Hi George,<br /><br />I'm sorry if I interrrupted your work, but I need addtional help for the writing sample. I really liked your edited version, but I just want to add more specificity to my paper. <br /><br />So, for the very last part&nbsp;of the conclusion, I would like to mention like the following:<br />"However, we should not rule out China&rsquo;s attempt to correct the corruption domestically and to further liberalize its market, which would generate higher domestic investment and boost manufacturing. At worst, these signs of China&rsquo;s economic boom would make the U.S. allies in the region to lean toward China, which would hurt the existing international power order. Therefore, it is essential that economists and politicians know what China&rsquo;s economic ambitions are and whether they are achievable in the first half of the twenty-first century."<br /><br />After reviewing the paper for several times, I think I should keep the explanation for the international political power (power transition), since that is my second question of my research.&nbsp;<br /><br />I would really appreciate if you could correct grammars and flows of the above sentences. Also, if you have any other suggestion, please feel free to address.&nbsp;<br /><br />Thank you.<br /><br />Best,<br />Jaeyoung