Hello, NYANDOC.<br />Luckily, I became&nbsp;a Fulbright scholar thanks to&nbsp;your editing my statement of purpose before.<br />Now I have to revise it and hope you to help me again.<br />I put memos in the file... and if you may, can you reflect them when editing the file?<br />I hope you edit the current version as a more academic style of writng.<br />Thanks in advance:)