Hi, Leo:<br /><br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document, and I hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />It seems as if there are several independent but overlapping sections in the document, so I did some pruning where I thought it was necessary. It is better not to be too repetitive.&nbsp;<br /><br />I wasn't sure if it is a general fundraising&nbsp;letter or a statement to the board of directors. Either way, I've revised the sentences so that you can easily&nbsp;cut and paste according to the context. You did a great job anyway! As always, I just polished. Don't be discouraged&nbsp;by all the red edits. They're just suggestions, in many cases neither better nor worse, just different.<br /><br />Thank you for requesting my help. It's a fantastic cause.&nbsp;<br /><br /><br />Best wishes - George (TypeRighter)<br />I am usually available for editing between 6:00 am and 10:30 pm (EST). If my status says 'unavailable', you can still reach me via Editor World.