dear editor,<br /><br />I was working on your previous edited document, but I want to revised some of your edited sentences as follows. <br /><br />Can you please review and see if there are any errors?<br /><br />p.s. The reason I wanted to change is because of the contents that convey more precisely. <br /><br />So please check the following&nbsp;few sentences and see if there are any&nbsp;grammatical errors.<br /><br />Look forward to hearing from you SOON.<br /><br />thanks in advance,<br /><br />
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<li>The _ will: 1) promote teachers' education in the engineering grand challenges.</li>
<li>Evaluation and monitoring will be conducted by the _ (internal) and the __ (external).</li>
<li>They can develop answers to challenging questions related to 14 grand challenges in engineering (e.g., Evaluation of contaminants in water and risk analysis, Bio-inspired materials science applied in infrastructure, and energy in buildings;</li>
<li>Research projects designed to cultivate teachers' knowledge of engineering concepts and practices that will be translated into high school-based activities.</li>
<li>The M-DWS&rsquo;s water-use efficiency section has a record in developing an outreach plan to educate school children on the importance and benefits of water conservation in collaboration with the County&rsquo;s Government Information Center (GIC) that involves a campaign with outreach activities.<sup>22</sup> As such, the M-DWS is committed to sustainability and environmental protection through public education and outreach activities as the key components to their success.</li>
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