Hello! <br /><br />For this SOP, I focused on arranging the paragraphs and sentences in a way that offers a concise view of your research interests and career experience. I streamlined the essay as well, editing for repetitions and sentences that might be distracting from the more poignant arguments made for the research committee. I left several comments on the side throughout the document either explaining certain edits of offering suggestions for your consideration, so be sure to look out for those. Feel free to message me if you have any questions! Thanks. =)