Hello-<br /><br />I am looking for you to proofread and correct grammatical and verb tense errors (line edit) as well as content.&nbsp; Although I am a first time writer, I want to improve my craft and am looking for someone to meticulously review the document. And of course, provide honest and reliable feedback.&nbsp; Does it flow? Do I need more dialogue? Does it have substance?<br /><br /><br />Your feedback would be welcomed and in turn I will learn from this experience.<br /><br />Thank you,