Hi George,<br />I'm sorry to bother you again. Just a quick question. The last paragraph is convoluted and repeats some of the ideas in the text, so I decided to end with just "It's like using a boat to get across the prairie. It makes no sense but there is somethign facsinating about trying so hard."&nbsp;<br />I was a tiny bit unsure about the correctness of ending with "trying so hard." (without continuing to explain "trying so hard to do this and that...")<br />Not that it has to be perfectly correct-- we are talking about poetry and the limits of language, after all. <br /><br />Still, do you think it's okay?<br /><br />Thank you!&nbsp;