This book I wrote first, wasnt that great but still would like to have to re-edited. The first editor did a horrible job fixing the grammar and sentence structure. Like I said before, I dont&nbsp;know what good grammar and sentence structure is, but hardcore readers do. &nbsp;I hoping you can fix it. &nbsp;The story wasn't that great, but I would like the English and word choice to be better. Unlike the other book where people liked the story but not the editing, not many liked this story.<br /><br /><br />