<p>Hi. I was hoping that you would be able to fix awkward sentences, lengthy sentences, and wordiness. Can you make it more concise?&nbsp;<br /><br />Also, if you can polish up on the syntax, grammar, and diction I would appreciate it.&nbsp;<br /><br />And feel free to fix up anything else you notice. I'm sure your eyes will be able to notice more errors than my eyes can --given your experience. It needs a good amount of fixing, though. You'll see it all once you read it.<br /><br />Much appreciated, TextPro!<br /><br /><br /></p>