Hi, there:<br /><br />No problem. You are referring to the PowerPoint presentation, is that correct (document # EW_64381.pptx)? I have reattached the revised version here. Since it is a PowerPoint document and thus does not have the Track Changes feature that Microsoft Word has, I inserted comments including suggested changes where necessary.<br /><br />Again, I edited the document in the areas of grammar, sentence structure, flow, puntuation, clarity, consistency, and detail. It has been my pleasure!<br /><br />Thank you so much!<br />MasterEditor