Hi,<br /><br />I created this sales Ad, but feel it's not flowing as it should. The main objective is to capture my audience's attention, and deliver the message concisely without confusion. I am advertising two aspects: medical equipment and consulting services. Should the title/header also include consulting services, or the content presented sufficient?<br /><br />The last paragraph "We're here to help you! Whether you are in need of a professional consultation or in acquisition of medical supplies"<br /><br />Should I say professional consulting services or experienced consultants?....... &nbsp;<br /><br />Your help is needed, and appreciated<br /><br />Thanks