Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your very interesting paper. They are spin doctors extraordinaire in a schizophrenic industry.<br /><br />I thought the arguments came across very well, no problems there.<br /><br />I forgot what you said about the references and edited those as well. I've noted where there is missing info either w/ highlighting or a comment.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc