Hello.<br />I need help in proofreading and changing awkward sentences into natural and nice ones.<br />Any comment for nice SOP (e.g. order of stories) would be beneficial for me.<br />Especially, please chek the third paragraph in detail,since I did not get any proofreading for the 3rd paragraph.<br />Thank you for your help!<br /><br />Best regards,<br />Keuntaek Lee