Hi, Di:<br /><br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document, and I hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />I wouldn't worry about your letter at all. You did a very good job. I simply polished it. I would be happy to send it as a letter of my own, always a good test when you edit somebody else's work.<br /><br />Best wishes - George (TypeRighter)<br /><br />I am usually available for editing between 6:00 am and 10:30 pm (EST). If my status says 'unavailable', you can still reach me via Editor World.