Good afternoon,<br />I'm so happy to be editing for you again - thank you selecting me for another go around!<br /><br />Some of the things I worked on with this edit include:<br />*Passive voice: I tried to ensure that the subjects (or what I call the 'meat') of your sentences came at the beginning. This keeps the document a bit more interesting and exciting to read, and doesn't keep readers waiting for the information they really need.<br />*Some cleaning up of wording, commas, tenses, and small grammatical issues. Not much was major, but most of it makes it a bit more consisteny and user-friendly to read. There are necessary long sentences packed with information, so I worked to make it cleaner.<br />*Parallel Structure: I made sure that all verbs match, so if a list uses verbs they match. For example, they would all say Planning, Implementing, and Establishing instead of Planned, Implementing, and Establishes.<br /><br />As always, your plans are remarkable and this seems like such a necessary and amazing program. Best wishes with it!<br /><br />Ryan