Dear Dr. Jun,<br /><br />Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your revised paper.<br /><br />I believe it will be in very good shape after you take a look at my numerous suggestions for changes in phraseology, which I did not make as I was not completely certain that you would wish to change them. I have also highlighted an incomplete sentence.<br /><br />As always, ratings are welcomed.<br /><br />All Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc