Hello! <br /><br />Per your comments, I did not alter the headings or font styles of the headings and bullets. I focused on consistecy of termiology, eliminating passive voice, and making sure that the sentences were comprehensive within the logic flow of the argument. As with before, I left several comments on the side either explaining certain edits or offering suggestions for your consideration, so be sure to look out for those. Feel free to message me if you have any quesitons, and please don't forget to rate my service! Thanks. =)