Hello Steph.<br />Your writing is excellent and you're a wonderful storyteller -- and what a story you have to tell. I have read the entire paper through and I'm in the process or re-reading it. I particularly want to make sure your&nbsp;tenses are consistent, your singulars and plurals&nbsp;are accurate, and your punctuation is right. This copy is completed only halfway; the rest will be completed tomorrow, and then I'll work on putting it into chapters. Back to you soon.