Hello, dear editor,&nbsp;<br /><br />This sample is part of the introduction for the literature review in my dissertation. My research area is education. More specific, it is English as a Second Language. The topic of my study is to see how peer feedback and collaborative writing tasks help language learners with their language learning and writing skills development.&nbsp;<br /><br />I would like to have some help on overall cohension, sentence structure, grammar and word chooses. The issues that I'm aware of in my writing is sometime I wrote very wordiness and fragmented.&nbsp;<br /><br />Some background information that might help you to locate the issues in my writing is I'm a ESL speaker. My first language is Chinese. Since we don't have articles in Chinese, I've always have troubles with the use of articles.&nbsp;<br /><br /><br />Thank you so much!&nbsp;<br /><br />JiangS