Hi George,&nbsp;<br /><br />Attached file is the final draft of my writing sample for graduate schools. I highlighted the parts that I added, including several sentences in the middle of my paper and conclusion part. Other parts are the ones that you already read, but I attached the whole file to help you to understand the topic. I would really appreciate if you could give me the feedback as soon as possible (if you can), but I don't mean to rush you. Please let me know if you have any questions regarding to the paper when you read it. I am willing to assist you.&nbsp;<br /><br />Thank you for your help in advance, and happy new year to you too!<br /><br />Best,<br />Jaeyoung