Hi Tim,<br /><br />I've included edits and commentary on a basic content level, which hopefully helps you get your blog post out there in a timely manner. It does seem a bit long for a blog post if you're trying to optimize for search engines,&nbsp;but it seems like the main thing you're going for is a personal tone that displays your professional perspective--and as far as those goals go, you seem to be on track.<br /><br />Please let me know if you have further questions or concerns about the edits I've provided. I want to provide five-star editing services for every client, so if there is anything less-than-stellar about my editing please&nbsp;send me a message so I can remedy any shortcomings.<br /><br />Best,<br />Tori