Hello Arnie,<br /><br />&nbsp;As you may have figured out by now, English is my second language. I appreciate your work. Your edit made me see some&nbsp;of the mistakes that I need to work on. I need to work on those and I need to keep reading a lot. These stories keep coming to my head so I'll continue writing. When I feel that I've improved my writing style, you'll be the first editor on my list. Thanks again. Hope to write to you soon!