Thanks so much. Can we change the last sentence, "People who distort religions benefit from these distortions."? In my version:<br /><br />Thus, religious abusers benefit from these distortions.<br /><br />I want to keep "Thus" or something&nbsp;with similar meaning since it is the last sentence and like a conclusion. Please if it doesn't sound good replace it by a better word.<br /><br />Also, instead of "religious abusers" I want to use another term, like "religious bandit", by which I mean someone who robs people's things like a bandit , but religiously. Does it sound good to you? or weird? Any other options?<br /><br />Thanks,<br />Ramin<br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br />I was confused and I thought you might be a native Japanese who knows English good, not a native American who knows Japanese good. Just as a friendly suggestion, that might be good to clarify this in your profile, as you did in your message.&nbsp;<br /><br /><br /><br /><br />