Thanks very much. I am glad you were pleased with my work, and that I was able to help. Also, don't worry, I only referred to McCarthy because I've read quite a lot of his work. Besides, novels, even dark ones, are a welcome change, as I spend most of my time working on scientific journal articles, master's theses and doctoral dissertations, so the work can get dry sometimes.<br /><br />If you would like me to go over any of the new material you've added, or existing material you've changed, just let me know, as I'll be happy to do so.<br /><br />I would also be honored to appear in your acknowledgments. My full name is Debra Forthman (PhD) :) That last bit is entirely optional. Feel free to say that I'm associated with Editor World. I'm sure they would appreciate the acknowledgment as well.<br /><br />All the best,<br /><br />Nyanidoc