Hi:<br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document and hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send me a message via Editor World.<br /><br />I wasn't sure just how much editing you wanted, so I've been thorough. Please proofread the document carefully.<br /><br />I combined the sections you requested and made several changes&nbsp;elsewhere that I thought added to the document's flow and clarity.&nbsp;<br /><br />Before sharing this document, please consider running Document Inspector. To do this, click File/Info/Check For Issues/Inspect Document on the Microsoft Word menu bar.<br /><br />Microsoft Word displays tracked changes and comments by default. <br /><br />To review the edited document without showing tracked changes, click Review on the Microsoft Word menu bar. Then select Final: Show Markup and click the dropdown arrow. Choose Final. To show tracked changes again, click Final: Show Markup.<br /><br />Best wishes - TypeRighter (aka George)