Dear Esther21,<br /><br />Thank you for the chance to help you.Attached please find my edited revision of your supervisor's report.In addition to the text itself, I adjusted the spacing slightly for readability. I left the numbering of paragraphs as per your original.If this is a problem, please let me know and I will change it.<br /><br />Kind regards,<br />BklynEditor<br /><br /><br /><br />