Hello EditWrite!<br /><br />I have good some good news, &nbsp;I made the revisions your indicated and sent it off last night to my chair. &nbsp;As a result, she&nbsp;was able to read it thoroughly and sent back positive comments earlier today. So I am doubly excited to have you share in this process with me.<br /><br />I am now attaching chapters 1-4 for your review and ask for you to help to once again help me to:<br />1.eliminate repetitious and redundant information, <br />2. focus on flow and sensible formating<br />3. elimate all grammar and punctuation problems that are reoccuring in my drafts. &nbsp;<br />4. and of course help with meeting APA standards. &nbsp;<br /><br />Thank you for maintaining a table of content for this purpose as well.<br /><br />Please feel free to contact me, if you have any questions, and I hope you will still be able to complete this process by Decemeber 4, as you initially estimated.<br /><br />Any support you can provide will be appreciated.<br /><br />Lisa