Thank you.

In the kind of report you're doing, I would first suggest keeping the paragraphs short, as you're conveying a lot of information about the client's needs and current setup in terms of technology. Shorter paragraphs make the transitions easier (I call it the "white space transition," meaning that the extra spacing between shorter paragraphs signals a transition to the reader.

Second, I think writing actively is better than passively. To write, "it is recommended that, after a long review, that so and so is preferable to what and what," is mind-numbing. Your purpose is to make recommendations, so state them directly: "I recommend that the client start using XYZ technology." JJ