Dear author - Thank you for the privilege of working on your manuscript.&nbsp; Note that in a couple of places I've specifically asked you to review my edits to be sure they convey your meaning correctly - I assume you do that for the entire text! but these are areas of particular concern that I want to call your attention to.&nbsp; I'll be glad to respond to any questions or comments.&nbsp; Again, thanks.&nbsp; RebeccaTDE