Hello! <br /><br />For this document, I focused on grammar and making sure that every sentence read in a smooth, natural way for the English language. Per your comments, I did my best not to alter any red text unless it needed grammatical changes. I left several comments on the side througout the document either explaining certain edits or offering suggestions for your consideration, so be sure to look out for those. Feel free to message me if you have any questions! Thanks. =)