To Client Jinkazama,<br />&nbsp; Here is the edited version of your report. &nbsp;Please view it in Word Final Show Markup (with Comments shown) to see what changes I've made, as well as the questions I have for you.<br />&nbsp; I noted that the document was written totally in passive voice, but I believe that is appropriate for the technical nature of the report.<br />&nbsp; Most of your wording and grammar are correct, so I have not made a large number of changes.<br />&nbsp; Please let me know if you have any questions. &nbsp;I look forward to working with you further in the future.<br /><br />Sincerely,<br />NTexasEditor