Good afternoon,<br />Thanks so much for selecting me to edit your work.<br /><br />Your questions are answered thoughtfully and it's clear you have a deep passion and depth of knowledge of these topics.&nbsp;<br /><br />My biggest point to consider would be repetition - you used the term "health disparities" 10 times; "underserved populations" was also used 10 times. While these are clearly important ideas in your answers, it feels very repetitive. I would encourage you to look through those sentences and see if either some can be removed for redundancy (I removed a couple and made some suggestions in the comments) or reworded just to spice it up a bit.<br /><br />The school would be crazy not to admit you! I wish you the best of luck. Please keep me in mind for any future editing needs.<br /><br />Cordially,<br />Ryan