Hi&nbsp;Jaeyoung:<br /><br />Ok, I've just finished your personal statement. I think you were right. It's better to keep it on topic. The whole idea of a personal statement is to give the admission's officer an idea of who you are. I think we've done that.<br /><br />I'll incorporate the conclusion in your other paper tomorrow and send it to you. I have one small editing project to finish tonight.<br /><br />BFN - George&nbsp;