Hello!<br /><br />I just completed a&nbsp;rough translation of <strong>my academic SOP</strong> from Korean into English.<br />I am really in need of your help to (please) make it coherent, clear, succinct, and professional.<br /><br />It was fairly difficult for me to convey the nuances of my original text. I am afraid some meanings are lost or blurred.<br />Nonetheless, I believe your help to could significantly enhance it.<br /><br />Could you please..<br />1. <span style="text-decoration: underline;"><strong>(MOST IMPORTANT) Make it as succinct as possible</strong>?</span> You can take away any part that seems redundant or unimportant.<br />&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;You can erase such parts it without thinking twice.<br />2. Modify it sound<strong>&nbsp;beautiful</strong> <strong>and streamlined</strong>?<br />3. <strong>Suggest any alternative expressions&nbsp;with real examples?</strong><br /><br />Again, <strong>any additional modification</strong>&nbsp;is always welcome. I trust your editing skills.<br />Please just make it coherent, clear, succinct, and professional.<br /><br />Thank you very much! I really appreciate your help.<br /><br />Very sincerely,<br />Hangsan Ahn