Dear Laura, thank you for taking so much time and effort with my article. I really appreciated your comments through out and made your recommended changes! It reads SO much better and flows! Thank you. I wanted to take you up on the offer to look at it one more time to make sure you got everything. I added a couple sentences where you made comments to add more information. It is still too long, so anywhere you think I could trim, it would be very helpful to get your feedback there. Thank you again for beting willing to take another look. I hope we can continue to work together as I have articles completed. I will probably turn around a couple articles like this a year and it would be great to have a consistent editor to work with, would that work for you? -Tara