Dear Calvin,<br /><br />Thank you for replying to my email and telling me about your assignment. I used to teach 10th grade English, so it helped a lot to know your grade level. I made comments in the margins that I hope will guide you as you write other academic papers.<br /><br />I had to convert your pdf document into Word. In doing so, formatting was lost, so I reset to one inch margins all around and double spaced. There are a few areas where I noted that you need to add source citations. When doing so, please look at the corrected citations in your paper. Per MLA, you do not use "p." and for online journals, you do not need to include the "www." in the in-text citation. Are you familiar with OWL&mdash;Purdue University's OnLine Writing Lab: <a>https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/747/02/</a>? It is very useful as a quick reference quide.<br /><br />I wish you the best with your studies.<br /><br />Regards,<br />WriteEditor