15','2016-02-29 23:14:15',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21829,3399,3523,'I left a comment.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-02-29 23:32:37','2016-02-29 23:32:37',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21830,3270,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your essay.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-02-29 23:42:56','2016-02-29 23:42:56',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21831,3820,3389,'Hi there,<br /><br />Thanks for selecting me as your editor! I hope that you find the following to be to your satisfaction. Please take a moment and rate me on my profile - all feedback is appreciated! <br /><br />Thank you,<br />EGM','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-02-29 23:44:15','2016-02-29 23:44:15',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21832,3781,3966,'Hello,<br /><br />I hope you are pleased with the edit I did on your personal statement on February 28. <br /><br />I would greatly appreciate it if you could rate my services on the EditorWorld website.<br /><br />Thank you!<br />Wondrous Wordsmith','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-01 00:01:16','2016-03-01 00:01:16',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21833,3737,65,'You certainly appear very qualified. All the best.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-01 00:03:28','2016-03-01 00:03:28',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21834,3399,65,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-01 00:18:56','2016-03-01 00:18:56',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21835,454,2519,'please i need your help here. this is to apply for the certificate in this website. the question is to list the relation between my current work and stragic and decision actions.<br /><br />the course is in this webiste:&nbsp;<a href=\"http://strategicdecisions.stanford.edu/individual-participants/courses/decision-quality.php\">http://strategicdecisions.stanford.edu/individual-participants/courses/decision-quality.php<br /><br />t</a>hanks','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-01 01:16:35','2016-03-01 01:16:35',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21836,65,2880,'<p><strong>APA Format<br />Please Check References as well and Grammar, thanks<br /><br />NURS 5002 Discussion Board - Grading Rubric </strong></p>\r\n<p>Substantive Discussion Board Posting&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; =&nbsp;&nbsp; 50 points</p>\r\n<p>Substantive Peer Response Postings (2)&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; =&nbsp;&nbsp; 40 points</p>\r\n<p>Proper APA / Grammar&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; =&nbsp;&nbsp; 10 points</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; TOTAL: 100 points</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p><em>Substantive posts and peer responses are based on both the quality and quantity of the work. Posts should be no less than 3 &ndash; 4 paragraphs in length and peer responses should be no less than 2 paragraphs in length in order to provide the required details.&nbsp;&nbsp; </em></p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p><strong>Discussion board post covers topic with appropriate references. (50 points)</strong></p>\r\n<p><strong>Subtract 5 points:&nbsp;&nbsp; </strong>Informative post covering the topic but requiring some minimal expansion.</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 2 references are provided at minimum.&nbsp;&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p><strong>Subtract 10 points: </strong>Informative post covering the topic but requiring some minimal expansion.</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Only 1 reference is provided.</p>\r\n<p><strong>Subtract 20 points: </strong>Discussion points are covered but requiring moderate expansion.</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; References are cited.</p>\r\n<p><strong>Subtract 30 points:</strong> Discussion points are covered but requiring moderate expansion.</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; No references are cited.</p>\r\n<p><strong>Subtract 40 points: </strong>Few discussion points are covered needing significant expansion.</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; No references are cited.</p>\r\n<p><strong>Subtract 50 points: </strong>No points are covered and no references are cited.</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p><strong>TWO peer responses provide substantive thought and appropriate references. (40 points total - 20 points each)</strong><strong>&nbsp;&nbsp; </strong></p>\r\n<p><strong>Subtract 5 points:&nbsp;&nbsp; </strong>Original informative thoughts responding to the topic but requiring some</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; minimal expansion.</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 2 references are provided.</p>\r\n<p><strong>Subtract 10 points: </strong>Original informative thoughts responding to the topic but requiring some</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; moderate expansion.</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 1 reference is provided.</p>\r\n<p><strong>Subtract 15 points: </strong>Few original thoughts responding to the topic, primarily agreeable only,</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; needing significant expansion.</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; No references are cited.&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p><strong>Subtract 20 points: </strong>No original thoughts/responses to peers provided and no references cited.</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p><strong>Proper APA / Grammar throughout discussion board post and peer responses. (10 points)</strong></p>\r\n<p>1-3 Errors &ndash; <strong><em>Subtract 1-3 points&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </em></strong></p>\r\n<p>4-6 Errors<em> &ndash;<strong> Subtract 4-6 points</strong></em></p>\r\n<p>7-9 Errors &ndash;<strong><em> Subtract 7-9 points</em></strong></p>\r\n<p>&ge; 10 Errors &ndash;<strong><em> Subtract 10 points</em></strong></p>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-01 01:52:17','2016-03-01 01:52:17',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21837,1772,3737,'This document contain a cover letter and a statement of teaching experience and philosophy.<br /><br />','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-01 02:56:11','2016-03-01 02:56:11',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21838,4109,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your client\'s most interesting and useful book. <br /><br />I am not sure what all you mean by layout, so have a look at it, let me know if there is anything more you need, and I\'ll tell you if it\'s something I can do.<br /><br />If you could have your client let you know how he would like to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much if you could give me that rating.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-01 03:19:54','2016-03-20 18:55:12',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21839,65,3039,'Hi<br />This paper is not mandatory, but I want to explain what I want to do and what I have done to my professor.<br />My advisor had surgery and did not come to compus.<br />My topic is shyness children\'s experience in collaborative learning. From this semester, I am starating literature review.&nbsp;<br />I will send this paper with reference lists.&nbsp;<br />Thanks. &nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-01 03:41:54','2016-03-01 03:41:54',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21840,3904,2750,'Hi, Emilia:<br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document and hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />This subject was new to me, and I admit that my contributions are probably limited. I tried to track down Ze\'evi\'s article but was unsuccessful. Even so, I hope the edited documents help.<br /><br />If I can be of further help, please send a message to me and I\'ll get back to you as soon as I can.<br /><br />Best wishes - George<br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br />','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-01 04:21:23','2016-03-01 04:21:23',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21841,65,3039,'Hi, <br />this essay is a pervious section of the last paper I sumbit. &nbsp;<br />Thanks!!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-01 04:22:52','2016-03-01 04:22:52',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21842,1772,4067,'<p>Dear editor,<br /><br />This is my first time using this service.<br />I hope it can be a pleasant journey for both of us.<br />This paper is an exploration of a&nbsp;Chinese Christian church in Japan. <br />I plan to submit this paper to a journal titled <em>Studies in World Christianity</em>. <br />I have modified the format in accordance with the required guideline.<br />FIY, you can find the style guideline in the following address.<br /><a href=\"http://www.euppublishing.com/userimages/ContentEditor/1323866628995/SWC_Revised_Style_Guidelines.pdf\">http://www.euppublishing.com/userimages/ContentEditor/1323866628995/SWC_Revised_Style_Guidelines.pdf</a><br /><br />Please contact to me if you have any questions.<br />Thank you!<br /><br /></p>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-01 06:09:31','2016-03-01 06:09:31',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21843,144,1236,'This is a PDF file converted to a Word document and can be tricky to work with. &nbsp;Please let me know if you have any problems.<br />John','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-01 06:20:55','2016-03-01 06:20:55',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21844,4107,993,'Hello! Thanks for the opportunity to comment! Good luck with your piece!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-01 07:27:03','2016-03-01 07:27:03',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21845,4089,3350,'I did my best to create grammatical sentences in your paper. I wish you the best in your future writing!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-01 08:05:34','2016-03-01 08:05:34',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21846,2311,1163,'Hi, there:<br /><br />I have edited the document in the areas of grammar, sentence structure, flow, punctuation, clarity, consistency, spelling, detail, word choice, and organization. Also, as requested, I edited the document using British English and avoided the use of brackets; I also used Tracked Changes. It has been my pleasure!<br /><br />Thank you so much!<br />MasterEditor','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-01 08:14:21','2016-03-01 08:14:21',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21847,3889,2753,'Dear Editor,<br /><br />I am not a native English speaker. So probably there are many places need to be modified, including grammar, expression of the sentences or some other things. I will appriciate for your help<br /><br />Hua','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-01 12:17:17','2016-03-01 12:17:17',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21848,454,1792,'Hi Laura,<br />Here\'s a short one. \"I hope to get to you, \"We\'re off to Kill the Wizard,\" this week as well. Then, it will be a biggie, \"A Breath of Fresh Air.\" <br />Thanks,<br />Dan&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-01 17:31:52','2016-03-01 17:31:52',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21849,3039,65,'Good topic.<br /><br />The \"clean\" essay is below the edited one.<br /><br />Thank you','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-01 19:22:21','2016-03-01 19:22:21',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21850,3039,65,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-01 19:52:17','2016-03-01 19:52:17',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21851,1236,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your document. Yes, i did have a couple of problems. The second line on the first p should be in Times New Roman, but when I tried to change it, everything disappeared. Perhaps you can. All fonts should be consistent. On another p, I had to move a text box to edit the text that was underneath. I\'m not sure if the layout will be to your liking now.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-01 21:21:17','2016-03-01 21:21:17',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21852,2750,2467,'Dear George,<br /><br />I hope you\'ve been fine.<br /><br />Here I have yet another assignment for my Simulating Language Evolution class. These are just the answers to the questions we got from the professor, thus, it\'s a bit out of context. Sorry for that!<br /><br />Also, we were specifically asked to provide all references in a footnote (weird, right?), so, don\'t worry about it.&nbsp;<br /><br />Thank you very much again for your help!<br />Vita<br /><br />P.S.: Here are the actual questions if it helps at all.<br />\r\n<div class=\"page\" title=\"Page 1\">\r\n<div class=\"section\">\r\n<div class=\"layoutArea\">\r\n<div class=\"column\"><ol>\r\n<li>\r\n<p>What can we conclude about the evolution of communication from the simulations in Oliphant (1996)? Illustrate your answer with results from a partial replication of one of Oliphant&rsquo;s simulation models.</p>\r\n</li>\r\n<li>\r\n<p>What is &ldquo;innate&rdquo; in the systems being modelled by the e volution1.py simulation? What about the l earning2.py simulation? What do these correspond to in the real world? (You do not need to present any simulation results for this question.)</p>\r\n</li>\r\n<li>\r\n<p>When Smith (2002) talks about &ldquo;learners&rdquo;, &ldquo;maintainers&rdquo;, and &ldquo;constructors&rdquo;, what does he mean? Illustrate your answer with simulation results.&nbsp;</p>\r\n</li>\r\n</ol></div>\r\n</div>\r\n</div>\r\n</div>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-01 21:26:29','2016-03-01 21:26:29',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21853,2467,2750,'Hi, Vita:<br /><br />Great to see you back!<br /><br />I\'ve downloaded your document and will begin editing it shortly. We\'re expecting a big snowstorm here this afternoon. I hope the internet doesn\'t go down.<br /><br /><br />Best wishes - George<br /><br />100 km due east of Toronto','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-01 21:31:48','2016-03-01 21:54:18',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21854,2750,2467,'Oh wow! Stay warm (and safe!).<br />V.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-01 21:55:07','2016-03-01 21:56:44',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21855,2750,4114,'this is an introduction. it is more than 1300 words but I want it to be shorter (700 words) but please try to write it without missing important information. it will be an introduction for a published paper so please make it academic but not complex. I want it to be understood and in uk style','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-01 22:48:57','2016-03-01 23:14:46',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21856,2750,4114,'I would like to send you the discussion also&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-01 23:12:02','2016-03-01 23:13:05',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21857,3901,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your paper.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-01 23:12:37','2016-03-01 23:12:37',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21858,4114,2750,'I have downloaded your document and will begin editing it shortly. . If I have any questions, I\'ll be in touch.<br /><br />Best wishes - TypeRighter (aka George)','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-01 23:16:06','2016-03-01 23:16:06',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21859,4114,2750,'Not a problem.<br /><br />George','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-01 23:17:23','2016-03-01 23:20:33',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21860,2750,4114,'please be informed that I uploaded the new draft it is the introduction , discussion and conclusion. I already paid for the introduction and told you to make it in 700 words. I need you also to write the discussion and conclusion so that not be different from the introduction but do not decrease the number of words and please do not miss the refrence number for the introduction. keep them as they were. I will pay for the rest now and please send me them in one draft<br />thanks','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-01 23:28:23','2016-03-01 23:28:23',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21861,4114,2750,'Hi:<br /><br />Thank you for sending the second. I have already started editing your introduction, but Would it be all right if I send them to you by 4:00 pm that\'s (EST), that\'s 2.5 hours from now. I want to do the best job I can.<br /><br />Best wishes - George','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-01 23:32:22','2016-03-01 23:48:00',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21862,3337,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your report.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-01 23:41:22','2016-03-01 23:41:22',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21863,2880,65,'Fixed text and Reference as per APA. I didn\'t&nbsp;track the References changes, as usually they just clutter up the file; all good now).<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-01 23:48:03','2016-03-01 23:48:03',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21864,2750,4114,'it is OK','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-01 23:49:00','2016-03-01 23:49:00',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21865,3729,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your resume.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-01 23:55:11','2016-03-01 23:55:11',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21866,144,3729,'No changes were made to the uploaded document.&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-02 00:33:03','2016-03-02 01:50:02',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21867,1142,65,'Very minor changes. Format will shift after many tables are input.<br /><br />Well written.<br /><br />Thank you.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-02 01:27:49','2016-03-02 03:17:41',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21868,3729,144,'I made the changes indicated, as well as quite a few other, smaller ones. Unfortunately, I seem to have failed to turn on the track changes, so only one comment shows! :\\ My apologies. <br /><br />However, you should be able to see the changes fairly easily, and address the issues I mentioned in the msg accompanying the file.<br /><br />Best,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-02 01:54:43','2016-03-02 03:37:50',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21869,884,65,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-02 02:17:09','2016-03-02 02:17:09',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21870,4114,2750,'Hi, Ali:<br /><br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document and hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />First of all, thanks for the extension. This was a much longer and more complex document than I usually tackle in two hours. What you did, though, is excellent, and I hope my edits will help.<br /><br />As you requested, I reduced the introduction but I\'m sure by how much. We could probably cut it a bit more. If you would like me to put in some more time tonight, I\'d be happy to.&nbsp;<br /><br />MS Word includes tracked changes by default. Before sharing this document, please consider running Document Inspector. To do this, click File/Info/Check For Issues/Inspect Document on the Microsoft Word menu bar.<br /><br />When you open a document that contains tracked changes, the document appears in the Final Showing Markup view to show that the document contains tracked changes. To review the edited document without showing tracked changes, click Review on the Microsoft Word menu bar. Then select Final: Show Markup and click the drop-down arrow. Choose Final. To show tracked changes again, click Final: Show Markup.<br /><br />Best wishes - George<br />I am usually available for editing between 6:00 am and 10:30 pm. If my status is set to unavailable, you can still send a message to me via Editor World.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-02 02:22:18','2016-03-02 03:06:32',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21871,4114,2750,'Hi, Ali:<br /><br />This is your original document. I\'m returning it as is, having incorporated the edits into the second document.<br /><br /><br />Best wishes - George','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-02 02:22:38','2016-03-02 02:22:38',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21872,3842,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your paper.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-02 02:23:58','2016-03-02 02:23:58',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21873,144,4122,'I am getting ready to present my business plan to investors and I would like to make sure that my message is coming across effectively, and that my grammar and punctuation are correct. I would also like to ensure that the format and style are appropriate for my intended audience as the only other business plan I have written was for business school. I am also open to any and all suggestions.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-02 03:27:34','2016-03-02 03:27:34',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21874,144,3729,'As long as the changes were made. Is that the case? And reflected in the document&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-02 03:39:17','2016-03-02 05:09:09',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21875,144,1527,'Nyanidoc,<br />Please edit enoch\'s observation. &nbsp;Thank you. &nbsp;Julia','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-02 04:20:43','2016-03-02 04:20:43',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21876,144,4118,'I Wrote this&nbsp;letter to send a faculty member to get admission due to &nbsp;continuing &nbsp;my degree. English is not my mother toungue so please consider that and change sentences.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-02 04:25:36','2016-03-02 05:10:48',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21877,2424,2750,'Thanks, Ivan.<br /><br />There were times, as I read over your document, that I thought I was reading about me many years ago. I hope some of the editing suggestions help. They weren\'t hard to make because they were true.<br /><br />Once again, very nice dialogue.&nbsp;<br /><br />Best wishes - George &nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-02 04:54:28','2016-03-02 05:44:31',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21878,3729,144,'Yes, they are all in there, just don\'t show b/c of my lapse of memory. You just need to change the font of the second line on the title page to Times New Roman if you can--I couldn\'t, and see if the text box that I\'ve moved so it doesn\'t hide the text on the left is ok.<br /><br />Best,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-02 05:10:17','2016-03-02 05:25:47',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21879,4118,144,'Your file is blank. Please resend.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-02 05:11:02','2016-03-03 13:57:15',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21880,1527,144,'Thank you, Julia, for the opportunity to read and edit this observation. That must have been a fun class for the kiddies.<br /><br />As always, your kind ratings are much appreciated.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-02 05:18:55','2016-03-02 05:18:55',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21881,2519,454,'thank you','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-02 05:51:08','2016-03-03 00:31:37',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21882,3197,454,'Thanks, sweets. Let me know what you think.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-02 06:04:13','2016-03-02 06:04:13',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21883,1981,65,'Struggled with carryforward vs carry forward. I think I sorted it out (carryforward as adjective and carry forward as a verb).<br /><br />Also, use of italics was inconsistent on CSR Champions.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-02 06:51:04','2016-03-02 06:51:04',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21884,1759,1772,'I changed the text boxes into footnotes, and I\'m pretty sure that I aligned the correct notes to the correct place. I did not put a single table on each page, but combined them when I could. Instead of having N as the placeholder in the no evidence tables, I changed it to \"No Evidence\" so it was a bit clearer and looked a little more full.<br /><br />I made a few edits to the actual content, but just very basic grammatical stuff.<br /><br />Please, please let me know if you need anything else, or have a question, or if you need me to do something different.<br /><br />Thank you.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-02 07:59:56','2016-03-02 21:34:38',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21885,3737,1772,'In the Teaching Philosophy section, I added a bit to some of the paragraphs to sort of make a connection to why your themes make a difference in your teaching style.<br /><br />Please let me know if you have any questions.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-02 08:46:36','2016-03-02 08:46:36',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21886,4107,1772,'Please let me know if you have any questions.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-02 09:20:29','2016-03-02 09:20:29',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21887,4079,1772,'I made a few changes to wording and word order, so that I think it\'s a little clearer. The story sounds interesting so far! I hope to work with you in the future. Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-02 09:34:48','2016-03-02 09:34:48',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21888,65,1090,'dear editor,<br />just now I submitted my document to you.<br />please edit it thoroughly since the document must be very well-written<br />look forward to receiving excellent edited document soon.<br />regards,','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-02 09:35:45','2016-03-02 21:36:35',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21889,65,1594,'Hi Jackson <br />Finally I finished the paper. I feel fee now. Let me know if you have any questions. <br />Emma','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-02 10:49:27','2016-03-02 10:49:27',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21890,144,207,'Thank you for looking at this. &nbsp;We have developed our Apple iPhone app called SignRadar. &nbsp;We will be submitting our app to the Apple review board for it to be approved. &nbsp;The attached document is text that will be provided with the app. &nbsp;I\'m a second language English speaker. &nbsp;Please correct grammar, add and subtract word/sentences as you deem necessary (so as long as the core message is there). &nbsp;We are trying to convey what the app does. &nbsp;So if anything is not clear in text, please let me know and I will clairfy. &nbsp;Thanks again.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-02 12:31:01','2016-03-02 12:31:01',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21891,144,207,'Thank you again. &nbsp;The attched document is the instructions for the Apple review board of how to use the SignRadar Service. &nbsp;You should have two document in two separate orders. &nbsp;They are on the same subject but for different purposes. &nbsp;Again, if anything is not clear please let me know. &nbsp;Thanks.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-02 12:35:46','2016-03-02 12:35:46',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21892,144,3078,'Please edit for grammar, punctuation, and APA format','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-02 12:45:59','2016-03-02 12:45:59',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21893,2750,3958,'Good morning George,&nbsp;<br /><br />This season flu/cold made my youngest daughter sick twice. It is little difficult for me to add some sections while she was crying for me constantly. However, I was able to finish it. (I apologize if I made to many errors.)&nbsp;<br /><br />Here are professors\' comments.<br /><br />*&nbsp;Go through your essay and for each goal change the language from&nbsp; &ldquo;I would&rdquo; to &ldquo;I will&rdquo; &ndash; and make sure you&rsquo;ve set up an &ldquo;experiment&rdquo; for yourself to put into place during the weeks leading up to the end of the trimester. Here you might create a journaling practice for the next several weeks where you note strong emotions, your reaction and write up a reappraisal.&nbsp;<br /><br />*&nbsp;What specific experiments can you put in place with respect to your daughters and your husband?&nbsp;<br /><br />*Can you create a specific experiment for this goal? What actions might you take to build a stronger relationship with yourself?<br /><br />*\r\n<p>(1)&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; In the sections of the paper where you identify specific goals change the language from &ldquo;I would &hellip;.&rdquo; to &ldquo;I will&hellip;.&rdquo; and name specific actions you will take during the next few weeks to move a bit closer to your desired future. I&rsquo;ve given a couple of suggestions, but haven&rsquo;t made notes on each paragraph.</p>\r\n<p>(2)&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Include one or two outside references to short articles or online posts that aren&rsquo;t on the syllabus. This will move your paper squarely into the A range. Perhaps something that relates to your daughters?</p>\r\n<br />Thank you always!&nbsp;<br />\r\n<div>&nbsp;</div>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-02 15:13:24','2016-03-02 15:13:24',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21894,3958,2750,'Hi, Julie:<br /><br />I am sorry to hear about your little girl. The flu can be miserable&nbsp;even for grown-ups. But I know she\'s in good hands. There\'s no better medicine than a mother\'s love.<br /><br />Promise me one thing. For the next 48 hours you won\'t think about your essay. I\'ll do that for you, and I\'ll have it for you on time. Right now, you have more important things to think about.<br /><br />I\'ll be in touch - George<br /><br />P.S. Your daughters are very lucky. Their mother is amazing. &nbsp;<br /><br />&nbsp;<br /><br /><br />&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-02 16:13:00','2016-03-02 18:03:20',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21895,2750,3958,'Thank you for your kind words, George.<br /><br />I will not worry a thing about it. I know I am in good hands because you are my editor. :)<br /><br />I will take good care of this girl. Hopefully, she feels better by tonight.<br /><br />I willove look forward ton hear from you. Until then, take care.<br /><br /><br />P.S. I am sure you already figured out but I forgot to tell you that highlighted portions are doing added section.<br /><br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-02 18:10:56','2016-03-02 18:11:49',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21896,144,2699,'So glad you\'re back! Textpro was great while you were gone, but you\'re my favorite.<br /><br />Someone else wrote this article for my website. I told him that I\'d have it edited and returned for his approval before posting.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-02 20:41:32','2016-03-02 20:41:32',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21897,3523,2588,'This is a newspaper article. Please edit using AP style','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-02 21:11:05','2016-03-02 21:11:05',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21898,3523,2588,'Please use AP style','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-02 21:15:44','2016-03-02 21:15:44',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21899,65,3737,'This letter of interest cannot exceed 3 pages and I would currently need to shorten it. I would appraciate suggestions to make it 4/5 lines shorter.&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-02 21:18:50','2016-03-02 21:18:50',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21900,1772,1759,'Thank you VERY MUCH!&nbsp; For the most part this looks great.&nbsp; I want to get feedback from my advisor, too to be sure.&nbsp; I also, need you help as&nbsp; I am trying to cut and past these table into another word document which also has set times new roman, 12 pt.&nbsp; BUT when I do for some reason the far left column wants to go to bold font and I think maybe a different size too?&nbsp; As the word \"sub-dimension\"&nbsp; at the top left column of each table gets so big the N drops to the line below?&nbsp; I thought I was at least good enough with word to cut and paste, but this is so wierd and I can\'t seem to figure it out?&nbsp; Can you help mu understand what is going on with the tables that this is occurring?','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-02 21:38:44','2016-03-02 21:44:05',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21901,1759,1772,'I was having that problem too, when I was copying and pasting the headings for each table. I just had to manually change it. Highlight it, un-bold it, and then go into Format, Font, and uncheck \"all caps\". Let me know what your advisor says, and I can make any other adjustments that you might need.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-02 21:47:03','2016-03-02 21:50:43',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21902,1772,1759,'hmmm.&nbsp; this is frustrating for sure!&nbsp; odd.&nbsp; <br /><br />thanks for the quick response!! This is a huge project.&nbsp; I will have lots of parts and edits.&nbsp; can I use you throughout this process with more chapters, etc?&nbsp; \'Thanks again.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-02 21:55:02','2016-03-02 21:55:31',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21903,65,2787,'Hello,&nbsp;<br /><br />I know it is silly submitting this short document, but I intend to mail this letter out to many patients. Can you please check the formatting and professionalism. I appreciate your expert advice. My goal is to inform the patients about a fall prevention program that is no longer available, but that we have included a directory of available classes.&nbsp;<br /><br />Thank you,<br />Lindsay','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-02 22:12:29','2016-03-02 22:12:29',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21904,2787,65,'Not to worry about length. My record low is 18 words, like editing a haiku.<br /><br />If I overdid this note, let me know and I\'ll redo it. I put a clean copy after the edited one.<br /><br />Tried to soften the bad news and end on a positive one.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-02 22:27:59','2016-03-02 22:27:59',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21905,2699,144,'Hello Shannon. Yes, I have had a couple of long jobs recently: a book and a thesis. <br /><br />Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your colleague\'s piece. It is certainly a subject more people need to be aware of.<br /><br />As always, your kind ratings are much appreciated.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-02 22:52:22','2016-03-02 22:52:22',NULL,NULL,NULL);

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	(21906,207,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your piece.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-02 22:57:09','2016-03-02 22:57:09',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21907,2588,3523,'A quote from a citizen would be nice.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-02 23:08:53','2016-03-02 23:08:53',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21908,2588,3523,'How much is the project projected to cost?','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-02 23:15:35','2016-03-02 23:15:35',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21909,207,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit this document as well.<br /><br />As before, ratings are much appreciated.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-02 23:16:23','2016-03-02 23:16:23',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21910,3078,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your paper.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best of success in achieving your goals!<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-03 00:32:03','2016-03-03 06:12:42',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21911,454,2519,'dear sir<br /><br />i haved edited the file. i need your second review to it.<br /><br />thanks','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-03 00:32:40','2016-03-03 00:56:57',NULL,'upload_56d73fd87a3274.46445930_EW_66297_1-edited.docx','EW_66297_1-edited.docx'),
	(21912,484,2739,'Just wanted this reviewed before submitting it. The usual treatment I guess.&nbsp;<br />The different endings are for different schools.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-03 00:34:04','2016-03-03 00:34:04',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21913,3236,2869,'I am applying for a phd program in early childhood education, and they are asking for my philosophy of education. I tried to read some samples and write my own. but I am not satisfied with what I came to. I hope that you can help me editing my document so I can look competitive and qualified.<br />* English is my second language<br />* I appreciate your help on the grammar, structure, and polishing the vocabulary','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-03 01:18:14','2016-03-03 01:18:14',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21914,3889,3904,'Hello,&nbsp;<br />Thank you for helping me with this small assignment that I have.<br />The link of the article is attached below.<br />http://news.discovery.com/history/rare-charles-darwin-letter-will-be-sold-at-auction-160225.htm','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-03 01:28:03','2016-03-03 01:28:03',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21915,3904,2750,'Thank you for the great rating, Emilia. I\'m pleased I helped.<br /><br />Best wishes - George','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-03 01:36:07','2016-03-03 01:42:43',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21916,4122,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your ambitious business plan.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best of Success with your business!<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-03 02:07:53','2016-03-03 02:07:53',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21917,1772,3373,'This was edited by another editor who did a very poor job. &nbsp;I had a proof reader look over it and do lot of corrections to the typos, but still needs a lot of work. The readers are grilling it because of the grammar issues, saying they liked the story not the horrible grammar&nbsp;and typos.&nbsp;<br /><br />So I am going to pay for another edit. I do not have good grammar I cant tell what good grammar is suppose to be like. If you see something needs to be reworded go ahead. Also, one of the characters I named Shawn, did realize for a good portion of the book I began spelling his name Sean. &nbsp;I didnt catch that, neither did the other editor or the proof reader, but the readers sure did and BBQ\'d me because of it. Please change all Shawn to Sean where ever you see them. &nbsp;Sean is the correct spelling.<br /><br />You did a good job on my other book, hoping you can help me with this re-edit.<br /><br /><br /><br />','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-03 03:15:48','2016-03-03 03:15:48',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21918,1772,3373,'This book I wrote first, wasnt that great but still would like to have to re-edited. The first editor did a horrible job fixing the grammar and sentence structure. Like I said before, I dont&nbsp;know what good grammar and sentence structure is, but hardcore readers do. &nbsp;I hoping you can fix it. &nbsp;The story wasn\'t that great, but I would like the English and word choice to be better. Unlike the other book where people liked the story but not the editing, not many liked this story.<br /><br /><br />','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-03 03:33:37','2016-03-03 03:33:37',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21919,65,1090,'dear editor,<br />I revised your previous edited sentences as follows. Can you please check if these sentences are ok?<br /><br />\r\n<p>In this proposed research we will 1) evaluate the environmental effects of metal oxide nanoparticles\' interaction with existing contaminants; 2) assess factors affecting the removal of metal oxide nanoproducts (MONs) used in consumer products; 3) examine the effects of beach sand and marine microbes on the release, removal, and transformation of MONs; and 4) suggest a regulatory direction for consumer products containing nanomaterials.</p>\r\n<br />thanks in advance','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-03 03:58:32','2016-03-03 04:44:00',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21920,131,3350,'Thank you for allowing me to edit your paper. It was generally quite well written. My edits focus on smoothing out the English to improve readability. I did leave a note about the last sentence, as it proved to be somewhat ambiguous.&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-03 04:00:41','2016-03-03 04:00:41',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21921,144,3924,'<ol>\r\n<li>There is a Quaker saying: &ldquo;Let your life speak.&rdquo; Describe the environment in which you were raised &ndash; your family, home, neighborhood, or community &ndash; and how it influenced the person you are today. (200&ndash;250 words)&nbsp;</li>\r\n</ol>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-03 04:01:02','2016-03-03 04:01:02',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21922,1090,65,'I hope this is helpful.<br /><br />I have started your longer text and will return it to you tomorrow morning.<br /><br />Thank you.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-03 04:55:56','2016-03-03 06:36:58',NULL,'upload_56d77d8c8e7548.44873637_Text edit.docx','Text edit.docx'),
	(21923,3924,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your essay. Your descriptions were vivid and exquisite and your last sentence brought me to tears, perhaps because I am also a conservationist, or was in another season of my life.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-03 05:50:42','2016-03-03 05:50:42',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21924,2739,484,'<p class=\"p1\"><b>Thank you for the opportunity to edit your work. Please let me know if there are any issues, and I will address them asap.</b></p>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-03 05:53:32','2016-03-03 05:53:32',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21925,2519,454,'Here you go. Good luck.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-03 05:55:24','2016-03-03 12:38:51',NULL,'upload_56d78b7c565713.48194414_upload_56d73fd87a3274.46445930_EW_66297_1-edited.docx','upload_56d73fd87a3274.46445930_EW_66297_1-edited.docx'),
	(21926,884,65,'Thank you','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-03 07:16:24','2016-03-03 07:16:24',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21927,3904,3889,'Hello,<br /><br />I hope this is to your liking! I would be happy to edit anything else for you in the future.<br /><br />Thank you,<br /><br />KK','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-03 07:29:15','2016-03-03 07:29:15',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21928,2467,2750,'This is a really nice paper, Vita. You did the heavy lifting, I simply polished. I looked up K. Smith\'s dissertation&nbsp;on the internet. Needless to say, at 477 pages, I didn\'t read the whole thing.<br /><br />I hope the edits help. If you have any question, please&nbsp;send a message to me via EditorWorld<br /><br /><br />Best wishes - George<br /><br />I am usually available for editing between 6:00 am and 10:30 pm. If my status is set to unavailable, you can still send a message to me via Editor World and I\'ll reply as soon as I can.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-03 07:41:32','2016-04-09 03:52:48',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21929,2750,4114,'I dont like your work. I told you that I need it to be 700 words and you can check the repeadted parts and delete them or incorporate them together. I can give you another chance or I will request for a refund','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-03 09:06:16','2016-03-03 09:08:24',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21930,2750,4114,'I mean for the introduction','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-03 09:08:28','2016-03-03 09:18:13',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21931,4114,2750,'Hi Abughdy<br /><br />thank you for your message. I\'m sorry that you are unhappy with the editing. You\'re quite right, you did say you wanted the introduction cut to 700 words. I\'ll try again tomorrow and get back to you later in the day. If I have any questions, I\'ll get in touch.<br /><br />best wishes - George<br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-03 09:15:59','2016-03-03 09:33:17',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21932,4114,2750,'Hi Abughdy<br /><br />thank you for your message. I\'m sorry that you are unhappy with the editing. You\'re quite right, you did say you wanted the introduction cut to 700 words. I\'ll try again tomorrow and get back to you later in the day. If I have any questions, I\'ll get in touch.<br /><br />best wishes - George<br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-03 09:16:00','2016-03-03 09:32:32',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21933,4114,2750,'Yes, I fully understand. I think I forgot your original instruction when the second document arrived. I\'ll make sure that the introduction is reduced to 700 words.&nbsp;<br /><br />Best wishes - George<br /><br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-03 09:22:46','2016-03-03 09:31:48',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21934,454,4079,'Hi, I read your reviews and I am interested in your services. I am working with a tight deadline and hope I can have the sample returned within the next day or sooner so that I can determine if I you are a good fit.<br /><br />I will like specific attention to my sentences, imagery, grammar&nbsp;length of paragraphs and conciseness. Also, please advise if the contents are \"attention grabbing\".<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-03 12:24:57','2016-03-03 12:24:57',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21935,144,4079,'Hello, I am interested in using your services. I am working with a tight deadline and would like to see if you are a good fit. Please review my sample with specific focus on grammar, sentence structure, paragraph lenght and imagery.<br /><br />Would it be possible to have it returned March 4th by 10pm CMT?<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-03 12:28:22','2016-03-03 12:28:22',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21936,541,4079,'Hello, I am interested in using your services. I am working with a tight deadline and would like to see if you are a good fit. Please review my sample with specific focus on grammar, sentence structure, paragraph lenght and imagery.<br /><br />Would it be possible to have it returned March 4th by 10pm CMT?<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-03 12:30:04','2016-03-03 12:30:04',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21937,3389,4079,'Hello, I am interested in using your services. I am working with a tight deadline and would like to see if you are a good fit. Please review my sample with specific focus on grammar, sentence structure, paragraph lenght and imagery.<br /><br />Would it be possible to have it returned March 4th by 10pm CMT?<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-03 12:31:25','2016-03-03 12:31:25',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21938,3828,4079,'Hello, I am interested in using your services. I am working with a tight deadline and would like to see if you are a good fit. Please review my sample with specific focus on grammar, sentence structure, paragraph lenght and imagery.<br /><br />Would it be possible to have it returned March 4th by 10pm CMT?<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-03 12:32:56','2016-03-03 12:32:56',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21939,3130,4079,'Hello, I am interested in using your services. I am working with a tight deadline and would like to see if you are a good fit. Please review my sample with specific focus on grammar, sentence structure, paragraph lenght and imagery.<br /><br />Would it be possible to have it returned March 4th by 10pm CMT?<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-03 12:34:59','2016-03-03 12:34:59',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21940,144,4118,'I hate their website... somehow I couldn\'t recieved your message untill I open my email account. here is my document.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-03 14:02:16','2016-03-03 21:21:53',NULL,'upload_56d7fd9812c9d8.15132901_Application.docx','Application.docx'),
	(21941,2750,2467,'Hi George!<br /><br />Beautiful editing - as always! Thank you for all the hard work!<br /><br />Goog to know about your availability&nbsp;since I\'m in Scotland and it\'s a different time zone.&nbsp;<br /><br />Hope you\'ll stay with me over the summer as well - it\'s my master\'s dissertation time...<br /><br />Thank you again for your help,<br />Vita','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-03 14:35:39','2016-03-03 14:50:38',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21942,2467,2750,'Thanks, Vita. i\'m pleased I helped.<br /><br />My mother was Scottish and I spent many happy summers there.<br /> Good luck with your thesis. I\'ll do whatever I can to help.<br /><br /><br />Bye for noo - George<br /><br />4.47 am (100 km east of Toronto.)','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-03 14:57:57','2016-03-03 15:07:59',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21943,2467,2750,'Thanks for the generous rating, Vita. Working with you at your level helps exercise the old brain.<br /><br />Best wishes - George','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-03 15:21:39','2016-03-03 15:23:37',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21944,2750,2467,'No, no, thank YOU! I\'m so happy to have you!<br /><br />Very sincerely,<br />Vita','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-03 15:24:31','2016-03-03 15:25:24',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21945,4114,2750,'Good morning, Ali:<br /><br />I\'ve reduced your intro to 720 words, which you were quite right to request. It\'s a much tighter document now. I didn\'t re-edit the Discussion, though. I assumed it was ok.<br /><br />I apologize once again for forgetting your original instructions.<br /><br />If you think there\'s room for further editing, or have any questions, please let me know.&nbsp;<br /><br />Best wishes - George','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-03 16:24:07','2016-03-03 16:24:07',NULL,'upload_56d81ed70deed8.01932068_SDEW_66316_1.docx','SDEW_66316_1.docx'),
