Hell Katrina,<br /><br />I was very impressed by your editing last time. I met with my advisor and made some changes. I want to check with you to see if this personal statement is appealing. I would like your help to rewrite some sentences, as they sound a little weird to me. Most importantly, I need help making it more concise and shorter, ideally less than 800 words.&nbsp;<br /><br />Thanky you for your help!