Hi, Debra<br /><br />The editing is going fine! I'm glad we have started with a small part&nbsp;so we can adjust to each other for the remainder of the book. I made a few notes, which I attached as a file.<br />I'm not sure what I can or cannot do, so, please, tell me if I&nbsp;overextended myself.<br />In&nbsp;this first part the notes were necessary to establish a norm, I'm sure they won't be needed from now on.<br />Just FYI, I will send another message with the final version of Part 1, in case you want to take a look.<br /><br />Best,<br /><br />Noga