<p>Hi!<br /><br />Here's the amended doc. I think you did a great job--there are still many direct quotations, but each institution/journal is different in their expectations of how many are too many.<br />Your sources are fine. You might want to work a bit on injecting your own thoughts into the process. It's not easy, but you are doing well!</p>
<p>Thanks,<br /><br />Laura</p>