I'm very sorry to hear about&nbsp;the&nbsp;difficulties with your professor. Overall, this paper seems well written and addresses each of the competencies listed in the assignment directions. It does feel drier without the inclusion of your personal experiences, but if that's what the professor wants... I made subtle changes to your discussion of the movie in order to distance the writing from your opinion and your experience. We'll see whether the professor is happier this time around. Good luck!