Hi Deanna:
<div>I have uploaded your edited document and hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.</div>
<div>One of the pleasures of editing your submissions is that most of the work has been done, leaving me to focus (that is, fuss) over the details. As you can see from the edits, I've been over your document many, made far more changes than I needed to, and sometimes reverted original. I apologize for changing some of the formatting. Sometimes I obsess too much. But I think it's better to be consistent with headings and sub-headings etc, and with track changes you can easily change back to the original.<br /> <br />There was only one typo I couldn't change. It's in the end graphic under Notes, Exhibit 1 : 'it's' should be 'its' (no apostrophe). I've indicated where with a margin comment.</div>
<div>Apart from that, nice job! You must have spent hours on it. I did too!<br /><br /><br /></div>
<div>Best wishes - George<br />If you need any further edits, please let me know.&nbsp;I am usually available for editing between 6:00 am and 10:30 pm. If my status is set to unavailable, you can still reach me via Editor World.</div>
<div>George</div>