Hi, Emilia:<br /><br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document and hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />I don't think there are any problems. You did the bulk of the work. I simply polished.<br /><br />Please proofread carefully. I'm wonderful but I'm not infallible.<br /><br />If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World. I'll get back to you as soon as I can.&nbsp;I might be off-line for a short while while my computer runs through some maintainance stuff..<br /><br />Best wishes - George<br /><br /><br /> &nbsp;