Very well written, and I think you'll be a great candidate! I'm currently in the process of creating my own start-up business, so I was certainly interested in your subject.<br /><br />With that said, I have two main things to consider, both of which I edited without changing your voice:<br />1) You have a tendency to write some long sentences. I do the same thing! Like you, I like to create lists in my writing. There's so much great information you have, but when the sentences get that long it gets lost. So I attempted to shorten them up a bit for clarity.<br />2) You used the word "experience" a lot. I tried to edit that where possible to switch it out a bit.&nbsp;<br /><br />Overall though this is exceptional. Please let me know if you ever have any other editing needs. And if I could ask you to consider rating me 5/5 on EditorWorld I would be so&nbsp;appreciative, as I'm fairly new to the site and would love to develop a solid reputation on there.<br /><br />Thanks so much,<br />Ryan