	(21946,2519,3130,'Thank you for selecting me to be your editor. &nbsp;If you like my work, please consider rating me -- every good rating helps.<br /><br />J.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-03 20:09:45','2016-03-03 20:09:45',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21947,4079,3389,'Hi there,<br /><br />Thanks for sending this over to me! I hope the sample edit I have provided gives you enough information for your choice of editor. Please note that I excel in meeting tight deadlines, and I\'m offering 15% off my price - you use the coupon code EditingGuru when you check out.<br /><br />I look forward to hearing back from you and working with you further!<br /><br />Thanks,<br /><br />EM','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-03 20:10:55','2016-03-03 20:10:55',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21948,1090,65,'For your review. Thank you.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-03 20:35:41','2016-03-03 21:50:07',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21949,454,4133,'Hi, I have submitted a draft Executive Summary for a construction financing memorandum. I could use a second opinion with regards to flow, grammar, and general presentation. It\'s an executive summary so it should be concise yet all-encompassing in order to provide a clear overview of the project, the request, etc. Thanks for your help!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-03 20:51:03','2016-03-03 20:51:03',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21950,4118,144,'I got it. Will get it back to you shortly. Sorry for the inconvenience. I\'m not terribly happy w/ the new website myself.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-03 21:23:07','2016-03-03 22:09:32',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21951,3399,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your report.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-03 21:37:35','2016-03-03 21:37:35',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21952,3899,4075,'Please edit for AP style, spelling and grammar. Thanks!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-03 21:39:43','2016-03-03 21:39:43',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21953,4118,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your letter--finally.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best of success with your readmission application,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-03 22:03:07','2016-03-03 22:10:00',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21954,1772,3373,'The two books you are editing for me right now, I will need an edited copy that I can copy and paste from that does not show the editing marks on it for each book, in addition to the marked up ones. &nbsp;Thanks, for your help.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-03 22:09:02','2016-03-03 22:09:21',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21955,3373,1772,'No problem! I am signed off of the website right now to give me time to work on your novels. If you need me, just send me a message and I\'ll get back to you as soon as possible.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-03 22:10:48','2016-03-03 22:12:39',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21956,3373,1772,'No problem! I am signed off of the website right now to give me time to work on your novels. If you need me, just send me a message and I\'ll get back to you as soon as possible.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-03 22:10:50','2016-03-10 03:01:47',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21957,4079,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your sample.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-03 22:21:25','2016-03-03 22:21:25',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21958,4075,3899,'Thank you very much for selecting my services, I hope everything meets with your satisfaction. These posts are very well-written and engaging; I only needed to make minimal format changes, and if I hadn\'t been working I would have been clicking over to read the articles in question.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-04 00:00:02','2016-03-04 00:00:02',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21959,2424,1772,'Sorry for the delay in this. My computer crapped out before I could work on it.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-04 00:50:38','2016-03-04 00:50:38',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21960,541,2657,'Please review the document entitled LitReview Chapter 2 &amp; 3 for proper grammatical usage, and the redundancy of passive voice. Chapter 2 is the LitReview and Chapter 3 starts the Methodology process. Your suggestion will be greatly appreciated to develop stronger chapters.<br /><br /><br />Thanks<br />David Williams','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-04 01:17:10','2016-03-04 01:17:10',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21961,144,4134,'Tnx you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-04 01:30:11','2016-03-04 01:30:11',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21962,2424,2750,'You finally did it, Ivan - some dialogue I cannot improve. &nbsp;Except ... see comment in document.<br /><br />Best wishes - George','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-04 01:50:49','2016-03-04 01:50:49',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21963,4118,454,'Hello, Steve. I opened your sample to edit it, and the doc is blank. You can resubmit by attaching to a reply to this message.<br /><br />Thanks!','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-04 02:00:09','2016-03-04 06:45:35',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21964,1792,454,'Thanks, Dan.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-04 02:38:56','2016-03-04 02:38:56',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21965,4118,454,'Please see previous message.<br /><br />Thanks','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-04 02:45:33','2016-03-04 06:46:07',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21966,4134,144,'This is your last free sample. I should not even have done this one. I will only accept paying jobs from you from now on.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-04 03:02:43','2016-03-04 03:02:43',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21967,4133,454,'Doc looks great. Let me knowif you have any questions or concerns. Thank you!<br /><br />Laura Kenney','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-04 03:09:36','2016-03-04 03:09:36',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21968,4079,454,'Please see comments within doc. Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-04 03:32:22','2016-03-04 03:32:22',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21969,3958,2750,'Hi, Julie:<br /><br />Here it is, all done and dusted. Together, we\'ve incorporated all of your instructor\'s suggestions and I think it\'s a better paper as a result. I\'ve proofread it several times&nbsp;but please read carefully just to be sure.<br /><br />I hope your little girl is feeling is feeling better. There\'s a big wide world out there waiting for her.<br /><br />And I hope her mother takes some time for herself tomorrow. It\'s Friday and she\'s earned it!<br /><br />Best wishes - George','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-04 04:21:35','2016-03-30 16:14:49',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21970,3389,3369,'<p><span style=\"font-family: Calibri; font-size: medium;\">Please make sure that the same descriptive sentence is used no more than once. Avoisd redundance. Thank you</span></p>','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-04 05:04:54','2016-03-04 05:49:27',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21971,3369,3389,'Hi there,<br /><br />Thanks for selecting me as your editor! I hope the returned document meets with your satisfaction. I went through the text for grammatical/spelling/syntax errors and also identified spots that weren\'t consistent with the formatting you had used earlier on. I also ensured that there is no redundance in the text as far as descriptions.<br /><br />Thank you again for sending this my way. If you are satisfied with my work, please feel free to rate my services on the website!<br /><br />Cheers,<br />EGM','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-04 05:52:46','2016-03-04 05:52:46',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21972,2753,3889,'Hello,<br /><br />I hope you find these revisions and edits helpful! It is a very interesting paper! I would be happy to edit any other document for you in future.<br /><br />Sincerely,<br /><br />KK','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-04 06:22:38','2016-03-04 06:22:38',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21973,65,3399,'Hi I need to edit this power point and present in front of my boss.My meeting starts at 10','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-04 07:28:12','2016-03-04 07:28:12',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21974,3737,65,'I don\'t usually take this long to turn a project around. Thursdays are full days with tutoring in the evening.<br /><br />The original was very well written and so the edits are rather minor. I tried to trim where I could to be sure the text fit on three pages. Now it does.<br /><br />I included a \"clean\" copy on pages 4-6 with all changes made. Fits well.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-04 08:03:04','2016-03-04 08:03:04',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21975,3966,3933,'ASAP!!!!!!! Please. Thx','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-04 08:14:38','2016-03-04 08:14:38',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21976,454,3399,'<p>Hello ;this is my first report for my first job I have to make it ready for friday noon I apprciate if you can help me to edit it in short time but extar accuracy.</p>\r\n<p>Thanks;Ashkan</p>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-04 09:45:34','2016-03-04 09:45:34',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21977,144,4132,'This is part of my literature review for my dissertation proposal, which I need to submit by Sunday to my advisor (a social psychologist). &nbsp;The purpose of this review is to inform my reader of the background and historical roots of my issue. &nbsp;<br /><br />For empirical literature, I was informed by my advisor to introduce and review the findings of past empirical research articles that are pertinent to my research issue. &nbsp;For each article, I needed to tell the Author (s) and (year of research). &nbsp;Also, I am supposed to do the following: &nbsp;tell the major questions the researcher(s) sought to answer; their sample; the method(s) they used; briefly describe their instruments; &nbsp;then tell the findings that are relevant to my study. &nbsp;Also, I was to discuss the implications of those findings, tell what important questions remain unanswered, why, and how will past findings or questions left unanswered shape my study.<br /><br />Lastly, I did not finish the conclusion, which I will be working on while you help with the edits and proof reading! &nbsp;<br /><br />Many thanks!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-04 12:28:32','2016-03-04 12:28:32',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21978,3399,65,'Minor edits to fix some grammar and spacing.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-04 18:04:39','2016-03-04 18:04:39',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21979,144,1527,'Nyanidoc,<br />Please edit gredmarie\'s observation. &nbsp;Thank you. &nbsp;Julia','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-04 18:27:05','2016-03-04 18:27:05',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21980,65,2956,'Please feel free to add to it and&nbsp; charge me the difference.&nbsp; This is for my review, I need to submit by 4:00.&nbsp; Please do your best for me please.&nbsp; i really appreciate your help.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-04 20:08:41','2016-03-04 20:08:41',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21981,4079,541,'A pleasure to read.&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-04 20:18:07','2016-03-04 20:18:07',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21982,2424,2750,'I like this one, Ivan. I liked it so much I practically wrote my own version.&nbsp;<br /><br />I tried to imagine an actor saying the lines. It would be hesitant and disjointed and the listener wouldn\'t be sure of what the speaker meant. An implied point is sometimes more compelling than a stated one.<br /><br />I certainly don\'t mean to say that my version is better that yours. Just different. Blue and green. Hot and cold. Sad and melancholic.<br /><br />I hope this helps - George&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-04 22:11:53','2016-03-15 01:51:01',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21983,3523,4141,'<ul>\r\n<li>Please pay special attention to</li>\r\n<ul>\r\n<li>tense shifts - what is the proper tense for a&nbsp;press release&nbsp;like this?</li>\r\n<li>Quotes and Punctuation</li>\r\n<li>Commas -- improper use throughout (I think</li>\r\n</ul>\r\n<li>First paragraph - is family-friendly mentioned too many times? An Alternative? Idea is that wives and kids are comfortable on a dry boat that is not likely to flip over and scare people...and stable sailing most of the time.</li>\r\n<li>CEO, Jay, doesn&rsquo;t like the word Revolutionary in the last sentence. Some options for revolutionary below, but we never agreed on one. If you can think of a better way to say it, please. He doesnt want it to sound trite, trendy, or too overconfident. But I need it to be the big punchline!</li>\r\n<ul>\r\n<li>ground breaking</li>\r\n<li>a new era</li>\r\n<li>breakthrough</li>\r\n<li>ground-breaking</li>\r\n<li>refreshing</li>\r\n<li>paradigm shift</li>\r\n<li>course correction for the sport</li>\r\n</ul>\r\n</ul>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-04 22:34:23','2016-03-04 22:34:23',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21984,144,3355,'<p>Greetings!</p>\r\n<p>Loving the help you are providing for our blog posts. This is another blog post, this time created by our data scientist in residence. The goal of this post is more straightforward, we want to highlight our product and provide some \"thought leadership\" on the proper way to componentize data science. The tone should be formal. In the CEO\'s own words&nbsp;</p>\r\n<div>- our \"voice\" is more professional and less conversational.</div>\r\n<div><br />Thanks for the great work done!</div>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-04 22:46:17','2016-03-04 22:46:17',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21985,4141,3523,'Please review the comment I left.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-04 23:26:05','2016-03-04 23:26:05',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21986,1439,3927,'Good afternoon.<br /><br />Thanks again for editing my husband\'s manuscript - Misdiagnosed.<br /><br />I have some questions for you regarding your edit...<br /><br />1) &nbsp;The last sentence in the 2nd paragraph of chapter 1: long term is not hyphenated. &nbsp;Shouldn\'t it be?<br /><br />2) &nbsp;In the prologue you have 33% spelled out, but in chapter 2, 10% is not spelled out. &nbsp;Why is one spelled out?<br /><br />3) &nbsp;Is lyme disease capitalized? &nbsp;In chapter 3, Dr. G paragraph, 2nd sentence.<br /><br />Thanks, Liz Pirola','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-05 00:13:38','2016-03-05 10:06:33',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21987,3523,4141,'Hi CopyCatch,<br /><br />I could not find your comment...<br /><br />thanks,<br />Meg Phillips<br />Stiletto Manufacturing, Inc.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-05 00:14:26','2016-03-05 00:18:38',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21988,4141,3523,'It should be in a bubble along the right side of the document.&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-05 00:19:21','2016-03-05 00:43:49',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21989,1527,144,'Thank you, Julia, for the opportunity to read and edit this observation.<br /><br />As always, I appreciate your kind ratings.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-05 00:28:45','2016-03-05 00:28:45',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21990,3958,2750,'Thank you, Julie.<br /><br />Always a pleasure - George','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-05 00:32:56','2016-03-05 00:45:09',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21991,2750,2424,'Thank you. Because these are quotes, I can\'t make drastic changes or introduce things that were not said. I want to make sure the grammar &nbsp; , syntax, and punctuation are correct, and stylistic suggestions can help, but when the new version is different, I am not sure how much of the original was correct and I can\'t use it, either. &nbsp;<br />I should have given you more context.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-05 00:34:15','2016-03-05 00:35:28',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21992,2424,2750,'Thanks, Ivan. Good to know. I\'ll do it again, correcting only the grammar and syntax.<br /><br />Best wishes - George','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-05 00:37:31','2016-03-05 01:00:54',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21993,2956,65,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-05 00:42:26','2016-03-05 00:42:26',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21994,3523,4141,'I am a mac user without MS word. Our company uses Google Business Apps -- so Google Docs. When I opened the file, it was all pink, with lots of comments alongside. I saw those. Is that what you intended me to see?<br /><br />thanks,<br />Meg','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-05 00:45:16','2016-03-05 01:27:27',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21995,2424,2750,'Hi, Ivan:<br /><br />Here was I thinking you were writing a novel - and a good one too!<br />My apologies. I\'ll know better next time.<br /><br />Best wishes - George','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-05 01:07:52','2016-03-05 01:34:49',NULL,'upload_56d9eb18a41915.15325604_SDEW_66363_1.docx','SDEW_66363_1.docx'),
	(21996,2750,2424,'I will make sure to always add a note. Sometime more heavy-handed edits are useful because the original is very flawed. Here, I struggled with the section \"words cannot describe the magnitude of it.\" I added \"of it.\" And the I deleted \"It\'s just that great. It\'s so great\" because of the rather positive connotations of \"great\" which is opposite to what the person meant. The only other problematic part was possibly the end with that convoluted sentence about vibrations. Thank you!','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-05 01:16:40','2016-03-05 01:17:31',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21997,2424,2750,'I agree, Ivan. Whenever I write an article and I\'m working with verbatim text, I sometimes change it to make it comprehensible. The obligation is always to capture the meaning rather than to record the exact words. Irony, for example, doesn\'t always work with the written word. It can be tricky.<br /><br />Best wishes - George','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-05 01:23:12','2016-03-05 01:37:24',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21998,4140,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your letter. Please note the comments pertaining to certain bits you need to clarify.<br /><br />There was some problem with the formatting at the end that I could not correct. Therefore, I am sending you a msg to which I\'ve attached another copy I created that does not have that problem.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-05 01:25:22','2016-03-05 01:25:22',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(21999,4140,144,'Here is the clean copy you should use after you\'ve looked at the mark-up on the original file.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-05 01:26:23','2016-03-05 06:33:05',NULL,'upload_56d9ef6f827621.77714315_EW_66364-final.docx','EW_66364-final.docx'),
	(22000,4141,3523,'Yes. That\'s it.&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-05 01:27:52','2016-03-05 01:28:14',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22001,2750,2424,'That\'s true, George. Are you really going to edit the original again. I almost did it myself but I would wait for yours before publishing it, if you plan to do it. I\'m sorry this became a lengthy and time-consuming piece. It\'s my fault.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-05 01:42:24','2016-03-05 02:02:10',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22002,2424,2750,'Hi, Ivan:<br /><br />Sorry for the delay in replying. I went for a walk. I haven\'t been outside for two days. Too cold. I sent the document about an hour ago as an attached file. Here it is again - with a light touch.<br /><br />George','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-05 02:04:29','2016-03-05 02:06:25',NULL,'upload_56d9f85d15c4f0.64227589_SDEW_66363_1.docx','SDEW_66363_1.docx'),
	(22003,3355,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit another of your blog posts. I\'m happy that you were pleased with my previous work.<br /><br />As before, your ratings are much appreciated.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-05 02:30:15','2016-03-05 02:30:15',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22004,4079,3828,'Yola,<br />As requested, attached is a sample edit for your review. To view a clean copy of the document, just click on the Review tab and replace \"Final Showing Markup\" with \"Final\".<br /><br />Please be sure to read the comments on the marked-up version, which address a few discrepancies.<br /><br />Cheers,<br /><br />ParlanceParExcellence','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-05 03:47:46','2016-03-05 03:47:46',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22005,144,4143,'This is a piece I hope to submit to local newspaper.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-05 04:10:08','2016-03-05 04:10:08',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22006,1163,3572,'Hi -&nbsp;<br />Please find attached document ready for your review and edits. Please use track change for all edits and additions.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-05 05:36:34','2016-03-05 05:36:34',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22007,3399,454,'Thank you!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-05 06:03:08','2016-03-05 06:03:08',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22008,4143,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your article. <br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-05 06:18:02','2016-03-05 06:18:02',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22009,2657,541,'An engaging and fluent text. For the most part, suggestions (in margin notes) relate to adding specifics and developing key ideas. Many of the concepts raised are important, but the scope of what is being related could be further developed, particularly as they relate to paragraph- and chapter-level arguments. <br />A pleasure to read.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-05 08:22:08','2016-03-05 08:22:08',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22010,65,1090,'dear editor,<br /><br />one of the previous documents you edited has been rejected and so I revised it again (I did minor changes-major contents are the same).<br /><br /> Can you please provide me your edited version on this document again?<br /><br />I look forward to receiving it<br />thanks<br /><br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-05 18:25:14','2016-03-05 19:30:27',NULL,'upload_56dade3a7163c0.46006989_doc (March 5).docx','doc (March 5).docx'),
	(22011,993,1734,'Dear QualityMatters,<br /><br /><br />&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Attached is a draft of an email that I want to send to a high offcial in my country to conveince him to support my research project. I wrote on the draft all the ideas that I want to communicate, but since I am not a native speaker, I believe the articulatation of the ideas are in a poor quality. Thus, I need you not only to edit but to improve as much as you can my communication of these ideas to the addressee. I set the word count higher than it is actually is (600 instead of 408) because I want you to do some extra work on making sure the ideas are expressed in an ideal manner. <br /><br />Best regards,<br /><br />Dr. Ramzan Alnoaimi','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-05 19:30:18','2016-03-05 19:30:18',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22012,144,1527,'Nyanidoc,<br />Please edit victoria\'s observation. &nbsp;Thank you! &nbsp;Julia','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-05 21:21:51','2016-03-05 21:21:51',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22013,2750,2424,'I don\'t think there are huge problems with the text , but, please, feel free to make more serious changes and edits, if necessary. Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-05 21:22:32','2016-03-05 21:22:32',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22014,2424,2750,'Hi, Ivan:<br /><br />I agree: there\'s not much wrong with the text. I made two or three minor changes, nothing significant. I thought, though, from now on, if I were to make any major edits, I\'ll either put them in a comment or in a re-write underneath. That way, you have the best of both worlds.&nbsp;<br /><br />One other thing. Since a lot of this is dialogue, I think we can take a flexible approach to punctuation. In formal writing, of course, we should use formal punctuation. But with dialogue. it\'s probably better to use it sparingly&nbsp;and just where it\'s needed. I hope that makes sense.<br /><br />Best wishes George','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-05 21:53:36','2016-03-05 22:31:59',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22015,1090,65,'Hope this helps.<br /><br />Thank you.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-05 22:01:25','2016-03-05 23:16:26',NULL,'upload_56db10e58f7f39.45058729_review1.docx','review1.docx'),
	(22016,1981,65,'Well written text and easy to follow the argument.<br /><br />Minor edits.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-05 22:02:54','2016-03-05 22:02:54',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22017,1527,144,'Thank you, Julia, for the opportunity to read and edit Victoria\'s observation.<br /><br />As always, your kind ratings are much appreciated.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-05 22:26:15','2016-03-05 22:26:15',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22018,65,4145,'Hi Sir,<br /><br />As part of my job, I am required to submit a skills to job description document. It is basically a justification to convince that I have the required skills to perform a the job.<br /><br />I have prepared a draft document. I am looking to make it better and more convincing and also looking for better ways to communicate my intentions in writing. It would be great if you can help in this regard. <br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-05 22:40:57','2016-03-05 23:03:38',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22019,65,4145,'Hi Sir,<br /><br />As part of my job, I am required to submit a skills to job description document. It is basically a justification to convince that I have the required skills to perform a the job.<br /><br />I have prepared a draft document. I am looking to make it better and more convincing and also looking for better ways to communicate my intentions in writing. It would be great if you can help in this regard. I am required to submit this to Immigiration office and a immigiration decision will be made based on this document. I request you to kindly help correct any mistakes in this document or rephrase it in a better way to convey.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-05 22:54:49','2016-03-05 23:05:42',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22020,144,4145,'Hi Sir,<br /><br />As part of my job, I am required to submit a skills to job description document. It is basically a justification to convince that I have the required skills to perform a the job.<br /><br />I have prepared a draft document. I am looking to make it better and more convincing and also looking for better ways to communicate my intentions in writing. It would be great if you can help in this regard.&nbsp; A decision will be made by the immigiration services based on this document. So it is of high importance from my employment perspective. <br /><br />Thanks,<br /><br />','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-05 23:00:32','2016-03-05 23:00:32',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22021,4145,65,'Thank you for the opportunity to help with this important document.<br /><br />I will certainly do my best.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-05 23:06:35','2016-03-05 23:08:41',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22022,65,1090,'thanks a lot!<br />you are indeed a great editor.<br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-05 23:18:32','2016-03-05 23:48:29',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22023,454,3353,'Hello, <br /><br />This is a short blog post. Please check for grammer and flow. If there is any feedback on how to make if more interesting/appealing, I would greatly accept that.&nbsp; <br /><br />Thank you<br /><br />-Julia','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-06 00:47:25','2016-03-06 00:47:25',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22024,2750,3904,'Hello George,<br />If you need to cut anything can you just try to keep the paper at 4 pages mininum.<br />Thank you so much again','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-06 02:25:43','2016-04-24 05:35:12',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22025,4067,1772,'I consulted the formatting guidelines for your endnotes and a few other things. Please let me know if you have any questions or would like me to look over something again. Thank you!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-06 02:34:31','2016-03-06 02:34:31',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22026,4132,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your literature review.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-06 02:42:49','2016-03-06 02:42:49',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22027,4145,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your statement.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-06 04:20:15','2016-03-06 04:20:15',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22028,1594,65,'Quite a paper and one of the more unique topics that I\'ve encountered.<br /><br />Good work.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-06 06:47:19','2016-03-06 06:47:19',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22029,65,3371,'Hi, <br /><br />Please help me to edit this book review for me. Please look at the word choices, expressions, and also the organization, flow, logic, and etc.<br /><br />Thank you very much!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-06 09:38:51','2016-03-06 09:38:51',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22030,65,3907,'Hi there,&nbsp;<br /><br /><span style=\"color: #000000; font-family: Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif;\">This document is an&nbsp;assignment&nbsp;from&nbsp;Harvard&nbsp;Business Review. It is writing a speech to&nbsp;convince a&nbsp;the&nbsp;University\'s&nbsp;board members to accept a donation from Middle Eastern foundation.&nbsp;Part of the money already spent on Leukemia research.&nbsp;</span>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-06 15:37:39','2016-03-06 15:37:39',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22031,3130,3603,'Hello, I am glad that you are available at this moment. :)<br /><br />This is my thesis proposal, and it has been delayed a lot due to my poor&nbsp;writing.&nbsp;<br /><br />I am currently doign advertising MA, and thesis is about a corporate health-promotion marketing.&nbsp;<br /><br />I am not confident about gramma, definite articles, singular and plural, and some expressions.&nbsp;<br /><br />I know that this proposal is length and 8 hrs is not quite enough to look into it closely, please take this seriously and improve it :)<br /><br />Thanks you again.<br /><br />Best,<br />Hanyoung','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-06 18:30:22','2016-03-06 18:30:22',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22032,454,3449,'This is a manuscript that I am resubmitting for review to an acadmice journal. &nbsp;Please proof for grammar and punctuation. &nbsp;I would also appreciate light editing for clairty or precision. &nbsp;If it seems like more substantial changes are needed, just leave a comment, and I can decide if its possible within the time frame that I have left to resubmit the manuscript. &nbsp;Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-06 20:36:33','2016-03-06 20:36:33',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22033,993,1734,'Hello dear,<br /><br />&nbsp; &nbsp; I am still waiting for your response.&nbsp;<br /><br />Best,<br /><br />ramzan','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-06 21:03:17','2016-03-06 22:06:02',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22034,993,1734,'Hello dear,<br /><br />&nbsp; &nbsp; I am still waiting for your response.&nbsp;<br /><br />Best,<br /><br />ramzan','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-06 21:03:20','2016-03-06 22:06:24',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22035,3389,3842,'Have to keep maximum of 12 lines (question 1) and 8 lines (question 2)','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-06 21:11:40','2016-03-06 21:11:40',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22036,144,1527,'Nyanidoc,&nbsp;<br />Please edit brandi\'s observation. &nbsp;Thank you. &nbsp;Julia','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-06 22:01:45','2016-03-06 22:01:45',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22037,1734,993,'Hello-thanks for checking in. I will have some comments for you within the next couple of hours.&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-06 22:08:30','2016-03-06 22:22:54',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22038,65,4145,'Hi,<br /><br />Is there an update in the document I submitted for editing yesterday?<br /><br />Thanks,<br />Nikilesh&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-06 22:22:26','2016-03-06 22:35:31',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22039,4145,65,'You\'ll see the reformatting (makes reading easier). Tried to reduce the repetition in the final section.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-06 22:28:33','2016-03-06 22:28:33',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22040,3842,3389,'Hi there,<br /><br />Thanks for selecting me as your editor for this assignment! I hope you are pleased with the work I\'ve done. I cleaned up the text a little and reordered a few words to make the sentences flow a little more smoothly.<br /><br />If you are satisfied with my work, please consider rating me on my editor page - thanks!<br /><br />Cheers,<br />EGM','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-06 22:31:08','2016-03-06 22:31:08',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22041,4145,65,'Good to hear from you. I sent it just 2-3 minutes ago.<br /><br />You should have it now.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-06 22:36:07','2016-03-06 22:39:53',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22042,3389,3842,'Must keep this to 46 lines as a maximum.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-06 22:44:53','2016-03-06 22:44:53',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22043,3907,65,'Good speech until near the end when after describing the need for funds for research, you advise rejecting the remaining 3 million. This contradicts most of the text up to that point.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-06 23:00:27','2016-03-06 23:00:27',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22044,3842,3389,'Hi,<br /><br />Thanks for the new assignment! It is appreciated. <br /><br />Cheers,<br />EGM','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-06 23:08:41','2016-03-06 23:08:41',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22045,1527,144,'Thank you, Julia, for the opportunity to read and edit Brandi\'s observation.<br /><br />Thank you, as always, for your kind ratings.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 00:04:56','2016-03-07 00:04:56',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22046,3927,1439,'Hi Liz,&nbsp;<br /><br />1. Hyphenating long term is a stylistic choice, so there\'s no right or wrong. I chose not to hyphenate.&nbsp;<br /><br />2. All percentages should be spelled out, according to Chicago Style (which I used in editing this memoir).&nbsp;<br /><br />3. The L in Lyme disease should be capitalized.&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 00:45:31','2016-03-07 05:13:36',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22047,1772,1759,'Hi again.&nbsp; I have gone through the tables and realized that one of the tables for U4 is missing.&nbsp; I believe it is the without evidence table.&nbsp; Also one of the tables has \"none\" rather than no evidence.&nbsp; I can change this too if needed.&nbsp; not a big deal. but I do need assitance with the missing table.&nbsp; could you please help me make this correction?<br /><br />thanks.<br />stacia','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 00:45:58','2016-03-07 01:12:53',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22048,3371,65,'Overall, well written. I divided a few of the longer paragraphs.<br /><br />Most of the edits are word choices, or to combine sentences.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 01:00:23','2016-03-07 01:00:23',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22049,144,3922,'Hello,&nbsp;<br /><br />This is my preliminary research focus essay on racial politics for my Core Brazil class in university. The use of I is permitted (even encouraged), and the Professor&nbsp;wants us to address mostly the&nbsp;process rather than simply the content of the research. Thank you!&nbsp;<br /><br />Sincerely,&nbsp;<br />Jae&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 01:03:51','2016-03-07 01:03:51',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22050,1759,1772,'I apologize for that. I have inserted the missing table. The only thing, in the original document, it showed two \"N\" entries, for what looked like 4.2 and 4.3, but also looked like there was evidence for 4.3. What I have right now just has 4.2 as having no evidence, but if you want to check the orginal and make sure, I can change it again. I also fixed the None, No Evidence thing.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 01:23:04','2016-03-07 01:55:14',NULL,'upload_56dc91a8db5e31.87172499_EW_66262.docx','EW_66262.docx'),
	(22051,1734,993,'Hello. Thanks for the opportunity to assist with this important email. I think you absolutely had all the elements you needed; I proposed a different opening sentence and some reordering. It\'s a strong presentation. See my comments in the attached - happy to clarify further and wish you the best of luck with this.<br /><br />Ben','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 01:26:24','2016-03-07 01:51:29',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22052,1734,993,'Hello. I just uploaded your file - had some computer difficulties; my apologies. Best of luck!<br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 01:28:06','2016-03-07 01:51:03',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22053,1772,1759,'no worries!&nbsp; Thanks for doing is so quickly!&nbsp;&nbsp; <br /><br />And you were correct in your interrpretation of that only 4.2 was without.&nbsp; Sorry it was so confusing!&nbsp; <br /><br />I plan to send some more data to you today for help.<br /><br />thanks so much!&nbsp; <br />stacia','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 01:57:22','2016-03-07 01:59:45',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22054,1759,1772,'Thanks for understanding :) Send me a meesage when you\'re ready to upload the new data. I\'m set up as unavailable right now, but will sign back on when you need me to.&nbsp;<br /><br />Thank you!','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 02:02:03','2016-03-07 10:00:33',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22055,144,1778,'Dear Editor NYANIDOC,<br /><br />This is an academic paper for submitting to a journal.<br /><br />Thank you in advance,<br />Best regards,<br />Zhan','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 03:46:49','2016-03-07 03:46:49',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22056,1439,3927,'Thanks. &nbsp;<br /><br />1) &nbsp;There were a few percentages which were not spelled out. &nbsp;I will go back and fix those.<br /><br />2) &nbsp;Lyme disease was not capitalized. &nbsp;I will go back and fix that too.<br /><br />3) &nbsp;Is 36 hours spelled out or left in numeric form?<br /><br />4) &nbsp;Is<em> home front</em> 2 words, or 1 word?<br /><br />Thanks,<br /><br />Liz Pirola','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 05:16:29','2016-03-07 06:04:57',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22057,144,3353,'Hello,<br /><br />This is a blog post, and I mostly am interested in flow. &nbsp;If there is anything you can suggest to make it more interesting/appealing, I would be interested in it.<br /><br />~Julia','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 06:19:16','2016-03-07 06:19:16',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22058,65,1142,'Thank you so much!','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 07:45:58','2016-03-07 17:19:59',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22059,144,2880,'<p><strong>APN Core Competency Exploration Assignment</strong></p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p><strong>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</strong><strong>Advanced Practice Nursing (APN) Core Competency Exploration Assignment </strong></p>\r\n<p>Choose one of the following options below to explore how the core competencies listed in Fig 3-3 on page 77 of your textbook are utilized within APN. Use a minimum of two APN core competencies when writing your exploration paper.&nbsp; This assignment <strong><em>must</em></strong> follow APA 6<sup>th</sup> Edition format with the inclusion of a title page, running head, proper headings, citations, references, and grammar.&nbsp; Papers with more than 10 APA errors will be returned to the student and will not be graded.&nbsp; Grading will follow the grading rubric posted in Module 3.&nbsp; This paper <strong>should be submitted as an attachment in the Module 3 assignment function</strong> by the <strong><em>due date of 3/10/16 by midnight.</em></strong>&nbsp; No late papers will be accepted.&nbsp; Make sure to use references, in addition to your textbook, to support your APN core competency exploration.&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;</p>\r\n<ol>\r\n<li>Visit a professional organization (e.g. Texas Nurse Practitioners) or a certifying body website (e.g. American Association of Nurse Practitioners) that applies to your specialty area.&nbsp; Navigate the website and provide the following information listed below:&nbsp;</li>\r\n<li>Attend a professional APN organization meeting that applies to your specialty area.&nbsp; After attending the meeting, provide the following information listed below:</li>\r\n<li>Interview / shadow an APRN within your specialty area (e.g. Family, Woman&rsquo;s Health, etc.).&nbsp; <strong><em>Observations that require any clinical / organizational paperwork, such as hospital paperwork, to be filled out will not be allowed.</em></strong>&nbsp; Provide the following information listed below:&nbsp;&nbsp;</li>\r\n<li>Based on the option you chose, provide the following information:</li>\r\n</ol>\r\n<p>Option A: Provide your own definition of APN, as well as the definition offered within the website you visited.&nbsp; Provide your general thoughts about APN.&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>Option B: Specify the organization, date, and location of the meeting you attended.&nbsp; Summarize the activities and discussions of the meeting.&nbsp; Provide your general thoughts about APN.</p>\r\n<p>Option C: Specify the type of practice and the actual position of the APRN (e.g. private family practice, an FNP).&nbsp; Submit a summary of the interview or observation (remember to do this in APA format, do not just list your interview questions but summarize in paragraph format). &nbsp;Provide your general thoughts about APN practice.&nbsp;&nbsp;</p>\r\n<ol start=\"2\">\r\n<li>Based on the option you chose, explore your two chosen APN core competencies utilized in either the website, meeting, or by the interviewed/observed APRN.&nbsp;<ol>\r\n<li>Provide examples of how your two competencies are utilized within the website, meeting, or daily functions of the APRN.&nbsp;</li>\r\n<li>Using your two competencies, now provide further expansion, through detailed examples, of their importance within APN. &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</li>\r\n</ol></li>\r\n<li>Based on the option you chose, describe something new that you learned about the APN core competencies through either your navigation of the website, your interaction and observation at the meeting, or through your interaction and observation of the APRN.&nbsp; Was the new information helpful to you?&nbsp; Will this new information affect your pursuit of an APN degree?</li>\r\n</ol>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<table width=\"709\">\r\n<tbody>\r\n<tr>\r\n<td width=\"103\">\r\n<p>Component</p>\r\n</td>\r\n<td width=\"558\">\r\n<p>Details</p>\r\n</td>\r\n<td width=\"48\">\r\n<p>Points</p>\r\n</td>\r\n</tr>\r\n<tr>\r\n<td width=\"103\">\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>1. Based on the option of your choice, address all points requested in the assignment instructions.</p>\r\n<p>The length of the paper should be a minimum of three pages, not counting the title page and reference page(s), in order to provide adequate substantive analysis and detailed information on the topic. No late papers will be accepted.</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n</td>\r\n<td width=\"558\">\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>Grading of narrative elements:</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<ol>\r\n<li>Your general thoughts regarding APN and information requested from the rubric (definitions, meeting details, observation details) are provided with: [<strong>Total possible points &ndash; 15</strong>]:</li>\r\n</ol>\r\n<ul>\r\n<li>Substantive detail (15 points)</li>\r\n<li>Some substantive detail provided; however, expansion on the topic is needed (10 points)</li>\r\n<li>Little substantive detail is provided requiring significant expansion (5 points)</li>\r\n<li>No description of general thoughts (0 points)</li>\r\n</ul>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<ol start=\"2\">\r\n<li>Pick two (2) of Hamric&rsquo;s APN core competencies. Identify them with specific examples from the website, meeting, or interview/observation. Information provided with: [<strong>Total points possible &ndash; 30 (15 for each listed competency)</strong>]:</li>\r\n</ol>\r\n<ul>\r\n<li>Substantive detail (15 points)</li>\r\n<li>Some substantive detail provided; however, expansion on the topic is needed (10 points)</li>\r\n<li>Little substantive detail is provided requiring significant expansion (5 points)</li>\r\n<li>No description of general thoughts (0 points)</li>\r\n</ul>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<ol start=\"3\">\r\n<li>Using your two competencies above, provide detailed expansion in regards to their importance to APN and how they are employed within APN. Information provided with: [<strong>Total possible points &ndash; 30 (15 for each listed competency)</strong>]:</li>\r\n</ol>\r\n<ul>\r\n<li>Substantive detail (15 points)</li>\r\n<li>Some substantive detail provided; however, expansion on the topic is needed (10 points)</li>\r\n<li>Little substantive detail is provided requiring significant expansion (5 points)</li>\r\n<li>No description of general thoughts (0 points)</li>\r\n</ul>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<ol start=\"4\">\r\n<li>Description of any new information learned regarding the APN core competencies through the website review, meeting, or observation, whether the information was helpful, and whether it would affect your pursuit of an APN degree is provided with: [<strong>Total possible points &ndash; 15</strong>]. &nbsp;</li>\r\n</ol>\r\n<ul>\r\n<li>Substantive detail (15 points)</li>\r\n<li>Some substantive detail provided; however, expansion on the topic is needed (10 points)</li>\r\n<li>Little substantive detail is provided requiring significant expansion (5 points)</li>\r\n<li>No description of general thoughts (0 points)</li>\r\n</ul>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n</td>\r\n<td width=\"48\">\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>/15</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>/30</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>/30</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>/15</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p><strong>/90</strong></p>\r\n</td>\r\n</tr>\r\n<tr>\r\n<td width=\"103\">\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>2.&nbsp;&nbsp; Adherence to APA guidelines and grammar</p>\r\n</td>\r\n<td width=\"558\">\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>Grading of APA formatting and grammar:</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>-&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 1 &ndash; 3 Errors &ndash; Subtract 1 &ndash; 3 pt&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>-&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 4 &ndash; 6 Errors &ndash; Subtract 4 &ndash; 6 pts</p>\r\n<p>-&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 7 &ndash; 9 Errors &ndash; Subtract 7 &ndash; 9 pts</p>\r\n<p>-&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; <strong>&ge; </strong>10 Errors &ndash; Subtract 10 pts</p>\r\n<p><strong>&nbsp;</strong></p>\r\n</td>\r\n<td width=\"48\">\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p><strong>/10</strong></p>\r\n</td>\r\n</tr>\r\n<tr>\r\n<td width=\"103\">\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n</td>\r\n<td width=\"558\">\r\n<p><strong>&nbsp;</strong></p>\r\n<p><strong>TOTAL:</strong></p>\r\n</td>\r\n<td width=\"48\">\r\n<p><strong>&nbsp;</strong></p>\r\n</td>\r\n</tr>\r\n</tbody>\r\n</table>\r\n<p><strong>NURS 5002 &ndash; APN Core Competency Exploration Assignment Grading Rubric</strong></p>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 08:26:52','2016-03-07 08:26:52',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22060,474,1877,'Hello,<br /><br />This is a brief write up assignment for an English class. I had to translate a letter from Ovid\'s\r\n<div><em>Heroides.&nbsp;</em>I want a second set of eyes to edit and read over my work. Please note there is no formal introduction, which is because the nature of the assignment.<br /><br /><br />Thanks in advance!<br /><br />Dominic&nbsp;</div>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 08:35:31','2016-03-07 08:35:31',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22061,1877,474,'In addition to editing for clarity and grammar, I made a couple notes about formatting for MLA style. I didn\'t change the paper to MLA style formatting because, given your note that there need not be a formal introduction, I thought your professor might also have requested certain adjustments to traditional MLA formatting. Another overall note: your writeup uses hyphens instead of em-dashes to mark phrases that are asides. To properly set aside a phrase in dashes, you should use two unspaced hyphens on either side of the phrase rather than a hyphen and a space on either side. My commentary includes questions and prompts to get your writing a little more focused in some spots, so please let me know if you have follow-up questions or want me to take another look at a revised section of this assignment. I want to make sure you get the five-star editing job you deserve!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 09:28:07','2016-03-07 09:28:07',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22062,3572,1163,'Hi, there:<br /><br />I edited the document in the areas of grammar, sentence structure, flow, punctuation, clarity, consistency, spelling, detail, word choice, and organization.<br /><br />Thank you; it has been my pleasure!<br /><br />Sincerley,<br />MasterEditor','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 09:32:44','2016-03-07 09:32:44',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22063,1772,1759,'HI again.&nbsp; I didn\'t realize you were signed up as unavailable.&nbsp; If you are too busy<strong> please</strong> let me know!&nbsp; I am ready to upload more data for APA Tables.&nbsp; Not sure of best tables to use for these though.&nbsp; Looking for your help with best layout, just has to be APA.<br /><br />&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 10:03:25','2016-03-07 10:04:58',NULL,'upload_56dd0b9ddc45a9.64363727_Overview of Results  Rough Draft.docx','Overview of Results  Rough Draft.docx'),
	(22064,1772,1759,'I attached the file in the previous message just for you to view.&nbsp; Please don\'t feel obligated to take the job, again, I didn\'t think to check if you&nbsp; were available for editiing!&nbsp; <br /><br />thanks.<br />stacia','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 10:04:32','2016-03-07 10:07:22',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22065,1759,1772,'I totally have time for it, no worries. I\'m signed back in now, so feel free to upload the file there. I\'ll look at it more closely and figure out the best layouts for the new information.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 10:09:35','2016-03-07 10:09:35',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22066,1772,1759,'Please help me put these basci word tables of data into appropritae type of APA style tables.&nbsp; I hope that the tables are clear&nbsp;and data is understandable.&nbsp;&nbsp;I have put a title above each individual one.&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;I am relying on your expertise to&nbsp;help with best reader friendly layout (as long as it is APA style).<br /><br />Thanks&nbsp;so much!!!!<br />stacia&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 12:52:13','2016-03-07 12:52:13',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22067,144,4114,'please be informed that I only need a couple of things to do so please do them as soon as you can as I need to submit my draft before 12 pm<br />1- I need you to do a content page (table of content)<br />2- I have some problems in tables I could not change them (some words are separate eg unwillingness in COM-B tabel and there are many so you may need to maximise the table or change it and also there is a space&nbsp;between&nbsp;Table 2: Quality assessment of studies included in the review and the table if I ried to meke the together the table become separate. in&nbsp;Table 1: Description of Studies Included in the Review there is one word at the end become alone, if it is possible to fit with table it will be good. page number 47 (certeficate of attendance) just formating and remove the extra page. that is all what I want. I am not sure if this need number of words but if it is more than what I ordered I will pay for the extra','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 15:19:11','2016-03-07 15:19:11',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22068,144,4114,'have you finished my work?<br /><br />','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 17:00:01','2016-03-07 17:00:01',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22069,144,4114,'the time is already passed I ordered for 2 hours service','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 17:40:33','2016-03-07 17:40:33',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22070,65,3223,'please check the grammar, references. Also, If you see some sentences need some arrengement in the paregraph please do. This assignment worth a lot please do your best.If some words need to be replaced by stronge words do it. I have to submit it by Wednesday morning, so as soon as you finsh is the better. &nbsp; &nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 17:56:45','2016-03-07 17:56:45',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22071,144,4114,'I want to cancel the order. I have donr it myself. thanks','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 18:24:24','2016-03-07 22:56:34',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22072,2750,4114,'please be informed that I only need a couple of things to do so please do them as soon as you can as I need to submit my draft before 12 pm<br />1- I need you to do a content page (table of content)<br />2- I have some problems in tables I could not change them (some words are separate eg unwillingness in COM-B tabel and there are many so you may need to maximise the table or change it and also there is a space between Table 2: Quality assessment of studies included in the review and the table if I ried to meke the together the table become separate. in Table 1: Description of Studies Included in the Review there is one word at the end become alone, if it is possible to fit with table it will be good. page number 47 (certeficate of attendance) just formating and remove the extra page. that is all what I want. I am not sure if this need number of words but if it is more than what I ordered I will pay for the extra','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 18:34:08','2016-03-07 18:34:08',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22073,4114,2750,'Good morning:<br /><br />Great to see you back! I\'ll get started on your document, and I\'ll be in touch as soon as I can.<br /><br />Best wishes - George','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 18:39:42','2016-03-07 18:41:16',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22074,2750,4114,'please be informed that the deadline was already passed it was 12 pm but I requested for 2 hours more. Thanks','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 18:44:17','2016-03-07 18:45:32',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22075,2750,4114,'please be informed that&nbsp;Project Milestones for the last table is a separate heading not subheading','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 18:51:58','2016-03-07 18:52:49',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22076,4114,2750,'OK. When I send the document to you, please proofread carefully and if we need to change anything, just let me know. We\'ll have it finished by your deadline.<br /><br />Best wishes - George<br /><br />&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 18:54:31','2016-03-07 18:57:25',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22077,1090,65,'Thank you.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 19:07:36','2016-03-09 21:40:26',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22078,454,4118,'Sorry WriteAid<br /><br />First, I used my Ipad to upload the document. I guess that is why it didn\'t work well. I need a time to change my writing a bit. sorry for late response. This document is a letter for my academic advisor. English is not my mother tounge so please consider it.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 19:36:47','2016-03-08 02:12:51',NULL,'upload_56dd91ff764854.42768732_Letter to Advisor.docx','Letter to Advisor.docx'),
	(22079,4114,2750,'Hi:<br /><br />I\'ve uploaded your document, and I think I\'ve followed the edits you requested. One small point: I would recommend hanging indents for your references -- that is, the second line of your reference should be indented.<br /><br />To make the tables fit, I inverted the text in a couple of columns. I hope this is ok.<br /><br />If I\'ve missed anything (highly likely), or you would like any additional changes, please let me know and I\'ll do so immediately.<br /><br /><br />Best wishes - George<br /><br />','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 19:44:15','2016-03-07 19:44:15',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22080,2424,3389,'Hi there,<br /><br />Thanks for sending this to me! Due to its length there was only one correction I needed to make. :)<br /><br />Cheers!<br />EGM','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 19:44:21','2016-03-07 19:59:24',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22081,2750,4114,'thank you very much<br />please send me a clean version. I dont know how to remove the track changes','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 19:50:08','2016-03-07 19:51:06',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22082,4114,2750,'OK:<br /><br />Just click on Review / Track Changes / Final: Show Markup / Final. The edits will disappear.<br /><br />George','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 19:52:49','2016-03-07 20:00:39',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22083,2552,1772,'I kept the length to one page, since I assumed that was what was needed. There is one tricky thing in the header, which I tried for awhile to fix and could not. On my computer at least, the \"ellowship\" shows up as a few shades lighter than the rest of the header. I\'m not sure if that\'s just some weird glitch on my end, but I tried changing the font color of the entire header, bolding the lighter part, just changing the color on the lighter part... I just couldn\'t figure it out, and I apologize.<br /><br />Please let me know if you have any questions or want me to look over something again.&nbsp;<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 19:54:26','2016-03-07 19:54:26',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22084,4114,2750,'Please let me know if you need any further changes. This is not a bad way to edit a document - working together. I had an additional thought. For your final submission, it might be a good idea to format the tables in alternating greyscale rows. They are then easier to read. &nbsp;<br /><br /><br />George','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 19:56:22','2016-03-07 21:00:05',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22085,4114,2750,'I\'m going to try to fit the Quality Assessment Table onto one page.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 20:08:52','2016-03-07 20:59:19',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22086,4114,2750,'I believe I managed to get the Quality Assessment Table issue sorted. You never know with Word, though. A small change in the formatting here can things elsewhere. I hope this helps, however.<br /><br />George','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 20:42:23','2016-03-07 20:46:41',NULL,'upload_56dda15f88ba41.55974141_SDEW_66399.docx','SDEW_66399.docx'),
	(22087,4114,2750,'Missed word. The last message should have read:<br /><br />I believe I managed to get the Quality Assessment Table issue sorted. You never know with Word, though. A small change in the formatting here can change things elsewhere. I hope this helps, however.<br /><br />Sorry.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 20:43:46','2016-03-07 20:45:11',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22088,3399,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your captions.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 20:50:00','2016-03-07 20:50:00',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22089,1759,1772,'I changed the axes for a couple of the tables, and the labels start over at Table 1. They should automatically renumber when you insert them into a larger document. Unfortunately, you might have the same all caps label problem, just because of the default table format. Let me know if you have any questions.<br /><br />Thanks again!<br />Laura','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 20:57:19','2016-03-11 09:14:55',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22090,2750,4114,'I do not like what did you do for the assessment table (font size) and the COM-B table (some words vertical and some horizontal) this will affect my mark. why you do not try to change the page setup/orientation style&nbsp;and make them landscape instead of portriate like the first table','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 21:09:56','2016-03-07 21:10:53',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22091,4114,2750,'OK, I\'ll do that. I\'ll be touch.<br /><br />George','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 21:12:05','2016-03-07 21:12:05',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22092,2750,4114,'the table of content also I need it to be with number to show the heading and subheading. the last page also (the certificate )you did not remove the rows of the symbol and the department information','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 21:15:47','2016-03-07 21:16:30',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22093,4114,2750,'Hi:<br /><br />I see why you were having trouble initially. There seem to be some hidden section breaks in your document, making it difficult to switch to landscape mode without altering the remainder of the document. I think this can be solved but we\'re running out of time. You have a 5:00 pm UK deadline, I believe. I haven\'t altered the table of contents yet. I\'m willing to keep working on this, but what I suggest is that we do on thing at a time. Please let me know if you want to continue.<br /><br />George&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 21:52:47','2016-03-07 22:00:52',NULL,'upload_56ddb1df4ee7b8.44210368_SDEW_66399.docx','SDEW_66399.docx'),
