<p>Hi, Dr. Joo - Here is your ms.&nbsp; As you know, I've taken a lot of time with it, given its importance and complexity.&nbsp; I've taken into&nbsp;account your comments about your goals with this paper, and have also looked at the journal in question to be&nbsp;sure the&nbsp;paper fits their definition of a "review."&nbsp; Although the ms.&nbsp;will be&nbsp;in pretty good shape once you've considered my edits and revised it, my recommendation would be to do your revisions/rewrites, accepting or rejecting edits, and then submit the ms. for a second edit to maximize&nbsp;the likelihood of acceptance in this journal.&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;At this point I don't feel I can do any more editing until the various issues in the current edit are resolved.&nbsp; Again, the ms. can be considered&nbsp;ready for submission without a second edit, but I believe a second edit would improve your chances.&nbsp;&nbsp; As always, it's a privilege working with you.&nbsp; RebeccaTDE</p>