Hi, Kibea:<br /><br />I have uploaded your edited document, and I hope that you find the suggestions helpful. If you have any questions, please send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br />Thank you for doing all the hard work. I just had to finesse here and there. Although I was careful not to change the content, please proofread the edited document carefully. <br /><br />Best wishes - George (TypeRighter)<br />I am usually available for editing between 6:00 am and 10:30 pm (EST). If my status is set to 'unavailable', you can still reach me via Editor World.<br /><br />From Sep 11 to Sep 23, I will be in Europe and my status will be set to 'unavailable.' I should be able to receive and reply to messages from Editor World, Wi-Fi permitting, but I&rsquo;ll be unavailable for editing requests for that period. I will try to reply to any messages you send, though.<br /><br /><br /><br /><br />