	(22094,2750,4114,'how long you will take to finish?','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 22:02:19','2016-03-07 22:02:54',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22095,4114,2750,'It\'s hard to say, because I\'m not sure what problems will occur. I\'ll certainly work as fast as I can and only on this document. I\'ll begin with the table of contents, and send it to you ASAP - probably in about 15 minutes.<br /><br />George','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 22:04:52','2016-03-07 22:05:30',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22096,2750,4114,'great. I am a grateful. please be informed that the protocol is heading and the whole after it are subheading of protocol','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 22:07:03','2016-03-07 22:07:45',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22097,4114,2750,'OK. Stay tuned.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 22:08:10','2016-03-07 22:30:50',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22098,4114,2750,'I\'m having trouble adding References to Table of Contents. Who knows why. We\'ll solve. Meanwhile, please look over the table of contents to see if you want any changes.<br />George','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 22:35:10','2016-03-07 22:42:30',NULL,'upload_56ddbbcec15400.78829537_SDEW_66399.docx','SDEW_66399.docx'),
	(22099,4114,2750,'My mistake. References are there.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 22:39:30','2016-03-07 22:41:32',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22100,4114,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to edit the sections indicated. I have corrected the formatting throughout, fixed the tables and inserted a TOC. I\'ve also made other minor changes.<br /><br />I do not know what you meant by 12 pm. The due date indicates tomorrow, and only same day editing assures a particular time of delivery.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 22:43:20','2016-03-07 22:50:44',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22101,4114,2750,'Hi, again:<br /><br />One suggestion:<br /><br />\r\n<p><a name=\"_Toc445110610\"></a>How do general practitioners express the barriers to the appropriate prescribing of Z-drugs and benzodiazepines: a meta-synthesis of existing research.<br /><br />Change the above to:</p>\r\n<p><a name=\"_Toc445110610\"></a>How general practitioners express the barriers to the appropriate prescribing of Z-drugs and benzodiazepines: a meta-synthesis of existing research.<br /><br />That way it\'s not a question.<br /><br /></p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 22:43:42','2016-03-07 22:49:42',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22102,4114,144,'Too late. I just sent it back. You cannot have something edited in that time unless you use same day editing, which I do not offer. You will have to pay for what I have done.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 22:57:23','2016-03-07 22:59:26',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22103,144,4114,'you did not include the sections under protol as subheading and you did not remove the rows of the university symbol. please be informed that the symbol and the information down it are with the last page and also include the last page with the content','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 22:58:30','2016-03-07 22:58:30',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22104,4114,2750,'Corrected a couple of typos in the Table of Contents and removed unnecessary references. Looks good now.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 23:00:00','2016-03-07 23:01:40',NULL,'upload_56ddc1a02e09e4.63180053_SDEW_66399.docx','SDEW_66399.docx'),
	(22105,144,4114,'thats fine don\'t worry about it&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 23:00:21','2016-03-07 23:00:21',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22106,144,4114,'I already paid for the work and I asked for 2 hours service but may be something happened by fault then I asked for cancelation but because you already done it I will accept it to avoid inequity','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 23:12:16','2016-03-07 23:12:16',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22107,2386,144,'Thank you, Daniel, for the opportunity to read and edit these couple of sentences.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 23:30:21','2016-03-07 23:30:21',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22108,2386,144,'Thank you, Daniel, for the opportunity to read and edit another of your pieces.<br /><br />As always, your kind ratings are much appreciated.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-07 23:31:55','2016-03-07 23:31:55',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22109,3922,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your paper.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-08 00:10:30','2016-03-08 00:10:30',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22110,2880,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your paper.<br /><br />If you could rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-08 00:56:23','2016-03-08 00:56:23',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22111,3353,144,'Thank you, Julia, for the opportunity to read and edit your post.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-08 01:19:21','2016-03-08 01:19:21',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22112,4114,2750,'Hi, Ali:<br /><br />Finally, I think I have the formatting sorted out. I know it\'s passed your deadline, but at least you\'ll have a version for your own records. I\'m sending this to you as a PDF. I think PDFs look better than Word documents.<br /><br />Best wishes - George','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-08 01:35:15','2016-03-08 02:25:22',NULL,'upload_56dde603e29784.60293688_SDEW_66399.pdf','SDEW_66399.pdf'),
	(22113,4118,454,'No worries. I\'ll have this back to you by tomorrow.<br /><br />Thanks!','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-08 02:13:50','2016-03-08 05:34:08',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22114,3904,2750,'Hi, Emilia:<br /><br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document and hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />I cut any repetitions and smoothed the transitions. I\'ll sure you\'ll catch any mistakes I made. If you need further help, please let me know.<br /><br /><br />Best wishes - George','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-08 02:55:24','2016-03-08 02:55:24',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22115,3603,3130,'This is an interesting proposal for a study. &nbsp;I wish you success in getting it accepted.<br /><br />You\'ve got some extra spacing between lines in a few places. &nbsp;I wasn\'t sure if those were deliberate. &nbsp;If not, it should just take you a minute to fix them.<br /><br />If you are pleased with my work, please consider rating me -- every good rating helps.<br /><br />J.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-08 03:48:50','2016-03-08 04:51:00',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22116,484,4152,'<p>Students are required to write an individual essay of not more than 1,500 words reflecting on their personal learning during the InterDisciplinary Consultancy Project.</p>\r\n<p>This essay should reflect on the conceptual and experiential learning during the&nbsp;consultancy project&nbsp;course and in the development of the company-based project. It should also address the group-based nature of the process. Consideration may also be given to how the project, as the core integrative or capstone element of this course, complements, supplements or otherwise relates to other elements of the&nbsp;this programme. In writing the reflective essay, students should cite references, examples or other material in support of their arguments.<br /><br />A pre-requisite in the Individual Essay is adequate coverage of the conceptual, experiential and group-based learning in the module, its process and its elements. However, a descriptive list alone is insufficient. The essay should contain supported, persuasive, relevant arguments that are analytical and have academic integrity. In addition, the Individual Essay should reflect and assess the learning in the&nbsp;module and process in a personal, insightful and creative way. Furthermore, the Individual Essay should be organised effectively and written in a style that is concise and expressive. Finally, the Individual Essay should be an integrated, coherent piece of work that tells an engaging story.<br /><br /></p>\r\n<p>Common shortcoming are: unbalanced treatment of the four criteria; descriptive essay, with rigour, analysis and insight deficient; essay comprises a generic tract on learning, rather than personal and specific reflection; failure to balance selectivity versus reasonable comprehensiveness; lack of structuring, fluency and flow; over-personalisation at the expense of professionalism; poor writing style, insufficient editing and errors of spelling, grammar and syntax.</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-08 05:06:53','2016-03-08 05:06:53',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22117,484,4152,'Hi there,<br /><br />I sent you my essay to review. If you have any questions about it, please message me.<br /><br />Thanks,<br />D.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-08 05:09:34','2016-03-08 05:12:29',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22118,4152,484,'No problem...','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-08 05:12:40','2016-03-08 05:13:04',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22119,3130,3603,'Thank you for this amazing work! I appreciate it a lot.<br /><br />One thing I ask you is the part that you mentioned \"you\'ve said all of this already on. 4. You don\'t need to it in twice\".<br /><br />That was my advisor\'s request. So.. could you please look through that part once more?&nbsp;<br /><br />I\'ve attach that part here just in case.<br /><br />Thank you.<br />Hanyoung<br /><br />\r\n<p>Models of persuasion (Chaiken, 1980; Petty &amp; Cacioppo, 1983) have suggested that people with different levels of involvement in an issue are likely to have different motivations and capacity to process issue relevant information (Chaiken, 1980; Petty &amp; Cacioppo, 1983). Particularly, the ELM (Petty &amp; Cacioppo, 1984) proposes that individuals employ either a central or a peripheral route when processing information according to their levels of involvement. Specifically, people who regard an issue to be critical to their lives (i.e., high issue involvement) are likely to be motivated use a central route in which they exert the cognitive effort required to evaluate the issue-relevant arguments presented to them. Under such conditions, people tend to focus more on highly diagnostic cues such as quality and validity of the message (Petty &amp; Cacioppo, 1986). On the other hand, people with low involvement with an issue are likely to engage in less motivated and the peripheral information processing in which people evaluate information based on some superficial analysis of simple and available cues (i.e., peripheral cues (Petty &amp; Cacioppo, 1984) such as general impressions to help them in processing information.</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-08 06:45:12','2016-03-08 07:00:45',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22120,3130,3603,'And for this part, I am not sure if you look into it.<br />you just mentioned that \" Is this text underlined for a reason?\"<br /><br /> In this regard, for a high brand-issue fit condition, consumer perception of fit can be enhanced by emphasizing the positive traits and attributes of the sponsoring brand, as well as its relationship to the health issue,because consumers could retrieve connected associations that are related to the health issue.\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-08 06:47:50','2016-03-08 07:01:41',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22121,3603,3130,'I can\'t send you edited text through this system. &nbsp;Your paper, which I edited, is in my computer at work. &nbsp;Tomorrow I\'ll go back to the two secions you mentioned and do any editing that needs doing. &nbsp;Then I\'ll send the paper back to you again. &nbsp;Okay?<br /><br />J.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-08 07:49:09','2016-03-08 08:12:52',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22122,144,2880,'Do you mind checking the references as well for APA?','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-08 07:53:38','2016-03-08 21:23:17',NULL,'upload_56de3eb2b95388.14675290_EW_66391_1.docx','EW_66391_1.docx'),
	(22123,65,4154,'Can you please make sure the sentences are complete and makes sense. Make it sound professional and easy to read. I would like to have but Wednesday, March 9, 2016 at 5:00 pm. I appreciate all your help.&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-08 08:46:08','2016-03-08 08:46:08',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22124,65,3964,'Hi Professor.<br /><br />It is me again with a new research paper. I need your professional editing service for this manuscript. <br />I have removed the title page, references, figures and tables in order to reduce the text.<br /><br />Thank you<br /><br />Best regards<br />Hesham','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-08 17:22:57','2016-03-08 17:22:57',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22125,3223,65,'Thank you.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-08 17:50:13','2016-03-09 07:46:22',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22126,2750,617,'Hi George,<br /><br />Hope you\'re doing well.<br /><br />Just wanted to touch base with you and let you know that I am working on three different project right now, and will be contacting you soon for help with editing. I may send you parts of my work in progress instead of sending huge documents at once. However, I am still waiting to receive a feedback on my proposals before continuing.&nbsp;<br /><br />All the best,<br />Maya','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-08 19:08:46','2016-03-08 19:11:11',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22127,617,2750,'Good morning:<br /><br />I am well and I hope you are too. I just returned from a bracing early-morning walk. Believe me, I need the exercise, not being young anymore.<br /><br />I look forward to helping with your papers.&nbsp;<br /><br />Best wishes - George','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-08 19:13:48','2016-03-08 19:21:56',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22128,3603,3130,'I have gone back to the two secions about which you wrote, and edited them as well. &nbsp;Sorry for the confusion.<br /><br />If any more problems arise, please let me know.<br /><br />J.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-08 20:07:08','2016-03-15 12:03:53',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22129,144,3403,'<p><strong>The INTRO</strong> attracts the reader&rsquo;s interest and introduces the topic of the paper.</p>\r\n<p>Be sure to include a &ldquo;thesis&rdquo; statement. In one or two sentences, this statement lays out the topic of the paper. This is the big idea that you are presenting to your reader.</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p><strong>The SUPPORTING PARAGRAPHS</strong> are the main body of the paper.</p>\r\n<ul>\r\n<li>Focus on one main idea per paragraph. This main idea should support your thesis statement. For each paragraph, have a clear topic sentence that states the main idea and tells the reader what the paragraph will discuss.</li>\r\n<li>Flesh out the paragraph with supporting sentences. These give details and examples that reinforce the topic sentence. Remember to include only information and ideas that are specific and relevant to the topic.</li>\r\n<li>Transition logically between paragraphs. Don&rsquo;t just switch abruptly from one topic to another.</li>\r\n</ul>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p><strong>The CONCLUSION</strong> is the paragraph that wraps up the essay.</p>\r\n<ul>\r\n<li>Signal to the reader that the essay is ending.</li>\r\n<li>Remind reader what the main points of the essay way.</li>\r\n<li>Leave the reader with your final thoughts.</li>\r\n</ul>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-08 20:32:35','2016-03-08 20:32:35',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22130,65,1203,'Hello,<br /><br />I am applying for a position that requires answering four questions with a personal statement is optional.<br /><br />Thank you','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-08 20:49:06','2016-03-08 20:49:06',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22131,1778,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your paper.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-08 21:28:48','2016-03-08 21:28:48',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22132,2880,144,'I have corrected the ref format to APA (one in text, remainder in ref section).<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-08 21:38:00','2016-03-09 00:22:36',NULL,'upload_56deffe8b6dcf5.31658205_upload_56de3eb2b95388.14675290_EW_66391_1.docx','upload_56de3eb2b95388.14675290_EW_66391_1.docx'),
	(22133,484,3886,'Dear Sir:&nbsp;<br />I would like to kindly ask you for the correction of this file in word. We would like to ask you for the correct grammar of the sentences and if you could tell us in each error you find the grammatical rule that has to be applied. (If this increases the price, we will pay the amount you tell us)<br /><br />Thank you.<br />Best regards.&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-08 22:28:07','2016-03-08 22:28:07',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22134,65,2657,'Good afternoon,<br /><br />Please review the following document for grammer,&nbsp;punctuation, &amp; especially passive voice usage.<br /><br /><br />Thanks<br />David Williams<br /><br /><br />','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-08 23:44:08','2016-03-08 23:44:08',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22135,4152,484,'<p class=\"p1\"><b>Thank you for the opportunity to edit your work. Please let me know if there are any issues, and I will address them asap.</b></p>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-08 23:44:33','2016-03-08 23:44:33',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22136,144,2880,'thanks, you\'re awesome!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-09 00:23:25','2016-03-09 00:23:25',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22137,144,4162,'APA 6th edition style writing','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-09 00:28:02','2016-03-09 00:28:02',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22138,144,4161,'Hey there,<br /><br />I just need these pages edited in the next couple days for all grammar.....They are actually posted on my websites and I\'m just getting them checked to make sure they\'re perfect.<br /><br />If you\'d like to see the website it\'s listed below:<br /><br />www.rochesterguitarlessons.com','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-09 01:09:40','2016-03-09 01:09:40',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22139,3403,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your paper.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-09 01:37:34','2016-03-09 01:37:34',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22140,4151,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit these sections of your study.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-09 01:39:19','2016-03-09 01:39:19',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22141,4162,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your sample.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-09 02:01:33','2016-03-09 02:01:33',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22142,144,1527,'Nyanidoc,&nbsp;<br /><br />Please edit ayleen\'s observation. &nbsp;Thank you! &nbsp;Julia','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-09 02:24:05','2016-03-09 02:24:05',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22143,3786,3484,'<p>1) Revise and Resubmit Part A- <strong>&nbsp;Previously completed&nbsp;and got an 88%<br /><br />This revision should encompass:</strong></p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;2a) Describe Policy Evaluative Criteria</p>\r\n<p>Before policymakers can decide which policy alternative is the best, they must know what</p>\r\n<p>criteria they will use to decide among them.&nbsp;Define the criteria used and provide justification for their use. In other words, why those</p>\r\n<p>criteria?</p>\r\n<p>2b) Project Outcomes and Outcomes Matrix</p>\r\n<p>You will project the outcomes for each policy alternative in the context of each evaluative</p>\r\n<p>criterion.</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;You must discuss the table in the body of the paper.</p>\r\n<p>You should discuss how certain you are of the outcomes for each policy alternative. Think about</p>\r\n<p>sensitivity analysis. Also, think about how &ldquo;robust&rdquo; your policy is to unanticipated events.</p>\r\n<p>Your description of the evaluative criteria and your projection of the outcomes should be</p>\r\n<p>approximately 3-5 pages. In total, your working paper should be about 6-10 pages.</p>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-09 03:28:39','2016-03-09 03:28:39',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22144,454,3197,'Hello, my dear,&nbsp;<br /><br />I\'m going nuts here because I\'m supposed to take a two-week break before starting book 2. But I\'m bored as hell, love my story so much, missed my character and don\'t know if I can hold out for 2 weeks. &nbsp;<br /><br />Anyway, I want to pay you to do a 2-page synopsis and a Query Letter. I don\'t know how I\'d be able to submit payment. I really need this done. Harper Collins is requesting this for unsolicited scripts and for their extended line for digital (Witness Impulse).&nbsp;<br /><br />&nbsp;I really need you to help me.&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-09 03:54:25','2016-03-09 05:29:44',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22145,3499,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your paper.<br /><br />As always, ratings are much appreciated.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-09 04:00:46','2016-03-09 04:00:46',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22146,3886,484,'<p class=\"p1\"><b>Thank you for the opportunity to edit your work. Please let me know if there are any issues, and I will address them asap.<br /><br /></b>Hi - unfortunately, I would not receive extra pay for explaining all the grammatical changes -- there are too many, and it would not be economical on my part. However, I will be more than happy to answer any questions directly regarding the grammar usage -- should you have any particular questions when you review the material<br /><br />The major issue for this document, however, is the formatting. The original formatting made this text incredibly difficult to read. I fixed the formatting to make it look cleaner, along with fixing the grammatical errors.<br /><br />Thank you!</p>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-09 04:25:00','2016-03-09 04:25:00',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22147,144,3535,'Footnotes don\'t need to be edited.<br />Thank you','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-09 04:40:05','2016-03-09 04:40:05',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22148,3197,454,'Hello, V,<br /><br />I hear you! Hard not to work on it when you want to work on it!<br /><br />I can help you with the synopsis and query in one of two ways: one, you write them putting in elements you\'d like to see and submit through ew, and I rework them. If you want me to write them from scratch I can, sending them to you through my email, and you can pay me through PayPal. You can email me for pricing info.<br /><br />Either way!<br /><br />Thanks :)<br /><br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-09 05:35:05','2016-03-09 05:43:50',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22149,454,3197,'I rather pay you via Paypal because I have an account with them. <br /><br />They have rules for what they want in the query such as why my book is unique, and other stuff a query is supposed to look like. &nbsp;Right now, my brain can\'t even focus on that because I\'m so excited in starting Book 2, which I came up with more ideas. <br /><br />Then I have to do the short play. Next, I\'m contemplating a screenplay short to get my screenwriting skills out there. Too much to think about a 1 - 2 page synopsis and some query. &nbsp;<br /><br />Here\'s my email address: &nbsp; <a href=\"mailto:touchedbygrace02@gmail.com\">touchedbygrace02@gmail.com</a>.&nbsp;<br /><br />Tellme what it\'ll cost, send me the bill and I\'ll pay you. &nbsp;Thanks for rescuing me again.&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-09 05:49:09','2016-03-09 06:13:04',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22150,454,3197,'Also, my sisters and husband love your blurb. I had them put it on the back of the book as well. They\'ll be done in a couple more days. Then I can place the book back of Amazon.&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-09 05:53:57','2016-03-09 06:17:48',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22151,3197,454,'Got it, thanks--I\'ll send you an email:)','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-09 06:13:53','2016-03-09 06:44:24',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22152,4163,474,'In my Track Changes comments on your document, I have made quite a few suggestions in addition to the explanations of my edits. One of the overarching recommendations I made was about formatting: rather than capitalizing key phrases, I recommend you bold them for emphasis; this is because typing in all capital letters gives off the impression of shouting, and may come off as hostile and out-of-touch. Please let me know if I have mis-interpreted anything (particularly the sentence that references \"SWE-UNIT\") in a message so I can provide follow-up help free of charge. I would like to provide you with a five-star editing service, so please don\'t hesitate to let me know&nbsp;if you have any questions or concerns!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-09 06:15:22','2016-03-09 06:15:22',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22153,1527,144,'Thank you, Julia, for the opportunity to read and edit Ayleen\'s observation, and for your kind ratings as well.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-09 06:21:31','2016-03-09 06:21:31',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22154,3389,3961,'INSTRUCTIONS&nbsp; &nbsp; Task:&nbsp; To inform your colleagues of the most current information on Global health programming issue(s) in the news and scientific world (2011 &ndash; 2016).&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;Points: 100 &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; You can include information from your reaction papers where relevant.&nbsp; &nbsp; Requirements:&nbsp; Each individual must collect relevant and reputable newspaper articles (minimum of two (2) addressing an international health issue and scholarly research articles related to the assigned health issue&nbsp;(minimum of eight (8) No tabloids.&nbsp; &nbsp; The scholarly research articles can come from online peer reviewed journals through the Ohio University Library Online Resources link.&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; Based upon the articles you have collected, you will produce a paper (minimum 12 pages and maximum 15).&nbsp; &nbsp; Article summary ideas to consider: Compare and contrast the articles; which article(s) seem most important; are these new issues or ongoing (previous years); are the specific issues in the articles representative of a trend or are the issues critical to global health and are efforts to control or enhance or eliminate the health issue(s) working.&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; RUBRIC&nbsp; Paper that must clearly show:&nbsp; 1.&nbsp;The assigned health issue in the assigned country(BELGUIM). 1 point&nbsp; 2.&nbsp;Describe why the health issue is important in general and in that country? 15 points&nbsp; 3.&nbsp;Describe the scope of the problem based on social, economic, cultural, behavioral factors &nbsp;in your chosen target group e.g. women, children, men, low income, ethnic group et, for that health issue in the chosen country 20 points&nbsp; 4.&nbsp;Describe any strategies in the country of choice to address the health issue in the target population 20 points&nbsp; 5.&nbsp;Provide a summary of the three types of health programs that currently exist in that country to address the chosen health issue. Do they address the health issue in that country/target group?25 points&nbsp; 6.&nbsp;What are your future recommendations for the country of choice on how to better address the health issue 12 points&nbsp; 7.&nbsp;References. 2 points&nbsp; 8.&nbsp;Organization, content, formatting, proof-reading. 5 points&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-09 07:22:26','2016-03-09 07:22:26',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22155,65,3223,'I appreciate what you\'ve done. it realy good job. I changed the sentence that you wrote a not aboue it, and I added some recommedndation at the end can you please check them. Also, the paper it should be APA style please can you make it APA style. Agian Thank you so much.&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-09 07:51:56','2016-03-09 07:57:40',NULL,'upload_56df8fcc6400a8.02328897_The Intervention.docx','The Intervention.docx'),
	(22156,3223,65,'A few more changes.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-09 08:13:16','2016-03-09 11:08:14',NULL,'upload_56df94cc38b054.12947075__The Intervention.docx','_The Intervention.docx'),
	(22157,4154,65,'A couple of concerns.<br /><br />1. Double check Table of Contents after all changes are made. Text might shift.<br /><br />2. Check layout to avoid dividing tables across pages.<br /><br />3. Add Appendix B and Appendix D.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-09 08:57:07','2016-03-09 08:57:07',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22158,65,1090,'dear editor,<br /><br />I\'ve got urgent addition that I was informed to add in the previous version you edited. Can you quickly look at the following sentences and let me know soon?<br />thanks in advance,<br /><br />\r\n<p>ARTICLE SUMMARY</p>\r\n<p>Strengths and Limitations of This Study</p>\r\n<ul>\r\n<li>Today, the only possible way to control Zika is making the situation unfavorable for oviposition and reproduction of Aedes Aegypti mosquitoes.</li>\r\n<li>Current water and sanitation practices, especially in developing countries can potentially increase the risk of Zika fever outbreak. Therefore, the most sustainable way for overcoming the epidemic is improving the water and sanitation systems in a suitable way.</li>\r\n<li>In this case, we are proposing a new integrated water and sanitation system which in it rainwater harvesting systems and waterless portable private toilets are provided, along with self-cleaning ponds.</li>\r\n<li>The key elements and their roles are introduced together with their assessments for both public and residential zones. Comparisons with the current treatment plants by using economic analysis are discussed with reasonable parameters.</li>\r\n<li>Further research is needed for assessments of this developed system statistically in comparison with previous cases in local communities.</li>\r\n</ul>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p><strong><em>CONTRIBUTORSHIP STATEMENT</em></strong></p>\r\n<p>All authors contributed equally.</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p><strong><em>DATA SHARING STATEMENT</em></strong></p>\r\n<p>Extra data is available by emailing Mr. __ or Mr. ___</p>','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-09 19:23:07','2016-03-09 20:11:19',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22159,454,4167,'SCIENCE FICTION NOVEL INVOLVING TIME TRAVEL','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-09 19:55:46','2016-03-09 19:55:46',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22160,1090,65,'Was out this morning. Hope this is in time.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-09 20:18:42','2016-03-09 20:33:43',NULL,'upload_56e03ed292a4f2.91686080_ARTICLE SUMMARY.docx','ARTICLE SUMMARY.docx'),
	(22161,3961,3389,'Hi there,<br /><br />Thanks for sending this along for me to edit! I hope my work meets with your satisfaction. I went through the text and deleted a lot of the duplicate text, as well as inserted comments for points that needed a little clarification.<br /><br />If you are happy with my work, please consider leaving a review on my editor page!<br /><br />Thanks!<br /><br />EGM','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-09 20:30:49','2016-03-09 20:30:49',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22162,65,1090,'thanks a lot!','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-09 20:35:15','2016-03-09 20:44:07',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22163,1090,65,'Was out this morning. Hope this is in time.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-09 20:43:14','2016-03-09 21:41:01',NULL,'upload_56e04492eedd32.62459769_ARTICLE SUMMARY.docx','ARTICLE SUMMARY.docx'),
	(22164,1090,65,'Looked for a moment like the first email didn\'t go, so I resent it just to be sure.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-09 20:44:45','2016-03-09 21:42:21',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22165,2424,65,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-09 20:53:16','2016-03-09 20:53:16',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22166,3373,1772,'Here is the copy that is the final, without the editing marks shown. I will upload a copy with the marks shown through a message. I will have the other book for you by the end of the day.<br /><br />Thank you!','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-09 20:58:13','2016-03-10 03:10:42',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22167,3373,1772,'Here is the copy with the editing markup showing. Let me know if you have any questions.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-09 21:01:03','2016-03-10 03:02:21',NULL,'upload_56e048bf97fd31.57936205_EW_66339.doc','EW_66339.doc'),
	(22168,65,2588,'This is a newspaper article. I tend to use the words events and programs alot, but I can\'t seem to find synonams that fit. Feel free to edit those words as well as anything else.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-09 21:11:28','2016-03-09 21:11:28',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22169,2278,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit another of your papers.<br /><br />As always, your ratings are much appreciated.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-09 21:21:58','2016-03-16 20:09:45',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22170,65,1090,'ok, got it','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-09 21:42:43','2016-03-09 21:42:43',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22171,2588,65,'So I focused on the repetitive words.&nbsp;<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-09 22:57:21','2016-03-09 22:57:21',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22172,454,3449,'I noticed that the due date for the document that I submitted to you on Sunday is for the end of the day today, but I was expecting it to be finished by sometime around noon today since that would be a three day turn around rather than 3 and a half days. &nbsp;Do you have a sense of when you will be finished? &nbsp;<br /><br />Virginia Mckay','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-09 23:00:50','2016-03-09 23:38:28',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22173,541,4169,'Good afternoon<br /><br />Please send me your comments and changes in word form (doc) so that I can track changes [ using &nbsp;\"track changes\"]. <br /><br />Weekly&nbsp;I have several papers/letters &nbsp;that&nbsp;&nbsp;should be professionally improved prior to be submitted for peer-reviewing.&nbsp;Therefore ,&nbsp;I am looking forward to hearing from you and seeing your work.<br /><br /><br />Best Regards<br /><br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-09 23:03:57','2016-03-11 05:43:51',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22174,4153,484,'<p class=\"p1\"><b>Thank you for the opportunity to edit your work. Please let me know if there are any issues, and I will address them asap.</b></p>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-09 23:30:22','2016-03-09 23:30:22',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22175,3449,454,'Hello, Virginia,<br /><br />Thank you for your email. I will be finished before the time listed, but not by noon your time, unfortunately. I am five hours behind EST. The due dates are generated automatically. I will do my best to have it to you as soon as possible without sacrificing the quality of the editing.<br /><br />I appreciate your patience.&nbsp;<br /><br />Thank you,<br /><br />Laura Kenney<br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-09 23:42:48','2016-03-10 00:17:16',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22176,2657,65,'Had difficulty with the first paragraph because the items listed were not, in fact, separate sections indicated by separate subtitles.<br /><br />After that, the text settled down a bit.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-09 23:44:41','2016-03-09 23:44:41',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22177,454,3449,'Ok. &nbsp;Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-10 00:17:41','2016-03-10 00:17:41',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22178,3966,3572,'Hi -&nbsp;<br /><br />Please find attached document ready for your review. &nbsp;Please use track change when making edits.<br /><br />Thank you!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-10 00:27:43','2016-03-10 00:27:43',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22179,2104,3354,'Hello, I am submitting this manuscript as a research brief to a journal (Nurse Educator). It must be in APA format and I am attempting to write in 8 pages my entire dissertation! It has been a challenge, to say the least! It is my first manuscript for publication. I need editing help and just general polish. Really I will take any help/ thoughts/opinions provided.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-10 00:45:18','2016-03-10 00:45:18',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22180,1203,65,'Impressive credentials.<br /><br />The edits are minor because the original text is, for the most part, fine.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-10 00:48:47','2016-03-10 00:48:47',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22181,4161,144,'Thank you, Chris, for the opportunity to read and edit your piece.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-10 00:50:57','2016-03-10 00:50:57',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22182,2750,4113,'Hello,<br /><br />This is my English class essay Homework.<br />I do not know what to do with this hw.<br />I wrote down some ideas and facts.<br />I appreciate your help.<br /><br />Sincerely<br />Jay&nbsp;<br /><br /><br />','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-10 01:46:33','2016-03-10 01:46:33',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22183,4113,2750,'Hi, Jay:<br /><br /><br />I have downloaded your document and will begin right away. If I have any questions, I\'ll send a message via Editor World.<br /><br />Best wishes&nbsp;- George','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-10 01:51:55','2016-03-10 03:23:38',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22184,3572,3966,'Hello Ernie,<br /><br />Thank you for the opportunity to edit your material. I found it very well-written on the whole. <br /><br />I hope you found my revisions satisfactory. I would greatly appreciate it if you could leave a rating of the assignment. I look forward to working with you in the future.<br /><br />Thank you!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-10 01:54:13','2016-03-10 01:54:13',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22185,1163,4170,'MasterEditor,<br />I need full editing using APA, grammatical, tense, sentence structure, flow, tables, references and section formatting. I look forward to your attention to detail<br />Thank you<br />Armilla<br /><br /><br />','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-10 01:57:31','2016-03-10 01:57:31',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22186,3449,454,'Please see comments within doc. Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-10 02:11:57','2016-03-10 02:11:57',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22187,3572,3966,'Hello Ernie,<br /><br />Thank you for the opportunity to edit your material. On the whole, I found it to be very well-written.<br /><br />I hope you find the revisions satisfactory. I would greatly appreciate it if you could leave a rating for the assignment. I look forward to working with you in the future!<br /><br />Best regards,<br />WondrousWordsmith','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-10 02:19:15','2016-03-10 02:19:15',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22188,65,4160,'<p>Hello, <br /><br />This paper will be submitted for publication in a peer reviewed journal. The word count is from page 2 - 29 (abstract - end of text) and references are not included. I hope you will accept this file and I am looking forward to seeing this manuscript edited. Would it be possible to see a sample? My email address is <a href=\"mailto:angie.wilson@unt.edu\">angie.wilson@unt.edu</a>. Please let me know if you have any questions. <br /><br />Thank you, Angie</p>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-10 03:01:34','2016-03-10 03:01:34',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22189,65,4160,'<p>Hello, <br />This case study will be submitted for publication in an edited book. I hope you will accept this file and I am looking forward to seeing this edited. <br /><br />Thank you, Angie</p>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-10 03:05:57','2016-03-10 03:05:57',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22190,1772,3373,'They both show the mark ups. Can you resend the edited version without the mark ups showing. Thanks.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-10 03:17:40','2016-03-10 03:37:24',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22191,4113,2750,'Hi, Jay:<br /><br />I did the best I could in the available time. I haven\'t read this particular book, but I hope the suggestions help.&nbsp;<br /><br />Before sharing this document, please consider running Document Inspector. To do this, click File/Info/Check For Issues/Inspect Document on the Microsoft Word menu bar.<br /><br />Best wishes - George<br /><br />I am usually available for editing between 6:00 am and 10:30 pm. If my status is set to unavailable, you can still reach me via Editor World.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-10 03:50:10','2016-03-10 03:50:10',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22192,65,4074,'This is the writen part of a oral presentation of Nazi Germany.<br />Please, correct grammar and syntax.<br />Thanks <br />Selmo','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-10 04:15:30','2016-03-10 04:15:30',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22193,454,4118,'Writeaid<br /><br />are you still working on my paper?<br /><br />Steve','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-10 04:38:37','2016-03-10 04:55:59',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22194,4118,454,'Sorry for the delay. Here\'s your letter, and the best of luck to you.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-10 04:56:37','2016-03-10 16:40:20',NULL,'upload_56e0b835cb51f5.03842032_upload_56dd91ff764854.42768732_Letter to Advisor.docx','upload_56dd91ff764854.42768732_Letter to Advisor.docx'),
	(22195,454,3519,'Please check for grammar and verb conjugation thankyou.&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-10 06:56:37','2016-03-10 06:56:37',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22196,65,1090,'dear editor,<br />in my previous document that you are currently working on, I realized that the following sentences were missing. So can you check and edit it togehter when you send your edited document back to me tomorrow?<br /><br />thanks,<br /><br />\r\n<p>More states (e.g., New York, Massachusetts, Connecticut and Vermont) have recently initiated to ban organic waste in landfills. Several cities such as Seattle, San Francisco and Portland have banned landfill disposal of food waste from large commercial food waste generators (Ref). In fact, Connecticut was, for the first time, the state to ban commercial food waste from landfills and encouraged to recycle the materials rather than sending them to a landfill. In Vermont, all food wastes are to be banded by 2020. In New York, volunteer program initiated by more than 100 restaurants participated to divert more than 2,500 tons of food waste from landfills over 6 months. Given that more states consider banning organic materials in landfills, introducing and applications of AD technologies are strongly encouraged.</p>','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-10 07:57:34','2016-03-10 08:12:19',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22197,65,3123,'This is my second time contacting you!<br />This is my journal article that I will submit by next Monday. Hope you can review and get back to me earlier than that. I have another paper to ask to review. So please review this thoughroughly. Thank you!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-10 08:35:47','2016-03-10 08:35:47',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22198,3373,1772,'Here is the version with the markup. I will re-upload the other non-marked book, as well as a copy of this one without the mark up. Please let me know if you have any questions. Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-10 09:31:55','2016-03-10 09:31:55',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22199,3373,1772,'I\'m sorry about that. I\'m not sure what happened.&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-10 09:36:28','2016-03-14 08:42:19',NULL,'upload_56e0f9cc791780.20705560_Space Pirates No Markup.doc','Space Pirates No Markup.doc'),
	(22200,3373,1772,'Here is the other book with no editing comments.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-10 09:39:36','2016-03-14 08:42:57',NULL,'upload_56e0fa883cf854.94831372_Merchant Wars No Markup.doc','Merchant Wars No Markup.doc'),
	(22201,454,4171,'This is part of a just completed manuscript. It is a very early/rough draft. At this point just light copyediting and proofing is needed for mistakes.&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-10 11:28:21','2016-03-10 11:28:21',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22202,4074,65,'Thank you','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-10 20:11:21','2016-03-10 20:11:21',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22203,1090,65,'I put the additonal paragraph at the beginning. Not sure where is actually goes.<br /><br />Thank you.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-10 21:15:13','2016-03-11 05:52:58',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22204,65,4175,'I generally feel okay with the content, but if you feel as if you can enhance the content, go for it. What I am mostly concerned about is the grammar, in particualr, comma usage. I have never been too great with commas. I am also not too sure of the dashes I used in one of the senetences in the second paragrapgh(only time dashes are used) and the \":\" i used.&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-10 22:39:25','2016-03-10 22:39:25',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22205,2424,65,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-10 23:39:19','2016-03-10 23:39:19',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22206,993,1347,'Thanks for editing this document. &nbsp;Changes in styling, word choice, punctuation are all appreciated. &nbsp;Please do not worry if the pictures move around during the editing. &nbsp;I realize i\'ll likely have to reposition many of the photographs in this portfolio once editing is complete. &nbsp;Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-10 23:55:03','2016-03-10 23:55:03',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22207,4175,65,'I\'ve included a clean version below the edited one.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-11 00:22:05','2016-03-11 00:22:05',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22208,3523,2424,'I am not sure if \"find a job that would make me money\" is the best way to say it. Thank you.&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-11 02:10:16','2016-03-11 02:10:16',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22209,2424,3523,'I made a few changes to make the document flow better. Thanks for choosing my services.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-11 03:19:09','2016-03-11 03:19:09',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22210,3354,2104,'This is quite good. &nbsp;I did play around with the wording a little, but found that you did a great job distilling a complicated topic. &nbsp;Your APA was perfect. &nbsp;<br />Thanks for sending!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-11 04:29:31','2016-03-11 04:29:31',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22211,541,3961,'I posted the wrong document for editing. I wanted you to edit the policy brief instead of the country report. I have attached the correct document to this message. I am very sorry.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-11 05:27:24','2016-03-11 05:43:16',NULL,'upload_56e210ecc25f65.51075334_4. Policy Brief edited.docx','4. Policy Brief edited.docx'),
	(22212,65,1090,'thank you!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-11 05:53:09','2016-03-11 05:53:09',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22213,3961,541,'Absolutely.&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-11 05:58:19','2016-03-11 06:05:46',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22214,3535,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to finish reading and editing your thesis, which is truly a monumental achievement. I hope it is, in fact, a dissertation rather than a thesis, and that you will earn a PhD for your assiduous efforts.<br /><br />I have rewritten many sentences not b/c there was anything inherently wrong w/ them, but simply to transform them from passive to active voice, which enhances their effect and is actually more correct, e.g., monuments underwent renovation rather than were renovated. It is by no means always possible to do this, however.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-11 06:00:41','2016-03-11 06:00:41',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22215,144,3961,'<p><b><br class=\"Apple-interchange-newline\" />INSTRUCTIONS</b><b>&nbsp;</b></p>\r\n<p><b>&nbsp;</b></p>\r\n<p><b>Task:&nbsp;</b>&nbsp;To inform your colleagues of the most current information on Global health programming issue(s) in the news and scientific world (2011 &ndash; 2016).&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;Points: 100</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; You can include information from your reaction papers where relevant.&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p><b>Requirements:</b>&nbsp; Each individual must collect relevant and reputable&nbsp;newspaper articles&nbsp;(<b>minimum of two (2)</b>&nbsp;addressing an international health issue and scholarly&nbsp;research articles&nbsp;related to the assigned health issue&nbsp;<b>(minimum of eight (8) No tabloids</b>.&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>The scholarly research articles can come from&nbsp;online&nbsp;peer reviewed journals through the Ohio University Library&nbsp;Online&nbsp;Resources link.&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>Based upon the articles you have collected, you will produce a&nbsp;<b>paper (minimum 12 pages and maximum 15).&nbsp;</b></p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p><b>Article summary ideas to consider:</b>&nbsp;Compare and contrast the articles; which article(s) seem most important; are these new issues or ongoing (previous years); are the specific issues in the articles representative of a trend or are the issues critical to global health and are efforts to control or enhance or eliminate the health issue(s) working.&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p><b>RUBRIC</b><b>&nbsp;</b></p>\r\n<p><b>Paper that must clearly show:&nbsp;</b></p>\r\n<p>1.&nbsp;The assigned health issue in the assigned country.&nbsp;<i>1&nbsp;<b>point</b></i>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>2.&nbsp;Describe why the health issue is important in general and in that country?&nbsp;<b>15 points</b>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>3.&nbsp;Describe the scope of the problem based on social, economic, cultural, behavioral factors &nbsp;in your chosen target group e.g. women, children, men, low income, ethnic group et, for that health issue in the chosen country&nbsp;<b>20 points</b>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>4.&nbsp;Describe any strategies in the country of choice to address the health issue in the target population&nbsp;<b>20 points</b>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>5.&nbsp;Provide a summary of the&nbsp;<b>three types</b>&nbsp;of health programs that currently exist in that country to address the chosen health issue. Do they address the health issue in that country/target group?<b>25 points</b>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>6.&nbsp;What are your future recommendations for the country of choice on how to better address the health issue&nbsp;<b>12 points</b>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>7.&nbsp;References.&nbsp;<b>2 points</b>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>8.&nbsp;Organization, content, formatting, proof-reading.&nbsp;<b>5 points</b>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p><b>Paper due April 28<sup>th</sup>, 2016 on Blackboard. Submit the paper via&nbsp;Turnitin&nbsp;on Blackboard.&nbsp;</b></p>\r\n<p><b>&nbsp;</b></p>\r\n<p><b>&nbsp;</b></p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p><b>GENERAL GUIDELINES FOR PROJECTS&nbsp;</b></p>\r\n<p>Please follow these directions to avoid losing any additional points for your project.&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>?&nbsp;<b>1\" margins</b>&nbsp;all the way around the paper (top, bottom, left, &amp; right) and&nbsp;<b>double spaced</b>!&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>? Please include a cover page &ldquo;HLTH 5120 International Health Programming&rdquo; along with your names, the date, and the title of the assignment.&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>? 12 point font (no larger) using Times New Roman or 11 point&nbsp;Arial&nbsp;font</p>\r\n<p>? Proof read and corrected for spelling, grammar, sentence structure, and clarity of thought. This is very important because taking the time to do the above items shows your instructor that you have thought about and carefully executed your assignment.&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>? When citing sources, please use APA format&nbsp;</p>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-11 07:12:42','2016-03-11 07:12:42',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22216,144,4177,'Hi, I would like to have my Policy Brief professionally edited. Writing performance is half the grade so I would like to ensure that all the grammer and punctuation, and spelling is all correct with no run on sentences. Also want to make sure this brief has clarity and is correctly organized.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-11 07:18:23','2016-03-11 07:18:23',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22217,144,2520,'Hello, Please find the attached manuscript draft. Thanks for your help. Best Regards,','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-11 07:22:40','2016-03-11 07:22:40',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22218,4170,1163,'Hi, there:<br /><br />I edited the document in the areas of grammar, sentence structure, flow, punctuation, clarity, consistency, spelling, detail, word choice, and organization as well as APA style. It has been a pleasure!<br /><br />Thank you!<br />MasterEditor','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-11 08:43:21','2016-03-11 08:43:21',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22219,3889,3933,'PLs, ASAP. it`s timed assignment.thx','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-11 09:08:03','2016-03-11 09:08:03',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22220,474,4176,'I have a 1500 words paper named \"Kepler Spacecraft and its mission\", this is a group work.&nbsp;I would like you to put those parts together, and maybe come up with an introduction and conclusion.&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-11 09:33:18','2016-03-11 09:33:18',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22221,65,1090,'dear editor,<br /><br />I was requested to edit the previous version you revised to me several weeks ago. Among the long document, I revised only a few paragraphs (total 3 pages). <br />Due to the urgency, I need to submit it soon.., could you check it (the attached file) again?<br /><br />I have new documents comping up soon and will submit it to you online sometime next week. So it would be grateful if you can check and edit the previous document you edited for me.<br /><br />thanks in advance,','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-11 10:37:48','2016-03-11 18:41:20',NULL,'upload_56e259ac0ca4d0.11899169_Doc (March 10).docx','Doc (March 10).docx'),
