Hello,&nbsp;<br /><br />I'm planning to submit this manuscrip to an academic journal of nursing discpline.&nbsp;<br />Please make this draft read clear and direct with natural flow. &nbsp; &nbsp;<br />It was originally written for a sociology journal focusing on community effect but now it is aiming for a nursing journal focusing on migration health issue.&nbsp;<br />Thank you in advance!<br /><br />Kwon<br /><br /><br />