Hi, Deanna:<br /><br />Who would have thought that I'd be an expert on Louis Vuitton?<br />Well, you're the expert, but I know a lot more than I used to.<br />I think the edits are self-explanatory. Please proofread carefully, though. I sometimes miss words.<br />I wouldn't try to read the Final: Show markup option. Just use Final.<br />I always edit far more than I need to, knowing that the original author can pick and choose.<br /><br />Here's my usual boilerplate in case you need it.<br /><br />MS Word includes tracked changes by default. Before sharing this document, please consider running Document Inspector. To do this, click File/Info/Check For Issues/Inspect Document on the Microsoft Word menu bar.<br /><br />When you open a document that contains tracked changes, the document appears in the Final Showing Markup view to show that the document contains tracked changes. To review the edited document without showing tracked changes, click Review on the Microsoft Word menu bar. Then select Final: Show Markup and click the drop-down arrow. Choose Final. To show tracked changes again, click Final: Show Markup.<br /><br />You did a great job! I hope it's now even greater.<br />&nbsp;<br />Best wishes - TypeRighter (aka George)<br />I am usually available for editing between 6:00 am and 10:30 pm. If my status is set to unavailable, you can still send a message to me via Editor World.<br /><br /><br />