	(22222,4176,474,'Though I cannot write an introduction and conclusion for you (since representing my work as your own would constitute plagiarism), I did add headings that signal where your introduction and conclusion might be found in your existing text.<br /><br />I have streamlined the writing as much as possible without rewriting your text, and I recommend that you read through the notes I\'ve left in the Track Changes comments for guidance on where to insert citations and double-check the information you\'re presenting for accuracy. One of the biggest edits I see you needing to make is an overall improvement of in-text citations. I added a running header and page numbers, and re-adjusted the works cited page to be a reference list, since it looked like the paper was meant to be in APA format--but I could only adjust the formatting of the in-text citations that were included in the version of the paper I got, and can only advise you to follow APA style in the missing citations I\'ve indicated you need to add in.<br /><br />The final section (which I divided into two sections, creating a conclusion out of the already-written text you provided) was hardest for me to decipher, so please let me know if my edits have mis-interpreted the facts you were trying to represent at any point and I will correct those portions for you free of charge.<br /><br />I hope my edits help, and if you have follow-up questions or concerns please send me a message so I can address them for you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-11 11:55:09','2016-03-11 11:55:09',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22223,4169,541,'A fluent and engaging piece with an effective and direct sense of tone. Most edits concerned itegrating prose elements for a more concise reading style. <br />A pleasure to read.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-11 16:38:34','2016-03-11 16:38:34',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22224,65,3653,'Please edit the document. Please reframe the sentences whereever necessary and correct grammatical mistakes. Please make the document look professional by using advanced english vocabulary. Thanks for all your help.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-11 17:24:11','2016-03-11 17:24:11',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22225,65,3328,'Hi. &nbsp;Another paper. &nbsp;APA style and instructor prefers 2 spaces between sentences. &nbsp;It is an article critique, but the assignment calls it a Critique of the Evaluation Literature. &nbsp; Thanks. &nbsp;Lynn','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-11 17:47:21','2016-03-11 17:47:21',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22226,454,4169,'Dear Editor<br /><br />I am reseaarcher in bioengineering and microelectronics. I am sending this text as a smaple to edit and I hope we can continiue working on similar papers/reports and grant applications. I appreciate if you send me your feebdcak using \" track changes\" mode.<br /><br />Best&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-11 18:43:32','2016-03-11 18:43:32',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22227,1090,65,'For your review.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-11 19:10:25','2016-03-11 21:22:04',NULL,'upload_56e2d1d1a195f4.05367595__Doc (March 10-2.docx','_Doc (March 10-2.docx'),
	(22228,884,65,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-11 19:35:33','2016-03-11 19:35:33',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22229,4160,65,'A very thoughtful paper.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-11 20:37:29','2016-03-11 20:37:29',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22230,3499,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your abstract.<br /><br />As always, your ratings are much appreciated.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-11 21:09:49','2016-03-11 21:09:49',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22231,65,1090,'thanks a lot!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-11 21:23:01','2016-03-11 21:23:01',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22232,1347,993,'Hello! Thanks for choosing my services and for giving me a chance to help with your document. Just want to let you know I have downloaded and am working on the job. I probably will not be able to upload the edited version until after dinner eastern time this evening. I hope that\'s OK but just wanted to set expectations. Thanks again!','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-11 21:57:40','2016-03-11 22:09:17',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22233,993,1347,'Thank you&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-11 22:09:50','2016-03-11 22:21:59',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22234,4177,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your brief.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-11 22:57:54','2016-03-11 22:57:54',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22235,3535,144,'I would be able to offer you a 20% discount to edit the footnotes if that would help. I feel bad about them not being edited.<br /><br />Best,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-11 23:10:48','2016-03-11 23:10:48',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22236,144,4182,'I\'m new to the online editing scene and I\'m really just wanting to see what all of this is about on a slightly more personal level. I have high hopes that I will be pleased with the results and if so I shall bring my business here from now on.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-11 23:59:26','2016-03-11 23:59:26',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22237,65,3039,'I want to ask prof.\' opinion about my research topic through email.&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-12 00:41:12','2016-03-12 00:41:12',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22238,454,1792,'Hi Laura,<br />Here\'s a piece that follows Happy Hunting Elmer Fudd. &nbsp;Frank and his buddies are off to their hunting trip. The next piece is Cabin Fervor which is almost finished (neighborhood of 5k-6k words. Hope all is well.<br />Thanks,<br />Dan','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-12 01:14:06','2016-03-12 01:14:06',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22239,3964,65,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-12 01:18:48','2016-03-12 01:18:48',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22240,3961,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your paper.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-12 01:25:04','2016-03-12 01:25:04',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22241,3039,65,'The clean (all-in) version follows the edited one.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-12 01:35:27','2016-03-12 01:35:27',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22242,4182,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your sample, which really didn\'t require much work.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-12 01:36:10','2016-03-12 02:13:35',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22243,144,3078,'Please edit for grammar. &nbsp;This is a discussion board post.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-12 03:54:47','2016-03-12 03:54:47',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22244,3519,454,'Please let me know if you have questions. Thank you.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-12 05:58:44','2016-03-12 21:49:42',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22245,4167,454,'Thank you','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-12 06:12:03','2016-03-12 06:12:03',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22246,4171,454,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-12 06:22:02','2016-03-12 06:22:02',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22247,1347,993,'Hello again - thanks again for the chance to help. It\'s a a good document. Question - is this one document? If so, you might consider varying some of the language as the pages unfold. I understand the need for consistent messaging, but wonder if it\'s too redundant it begins to look self-serving? Just a thought. Best of luck and let me know if you need anything clarified. - Ben','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-12 07:40:28','2016-03-12 07:40:28',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22248,144,4185,'<p>I havew 2 papers for review and revising.<br /><br />1.&nbsp; Manuscript for journal publication.&nbsp; it needs more flow and editors have questions asked, which I am not understainding.<br /><br />2.&nbsp; PIP paper - for school work.<br /><br />Both need sentence structure, grammara, tense, flow and total fix....<br /><br />thank you!<br />pam</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-12 08:16:20','2016-03-12 08:16:20',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22249,144,4185,'I sent you 2 files for review:<br />1.&nbsp; PIP Normothermia paper for school<br />2.&nbsp; Family Visitation fmss for journal publication<br /><br />Please do review, revise, do any sentense structure, grammar, flow of the entire paper &amp; whatever you think is needed.<br />Thank you!<br /><br />I am not sure if the total fees were also correct.<br /><br />1. 4,881 words<br />2. 8,465 words<br /><br />Can someone re-calculate because the charges didn\'t seem right.<br />pam Windle','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-12 08:23:45','2016-03-12 09:04:37',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22250,144,4186,'This is a chapter of my master\'s thesis that explains the data mining project that my team conducted. &nbsp;want to focus mainly on grammer instead of formatting. &nbsp;Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-12 08:32:57','2016-03-12 08:32:57',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22251,4185,144,'I have only rec\'d files w/ a few words in them. I don\'t know what the problem is. You will need to contact Patti at <a href=\"mailto:info@editorworld.com\">info@editorworld.com<br /></a>','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-12 09:05:19','2016-03-15 03:26:22',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22252,3786,4180,'Check gramma and sentence structure. Make the content more pursuade.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-12 09:49:27','2016-03-12 09:49:27',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22253,3130,3342,'Submit a 250-word abstract on your topic for your Final Paper. It should be from a historical perspective and related to a contemporary criminal justice issue. In the abstract explain the issue, explain the historical attempts to resolve or address the issue, and discuss briefly the how the issue is handled in the criminal justice system today. Include the components necessary for an abstract. Need this by Sunday noon. If possible.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-12 11:13:37','2016-03-12 11:13:37',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22254,484,3816,'Since English is not my first language, I am not very confident with a lot of my word/phrase choices. I constantly have the feeling that there is a better (clearer, simpler, more natural, more professional and etc.) expression for what I am trying to say. So, please take to liberty to suggest replacement for any expression&nbsp;that does not sound natural to you. Thank you.<br /><br />Kwan','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-12 12:58:19','2016-03-12 12:58:19',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22255,541,3816,'Since English is not my first language, I am not very confident with a lot of my word/phrase choices. I constantly have the feeling that there is a better (clearer, simpler, more&nbsp;natural, more professional and etc.) expression for what I am trying to say. So, please&nbsp;feel free&nbsp;to suggest replacement for any expression&nbsp;that does not sound natural to you. Thank you.<br /><br />Kwan','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-12 13:01:24','2016-03-12 13:01:24',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22256,2104,3816,'Since English is not my first language, I am not very confident with a lot of my word/phrase choices. I constantly have the feeling that there is a better (clearer, simpler, more&nbsp;natural, more professional and etc.) expression for what I am trying to say. So, it would be really helpful to me if you could&nbsp;suggest replacement for any expression&nbsp;that does not sound natural to you. Thank you.<br /><br />Kwan','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-12 13:04:41','2016-03-12 13:04:41',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22257,993,3816,'Hi,<br /><br />Since English is not my first language, I am not very confident with a lot of my word/phrase choices. I constantly have the feeling that there is a better (clearer, simpler, more&nbsp;natural, more professional and etc.) expression for what I am trying to say. So,&nbsp;it would be really helpful to me if you could&nbsp;suggest replacement for any expression&nbsp;that does not sound natural to you. Thank you.<br /><br />Kwan','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-12 13:05:45','2016-03-12 13:05:45',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22258,3130,3816,'Hi,<br /><br />Since English is not my first language, I am not very comfortable&nbsp;with a lot of my word/phrase choices. I constantly have the feeling that there is a better (clearer, simpler, more&nbsp;natural, more professional and etc.) expression for what I am trying to say. So,&nbsp;it would be really helpful to me if you could&nbsp;suggest replacement for any expression&nbsp;that does not sound natural to you. Thank you.<br /><br />Kwan','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-12 13:09:38','2016-03-12 23:40:09',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22259,3384,3816,'Hi,<br /><br />Since English is not my first language, I am not very&nbsp;comfortable&nbsp;with a lot of my word/phrase choices. I constantly have the feeling that there is a better (clearer, simpler, more&nbsp;natural, more professional and etc.) expression for what I am trying to say. So,&nbsp;it would be really helpful to me if you could&nbsp;suggest replacement for any expression&nbsp;that sounds unclear, unnatural, or clumsy to you. Thank you.<br /><br />Kwan','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-12 13:14:05','2016-03-13 21:22:05',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22260,3078,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your assignment.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-12 20:44:50','2016-03-12 20:44:50',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22261,3130,3342,'Good day Dr. Justin,&nbsp;<br /><br />This abstract is for my Ph.D. program; This final project will consist of writing a proposal seeking funding from the Department of Justice to develop a program that addresses an issue that I have selected. As a result, my Professor has directed us to write our abstract as though reviewers read only this.&nbsp;<br /><br />I have reattached the paper with some follow-on questions and additional changes. I am trying ensure my Abstract is strong.&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-12 20:59:20','2016-03-12 21:16:27',NULL,'upload_56e43cd8b80461.04026046_SDEW_66472_1.docx','SDEW_66472_1.docx'),
	(22262,3961,541,'A fluent and engaging piece with an effective use of sources. <br />A pleasure to read.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-12 21:14:38','2016-03-12 21:14:38',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22263,3342,3130,'I have, I hope, answered your questions. &nbsp;Best of luck.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-12 21:58:06','2016-03-13 00:24:45',NULL,'upload_56e44a9e7022e9.35503856_SDEW_66472_1.docx','SDEW_66472_1.docx'),
	(22264,144,2576,'Hello,<br /><br />You previously edited a paper for me in 2015. &nbsp;I am currently working on my research disseration proposal and will like any feedback on the document.<br /><br />Kind Regards,<br /><br />Cheri Scott','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-12 22:43:13','2016-03-12 22:43:13',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22265,884,65,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-12 23:05:41','2016-03-12 23:05:41',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22266,2424,65,'Thank you','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-12 23:13:07','2016-03-12 23:13:07',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22267,144,4162,'Please use APA style editing. I do want two spaces after the period.&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-12 23:40:03','2016-03-12 23:40:03',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22268,144,4162,'Please use APA 6th edition editing for all pages. Please leave two spaces after the comma.<br />And, please disregard the previous document where I made a mistakeand placed a comma in the word count and was not charged the correct amount.&nbsp;<br />In other words, please do not edit the same document twice. I tried to send a message to you after I realized my error, but then just decided to upload the document again and pay the correct cost.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-12 23:52:51','2016-03-12 23:52:51',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22269,4186,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your chapter.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-13 00:03:40','2016-03-13 00:03:40',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22270,4183,3130,'As you probably gathered from my profile, forensics is not my field. &nbsp;Therefore, I was unable to make any useful observations concerning either the science or the math in this article -- but I assume that\'s not what you hired me for. &nbsp;The article is very well written, but I made a few small changes here and there.<br /><br />If you are pleased with my work, please consider rating me -- every good rating helps.<br /><br />J.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-13 00:05:23','2016-03-13 00:05:23',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22271,3130,3342,'Yes,&nbsp;<br /><br />Thank you for improving this paper. I looked over the paper again and made some amendments to the paper. I had to reduce the size down to 250 words.&nbsp;<br /><br /><br />Thank You,&nbsp;<br />Mr. Wilson&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-13 01:01:13','2016-03-13 01:36:45',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22272,144,4188,'<p>Three 250 word limite short essays:</p>\r\n<p>Here are the prompts for the three:<br /><br />If you could work for any organization or company, which would you select and why?</p>\r\n<p>If you could plan and lead a semester-long college seminar, what academic topic would you choose and why?</p>\r\n&nbsp;What factors influenced your decision to apply to Barnard College and why do you think the College would be a good match for you?<br /><br /><br />','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-13 02:03:45','2016-03-13 02:03:45',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22273,144,4188,'<p>My document includes three 250 word limite short essay for &nbsp;the transfer application to Barnard college( wonmen\'s college affiliated with Columbia unversity)</p>\r\n<p>Here are the prompts for the three:<br /><br />If you could work for any organization or company, which would you select and why?</p>\r\n<p>If you could plan and lead a semester-long college seminar, what academic topic would you choose and why?</p>\r\n&nbsp;What factors influenced your decision to apply to Barnard College and why do you think the College would be a good match for you?','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-13 02:18:32','2016-03-13 02:18:32',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22274,144,4114,'I am trying to write a poem as a way of improving my language. could you please rewrite it in a good way but with same meaning','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-13 03:12:53','2016-03-13 03:12:53',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22275,2750,1877,'Hello,<br /><br /><br />This is a play review for my undergraduate English class. Please don\'t worry about the \"heading\" (my name, scenic director etc...) as this is how my instructor has requested it to be. Thanks in advance! :)','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-13 04:26:23','2016-03-13 04:26:23',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22276,4185,144,'Patti suggested that you resubmit the documents with the proper word count listed.<br /><br />Thank you,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-13 05:07:02','2016-03-15 03:27:36',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22277,2520,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your interesting paper. Because you sampled such young children, your results do not surprise me.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-13 06:28:50','2016-03-13 06:28:50',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22278,541,2537,'Hi there,<br /><br />Please check for any grammatical errors or sentence ambiguity.<br /><br />Thnx,','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-13 07:00:00','2016-03-13 07:00:00',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22279,3123,65,'Sorry to be so late. Good paper.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-13 07:00:00','2016-03-13 07:00:00',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22280,144,1550,'Dear Editor,<br /><br />Thanks for your help! Your quick turnaround is highly appreciated. <br /><br />Authors','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-13 09:36:24','2016-03-13 09:36:24',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22281,65,4154,'Please make sure that sentences are complete, correct grammer and that there is an consistant flow. If you feel I need to add more information please let me know. I need it by Sunday, March 13, 2016 at 5:00pm. thank you!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-13 10:41:29','2016-03-13 10:41:29',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22282,144,131,'I would like you to do me a proofediting service of high quality. I prepared this manuscript to submit to serious scholarly journal. I kindly ask you to try your best. Thanks for your support in advance.&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-13 12:40:57','2016-03-13 12:40:57',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22283,2750,4192,'Good morning (evening),&nbsp;<br /><br />Attached is three different in progress drafts all in one document. The difference between these drafts is conversational tone and style. I am writing this on behalf of an association executive of a media non-profit. When completed I will present one, possibly two drafts options for her review. This announcement is a \"Letter form the President\" that will blast in an email campaign to a target audience of c-level exeutives in the helath care industry. It\'s purpose is to:&nbsp;<br /><br />Inform recipentas about the re-branding of a conference. The voice and tone should be something that one would expect from a chief editor--conversational and accessible, yet refined, concise and editoral.&nbsp;<br /><br />Please feel free to shorten any or all of these in drafts. I really need these to reflect the voice and tone of a chief executive, so any way you can assist in this regard would be immesnely helpful. Also, if you could let me know which of the three you think is the strongest your opinion woudl be welcomed.&nbsp;<br /><br />Thanks,<br /><br />Erin&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-13 15:24:55','2016-03-13 15:24:55',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22284,65,4192,'Hi there, I just need a quick revise on the attached paragraph attached herein. This content is part of a promotional flyer for an upcoming STEM conference. I would like for a creative revise that makes it sound more editoral. For example, the word new is used twice and I don\'t like the words \"much-needed\" and ingenious. I feel like it may be easier to just re-write the entire paragraph, so feel free to do so, as I have writers block. Because it is on a flyer, the number of characters&nbsp;could be increased if need be to make it sound better, but not too much as this content will be going in the bottom left corner of the flyer and cannot be too long.&nbsp;<br /><br />Thanks!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-13 16:47:27','2016-03-13 16:47:27',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22285,4192,2750,'Good morning, Erin:<br /><br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document and hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />MS Word includes track changes by default. Before sharing this document, please consider running Document Inspector. To do this, click File/Info/Check For Issues/Inspect Document on the Microsoft Word menu bar.<br /><br />When you open a document that contains track changes, the document appears in the Final Showing Markup view to show that the document contains edits. To review the edited document without markups, click Review on the Microsoft Word menu bar. Then select Final: Show Markup and click the drop-down arrow. Choose Final. To show the document with the edits, click Final: Show Markup.<br /><br />It was hard to choose between your versions&nbsp;-- they were all excellent. I wish all my editing requests were as well written. The best, though, is #1. I focused on it, and I think it has the polished conversational tone you requested. If you would like any further changes, even with layout, just let me know. I\'m happy to do that.<br /><br />Don\'t forget: to turn off track changes&nbsp;to read the edited version. It\'s a bit messy otherwise. &nbsp;&nbsp;<br /><br /><br />Best wishes - George<br /><br />I am usually available for editing between 6:00 am and 10:30 pm. If my status is set to unavailable, you can still reach me via Editor World.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-13 17:37:54','2016-03-13 17:37:54',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22286,4192,2750,'Hi, Erin:<br /><br />I made two minor changes to the document. Please see attached.<br /><br />Thanks - George','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-13 17:46:46','2016-03-13 17:46:46',NULL,'upload_56e56f46cfe005.91315486_EW_66486.docx','EW_66486.docx'),
	(22287,4192,65,'Thank you','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-13 18:47:03','2016-03-13 18:47:03',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22288,4188,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your essays.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best of success in being admitted to Barnard,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-13 19:50:05','2016-03-13 19:50:05',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22289,4154,65,'This is a very noble project. Good luck.<br /><br />Thank you.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-13 19:56:50','2016-03-13 21:00:11',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22290,2745,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your acknowledgments.<br /><br />As always, your ratings are much appreciated.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-13 20:03:20','2016-03-13 20:03:20',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22291,4114,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your poem. I have done the best I can, but poetry is very personal, and it was difficult for me to understand some of the things you were trying to say, as you will see in my comments.<br /><br />As always, your ratings are much appreciated.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-13 20:15:30','2016-03-13 20:15:30',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22292,3328,65,'A well-written text. Now all APA.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-13 20:40:38','2016-03-13 20:40:38',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22293,3653,65,'I nice and convincing letter. Didn\'t see how the last paragraph fit in.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-13 21:49:46','2016-03-13 21:49:46',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22294,3816,3384,'I found your writing to be quite strong and mostly correct in grammar. I have made a few changes/suggestions which I hope are helpful.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-13 21:55:26','2016-03-13 21:55:26',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22295,1163,4194,'I will be applying to graduate school and I look forward to your reccomendations. &nbsp;I do like my current format but I am open to suggestions. &nbsp;Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-13 22:12:15','2016-03-13 22:12:15',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22296,454,4195,'1.Please correct all the errors, such as grammar, spelling, syntex, style, formatting.<br />2.I want my statement of purpose to be concise and to the point without losing the meaning<br />3.When possible, please use better wording and phrasing without losing the meaning since english is not my first langauge, for example: different(common word) -&gt;various(less common used but same meaning);&nbsp;<br />4.Your detailed opinions and comments on my statement of purpose, such as whether it is good enough to be a statement of purpose, whether and what I need to add, what need to be deleted, etc.<br /><br />Thank You.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-13 22:20:04','2016-03-13 22:20:04',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22297,4162,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your paper. Bullying is becoming such a pervasive problem in schools. Very sad.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-13 22:51:29','2016-03-13 22:51:29',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22298,4162,144,'Sorry, I made a global change and then forgot to go back and correct the indents. Please use this version instead.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-13 22:54:14','2016-03-14 02:59:16',NULL,'upload_56e5b756f2c778.93800847_EW_66481.docx','EW_66481.docx'),
	(22299,454,3922,'Hi Laura,&nbsp;<br /><br />Hope you\'re having a great day. This is my final transfer supplemental essay for Rice University. Thank you so much for helping me thus far, you\'re an amazing individual!&nbsp;<br /><br />Sincerely,&nbsp;<br />Jae&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-14 00:45:21','2016-03-14 00:45:21',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22300,541,2988,'Please don\'t worry about those abbreviations, APA style, and passive voice. Thanks.&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-14 01:03:41','2016-03-14 01:03:41',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22301,65,3544,'Hello! As background below is what we were asked to do:<br />\r\n<p><strong>CEO&rsquo;s have their own way of</strong> (1) <strong>assessing</strong> their enterprise; (2<strong>) interpreting</strong> their situations through cognitive modeling; and, (3) <strong>translating </strong>the models into actionable strategies.&nbsp; This team case analysis is designed to test your ability to apply these three executive skills to a business case.&nbsp;</p>\r\n<ul>\r\n<li>Situational Assessment.&nbsp; Not more than a page summarizing what you see in the environment and the enterprise.&nbsp; It should be grounded in the business/economic fundamentals.</li>\r\n<li>Interpretation. Not more than two pages interpreting the business situation through a cognitive model that demonstrates rigorous synthesizing analytical thought.&nbsp; An explanatory chart (such as a Venn diagram, xy graph, 2x2 matrix, etc.) can be attached as one of your exhibits.</li>\r\n<li>Translation.&nbsp; Not more than two pages translating the cognitive model into proposed strategies for the enterprise. Prioritize the strategies in order of importance and be crystal clear how they relate to your situational assessment and cognitive model.&nbsp;</li>\r\n</ul>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-14 01:23:09','2016-03-14 01:23:09',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22302,2750,3544,'George,<br />Hello! Do you have any availablity to edit a document today? It\'s 932 words (enclosed). If not. no worries, I completely understand!!! <br /><br />Editor World has other editors available but I thought I\'d reach out to you first. <br /><br />If so, please let me know how best to pay since I don\'t see your name popping up as available.<br /><br />Thank you so much!<br /><br />Best,<br />Deanna','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-14 01:26:11','2016-03-14 03:44:47',NULL,'upload_56e5daf341d0b4.15559431_ANDRADE COMPANY2.docx','ANDRADE COMPANY2.docx'),
	(22303,144,1527,'Nyanidoc,<br />Please edit kloe\'s observation. &nbsp;Thank you! &nbsp;Julia','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-14 02:28:36','2016-03-14 02:28:36',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22304,4169,454,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-14 02:57:51','2016-03-14 02:57:51',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22305,3544,65,'No major issues other than the numbering/titling of the tables and charts and capitalizing the main text in the graphics.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-14 03:21:14','2016-03-14 03:21:14',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22306,2424,65,'Thank you','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-14 03:27:04','2016-03-14 03:27:04',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22307,1792,454,'Nice piece, as always, Dan. Thanks!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-14 03:33:49','2016-03-14 03:33:49',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22308,3544,2750,'Hi Deanna:<br /><br />I just received your message. I\'m probably too late to help you, but I am&nbsp;available.<br /><br />George','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-14 03:46:25','2016-03-14 04:04:24',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22309,1877,2750,'Hi, Dominic:<br /><br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document and hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />Once again, I made more changes than I really needed to. Your review was fine as it was. Of course, with track changes you can accept or reject and or all edits.<br /><br />Now for the usual boilerplate.&nbsp;<br /><br />MS Word includes track changes by default. Before sharing this document, please consider running Document Inspector. To do this, click File/Info/Check For Issues/Inspect Document on the Microsoft Word menu bar.<br /><br />When you open a document that contains track changes, the document appears in the Final Showing Markup view to show that the document contains edits. To review the edited document without markups, click Review on the Microsoft Word menu bar. Then select Final: Show Markup and click the drop-down arrow. Choose Final. To show the document with the edits, click Final: Show Markup.<br /><br />Great to see you back!<br /><br />Best wishes - TypeRighter (George)<br /><br />I am usually available for editing between 6:00 am and 10:30 pm. If my status is set to unavailable, you can still reach me via Editor World.<br /><br /><br />','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-14 04:23:06','2016-03-14 04:23:06',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22310,1550,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit another of your papers.<br /><br />As always, your ratings are much appreciated.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-14 05:00:08','2016-03-14 05:00:08',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22311,2550,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your advertisement.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-14 05:20:08','2016-03-14 05:20:08',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22312,144,607,'Dear Nyandoc:<br /><br />Any help with the organization and progression so as to make it read more clearly and smoothly is very much appreciated. Likewise regarding&nbsp;any grammar/ style issues I\'m not seeing.<br /><br />I had some difficulty referring to myself in the third person. Also, I wasn\'t sure how to handle the block quote for Ritchhart on page 9.&nbsp;<br /><br />Thank you very much in any case again for your time and help.<br /><br />Sincerely,<br /><br />JH<br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br />','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-14 05:22:00','2016-03-14 05:22:00',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22313,2537,541,'A fluent and well-researched piece, with an effective sense of tone. <br />A pleasure to read.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-14 05:30:52','2016-03-14 05:30:52',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22314,1527,144,'Thank you, Julia, for the opportunity to read and edit Kloe\'s observation.<br /><br />I always appreciate your kind ratings.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-14 05:35:04','2016-03-14 05:35:04',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22315,2988,541,'A fluent and finely detailed piece with an effective sense of tone. <br />A pleasure to read.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-14 06:01:11','2016-03-14 06:01:11',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22316,65,3223,'Format: 12 point Times New Roman font, 1 inch margins on all sides, double-spaced, etc. ? Eventually you will select a title for your paper, and that will go on the very first line of the first page of the literature review (not bolded, not italicized, not underlined &ndash; it will be in the same font as the text). You may place a tentative title there now, or you may just put Literature Review Draft 1 on that line for the time being. ? Use correct grammar, punctuation, sentence and paragraph structure (be sure to indent paragraphs; no additional space between paragraphs). ? Use correct APA format for citations and references.<br />This is the professor instructre for the&nbsp;a literature review, so do your best as your usual. I want you to ckeck that every cite I cited is in the references page and also the opposite way. This assignment worth a lot of points. &nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-14 07:34:17','2016-03-14 07:34:17',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22317,65,1090,'dear editor,<br />just now I submitted my document to you. But I also just received email from my supervisor who asked me to submit the document by tomorrow afternoon. He changed the due date suddenly and so I need my document edited by you by tomorrow afternoon (if possible by noon). sorry for the inconvenience since it just happended unexpectedly, with his email just receiving now.<br />As usual, the document must be very well-written and so please edit it thoroughly.<br />Also as I said, could you please edit it and return by tomorrow noon?<br /><br />sorry for asking this due to unforseen email that I just received after submitting the document to you. thanks for your help and look forward to receiving your excellent service.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-14 07:46:01','2016-03-14 16:32:29',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22318,144,3519,'Please check for grammar error, verb conjugation and sentence congruency. Thank you&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-14 08:02:23','2016-03-14 08:02:23',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22319,454,3739,'<p>Good morning. So I have gone through the paper and made the suggested corrections. It took a bit longer than what I would have like and I apologize for that. I have attached the paper with this message as well as made notes in the paper showing where I address the concern. I am struggling with my Methodology section which is causing me a bit of anxiety. Thank you again for your assistance. Look forward to hearing from you.</p>','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-14 10:03:07','2016-03-14 10:23:12',NULL,'upload_56e6541bb51022.23053250_Aaliyah\'s Paper CP2 with edits accepted (1).docx','Aaliyah\'s Paper CP2 with edits accepted (1).docx'),
	(22320,3739,454,'Hi, Aaliyah,<br /><br />Got it--I will start on this tomorrow :)','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-14 10:24:19','2016-03-14 11:55:44',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22321,454,3739,'Thank you','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-14 11:56:08','2016-03-15 01:41:35',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22322,1090,65,'Not a problem at all. I\'ll do it now (8:30 EST).<br /><br />Thank you for the update note.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-14 16:34:13','2016-03-14 16:47:35',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22323,1090,65,'Hope this helps. Thank you.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-14 17:38:32','2016-03-14 19:07:34',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22324,884,65,'Thank you','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-14 17:53:50','2016-03-14 17:53:50',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22325,144,4185,'<p>Please review, revise, do grammar and sentence structure and especially flow of the mss.<br />I sent this mss last Friday, but I guess you did not get it.&nbsp; There was an error in my billing &amp; I also sent you a message last friday as well.<br /><br />Thank you!</p>\r\n<p>pam</p>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-14 19:04:19','2016-03-14 19:04:19',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22326,144,4185,'<p>Please review and revise this PIP paper for capstone, APA format as well. This is my 2nd mss I sent also since last Friday but had problems with payment &amp; was not notified until yesterday that an error was made.<br /><br />Need sentence structure, flow, grammar, &amp; whatever you think is needed for this mss.<br />thank you!<br />Pam</p>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-14 19:09:37','2016-03-14 19:09:37',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22327,65,1090,'dear editor,<br />I ahve a quick question. In your edited version as shown in the following sentence below<br /><br />\"Alteration as aggregated forms appears as concentrations of nano-TiO<sub>2</sub> increases, which then contribute to the toxicity.&nbsp;\'<br /><br />Here I believe it should be written as follows.<br /><br />Alteration as aggregated forms appears as concentrations of nano-TiO<sub>2</sub> increase, which then contributes to the toxicity.<br /><br />Can you please check and let me know soon?<br /><br />thanks','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-14 20:12:23','2016-03-14 20:16:36',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22328,1090,65,'You\'re correct.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-14 20:17:33','2016-03-15 04:14:37',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22329,484,2066,'British spelling please','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-14 20:46:22','2016-03-14 20:46:22',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22330,993,938,'I would like to submit this as a column for the news paper I work for. On Fridays the living section editor runs a guest column submitted by employees outside the news room. I did not use an outline, though I should have. I also admit I did not check for style, which should be AP, nor am I sure that this flows, has enough background information, nor will it move anyone. As you can see I am very emotional about this. My half brother is 35 years older than me. He is mor like a father and this letter means so much to me.&nbsp;<br />Should I talk more about my service? As you see the word count is 1000, however the word count for guest columns is 700 words. How do I include enough information to make this interesting. <br />Oh, by the way I see you graduated from Syracuse. I attended the military photo-journalism program there in the late 80\'s. I also see you work for Gannet. As you can see I work for your rival, McClatchy. I chose you because you are a Syracuse grad. I look forward to working with you on other projects. Thanks.&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-14 20:52:33','2016-03-14 20:52:33',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22331,3816,993,'Hello! Very well done, made minor tweaks.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-14 21:12:58','2016-03-14 21:12:58',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22332,484,2066,'British spelling please','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-14 21:49:11','2016-03-14 21:49:11',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22333,607,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your paper.<br /><br />As before, if you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it greatly.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-14 23:38:16','2016-03-14 23:38:16',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22334,2104,3816,'Hi,<br />Thank you for the previous free sample edit. I apreciate&nbsp;you making my writing stronger by parsing down all the unnecessary words. I have made some changes to the document. Would you please give it another go through? Thanks.<br />Kwan','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-15 00:28:24','2016-03-15 00:28:24',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22335,454,4198,'edit for journal article','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-15 01:48:21','2016-03-15 01:48:21',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22336,2066,484,'<p class=\"p1\"><b>Thank you for the opportunity to edit your work. Please let me know if there are any issues, and I will address them asap.</b></p>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-15 01:54:15','2016-03-15 01:54:15',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22337,2066,484,'<p class=\"p1\"><b>Thank you for the opportunity to edit your work. Please let me know if there are any issues, and I will address them asap.</b></p>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-15 01:54:36','2016-03-15 01:54:36',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22338,3816,484,'<p class=\"p1\"><b>Thank you for the opportunity to sample edit your work. I gave you a sample edit of the first paragraph, which should give you an idea of the approach I would take to this project. Please let me know if I can be of further service.</b></p>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-15 01:55:08','2016-03-15 01:55:08',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22339,4185,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your paper. I will start on the next one shortly.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work when you receive both papers, I would appreciate it greatly.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-15 01:56:08','2016-03-15 03:28:19',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22340,2750,2424,'Hi George,<br />I don\'t know how much I\'ll be using editing services in the near future as I am completely broke, but for me the most useful edits are those in the middle, i.e. neithercomplete overhaul nor just punctuation check. Of course, every editor has a style and I can\'t ask you anythign too specific. It\'s simply the case that I benefit the most from changes, corrections, and suggestions that improve the text without dramatically altering the meaning. This piece is not even a quote. It\'s simply an important (and rather unfortunate) correspondence, so you can make any changes you see fit, although I don\'t know if they are necessary. Thank you!&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-15 01:57:47','2016-03-15 02:26:20',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22341,3922,454,'Thanks, Jae!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-15 02:19:32','2016-03-15 02:19:32',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22342,2424,2750,'Hi, Ivan:<br /><br />Great to see you back!<br /><br />I am sorry to hear that you might not be submitting again, or as often, due to financial pressures, but there is a way around that. You usually send very short pieces, so why not just send a message to me and incorporate&nbsp;the paragraph for editing. I can\'t guarantee that I would get back to you the same day, or even the next, but I will get back to you, and at no charge. You\'ve been a loyal client, so that\'s the least I can do, and I always enjoy your submissions. Believe me, I understand&nbsp;your position: I\'m not rolling in money myself. So, if I\'ve been any help at all, let\'s keep it going.<br /><br />You were right about your latest submission. I\'ve just tightened a little bit.<br /><br /><br />Best wishes - George<br /><br /><br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-15 02:35:42','2016-03-15 17:04:00',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22343,3223,65,'An extensive edit to get the text into the APA format.<br /><br />The in-text citations were wrong as was the references list.<br /><br />Just accept all of the changes and then review and revise.<br /><br />Thank you.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-15 05:17:52','2016-03-16 03:07:53',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22344,4160,65,'Just a quick note to let you know I\'m well into your&nbsp;text and will send it in about 1.5 hrs. I can see it\'s in APA, which is fine.<br /><br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-15 05:29:55','2016-03-15 05:34:17',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22345,65,4160,'Thank you, no worries. If you need to send it tomorrow that is fine too. Yes, it is APA. my apologies if I did not put that in the request. <br /><br />I appreciate you for letting me know where you are with it and please do not feel rushed to meet the deadline. I dont actually need it until Wednesday or Thursday. <br /><br />Thanks,<br />Angie','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-15 05:35:15','2016-03-15 05:36:48',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22346,4160,65,'Thank you for the update.<br /><br />You\'ve written it very well and so I\'m moving through it at a reasonable pace. Will not rush, but should have it done on time in case you have any questions tomorrow.<br /><br />Will be 11 or thereafter (until the bell tolls midnight).<br /><br />I don\'t normally cut so close to the deadline, but it\'s been a busy weekend/Monday.<br /><br />Have a good evening.<br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-15 05:43:59','2016-03-15 05:44:51',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22347,454,4200,'My first language is Spanish. I would like to get help with prepositions and use of word choice and anything else to communicate in a professional manner.<br /><br />Thanks.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-15 05:57:25','2016-03-15 05:57:25',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22348,1772,3961,'Kindly edit and make it look very academic. Feel free to make comments and suggestions. A lot depends on this paper and I am trusting you to make this paper worthy. I am also pasting the guidlines for this paper below so that you are able to offer me your opinion if everything has been answered.<br />I wouldbe glad if the Citation is also worked on.<br /><br />\r\n<p><strong>Outline for HLTH 607 Intervention Paper</strong></p>\r\n<p>The following needs to be included in your proposal:</p>\r\n<ol>\r\n<li>Introduction to health issue &ndash; why is this issue? (10 points)<ol>\r\n<li>Comprehensive review of health issue</li>\r\n<li>Target audience</li>\r\n</ol></li>\r\n</ol>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<ol start=\"2\">\r\n<li>Discuss the health behaviors that contribute to the health issue?&nbsp; What behavior(s) are you going to focus on for the social ecological analysis? (5 points)</li>\r\n</ol>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<ol start=\"3\">\r\n<li>Social-ecological analysis of health behavior (20 points)<ol>\r\n<li>Individual factors (biological and psychological - knowledge, attitudes, self-efficacy, values, skills)</li>\r\n<li>Interpersonal factors (family and friends &ndash; social support, cultural factors, peer pressure)</li>\r\n<li>Organizational factors (school, worksite, church influences)</li>\r\n<li>Community factors (physical environmental factors)</li>\r\n<li>Societal factors (laws, regulations, policies)</li>\r\n</ol></li>\r\n</ol>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<ol start=\"4\">\r\n<li>Based on your social ecological analysis, select a level for intervention (eg. individual level).&nbsp; Justify why you chose this level (5 points).</li>\r\n</ol>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<ol start=\"5\">\r\n<li>Discuss the health behavior theory you chose and why?&nbsp; It should be related to the level of intervention that you are going to focus on (HBM for individual level) (15 points).<ol>\r\n<li>Include brief overview of theory &ndash; history and constructs</li>\r\n<li>Literature review of chosen theory for health behavior &ndash; if none, say so</li>\r\n</ol></li>\r\n</ol>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<ol start=\"6\">\r\n<li>Overview of your proposed intervention based on the constructs of the health behavior theory (25 points).<ol>\r\n<li>What is the overall goal of your intervention?</li>\r\n<li>What objectives do you want to accomplish? &ndash; These should link back to the theory.&nbsp; If you chose to use HBM for individual level intervention.&nbsp; One of your objectives might be to increase self-efficacy in your target audience.</li>\r\n</ol></li>\r\n</ol>\r\n<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; i.&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Process and outcome objectives</p>\r\n<ol>\r\n<li>What activities will you do to operationalize the constructs?</li>\r\n</ol>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>You will also get 20 points for the following:</p>\r\n<p>Correct use of APA Style (5 points)</p>\r\n<p>Comprehensive use of scientific resources (5 points)</p>\r\n<p>Grammar, spelling, structure of paper (5 points)</p>\r\n<p>Overall demonstration of understanding of theory (5 points)</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-15 07:12:05','2016-03-15 07:12:05',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22349,4160,65,'So I looked at the entire text (might as well). Most of the edits are word choices, punctuation and a bit of spelling.<br /><br />Thank you.<br /><br />Jackson','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-15 07:40:31','2016-03-15 07:40:31',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22350,3816,2104,'This is a great lettter. &nbsp;I suggested a few additional revisions and including your contact information if you are not using letterhead that already has it. &nbsp;Best of luck with your application.<br />Thanks,<br />Clarity','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-15 07:59:17','2016-03-15 07:59:17',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22351,1772,2552,'Hi Wordworthreading,<br />This is a combined fellowship application document, including my CV, SOP, a budget plan, and several lists. Please help me edit it and check its clarity. Thanks!<br /><br />Best,<br />Shu-Wei','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-15 08:20:59','2016-03-15 08:20:59',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22352,1443,65,'You didn\'t need much in this well-written text. I made a few editorial changes and divided several of the longer paragaphs.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-15 20:23:12','2016-03-15 20:23:12',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22353,3235,65,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-15 20:53:10','2016-03-15 20:53:10',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22354,454,3160,'Hello Mr. (Mrs.) WriteAid,<br />Over the last few years I\'ve written several fictional stories. I\'ve been passionate about reading and writing in English for a long time and I would like to self-publish them someday. The thing is that English is my second language; and even after years of reading and writing in English I still find myself struggling with things like prepositions, the use of gerunds vs. infinitives, and stilted dialogue, among other things. You mentioned in your profile that you\'ve worked with ESL students in the past, and that experience can be very useful to me.&nbsp;I\'m aware that drawing conclusions from a 600-word sample is difficult. But I was wondering if you could give some pointers about the sample and at the same time show me how you work on your editing. This sample belongs to a 100,000 word story that I\'m still working on. I would love to see it published someday. Thanks in advance. C.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-15 22:41:15','2016-03-15 22:41:15',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22355,4185,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your second paper.<br /><br />As I said, I would appreciate it if you were able to rate my work.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-15 23:56:36','2016-03-15 23:56:36',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22356,65,1090,'dear editor,<br /><br />I have urgent letter for my supervisor.<br />can you please check the following document and let me know as soon as you see this message. I expect to submit a long document to you early next week. But this short document is urgent that I was sudenly requested to submit.<br /><br />thanks for your understanding and look forward to having your edited version.<br /><br />Document that needs to be edited below.<br /><br /><br />\r\n<p>To Whom It May Concern:</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;This letter serves to support ___\'s application for the admission of her __ study in the Department of __at the ___.</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>Ms. ___&nbsp;has been recommended by a prominent scholar, __, a collaborator of mine. Based on his recommendation and interview I conducted with the applicant, I&rsquo;m confident that she will be one of the best students in my group. As a MS student it is unusual to see a number of publications and prestigious awards she has received. Her GPA and TOEFL score are above the average although her GRE was just slightly 3 score lower as 302 over 305.</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;Based on her performance and experience in her research in the field I&rsquo;m trying to recruit, her academic excellence, and most importantly her strong desire to succeed with high motivation, I strongly believe she will be an excellent __ student, productive in both academic and research performance.</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-16 00:49:14','2016-03-16 04:28:38',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22357,65,3223,'I added the WHO references, and I fixed the one cite that you mentioned. You did a great work realy I approciate it. Can you please check it agian and see if there is any thing shoild I do. I have to submit it Wednesday morning. Thank you agian. &nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-16 03:11:26','2016-03-16 04:38:55',NULL,'upload_56e8969ea1cce5.86278819_EW_66504_1.docx','EW_66504_1.docx'),
	(22358,454,4200,'Hi<br />I have submitted my writing yesterday about 9:00pm. It is about an hour to 9:00pm almost one day for 600 words. &nbsp;<br /><br />Please let me know if you cannot do this editing and how can i withdraw my document.<br /><br />thanks','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-16 03:29:06','2016-03-16 07:21:22',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22359,2750,617,'Hi George,<br /><br />I hope all is well.&nbsp;<br /><br />Here is the 1st 4 pages of my 40 p. or so paper on ISIS. I have made some changes and addition to the last draft according to my professor\'s comments. Basically he wanted me to clarify the research questions more and be sure to state my thesis clearly in both the abstract and the introduction, which I thought I did.&nbsp;<br />So in short here is my argument: I am arguing that we should look at ISIS as a movement to establish a state, apart from being a threat to security. My paper does not offer a normative argument in regards to terrorism and doesn\'t evaluate them as good or bad. I am trying to explain a phenomenon scientifically only.&nbsp;<br />Of course I will need a theory frame, which I am working on now....I am offering a new theory of my own (ideology in state building) but I will have to build on previous theories as well......it is the hardest part of the paper. I am racing with time trying to juggle with two other projects and two kids at home!<br /><br />So sorry for the long email.&nbsp;<br />My best regards!<br />Maya<br /><br /><br />','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-16 04:18:47','2016-03-16 04:18:47',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22360,1090,65,'Just returned home.<br /><br />Thank you.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-16 04:38:19','2016-03-16 06:08:03',NULL,'upload_56e8aafb9efee0.37807228_To Whom It May Concern.docx','To Whom It May Concern.docx'),
