<p>Hi,<br /> <br /> I'm a engineering project manager who will be applying to the MBA program at SUNY Empire State College.<br /> <br /> The MBA application requires two essays and a resume'.  I'm submitting the second of the three documents.  <br /> <br /> Through phone conversation with the director of the MBA program, I learned that the admission board is looking for applicant essays that would score a 5 or 6 on the Analytical Writing Section of the GRE.  I've uploaded the pdf document that shows essay examples with scores from 1 to 6.  That way, if you wish, you can review the "language" the admission office is looking for on both essays with a score of 5 to 6.<br /> <br /> I feel that your background is the best fit to edit my documents.  I appreaciate all your help and work in advance!<br /> <br /> Thanks!<br /> <br /> James Warrington</p>