Hi,&nbsp;Samanta:<br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document and hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />I liked your essay, but made lots of changes, so that you can pick and choose what to use and what to reject. With track changes, that's easy to do, or you can simply copy and paste parts into a new document. Please proofread carefully, though. Even after several read-throughs, I sometimes miss typos.<br /><br />MS Word includes track changes by default. Before sharing this document, please consider running Document Inspector. To do this, click File/Info/Check For Issues/Inspect Document on the Microsoft Word menu bar.<br /><br />When you open a document that contains track changes, the document appears in the Final Showing Markup view to show that the document contains edits.<br />(PC) To review the edited document without markups, click Review on the Microsoft Word menu bar. Then select Final: Show Markup and click the drop-down arrow. Choose Final. To show the document with the edits, click Final: Show Markup.<br />(Mac) On the Review tab, under Tracking, click the Track Changes switch to turn on / off track changes. Choose No Markup from drop-down box in Show Markup.<br /><br />Best wishes - George<br />I am usually available for editing between 6:00 am and 10:30 pm. If my status is set to unavailable, you can still reach me via Editor World.