Good morning, Ali:<br /><br />I've reduced your intro to 720 words, which you were quite right to request. It's a much tighter document now. I didn't re-edit the Discussion, though. I assumed it was ok.<br /><br />I apologize once again for forgetting your original instructions.<br /><br />If you think there's room for further editing, or have any questions, please let me know.&nbsp;<br /><br />Best wishes - George