Hi, Debra<br /><br />Great editing, thank you. I was anxious about this part.<br /><br />Will I ever introject the subtleties of English into my stubborn head?? hehe Have, had... in, on, at... what hell!<br /><br />As for Him and Her... I considered your advice... but couldn't give it up, so I diminished it considerably and italicized it, to erase any possible confusion or thought that I made a "mistake."<br /><br />Attached my comments and doubts about Part 4.<br /><br />Wow, we're almost there... never thought this day would come.<br /><br />Thanks again.<br /><br />Best,<br /><br />Noga