Third person omniscient, Present Tense is what I am shooting for, so change anything that does not match those specifications. Also, if I am using a word too much feel free to substitute replacement words.&nbsp;<br /><br />Evella Noctu&nbsp;= Eve (nickname) just an FYI.<br /><br />I would like additional edited copy that does not have the corrections attached to it as well as the one that has both the corrections and edited copy together.&nbsp;<br /><br />Thanks,<br />&nbsp;Bruce Marcom