Hello George,&nbsp;<br /><br /><br />As always, thank you for your editing! Also, I really appreciate your advice.<br /> So, I went over the edited version really carefully, and I came up with a phrase that is hard to understand:<br />I sought refuge in my courses and in books, and "soon reading worked its alchemy". <br />In this sentence, what does the phrase "soon reading worked its alchemy" refer to?<br /><br />I have another question. Just asking your opinion.&nbsp;<br />Do you think I should include the student organization experience? <br />I was and am a vice president of a student organization which builds network between students and senior community. Also, I'm a member of honors society in the department of the political science, which is a national organization. And I had some tutor experiences... <br />But I did not included this because I'm not sure how to connect this into my field of interest and plans for future career. I will definitely include the honor society one, but for others, I'm not sure. Maybe I can connect my experiences with effective communication skills I guess?<br /><br />I'm sorry to&nbsp;keep asking questions, but I would really appreciate if you could let me know about your opinion about this.&nbsp;<br /><br />Again, I truly&nbsp;appreciate your time and your help.&nbsp;<br /><br />Best,&nbsp;<br />Jaeyoung