<p class="p1"><b>Thank you for the opportunity to edit your work. Please let me know if you have any concerns, and I will address them asap. <br /><br />Couple of notes: First, I found the manuscript generally well written, with very few actual errors. I understood what you are talking about.&nbsp;<br /><br />I did fix a few things based on the suggested style in the blue type, however. Plus some other missives.<br /><br />I did not see where to cut the copy so there would less pages, since, to me, all the information seemed relevant. Though I did try to make some of the sentences shorter.<br /><br />At the beginning, I thought you made a type errors when you wrote "otters" - I thought you meant "others". You might want to clarify that you are referring to amimals, so someone else doesn't think &nbsp;it is a mistake.<br /><br />Otherwise, &nbsp;you should be good to go!<br /><br /><br /><br />Best of luck with your project.</b></p>