i see you have the perfect background for this project.&nbsp; please use your expertise to make more concise and to the point and compelling .&nbsp; if i can be shorten a bit that would be awesome.&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; its for a kickstarter campaign.&nbsp;&nbsp; i was told to add my inspiration and passion behind my project.&nbsp; this is what i got.&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; please help!!!!!&nbsp;&nbsp;