Hi,&nbsp;Nagatomi:<br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document, and I hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />What a great paper! It rises at the end like a&nbsp;crescendo. If this doesn't get readers interested in the early&nbsp;history&nbsp;of China's republic, nothing will.<br /><br />Although I was careful not to change the content, please proofread your edited document carefully.<br /><br />I hope I've helped, or at least not harmed. Thank you again.<br /><br />Best wishes - George<br />I am usually available for editing between 6:00 am and 10:30 pm (EST). If my status says 'unavailable', you can still reach me via Editor World.<br /><br /><br />