Extraoridinary Edit,<br />  I would like you to revise this cover letter, which will be attahed to the resume <br />I sent you a couple of minutes ago. <br />  Can you focus on the following: opening paragraph ( although this is an entry level<br />position, I wanted the opening to be different) closing statement, flow between paragraphs,<br />grammar as well as content?<br /><br />Thank you,<br />Shelly Greaves<br /><br /><br /><br />