	(22361,3223,65,'Took out all comments, accepted all changes, made a few minor edits. Looks good.<br /><br />Thank you.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-16 04:54:24','2016-03-16 05:10:09',NULL,'upload_56e8aec0187d26.55839695__EW_66504_2.docx','_EW_66504_2.docx'),
	(22362,938,993,'Hello! Thank you for sharing this story with me. It is very touching and I\'m sure readers will enjoy it.&nbsp;<br /><br />I mostly combined and or/condensed a number of sentences, with the purposes of simplifying. I left a few notes too.<br /><br />My main feedback for you to contemplate -- do you want to make the first part of the piece so much about you and the Today Show and the White House? I\'m asking because maybe you could make this more about your brother and what he means to you, and what it meant to receive such a terrific letter from the Obamas.<br /><br />I think it can work as you have it. I tried to shape those sections as a way of saying, \"I went through all of this. Here\'s why - my brother deserves it.\"<br /><br />I\'d be glad to clarify further.<br /><br />Thank you for the nice words about Syracuse - I dearly loved by 4 years there and it is a campus that is forever in my heart.<br /><br />I look forward to working on other projects as well. Thank you!<br /><br />Ben','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-16 05:26:32','2016-03-16 05:26:32',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22363,617,2750,'Hi, Maya:<br /><br />I\'ve downloaded your document and will start first thing tomorrow. If I have any questions, I\'ll be in touch. This sounds like a major paper, so I think it\'s a good idea to tackle it in stages, as you\'re doing. I\'ll keep your profs remarks on a note on my desktop (in case I forget)..&nbsp;<br /><br />It looks like you\'re using MLA style. If you prefer to use another style, please let me know. It\'s not difficult to change.<br /><br />At 40 pages, you\'ll also probably want a table of contents. I\'ll set one up for you, so it will automatically update as you progress. <br /><br />It can\'t be easy for you, juggling family and school. I\'m sure we\'ll do a great job, together.<br /><br />Best wishes - George<br /><br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-16 06:06:58','2016-03-16 06:10:06',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22364,2750,617,'Hi George,<br />Thanks so much for the reassuring message.&nbsp;<br />The style we are urged to use is APA, since it is the only accepted style for the American Political Science Association APSA.&nbsp;<br />Best,<br />Maya','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-16 06:15:23','2016-03-16 06:16:57',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22365,617,2750,'APA it is. Even better.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-16 06:20:42','2016-03-16 06:29:11',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22366,4194,1163,'Hi, there:<br /><br />I edited the document in the areas of grammar, sentence structure, flow, punctuation, clarity, consistency, spelling, detail, word choice, organization, and conciseness. I also made some suggestions per the standards of the Professional Association of Resume Writers and Career Coaches. It has been a pleasure!<br /><br />Thank you!<br />MasterEditor','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-16 06:21:17','2016-03-16 06:21:17',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22367,65,1090,'thanks a lot, editor.<br /><br />By the way, I\'d like to change a bit as follows.<br /><br />Can you check if this is ok? thanks again<br /><br />\"\r\n<p>Her GPA and TOEFL score are superior although her GRE was just slightly 3 score lower as 302 over 305.</p>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-16 06:24:25','2016-03-16 06:24:25',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22368,1163,3548,'This resume is very important to me. I hope that I can use your profession to revise my resume. Let me know if you have any question. Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-16 06:38:59','2016-03-16 06:38:59',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22369,4150,454,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-16 06:46:31','2016-03-16 06:46:31',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22370,4200,454,'Sorr y it seemed to take so long--the due dates/time are generated automatically. Please see comments within doc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-16 07:02:00','2016-03-16 07:02:00',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22371,4195,454,'<br />Please see comments within doc. Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-16 07:16:16','2016-03-16 07:16:16',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22372,2750,3904,'Hello George,<br /><br />This essay is a primary source analysis on the annexation of the Philippines in 1899 by the United States.&nbsp;<br />The sources were a little tricky to find so if you want to take a look at them, I will attach the links to them below.<br /><br /><a href=\"http://www.bartleby.com/268/10/25.html\">http://www.bartleby.com/268/10/25.html<br /></a><a href=\"https://www.mtholyoke.edu/acad/intrel/bryan.htm\">https://www.mtholyoke.edu/acad/intrel/bryan.htm</a><a href=\"http://www.bartleby.com/268/10/25.html\"><br /></a><a href=\"https://www.mtholyoke.edu/acad/intrel/ajb72.htm\">https://www.mtholyoke.edu/acad/intrel/ajb72.htm</a><a href=\"http://www.bartleby.com/268/10/25.html\"><br /><br /></a>You are always a tremendous help.<br /><br />Thank you,<br /><br />Emilia&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-16 07:16:20','2016-03-16 07:16:20',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22373,65,2520,'Hi, I\'ve attached the abstract for conference proposal. Thanks for your help.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-16 08:26:59','2016-03-16 08:26:59',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22374,1173,2588,'This is a newspaper article. Please edit using AP Style. I strive for concise writing free of fluff or unecessary words.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-16 10:52:01','2016-03-16 10:52:01',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22375,1173,2588,'This is another brief newspaper article. Please use AP style.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-16 11:45:49','2016-03-16 11:45:49',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22376,2424,2750,'Sorry for the delay in getting back to you, Ivan. I took an elderly friend to Emergency yesterday. She had heart flutters. But she\'s fine.<br /><br />You should collect these vignettes and call them \"Life\'s Wisdom\" or something like that. They\'re really very nice. You could hand them down to a grandchild.<br /><br />Best wishes - George<br /><br />P.S. In my last missive to you, which still&nbsp;holds by the way, I missed the perfect pun: \"Let\'s keep the \'conversations\' going.\"','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-16 16:57:52','2016-03-16 17:58:30',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22377,2588,1173,'Editing done - thank you!<br /><br />Karen','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-16 18:26:38','2016-03-16 18:26:38',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22378,2588,1173,'Edits complete - thank you!<br /><br />Karen','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-16 18:27:18','2016-03-16 18:27:18',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22379,2520,65,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-16 19:15:56','2016-03-16 19:15:56',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22380,65,3321,'The paper is for the presentation proposal. It needs re-wording and formatting so it looks for professional. <br />You can delete and add sentence if it needed. <br />Than you for your service.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-16 19:55:33','2016-03-16 19:55:33',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22381,144,2278,'Hello<br /><br />I see that you are unavailable now? I have a one page document to have it proof-read. Could you let me know when will you be available? Thanks.<br /><br />Anu','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-16 20:11:15','2016-03-16 23:31:36',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22382,3786,3253,'Please edit these three topics as though they will be used as a white paper/technical paper. Eliminate wordiness,&nbsp;create parallel construction, make sentences clear and concise, and use consistent terminology per topic. Please edit with rigor and show your edits with tracked changes. Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-16 20:50:24','2016-03-16 20:50:24',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22383,65,2794,'Jackson, Editor Extraordinaire --<br /><br />I\'ve decided, with Kindle\'s permission, to publish the 3 chapters of \"Beethoven for Sainthood\" each one as a separate short e-book. You have edited the introduction before, but now I\'m publishing \"Beethoven...\" as a separate one, therefore, the new intro must focus (sorry for \"focus,\" I\'m not a fan at all of this word...) on\"Beethoven for Sainthood\" proper.<br /><br />The version I\'m sending to you is my third attempt to write an introduction to it, and still, I\'m not happy with it. It reads to me as a summary of the e-book, not as a selling piece of it, what it is supposed to do.<br /><br />Besides, I ommited the last chapter, \"Beethoven Not for Sainthhod Anymore,\" where I maintain that the composer wouldn\'t need to be canonized to become more \"immortal\" than he already is.&nbsp;<br /><br />As always, I look forward to receiving your good input.<br /><br />Cordially,<br />Carl','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-16 21:38:31','2016-03-16 21:38:31',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22384,484,3886,'Dear Sir:<br /><br />I already recieve the document I sent you last week, and we are very pleased with your work the only thing that is missing are the grammatical rules that we are not applying on the errors you found.<br /><br />Hope you can help us.<br />Best regards.&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-16 22:21:32','2016-03-16 22:23:41',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22385,3886,484,'Thank you -- however, there are too many issues in regards to grammatical rules that need to be addressed in your papers, and it would not be economical on my end to write the rules for every change I made, and I also would not be paid extra for doing this work through Editor World.&nbsp;I am sorry I cannot be of further help on this.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-16 22:25:50','2016-03-16 23:06:53',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22386,1772,3434,'This is a section of academic journal paper. Please feel free to edit upon it to ensure it free of grammatical and syntax errors and make better flow.<br /><br />Thank you.&nbsp;<br /><br />Christina','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-16 22:30:53','2016-03-16 22:30:53',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22387,454,3434,'This is section of a journal article. Please feel free to edit upon it to ensure there is no errors and good flow in it. Thank you.<br /><br />Christina','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-16 22:39:29','2016-03-17 00:28:24',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22388,484,3886,'Can we pay you outside of Editor World or if you can tell us another way we can pay extra for this job?<br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-16 23:19:44','2016-03-16 23:22:11',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22389,3886,484,'I am sorry, I cannot take accept work from Editor World clients outside of Editor World. However, if you have any specific questions regarding the grammar, I will do my best to answer you through this messaging system.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-16 23:23:15','2016-03-16 23:26:04',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22390,484,3886,'Thank you so much.&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-16 23:26:28','2016-03-16 23:26:28',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22391,131,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit another of your papers.<br /><br />As always, your ratings are much appreciated.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-16 23:29:30','2016-03-16 23:29:30',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22392,2278,144,'Go ahead and send it now. I\'m getting caught up on some large jobs, but am in good shape now.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-16 23:32:01','2016-03-17 04:09:02',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22393,144,2600,'Hi Nyanidoc,<br /><br /><br />I sent you this paper for copy editing twice. I was satisfied with your work but the journal reviewers said there are some gramatical and syntax errors and flow issues in it. So I am sending this again. I trust your work!!<br /><br />The document I sent you is in the second revision phase of journal review. I hope you could help me improve the quality of communication in this paper. <br /><br /><strong>IMPORTANT</strong>: Please do not change the yellow color in the document because that indicates revision changes I have made for journal review. Also, please do not change the format of the abstract because that is specially required by the journal. <br /><br />I look forward to receiving your copy editing work soon.<br /><br />Thank you.<br /><br />Christina','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-17 00:04:45','2016-03-17 00:04:45',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22394,3321,65,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-17 00:10:05','2016-03-17 00:10:05',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22395,1772,2546,'Hi, I am an international scholar and need your review with grammatical corrections. You can also revise phrases and sentences as more native writing style. Thank you for your work.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-17 00:11:38','2016-03-17 00:11:38',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22396,144,4160,'Hello, <br /><br />I would like the attached document to be edited for grammar, tenses, mechanics, and all of the typical things. Please let me know if you have any questions. <br /><br />Kindly, <br />Angie','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-17 00:32:23','2016-03-17 00:32:23',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22397,4150,454,'Hello,<br /><br />Thank you for your kind rating! I was very impressed with your English--I certainly could never hope to learn Korean well enough to write a book!<br /><br />I understand that you do not want to send the book for a second edit. I will, then, go through the copy I have to make sure everything is consistent and send it back to you through this messaging system. That way you will have the cleanest possible copy.<br /><br />Thank you so much.<br /><br />Laura Kenney','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-17 00:32:23','2016-03-17 01:45:08',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22398,2794,65,'<p>Carl, writer extraordinaire,<br /> <br /> Good to hear from you and see that you\'re still head-long into bold topics.<br /> <br /> As always, thank you.<br /> <br /> Jackson</p>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-17 00:35:30','2016-03-17 00:35:30',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22399,3519,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your paper.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-17 00:45:48','2016-03-17 00:45:48',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22400,65,2794,'Jackson, editor extraordinaire -<br /><br />You have never let me down! Wonderful work!<br /><br />All the best,<br />Carl, writer extraordinaire (you said it...)','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-17 01:30:36','2016-03-17 01:59:30',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22401,144,4207,'Greetings. I have a terrible habit of reusing the same words and phrases throughout this paper. I need assistance with that. Also, I need help ensuring that the paper has a concise flow. My punctuations are really out of whack and all need double checking. I have a bad habit of comma splicing, and putting apostrophes in the wrong place. My MLA needs tuning up as well as my in-text citations and bibliography.&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-17 01:42:53','2016-03-17 01:42:53',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22402,2794,65,'You are \"Carl the Bold, Writer of the Realm\" as you take on the remarkable topics.<br /><br />Keep doing so.<br /><br />Jackson','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-17 02:04:24','2016-03-17 14:31:32',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22403,454,4150,'Dear Laura,<br /><br />Thank you so much for your kindness again. I would like to send the book back to you after correcting all as you editted, but as a matter of fact, I do not have time to do so now since I am busy to prepare to go to Korea next monday(March 21) and come back on April 16. So, now I am planning to do so after coming back. I want you can hold it until I come back and send the corrected one to you please. I want you can read it again after my correction since I would like to use it as the final copy for publication. I ask you one more thing to do for me if your are possible please. I hope you can write a short introducing comments for the author by using my personal information for publication since I know you read lot of such comments so far. Also, I want you can introduce me a good publisher to publish this book since I have no experience at all for publishing in the U. S. I plan to write at least a book per year from now on in English by the grace of God, and I will ask you to edit them too since I fee like your editing although I do not know you well when I read about the eitors before I choose and send the book.<br />I hope I do not make any mistake in etiquette to you and excuse me I did do.<br />Anyhow, thank so much again for your kindness and have a wonderful day.<br /><br />Blessings,<br /><br /><br />Sam','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-17 02:24:49','2016-03-17 23:51:43',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22404,144,4208,'Please edit and proofreading.&nbsp; Thanks!<br /><br />Tiffany Ngo','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-17 03:17:55','2016-03-17 03:17:55',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22405,144,4209,'This is a letter for my business. I am trying to solicit guidance/funds/advertisement for my business. I would also like to use this for another company as well so I tried to make it specific but not too much so I would be able to use it as well. I know you have a lot more experience than me in writing business letter so if you think I should add something to make it more personal/convincing you are free to add whatever to make it better. Thank you in advance.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-17 03:52:47','2016-03-17 03:52:47',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22406,2600,144,'Hello there,<br /><br />I have reviewed the paper again and made some changes. I did have to edit the highlighted parts, but was careful not to change your meaning. There were, however, many instances in the paper where it was clear that you had not incorporated changes I made previously, as I know I would not have stated the material as it was. Therefore, I would recommend strongly that you accept all of the changes in the document.<br /><br />If the editor/reviewers still have reservations about the writing, you will need to ask them to tell you <strong>explicitly</strong> what their problems are so that you can send them to me. I can tell you right now that I\'m likely to defend my editing vigorously (if you have incorporated all my changes), as I have found that most people do not have a good understanding of grammar and syntax and what they believe is correct, is, in fact, quite wrong.<br /><br />Thank you for the opportunity to review it for you again, and best of success with those pesky editors/reviewers.<br /><br />As before, ratings are always much appreciated.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-17 04:33:08','2016-03-17 04:33:08',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22407,3904,2750,'Hi, Emilia:<br /><br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document and hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />I don\'t think there are any problems. You did the bulk of the work. I simply polished.<br /><br />Please proofread carefully. I\'m wonderful but I\'m not infallible.<br /><br />If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World. I\'ll get back to you as soon as I can.&nbsp;I might be off-line for a short while while my computer runs through some maintainance stuff..<br /><br />Best wishes - George<br /><br /><br /> &nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-17 04:50:24','2016-03-17 04:50:24',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22408,3786,3253,'Hello,<br /><br />I submitted a technical paper today to you. If there\'s any way this could be completed by 11 a.m. tomorrow that would really help me out. Happy to pay the difference for expedited editing ... just in a bit of a rush on this. Thank you.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-17 04:59:31','2016-03-17 05:10:02',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22409,3253,3786,'I can\'t promise that, I\'m sorry. I\'ll do my best.<br /><br />If you need to ask them to put it back out to another editor, I would understand.&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-17 05:11:28','2016-03-17 05:31:06',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22410,3786,3253,'When I selected 2-hour and 4-hour editing, your profile came up. I tried a few other editors that came up when those options were selected, but then only 1-day was the shortest option to select. Anyway, please do what you can and know that I appreciate it.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-17 05:32:51','2016-03-17 13:02:00',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22411,3548,1163,'Hi, there:<br /><br />I edited the resume in the areas of grammar, sentence structure, flow, punctuation, clarity, consistency, spelling, detail, word choice, conciseness, and organization. I also provided some suggestions based on the standards of the Professional Association of Resume Writers and Career Coaches. It has been a pleasure!<br /><br />Thank you!<br />MasterEditor','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-17 06:30:36','2016-03-18 00:26:23',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22412,65,4210,'Hi,&nbsp;<br />&nbsp; I am working on my capstone for graduating this spring. This file contains only half of my paper because I am still working on it. But you will not find it\'s hard to understand since this file is the introduction and background part. (and I cut the title page)<br /><br />&nbsp;I am an international student, and I definitely need someone to help me with grammar and other technical issues. I like your experience in Japan with ESL writer, and I think you can understand my logical meaning behind my bad writing :)&nbsp;<br />&nbsp;<br />Please feel free to ask any question or provide any thoughts you have on the content. Thank you!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-17 06:38:53','2016-03-17 06:38:53',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22413,2750,1877,'Hello,<br /><br />First off, thanks in advance!<br />A couple of notes about the paper:<br />- I think that it might need to be re-structured (paragraphs moved around/ topic sentences adjusted)<br />-The goal is 10 pages. So, if possible, please try to add more than you delete<br /><br />Again, thanks!<br /><br /><br />','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-17 06:49:01','2016-03-17 06:49:01',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22414,65,3253,'Hello,<br /><br />Please edit based on Chicago Manual of Style. Check for parallelism, eliminate wordiness, edit for consistency, change passive verbs to active, etc. Technical/white paper usage.<br /><br />Thank you!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-17 07:23:21','2016-03-17 07:23:21',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22415,3786,3253,'My apologies, but I did find an editor who could do this in 2 hours. Can I please cancel this with you and send my next edit to you instead? Thank you.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-17 07:25:17','2016-03-17 13:04:37',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22416,144,4198,'Please edit to polish the language. Note that the word count might be higher than 3000 because of the havard referencing system.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-17 07:29:33','2016-03-17 07:29:33',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22417,144,131,'I would like you to proofedit this manuscript the way I wanted you to do for me. I look forward to receiving a professionally proofedited manuscript of high quality. Thanks for your service.&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-17 10:31:04','2016-03-17 10:31:04',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22418,144,3838,'This is my second time turning to your help. &nbsp;I have make a major revision to the original manuscript according to journal\'s request. &nbsp;Please try to make the expression more concise, and authentic&nbsp;of course. Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-17 11:47:52','2016-03-17 11:47:52',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22419,3253,3786,'Hi, Yes, please do cancel it. I didn\'t have 2- or 4-hour editing selected yesterday, sorry if that wasn\'t clear on my profile. I\'ll check and see why you thought I could. I had to be offline.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-17 13:06:04','2016-03-17 13:06:04',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22420,3253,65,'I\'m sorry I didn\'t see your order at 11:30 last night.<br /><br />I will completed it early this morning.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-17 14:09:40','2016-03-17 16:22:53',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22421,454,3739,'Hi, I wanted to check in with you, and see if you have had a chance to look over my paper?&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-17 14:12:36','2016-03-17 23:49:28',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22422,65,2794,'Jackson -<br /><br />\"Carl the Bold, Writer of the Realm?\"<em> DOUBLE LOL!</em>&nbsp;<br /><br />Quick question: I believe I know what \"B. the greatest composer who ever lived (<strong>all who disagree set aside)</strong>\" but am not 100% sure. Would it be, get out of the way, go to hell...?<br /><br />Thanks,<br />Carl','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-17 14:41:48','2016-03-17 14:41:48',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22423,65,2794,'Jackson -<br /><br />\"Carl the Bold, Writer of the Realm?\"<em> DOUBLE LOL!</em>&nbsp;<br /><br />Quick question: I believe I know what \"B. the greatest composer who ever lived (<strong>all who disagree set aside)</strong>\" but am not 100% sure. Would it be, get out of the way, go to hell...?<br /><br />Thanks,<br />Carl','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-17 14:41:51','2016-03-17 15:26:32',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22424,3253,65,'Thank you for your patience. I will ask Customer Services to adjust the fee from 2-hr to 8-hr.<br /><br /><br />','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-17 15:25:48','2016-03-17 15:25:48',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22425,2794,65,'All measures of greatness are subjective, unlike sporting events (for example, anyone can easily see that you hit 60 home runs or you hit only 20; same in golf: the score you posted is the gold standard and you either won or lost). How then to measure greatness? Whatever measure you use for Lincoln doesn\'t apply to other presidents as he\'s the only one who saved the union.<br /><br />In any written text, the author is entitled to his/her opinion. If you think B is the greatest composer, then he is...to you. Others will dispute this in favor of their own greatest composer (e.g. Bach). It\'s always a debate with intagibles (greatness, heroism, most influential).<br /><br />Greatness is hard to quantify. For example, Lee is regarded as a great general but he lost his only&nbsp;war.<br /><br />Cheers.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-17 15:34:48','2016-03-17 16:38:23',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22426,3253,3786,'I should be finished by 11:00 am.&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-17 15:53:02','2016-03-17 16:21:43',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22427,3786,3253,'Ok - thank you','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-17 16:21:58','2016-03-17 16:21:58',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22428,65,2794,'Got it. Thanks + Best, Carl','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-17 16:40:11','2016-03-17 16:40:11',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22429,65,2794,'Got it. Thanks + Best, Carl','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-17 16:40:16','2016-03-17 17:55:21',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22430,2552,1772,'Please let me know if you have any questions! Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-17 18:46:18','2016-03-17 18:46:18',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22431,3904,3389,'Hi there,<br /><br />Thanks for sending this to me!<br /><br />Cheers,<br />EM','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-17 18:47:45','2016-03-17 18:47:45',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22432,4209,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your sample.<br /><br />Best of success with your company,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-17 19:10:26','2016-03-17 19:10:26',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22433,541,4194,'<p>These are combined essays for multiple graduate programs. I have separated out essays for some individual programs. I will be applying to doctorate programs in nursing. Please contact me with any questions or clarifications.&nbsp;</p>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-17 19:20:17','2016-03-17 19:20:17',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22434,2424,65,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-17 20:20:06','2016-03-17 20:20:06',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22435,454,3550,'Hello -<br /><br />I would love for you to look for:<br /><br /> Content/interest. Does it hold your interest?&nbsp; Did I lose you along the way? Where? What do I need to change? <br /><br />Adequate transition from end of sentence to new paragraph.&nbsp; Also, sentence structure (are there too many adjectives/adverbs?).<br /><br /> This is my first attempt at writing anything and I would like to get your feedback - good or bad.<br /><br />Much appreciated!<br />Bernice','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-17 20:27:22','2016-03-17 20:27:22',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22436,65,1838,'Hi. &nbsp;This is a short document for Media Inquiry.&nbsp;<br />Please take a look at my answers (three questions are given).','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-17 20:29:38','2016-03-17 20:29:38',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22437,2424,3389,'Hi there,<br /><br />Thanks for sending this to me to edit! I hope you\'re pleased with my work.<br /><br />Cheers!<br />EM','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-17 22:27:29','2016-03-17 23:43:50',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22438,2278,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit another of your documents. It sounds like a wonderful program.<br /><br />As always, if you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-17 22:37:10','2016-03-18 00:24:00',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22439,4208,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your essay.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-17 23:23:19','2016-03-17 23:23:19',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22440,1838,65,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-17 23:48:23','2016-03-17 23:48:23',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22441,3739,454,'Hi! I\'m working on it--will most likely have it back toyou by tomorrow :)','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-17 23:50:05','2016-03-17 23:50:45',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22442,454,3739,'Thank you I appreciate it. I hope I am not a bother, I struggled with whether to email but it\'s do tomorrow 18 night by midnight est so I just wanted to make sure I had enough to make the corrections you suggest. Once again thank you so much for your assistance.&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-17 23:56:52','2016-03-17 23:56:52',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22443,4150,454,'Hello, Sam,<br /><br />I would be happy to do everything you mentioned in your email, which was written beautifully and with perfect etiquette. Please understand that you do not need to feel pressured to go over my edits and make notes but, if you do, I will certainly pay them careful attention. <br /><br />I do not know any publishers personally, but I can give you some suggestions regarding submission to houses and tips on how to approach the publishing process. &nbsp;I will look forward to receiving your notes when you return.&nbsp;<br /><br />Please have a safe and joyful journey!<br /><br />Thank you,<br /><br />Laura<br /><br /><br /><br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-17 23:57:13','2016-03-18 01:08:53',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22444,4160,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your statements.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-18 00:12:31','2016-03-18 00:12:31',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22445,144,2278,'Hello<br /><br />I have one question regarding the edit in the beginning of the document \"Is there a disparity in the application of Medicaid, for example, when we are hungry?\". I was trying to use an example of the&nbsp;implementation of medicaid (that the beneficiaries of medicaid might not be treated with dignity) to describe the public tretament for people looking to get free food. Do you think that the above sentence in quotation mean the same thing?&nbsp;<br /><br />Thanks<br /><br />Anu','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-18 00:28:56','2016-03-18 03:05:38',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22446,144,2278,'One more thing, can I change the sentence to the below?<br />\"Is there a disparity between the treatment for the receipients of Medicaid and those that receive free food?\"<br /><br />(Please also see my earlier message to understand the context)<br />Thanks.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-18 00:38:34','2016-03-18 03:07:25',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22447,3160,454,'Thank you!','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-18 00:40:14','2016-03-18 06:35:36',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22448,3961,1772,'I believe that the paper addresses all aspects of the guidelines. My only question is whether the religious influences that you talk about in the \"individual\" section should actually belong in the \"interpersonal\" or \"community\" section. &nbsp;Also, you include several internal citations of sources that are not found in your reference list. They are:<br /><br />Global HIV/AIDS, 2006\r\n<p>Cohen &amp; Trusell, 1996</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp; Aishat &amp; Olubunmi, 2016</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp; Biney, 2011</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp; Sallis &amp; Owenare (2002</p>\r\n<p>Please let me know if you have any questions.<br />Thank you!&nbsp;</p>','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-18 01:00:50','2016-03-22 21:23:37',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22449,65,4217,'Hello~ I just sent you my document. It is my statement of interest for applying the world bank. The paper has already edited by my professor and he gave me some suggestions in green words. Please follow his suggestions and edit my paper with 700 words limit. Thank you so so much and I am really appreciated.&nbsp;<br /><br /><br />Kelsey','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-18 01:10:36','2016-03-18 01:10:36',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22450,65,3572,'Hi -&nbsp;<br />Please share your edits using track change. &nbsp;Please see attached document.<br />Thank you fpr your time.<br />Ernestine','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-18 01:37:21','2016-03-18 01:37:21',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22451,1772,709,'I have to removed all the names and places for Confidentiality','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-18 02:52:25','2016-03-18 02:52:25',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22452,4198,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your paper. I was fortunate to avoid malaria when I lived in E. Africa.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-18 03:04:36','2016-03-18 03:04:36',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22453,2278,144,'I would say, \'For example, is there a disparity in the application...\'','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-18 03:06:53','2016-03-18 04:55:20',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22454,2278,144,'Say, \'Is there a disparity in the treatment of recipients of Medicaid and those who receive...\'','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-18 03:08:46','2016-03-18 04:57:33',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22455,617,2750,'Hi, Maya:<br /><br />Here\'s your edited document.&nbsp;I think it\'s coming along well.<br /><br />Please proofread carefully. I don\'t want to misrepresent your ideas, but sometimes, after several revisions, I lose track, particularly in areas where I\'m not an expert. &nbsp;Thank goodness for Wikipedia!<br /><br />I\'ve set up the paper for APA style throughout. Heading styles 1, 2 3 will automatically include those headings in your table of contents, so please use the other formatting tools for in-text formatting.<br /><br />I can\'t think of anything else. I hope this helps.<br /><br />If I don\'t hear from you, have a great weekend!<br /><br />Best wishes - George&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-18 03:19:43','2016-03-18 03:31:27',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22456,2750,617,'Dear George,<br /><br />Thank you very much for the editing. I will be sending you other parts of this paper soon,&nbsp;and I feel rushed because I will have to present this paper using powerpoint presentatiion in class on Tuesday.&nbsp;<br />&nbsp;I am also working on a smaller paper that I plan to send it to you tomorrow. Then next week I will have another small one too..<br />I wish you a nice and restful weekend!<br />Best,<br />Maya','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-18 03:39:04','2016-03-18 03:40:44',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22457,617,2750,'Thanks, Maya. And thank you, as always, for your rating. I\'m only too happy to help. Of course, it\'s a work in progress, and I understand&nbsp;that you\'ll make changes as we go along, but I think it\'s coming together nicely.<br /><br />Bye for now - George<br /><br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-18 03:43:08','2016-03-18 05:06:13',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22458,3899,3933,'time is crucial. pls, not later than in 2 hours.<br /><br />Regards','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-18 04:00:53','2016-03-18 04:00:53',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22459,3933,3899,'I took the liberty of cleaning up your in-text citations and creating a works cited page for you. Thank you for choosing The Word Doctor, I hope you are satisfied with the final product. Have a nice day!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-18 04:55:34','2016-03-18 04:55:34',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22460,4217,65,'I accepted all of the changes and took into consideration all of the comments in the original draft.<br /><br />In the text, you\'ll see a heavily edited version followed by text with all changes accepted.<br /><br />I hope this helps you.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-18 04:59:39','2016-03-18 04:59:39',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22461,144,2278,'Thanks. I appreciate it.<br />Anu','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-18 05:18:16','2016-03-18 05:18:16',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22462,1877,2750,'Hi, Dominic:<br /><br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document and hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />The paper reads well and you give plenty of examples. It is still a little short of your required 10 pages (it is 10 with bibliography), but if you think it needs an additional paragraph or two, let me know and I\'ll see what I can do. I\'m not familiar with the novels, but I might be able to flesh it out by, say, a hundred or so words. Otherwise, great job! Well done!<br /><br /><br />Best wishes - George&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-18 05:24:07','2016-03-18 05:24:07',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22463,3572,65,'The heavily edited version is before the \"all changes in\" version starting on page 4.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-18 05:58:49','2016-03-18 05:58:49',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22464,541,2101,'This sample is from an academic journal article that has submitted to a journal article and now has been asked for a revision. Thanks.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-18 05:59:11','2016-03-18 05:59:11',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22465,1772,2101,'This sample comes from an academic journal article that has subitted to a journal and been asked for revision. Thanks.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-18 06:03:39','2016-03-18 06:03:39',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22466,65,3369,'I could use a 8-12 hours turn around if&nbsp;available<br />Thank you','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-18 06:11:04','2016-03-18 06:11:04',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22467,3369,65,'A version with all changes made follows the edited one.<br /><br />Thank &nbsp;you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-18 08:37:08','2016-03-18 08:37:08',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22468,454,3677,'Just looking to make it sound as interesting and grammatically correct as possible.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-18 19:40:30','2016-03-18 19:40:30',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22469,3889,2348,'The file contains two user\'s manuals for two different food processing&nbsp;machines.<br /><br />One machine is&nbsp;a sausage link cutter, and the other one is a skewering machine.<br /><br />If I could attach some pictures on the file, it would have been easier for you to comprehend the procedures in the manual, but the pictures are omitted. So if you have any questions, please do not hesitate to ask me, or leave comments so that I can look into any uncertainty you might have.<br /><br />Thank you!<br /><br />Yas','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-18 20:34:12','2016-03-18 20:34:12',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22470,3369,65,'A very sincere letter.<br /><br />I included a copy below the edited one with all the changes acccepted. It\'s easier to review.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-18 21:37:08','2016-03-18 21:37:08',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22471,4194,541,'Nicely detailed and fluently considered. A pleasure to read.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-18 22:08:57','2016-03-18 22:08:57',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22472,4220,65,'<p>Nurses are special people because they help so many others, often not even knowing the great good that they have done.<br /> <br /> This story was a privilege to read. Thank you.</p>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-18 22:14:03','2016-03-18 22:14:03',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22473,2546,1772,'I changed some wording to make it more clear, but if I changed it to say something you didn\'t mean, please let me know and I will look at it again. Feel free to let me know if you have any questions or concerns.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-18 22:16:23','2016-03-18 22:16:23',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22474,3434,1772,'Please let me know if you have any questions or concerns. I look forward to working with you in the future. Thank you for the opportunity.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-18 22:30:57','2016-03-18 22:30:57',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22475,709,1772,'I added parentheses where I thought the identifying information had been removed. That should help you be able to add it back without missing anything. Obviously, doublecheck, as I may not have caught them all.<br /><br />Please let me know if you have any questions or concerns. Thank you','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-18 23:27:36','2016-03-18 23:27:36',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22476,454,3484,'Robert Penn Warren: Blackberry Winter &nbsp;(min. 800 wds)<br /><br /><em>Describe&nbsp;</em>the various ways that Seth notes the differences between a normal June and the period of a blackberry winter. On that basis,&nbsp;<em>define</em>&nbsp;the decisive strangeness of such an out-of-season occurrence. Furthermore,&nbsp;<em>define</em>&nbsp;how the behavior of the drifter falls within this strangeness. Assuming that the family farm is sold because Seth decides not to take his father&rsquo;s place,&nbsp;<em>explain</em>&nbsp;how the experience of a blackberry winter, including the drifter, altered the trajectory of the boy&rsquo;s life.<br /><br /><br /><br />','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-18 23:31:05','2016-03-18 23:31:05',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22477,2750,2787,'<br /><br />Hello Friend,&nbsp;<br /><br />Here I go again. Its a long shot, but I\'m applying for an undergraduate program at the National Institute of Health. I was given instructions to write a personal statement. A statement that explains and proves I\'m a good fit for their program. Of course, I will change the document\'s title (For Sale), but its true, I\'m trying to sell myself and convince whomever I\'m worthy enough! I\'m not sure what I have created here, but I do know its the truth. This was a difficult process because I feel so strongly about this program and finishing my education that it is hard to express. Please take your time. It is because of you that I have the confidence to keep writing. It is a privilege and honor to have you read my paper.&nbsp;\r\n<div>&nbsp;</div>\r\n<div>Thank you,</div>\r\n<div>Lindsay Bowen</div>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-18 23:36:56','2016-03-18 23:36:56',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22478,65,2983,'Hi,&nbsp;<br /><br />As an international PhD student, I want to check my document which is a cover letter for a fellowship application.<br /><br />Thanks. <br /><br />&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-18 23:39:32','2016-03-18 23:39:32',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22479,2787,2750,'Hi, Lindsay:<br /><br />I\'ll get right to it. If I have any questions, I\'ll be in touch.<br /><br />Best wishes - George','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-18 23:42:02','2016-03-18 23:42:31',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22480,2101,1772,'Please let me know if you have any questions or concerns. I look forward to working with you in the future.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-18 23:48:10','2016-03-18 23:48:10',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22481,2424,65,'Thank you.<br /><br /><br />','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-19 00:48:29','2016-03-19 00:48:29',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22482,2750,617,'Hi George,<br />This paper is not a real research project, but it may become so in 2-3 years from now if I decide to study the topic, and if I get a positive feedback on it. <br />If you could help me keep the minimum page requirements 10-12 (I have less..9) I would highly appreciate that. So, definitely what I am looking for is not to&nbsp;shorten it--even though I know that it is hard to edit with word count in mind. I apologize in advance if that\'s too much pain.&nbsp;<br /><br /><br />My very best,<br />Maya','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-19 01:10:01','2016-03-19 01:10:01',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22483,541,4194,'I may be reading wrong, but I do not know if the sentences make sense. Nicely done on the whole job.&nbsp;<br /><br /><strong>In the early stages of my nurse anesthesia career, I would like to devote myself to my current research in nurse anesthetists providing care in rural areas and reaching optimal health outcomes for publications in such journals as the <em>AANA Journal</em>.</strong> <br /><br />---I do not have any research at this time?? Was curious if the edit it missing a word.<br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-19 02:30:11','2016-03-19 02:43:55',NULL,'upload_56ec8173d72e73.18395547_EW_66549_1.docx','EW_66549_1.docx'),
	(22484,4194,541,'Hi, <br />&nbsp;Sorry about any confusion. Although I don\'t know the current state of your research, I thought it might be best to suggest that this is an on-going interest (at least, that\'s how I read it). While it might not be formal graduate research, your essay indicated that such research is something you are actively pursuing. Moreover, graduate programs like to see potential students as experienced students with defined research interests.<br />In other words, this sentence is saying \"I\'m just starting out in my career, but I\'d like to receive more formal training in what I\'m currently learning about.\"<br />&nbsp;I hope this helps clarify.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-19 02:53:15','2016-03-19 02:55:20',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22485,2101,541,'Fluent and engaging. A pleasure to read.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-19 03:16:07','2016-03-19 03:16:07',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22486,3739,454,'Here you go! :)','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-19 03:30:00','2016-03-19 04:00:16',NULL,'upload_56ec8f787d0369.31158737_upload_56e6541bb51022.23053250_Aaliyah\'s Paper CP2 with edits accepte','upload_56e6541bb51022.23053250_Aaliyah\'s Paper CP2 with edits accepted (1).docx'),
	(22487,2787,2750,'Hi, Lindsay:<br /><br />I hope I\'ve done you proud!<br /><br />What came across in your personal statement is just how nice a person you are. If anyone deserves a little luck, it\'s you. With two children of my own in their early thirties, when I read what you write, I think \"Hey, we baby boomers didn\'t do such a bad job after all!\"<br /><br /><br />Best wishes - George&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-19 03:31:05','2016-03-19 21:01:16',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22488,4207,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your thesis. I certainly would like to hear the Jubilee Singers sometime! It was never clear to me whether Fisk is an all-male U, so you may need to delete my ref. to sororities. It is something you should clarify in any case. Typically, I am absolutely ruthless about redundancy, but allowed you much more leeway than I do normally, so be grateful :) However, I did attempt to reduce the tendency to use the same phrases repeatedly. There are some organizational issues. I did not take the liberty of doing a lot of reshuffling, but have indicated where I think you need to make changes.<br /><br />I just now noticed your reference to MLA. I am afraid I don\'t know what style that is, so if I have failed to follow it, please do let me know what it stands for, I\'ll look it up, and will correct the Biblio accordingly.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-19 04:06:00','2016-03-19 04:06:00',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22489,454,3739,'Hi It wont allow me to open it<br /><br />','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-19 04:08:30','2016-03-19 04:08:30',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22490,454,3739,'Hi I keep getting a message saying that something went wrong when I try to open it. I am freaking out. Can you send it to my email ? <a href=\"mailto:aealmint@gmail.com\">aealmint@gmail.com</a> or try to resend it again. Please. <br /><br />Thank you','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-19 04:23:08','2016-03-19 04:26:53',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22491,3739,454,'Just sent to your email','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-19 04:28:13','2016-03-19 04:31:48',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22492,4207,144,'I have an idea. Why don\'t you say Fisk trusts the EXPERTISE available in the Nashville community, rather than making them sound like a bunch of yokels.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-19 04:30:07','2016-03-19 04:46:16',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22493,454,3739,'I have not gotten an email :/&nbsp; <br /><br /><a href=\"mailto:aelamint@gmail.com\">aelamint@gmail.com</a>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-19 04:33:40','2016-03-19 04:33:40',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22494,454,3739,'Hi there was a typo with my email, sorry. my email is <br /><a href=\"mailto:aelamint@gmail.com\">aelamint@gmail.com</a>','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-19 04:42:40','2016-03-19 04:50:39',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22495,3739,454,'okay, resent. No worries! Breathe!&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-19 04:52:58','2016-03-19 04:52:58',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22496,3739,454,'okay, resent. No worries! Breathe!&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-19 05:05:02','2016-03-19 05:05:02',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22497,144,4207,'Greetings! Thanks for all of your help, it is greatly appreciated. However there is one problem. The professor who is approving this paper likes for his students to discuss each source in a paper in present tense. You changed several of them to past tense. Example: This research examined.&nbsp;<br />My professor prefers: This research examines, this author argues. Since the final due date is 2.5 hours I was wondering if you could adjust that.&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-19 05:33:13','2016-03-19 08:39:59',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22498,1772,2101,'Please make sure this article (submitting for an academic journal) follows APA style and check language (e.g., sentence construction and word choice), grammar, consistency, terminology, and format. One of reviewer&rsquo;s feedback to this paper is this &ldquo;Though the much of the paper is very readable &ndash; there are sections that need to be edited for the grammar and proper English.&rdquo; Unfortunately, I do not have detail feedback on this comment. Also, any contradictions or confusions you can point out in the text would be greatly appreciated. Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-19 06:22:15','2016-03-19 06:22:15',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22499,3899,4174,'Doctor,<br /><br />&nbsp; I\'m in full panic mode. &nbsp;I decided to take the shortened semester option for my Master\'s capstone project while working night shift and planning my wedding. &nbsp;This was a poor choice. &nbsp;The document attached contains an unfinished portion of the proposal section of my project. &nbsp;I\'ve previously completed and double-checked my literature review, but in order to meet my deadline I\'ll need help proofreading and editing the proposal section. &nbsp;As you will probably notice immediately, I have not read over any of this section. &nbsp;I\'m already embarrassed for all the errors. &nbsp;You\'ll also see a few notes I\'ve made myself regarding citations and adding charts at a later time. &nbsp;My main concerns are fixing grammar/punctuation, sentence structure, and flow. &nbsp;The final draft will be in APA format, but this is just for your knowledge and I don\'t expect you to format the paper. &nbsp;I\'ve never tried an editing service, but these are desperate times. &nbsp;If the service goes as planned, I may have the rest of the paper edited as well. &nbsp;<br /><br /><br />&nbsp; Thank you in advance!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-19 07:27:56','2016-03-19 07:27:56',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22500,4174,3899,'Hello odazedo!<br /><br />I\'ve had a look at your document and it looks like you\'re in pretty good shape already. I\'ll take a more formal look at it in the morning when I begin work in earnest [it\'s 11 PM for me as I write this], but right now I just want to resassure you that I will have your proposal back to you as soon as possible. I know what it\'s like to be in full panic mode and how hard it is to stop worrying, but I promise you that I take my work&nbsp;very seriously and I\'m here to help. :)<br /><br />Best wishes for your forthcoming wedding,<br /><br />The Word Doctor','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-19 08:24:57','2016-03-19 08:45:15',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22501,4207,144,'Shoot. I just got this, but I\'ll change it now if it will help.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-19 08:40:44','2016-03-19 20:13:53',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22502,65,1090,'dear editor,<br />please edit this short document well and return it as soon as you can.<br />I expect to submit long document sometime next week.<br />thanks','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-19 08:59:11','2016-03-19 08:59:11',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22503,4207,144,'Here\'s the corrected version.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-19 08:59:43','2016-03-19 20:15:41',NULL,'upload_56ecdcbfb5b437.43335485_EW_66537.docx','EW_66537.docx'),
