<p>1) the word omitted means removed. Correct? But what I am trying to say here is overlook coz we missed out his name<br /> </p>
<p>If his name was on the list, but he was not acknowledged, then use &ldquo;overlooked.&rdquo;</p>
<p>If his name was not on the list, then use &ldquo;omitted.&rdquo;</p>
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<p>2) "...and they appreciated being among PETRONAS&rsquo;s partners." Do u think that by adding a word "felt" between "they" and "appreciated" sounds better?&nbsp;<br /> </p>
<p>Yes, or:</p>
<p>&ldquo;&hellip;and they felt appreciative to be among&hellip;.</p>
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<p>3)"He was to remain formal and keep the crowd engaged." "He was to remain" here sounds wrong. i just want to say that he is formal in his delivery and able to keep the crowd engaged.&nbsp;<br /> </p>
<p>&ldquo;His delivery was formal and kept the crowd engaged.&rdquo;</p>
<p>&ldquo;His formal delivery kept the crowd engaged.&rdquo;</p>
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<p>4) "Customers&rsquo; remarked that they...". The Customer Should not have apostrophe right?&nbsp;<br /> </p>
<p>Delete the apostrophe please.</p>
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<p>5) "The video was did well in capturing the key..." Isn't it should be "the video was done well"?&nbsp;</p>
<p>I intended to delete &ldquo;was&rdquo;.</p>
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<p>&ldquo;The video was done well and captured the key&hellip;.&rdquo;</p>