Hello. I just wanted to let you know that you will be receiving my edits on the first half of your document shortly from the operators of Editor World. It was just better from a system standpoint to have them pass it along.

Please note that I've left a decent number of comments. Many of the comments are intended as things for you to think about - optional, if you will. As you can imagine it's hard to get "inside your head" and always want to respect there may be a reason why things are written a certain way. At the same time, I want to be as honest as I can about wording that might not make sense to me.

I am open to fielding any questions you might have about my edits; I am on track to get the balance of the edits to you by COB Sunday.