Hi there,<br />Thanks so much for selecting me to edit this document for you.<br /><br />Changes were made based on primarily grammatical and context purposes. Many of the edits were made to allow for a consistent tone, to eliminate tense shifts, and for clarity sake. Some sentences were a bit awkwardly worded, so removing certain words, rearranging, or changing certain syntax allowed for a better understanding. Most of the other changes, as you will see, are purely for grammar and comprehension.<br /><br />With that said, this is clearly a well-researched document and I commend you for the time you obviously spent on it. Very well done!<br /><br />Please keep me in mind for any future editing needs you might have.<br /><br />Thanks,<br />Ryan