I did not edit the appearance of the presentation, just the wording in each panel. I recommend changing the wording of "scales like hell", but I wasn't absolutely positive what you meant by it. I left suggestions in the comment bubble there.<br /><br />I switched slides 13 and 14 because it flowed a bit better that way to me. Please let me know if you want me to look at something again. &nbsp;<br /><br />Thank you.