Hi George,<br /><br />If you don't mind, I have instered one paragraph into my last paper you edited for me, just to comply with the rule of 750 words for this paper, and also to highlight my position on the issue. Please edit it for me and let me know if it makes sense. The pargraph is in red. Thank you. And I look forward to my next paper, coming soon!<br /><br />Have anice weekend!<br />Maya