Dear Nyanidoc,<br /><br />Please address the following points (as per my supervisor's feedback):<br /><br />Structure, areas of repetitive sentences and paragraphs, sentence structure and major proof read.<br /><br />Kind regards, <br /><br />Najwa<br /><br />N.B. I&nbsp;will attach the requirements for the thesis as per the IOE doctoral school hanbook in the messages section.