Hi:<br /><br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document and hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />Although I've proofread the document several times, please proofread it carefully. I don't think there are any typos, but typos are pesky things; they can appear quite unexpectedly.<br /><br />Incidentally, congratulations on a first-rate paper! I don't claim to have understood it all but evidence of your hard work is there on every page. I wish more my editing requests were of equal quality.<br /><br />Best wishes - George