I appreciate your openness and your willingness to work over the weekend.  I expect to send you a revised draft sometime around late night tonight (Eastern time). If you can please review it tomorrow morning or early afternoon at the latest, that will be spectacular! I don't expect to make a lot og substantive changes. But I do think the prose can be made more persuasive.  I need to use words that are more illustrative and graphic.  So that will take some thinking on my part.  I will be in touch soon. Thank you Laura.