Hi, there:<br /><br />I edited the document in the areas of grammar, sentence structure, flow, punctuation, clarity, consistency, spelling, detail, word choice, and organization. Overall, I think the paragraphs transitioned well, so the flow was good. Also, I definitely would keep the second paragraph since it really introduces the exchange program and thus provides critical information that sets up the rest of the paper. It has been a pleasure!<br /><br />Thank you!<br />MasterEditor