Thank you so much for your review--I am so happy you are happy! Here's some answers for now:<br />1. That's just me making comments--sorry! Like "I hate it when that happens!" As for the "okay that is enough" comment, I mentioned in the comment before that yashani should give more details, but, when I read the part where he says the stuff about you are going to have to tell me the truth it makes sense that he chooses to stay with her for now. Does that make sense?<br />2. I thought maybe it was intentional because they went to the play. Lady M hallucinates the blood of her dead husband on her hands--she's always trying to wash it off but can't.<br />3. Okay--you can go edit by edit using accept or reject change in the track changes menu under the review tab. All I mean is that, if you make additions according to suggestions or like what I did, or reject it, do so without hitting the accept changes button until after I look at the doc again. It's confusing, but basically I'm asking you to leave the edits and whatever changes you add in red (or blue, or however they show up) so I can locate them when I read through again. Let me know if you need any help!<br />4.oh! I just thought it was a typo:) leave it cack if that's good slang.<br /><br />:)