You are so kind and understanding. I am indebted.<br /><br />So, I don't want his diatribe to be included. That knocks the words down to 7,034; however, I am going to include those other words - and leave it up to you whether the part about having &nbsp;shot Bryan was a mistake in hindsight as he was not part of the elites of Starwood or whether it is just fine mentioning that or leaving it out altogether.<br /><br />I really have no issue with just submitting the 9,000 words and not worrying about&nbsp;fixing it per se.&nbsp;<br /><br />If you will make yourself available - I will get this other to you and we can really be finished.&nbsp;<br /><br />The only thing I would mention is no wonder my spreadsheet reminds me that if all of this follows the BIRDS OF ... chapter - it is 13,000+ words and that is very long. It is probably why I felt the competency stuff could be gleaned from the basically same testimony as the punishment phase because of the length and then back in the Chapter refer to the judge's comment that I remember veratim.<br /><br />If I had looked at my spreadsheet I wouldn't have made the error. I apologize.<br /><br /><strong>I will look for your availability and submit this last piece a</strong>nd leave his diatribe in moreso for the extra cushion it lends but thank goodness you know to leave it out (I have it highligted in red for ease of removing it). Above all, I don't want Edward receiving any attention or enjoyment of attention he might derive for his ideas.&nbsp;<br /><br />Thanks again.