Hi Selina:<br /><br />Thanks for the note. &nbsp;I have already finished editing the paper but need to go through it again to make sure that I didn't miss anything. &nbsp;Aside from some repetition towards the end, it is in good shape. &nbsp;I have marked the sentences that are used more than once, so that you can either take one out or reword them. &nbsp;It's your call.<br /><br />I don't need the reference list to edit the paper, but if you need it put into APA format, I can do that.<br /><br />Thanks for letting me know about the format. &nbsp;I hadn't known what you were using, because there were some inconsistencies in the formatting. &nbsp;Should I apply APA just to the citations, or to the layout of the paper too? &nbsp;If I do, it is going to look quite different. &nbsp;At the very least, I will need to double-space it and replace the block paragraphs with indented ones.<br /><br />Thanks again,<br />Clarity<br /><br />