This is an interesting, persuasively-argued study of an important topic. &nbsp;I made a few changes in grammar, sentence structure, and word usage. &nbsp;However, the overall structure of the piece is solid.<br /><br />I hope to have the chance to work with you again. &nbsp;If you like what I've done with this paper, please consider rating me. &nbsp;Every good rating helps.<br /><br />Regards,<br /><br />J.G.