Here is the editing notes from the moderator of the blog<br /><br />
<p class="message-body">Zach - this is VERY rough. I think you want to edit it further. You oscillate from over use of big words - "I will try to illustrate novel sources of frustration I experienced specific to transitioning to analytics." to "LOL" You hit italics, double quotes, single quotes, dashes, ellipses, and brackets. Also - I think your final paragraph is ... harsh. 10%... truly? I think the reality is different mental models, different thought processes, more abstract thinking less rote... Sorry if this sounds ... harsh. But compared to article 1 - it didn't resonate.</p>