<p>Hi Laura,</p><p>Thanks for your “Cheesemonger” edits. </p><p>Here are two pieces: “Alice in Dunderland” and “Adios…Smitheerens.” Where each fits in terms of sequence among the 25? pieces so far will need some thinking. I thought Alice needed some weight to her presence in the story, and Jimmy’s background needed some more perspective. I have a question about “Adios,” but only after yo’ve read the piece.</p><p>Thanks, Dan</p>