Hi:<br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document and hope that you find the edits helpful. If you have any q<br />questions, please send me a message via Editor World.<br /><br />I enjoyed reading your document and making what improvements I could. It was already of a very high standard. I made only a few changes to the dialogue parts, thinking that what people say should be left more or less unaltered. &nbsp;<br /><br />Before sharing this document, please consider running Document Inspector. To do this, click File/Info/Check For Issues/Inspect Document on the Microsoft Word menu bar.<br /><br />Microsoft Word displays tracked changes and comments by default. <br /><br />To review the edited document without showing tracked changes, click Review on the Microsoft Word menu bar. Then select Final: Show Markup and click the dropdown arrow. Choose Final. To show tracked changes again, click Final: Show Markup.<br /><br /><br />Best wishes - TypeRighter (aka George)