Hello! <br /><br />Here's the completed, edited draft. Per your comments, I focused on preserving your voice throughout the narrative, as well as ensuring that the emails were left in their original state. I focused mostly on continuity, reader comprehension, passive voice issues, and ensuring that the anecdotes didn't get too much in the way of the main storyline. I left several comments on the side throughout the document either explaining certain edits or offering suggestions for your consideration. Bear in mind that, as the Table of Contents was custom made on your computer, I couldn't update the page numbers, so that will have to be something you look at. I'm available via the message system, so don't hesitate to message me if you have any questions, need clarification, or want to bounce ideas off of me for future changes. Thanks! =)<br /><br />-EE