Can you please contact Editor World about the page count? Seems their count is higher than yours. Also you mentioned that you had already published this text, but are clearly not satisfied, so what do you not like about this draft? What do you want me to do, other than an line-by-line edit? The more you tell me what the issues are, the better I can make your next draft. You’ve done a tremendous amount of work and writing, and I want you to have exactly what you want after we finish this process. Let me know your thoughts, please. Jack