You know, Ivan, you always leave me wanting more. I suppose that's the heart of good story-telling.<br /><br />There were no critical changes, just a few minor changes that I thought improve the flow.<br /><br />I assumed that this was continuous dialogue, so I put quotation marks at the beginning and the end. For any speech within this, I used single quotes.<br /><br />I wish I had your talent for introspection. You make the ordinary sound extraordinary. Good for you!<br /><br />Best wishes - George&nbsp;