Hi, Maya:<br /><br />Well, here it is, finally.<br /><br />The first two-thirds of the document are strong, but the last section gets wobbly. There's still more work needed here. I think the appendix, particularly, needs attention. I added the complete document from The Guardian.<br /><br />I know this is still a draft. I would say the first of three. You might need to refine your research questions as well and generally tighten the last one-third&nbsp;of the paper. But it is coming along. I know you've already put in a lot of time already -- I've lost count of the hours I've put in &nbsp;too. It's &nbsp;a pity that I don't know more about the subject. I can help with polishing, though.<br /><br />Anyway, if you have any questions, please let me know.<br /><br />Best wishes - George&nbsp;