Hi, HK:<br /><br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document and hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />Thank you again for paying twice. To clear my inbox, I will also upload your second document unchanged.<br /><br />Don't hesitate to get in touch if you have any questions.<br /><br />&nbsp;Best wishes - George