Hello. Thanks for the opportunity. I know I'm past the 2/2 deadline and you've likely moved on, but I wanted to provide my edits and observations nevertheless. Is the audience the gaming press, wholesalers or end users? If you are trying to improve pick-up, I think you need to play up what's "new" about the shirts -- the additional characters. Start off and play up "new and improved" -- the shirts are back and better than ever for fans of the incredibly popular video game. Best of luck to you!