Gina,<br />Your paper with my redlined edits are attached. Many of them are suggestions that of course you are free to take or ignore. I think that you make your points well and this is an interesting topic. I think it would be fine if you continued to introduce your examples in the form of a question. Hoping to give you some inspiration, I jotted down a couple questions at the end that might help you introduce the Syrian refugee crisis and the 2008 financial meltdown. I hope this helps! I'd love to see the final paper if you want to send it back. I will be available most of the day tomorrow and Tuesday. Good luck!