Hi<br />Requesting a thorough editing & proof-reading with sentence reframing, use of alternate words.<br />My target audience is history blog readers ( my site: <a href="http://www.lighteddream.wordpress.com">www.lighteddream.wordpress.com</a>), and would like every sentence/word of mine to sparkle in the article!<br /><br />Many thanks<br />regards<br />D Das