Hi, Dominic:<br /><br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document and hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />Once again, I made more changes than I really needed to. Your review was fine as it was. Of course, with track changes you can accept or reject and or all edits.<br /><br />Now for the usual boilerplate.&nbsp;<br /><br />MS Word includes track changes by default. Before sharing this document, please consider running Document Inspector. To do this, click File/Info/Check For Issues/Inspect Document on the Microsoft Word menu bar.<br /><br />When you open a document that contains track changes, the document appears in the Final Showing Markup view to show that the document contains edits. To review the edited document without markups, click Review on the Microsoft Word menu bar. Then select Final: Show Markup and click the drop-down arrow. Choose Final. To show the document with the edits, click Final: Show Markup.<br /><br />Great to see you back!<br /><br />Best wishes - TypeRighter (George)<br /><br />I am usually available for editing between 6:00 am and 10:30 pm. If my status is set to unavailable, you can still reach me via Editor World.<br /><br /><br />