Hello again.... thanks for the response and your willingness to help. I'd love for you to look at it - I don't expect you to do another sample edit, but if you could just give me feedback as to how I wrote it, or if I need to write differently. As I explained, a large portion of my storyline comes from the impact of five differeny sermons. I tried to have a summary text of people discussing a sermon... but, I really want the actual sermon in it if that's acceptable. Thanks again and have a blessed day.&nbsp;