Dear Mr. NYANIDOC,<br /><br />I really appreciate your help yesterday.&nbsp;<br /><br /><br />This time, I want to focus only on the intro part. (The rest is 99.9% what you've modified for me already.)<br /><br />Since writing this kind of letter is an unsual thing, <br /><br /><span style="text-decoration: underline;"><em>I have no idea how&nbsp;to get the professors actually read it and send a reply.</em></span> <br /><br />This requires delicacy and perfect understanding of American culture, and I need your help.<br /><br /><br />1. Therefore, I hope to modify this&nbsp;intro part to be longer and as <span style="text-decoration: underline;"><em>Humble, Courteous, and Appealing</em></span> as possible.<span style="text-decoration: underline;"><br /><br /></span>2. At the same time, I want it have the Nuance to <span style="text-decoration: underline;"><em>have the recipients to be Induced to Answer</em></span>&nbsp;my email.<span style="text-decoration: underline;"><br /><br /></span>3. Also, could you&nbsp;provide me with <span style="text-decoration: underline;"><em>any alternatives, advice, or ideas?</em></span><br /><br /><br /><br />Please help me once more.<br /><br />Thank you so much.<br /><br /><br /><br />Very sincerely,<br /><br />Hangsan Ahn