Hi TextPro.<br /><br />Thank you so much for your service. The writing is more concise, yet still has my voice.&nbsp;<br /><br />However, I noticed that you did not provide any comments and suggestions to improve my writing, as indicated in your editor description page. I was wondering if there was an error in the word file you uploaded, or you thought my writing was fine as it is. <br /><br />Also, my writing is a personal statement for applying to graduate level programs. I saw you changed the last sentence of the first paragraph. I think you assumed that I am applying to undergraduate programs. I am a bit afraid that my writing would not meet the level of post-undergraduate. &nbsp;Can you check again if you see any problems in my writing as a graduate school personal statement?<br /><br />Thank you!<br /><br />Best,<br /><br />Viv