Hello Lesley,<br />Your document is attached with my suggested edits in red using Word's track changes feature. I left a couple comments highlighted in yellow. Your writing is clear and easy to read and understand, and there were minimal typos. I paid particular attention to formatting to conform to APA guidelines throughout and in the references. I&nbsp;left your highlights on the document. Also, I don't think the way you had age ranges typed out was wrong. I just think it helps with the flow to write the ages like I did. But, if you want to return to the way you had it, it's easy to just reject that particular change as you go along. Please let me know if you have any questions or concerns with any of my edits. Thank you so much for choosing me to be your editor. I really appreciate it. I hope you have a great week!<br /><br /><br />