Hello again,
Thank you for the sample edit.  I have a few questions and concerns.  The term "lived experiences" can not be changed as it is the approved title used in approved research questions.  I know it may sound strange but it is the terminology used in phenomenological research.  The next comment I want to address is the use of CAA in my paper.  Due to confidentality issues, I have to leave the agency name as CAA.  If I supply you a list of items that can not be changed, would you be willing to work with that?  The dissertation is approximately 135 pages - about 30,000 words.  I have approval from my committee chair and am preparing for final review from other members, but want a nice clean version before I submit the dissertation to them.  Finally, I have one more question...Do you check the reference pages?  I have about 100 references.  Please advise.  Thank you for your time.
~Amanda