Hi, Julie:<br /><br />Here it is - would I let you down?<br /><br />I hope you don't mind but I changed a few things. Nothing critical, mostly cosmetic changes. Above all, I wanted to keep your voice and to stay true to your mission statement. Of course, with the technical stuff I focused chiefly on transitions and aimed for clarity. You did an excellent job to begin with, which made my job easier, and I now think have an excellent explanation of your intended career path.<br /><br />Please proofread carefully. Although I've read over your paper several&nbsp;times, I can easily miss typos, including my own.<br /><br />If you have any questions, please contact me via Editor World. I'm usually online until 10:30 pm, although tonight, being Friday, I might pop out to the pub for an hour. (I will get back to you, though, as soon as I can.)<br /><br />Have a great weekend - George