Hello,<br /><br />Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit another of your interview articles.<br /><br />I have made a suggestion for the title and have added a couple of subheadings. It appeared that most of the article was quoted material, which I hope is the case, because I edited it very lightly by comparison to what I would have done if they weren't quotes.<br /><br />I think it hangs together just fine and is as clear as something can be when it's mostly quotes. I did suggest that you add some interpretive or introductory comments more often. You do it in a couple of places and it's helpful.<br /><br />As always, ratings are much appreciated.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc