Khalid,<br />&nbsp; Here is the edited version of your dissertation Chapter 2 (Introduction). &nbsp;Please &nbsp;view in Word in the Final Show Markup mode, with Comments turned on.<br />&nbsp; I've assumed you will be using APA format for your dissertation, and therefore have included two spaces after each sentence. &nbsp;If you are planning to use MPA format instead, then revert to havng only a single space after each sentence.<br />&nbsp; Most of the sentences are either passive voice or use the third person as subject. &nbsp;You may want to consider making these statements more active in voice.<br /><br />&nbsp; I trust you will appreciate the editing improvements, and I look forward to working with you on your overall dissertation proposal.<br /><br />Sincerely,<br />NTexasEditor