	(22504,2750,3321,'I need formatting of this paper as soon as possible.<br />Thank you very much','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-19 13:16:37','2016-03-19 13:16:37',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22505,1772,241,'Dear;<br /><br />This manuscript is the revised version. Particularly, blue fonted sentences were rephrased accordingly by us.<br />Please check grammatical errors and give more your attention on blue fonted sentences.&nbsp;<br /><br />Your editing service was awesome and we expect one more awesome service from you. Please make our manscript&nbsp;polished<br />at your best.<br /><br /><br />Best wishes,<br /><br /><br />Sung C. Jun&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-19 14:37:44','2016-03-19 14:37:44',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22506,3321,2750,'Hi, Rachel:<br /><br />Great to see you back!<br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document and hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World. I should be available for most of the day.<br /><br /><br />Best wishes - George<br /><br /><br />','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-19 17:26:12','2016-03-19 17:26:12',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22507,3389,4226,'Hello,&nbsp;<br />In addition to proof-reading, could you also look at the organizaiton and insert transitional words and/or phrases if possible? I think all the contents are there but somehow they are not streamlined or flow well.&nbsp;<br />I am supposed to write about professional goals, areas of interest, resources required and expected accomplishments. <br />Thank you for your prompt reply in advance. &nbsp;<br />&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-19 17:38:24','2016-03-19 17:38:24',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22508,884,65,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-19 17:48:22','2016-03-19 17:48:22',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22509,2424,2750,'Hi, Ivan:<br /><br />Another interesting vignette. I didn\'t change too much, thinking that it might have been a verbatim conversation, and I didn\'t want to make the same mistake twice. With track changes, though, you know how easy it is to accept or reject an edit.<br /><br />The funny thing is, with all of your submissions, I have a feeling that there\'s a short story in &nbsp;there somewhere. You have a knack, like Nabokov, of suggesting something larger than it appears.<br /><br />Best wishes -- George<br />&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-19 17:55:15','2016-03-19 17:55:15',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22510,4226,3389,'Hi there,<br /><br />Thanks for sending this along for me to edit! Per your request I have cleaned up the text not only from a grammatical standpoint, but also tried to help the content flow better. I didn\'t change any of the facts as you stated them, just added/deleted words as necessary. <br /><br />I hope this meets with your expectations.<br /><br />If you are pleased with my work, please consider rating me on my Editor page! I strive for five-star ratings at all times. :)<br /><br />Thanks,<br />EM','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-19 18:55:33','2016-03-19 18:55:33',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22511,65,3961,'Kindlycheck grammar and APA citation style. Kindly edit to make it seem very academic. I have run out of time and need to post it as soon as I can.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-19 19:59:42','2016-03-19 19:59:42',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22512,3838,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit another of your papers.<br /><br />As before, if you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-19 20:43:13','2016-11-07 19:40:30',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22513,3369,2750,'Hi, Sanchezha:<br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document and hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />Your document was well written to begin with, and most of my changes were simply cosmetic, neither better nor worse, just different. Here and there, I offered a slightly different &nbsp;choice of word, but I hope I didn\'t change your meaning. Of course, with track changes it\'s easy to revert to the original&nbsp;if you think I made a mistake.<br /><br />If you have any questions or require additional changes, please send a message to me. I\'m usually available from 6:00 am until 10:00 pm (EST).<br /><br />Best wishes - George (TypeRighter)','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-19 20:54:54','2016-03-19 20:54:54',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22514,3389,4226,'Thank you so much for your edit for my teaching narrative. This is the research narrative which is a part of three section prospectus. I will send you the servie narrative shortly. Again, please look at the flow and clarity of the content.&nbsp;<br />Thank you.&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-19 20:55:52','2016-03-19 20:55:52',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22515,1090,65,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-19 20:58:53','2016-03-19 20:58:53',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22516,3961,65,'Just accept all changes and then review and revise.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-19 21:27:53','2016-03-19 21:27:53',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22517,4226,3389,'Hi again,<br /><br />Here\'s part two back! Again, per your request I looked over not only grammar and usage but suggested a few changes to help the content flow better.<br /><br />One small point of confusion - you refer to a course \"lease\" in one sentence and then to a course \"release\" in the next. I changed the first to \"release\" in Track Changes, but go ahead and skip that if it should be \"lease.\" :)<br /><br />I look forward to the third part of your document!<br /><br />Cheers,<br />EM','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-19 21:41:23','2016-03-19 21:41:23',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22518,2787,2750,'Thank you for your kind words, Lindsay. By the way, if you ever need a document tweaking, just send a message to me via Editor World with details and I\'ll get back to you.<br />George','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-19 21:41:55','2016-03-20 03:46:34',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22519,3389,4226,'Please review the statement with the same criteria. If you can rephrase the goal in the first paragraph, that would be great too.&nbsp;<br />Thank you!&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-19 23:13:58','2016-03-19 23:13:58',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22520,4226,3389,'Hi,<br /><br />Here\'s the third part of your paper. Hope this meets your expectations!<br /><br />Cheers!<br />EM','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-19 23:36:56','2016-03-19 23:36:56',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22521,3523,4141,'See comment in the document regarding options for one sentence that we think sounds trite...<br />And the link on the video is broken because it will link to this article published on our website','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-19 23:52:06','2016-03-19 23:52:06',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22522,2576,144,'Hello Cheri,<br /><br />Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your proposal.<br /><br />As before, if you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-20 00:08:03','2016-03-20 00:08:03',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22523,4141,3523,'Thanks for choosing my services.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-20 00:46:00','2016-03-20 00:46:00',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22524,3523,4141,'Hi CopyCatch,<br /><br />is there a way to send me the document as your final edit without the annotations, etc? I do not have MS word and within google docs I dont know how to turn them off???<br /><br />Thanks,<br />Meg','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-20 01:03:21','2016-03-20 02:09:36',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22525,3677,454,'thank you','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-20 01:03:45','2016-03-20 01:03:45',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22526,3550,454,'thank you','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-20 01:04:13','2016-03-20 01:04:13',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22527,4141,3523,'Sure thing. I\'m near my house, so I will send from there.&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-20 02:10:13','2016-03-20 02:10:13',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22528,65,4227,'<p>This is a paper for a pharmaceutical statistical programming conference. I&rsquo;d like to have it edited for:</p>\r\n<ul>\r\n<li>Grammar, punctuation, spelling and overall correctness</li>\r\n<li>Consistency, syntax and tone</li>\r\n<li>Correct formatting and styling</li>\r\n<li>Ensuring the message is clear and effective &ndash; eliminate awkward phrasing, repetition and passive voice.</li>\r\n</ul>\r\n<p>Any suggestions on making the paper more concise and focused are most&nbsp;welcome. I&rsquo;m a programmer, not a writer so be brutal if that&rsquo;s what it needs.<br /><br />Thank you!</p>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-20 02:16:43','2016-03-20 02:16:43',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22529,4141,3523,'The document should be good to go.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-20 02:34:55','2016-03-20 02:34:55',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22530,454,4228,'Hello,<br /><br />I belive it is an straigh forward document. However, it needs changes. I really appreciate if you can help me to make it a professional document.&nbsp;<br /><br />Thanks,<br />Mahtab','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-20 04:33:26','2016-03-20 04:33:26',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22531,65,4061,'<h4 id=\"yui_3_17_2_2_1458357699581_305\">1.&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;Identify appropriate measures for each output and outcome and include them on your Chart.&nbsp; (No measure is needed for your Core Activity).<br />&nbsp;<br />2.&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;Create a new section entitled &ldquo;Measurable Indicators and Benchmarks&rdquo;, introduce these two concepts, and then identify your proposed measurable indicators and benchmarks for each output and outcome.<br />&nbsp;<br />3.&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;Add a brief analysis of the measurement difficulties you may face.</h4>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-20 04:34:48','2016-03-20 04:34:48',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22532,65,4228,'Hello,<br /><br />This Report is written in common language (similar to way that we speak), could you please help me to make it professional?<br /><br />Especially when it is talking about the pain in online social netwroks: I wanted to say people were defining bitter stories....<br /><br /><br />Thanks,<br />Mahtab','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-20 04:44:39','2016-03-20 04:44:39',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22533,1163,4228,'Hello,<br /><br />this a brief report. Could you please help me to make it professional?<br /><br />Thanks,<br />Mahtab','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-20 04:52:59','2016-03-20 04:52:59',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22534,2750,3687,'This is a conference abstract that I am trying to submit. The word limit is 150 words. It would be best if the editor could give me some edits/suggestions about how to have a hook for this conference abstract. Thanks!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-20 05:17:56','2016-03-20 05:17:56',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22535,2983,65,'thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-20 05:34:09','2016-03-20 05:34:09',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22536,65,3961,'APA citation&nbsp;<br />Grammar and sentence construction<br />Academic writing.<br /><br />These and any other issues you will find, Kindly make the paper more academic.&nbsp;<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-20 05:40:37','2016-03-20 05:40:37',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22537,541,4194,'You did an excllent job with my essays. I am extremely pleased. Thank you so much!','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-20 06:08:53','2016-03-20 07:12:27',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22538,65,3923,'Just a basic editing with better words and structure.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-20 06:46:46','2016-03-20 06:46:46',NULL,NULL,NULL);

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	(22539,4210,65,'<p>This was a difficult edit. Not that you did anything wrong, but I made a lot of deletions.</p>\r\n<p>Please accept all changes and review and revise.</p>\r\n<p>Thank you.</p>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-20 09:22:41','2016-03-20 09:22:41',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22540,4061,65,'Thank you','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-20 09:45:09','2016-03-20 18:47:15',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22541,454,3550,'Thank you for editing and providing insightful comments! I will make the changes you recommended and write a few more paragraphs. Glad you enjoyed reading the story.<br /><br />I guess the next phase would be to get in touch with an illustrator. Would you happen to know or recommend one or perhaps lead me to a site?<br /><br />Thanks once again.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-20 18:12:41','2016-03-21 02:10:22',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22542,144,4109,'Hello:<br />My client added a few additional paragraphs to the work and I need to get this looked at very quickly. &nbsp;Do I just process this as a new order or how do I pay for this work to be done? &nbsp;It\'s about 1500 more words that are just added on to the beginning and/or end of a few chapters.<br /><br />Thanks!<br /><br />-Jeff','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-20 19:06:58','2016-03-20 22:41:25',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22543,144,4109,'Here is the document if that helps--the changes are in different font--again at beginning or end of chapters. &nbsp;<br /><br />Just let me know what to do. &nbsp;Thanks!!<br /><br />I also am working with another client and will have a new project for you soon.&nbsp;<br />Thanks for the great work!<br /><br />-Jeff','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-20 19:08:34','2016-03-20 22:42:27',NULL,'upload_56eebcf2c29891.11799795_Joe edited manuscript (Repaired) (1).docx','Joe edited manuscript (Repaired) (1).docx'),
	(22544,3923,65,'A couple of other files to follow soon.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-20 19:27:19','2016-03-20 19:27:19',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22545,3923,65,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-20 22:05:43','2016-03-20 22:05:43',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22546,3923,65,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-20 22:20:32','2016-03-20 22:20:32',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22547,131,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit another of your mss.<br /><br />As always, your ratings are much appreciated.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-20 22:40:35','2016-03-20 22:40:35',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22548,4109,144,'You will need to submit it as a new job.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-20 22:41:49','2016-03-21 07:26:08',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22549,4109,144,'I\'ve downloaded it, but go ahead and submit the additional material (# of words) as a new request.<br /><br />Thanks,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-20 22:46:18','2016-03-21 07:21:01',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22550,484,2066,'British spelling please: i.e. realise','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-20 23:47:42','2016-03-20 23:47:42',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22551,484,2066,'british spelling please','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-20 23:59:37','2016-03-20 23:59:37',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22552,4174,3899,'Odazedo,<br /><br />I\'ve finished my edit of your proposal. As I said before, I think what you have here is very strong. I didn\'t need to make any really significant edits, just a lot of small ones. The subject matter was really interesting, and I thought you presented the matter in a very compelling and fascinating way. I do have three suggestions for you, however.<br /><br />I would try and define the concept of Compressed Shifts early on, probably in the \"Statement of the Problem\" section. You mention it several times throughout gut don\'t define it until the end, which I found a bit confusing.<br /><br />Second, I\'d make sure that your citations are correctly formatted. Right now you\'re giving the name of the author and the year of publication, but in an APA&nbsp;style document it\'s more proper to give the name and the page number in the source you\'re referring to.<br /><br />Finally, I would make a separate page or pages just for your charts and other images. It can really help with your formatting, which can otherwise be a real problem.<br /><br />That\'s just what I would suggest, but I think that your proposal is very well done. If you need help with the final, I would be happy to edit it for you. Good luck!<br /><br />- The Word Doctor','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-21 00:35:47','2016-03-21 00:35:47',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22553,65,4235,'<p>This is a PowerPoint presentation for my Interpersonal communications class. I will be giving a 5-minute presentation from this PowerPoint. Citation needs to be in APA format. I need help with sentence flow, structure and editing. I\'m not sure if the order of the slides or layout makes sense. Any feedback would be much appreciated. Thank you in advance. Trinity</p>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-21 00:56:53','2016-03-21 00:56:53',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22554,4109,144,'I\'ve finished it, but will return it when you submit it as a job.<br /><br />There were problems in the format that weren\'t there when I sent it back the first time. I\'ve corrected them.<br /><br />I changed the font on the new material, so highlighted all of it.<br /><br />Best,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-21 01:03:51','2016-03-21 07:44:57',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22555,3484,454,'Thank you','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-21 02:45:58','2016-03-21 02:45:58',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22556,2348,3889,'Hello,<br /><br />Here are your corrections!&nbsp;<br /><br />Good luck,<br /><br />KK','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-21 03:13:58','2016-03-21 15:51:18',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22557,617,2750,'Hi, Maya:<br /><br />Here it is.<br /><br />Although I say it myself, the document reads well, but I had trouble extending the length by more than a paragraph or two. I\'m not really an expert on Islamic law. Still, it sounds like an exciting, and worthwhile&nbsp;project, and perhaps I\'ll revisit it after I\'ve done some background reading.<br /><br />Speaking of Islam, I was thinking today that I haven\'t been consistent in your documents about ISIS. Is it ISIS, ISIL, IS, Daesh or Islamic State. From now on, I\'ll take my lead from you, but I think we should be consistent, perhaps explaining the preference in a footnote.<br /><br />Anyway, I hope the edits help. I just keep coming back to the document until it sounds right.<br /><br />Best wishes - George<br /><br />I am usually available for editing between 6:00 am and 10:30 pm. If my status is set to unavailable, you can still reach me via Editor World.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-21 03:20:58','2016-03-21 06:15:48',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22558,2424,65,'Thank you','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-21 03:21:24','2016-03-21 03:21:24',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22559,3687,2750,'Hi, Di:<br /><br />Great to see you back!<br /><br />I thought you did an excellent job, so most of my changes are cosmetic. I think you have a clear abstract now, though. If you have any questions&nbsp;or need further help, just let me know via Editor World, and I\'ll get back to you as soon as I can.<br /><br />Best wishes - George','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-21 03:24:57','2016-03-21 03:24:57',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22560,2750,3904,'Hello George,&nbsp;<br />For this paper, I know the introduction is a little lengthy, however, I need my arguments to be clear and precise about what I will be arguing in the paper at the beginning and it needs to be more detailed than other papers I have written. Other than that, feel free to shorten it as much as you need to, I know I tend to repeat myself.<br />Any questions please let me know.<br />Thanks again, you\'re the best!&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-21 04:14:30','2016-03-21 04:14:30',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22561,2750,3970,'Good Evening George, <br /><br />If you recall, you were kind enough to help me with my CV a few weeks ago. I am applying to Johns Hopkins School of Business for an MBA and have written a compulsory essay. The question is included in the DOC file. Please review the essay for any mistakes you might find. Any feedback that you have is greatly appreciated. Please be sure to check that I have appropriately cited my references. This is particularly important to me. While I work for the FDA and I recognize a lot of this material is common knowledge, I prefer to err in the side of caution. <br /><br />Best, <br /><br />Alfonso H Revollo','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-21 04:23:44','2016-03-21 04:23:44',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22562,2424,3966,'Hello,<br /><br />Thanks for letting me work on your paragraph. I hope you like the revisions I made.<br /><br />I would greatly appreciate it if you could leave a rating of the job.<br /><br />Thank you!<br />Wondrous Wordsmith','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-21 04:40:49','2016-03-21 05:57:14',NULL,'upload_56ef4311511734.04781988_SDEW_66599.docx','SDEW_66599.docx'),
	(22563,4235,65,'Thank you for the opportunity to review your file.<br /><br />Several issues:<br /><br />1. Too much text on many of the slides.<br /><br />2. Too many point sizes; I tried to reduce the variations.<br /><br />3. Works Cited/References. This was a big problem, so I\'m sending a separate Word file via email so you can see what the issues are. Some of the citations do not have full names and many do not have the website from which the information was obtained.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-21 04:51:02','2016-03-21 04:51:02',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22564,4235,65,'You can see here some of the issues. After you respond to the comments, you can paste this text into your PowerPoint presentation.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-21 04:53:43','2016-03-21 05:11:02',NULL,'upload_56ef4617c8bae2.16944260_References.docx','References.docx'),
	(22565,3961,65,'Seemed to be two texts in one file. Edited all.<br /><br />I also included a \"clean\" file (all change made) after the edited one.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-21 05:41:12','2016-03-21 05:41:12',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22566,2750,617,'<p>Hi George,<br />Thanks tons for the edits and I am sorry I made you work on the weekend (I couldn\'t see more than a two-day turnout option).&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>Daesh is the acronym in Arabic for ISIS, but earlier last year they demanded to be called the Islamic State, to indicate its borderless nature, rather than ISIL (Iraq and Levantine). I know President Obama calls it ISIL, but I prefer to call it just simply what they are, IS.&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>As for this edited prospectus, I am not sure how good are my research questions or whether it will become a real one in the future. I know that for my IS paper, the prof. was nervous and discouraging to pursue it in the direction I proposed and he suggested I don\'t focus on Islam as being political or religion, and limit it to the state capacities...so that\'s what I am going to work on the next weeks besides the other paper about nationalism and the Arabism, which is also waiting to be okayed..</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>Until then, thanks again and have a good night!</p>\r\n<p>Maya&nbsp;</p>','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-21 06:26:07','2016-03-21 06:27:40',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22567,2750,617,'Oh and I will send you another short paper tomorrow that needs your attention!<br /><br />','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-21 06:26:46','2016-03-21 06:26:46',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22568,4228,65,'I encountered some formatting issues. So start on page 11 and you\'ll see the text with all edits made.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-21 06:41:15','2016-03-21 06:41:15',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22569,4228,1163,'Hi, there:<br /><br />I edited the document in the areas of grammar, sentence structure, flow, punctuation, clarity, consistency, spelling, detail, word choice, and organization. It has been my pleasure!<br /><br />Thank you!<br />MasterEditor','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-21 07:06:51','2016-03-21 07:06:51',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22570,144,4109,'Will do--- I just got into Houston and done with a few meetings. I\'ll submit the request side now...thanks!!!<br />-Jeff','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-21 07:21:34','2016-03-21 09:10:04',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22571,144,4109,'Hello:<br />I\'m trying to select you as the editor but it won\'t allow me to--it says you are unavailable.<br /><br />What do I need to do? &nbsp;Sorry, I am still new with this system here.<br /><br />-Jeff','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-21 07:45:53','2016-03-21 09:08:48',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22572,4109,144,'No problem. I had my availability turned off, as I\'ve been so busy, but I\'m back on now, so whenever you\'re ready, I am :)','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-21 09:09:28','2016-03-21 19:02:21',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22573,617,2750,'Hi Maya:<br />Thanks for the great rating. I completely understand your prof\'s concerns. I would hate to see you in harm\'s way, too. That isn\'t to say that your tentative prospective isn\'t worth persuing. It sounds to me like a great project and well worth doing. At least you now have a working template that you can use as you refine the thesis questions. Thanks for the update about IS. I\'ll use that acronym exclusively from now on.&nbsp;<br />If you have any questions or concerns, or just want to chat, please send me a message via Editor World and I\'ll get back to you as soon as I can.&nbsp;<br />Looking forward to the spring here in Canada!<br />Best wishes,<br />George','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-21 15:37:35','2016-03-21 19:48:00',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22574,3889,2348,'Dear EditorEinstein,<br /><br />Thank you for your work. I have two questions. Please see below and give me your suggestions.<br /><br />(original)<br />In this manual, and on a certain area of the machine, various safety signs are used to prevent you from being injured or your assets from being damaged, or to prevent you from imposing injury or damage to other people or properties.<br /><br />(your correction)<br />In this manual, and in certain areas of the machine, various safety signs are used to prevent you from being injured.<br /><br />In your correction, you omitted \"or your assets from being damaged, or to prevent you from imposing injury or damage to other people or properties.\" I need to include the omitted portion somehow although I know it may be redundant. What about the sentence below?<br /><br />In this manual, and in certain areas of the machine, various safety signs are used to: prevent you from being injured; your assets from being damaged; or to prevent you from imposing injury or damage to other people or properties.<br /><br />Also see the senteces below.<br /><br />(original)<br />Do not directly pour water onto the machine.<br /><br />(your correction)<br />Do not directly pour water into the machine.<br /><br />What I meant was \"Do not directly pour water over the machine.\" Not \"into\" the machine. Is it ok to use \"Do not directly pour water over the machine?\"<br /><br />Thank you!<br /><br />Yas','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-21 16:00:19','2016-03-21 16:07:59',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22575,2348,3889,'Hello,<br /><br />Yes, the sentence you made for the safety signs is great. That will work fine. And yes, if you mean over the top of the machine, than please use \"onto\"!<br /><br />Feel free to message me with any further questions.<br /><br />Thank you,<br /><br />Kk','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-21 16:11:53','2016-03-21 16:16:39',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22576,3889,2348,'Great! Thank you for your help!','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-21 16:17:13','2016-03-21 16:32:49',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22577,144,3961,'<p><b>INSTRUCTIONS</b><b>&nbsp;</b></p>\r\n<p><b>&nbsp;</b></p>\r\n<p><b>Task:&nbsp;</b>&nbsp;To inform your colleagues of the most current information on Global health programming issue(s) in the news and scientific world (2011 &ndash; 2016).&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;Points: 100</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; You can include information from your reaction papers where relevant.&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p><b>Requirements:</b>&nbsp; Each individual must collect relevant and reputable&nbsp;newspaper articles&nbsp;(<b>minimum of two (2)</b>&nbsp;addressing an international health issue and scholarly&nbsp;research articles&nbsp;related to the assigned health issue&nbsp;<b>(minimum of eight (8) No tabloids</b>.&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>The scholarly research articles can come from&nbsp;online&nbsp;peer reviewed journals through the Ohio University Library&nbsp;Online&nbsp;Resources link.&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>Based upon the articles you have collected, you will produce a&nbsp;<b>paper (minimum 12 pages and maximum 15).&nbsp;</b></p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p><b>Article summary ideas to consider:</b>&nbsp;Compare and contrast the articles; which article(s) seem most important; are these new issues or ongoing (previous years); are the specific issues in the articles representative of a trend or are the issues critical to global health and are efforts to control or enhance or eliminate the health issue(s) working.&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p><b>RUBRIC</b><b>&nbsp;</b></p>\r\n<p><b>Paper that must clearly show:&nbsp;</b></p>\r\n<p>1.&nbsp;The assigned health issue in the assigned country.&nbsp;<i>1&nbsp;<b>point</b></i>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>2.&nbsp;Describe why the health issue is important in general and in that country?&nbsp;<b>15 points</b>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>3.&nbsp;Describe the scope of the problem based on social, economic, cultural, behavioral factors &nbsp;in your chosen target group e.g. women, children, men, low income, ethnic group et, for that health issue in the chosen country&nbsp;<b>20 points</b>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>4.&nbsp;Describe any strategies in the country of choice to address the health issue in the target population&nbsp;<b>20 points</b>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>5.&nbsp;Provide a summary of the&nbsp;<b>three types</b>&nbsp;of health programs that currently exist in that country to address the chosen health issue. Do they address the health issue in that country/target group?<b>25 points</b>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>6.&nbsp;What are your future recommendations for the country of choice on how to better address the health issue&nbsp;<b>12 points</b>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>7.&nbsp;References.&nbsp;<b>2 points</b>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>8.&nbsp;Organization, content, formatting, proof-reading.&nbsp;<b>5 points</b>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p><b>&nbsp;</b></p>\r\n<p><b>&nbsp;</b></p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p><b>GENERAL GUIDELINES FOR PROJECTS&nbsp;</b></p>\r\n<p>Please follow these directions to avoid losing any additional points for your project.&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>?&nbsp;<b>1\" margins</b>&nbsp;all the way around the paper (top, bottom, left, &amp; right) and&nbsp;<b>double spaced</b>!&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>? Please include a cover page &ldquo;HLTH 5120 International Health Programming&rdquo; along with your names, the date, and the title of the assignment.&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>? 12 point font (no larger) using Times New Roman or 11 point&nbsp;Arial&nbsp;font</p>\r\n<p>? Proof read and corrected for spelling, grammar, sentence structure, and clarity of thought. This is very important because taking the time to do the above items shows your instructor that you have thought about and carefully executed your assignment.&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>? When citing sources, please use APA format&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-21 16:34:38','2016-03-21 16:34:38',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22578,454,1379,'Imported from Final Draft: the upper/lower cases mixed up in som places. Please ignore.&nbsp;<br />Also ignore the formatting.&nbsp;<br />Please corret overwritten/overdescriptive parts where necessary.&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-21 16:38:19','2016-03-21 16:38:19',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22579,144,3961,'<p><strong>Outline for HLTH 607 Intervention Paper</strong></p>\r\n<p>The following needs to be included in your proposal:</p>\r\n<ol>\r\n<li>Introduction to health issue &ndash; why is this issue? (10 points)<ol>\r\n<li>Comprehensive review of health issue</li>\r\n<li>Target audience</li>\r\n</ol></li>\r\n</ol>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<ol start=\"2\">\r\n<li>Discuss the health behaviors that contribute to the health issue?&nbsp; What behavior(s) are you going to focus on for the social ecological analysis? (5 points)</li>\r\n</ol>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<ol start=\"3\">\r\n<li>Social-ecological analysis of health behavior (20 points)<ol>\r\n<li>Individual factors (biological and psychological - knowledge, attitudes, self-efficacy, values, skills)</li>\r\n<li>Interpersonal factors (family and friends &ndash; social support, cultural factors, peer pressure)</li>\r\n<li>Organizational factors (school, worksite, church influences)</li>\r\n<li>Community factors (physical environmental factors)</li>\r\n<li>Societal factors (laws, regulations, policies)</li>\r\n</ol></li>\r\n</ol>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<ol start=\"4\">\r\n<li>Based on your social ecological analysis, select a level for intervention (eg. individual level).&nbsp; Justify why you chose this level (5 points).</li>\r\n</ol>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<ol start=\"5\">\r\n<li>Discuss the health behavior theory you chose and why?&nbsp; It should be related to the level of intervention that you are going to focus on (HBM for individual level) (15 points).<ol>\r\n<li>Include brief overview of theory &ndash; history and constructs</li>\r\n<li>Literature review of chosen theory for health behavior &ndash; if none, say so</li>\r\n</ol></li>\r\n</ol>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<ol start=\"6\">\r\n<li>Overview of your proposed intervention based on the constructs of the health behavior theory (25 points).<ol>\r\n<li>What is the overall goal of your intervention?</li>\r\n<li>What objectives do you want to accomplish? &ndash; These should link back to the theory.&nbsp; If you chose to use HBM for individual level intervention.&nbsp; One of your objectives might be to increase self-efficacy in your target audience.</li>\r\n</ol></li>\r\n</ol>\r\n<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; i.&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Process and outcome objectives</p>\r\n<ol>\r\n<li>What activities will you do to operationalize the constructs?</li>\r\n</ol>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>You will also get 20 points for the following:</p>\r\n<p>Correct use of APA Style (5 points)</p>\r\n<p>Comprehensive use of scientific resources (5 points)</p>\r\n<p>Grammar, spelling, structure of paper (5 points)</p>\r\n<p>Overall demonstration of understanding of theory (5 points)</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-21 16:41:45','2016-03-21 16:41:45',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22580,144,4109,'Already submitted document via message---expansion paragraphs from original.<br />1500 word add on.<br /><br />Thank you!!!<br /><br />-Jeff Dousharm&nbsp;<br /><br /><br />','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-21 19:06:24','2016-03-21 19:06:24',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22581,144,4109,'Ok, just submitted and paid. &nbsp;thanks!!<br /><br />-Jeff','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-21 19:08:01','2016-03-21 19:08:01',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22582,4109,144,'Here you are!','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-21 19:53:20','2016-03-21 20:37:37',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22583,65,4228,'Hi,<br /><br /><br />Please edit this document, too.<br /><br /><br />Thanks,<br />Mahtab<br /><br />','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-21 20:33:17','2016-03-21 20:33:17',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22584,2750,617,'<p>Hi George,</p>\r\n<p>I hope you are enjoying the first days of Spring out there. I am still able to enjoy a scene, far away, from my library window.<br /><br />Here is what is supposed to be a response paper I am trying to achieve. The prof. for this class has given me B- (minus) on my previous response paper (nationalism for Anthony Smith) which was shocking to me knowing that the paper deserves a higher grade. You can tell I am dealing with an unusual encounter. I was told that my paper was nothing but claims rather than facts or claims supported with facts.&nbsp; That is why I am also sending you his 3- page instructions (or directive) on how to write a response/thought paper or at least what he is looking in for one. I will copy it inside my file because I don&rsquo;t see a place to attach a second paper. You will see that in this paper I am not criticizing the authors, and especially that he is one of the authors (Smith B). While I tried to avoid critical views (although it is necessary for healthy academic growth), I am afraid that I have also summarized the readings which is also undesirable if done too much in this paper. &nbsp;I need your help to achieve a paper that complies with the 3-page directive and still get a higher grade. The paper should be kept 1300-1700 word. &hellip; I hope you can help.&nbsp;<br /><br />I will need this paper by Wednesday noon, if possible.I can&rsquo;t thank you enough for your kindness, George<br /><br />Best,<br />Maya&nbsp;</p>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-21 20:56:32','2016-03-21 20:56:32',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22585,617,2750,'Hi, Maya:<br /><br />Thanks for the submission. I\'ll devote tomorrow to it and see if we can please your prof.<br /><br />And thank you for the background info. That always helps.&nbsp;<br /><br />Let\'s see what we can do.<br /><br />Best wishes - George','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-21 22:23:58','2016-03-21 23:36:01',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22586,3961,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your proposal.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-21 23:34:41','2016-03-21 23:34:41',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22587,3966,2424,'Hi there,<br /><br />I was able to download the edited document as it was attached to your message, but for some reason, you haven\'t uploaded it the standard way, so it\'s still showing in blue in the system, or \"in progress\" and I have no way of rating it as you asked me to.&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-21 23:44:00','2016-03-22 00:07:51',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22588,3970,2750,'Hi,&nbsp;Alfonso:<br /><br />Great to see you back!<br /><br />There are no worries about your references. They are in the approved APA style.<br /><br />Although it looks like I made a lot of changes, it\'s only because I reviewed your document several times, made small changes, and then sometimes reverted to the original. My edits are mostly cosmetic. I wish all my editing requests were as well written.<br /><br />Still, I wanted to give you a personal finish, something that expresses your passion for cyber security. I think I found it!<br /><br />Good luck with your application. <br /><br />Best wishes - George&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-22 00:01:53','2016-03-22 09:27:14',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22589,2424,3966,'Hello,<br /><br />I apologize for that and appreciate your pointing it out.<br /><br />I just recently started working for EditorWorld. It appeared that when I send a message, I have to download the edited file on the same page. I obviously have to look into this!<br /><br />The document I downloaded had the changes highlighted in red. To see a clean copy, you can click the down arrow under \"Accept\" and then click \"Accept All Changes in Document.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-22 00:19:05','2016-03-22 01:40:53',NULL,'upload_56f0573934e139.62207173_SDEW_66599.docx','SDEW_66599.docx'),
	(22590,754,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your response to the reviewers.<br /><br />I\'m afraid I didn\'t understand the 137C inventory, so I don\'t know if I stated it properly or not. I think I phrased it in two different ways in the two places it appears.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-22 00:42:23','2016-03-22 00:42:23',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22591,3899,240,'Hello,<br /><br />My name is Soo and I am so pleased to be working with you. This document is an academic paper toward the Journal publishing. Thank you for your review and editing to make it be easy to read.<br /><br />Thanks.<br /><br />Best,<br />Soo','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-22 01:15:24','2016-03-24 23:27:18',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22592,484,2066,'British spelling please: fertilise','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-22 01:33:45','2016-03-22 01:33:45',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22593,2424,3966,'Hello,<br /><br />I don\'t know if you\'ve had a chance to look at the document I (re)sent a little while ago.<br /><br />I hope the current piece is edited to your liking. I feel your ideas and train of thought were great; they just needed to be fleshed out a little.<br /><br />Again, if you would be so kind as to leave a rating, I wou','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-22 01:57:50','2016-03-23 19:25:01',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22594,4228,454,'Nicely done. I made changes for grammar, flow and consistency. Please let me know if you have any questions. Thank you! Laura Kenney','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-22 02:21:51','2016-03-22 02:21:51',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22595,241,1772,'Here is a copy of the edited manuscript with the font colors still changed. I will upload a copy with the font all black (except for my editing comments) in just a moment.<br /><br />Please let me know if you have any questions or concerns. I would be happy to look back over anything you are unsure about.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-22 02:59:47','2016-03-22 02:59:47',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22596,241,1772,'Here is the version with all black text.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-22 03:04:18','2016-03-22 03:59:29',NULL,'upload_56f07df251d089.42847372_EW_66576.docx','EW_66576.docx'),
	(22597,3904,2750,'Hi, Emilia:<br /><br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document and hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />Although it looks like I made a lot of edits, I really just tightened here and there, being&nbsp;unfamiliar with the books under review. Even though you make some excellent points in the essay, please proofread carefully to catch any typos I might have made.<br /><br />If you have any questions, you can reach me at Editor World. I\'m usually available from 6:00 am to 10:30 pm EST.<br /><br />Best wishes - George&nbsp;<br />&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-22 03:26:32','2016-03-22 03:26:32',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22598,240,3899,'Pleasure to meet you, Soo.<br /><br />I\'m skimming your document right now. It looks pretty good, although the version you sent me seems to be missing some tables and there doesn\'t seem to be a reference list attached. Will that be all right, or do you think I need a complete version?<br /><br />Either way, looking forward to working with you, I will get started right away.<br /><br />- The Word Doctor','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-22 04:16:34','2016-03-22 04:39:10',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22599,2305,454,'Fascinating. Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-22 04:31:26','2016-03-22 04:31:26',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22600,3550,454,'Hi, Berni,<br /><br />You are welcome! I\'ll see what I can dig up regarding finding an illustrator. You can also submit to a publushing house and they can help you find an illustrator. These days, the best way to do that is to have an agent. It\'s a daunting endeavor, getting a book published--but not impossible. Take a look at the site agentquery.com and look at the agents who handle children\'s books.&nbsp;<br /><br />Ill see see what I can find too and let you know.<br /><br />Thanks,<br /><br />Laura','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-22 05:08:03','2016-03-22 05:47:31',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22601,2066,484,'<p class=\"p1\"><b>Thank you for the opportunity to edit your work. Please let me know if there are any issues, and I will address them asap.</b></p>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-22 06:01:29','2016-03-22 06:01:29',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22602,2066,484,'<p class=\"p1\"><b>Thank you for the opportunity to edit your work. Please let me know if there are any issues, and I will address them asap.</b></p>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-22 06:01:54','2016-03-22 06:01:54',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22603,2066,484,'<p class=\"p1\"><b>Thank you for the opportunity to edit your work. Please let me know if there are any issues, and I will address them asap.</b></p>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-22 06:02:10','2016-03-22 06:02:10',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22604,3904,2750,'Hi, Emilia:<br /><br />I made one or two minor revisions and caught a couple of typos. I hope this helps.&nbsp;<br /><br /><br />Best wishes - George','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-22 06:13:44','2016-03-22 06:13:44',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22605,1119,65,'<p>Good to hear from you.<br /> <br /> Your papers are always interesting as you are a researcher in the Arizona desert, and I\'m an editor from South Carolina (no desert, and maybe some sherds/shards I haven&rsquo;t found yet).<br /> <br /> Just accept all the changes and you\'ll be fine.<br /> <br /> Always a pleasure to read your texts as I like history and you\'re certainly contributing to our collective understanding of it.</p>\r\n<br />Jackson','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-22 06:34:05','2016-03-22 06:34:05',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22606,3899,240,'Hello!<br /><br />Thank you for messaging me! Yes, tables and references are missing because they are still incomplete and I am still working on them now. It would be great if you could start the editing as it is. I am sorry that you might not be easy to follow up because of those missing components.<br /><br />Thank you!<br /><br />Best,<br />Soo','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-22 07:37:42','2016-03-22 07:53:17',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22607,2101,1772,'Please let me know if you have any questions or concerns, or if you would like me to look over something again.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-22 07:43:56','2016-03-22 07:43:56',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22608,240,3899,'Soo -<br /><br />No problem, just wanted to make sure everything was as it should be. :) Have a good night!<br /><br />- TWD','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-22 07:54:51','2016-03-22 07:55:12',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22609,2750,3970,'Hi George, <br /><br />I have to say that I was extremely impressed with your revisions and suggestions. I was even surprised that you took the time to search Websense and find out it has a new name. You have a very good eye for editing. I feel confident that my essay is much stronger and will help enhance my application. You can rest assure that I will be coming to you from now on for any future assistance. <br /><br />Tying in medicine with the conclusion was a nice touch.<br /><br />Best regards, <br /><br />Alfonso H Revollo&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-22 09:34:31','2016-03-22 09:38:47',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22610,3970,2750,'Thanks for the feedback, Alphonso. I\'m glad I helped, particularly with someone with computer skills as impressive as yours. If anyone hacks my computer, I know where to come.<br /><br />Best wishes - George<br /><br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-22 15:15:17','2016-03-24 05:59:53',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22611,65,3328,'Hi. &nbsp;APA style, 1 space between sentences. &nbsp;My professor provided links for us to choose from to select the case study we would analyze. &nbsp;The case is copyrighted. I was a bit uncertain how to handle so I put information in both the text and reference page. &nbsp;Thanks!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-22 16:01:32','2016-03-22 16:01:32',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22612,65,3039,'Hi<br />It\'s about my experience related to ideloogy.&nbsp;<br />Thank you!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-22 17:57:36','2016-03-22 17:57:36',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22613,3889,4251,'Please edit for grammar, spelling, and clarity. This is a thank you letter following a second interview at a law firm. I really appreciate your help.&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-22 18:12:27','2016-03-22 18:12:27',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22614,3889,4174,'EditorEinstein,<br /><br />&nbsp; I have a midnight deadline for a paper I\'ve spent way too much of my life on. &nbsp;The document for your review contains the last pages of about 50 pages. &nbsp;Unfortunately, this leaves you without the literature review or main body. &nbsp;Basic premise... I researched compressed shifts (10 or 12 hours), fatigue in police officers, and conducted a survey of a local police department (Bethlehem- BPD). &nbsp;I brought it all together in a proposal to switch their shifts to 4 days working 10 hour days. &nbsp;I refer to this as the 4/4 model meaning 4 days on 4 days off. &nbsp;I also reference their current model 5/2 5/3 or 5 days on 2 days off, 5 days on 3 days off. &nbsp;Hopefully, it makes enough sense for you to help.<br /><br />&nbsp; I\'m basically looking to make sure there are no grammar/punctuation errors and some editing to improve sentence structure and word flow. &nbsp;I fell like my writing has deteriorated as I\'ve worked towards making my deadline. &nbsp;I don\'t want my ending to fall flat. &nbsp;Any help you can provide would be greatly appreciated!<br /><br />&nbsp; Thanks!<br /><br />PS: &nbsp;There are little notes to myself regarding sections and inserting figures. &nbsp;I\'m currently creating the charts and graphs as we speak. &nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-22 19:44:00','2016-03-22 21:04:19',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22615,4251,3889,'Hello,<br /><br />Here is your letter!<br /><br />Thank you,<br /><br />Katrina','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-22 19:47:02','2016-03-22 19:47:02',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22616,3917,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your paper.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-22 20:13:56','2016-03-22 20:13:56',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22617,3917,144,'I\'m not sure I uploaded the last version of the file. See attached.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-22 20:17:03','2016-03-22 20:17:03',NULL,'upload_56f16fff7d3498.55098105_EW_66621.docx','EW_66621.docx'),
	(22618,3039,65,'Thank you.&nbsp;<br /><br /><br />','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-22 20:36:57','2016-03-22 20:36:57',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22619,3961,144,'I have already edited the paper you submitted. Why have you resubmitted it?','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-22 20:50:16','2016-03-22 20:50:16',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22620,2424,3389,'Hi!<br /><br />Thanks for the new assignment! As before, I found just a couple of minor adjustments that I suggested.<br /><br />Cheers!<br />EM','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-22 20:52:59','2016-03-23 05:37:33',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22621,484,4252,'Dear CopyChief,<br /><br />Please copyedit the attached document using the Associated Press style guide. <br /><br />The story is one of four articles for the spring issue \"Responsive Philanthropy\", the quarterly journal of the National Committee for Responsive Philanthropy.<br /><br />Please let me know if&nbsp; you have any questions or have problems with the document. <br /><br />Thanks in advance for your help with this!<br /><br />Best,<br />Yna','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-22 22:55:59','2016-03-22 22:55:59',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22622,4228,65,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-22 23:16:09','2016-03-22 23:16:09',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22623,1772,3961,'I think you are right, the religion should go to Interpersonal. Kindly highlight the citatations that are not in the references for me so I put them there.<br /><br />Are you working on The HIV in Belguim paper or you are working on the Intervention paper (HIV IN GHANA)? I intended to upload &nbsp;two different documents and I want to be sure I did not upload the same thing twice.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-22 23:28:55','2016-03-22 23:29:49',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22624,3961,1772,'I worked on the HIV in Ghana paper.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-22 23:30:29','2016-03-22 23:30:29',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22625,4174,3889,'Hello,<br /><br />Here is your completed edit. You\'re a great writer as is.<br /><br />Thank you,<br /><br />Kk','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-22 23:39:10','2016-03-22 23:39:10',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22626,3889,4174,'I\'m not sure what happened, but the file you sent back is blank. &nbsp;I tried to download it a few times, but I just see a new word document. &nbsp;Would you mind checking on your end?<br /><br />&nbsp; Thanks&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-23 00:42:04','2016-03-23 00:43:42',NULL,'upload_56f1ae1c6176a0.61720083_SDEW_66625_1.docx','SDEW_66625_1.docx'),
	(22627,454,2490,'Hello!<br /><br />This is the marketing blurb for a forthcoming book. This document has the 20, 50 and 150 word version.<br /><br />I need the highlighted text to be catchy and non-jargonistic, but after staring at it for so long, need an outside perspective. Could you help me smooth this down a bit?<br /><br />With thanks,<br /><br />Thomas','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-23 00:54:50','2016-03-23 00:54:50',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22628,4174,3889,'Okay, lets try this. Let me know if it still doesn\'t show.<br />KK','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-23 01:04:27','2016-03-23 01:07:23',NULL,'upload_56f1b35bedd2c5.32734260_SDEW_66625.docx','SDEW_66625.docx'),
