Hello, <br /><br />This is an essay I wrote to get into an osteopathic medical school. Doctor of osteopathy (D.O.) is the exact same as a medical doctor (M.D.), except DOs look at the patient as a person with a history and story, rather than just a disease to diagnose. Also, DOs have additional training in O.M.M., where they use their hands and different manevours to help heal the paitent (kind of like a chiropractor, but with intense anatomical and physiological knowledge). <br /><br />I may need help with a stronger conclusion, transition sentences, and ending sentences. Check to see if my verb tense agreement is accurate. I feel my "research" paragraph is not as developed as the other ones. <br /><br />The total character count should be 4500 or less. I tried my best writing with a varied word choice. Could you somehow make this more creatively written? Have fun with this without changing my message. Basically, I want to get across I am different than most pre-medical students because I have a communication background. <br /><br />Thank you,<br />Sonia <br /><br />