Thanks for your inquiry. The version you have is fully edited. I did add some punctuation in a couple of areas, most notably the sentence beginning, "A global pattern ...". I incorporated it with the following "It is a novel property...", making it a compound-complex sentence. This called for the use of a colon to separate the two. In addition, commas were added to offset "nor must it be reified" as part of that sentence. If it would be helpful I can forward you a version without the track changes (I sometimes have difficulty reading through those elements as well). Just let me know if you would like this, and I can send it to you by noon.