	(22629,3889,4174,'We\'re good! &nbsp;Thank you!','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-23 01:08:59','2016-03-23 01:24:33',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22630,65,4254,'Hello,<br />This is critical paper presenting an thesis. Comparing book version and movie version of the story \"The Big Sleep\"is the main topic.<br />I need you to look up on word choice, sentence structure, and grammars.<br />Also, i need feedbacks on thesis and whether my sentences give clear explanations and (supporting) demonstrations of the argument so i can add or delete that causes confusion.<br /><br />Thank you,','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-23 04:46:44','2016-03-23 04:46:44',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22631,2750,3990,'My word count for my paper is a minamum of 1250 words so please if possible try to keep the word count around there!<br />thank you so much!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-23 05:14:22','2016-03-23 05:14:22',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22632,2750,3904,'Hello George,<br />If you can try and keep this to 3 pages, that would be great!<br />Thank you again!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-23 05:27:49','2016-03-23 05:27:49',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22633,617,2750,'Hi, Maya:<br /><br />Well, I tried my best. On the plus side, I think the essay is genuinely a thought paper. I\'ve included very few quotes&nbsp;and followed the guidelines as carefully as I can. There is certainly a sustained argument throughout. For most profs, it would be fine, but as you know, marking (and editing) is subjective.<br /><br />On the negative side, I haven\'t read the works cited. The essay might also be slightly shy of the word length. If we include the bibliograpghy and footnotes, it is just over 1200 words. If you think we should add a paragraph&nbsp;(or have one of your own to add), let me know. We have until noon tomorrow.<br /><br />I can\'t think of anything else. The argument is simple but then so am I. But it is an argument and doesn\'t rely on stating and restating an opinion. As your prof said, \"Have fun!\" Who was he kidding? It was hard slogging.<br /><br /><br />Best wishes - George<br />&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-23 06:01:37','2016-03-23 16:53:03',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22634,4227,65,'Thank &nbsp;you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-23 07:16:12','2016-03-23 07:16:12',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22635,144,4258,'Dear Editor,<br /><br />Would you please use the Track Changes feature in Word so that I can see where you make changes?&nbsp;<br /><br />I look forward to have your constructive comments and edits.<br /><br />Thank you.<br /><br />Clifford<br /><br />','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-23 07:22:44','2016-03-23 07:22:44',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22636,144,4259,'Hello, I just wanted to let you know that the parts in bold are simply what I am supposed to write about so the parts in bold do not need editing. Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-23 08:10:40','2016-03-23 08:10:40',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22637,1173,4260,'This writting assignment is taking about crisis managment.<br />Please focus on my grammar and my&nbsp;words\' selection.<br />Thank you so much!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-23 10:39:11','2016-03-23 10:39:11',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22638,2750,617,'Hi George,<br /><br />Thanks for the edit. I will make some clarification and I add a paragraph or so and send it back to you to revise before I submit it. I hope I will find you available.&nbsp;<br />Maya','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-23 16:54:44','2016-03-23 16:55:46',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22639,617,2750,'Hi, Maya:<br /><br />I\'ll be here.<br /><br />George','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-23 16:56:18','2016-03-23 17:43:31',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22640,4260,1173,'Here is your edited essay. Thank you for the opportunity!<br /><br />Karen','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-23 17:20:26','2016-03-23 17:20:26',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22641,144,3607,'Dear Mr. Editor (NYANIDOC),<br /><br />I am deeply grateful for your help last December.<br />Were it not for your help, I wouldn\'t have been able to be accepted to any school.<br />I really have a deep respect towards you. Your efforts and skills were more than amazing.&nbsp;<br />(I wish I could write somewhat like you do if only possible.)<br /><br />I have been waitlisted in my dream school (UW in Seattle.) <br />I know. The situation is not good.<br /><br />Still, the purpose of this one letter to the communication department chair is to show<br />my passion and reasons why I want so badly&nbsp;to get into the MA program of my dream school: UW in Seattle, instead of <br />a doctoral program in another school (UW-Madison).<br /><br />Could you, please, read this carefully first and see what my circumstances are (in the writing)&nbsp;and make it<br />(1) <span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><em>truly expressing my strong desire</em></span>, (2)&nbsp;<em><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">stylish,</span></em> and&nbsp;(3) <em><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">more</span></em><i><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">&nbsp;coherent</span></i>?&nbsp;<br /><br /><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><em>Please feel free to edit anything as much as you want</em>. </span><br />Since English is not my native language, though I have spent many days<br />on this,&nbsp;I could not&nbsp;quite give&nbsp;the nuances I wanted.<br /><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><em>Again, please feel free to change, add, and delete any words, sentences, or paragraphs at your will</em>.</span><br /><br />Thank you very very much.<br /><br />Very sincerely,<br />Hangsan Ahn','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-23 17:45:48','2016-03-23 17:45:48',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22642,4047,4263,'I do a monthy email to our cleint base and would like to find a competent editor to look for basic edits (grammer, punctuation, etc.)&nbsp;<br /><br />Please submit your edits in a \'track and change\" mode.<br /><br />Thank you and I hope this works out for both of us.<br /><br />Best,<br /><br />Bill','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-23 17:49:06','2016-03-23 22:39:33',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22643,2750,617,'<p>Hi George,<br /><br />I attached the paper with minor addition/changes. I put my additions/notes in parentheses.&nbsp;And I apologize for not clarifying that in my first draft.</p>\r\n<p>Here is a few notes:</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;I intentionally wanted to include certain words in this paper such as ( contentious politics, process tracing, empirics/empirical, testing, generalization, predicting, inferring) as believe it or not these are the words the prof. looks for and it is what teh agenda is all about. So if you could still insert those magic words I would appreciate that.&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>1. I made a mistake in the paper that Wilkinson\'s argument is that ethnic violence is not rooted in the govt. competition. I meant to write it is actually a result of competition in the govt.&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>2. Varshney introduces a new variable which is civic inter-intra ethnic relations. I am not sure if this makes Smith etal in disagreement with Varshney\'s...So I went ahead and put agreement...you may find a suitable word that would not held me responsible for this conclusion .</p>\r\n<p>3. Smith etal is about Anti-Chinese ethnic riots in Indonesia here is their abstract&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>Summary. &mdash; In this essay we ask why anti-Chinese riots took place in some Indonesian cities but not in others during the upheaval of May 1998. Employing process-tracing within a sub-national comparison of four cities, we argue that anti-Chinese riots in May 1998 were a frame-shifting strategy employed by security forces to distract public attention from their failure to control anti-government student demonstrations. Anti-Chinese rioting took place only where the local government and the security forces failed to limit the repertoires and spatial reach of protests used by prior student demonstrators.&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;4. I added the example of Iraq party system and the government competition and interest to incite the ethnic violence.&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>That\'s all and I apologize for the inconvenience!</p>\r\n<p>Best,</p>\r\n<p>Maya&nbsp;</p>','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-23 17:57:27','2016-03-23 18:01:16',NULL,'upload_56f2a0c74ba603.67780874_response2.docx','response2.docx'),
	(22644,617,2750,'Hi, Maya:<br /><br />I\'ll get right on it.<br /><br />BFN - George','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-23 18:03:07','2016-03-23 18:24:03',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22645,3523,4143,'This is a newspaper article. Please edit using AP style','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-23 18:54:45','2016-03-23 18:54:45',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22646,617,2750,'Hi, Maya:<br /><br />You know, I really think you made the difference here. You added considerable weight to the essay. Please proofread carefully. The longer I work on something, the more likely I am to make errors. We made it on time.<br /><br /><br />Best wishes - George<br /><br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-23 19:13:31','2016-03-23 20:01:10',NULL,'upload_56f2b29be3dad9.63422932_Response 2.docx','Response 2.docx'),
	(22647,3389,4259,'Hello, I just wanted to let you know that the parts in bold are my prompt and do not need to be edited. They are just there to keep track of my personal statements. Thank you.&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-23 19:27:51','2016-03-23 19:27:51',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22648,3523,4259,'Hello, the parts in bold do not to be edited since they are my prompt. They are just there to keep my different personal statements organized. Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-23 19:31:32','2016-03-23 19:31:32',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22649,3523,2424,'The sentence that goes with the $1 pledge seems a bit clunky, but I couldn\'t think of ways to make it smoother.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-23 19:40:53','2016-03-23 19:40:53',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22650,4259,3389,'Hi there!<br /><br />Thanks for sending this along for me to edit! As you requested, I have left the prompts alone and have checked your text for grammatical corrections. I also deleted a few words that were repetitive to help the text flow better.<br /><br />I hope you are pleased with my work!<br /><br />Cheers,<br />EM','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-23 19:56:25','2016-03-23 19:56:25',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22651,4264,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your sample.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-23 20:06:31','2016-03-23 20:06:31',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22652,2750,617,'Hi George,<br /><br />Many, many thanks for your incredible efforts with these edits. I just think that you are a Godsend!<br />I will now quickly proofread and ship it out.&nbsp;<br /><br />Have a nice day!<br />Maya.&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-23 20:06:39','2016-03-23 20:17:36',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22653,2424,3966,'Thank you!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-23 20:11:19','2016-03-23 20:11:19',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22654,617,2750,'Thank<em> you</em>, Maya. Good luck with your paper!<br /><br />Best wishes - George&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-23 20:18:49','2016-03-23 21:55:38',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22655,98,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your response to the reviewers.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-23 20:30:11','2016-03-23 20:30:11',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22656,4143,3523,'I know the plan is still in its infancy, but has a figure been floated on how much developing the area could cost?<br /><br />Also, be careful not to overuse the word \"future.\"','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-23 20:40:52','2016-03-23 20:40:52',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22657,65,2298,'Hello Jackson,<br />Hope you are doing well. Here is a few posts to be edited... most from Romans 3 but one for Easter and a recent video teaching. Thanks in advance for your hard work on this.&nbsp;<br />Juli&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-23 20:59:01','2016-03-23 21:03:08',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22658,2298,65,'Doing well indeed and trust you and your family are enjoying the early days of spring. As always, I look&nbsp;forward to reading your lessons.<br /><br />Jackson','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-23 21:05:16','2016-03-24 00:40:00',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22659,2386,144,'Hello Daniel,<br /><br />Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit another of your pieces.<br /><br />As always, I appreciate your kind ratings.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-23 21:06:55','2016-03-23 21:06:55',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22660,4259,3523,'Best wishes.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-23 21:09:09','2016-03-23 21:09:09',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22661,2424,3523,'I hope the suggested edit works for you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-23 21:19:44','2016-03-23 21:19:44',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22662,4259,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your personal statement.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best of success with your application,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-23 21:59:20','2016-03-23 21:59:20',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22663,2750,617,'George,<br /><br />To complete this paper was such a relief! I can now turn to my two longer papers.&nbsp;<br />You made my day!&nbsp;<br />Best,<br />Miaad','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-23 22:37:06','2016-03-23 22:38:11',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22664,4263,4047,'Dear Bill,<br /><br />Attached is your document with sample edits; I found it to be very interesting. I would enjoy editing your monthly email to your client base. I look forward to hearing from you.<br /><br />Best,<br />WriteEditor','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-23 22:37:33','2016-03-24 00:52:09',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22665,617,2750,'I\'m pleased to hear that, Maya. But maybe you deserve a short break now, if possible. I can only imagine how hard you\'re working.<br /><br />Best wishes - George','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-23 22:41:10','2016-03-24 01:18:40',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22666,144,4265,'Honestly, this is a bit of a test document. I spend a lot of time editing text, and curious if time could be better spent elsewhere. This reads really choppy to me - please clean up however you see fit. Thanks!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-23 23:20:25','2016-03-23 23:20:25',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22667,3607,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your letter. I hope I have done a good job for you, as I had difficulty understanding some of the concepts.<br /><br />As before, your ratings are much appreciated.<br /><br />All the best of success with your application to UW,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-23 23:34:26','2016-03-23 23:34:26',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22668,65,4227,'Hi again,&nbsp;<br /><br />I was happy with your earlier edits, so I\'d like to have you edit my other paper for the conference. Again, looking at the same things:<br />\r\n<ul>\r\n<li>grammar, punctuation, spelling</li>\r\n<li>consistency, syntax tone</li>\r\n<li>formatting and styling</li>\r\n<li>ensure mesage is clear and effective</li>\r\n<li>help eliminate awkward phrasing, repitition and passive voice</li>\r\n</ul>\r\n<br />This paper is for the same pharmecutical statistical programming conference so there is code included in the body of the paper - I did not include the code in the word count since this is not something that needs to be editted.<br /><br />Thank you!<br />-Taylor','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-23 23:39:38','2016-03-23 23:39:38',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22669,144,3558,'Hi Nyanidoc,<br />I am submitting this manuscript to Journal of Reading and Writing. &nbsp; Thanks for editing this piece.&nbsp;<br />Best,<br />Iva','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-23 23:47:28','2016-03-23 23:47:28',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22670,2490,454,'Please see comments in doc. Thank you!<br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-23 23:54:35','2016-03-24 00:41:19',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22671,4252,484,'<p class=\"p1\"><b>Thank you for the opportunity to edit your work. Please let me know if there are any issues, and I will address them asap.</b></p>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-24 00:30:17','2016-03-24 00:30:17',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22672,4253,484,'<p class=\"p1\"><b>Thank you for the opportunity to edit your work. Please let me know if there are any issues, and I will address them asap.</b></p>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-24 00:31:05','2016-03-24 00:31:05',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22673,454,2490,'These suggestions are spot on!&nbsp;Thank you!','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-24 00:42:04','2016-03-24 02:12:06',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22674,4047,4263,'Jodi,<br /><br />Thank you I apprecite the work. &nbsp;I think this will work out well. &nbsp;I will send some other content for you. &nbsp;Going forward, I am comfortable with your edits so just make them as a \"final copy\" when you send them back. &nbsp;I will have some content to you shortly.<br /><br />Thanks again.<br /><br />I am including my cell if you ever need to contact me directly.<br /><br />434 851-2822','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-24 00:56:09','2016-03-24 00:57:15',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22675,484,4252,'Thank you, CopyChief! Will let you know if we have any questions.<br /><br />All the best,<br />Yna','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-24 00:56:52','2016-03-24 00:59:34',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22676,4263,4047,'Dear Bill,<br /><br />Thank you very much! I appreciate the work!<br /><br />Do you have a time frame each month for when you usually write the material and the date you send it out? I want to make sure that I am listed as available so that you can get your document to me.<br /><br />Also, who is your target audience? It helps to know this when making edits.<br /><br />And how long are the emails that you send out? Was the sample edit representative of length?<br /><br />I look forward to working with you.<br /><br />Best,<br />Jodi','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-24 01:09:13','2016-03-24 01:11:40',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22677,4047,4263,'Thanks for the reply Jodi,<br /><br />I will send you a few more well in advance so we should not have a timing issue. &nbsp;I am currently two months ahead. &nbsp;The target audeince is literally thousands of people that are investors for our clients. &nbsp;For the most part we send \"non-finanical\" communication via the monthly email. &nbsp; The average monthly piece is 400-600 words. &nbsp;How do I pay for your service? &nbsp;Will you send an invoice or will I be billed via the site? &nbsp;Do I have to select you every time or am I abe just to submit diretly with you? &nbsp;I would prefer to maintain our relationship and not have to vet a new editor each time.<br /><br />Thanks,<br /><br />Bill','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-24 01:22:42','2016-03-24 01:26:43',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22678,4265,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your document.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-24 01:29:15','2016-03-24 01:29:15',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22679,4263,4047,'Dear Bill,<br /><br />You will have to select me each time you submit a document via Editor World\'s site. When you submit a document you will be required to pay via the Editor World website. Here is a link to an Editor World page that contains links which explain the process: <a href=\"../../processes\">https://www.editorworld.com/processes<br /></a><br />Since I also work for other clients outside of Editor World, I will not always be listed as available. If you find that I am not available, please send me a message, and we can coordinate me activating my profile so that you may upload your documents. Since you are two months ahead, there should not be any problems with timing.<br /><br />Please let me know if you have further questions.<br /><br />Best,<br />Jodi','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-24 01:45:50','2016-03-24 01:50:09',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22680,454,4270,'Hi,<br /><br />I\'ve attached a small snippet of an article relating to betting, that is planned to be published on a gambling related website. It\'s written by a UK writer, attempting US English. The issue is primarily with the style&nbsp;of the writing. The substantive subject matter is perfect for the purpose, but the style does not engage the reader particularly well, nor flow well for a US audience. I\'m currently on the hunt for an editor that can take content such as this and edit/re-write to ensure that it grabs the audience and flows well. I may need multiple editors, but ideally I\'ll find one individual who can work on everything I need. I will, on average, have around 60,000 words of similar content per month that needs this kind of editing.<br /><br />Is this something that a) you think you are suited to and b) you would be interested in?<br /><br />I look forward to your response,<br /><br />Ed','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-24 03:14:43','2016-03-24 03:14:43',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22681,4227,65,'This was difficult and I had to read it twice.<br /><br />I\'m not a programmer, so I didn\'t touch the codes.<br /><br />I\'m also no sure about -- versus &mdash;.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-24 04:16:11','2016-03-24 04:16:11',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22682,144,4264,'Dear Editor,<br /><br />I uploaded a file &ldquo;FSEW_66641_1.docx&rdquo; yesterday and I like all of your corrections. Thank you very much. So please find the attached our draft. There are several points:<br /><br />1.&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;Please pay more attention to &ldquo;Section 1. Introduction&rdquo; and &ldquo;Section 5. Empirical Implementation&rdquo;. <br />2.&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;The FIRST page of &ldquo;Section 1. Introduction&rdquo; is what I uploaded yesterday. I have incorporated your corrections in the attached draft. So you can skip that page (page #3) this time. <br />3.&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;I feel that one of the main problems with the current draft is that sometime we repeated the same meaning in sentences that are closed to each other. In some cases, the repeat makes the arguments clearer, but in other cases, it is just a different way of saying the same thing. If you find the latter case, please help us delete it. <br />4.&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;I left two comments in the draft. The first one is where I would like to ask for your suggestion. The second one is a wiring prblem that I would like to check with my coauthor. You can ignore the second comment. <br /><br />Thank you very much for all your help!<br /><br />Best regards,<br />Jackie<br /><br />','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-24 04:40:24','2016-03-24 04:40:24',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22683,3904,2750,'Hi, Emilia:<br /><br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document and hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />I have kept your document to three pages, as requested.<br /><br /><br />Best wishes - George<br /><br />I am usually available for editing between 6:00 am and 10:30 pm. If my status is set to unavailable, you can still reach me via Editor World.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-24 06:14:55','2016-03-24 06:14:55',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22684,1772,2552,'Hi Editor Wordsworthreading,<br />I would like your help in editing the presentation notes. I will give a short talk about 15-20 minutes and I am preparing a complete note for this. I will also send you the powerpoint for the same presentation shortly. Thanks.<br /><br /><br />Best,<br />Shu-Wei&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-24 06:24:03','2016-03-24 06:24:03',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22685,4253,484,'Hi - please use the track changes features in MS Word to show the changes to the document. This way you can see the redline changes.&nbsp;<br /><br />Please let me know if you still have trouble.<br /><br />Thanks!','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-24 06:29:24','2016-03-24 16:25:47',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22686,1772,2552,'Hi,&nbsp;<br />I am attaching the powerpoint slides and please help edit the outline. I copied the outline and pasted it on a word document and the word count function revealed 540 words. Let me know if it is not the right way to count. Thanks!<br /><br />','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-24 06:31:03','2016-03-24 06:31:03',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22687,3990,2750,'Hi,&nbsp;Samanta:<br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document and hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />I liked your essay, but made lots of changes, so that you can pick and choose what to use and what to reject. With track changes, that\'s easy to do, or you can simply copy and paste parts into a new document. Please proofread carefully, though. Even after several read-throughs, I sometimes miss typos.<br /><br />MS Word includes track changes by default. Before sharing this document, please consider running Document Inspector. To do this, click File/Info/Check For Issues/Inspect Document on the Microsoft Word menu bar.<br /><br />When you open a document that contains track changes, the document appears in the Final Showing Markup view to show that the document contains edits.<br />(PC) To review the edited document without markups, click Review on the Microsoft Word menu bar. Then select Final: Show Markup and click the drop-down arrow. Choose Final. To show the document with the edits, click Final: Show Markup.<br />(Mac) On the Review tab, under Tracking, click the Track Changes switch to turn on / off track changes. Choose No Markup from drop-down box in Show Markup.<br /><br />Best wishes - George<br />I am usually available for editing between 6:00 am and 10:30 pm. If my status is set to unavailable, you can still reach me via Editor World.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-24 07:08:05','2016-03-24 07:08:05',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22688,65,1090,'dear editor,<br />this is important document and must be very well-written. Please edit it thoroughly and I\'d be thankful if you can return your edited document as soon as you can.<br />thanks','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-24 07:22:42','2016-03-24 18:52:13',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22689,3369,3889,'Hello,<br /><br />Here are your completed edits.&nbsp;<br /><br />Good luck,<br />Kk','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-24 08:00:22','2016-03-24 08:00:22',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22690,144,3607,'Dear Mr. NYANIDOC,<br /><br />I really appreciate your help yesterday.&nbsp;<br /><br /><br />This time, I want to focus only on the intro part. (The rest is 99.9% what you\'ve modified for me already.)<br /><br />Since writing this kind of letter is an unsual thing, <br /><br /><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><em>I have no idea how&nbsp;to get the professors actually read it and send a reply.</em></span> <br /><br />This requires delicacy and perfect understanding of American culture, and I need your help.<br /><br /><br />1. Therefore, I hope to modify this&nbsp;intro part to be longer and as <span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><em>Humble, Courteous, and Appealing</em></span> as possible.<span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><br /><br /></span>2. At the same time, I want it have the Nuance to <span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><em>have the recipients to be Induced to Answer</em></span>&nbsp;my email.<span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><br /><br /></span>3. Also, could you&nbsp;provide me with <span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><em>any alternatives, advice, or ideas?</em></span><br /><br /><br /><br />Please help me once more.<br /><br />Thank you so much.<br /><br /><br /><br />Very sincerely,<br /><br />Hangsan Ahn','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-24 09:37:22','2016-03-24 09:37:22',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22691,65,3575,'Looking forward to working with you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-24 11:54:42','2016-03-24 11:54:42',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22692,240,3899,'Hello Soo,<br /><br />I am nearly finished with your document, but I need some clarification on one sentence. At the end of second paragraph of section 7, you say \"Since our research context, Facebook, is regarded as cue-rich communication media, uncertainty reduction strategies are well suited to explore required information for information seekers under the media&rsquo;s technical supports.\" I\'m not certain what you mean by \"under the media\'s technical supports.\" Could you clarify that statement for me?<br /><br />Thank you,<br /><br />- TWD','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-24 13:24:28','2016-03-25 08:13:10',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22693,65,1090,'Can you please see my message? I submitted important docuemnt and need to have your well-edited revision back to me soon.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-24 16:42:29','2016-03-24 18:52:44',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22694,3990,2750,'Thank you for your kind words and generous rating, Samantha. I hope I helped.<br />Have a wonderful Easter!<br /><br />Best wishes - George','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-24 17:26:35','2016-03-24 17:49:36',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22695,4047,4263,'Good moring Jodi,<br /><br /><br />Can I submit 5-6 doc\'s to you now and just have you do one a month and bill for each?','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-24 17:54:31','2016-03-24 18:36:18',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22696,1090,65,'I have downloaded the text and will expedite it for you.<br /><br />Thank you.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-24 18:54:41','2016-03-24 21:00:18',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22697,4263,4047,'Dear Bill,<br /><br />Unfortunately, Editor World\'s system does not work that way. You may submit 5-6 documents to me now, but you will have to pay for them upfront, and I will have to return them to you within a certain time frame, which is determined by the number of total words in the documents. <br /><br />If I am available, I can edit the 5-6 documents at once, so that will work for me. Then you can contact me again when you have 5-6 more documents to be edited. But you will be billed as you submit each group of documents.<br /><br />I am new to Editor World, so right now, I have a 20% discount. It might be best for you if you submit a batch within the next few weeks in order to take advantage of the discount. My availability for Editor World over the next few weeks looks like this: I am free today, March 24; Tuesday, March 29; Monday to Tuesday, April 4-5; and April 11-15. After that, my schedule will open up and I will be available more days each week.<br /><br />Best,<br />Jodi','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-24 18:54:47','2016-03-24 19:00:43',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22698,1090,65,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-24 19:42:24','2016-03-24 19:42:24',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22699,454,4282,'<p>Good day,<br /><br />This is a signature project for my MBA. As you can see, this has been reviewd by my advisor. I am struggling with writing in an active voice and i was advised to use and edictor to change the structue from passive to active. AS I am working full time and have hundreds of hours in this paper, I need help with polishing this paper.<br /><br />Comments from my advisor. include a weak abstract and conclusion, a revision of my charts and writng this document in an active voice.</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>Steph</p>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-24 22:20:49','2016-03-24 22:20:49',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22700,2750,3429,'<p>Dear respected editor TypeRighter</p>\r\n<p>Please help me make the document error free. Thank you very much</p>\r\n<p>The document is to publish a book ( I have not finish it).</p>\r\n<p>1.Blue words in the documents is translated from Chinese classical Ci poetries,</p>\r\n<p>Please make it fluent, elegant, and clear(Please rewrite, revise, re-structure the sentences, anything needs corrections). Thank you very much!</p>\r\n<p>2. I use different words in writing table&rsquo;s content for the purpose of different from Chinese classical Ci poetries description in order not to same with Chinese classical Ci poetries.</p>\r\n<p>3. The tables and after table&rsquo;s text were designed and analyses by author. Please maintaining the flow of ideas through Chinese classical Ci poetries, Table, and after table&rsquo;s text structure (Please rewrite, revise, re-structure the sentences, anything needs corrections).</p>\r\n<p>3. Each title of Tables are designed for the title of microfilm, please refine that. Thank you very much!</p>\r\n<p>4. Each table column&rsquo;s header?I use &ldquo;shot&rdquo;, &ldquo; content&rdquo; &ldquo;Effect&rdquo; and &ldquo;Angle&rdquo; for designing the microfilm , use these words , &ldquo;shot&rdquo;, &ldquo; content&rdquo; &ldquo;Effect&rdquo; and &ldquo;Angle&rdquo; does those words precise ? if not, please revise it, Thank you very much!</p>\r\n<p>5.Please make it error free and polish the document, to bring it to a final copy (Please rewrite, revise, re-structure the sentences, anything needs corrections). Thank you verymuch!</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>I\'m very grateful to you for all your help!</p>\r\n<p>Yours Truely,</p>\r\n<p>HK</p>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-24 22:54:27','2016-03-24 22:54:27',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22701,3429,2750,'Hi there:<br /><br />Great to see you back!<br /><br />I\'ve downloaded your document and will focus on it exclusively. It\'s quite long -- you\'ve clearly put a lot of work into it -- but, don\'t worry, I\'ll have it ready for you by the deadline. If you need to contact me, you can still do so though Editor World.<br /><br />Best wishes - George&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-24 23:05:13','2016-03-25 06:45:35',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22702,3429,2750,'Hi, HK:<br /><br />Just a small point of clarification.&nbsp;<br /><br />\"Microfilms Designing of Classic Ci Poetries\"<br /><br />Is \"Microfilms\" the name of a company or an optical storage medium?<br /><br />Best wishes - George','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-24 23:56:22','2016-03-25 07:04:12',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22703,3429,2750,'Hi, HK:<br /><br />Just a small point of clarification.&nbsp;<br /><br />\"Microfilms Designing of Classic Ci Poetries\"<br /><br />Is \"Microfilms\" the name of a company or an optical storage medium?<br /><br />Best wishes - George','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-24 23:56:22','2016-03-25 06:46:21',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22704,1163,2548,'Please do not edit formatting and keep information provided in the doc confidential.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-25 00:25:20','2016-03-25 00:25:20',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22705,3961,144,'In future, if you have to revise a paper, you need to accept the changes in the version that has already been edited and highlight the material added--that is what I have done. I have also made minor changes to the material I edited previously.<br /><br />As before, if you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Thank you,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-25 00:30:26','2016-03-25 00:30:26',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22706,1163,2548,'Please keep confidential and email me if you will not be able to edit in the allotted time','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-25 00:33:59','2016-03-25 00:33:59',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22707,144,4286,'<h1>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Acknowledgement</h1>\r\n<p>At the beginning, I would like to express my sincere gratitude to professor Dr. Marshall Burak, most merciful and beneficial for empowering me to prepare the report within the schedule time. Then all people who were involved both directly and indirectly in the preparation of this report.</p>\r\n<p>As I was placed in Strategism Inc to work as an intern from August to December 2015, I would like to thank all the officials of Strategism Inc who were involved. I would specially like to thank Ms. Manjari, Ms Regina, Ms Reet Dwali for giving me time and sharing their thoughts. I would like to thank them for giving me required information to commence this report and for providing the permission to do the required analytical works.</p>\r\n<p>Finally, I would like to take this opportunity to thank my family members without whose support this report might not be able to complete. I sincerely admit their contribution.</p>\r\n<strong><br /> </strong>\r\n<h1><a name=\"_Toc317427022\"></a>Part I: Introduction</h1>\r\n<h2><a name=\"_Toc317427023\"></a>1.1 Focus of the Report</h2>\r\n<p>The present report focuses on the activities completed during the internship period. It provides information regarding the daily and monthly activities performed at Strategism Inc.</p>\r\n<p>The purposes of the intern are applied knowledge in financial industry and to learn working experience in real world. I have obtained a lot experiences and knowledge in financial industry during four months of the internship. Strategism Inc is a good place for me to apply my knowledge.</p>\r\n<p>Strategism Inc is a Training and Consulting Company that located in Peralta Blvd, Fremont, CA. As a Business Analyst, my responsibilities are prepared income statement, cash flow and balance sheet. The knowledge that I have attained in Lincoln University is essential to my intern at Strategism Inc.</p>\r\n<h2><a name=\"_Toc317427024\"></a>1.2 Industry Profile</h2>\r\n<p>The first management consulting firm named Arthur D. Ltille, was founded in 1886 as a partnership. It originally specialized in technical research (Wikipedia). The initial period of growth in the consulting industry was trigged by the Glass-Steagall Banking Act in the 1930s, and was driven by demand for advice on finance, strategy, and organization. The wave of growth in the 1990s was both driven by strategy and information advice (World Public Library).</p>\r\n<p>The functions of consulting services are commonly broken down into eight task categories. Consultants can function as bridges for information and knowledge, and consultants can provide these bridging services more economically than client firms themselves. Consultants have specialized skills on tasks that would involve high internal coordination costs for clients, such as organization-wide changes or the implementation of information technology. In addition, because of economies of scale, their focus and experience in gathering information worldwide and across industries renders their information search less costly than for clients.</p>\r\n<p>Management consulting refers to business services, but there are numerous specialties, such as information technology consulting, human resource consulting, virtual management consulting and others. Strategism Inc in a small consulting company, it mostly focuses on certification training in software technology.</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<h2><a name=\"_Toc317427025\"></a></h2>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-25 02:27:32','2016-03-25 02:27:32',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22708,144,4286,'<h1>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Acknowledgement</h1>\r\n<p>At the beginning, I would like to express my sincere gratitude to professor Dr. Marshall Burak, most merciful and beneficial for empowering me to prepare the report within the schedule time. Then all people who were involved both directly and indirectly in the preparation of this report.</p>\r\n<p>As I was placed in Strategism Inc to work as an intern from August to December 2015, I would like to thank all the officials of Strategism Inc who were involved. I would specially like to thank Ms. Manjari, Ms Regina, Ms Reet Dwali for giving me time and sharing their thoughts. I would like to thank them for giving me required information to commence this report and for providing the permission to do the required analytical works.</p>\r\n<p>Finally, I would like to take this opportunity to thank my family members without whose support this report might not be able to complete. I sincerely admit their contribution.</p>\r\n<strong><br /> </strong>\r\n<h1><a name=\"_Toc317427022\"></a>Part I: Introduction</h1>\r\n<h2><a name=\"_Toc317427023\"></a>1.1 Focus of the Report</h2>\r\n<p>The present report focuses on the activities completed during the internship period. It provides information regarding the daily and monthly activities performed at Strategism Inc.</p>\r\n<p>The purposes of the intern are applied knowledge in financial industry and to learn working experience in real world. I have obtained a lot experiences and knowledge in financial industry during four months of the internship. Strategism Inc is a good place for me to apply my knowledge.</p>\r\n<p>Strategism Inc is a Training and Consulting Company that located in Peralta Blvd, Fremont, CA. As a Business Analyst, my responsibilities are prepared income statement, cash flow and balance sheet. The knowledge that I have attained in Lincoln University is essential to my intern at Strategism Inc.</p>\r\n<h2><a name=\"_Toc317427024\"></a>1.2 Industry Profile</h2>\r\n<p>The first management consulting firm named Arthur D. Ltille, was founded in 1886 as a partnership. It originally specialized in technical research (Wikipedia). The initial period of growth in the consulting industry was trigged by the Glass-Steagall Banking Act in the 1930s, and was driven by demand for advice on finance, strategy, and organization. The wave of growth in the 1990s was both driven by strategy and information advice (World Public Library).</p>\r\n<p>The functions of consulting services are commonly broken down into eight task categories. Consultants can function as bridges for information and knowledge, and consultants can provide these bridging services more economically than client firms themselves. Consultants have specialized skills on tasks that would involve high internal coordination costs for clients, such as organization-wide changes or the implementation of information technology. In addition, because of economies of scale, their focus and experience in gathering information worldwide and across industries renders their information search less costly than for clients.</p>\r\n<p>Management consulting refers to business services, but there are numerous specialties, such as information technology consulting, human resource consulting, virtual management consulting and others. Strategism Inc in a small consulting company, it mostly focuses on certification training in software technology.</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<h2><a name=\"_Toc317427025\"></a></h2>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-25 02:27:33','2016-03-25 02:27:33',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22709,4258,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your paper.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-25 02:33:51','2016-03-25 02:33:51',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22710,3607,144,'Here you are. I hope this helps. All I can say is if they answer, they answer. Your request for a reply is about all you can do.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-25 02:52:22','2016-03-25 02:52:22',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22711,144,4287,'I would like a free sample of my thesis paper the first 600 words. &nbsp;I recieved an email from my advisor that said there were numerous grammatical errors, missing references and in-text citations that are not in your references. &nbsp;I would like my whole paper done if the sample edit is good. &nbsp;<br /><br />Xarviera&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-25 03:05:52','2016-03-25 03:05:52',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22712,454,3550,'Hi Laura,<br /><br />I found out through a blogger friend of mine that a publishing firm is accepting query letters for new writers \"without agents\". Deadline is end of the month. <br /><br />Attached is a query letter for your review. Would love for you to jazz it up - make it stand out.<br /><br />Thanks and have a great Easter.<br />Bernice<br /><br />','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-25 04:40:23','2016-03-25 04:40:23',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22713,3526,3389,'Hi there,<br /><br />Thanks for sending this my way! I\'ve gone through the text and suggested some grammatical corrections and found a few places to add or subtract words to make the content flow better.<br /><br />I hope you are pleased with my work!<br /><br />Cheers,<br />EM','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-25 05:02:11','2016-03-25 05:02:11',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22714,144,607,'Dear&nbsp;Nyanidoc,<br /><br />Thank you for looking at this again. I made some revisions to my paper and wanted some help to see if it makes any sense and flows alright. In the interest of economics I wasn\'t able to send the whole paper, but rather three sections from it.<br /><br />Thank you very much again for your excellent help.<br /><br />Sincerely,<br /><br />JH','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-25 05:53:22','2016-03-25 05:53:22',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22715,240,3899,'Soo -<br /><br />I\'ve completed editing your document. Overall, I thought it was quite&nbsp;well done. Despite the technical language being used, I found it very easy to follow your arguments and make sense of your conclusions. Most of my edits are simple things such as word use or&nbsp;gramar and&nbsp;punctuation, I don\'t believe there was anything really significant, other than that one sentence I messaged you about earlier. I\'ve left a few short comments about things that are beyond the scope of my work. Thank you very much for choosing The Word Doctor for your editing needs, and I wish you good luck with getting it published!<br /><br />Sincerely,<br /><br />- TWD&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-25 06:14:20','2016-03-25 08:14:20',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22716,2750,3544,'Hi George,<br />Would love your help on this paper!!<br /><br />Thank you so much!<br />Deanna','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-25 06:36:44','2016-03-25 06:36:44',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22717,3544,2750,'Hi, Deanna<br /><br />I will start first thing in the morning.<br /><br />Best wishes, George<br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-25 06:41:57','2016-03-25 07:51:33',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22718,3889,3933,'Hi&nbsp;<br />Time and quality are important&nbsp;<br /><br />Regards','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-25 06:42:32','2016-03-25 06:42:32',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22719,2552,1772,'Let me know if you have any questions or concerns.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-25 06:50:34','2016-03-25 06:50:34',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22720,2750,3429,'Dear respected George<br /><br /><br />1.Thank you very much for find this issue, I think there are something wrong of the name of \"Microfilms\"<br /><br />2.Movie is a long story,&nbsp; Microfilm is a short time&nbsp;movie, about from 90second to 5 minutes,<br />its meaning is a short moie.<br /><br />3. Could it revise it from \"Microfilms\" to \"Micro movie\" <br /><br />Thank you very much!<br /><br />Yours Truely,<br /><br />HK','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-25 07:02:42','2016-03-25 07:04:39',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22721,2750,3429,'Dear Sir,<br />Thank you very much still remember me,<br />It is my honor and pleasure,<br /><br />Thank you very much!<br /><br />Yours truely!<br /><br />HK','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-25 07:08:13','2016-03-25 07:10:35',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22722,2750,3429,'Dear Sir,<br /><br />The original thinking is \" taking a movie in a short time and with a story is called \" micro movie\". <br /><br />what I design is only choose Scenes, Objects, and Sounds in the movie design\"<br /><br />Thank you very much!<br /><br />Your Sincerely,<br /><br />HK','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-25 07:18:29','2016-03-25 07:20:43',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22723,4254,65,'The changes are extensive so I included a copy below the edited text with all the changes made.<br /><br />Thiis appears to be a compare/contrast paper, so be clear when discussing the book or the movie.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-25 07:23:33','2016-03-25 07:23:33',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22724,777,65,'Working on 66609 text now.<br /><br />Sorry to be late.<br /><br />Jackson','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-25 07:27:25','2016-03-25 07:27:25',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22725,2750,3544,'Thanks George! I just realized the previous version I sent did not include exhibits. I\'m so sorry!! Please find enclosed the correct version.<br /><br />Also please let me know if this increased the word count and amount owed. Happy to pay more as needed.<br /><br />I appreciate your help!<br /><br />Best,<br />Deanna','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-25 07:53:09','2016-03-25 15:03:08',NULL,'upload_56f4b625cce539.05953225_LogoplastePaper_DeannaSiller3.docx','LogoplastePaper_DeannaSiller3.docx'),
