Hi, there:<br /><br />Usually, we send a version of the document with tracked changes so that you can go back and approve/reject the changes as you wish. However, as you requested, I went on and approved the changes for you, removed the comments, and turned off Track Changes, so I have attached a clean version of the document. Regarding your request concerning pages 15&amp;16, I technically cannot create new content for you. However, I did remove the individual year subheadings on these pages and made sure that the text in this area flowed appropriately and made sense together academically, so the paragraphs should transition well now. (Note that you will need to include exact page numbers with the direct quotations written on pages 9, 16, 17, and 23, which I cannot do for you.)<br /><br />Thank you,<br />MasterEditor