Hi Laura, <br /><br />Thank you for&nbsp;your editing!<br />This is the same one you edited but&nbsp;I revised some parts. <br />Can you please proof-read the parts I highlighted? <br />It will be great if you can send it a little faster than the typical due date. <br /><br />Thank you so much. <br /><br />Sincerely, <br /><br />Isabelle &nbsp;