	(22726,3899,240,'Hello,<br /><br />Thank you a lot for editing my documents and correcting many sentences. Now, the edited document is easier to read than before! I appreciate that.&nbsp;<br /><br />Thank you for your wish and I hope we can work together for my future writings again!!<br /><br />Best,<br />Soo','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-25 08:16:37','2016-03-25 08:25:07',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22727,240,3899,'Soo -<br /><br />You\'re very welcome, any time you need some more work done just let me know!<br /><br />- TWD','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-25 08:38:33','2016-03-25 20:40:08',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22728,454,3519,'Please check grammar, sentence structure. I am an ESL student have a hard time with verb conjugation.&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-25 09:01:55','2016-03-25 09:01:55',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22729,777,65,'Thank you for your patience','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-25 10:16:00','2016-03-25 10:16:00',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22730,65,4198,'This is to be submitted to the malaria journal. Please edit to clean typos, grammatical and improve reading. Edit up to page 16','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-25 14:52:01','2016-03-25 14:52:01',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22731,3544,2750,'No problem, Deanna. I\'ll be in touch.<br /><br />George','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-25 15:04:18','2016-03-26 04:15:55',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22732,4286,3389,'Hi there,<br /><br />Thanks for selecting me for the free sample edit. As this is a sample of my work, I have completed edits on the first page only. Hopefully the first page is sufficient to let you get an idea for how I edit. I would be happy to continue working on this project with you. I generally have (at the very least) availability for 4- and 8-hour turnarounds if you need this to be done quickly.<br /><br />Cheers!<br />EM','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-25 17:14:43','2016-03-25 17:14:43',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22733,4286,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your sample. You submitted three. Two were duplicates of this one, but only one is allowed.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-25 17:50:22','2016-03-25 17:50:22',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22734,484,4270,'Hi there,<br /><br />I\'m looking for an editor who is able to edit articles that have been written for websites (on a variety of subjects, primarily gambling related). The articles have been written by a UK writer, and the substantive content is good, but the website is focusing on a US audience. Sample US readers have picked up that the content doesn\'t particularly flow well for them, or engage them, which I think might be a \"cultural\" issue.<br /><br />I\'d therefore want someone who can take the content and edit it so that it flows well and is engaging for a US audience. Is that something you could do, and would be interested in? It would be for several articles per month on a regular basis. Average number of articles would be around 30-40, with an average word count of 1,500-2,000 words per article.<br /><br />Please let me know.<br /><br />Regards,<br /><br />Ed','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-25 18:54:30','2016-03-25 18:57:30',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22735,4270,484,'Hi! I am interested, and I have done this type of editing. Could you tell me in what form I would receive the articles? MS Word documents?<br /><br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-25 18:58:25','2016-03-25 18:59:56',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22736,484,4270,'Thanks for the swift response. Yes, all documents sent would be MS Word.<br /><br />Do you have the capacity to handle c60K words on average each month? I\'m exploring a few options currently, but my preference is very much to work with a single editor who can handle the whole lot and who I can build a relationship with. The articles would not be sent all at once, but in small every few days.<br /><br />Would you be prepared to review an article initially, and either edit fully or at least offer some comments?','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-25 19:02:49','2016-03-25 19:02:49',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22737,4287,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your sample.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-25 20:19:09','2016-03-25 20:19:09',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22738,607,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your revisions. As usual, i tweaked what I\'ve already edited a bit further.<br /><br />As always, your ratings are always much appreciated.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-25 21:27:28','2016-03-25 21:27:28',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22739,3575,65,'Just needed some formatting and minor edits.<br /><br />I\'ve included a \"clean\" copy after the edited one.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-25 23:39:26','2016-03-25 23:39:26',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22740,4270,454,'Thank you!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-26 00:50:10','2016-03-26 00:50:10',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22741,884,65,'Thank you','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-26 01:58:01','2016-03-26 01:58:01',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22742,4282,454,'Hello, Steph,<br /><br />I have made the changes you suggested regarding the passive voice, and other changes, too. I\'m afraid I wasn\'t very much help with the abstract/conclusion, but I made some suggestions. After you have integrated all the changes, feel free to send the doc back through the messaging system for a final check (no charge). Thank you and best of luck.<br /><br />Laura','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-26 02:51:02','2016-03-26 02:51:02',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22743,2298,65,'Happy Easter to you.<br /><br />As always, I enjoy your writings.<br /><br />Jackson','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-26 04:19:29','2016-03-26 04:19:29',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22744,1981,3889,'Hello,<br /><br />Well-writted abstract. Please let me know if you would like me to edit the rest of the paper (you can submit it for editing).<br /><br />Thank you,<br /><br />Kk<br /><br /><br />','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-26 04:21:13','2016-03-26 04:21:13',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22745,4264,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your chapter--at least I\'m presuming that\'s what it is. I\'m afraid I did not find your comment/question for me. It is a bit redundant, but I really wasn\'t confident enough with the material to know when to cut bits. I believe you remarked on a redundant passage at one point.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-26 04:37:13','2016-03-26 04:37:13',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22746,3328,65,'Good paper. Some repetition of main points, but that might be difficult to avoid.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-26 05:14:15','2016-03-26 05:14:15',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22747,3889,1981,'Hi, Thank you for your promt service. For this document, please keep the tense as present form.&nbsp;<br />Though I have selected 1-day service but it may not take that much time since there are some math terms. So I am requesting if yoiu could finish and return at your earliest convenience. Thank you very much!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-26 05:30:51','2016-03-26 05:30:51',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22748,3544,2750,'Hi Deanna:\r\n<div>I have uploaded your edited document and hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.</div>\r\n<div>One of the pleasures of editing your submissions is that most of the work has been done, leaving me to focus (that is, fuss) over the details. As you can see from the edits, I\'ve been over your document many, made far more changes than I needed to, and sometimes reverted original. I apologize for changing some of the formatting. Sometimes I obsess too much. But I think it\'s better to be consistent with headings and sub-headings etc, and with track changes you can easily change back to the original.<br /> <br />There was only one typo I couldn\'t change. It\'s in the end graphic under Notes, Exhibit 1 : \'it\'s\' should be \'its\' (no apostrophe). I\'ve indicated where with a margin comment.</div>\r\n<div>Apart from that, nice job! You must have spent hours on it. I did too!<br /><br /><br /></div>\r\n<div>Best wishes - George<br />If you need any further edits, please let me know.&nbsp;I am usually available for editing between 6:00 am and 10:30 pm. If my status is set to unavailable, you can still reach me via Editor World.</div>\r\n<div>George</div>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-26 06:03:19','2016-03-26 06:03:19',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22749,3889,3309,'Just an overal edit - proofreading, grammer- I am not a native English speaker and I would be thankful if you help me with the flow of the story, change of words and structure of the sentences where it is needed. Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-26 06:38:29','2016-03-26 06:38:29',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22750,454,884,'\"Kashmir\" in each line of the document should not be deleted.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-26 07:24:01','2016-03-26 07:24:01',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22751,2439,541,'A pleasure to read.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-26 16:35:45','2016-03-26 16:35:45',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22752,2439,541,'A pleasure.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-26 16:36:37','2016-03-26 16:36:37',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22753,3899,2606,'Dear Editor,<br /><br />I would like my document check for grammatical errors, sentence structure, word usage&nbsp;and conciseness.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-26 19:21:45','2016-03-26 19:21:45',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22754,98,65,'Thank you','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-26 21:03:05','2016-03-26 21:03:05',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22755,2750,3429,'<p>Dear respected editor,<br />1. Please arrange 4 paragraphs (brown color words) into the preface after revision<br /><br />2. The fourth&nbsp;paragraphy is the description for page layout, please contrast the P.3~4; Does it complete ?<br /><br />3. The table header, I revise: from \"spot\" to \"scene\"; from \"angle\" to shooting angle\",&nbsp;does it proper? or two of them should be revise?&nbsp;<br /><br />Thank you very much!<br /><br />Sincerely yours,<br /><br />HK</p>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-26 21:14:45','2016-03-26 21:14:45',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22756,484,2536,'Dear Copy Chief.&nbsp; Here is a column that I have been asked to write for Washington Times.&nbsp; It should be around 800 words.&nbsp; It is presently 925.&nbsp; Please work your magic and make it tighter.&nbsp; Thanks.&nbsp; I would like to submit it tomorrow Sunday.&nbsp; Thanks, JT','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-26 21:42:41','2016-03-26 21:42:41',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22757,3558,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your paper.<br /><br />As always, your ratings are much appreciated.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-26 22:01:23','2016-03-26 22:01:23',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22758,2750,3429,'<p>Dear respected editor,</p>\r\n<p>I worry about you correct my long document will make you tired. Therefore, I suggest that you don\'t have to make a tracked mark, direct delete, revise, or rewrite. I think that will make it easy, save time and avoid tired. I\'m very grateful to you for your help!<br /><br />Sincerely yours,<br />HK</p>\r\n&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-26 22:26:06','2016-03-26 22:27:03',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22759,3429,2750,'Hello, HK:<br /><br />Please don\'t worry. I\'m hard at work here enjoying your well-written document. Ci is truly beautiful.<br /><br />I do have some questions, but I will save them to the end because I think it will be easier.<br /><br />My only worry is meeting the deadline. I want to do the best job I can. We should be ok, though. I have no other editing jobs due. &nbsp;And you can always get back to me afterwards for some final tweaking.<br /><br />It\'s coming along well.<br /><br />Best wishes - George<br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-26 22:32:46','2016-03-26 22:34:30',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22760,2750,3429,'Dear respected&nbsp;Sir,<br /><br />Thank you very much!<br />Please dont worry about deadline, no problem!<br /><br />Thank you very much again!<br /><br />Regards,<br />HK','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-26 22:44:50','2016-03-26 22:45:52',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22761,3429,2750,'That\'s great! But I should be ok. If I do need a little more more time, I\'ll be touch.<br /><br />Best wishes - George','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-26 22:46:52','2016-03-27 06:50:29',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22762,3389,3572,'Hi -&nbsp;<br />Please see attachment. &nbsp;Please make all changes using track change.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-26 22:58:18','2016-03-26 22:58:18',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22763,3572,3389,'Hi there,<br /><br />Thanks for sending this to me to edit! As requested I have gone through the text and suggested a few changes that can be seen using the Track Changes function.<br /><br />Cheers,<br />EM','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-26 23:43:35','2016-03-26 23:43:35',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22764,1981,65,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-26 23:44:36','2016-03-26 23:44:36',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22765,2606,3899,'kmcne91 -<br /><br />There you are, I hope it meets with your satisfaction. Thank you for choosing The Word Doctor, I hope you have a pleasant weekend.<br /><br />- TWD','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-27 03:08:51','2016-03-27 03:08:51',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22766,65,4161,'<br /><br />I got documents check recently and I forgot some of the document, so I just need a couple of small paragraphs checked.<br /><br />Thanks for the help.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-27 03:24:39','2016-03-27 03:24:39',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22767,3550,454,'Hi, Bernice--<br /><br />That\'s great! Let me know if this works!<br /><br />Laura','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-27 04:47:38','2016-03-27 04:47:38',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22768,4161,65,'Thank you','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-27 05:02:20','2016-03-27 05:02:20',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22769,1981,3889,'Hello,<br /><br />Again well-written. Please let me know if you need the rest of the paper edited.<br /><br />Thank you,<br /><br />Kk','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-27 05:03:53','2016-03-27 05:03:53',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22770,454,3550,'Laura, I just skimmed through the comments/revisions you made to the query letter and it looks great!&nbsp; So happy with it now.<br /><br />I have to give you 5 stars...you deserve it.<br /><br />I will definitely recommend you to others and will use your assistance in the near future.<br /><br />Bernice','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-27 05:37:06','2016-03-27 05:37:06',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22771,65,1090,'dear editor,<br /><br />can you edit the attached document and get back to me as soon as you can? if possible I\'d like to recieve your edited version by tomorrow (Sunday) afternoon. Look forward to recieving your excellent service,<br />thanks','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-27 07:26:10','2016-03-27 07:26:10',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22772,2536,484,'<p class=\"p1\"><b>Thank you for the opportunity to edit your work. Please let me know if there are any issues, and I will address them asap.<br /></b><br />I made this copy read really well. However, there are incomplete sections at the end of the text, which I think should be deleted. I left them as they are...</p>','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-27 07:29:48','2016-03-27 07:33:45',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22773,484,2536,'Dear Copy Chief,&nbsp; LOVED what u did with my column.&nbsp; U were correct the residual graphs were notes or edits.&nbsp; Great that u pick up on that.&nbsp; I will be carful the next time--no more rambalings. Promise!&nbsp; I look forward to working with you again soon.&nbsp; PS Hope u liked the post.&nbsp; I tried to be \"fair and balanced.\"&nbsp; Again, A domani,\" JT','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-27 08:03:03','2016-03-27 08:03:03',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22774,484,2536,'And I also rated u with a FIVE.&nbsp; A domani, J','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-27 08:03:52','2016-03-27 18:28:04',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22775,2536,484,'Cool! Thank you so much!! And I am a Democrat!','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-27 18:28:29','2016-03-27 19:26:28',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22776,2750,3429,'Dear respected editor,<br /><br />Thank you very very much for your help!<br /><br />Truely yours!<br /><br />HK','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-27 18:35:45','2016-03-27 18:42:27',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22777,1772,2973,'Hi,<br />I am applying for acdemic jobs and need a really professional&nbsp;CV to do so, thanks!<br /><br />','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-27 19:51:55','2016-03-27 19:51:55',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22778,3429,2750,'Hi, HK:<br /><br />I think your document\'s coming along nicely, but I want your opinion to make sure I\'m on the right track.<br /><br />I actually like the word \'microfilming\', so I haven\'t changed it. I made it the subject of the preface, though, and think the preface should be an introduction.<br /><br />I\'ve tried not to make changes to the ci poems, and then only to make them sound more poetic in English.<br /><br />We should consider this a work in progress. We can exchange documents via Editor World\'s messaging system so there\'s no additional cost<br /><br />&nbsp;I\'m much further ahead -- this is just a sample -- but I would value your opinion. I\'m not too familiar with ci (though I love it) or making films, so I\'m a little worried that I might change your meaning when I change a word. So please proofread carefully. Meanwhile, I\'ll press on.&nbsp;<br /><br />Please let me know if you want any changes or have included some yourself. Just send me the revised document. That way we\'ll be on the same page, literally.<br /><br />Best wishes - George<br /><br /><br /><br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-27 19:58:25','2016-03-27 20:48:44',NULL,'upload_56f803216ee5d0.78845518_HK 01.docx','HK 01.docx'),
	(22779,1090,65,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-27 20:26:25','2016-03-27 20:26:25',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22780,454,3458,'Thank you!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-27 21:08:49','2016-03-27 21:08:49',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22781,65,1090,'hi, I have a question.<br />One of your edited sentences (see below), I think that the verb should be \"are\" not \"is\" becuase the subject \"amounts\" are plural. Can you please check and let me know soon, which one is correct?<br /><br />In anaerobic digestion, significant <strong>amounts</strong> of a gas, CH<sub>4</sub>, <strong>is</strong> produced, which can be used as fuel and for treating highly contaminated wastewater\"','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-27 21:11:38','2016-03-27 23:22:38',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22782,2750,3429,'<p style=\"margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;\"><span lang=\"EN-US\"><span style=\"font-family: Calibri; font-size: medium;\">Dear respected editor,</span></span></p>\r\n<p style=\"margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;\"><span lang=\"EN-US\"><span style=\"font-family: Calibri; font-size: medium;\">&nbsp;</span></span></p>\r\n<p style=\"margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;\"><span lang=\"EN-US\"><span style=\"font-family: Calibri; font-size: medium;\">You really help me a lot, I\'m really grateful to you for helping me in writing and editing. You really did a wonderful editing. Thank you very much again and again! Please take a break! . <span style=\"font-family: Calibri;\">Thank you very much again and again!</span></span></span></p>\r\n<p style=\"margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;\"><span lang=\"EN-US\"><span style=\"font-family: Calibri; font-size: medium;\">&nbsp;</span></span></p>\r\n<p style=\"margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;\"><span lang=\"EN-US\"><span style=\"font-family: Calibri; font-size: medium;\">Truly yours,</span></span></p>\r\n<p style=\"margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;\"><span lang=\"EN-US\"><span style=\"font-family: Calibri; font-size: medium;\">HK</span></span></p>','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-27 21:25:20','2016-03-27 21:27:15',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22783,3429,2750,'Thanks, Hk. I\' \'m glad you like our progress so far.<br /><br />lll','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-27 21:29:31','2016-03-27 21:29:31',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22784,3429,2750,'Thanks, Hk. I\' \'m glad you like our progress so far.<br /><br />lll','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-27 21:29:31','2016-03-27 21:29:31',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22785,3429,2750,'Thanks, Hk. I\' \'m glad you like our progress so far.<br /><br />lll','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-27 21:29:31','2016-03-27 21:33:39',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22786,3429,2750,'Thanks, HK. I\'ll glad you approve of our progress so far. It\'s a lovely&nbsp;day here in Canada, so I might just go for a walk. I\'ll send you an updated document tonight, and then the finished version by tomorrow\'s deadline. We can continue revising using the message system over the week - until you\'re happy with the final version<br /><br />Best wishes - George&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-27 21:33:55','2016-03-27 21:35:03',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22787,2750,3429,'Dear respected editor,<br /><br />I am very sorry long document make you busy. Please take a rest, deadline is nonsence. Thank you very much!<br /><br />Truely yours,<br />HK','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-27 21:53:14','2016-03-27 21:54:25',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22788,484,4301,'Please edit for grammar and content.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-27 22:52:56','2016-03-27 22:52:56',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22789,1090,65,'You are correct.<br /><br />Could be a significant amount is<br /><br />or significant amounts are<br /><br />I think I started wondering about CH4, which is methane, instead of thinking about grammar.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-27 23:25:44','2016-03-28 00:49:13',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22790,454,1280,'Please check the grammar in depth.&nbsp;<br /><br />Also, please look in the graph and tables for the grammar.&nbsp;<br /><br />Thank you.&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-28 00:13:43','2016-03-28 00:13:43',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22791,65,1090,'got it. thanks','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-28 00:50:53','2016-03-28 00:50:53',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22792,4198,65,'A few consistency issues (titles/subtitles; see comments).<br /><br />Otherwise, the edits are as shown.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-28 00:57:51','2016-03-28 00:57:51',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22793,3811,3899,'Hamdi -<br /><br />Thank you for choosing the Word Doctor, have a nice day!<br /><br />- TWD','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-28 01:29:12','2016-03-28 01:29:12',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22794,3499,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit these sections of your paper.<br /><br />As always, your ratings are much appreciated.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-28 01:58:12','2016-03-28 01:58:12',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22795,3389,2690,'Hello<br /><br />Please I need editing for grammer, cohesivness, and flow.&nbsp;<br /><br />This is a one page summary of class readings.&nbsp;<br /><br />Thank you.<br /><br />Regards,&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-28 02:22:25','2016-03-28 02:22:25',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22796,484,2536,'Me too. Social liberal. Fiscal conservative. Thanks again. Fine job.&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-28 02:52:56','2016-03-28 18:14:19',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22797,484,2536,'Me too. Social liberal. Fiscal conservative. Thanks again. Fine job.&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-28 02:52:59','2016-03-28 02:52:59',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22798,2690,3389,'Hi there,<br /><br />Thanks for sending this along for me to edit! As requested, I went through the text and made suggestions in Track Changes for a few alterations to words and a few grammatical things. I hope you are pleased with it! :)<br /><br />Cheers!<br />EM','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-28 03:17:39','2016-03-28 03:26:08',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22799,3429,2750,'Hi, HK:<br /><br />I\'m uploading the document, still unfinished. Most of the other ci poems have been edited, but I want to be sure they are free of errors.<br /><br />Numbers 6, 7 and 8 aren\'t finished either, but I\'m making progress. I caught a couple of mistakes in the earlier version. In addition, I like to check words with the Oxford English Dictionary to find the best substitute. Time-consuming but worth it.<br /><br />With luck, I should have the finished document for you by tomorrow night.<br /><br />One small point. Please advise about A: scene. I\'m not sure what to insert.<br /><br />If I have any more questions, I\'ll be in touch.<br /><br />Best wishes - George<br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-28 04:32:53','2016-03-28 08:39:19',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22800,3429,2750,'Hi, HK:<br /><br />I\'m just returning this document. I have a copy. If I don\'t send it, my computer reminds me that I\'ve missed a deadline. There are no changes, so you can just delete it.<br /><br />Best wishes - George','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-28 04:37:17','2016-03-28 08:40:16',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22801,3889,3933,'Hi<br />Time is crusial . If 2 hours is possible I will appreciate. do not have this option in the site<br /><br />Regards&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-28 05:50:54','2016-03-28 05:50:54',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22802,2550,541,'Fluently composed with an effective sense of tone. <br />A pleasure to read.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-28 05:59:38','2016-03-28 05:59:38',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22803,884,454,'Thank you','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-28 06:50:29','2016-03-28 06:50:29',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22804,3519,454,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-28 06:51:16','2016-03-28 06:51:16',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22805,2548,1163,'Hi, there:<br /><br />I edited the document in the areas of grammar, sentence structure, flow, punctuation, clarity, consistency, spelling, detail, word choice, organization, and conciseness. I also did not change the document formatting, as requested.<br /><br />Thank you!<br />MasterEditor','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-28 07:19:11','2016-03-28 07:19:11',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22806,3933,3889,'Hello,<br /><br />Here is your edit.<br />Kk','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-28 09:31:55','2016-03-28 09:31:55',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22807,2750,3958,'<p>Good evening George,&nbsp;<br /><br />I have another paper coming in your way at the latest by Tuesday before 9 pm, Eastern Time.&nbsp;<br /><br />I just wanted to make sure if you would have a time slot for my paper. It would be about 7 pages long.&nbsp;<br /><br />My professor returned both of my assignments last week. The first one, .25 points were docked because of insufficient resources. (totally my lack of research) And the second one, I got A+. She also commented that what a great writer I was.&nbsp;<br /><br />I got to admit that I felt guilty when I read the comment. I was not the great writer. It was you. I know it would be impossible to become like you as a writer, but hopefully, with practice and experience, I could be getting good comments without your help in the future.&nbsp;<br /><br />NOT NOW. I still need your assistance!!<br /><br />I hope you are doing well and will be contacting you before Tuesday night.&nbsp;<br /><br />Best regards,&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>Julie</p>','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-28 11:12:07','2016-03-28 14:12:42',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22808,454,3196,'Hi there,<br />Hope you\'re doing well. I have a document that has two sections on Sudan\'s Insurance and telecom sectors. Much appreciate if you can edit the document to ensure the flow and analysis is coherent.<br /><br />Thanks,<br />AR','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-28 11:36:38','2016-03-28 11:36:38',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22809,2750,3429,'<p>Dear editor,</p>\r\n<p>1.The red words are the same sentences pattern from 9-61 (27 had been delete) which is the description of each Table and put before each table (1-8 had already put into the document). Does this description is precise? enough? Does it need adding something?<br /><br />Please put it before each Table, thank you very much!</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>2. Number 9 &ldquo;Five film scenes&rdquo; means five number, 1, 2, 3, 4, 5 on the left side of Table.</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>3. A: scene&nbsp;&nbsp; &ldquo;A&rdquo; put in the top left side of the Table, because of the space is not enough put the word &ldquo;scene&rdquo;, so make a note on the bottom of Table&rdquo;sence&rdquo;.</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>4. The first document &ldquo;A&rdquo; is &ldquo;spot&rdquo;, the second, third document I use &ldquo;scene&rdquo; instead of &ldquo; spot&rdquo;. I actually don&rsquo;t know which is precise?</p>\r\n<p>What I want to express is &ldquo;From Camara ( take _a scene) turn on ( begin to taking moving and recording) to turn off (close taking moving and close recording), Can it say a \"scene\"? Is that correct? or there is any other precise word ?<br />Thank you very much</p>','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-28 12:32:35','2016-03-28 14:10:39',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22810,3958,2750,'Hi, Julie:<br /><br />Great marks! But you underestimate yourself. You\'re the portrait, I\'m the frame.<br /><br />Yes, I think I can fit you in. I have a long Chinese screenplay at the moment (I know, the things we get: LOL). But&nbsp;the author is flexible with deadlines, so I\'ll do my best.<br />I hope you had a pleasant Easter - George','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-28 14:17:39','2016-03-28 14:20:23',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22811,144,4258,'Dear Editor,<br /><br />Thank you for helping with my paper last week. &nbsp;<br /><br />Please continue to use the Track Changes feature in WORD. &nbsp;I look forward to having your careful edits and constructive comments. &nbsp;If you have recommendations about revising (moving paragraphs, adding information, etc.) to enhance coherence and clarity, please advise.<br /><br />Thank you.<br /><br />Clifford','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-28 14:27:23','2016-03-28 14:27:23',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22812,144,3964,'Dear Professor<br /><br />Greetings from Kuala Lumpur.<br /><br />I am sending a manuscript on malaria in Nigeria for your professional editing.<br />I have removed tables, figures and reference (both the list and citation in text).<br /><br />Thank you<br /><br />Hesham','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-28 17:23:24','2016-03-28 17:23:24',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22813,2536,484,'Cool!','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-28 18:14:28','2016-03-28 18:44:52',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22814,2386,144,'Thank you, Daniel, for the opportunity to read and edit another of your pieces.<br /><br />As always, I appreciate your kind ratings.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-28 19:54:00','2016-03-28 19:54:00',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22815,144,4311,'Hi there! Publishing on LinkedIn, Twitter, FB. Would love your help with editing,proofreading and making sure my voice is clear :)<br /><br />Thanks so much!<br />-Chels','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-28 20:27:44','2016-03-28 20:27:44',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22816,4301,484,'<p class=\"p1\"><b>Thank you for the opportunity to edit your work. Please let me know if there are any issues, and I will address them asap.</b></p>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-28 21:22:19','2016-03-28 21:22:19',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22817,144,4311,'<p>Hi there!<br /><br />When I submitted, I inadvertently clicked 7500 words when in fact I was shooting for the two hour turn around since it is only 680 words! Hopefully we can make this happen, thanks so much for your help I look forward to your comments!-Chels</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-28 22:38:11','2016-03-28 23:05:26',NULL,'upload_56f97a1342bf25.89982052_How to Be The Millenial Everyone Loves.docx','How to Be The Millenial Everyone Loves.docx'),
	(22818,4311,144,'Thank you, Chelsea, for the opportunity to read and edit your post.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-28 23:27:13','2016-03-28 23:27:13',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22819,1143,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your paper. There were a few sentences that I did not understand well, and I have indicated those.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-28 23:44:11','2016-03-28 23:44:11',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22820,3464,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your letter. I have made a couple of comments on the relevance of particular statements.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-28 23:53:48','2016-03-28 23:53:48',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22821,3270,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your review.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-29 00:26:16','2016-03-29 00:26:16',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22822,2973,1772,'I changed a bit of the formatting and some of the wording. Please let me know if you have any questions or would like me to look back over something.<br /><br />After your translation work, you could also list any professional memberships or affiliations you may have, with the year joined. If you speak multiple languages, you could have a section for those as well (i.e. Fluent in Mandarin. Fluent in English. Proficient in Ancient Greek. Or whatever. Listed like you listed your areas of concentration.) These two sections will add a little bit more about you and why you would be an exceptional hire.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-29 00:55:46','2016-03-29 00:55:46',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22823,2973,1772,'Please let me know if you have any questions.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-29 01:42:54','2016-03-29 01:42:54',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22824,3458,454,'Thank you','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-29 03:07:52','2016-03-29 03:07:52',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22825,3429,2750,'Hi, HK:<br /><br />Your document isn\'t quite finished yet. I still have some work to do on it tomorrow, but it should be ready by tomorrow evening.<br /><br />Do you have #52 The Concepts of Art? It\'s missing in my document.&nbsp;<br /><br />Don\'t worry about any mistakes. I\'ll proofread very carefully tomorrow&nbsp;after I\'ve finished editing.<br /><br />Best wishes - George<br /><br />','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-29 03:55:09','2016-03-29 03:55:09',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22826,3889,2800,'Hello,<br /><br />I want a document edited within 2 hours.....would it be accpetable if I emailed it to you as two seperate orders ( the system won\'t allow me to submit the entire word document as one document for a two hour review sine there are too many words)<br /><br />Thanks','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-29 04:23:16','2016-03-29 04:24:12',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22827,2800,3889,'Hello,<br /><br />How many words are there? I would be happy to edit for you, but if its too many words it will be hard to edit in only 2 hours! Feel free to submit it if you think it\'s reasonable.<br /><br />Thank you.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-29 04:25:34','2016-03-29 04:28:37',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22828,3889,2800,'The total amount is 1463 ( the max that the system will allow is 1,200 for a 2 hour edit so I have to split it up into two orders)','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-29 04:30:12','2016-03-29 04:31:30',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22829,2800,3889,'Okay, that will be no problem. Send it over!<br /><br />EE','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-29 04:31:54','2016-03-29 04:31:54',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22830,3889,2800,'Hello,<br /><br />I am writing a paper for an undergraduate history course and I have to answer the following questions, \"\r\n<p><strong><em>Who were the Texas Revolutionaries? What was Texas revolutionaries&rsquo; motivation for fighting against the Mexican government? Did the Texans fighting at the Alamo reflect the general sentiments of the majority of the revolutionaries? How did the events at the Alamo change the views and motives of the revolutionaries, who were stationed elsewhere during the rebellion (especially those who fought at the Battle of San Jacinto)?&nbsp;&nbsp;How&nbsp;did&nbsp;Mexican&nbsp;soldiers and Tejanos (Mexican Texans) view the revolution?&nbsp;</em>&nbsp;</strong></p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;The paper is not fully complete as I need a title at the beginning ( possible title name is Texas revolutionaries) and a closing paragraph that I will add in later. &nbsp;Do not worry about citations when editing this paper as I will add those in later. ( the professor has given us the citations). &nbsp;One important note is I am somewhat limited in what I can write about as I can only use the sources the professor has provided the course. (three letters as primary documents and three lchapters of a textbook as secondary sources)<br /><br />Thank you</p>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-29 04:44:43','2016-03-29 04:44:43',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22831,2305,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit another of your papers.<br /><br />As always, your ratings are much appreciated.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-29 04:46:41','2016-03-29 04:46:41',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22832,3889,2800,'Hello,<br /><br />Attached is the seocnd portion of the paper. I will add a concluding paragraph at the end later ( I may add it as an additional order). &nbsp;Agaiin, do not worry about citations as the professor has given me them and I will insert them later.<br /><br />Thank you','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-29 04:59:48','2016-03-29 04:59:48',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22833,2800,3889,'Hello,<br /><br />Well-written paper. I am looking forward to the next part.<br /><br />Thank you,<br /><br />EE','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-29 05:23:37','2016-03-29 05:31:44',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22834,2800,3889,'Well-written. I enjoyed editing this paper. Please feel free to submit any further edits for this paper or future papers.<br /><br />Thank you,<br /><br />EE','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-29 05:44:16','2016-03-29 05:44:16',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22835,4286,484,'<p class=\"p1\"><b>Thank you for the opportunity to sample edit your work. I gave you a sample edit of the first paragraph, which should give you an idea of the approach I would take to this project. Please let me know if I can be of further service.</b></p>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-29 06:14:06','2016-03-29 06:14:06',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22836,4286,484,'<b>Thank you for the opportunity to sample edit your work. I gave you a sample edit of the first&nbsp;paragraph, which should give you an idea of the approach I would take to this project. Please let me know if I can be of further service.</b>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-29 06:14:27','2016-03-29 06:14:27',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22837,4268,1772,'I fixed most of your works cited entries, but I\'m not sure what Jefferson reference you quote from, or what editions of&nbsp;<em>Antigone</em> or&nbsp;<em>To Kill a Mockingbird</em> you use. I set up those entries as best I could. Here is a website you can use to complete the entries properly.<br /><br /><a href=\"https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/747/06/\">https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/747/06/<br /><br /></a>You will also need to add the year to your Jefferson in-text citation.<br /><br />Please let me know if you have any questions.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-29 06:16:04','2016-03-29 06:16:04',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22838,3889,2800,'Attached is the conslusion,<br /><br />Best','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-29 06:39:11','2016-03-29 06:39:11',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22839,3309,3889,'Hello,<br /><br />Here is your edit! Very enjoyable story. It was a pleasure reading it.<br /><br />Thank you,<br /><br />Kk','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-29 07:20:16','2016-03-29 07:20:16',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22840,2800,3889,'Great conclusion. I am likely going to bed soon, do you have anything else for me to edit? Feel free to send me anything in the future.<br /><br />Thank you,<br />EE','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-29 07:24:20','2016-03-29 07:24:20',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22841,2750,3429,'Dear editor,<br /><br />Thank you very much for finding the missing part #52<br /><br />Thank you very again!<br /><br />Yours Sincerely,<br /><br />HK','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-29 08:13:15','2016-03-30 19:37:38',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22842,2750,3429,'<p>Dear editor,</p>\r\n<p>I would like to add this paragraph in preface, how do you think about this paragraph after editing is put into the four paragraph or put in the last of preface? Which is better?<br /><br />Your Sincerely,<br />Hsin</p>','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-29 11:29:42','2016-03-30 22:29:48',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22843,65,3918,'Hello,<br /><br />I am back to see if you can offer more. Attached is a sample chapter of the book. If you remember you helped proof read the PREFACE of this book. I have attached a sample - CHAPTER 1. &nbsp;Can you please take a look at this and let me know if you can do this job. The book has @22000 words and is a very technical book on management. Also has some graphs and stuff.<br /><br />In addition to grammar will you also do the formatting for this? Is this incuded in the price?<br /><br />thanks<br />Sandeep Naik','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-29 18:50:33','2016-03-29 19:28:10',NULL,'upload_56fa96397cf507.11539324_Book-chapter 1.doc','Book-chapter 1.doc'),
	(22844,1163,2281,'<p>Hello</p>\r\n<p>A few year ago you helped me edit my evaluation.&nbsp; You did such a good job, I am again seeking your assitance.&nbsp; The bolded numbered sentences are what the text under each of the said items is supposed to address.&nbsp; I am seeking your assistance&nbsp;regarding style, grammar, punctuation, structure, and wording to ensure that what I wrote is not only expertly written but address the issues it is supposed to.&nbsp; Any comments, suggestions, etc. are appreciated.</p>\r\n<p>Thank you.</p>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-29 19:06:08','2016-03-29 19:06:08',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22845,2750,3429,'<p>Dear George, <br />In the four paragraph of the preface: \" When the singer sings <em>ci</em>, <strong>she</strong> uses<strong> her</strong> feelings and vocal skills...\", \' she\'&nbsp; \'her\" is female, there are a lots of male singers sings <em>Ci, using the word &ldquo;she&rdquo;, </em>would it be <em>suitable for, applicable to &nbsp;both male and female genders?Thank you very much!<br />Sincerely,<br />HK</em></p>\r\n<p><em>&nbsp;</em></p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p><em>&nbsp;</em></p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-29 19:45:48','2016-03-29 19:47:36',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22846,3429,2750,'Hi, HK:<br /><br />We used to use \'he\' as a generic pronoun for male and female, but it was then considered discriminatory, so we used &nbsp;\'he or she\' or \'she or he\', but that wasn\'t popular either. Then we tried (s)he, but the objection here was that the female was relegated to a parenthesis. Finally, current practice is to alternate between&nbsp;\'he\' and \'she\' - or simply to use \'she\' throughout as a way of historically balancing the two words. It\'s a cultural thing here in Canada. But if you would rather use \'he\', I\'ll change the document.<br /><br />I\'m on the final edit and proofread now. Lots of tweaks, but I think it looks great. <br /><br />By the way, I\'ve added a copyright notice for John Hsin. Is that correct?<br /><br />Best wishes &nbsp;- George&nbsp;<br /><br />&nbsp;','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-29 19:57:15','2016-03-30 14:29:59',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22847,3966,4141,'some of the sentences are maybe a bit too complex and difficult to read. This is meant to be very \'marketing copy\' and less educational or journalistic...check grammer and make stylistic suggestions.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-29 20:19:13','2016-03-29 20:19:13',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22848,3369,3889,'Hello,<br />Here is your edit.<br /><br />Thank you,<br />Kk','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-29 20:43:10','2016-03-29 20:43:10',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22849,3966,4141,'how much longer do you think you will be working on my edit??','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-29 22:32:16','2016-03-29 22:37:51',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22850,4141,3966,'Dear Ms. Phillips,<br /><br />I just sent the document again; I don\'t know why it didn\'t go through. It was actually sent at 2:10. I apologize.<br /><br />Sincerely,<br />Wondrous Wordsmith','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-29 22:41:55','2016-03-29 22:48:48',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22851,3966,4141,'no worries. thanks so much. just going to download it now.&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-29 22:49:10','2016-03-29 22:49:10',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22852,3966,4141,'There must be a problem. Because no changes, notes, or edits were made. the file is exactly as I sent it to you.&nbsp;<br /><br />You can use word to send it back to me with notes, comments, etc.<br /><br />thanks','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-29 22:56:46','2016-03-29 23:22:33',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22853,4141,3966,'I have sent it again. I converted what you sent to a Word file before I started working on it, and the document I sent shows track changes in red.<br /><br />Please let me know if there are further problems.<br /><br />Thank you.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-29 23:26:35','2016-03-29 23:26:53',NULL,'upload_56fad6eb52d666.34920745_SDEW_66734.txt','SDEW_66734.txt'),
	(22854,3966,4141,'but I can only download the .txt version for some reason and I dont see any differences...','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-29 23:29:14','2016-03-29 23:29:50',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22855,4141,3966,'Let me know if you\'re able to access this one.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-29 23:31:16','2016-03-29 23:31:33',NULL,'upload_56fad8041a2eb8.44440392_SDEW_66734.doc.docx','SDEW_66734.doc.docx'),
	(22856,3966,4141,'got it. thank you. sorry for any problem or extra work.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-29 23:33:39','2016-03-30 00:00:04',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22857,3918,65,'I would like to edit your text. I just need to know more about what you need. So I\'m attaching some notes for you to consider.<br /><br />Thank you.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-29 23:36:18','2016-03-30 01:06:47',NULL,'upload_56fad932cf0d65.55186183_Notes.docx','Notes.docx'),
	(22858,4141,3966,'Would you mind leaving a rating? I\'d really appreciate it. Thank you.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-30 00:00:59','2016-03-30 00:01:19',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22859,3399,65,'Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-30 00:17:26','2016-03-30 00:17:26',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22860,65,1981,'Please help me to improve the clariry and the quality of writing in addition to the regular editing. I always apprecate your help!','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-30 00:19:53','2016-03-30 00:19:53',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22861,65,3039,'It\'s a infromal proposal. I\'ll send it my professor by email. After exchange email, I develop little bit more.&nbsp;','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-30 00:20:15','2016-03-30 00:20:15',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22862,4315,65,'A good letter. I added a \"clean\" copy (all changes made) after the edited one.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-30 00:32:59','2016-03-30 00:32:59',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22863,3039,65,'I put a copy with all change made after the edited one.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-30 00:46:23','2016-03-30 00:46:23',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22864,4258,144,'Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your paper in its entirety. I really had no suggestions for reorganization. It seemed to flow well to me.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-30 00:50:33','2016-03-30 00:50:33',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22865,65,1090,'dear editor,<br />I revised some of your previouly edited document as follows. Can you please check if those sentences are ok? thanks<br /><br />\r\n<ul>\r\n<li>The nano-TiO<sub>2</sub> concentrations (both &nbsp;in industrial - and the model products driven- ones) in water were determined by measuring the absorbance peak wavelength at 350 nm using spectrophotometer All standard curves involved the use of five concentrations and were linear with regression coefficients greater than 0.995 in all cases.</li>\r\n</ul>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<ul>\r\n<li>The extracted materials contained only n-TiO<sub>2</sub>, as confirmed by energy dispersive spectroscopy (EDS), showing only two elements (Ti and O).</li>\r\n</ul>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<ul>\r\n<li>The concentrations of nano-TiO2 (both industrial- and two products derived ones) were measured using spectrometer as described in the sub-section under &ldquo;materials and nano-TiO2 suspension&rdquo;&nbsp; and the same concentrations of both industrial and products derived nano-TiO2 were exposed to algae afterwards.</li>\r\n</ul>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<ul>\r\n<li>The study by Mueller and Nowack (2008) indicated that the predicted environmental concentrations of nano-TiO<sub>2</sub> in water were less than 20 mg/L, which were still higher than the predicted no effect concentrations of less than 1 mg/L. &nbsp;Nonetheless, our study showcase that the accumulation of nano-TiO<sub>2</sub> over the long-term could end up detrimental effects on the marine environments, while various environmental factors could influence the ultimate fate of nano-TiO<sub>2</sub>. Since there has been lack of data on toxicity over long-term exposure, further study is strongly encouraged to investigate the potential effects of nano-TiO<sub>2</sub> accumulation on marine environments over different time-series under various environmental parameters.</li>\r\n</ul>','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-30 01:00:38','2016-03-30 03:03:40',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22866,4322,1772,'Please let me know if you have any questions. I look forward to working with you in the future.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-30 01:19:21','2016-03-30 01:19:21',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22867,4286,1772,'Please let me know if you have any questions. I look forward to working with you in the future.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-30 01:21:48','2016-04-15 11:23:41',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22868,1163,3816,'Hi,<br />English is not my first language and so I have a limited vocabulary and expression. Whenever I am writing, I struggle with using the right word/expression - I constantly have the feeling that my writing lack the natural flow of a native speaker and that the right word/expression is perpectually on the tip of my tongue. I hope you can pay special attention to my expression and word choice and offer alternative whenever you can. Thanks.<br />Kwan','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-30 02:43:44','2016-03-30 02:43:44',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22869,65,3918,'Hi<br /><br />By formatting I meant the spacing, indentation etc. I think the number and bullet style can stay as is but can you make sure everything is aligned properly for a 5x8 size book. Also with page numbers and headers/ footers.&nbsp;<br /><br />Thanks<br /><br />','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-30 03:41:39','2016-03-30 03:43:45',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22870,3429,2750,'<div class=\"gmail_default\">Hi, HK:</div>\r\n<div class=\"gmail_default\">&nbsp;</div>\r\n<div class=\"gmail_default\">I plan to read over the document once more in the morning with fresh eyes. I don\'t think there will be many corrections.</div>\r\n<div class=\"gmail_default\">&nbsp;</div>\r\n<div class=\"gmail_default\">I made a couple of changes to the present document, though. Instead of \"concepts of art\" and the \"microfilm design,\" I thought we should use DESIGN and INTERPRETATION as headings. They\'re clearer in English. If you disagree, it is easy to replace them with the original terms.</div>\r\n<div class=\"gmail_default\">&nbsp;</div>\r\n<div class=\"gmail_default\">Numbers 1 and 27 are missing, as you know, and many authors and song titles need to be added.</div>\r\n<div class=\"gmail_default\">&nbsp;</div>\r\n<div class=\"gmail_default\">I cleaned up the formatting, so it\'s consistent&nbsp;throughout the document, keeping your original heading styles, and I added a copyright notice on page 2.</div>\r\n<div class=\"gmail_default\">&nbsp;</div>\r\n<div class=\"gmail_default\">Actually, I made so many small changes I\'ve forgotten what I did. (Oh yes, I changed the pronoun back to \'he\'.)</div>\r\n<div class=\"gmail_default\">&nbsp;</div>\r\n<div class=\"gmail_default\">Anyway, here it is, all 100 pages, and looking good.</div>\r\n<div class=\"gmail_default\">&nbsp;</div>\r\n<div class=\"gmail_default\">I really enjoyed my introduction to ci poetry. They\'re exquisite and I can only imagine what the films look like.</div>\r\n<div class=\"gmail_default\">&nbsp;</div>\r\n<div class=\"gmail_default\">Expect the final document tomorrow.</div>\r\n<div class=\"gmail_default\">&nbsp;</div>\r\n<div class=\"gmail_default\">If you have any questions or want additions or changes, please let me know via Editor World.</div>\r\n<div class=\"gmail_default\">&nbsp;</div>\r\n<div class=\"gmail_default\">Best wishes - George</div>\r\n<div class=\"gmail_default\">&nbsp;</div>','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-30 03:45:37','2016-03-30 14:29:11',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22871,3918,65,'I have not yet set up a book, but it\'s not difficult to find information, such as&nbsp;\r\n<p><strong>Changing the Margins for a 5x8 Book</strong></p>\r\n<p>For Microsoft Word users, go to &lsquo;File&rsquo; and &lsquo;Page Setup&rsquo;.&nbsp; In the window that pops up, first go to the &lsquo;Paper&rsquo; tab and make sure that &lsquo;Letter&rsquo; is selected and that your page size is 8 &frac12; x 11.&nbsp; Then, click the &lsquo;Margins&rsquo; tab.&nbsp; Set your top and bottom margins to 2.25.&nbsp; Set the left and right margins to 2.38.&nbsp; Then, set your gutter to .13.&nbsp; Next, where it says &lsquo;Multiple Pages&rsquo;, select &lsquo;Mirror Margins&rsquo;.&nbsp; Then, click the &lsquo;Layout&rsquo; tab.&nbsp; Where it says &lsquo;Header and Footer&rsquo;, set both to 2 inches.&nbsp; Finally, click &lsquo;Okay&rsquo;.&nbsp;<br /><br /><a href=\"http://www.authorhouse.com/AuthorHouseTV/Poetry.aspx\">http://www.authorhouse.com/AuthorHouseTV/Poetry.aspx</a><br /><br />If you are preparing for Kindle books ro Amazon, surely a submission guide is available.<br /><br />I suggest editing the text first and then doing the formatting. Otherwise, the text is still shifting around across pages and so on. We don\'t typically set up book formats, but maybe we need to start.<br /><br /></p>','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-30 03:55:49','2016-03-30 05:57:28',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22872,3196,454,'Thank you! I am well, and I hope you are, too!<br /><br />Laura','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-30 03:58:02','2016-03-30 03:58:02',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22873,3451,454,'<p>Well done! Please contact me if you have any questions. Best of luck!</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-30 04:09:34','2016-03-30 04:09:34',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22874,1981,65,'Good topic. Text is a bit clearer now.<br /><br />I put a copy with all changes made after the edited one.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-30 04:12:17','2016-03-30 04:12:17',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22875,4315,65,'I mainly did a lot of formatting for you, as you can see. Then I made a few editorial changes.<br /><br />The reason I didn\'t track the changes is that there were so many related to formatting that the text turns totally red. No point in that. Just review this text and revise if necessary.<br /><br />Thank you.','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-30 04:59:57','2016-03-30 04:59:57',NULL,NULL,NULL),
	(22876,1090,65,'Hope this proves helpful.','Read','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-30 05:10:38','2016-03-30 06:19:53',NULL,'upload_56fb278e780673.31507442_The nano.docx','The nano.docx'),
	(22877,65,2880,'<h3 id=\"anonymous_element_11\"><span style=\"color: #000000;\">Module 2 - Assignments</span></h3>\r\n<div class=\"details\">\r\n<div class=\"vtbegenerated\">\r\n<p><span style=\"font-family: \'Arial\',\'sans-serif\';\">Assignments for this Module will consist of two discussion board postings.&nbsp; Discussion board&nbsp;topics&nbsp;are provided for your Blackboard posts.&nbsp;&nbsp;The final chapters assigned will have test questions taken from them despite no required discussion board posts.&nbsp; Please refer to your group page and follow the instructions&nbsp;listed there to make your posts on your group discussion boards.</span></p>\r\n<p><strong><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><span style=\"font-family: \'Arial\',\'sans-serif\';\">DISCUSSION BOARD ASSIGNMENTS:</span></span></strong></p>\r\n<p><strong><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><span style=\"font-family: \'Arial\',\'sans-serif\';\">Discussion Board #4</span></span></strong></p>\r\n<p><b><span style=\"font-family: \'Arial\',\'sans-serif\';\">Topic (make sure to answer all parts of this topic):</span></b></p>\r\n<ol>\r\n<li style=\"margin-left: .5in;\"><span style=\"font-family: \'Arial\',\'sans-serif\';\">Describe to me your primary care NP role (i.e. FNP, A/GNP, WHNP, or PNP role) or acute care NP (ACNP) role using the following items:</span><ol style=\"list-style-type: lower-alpha;\">\r\n<li><span style=\"font-family: \'Arial\',\'sans-serif\';\">the core focus of your practice</span></li>\r\n<li><span style=\"font-family: \'Arial\',\'sans-serif\';\">barriers to your practice</span></li>\r\n<li><span style=\"font-family: \'Arial\',\'sans-serif\';\">the ability to perform technical skills and invasive procedures</span></li>\r\n<li><span style=\"font-family: \'Arial\',\'sans-serif\';\">elements that differentiate your practice from that of other NP specialties</span></li>\r\n</ol></li>\r\n</ol></div>\r\n</div>\r\n<p><strong>NURS 5002 Discussion Board - Grading Rubric </strong></p>\r\n<p>Substantive Discussion Board Posting&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; =&nbsp;&nbsp; 50 points</p>\r\n<p>Substantive Peer Response Postings (2)&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; =&nbsp;&nbsp; 40 points</p>\r\n<p>Proper APA / Grammar&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; =&nbsp;&nbsp; 10 points</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; TOTAL: 100 points</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p><em>Substantive posts and peer responses are based on both the quality and quantity of the work. Posts should be no less than 3 &ndash; 4 paragraphs in length and peer responses should be no less than 2 paragraphs in length in order to provide the required details.&nbsp;&nbsp; </em></p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p><strong>Discussion board post covers topic with appropriate references. (50 points)</strong></p>\r\n<p><strong>Subtract 5 points:&nbsp;&nbsp; </strong>Informative post covering the topic but requiring some minimal expansion.</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 2 references are provided at minimum.&nbsp;&nbsp;</p>\r\n<p><strong>Subtract 10 points: </strong>Informative post covering the topic but requiring some minimal expansion.</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Only 1 reference is provided.</p>\r\n<p><strong>Subtract 20 points: </strong>Discussion points are covered but requiring moderate expansion.</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; References are cited.</p>\r\n<p><strong>Subtract 30 points:</strong> Discussion points are covered but requiring moderate expansion.</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; No references are cited.</p>\r\n<p><strong>Subtract 40 points: </strong>Few discussion points are covered needing significant expansion.</p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; No references are cited.</p>\r\n<strong>Subtract 50 points: </strong>No points are covered and no references are cited<br /><br />please help with APA formatting as well, thanks<br /><br />','Unread','0000-00-00 00:00:00','2016-03-30 05:26:41','2016-03-30 05:26:41',NULL,NULL,NULL),
