Andrew,<br /><br />This will be hard to believe after all that has happened with my computer(s) and the internet, but I am unable to edit your doc in pdf editing software. It turns into a jumbled mess. So, I converted it to MS word, and then conveted it back to a pdf. You will be able to see my editing marks and notes, but you will be unable to change them. <br /><br />I love your sample. It puts me in mind of Albert Finney! I am sending you a message with the Word version, too, in case you have the capability to open it. <br /><br />Pdf files are fine for forms, documents that are imbedded with images, like brochures, and the like. For a text file, Word or similar word processing software is really the way to go. <br /><br />Again, I appreciate your patience and I hope we can figure out a way to work on your book.<br /><br />Thanks,<br /><br />Laura