Dear EditorionChief,

Regarding the document, actually I am a translator who translated the document from Japanese to English. After your editing, I have submitted the document to my client. Then, the client asked another proofreader to edit the document, not knowing the document was already proofreaded.

Could you please review the sentence that proofreader has corrected?

Your sentence:
However, there may be cases such alteration is not possible. If that is the case, then the disclosure of such contents may become impossible.

Edited:
However, there may be cases where such alteration is not possible. If that is the case, then the disclosure of such contents may become impossible.

Your sentence:
	Nisshin Industrial Ltd. has sole discretion to determine if a certain product is in the industry category that it considers to be subject to the commission, which product the commission is applied to, and the amount of the commission.

Edited:
Nisshin Industrial Ltd. has sole discretion to determine if a certain product is in the industry category that it considers to be subject to the commission, to which the product the commission is applied to, and the amount of the commission.

Your sentence:
Note: In case Nisshin Industrial Ltd. determines in its sole discretion that the certain item is not in the extent of the Technical Agreement, Nisshin Industrial Ltd. need not provide any support even if the problem is left unsolved.

Edited:
Note: In the case where Nisshin Industrial Ltd. determines in its sole discretion that the certain item is not in the extent of the Technical Agreement, Nisshin Industrial Ltd. need not provide any support even if the problem is left unsolved.

Your sentence:
Payment has to be made in full by the time Nisshin Industrial Ltd. specifies. Payment currency has to be in either yen, dollars, or euros. This payment policy above applies to all the parties we deal with without any exception.

Edited:
Payment has to be made in full by the time Nisshin Industrial Ltd. specifies. The Payment currency has to be in either yen, dollars, or euros. This payment policy above applies to all the parties we deal with without any exception.

Your sentence:
In case the Receiving Party cannot manufacture or modify its molds as needed, Nisshin Industrial Ltd. may consider providing molds manufactured in Japan. If that is the case, the actual cost to Nisshin Industrial Ltd. for the molds has to be covered by the Receiving Party.

Your sentence:
Also, note that if there is a problem in the resin materials, Nisshin Industrial Ltd. is not responsible for any consequences arise from such a problem.


Edited:
Nisshin Industrial Ltd. is not responsible for any of such consequences. Also, note that if there is a problem in the resin materials, Nisshin Industrial Ltd. is not responsible for any consequences arising from such a problem.

EditorinChief, I don't intend to be nitpicking. But since I got such a response from my client, I have to ask you if your editing was right. Or it may be just a matter of variation of expressions.

Please let me know.

Thank you!

Best regards,

Yasutsugu Kodaira