Okay. Sorry. One question. Since you offered to re-edit that para...I like taking it out but find the transition slightly jarring. I re-wrote the second sentence (only) in the copy below to reflect what I was really trying to say (your edits helped me get there). It's the space between these two thoughts that I think might need some reference to presentation decks being the main tool for taking advantage or something. Thoughts? I won't bug you again on this one - thanks!
"I started my business and created my one-day workshops because Im passionate about liberating retail-focused companies from self-sabotaging formulas and limited thinking. I want to see more suppliers, brand marketers, solution providers and others taking full advantage of the spirit of opportunism and partnership that retailers are embracing right now. ((like? Defines the audience))
((right here is where I might need a transition/tee-up? Just want your thoughts. Thanks))
At the outset, let me say that Im not a fan of kicking off presentations with introductions or ending them with open-ended possibilities, despite knowing from my workshops that this statement is heretical and therefore a topic for a separate article!"