Hello, <br /><br />I am applying to Rush Medical College, but this is not an admissions essay. The school wants me to answer the following prompt: <strong><strong><br /><br /></strong></strong><p><strong><em>Based on these experiences, please describe what you have learned through your involvement, the attributes you would bring to Rush Medical College, and the impact you would have on the greater Rush Community (2000 characters). </em></strong></p><strong><b><br /></b></strong>I have attached a document which contains my response to the aforementioned prompt (the prompt is also in bold at the top of the document and the word count was not included in the total word count as it is not to be edited). That being said, there are a few things I need addressed you, the editor. <br /><br />1) I am way over the character limit on this document (2000 characters w/spaces). If you could please help me decrease the character count, while retaining the meaning of the content, that would be great. If you can eliminate redundancy, <strong>restructure complex sentences into more simple ones</strong>, etc... to make the document more concise, that would be ideal. Overall, I would like you to remove anything that you think does not directly ANSWER the above prompt. Also, I would like you to remove anything that you think does not add anything productive to the response and is just "fluff". <br /><br />2) I want to ensure my grammar and word choice is perfect. <br /><br />Thank you very much!