Hi,&nbsp;Hanyoung Kim:<br /><br />I certainly learned &nbsp;a lot from your study. You have a great&nbsp;thesis in the making.<br /><br />Please proofread your edited document carefully. Although I've carefully reviewed it three times, typos&nbsp;have a way of appearing unexpectedly.<br /><br />Most of the editing suggestions are self-explanatory. Where needed, though, I've added a comment in the margin. I primarily&nbsp;looked for grammatical lapses and generally polished the flow, as requested.<br /><br />A very nice conclusion to your thesis. If you have any questions or need minor changes, just send the text to me in a message, and I'll reply as soon as I can.&nbsp;<br /><br /><br />Best wishes - George (TypeRighter)<br /><br />I am usually available for editing between 6:00 am and 10:30 pm (EST). If my status says 'unavailable', you can still reach me via Editor World.&nbsp;