Please let me know if you have any questions or concerns. There was a lot of formatting to be corrected, but I also tried to pay attention to the text (and inserted the missing Works Cited page for you, which you should revise so it corresponds to the text you actually used). Your overall essay could use better quote integration--every time you insert a quote from the text, you should follow that quote with an explanation of why that particular combination of words is significant to the argument you're trying to make. Your conclusion should be more than summary. I can't write your paper for you, but hopefully my suggestions (and formatting) help. Please let me know if you have questions or concerns.<br /><br />Best,<br />Tori