Hello, A,<br /><br />You might open this edited doc and burst into tears, but I hope my explanation allays your fears. Oh my gosh I so didn't mean to rhyme, there. Sorry.<br /><br />I restructured the entire document according to your prof's indications. I didn't, however, remove the text that I moved, which is why there is so much red and strikethrough. You can view it without mark up to see generally what it will look like without all the crossed out text. I edited the entire first three sections. I would like you to look at the headings and sections as they are now to see if they GENERALLY make sense as is. Make the additions &nbsp;(the example of the kind of transition that would not be accepted by the ADA and the detailed study information the teacher asked for). THen, take a look at the methods section and decide if you would like to take the teacher's advice or stick with the autoethnography. Once you decide that, you can take out what you want about autoethnography (assuming you want to just work with subjects) and add in &nbsp;whatever info about phenomenology you want to. If you decide to leave it, leave it. I will rework the text based on what you decide.<br /><br />Once that is done, I will go through the entire document again, edit the parts that I haven't yet, and edit the parts you add. I will also smooth the transitions between sections (oh the irony). I will do this at no charge--you already paid, but I feel like I don't want to edit any more until you look at the basic restructure. I know exactly how you feel at this point--you just want it to be done, and you are probably tired of going around and around with it. You are almost there.<br /><br />Let me know what you decide and we will proceed from there.<br /><br />Thank you and hang in!<br />L.