Hello!<br /><br />Please know that with works of thi slength I offer the author the option of a second edit to look over changes made to edits. Feel free to upload the doc, once you've had a chance to look it over, through the sample edit feature so you are not charged.&nbsp;<br /><br />THere were several instances where I felt the passive voice could not be avoided--let me know what you think.<br /><br />Thank you,<br />Laura