Hello, Brian,<br /><br />Your biography is beautifully written--I cleaned it up a bit and changed usage here and there to create a better flow and lessen repetition. I know you are hindered by a word count limit, but the only thing I might suggest to make the piece more creative is to add a brief anecdote on one of the school events or a particularly memorable interaction with a student. You could make room for this by consolidating info about your current degree program or the specifics of your current position. Just a thought! If you do make changes and you'd like me to take another look, I'd be happy to do so--just submit the updated doc through the message system.<br /><br />Thank you, and best of luck to you.<br /><br />Laura Kenney