It is my first time submitting a journal (International Journal of Public Health), so it would be great if you could provide me with any tips (if you have any).<br /><br />Please check grammars, word flows, formality, and so on.&nbsp;<br /><br />Also, if you have any better idea about title... please feel free to let me know. I have several options.. which would fit the most? <br />My current title is "The Role of Risk Perception in Acceptance of Public Health Service: Focus on Water Fluoridation in South Korea", but other options are...&nbsp;<br /><br />Risk Perception and Acceptability of Water Fluoridation: in the case of Incheon, South Korea<br />Perception of Water Fluoridation and its acceptance: the case of South Korea<br /><br />Please feel free to provide me with any comments. Thank you!&nbsp;<br /><br />Jenny Chun&nbsp;<br /><br />