Hello, <br /><br />I greatly appreciate your help with my paper. Ive made the suggestions you advised and changed a few things. If you have time could you take a look at my paper, now that its ready?<br /><br />I will send it as an attachment and before I submit the final, i will of course add a title page plus refernce. <br /><br />Thank you so much!<br /><br />Lindsay Bowen