Very interesting indeed. Perhaps you shd just say 'from the east' or 'from Tanzania' rather than Kili, so as not to confuse readers that you mean a specific place.

Given that your friend was assassinated, perhaps my reworking of the last sentence in the book will meet with your approval. 

I wanted to change a sentence. If you will do a 'find' on the word 'wired,' I think that sentence should be changed to 'Loubie was not sufficiently aroused at that moment...' I think it will read better.

All the best,

Nyanidoc