<p>Hello again!</p><p>I am applying to the University of Vermont School of Medicine, but this is not an admissions essay. The school wants me to answer the following prompt:</p><p><strong>"Please write a short response to the following question. (1000 characters maximum.)</strong></p><p><strong>'Two roads diverged in a yellow wood. And sorry I could not travel both…'</strong></p><p><strong>--Robert Frost, The Road Not Taken</strong></p><p><strong>Tell us about a time when you were at a crossroads and had to make an important choice. What do you think would have happened if you had made a different choice?"<br /><br /></strong></p><p>I have attached a document which contains my response to the following prompt. That being said, there are a few things I need addressed by the editor.</p><p>1) I am 200 characters over the character limit on this document (Limit: 1000 character w/spaces). If you could please help me decrease the character count, while retaining the meaning of the content, that would be great. If you can eliminate redundancy, restructure complex sentences into more simple ones, etc... to make the document more concise, that would be ideal. Overall, I would like you to remove anything that you think does not directly ANSWER the above prompt. Also, I would like you to remove anything that you think does not add anything to the response and is just "fluff".</p><p>2) I want to ensure my grammar and word choice is perfect.</p>Thank you very much!<br /><br />PS: I had a concern with the last document I had you edit and I sent you a message about it. If you could please address my concern, that would be amazing! Thanks again!