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<p>I am an academic philosopher in the area of ethics. This text sample is taken out of one of my articles, which I intend to publish.&nbsp;&nbsp;After intense reading I have noticed that those papers, which are written sophisticatedly and with a subtle tone, are favoured over those that use direct and sharp assertions, like mine. I would like to adopt a writing attitude which won't rise antagonism in readers' mind but rather curiosity and sympathy.&nbsp;</p>
<p>One more thing. My vocabulary is not as rich as that of a native speaker of English. I suspect that this fact added to the simplicity of my sentences amounts to an impression of a superficial piece which readers tend to rejectI am well aware that pursuing such a new writing path may cause my papers look more obscure, but I am willing to sacrifice clarity in favour of publication success.&nbsp;</p>
<p><span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; font-size: medium;">Strawson's writing, makes a good example of indirect, entangled, lengthy and sophisticated tone. Could you alter my writing to this direction?</span></p>
<p><span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; font-size: medium;">Best whishes</span></p>
<p><span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; font-size: medium;">Robert</span></p>
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