Hi, there:<br /><br />Thank you for your inquiry!<br /><br />For the PDF document you submitted, you should see areas of the document where words have been crossed out (a blue line runs through them). If you click you move your mouse over the crossed-out language, you should see a feedback-note explaining what words should be used in its place. So, for example, in the first two sentences, you wrote, "My name is Belen Torres, a Chicano 23 year old woman already living her dream. Well just at the start." I suggested changing this to: "I never imagined that at 23 years old, I -- Belen Torres, a Chicano woman -- would already be living out my dream. Well, in reality, I know I have only scratched the surface of living out my dream life."<br /><br />Also, in areas where you see a blue triangle, this means that something needs to be inserted there. So, for instance, in the fourth line of the paper, you will see "mostly homeless" with a blue triangle before "homeless." If you place your mouse over this blue trangle, you should see a feedback-note with the word "the" in it. This means I have suggested for the phrase to read: "mostly the homeless."<br /><br />If you see a red line crossing through words, this simply means that I have suggested that you remove those words/letters, etc. Nothing else needs to be put in the place of the crossed-out language in this situation.<br /><br />That is essentially what the markings mean in an edited PDF document. (Note that in the future, you may prefer to send a Microsoft Word document for editing, as the editing marks may be easier for you to follow. However, both PDFs and Word documents work well for editing purposes.) <br /><br />Thank you,<br />MasterEditor<br /><br />