Hi, Booni:<br /><br />I've read over&nbsp;your&nbsp;personal statement several times and I think it reads very well. Of course, you're the final judge about that, but if you have any questions, please let me know. We want to make it perfect.<br /><br />The only part I changed was the part about oil prices. You never know who will review your application, and it's probably wise not to be political. I agree with your sentiments, but better safe than sorry. I can't think of anything else. I believe you know how track changes works, but here's what you need to know just in case:<br /><br />When you open a document containing tracked changes, it appears in the Final Show Mark-up view. To see the document without mark-ups, do the following: <br />For PCs, on the Microsoft Word (2010) menu bar, click Review. Then select Final: Show Mark-up (All Mark-up) and click the drop-down arrow. Choose Final.<br />For Word 2013, click Review, then from the All Mark-up drop-down box, select No Mark-up.<br />For Macs, on the Review tab, under Tracking, click Track Changes to turn on or off. Choose No Mark-up from the drop-down menu in Show Mark-up.<br /><br />Also:<br />INSPECT DOCUMENT<br />MS Word includes tracked changes by default. Before sharing this document, please consider running Inspect Document. To do this, click File/Info/Check for Issues/Inspect Document on the Microsoft Word menu bar.<br /><br />I wish you every success with your application. I doubt if there are any better-qualified applicants.<br /><br /><br />Best wishes - George<br /><br /><br /><br />&nbsp;