Urna,<br />&nbsp; Thanks for the opportunity to edit the Introduction/Acknowledgment section of your first book.<br />&nbsp; Please view the uploaded document in Word Final Show Markup mode, with Comments on. &nbsp;I have endeavored to provide smoother wording as well as more appropriate English grammar in several places. &nbsp;In addition, I have provided comments where I think your word/phrase choice is somewhat cruder than it needs to be, and have suggested some alternatives. &nbsp;Of course, it is up to you if you want to keep the piece more edgy in order to grab attention. &nbsp;For my part, I think the replacement wording would keep your book more light and breezy, which I understood to be some of your objectives.<br /><br />Sincerely,<br />NTexasEditor