Hi, Ivan:<br /><br />Welcome back!<br /><br />It's very windy here in Port Hope, 100 km due east of Toronto. I think you're in Boston, so your weather might be similar.<br /><br />More excellent dialogue. I feel guilty making any changes but -- who knows? -- maybe some of the edits help.<br /><br />For some reason, track changes stopped working on my computer, so I'll need to reinstall MS office.<br />I apologize, but I think you'll know where the changes are. I put the edited paragraph&nbsp;under your original.<br /><br />Whatever you do, keep writing!<br /><br />Best wishes - George