I told Patti about the refund, and she asks that you contact her.<br /><br />I did want to say that frankly, I would be wary of your committee's comments. In addition to my own skills, I use all of the correction functions whenever I edit, so I can assure you that the grammar, syntax, and style were edited rigorously and well.<br /><br />As I said, many people, professors included, are woefully poor writers. For example, my own PhD advisor, who is acknowledged as one of the most brilliant theoretical psychologists of the 20th century, could not spell to save his life, and we students had to edit all of his work.<br /><br />Best, <br /><br />Nyanidoc