Hi, Laura,&nbsp;<br /><br />Okay, I didn't make that many changes. They are in red. I don't know if I did it right or not. The part you wanted me to give the reader, I did the best I could.&nbsp;<br /><br />Here's why? &nbsp;Yashani's flaw is secretive/dishonest. There are twists to plenty with her. At the end of book one, we'll find out it was her at the beginning of the story escaping from the window when Brad was murdered. <br /><br />Next, Nathan is Father Trench. <br /><br />Third, she worked for SFPD as a Lieutenant. (Go back to chapter one and read where the cops said, "Lieutenant's head is going to blow off with this one. I love to get her paycheck." &nbsp; <br /><br />Lastly, Yashani&nbsp;is the sister to Urelynn (Poisette, Pepper, and Karma). &nbsp;<br /><br />Sorry I had to blow the twists, but this will help you decide what I should put in the Holy Matrimony chapter you wanted me to fix. &nbsp;