Lindsay,<br />&nbsp; Thanks for the opportunity to work with you on your position paper on falls prevention in Oregon.<br />&nbsp; Your document was already in pretty good shape, so I've only made a few wording and grammatical changes, plus provided some consistent formatting in the detailed plan analysis section. &nbsp;I think the flow you came up with works well.<br />&nbsp; Please let me know if you need further guidance about source citation in the bibliography (or whatever form you plan to use for that material).<br /><br />Sincerely,<br />NTexasEditor