Hi Nyanidoc,<br /><br />Thank you for the sample editing. I like your style that is direct and consice. Please continue to help me edit the paper attached. This paper will be submitted for journal publication. The references style is Harvard (Emerald). Please feel free to delete and cut short where you think is redendant and unneccesary. If necessary, you can also re-structure the paper as well to make the flow better and understandable to the readers. <br /><br />I have two other papers that need copy editing before submitting to journals. I hope we can work together in the long term. Thank you.<br /><br />Best wishes,<br /><br />Tina<br /><br />