Thank you so much. This was great editing work. Above what i expected.I will correct this paper and send back along with a few more pages i have written so that you can get a feel of where my story is going. i do not have good writing skills at all and would like to write an inspiring book about my life. my story is very interesting as i have been through alot.  i may not be going about it the right way but please tell me that. I am learning as i go and i am learning from your corrections. i will try to send tonight but this is a project im trying to perfect. 