Thank you for your note. I thought the paper flowed well. You started with the history, which is natural, then moved on to the current situation. The section about the organization of SNU was the only one in which you used quotes, but the quotes described the school from several students' perspective (an inside view, as it were).&nbsp;<br /><br />The only parts that struck me as curious were the Key Points and Recommendations sections that both came AFTER the Conclusion. Usually, when I get to the Conclusion, I expect Notes and/or References to follow and then the paper ends. You could consider moving Key Points and Recommendations BEFORE the Conclusion. That, as I look at the paper today, would be my only additional suggestion.&nbsp;