Thank you for asking me to help with your interesting legal memo. I have made a few changes to the grammar as necessary. Regarding the legal cites, as you know the rules are very picky and tricky. Using my Bluebook rules, I have gone over the cites very closely and I believe they are all correct. At the bottom of page 2 you cite Ewumi and Black by name only. The rules allow you to cite a previously-mentioned case by name alone, so I guess it's ok to mention both the cases at once, although I don't think I've seen that before.<br /><br />Good luck with your case.