Hello! This is my Common Application Essay. The prompt is as follows:<br /><strong>"Some students have a background, identity, interest, or talent that is so meaningful they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, then please share your story</strong>."<br /><br />I am looking for this essay to be improved stylistically and to be proofread to have maximum appeal for prospective colleges. Thank you!<br /><br />