Hi there,<br />Thanks for choosing me to edit this paper.<br /><br />Very well research document! There are&nbsp;a LOT of numbers, which can get a bit tricky in writing them correctly without sounding super repetitive. Be sure they all line up and make sense where they're written.&nbsp;<br /><br />Your edits mainly consisted of removing articles, keeping a consistent tense, and working to make it as user-friendly and readable as possible, while clearing up some confusion with the multiple numbers.&nbsp;<br /><br />You have a ton of information and clearly have done your research. I commend you for that amount of work - it surely must be taxing!<br /><br />Have a great weekend,<br />Ryan