<p>Hi there,<br />Always happy to help! Sounds like a very Bradbury style piece of work!<br /><br />There were a few sentences in your document I was confused by and think need a bit more explaining - you'll see my notes in the document. Overall though, you did a great job.<br /><br />Thanks for continuing to choose me as your editor. I really appreciate your trust in me!<br /><br />Thanks,</p>
<p>Ryan</p>