1.Please correct all the errors, such as grammar, spelling, syntex, style, formatting.<br />2.I want my statement of purpose to be concise and to the point without losing the meaning<br />3.When possible, please use better wording and phrasing without losing the meaning since english is not my first langauge, for example: different(common word) -&gt;various(less common used but same meaning);&nbsp;<br />4.Your detailed opinions and comments on my statement of purpose, such as whether it is good enough to be a statement of purpose, whether and what I need to add, what need to be deleted, etc.<br /><br />Thank You.