Thank you for the opportunity to finish reading and editing your thesis, which is truly a monumental achievement. I hope it is, in fact, a dissertation rather than a thesis, and that you will earn a PhD for your assiduous efforts.<br /><br />I have rewritten many sentences not b/c there was anything inherently wrong w/ them, but simply to transform them from passive to active voice, which enhances their effect and is actually more correct, e.g., monuments underwent renovation rather than were renovated. It is by no means always possible to do this, however.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc