Hello,<br /><br />I am applying to medical school and it is required to write a personal statment explaining why you want to become docotr.  This is the essay that I have attached.  Can you please edit for grammatical errors as well as anything else you see fit such as conciseness and clarity. Any comments are welcome. Thank you for your help.<br /><br />I aplogize for the colored background behind the essay.  I could not figure out how to delete it. 