The paper would benefit from further edits. You need an updated Works Cited page, which I cannot do for you.&nbsp;The current revisions correct grammatical issues and include suggestions on how to improve the logic of your argument with further evidence, explanation, and citation. I double-spaced it and corrected your formatting. You really should learn how to use formatting tools in Microsoft Word, rather than inserting spaces via the space bar and tab.<br /><br />I also recommend that you cut your introduction and expand your body paragraphs. Your paragraphs need to be better organized, with an introductory-type sentence that lets your reader know the purpose of each paragraph, along with an articulation of your arguments in each paragraph and relevant supporting information, and transitions between each paragraph. Your concluding paragraph should not bring up new arguments. Your paper should not contradict itself. You should not give evidence without citing your source for that evidence immediately. Your sources should have authors and page numbers (or, if they are all online sources without page numbers, they should at least have the name of an entity responsible for the information).<br /><br />Hopefully this is helpful. I recommend you hire another editor to look over your revised version of this paper before turning&nbsp;it in for your class.