Hi! Thanks for the opportunity to edit your book. I learned a lot!! I am even considering getting up an hour earlier every morning. I function way better in the morning!!<br /><br />Quite a few thoughts on the book, though. I think it needs more work before it can be published. All the bones are in place and you have a good angle, plus some good anecdotes to share with the reader about your own personal motivation, which is indeed inspiring.&nbsp;<br /><br />The biggest issue is that at times the text begins to ramble and information starts to be repeated. This is especially apparent in the last ten&nbsp;or so pages, where you aren't really telling the reader things you haven't already discussed. You talk about your worst day, which is good -- but you might consider moving that to the front of the book when you give some background about your upbringing.&nbsp;<br /><br />I added some thoughts in the text as I went along, which should be addressed by you. For one, you talk about sleep and why it's important, but you don't tell the reader how to achieve that sleep. The reader will definitely want to know!&nbsp;<br /><br />The exercises should also be described (briefly) or include photos or&nbsp;illustrations.&nbsp;<br /><br />I did not do much formatting, as that is something the paginator will take care of when it's time to publish - though I did try to make things more consistent.&nbsp;<br /><br />Feel free to ask me any questions as you revise this, and I will get back to you as soon as possible.&nbsp;<br /><br />Thanks again!&nbsp;