<p>Two questions:</p>
<p>1. Is it clear that I am referring to <strong>affiliate</strong>&nbsp;compliance and strategic goals?&nbsp; See the bolded&nbsp;changes below.</p>
<p>2. Is the serial comma optional? APA and some other styles call for it; others prefer the &ldquo;open&rdquo;&rsquo; style. I favor it for clarity, particularly if the items in the list are each long. Below, not so long, so if you don&rsquo;t typically use it, then removing it from below is fine.</p>
<p>The position's primary purpose is to work in partnership with each affiliate and any other pertinent stakeholders to maintain or improve <strong>these affiliates&rsquo;</strong> health and performance, ensure <strong>their</strong> compliance with reporting requirements, and assist <strong>them</strong> in advancing strategic goals that align with the mission of the Blue Berry Corporation. &nbsp;</p>