This is very well-written and well-researched. I'm no medical expert, but found myself intrigued at many of your points and you've convinced me that this is something that should be researched farther!<br /><br />I wish you the very best with the rest of your doctoral study. Literature reviews are a tedious task and you've done an excellent job, in my opinion.&nbsp;<br /><br />Most of my corrections are relatively small - grammatical fixes. There were a few comments I had about confusing aspects. Particularly the use of "young, adult females" struck me as a bit awkward. A few pages in you specify the age of these women, but I might recommend you do that earlier to make it as clear as possible.<br /><br />Please let me know if I can ever be of any assistance again. If you found my editing useful, I would love it if you could rate me 5-stars on the site. As a new member of Editor World, I'm still building my reputation and would love to keep a high rating. Thanks so much and have a great rest of the weekend!