I've included notes explaining&nbsp;most of my edits, but if you have any questions or concerns please send me a message so I can address them&nbsp;directly. A few overarching things I noticed were excessive spaces between sentences (only one space is necessary after a period or other concluding punctuation), the incorrect usage of "from x to y" phrasing (explained in my comments in the text), a tendency to start sentences with numerals (rather than writing the numbers out or rephrasing the sentences), and a lack of consistently defining and using abbreviations throughout the text (for example, "POS"). I hope I provided a five-star editing job for you, and if my work in any way fell short I hope you'll let me know how I can improve.