Thank you for your submission! I focused here on making your argument as clear and as credible as possible (which sometimes required removing superfluous information or rephrasing certain sentences). I left additional comments within the document regarding areas that need clearity or expansion. <br /><br />Your argument could be stronger in the introduction. I suggest referencing the specific aspects you will discuss (natural resources, tourism opportunity, etc.) as methods to create economic independence, and be sure to reiterate those points throughout the document so your reader doesn't get lost.<br /><br />Please let me know if you have anyquestions!