Dear Editor in Chief: 

Thank you so much for your prompt response and edited sample, overall I like your work, you did correct quite a few grammar and punctuation issues. I also review your editors profile as well, as a seasoned editor with enriched experience, hopefully we could work on the technical level, or the collaborative level of editing, besides grammar, the word eloquence and sentence flow may also need to get some attention. 

1.Word eloquence and sentence flow: As I am planning to publish the book soon, therefore, it is the final round of editing which is very important to make it a high quality book, if the experienced editor like you could really work hard to help editing through perfection, that would really make difference. To put simply, you could be as PICKY as possible. 

2.Communicating and interaction: As it may take some interaction and iteractively communicate back and forth for the work,  I am wondering whether we could communicate through EMAIL or phone if its necessary, besides Editor Worlds messaging system, as the system seems to have limitation to save the original message I send over to you.  

3.Turn around Time and Cost: Three weeks turn around time is fine, as I mentioned above, quality is also very critical, and I understand it takes time. As a new author, therere a lot of uncertainties on the road to publishing, cost effectiveness is also important, thats why I am contacting Editor World for getting better quality/cost ratio. There are about 110,000 words in my manuscript, and I found the Editor World promotion code (20% off) in some social website, is it effective for your service, or whats the best rate you may offer to the new author like me. Indeed, I am looking for the LONG TERM PARTNER, with the plan to publish a series of books about digitalization soon. Therefore, your support would be really appreciate it. 

4.I will also send you my book synopsis for review in the next message, hopefully you like the book content and make some comment. As if you like it, you may have more passion to perfect it. 

Again, thanks for your effort, look forward to getting more feedback from you.   

Warm Regards,
Pearl