Hi again:<br /><br />As I understand it, you want the writing to be literate and easy-flowing, but not something my sixth-grade grammar teacher would insist on. Not all sentences have to have a subject and a verb so long as they feel and sound right. I'm ready to go; I hope you are, too. If so, do you want to do the whole manuscript at once, and over what time frame, or&nbsp;a few chapters at a time? Whatever works for you works for me. And is it okay to correct waistcoat? I don't want to tell you how old I was before I realized it wasn't pronounced waste-coat. Like Sean being shawn and not seen. What a great language English is, but it keeps editors working.<br /><br />Regards, Arnie