Hi, Tinazoenewlife (I'll guess that your&nbsp;name is Tina):<br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document, and I hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />Although I was careful not to change the content, please proofread the edited document carefully.<br /><br />When you open a document containing tracked changes, it appears in the Final Show Mark-up view. To see the document without mark-ups, do the following: <br />For PCs, on the Microsoft Word (2010) menu bar, click Review. Then select Final: Show Mark-up (All Mark-up) and click the drop-down arrow. Choose Final.<br />For Word 2013, click Review, then from the All Mark-up drop-down box, select No Mark-up.<br />For Macs, on the Review tab, under Tracking, click Track Changes to turn on or off. Choose No Mark-up from the drop-down menu in Show Mark-up.<br /><br />If you see an edit you dislike, place the cursor anywhere on the marked change, click Reject (on the menu bar), then choose Reject Change from the list box (or right-click to see your options). When finished, click Accept &gt; Accept All Changes to globally accept all the remaining edits.<br /><br />MS Word includes tracked changes by default. Before sharing this document, please consider running Inspect Document. To do this, click File/Info/Check for Issues/Inspect Document on the Microsoft Word menu bar.<br /><br />Judging by the quality of your essay, you seem perfect for the role of counselor. I trimmed a little of your document towards the end; some of what you said was covered earlier. Apart from that, I simply proofread and improved the flow. Nice job! Good luck with your career!<br /><br />Best wishes - George (TypeRighter)<br />I am usually available for editing between 6:00 am and 10:30 pm (EST). If my status is set to 'unavailable', you can still reach me via Editor World.