Here is an example on how he edited from what you edited for my previous document. You do not need to edit it, but just wanted to show you why he is upset with me.<br />I don't know what to do. I'm confused... I liked your editing and felt it was ok, but then when I recieve criticism form someone else fomr your edited version, I'm frustrated too; it;s nothing to do with you, it's just different opinion from others' editing styles?? maybe. Tell me what were wrong in the previous edited version?<br /><br />Very brief abstract is attached for you to look at with tract changes (you do not need to do anything; it is to show you what it looks like)<br /><br />