Hi,<br /><br />As you can probably tell from the title this is my statement of interest for a State Department internship. If you have the time I was hoping you could look it over. I'm not too worried about grammar or syntax but more worried about the flow of the essay.<br /><br />It's due July 1st but I'd like to keep looking it over before then, so if you could return this to me in a couple days that would be great.<br /><br />Thank you!<br /><br />David