Hi!<br /><br />A very thorough and impressive piece of work. I made changes to improve clarity and flow, and I highlighted sections that need attention, especially in the reference section. I am dying to know the results of your study :)<br /><br />Please feel free to contact me with any questions. If you would like me to take a quick second look after changes are incorporated, plese submit with a note to that effect through the message system so you won't get charged.<br /><br />Thank you,<br /><br />Laura Kenney<br /><br />