<p>Hi Laura,&nbsp;<br /> <br /> First of all I am so pleased with your editing! Thanks you so much and I will most definitely be using you when you're available.&nbsp;<br /> <br /> I've attached my story with two highlighted areas. The first expounding on Nathans failed attempts to hunt the wolves and the second highlighted area is a brief addition to the end, which explains the phenomena of the constant flies.&nbsp;<br /> <br /> My idea behind the flies was to use them as a hint to the reader that something was off about Beth by associating the presence of flies with decomposition, where with a food source the few flies trapped in the cabin would multiply and thrive.&nbsp;<br /> <br /> I also considered mentioning an annoying odor from Nathan's POV as another hint.&nbsp;<br /> <br /> My ultimate hope here is to evoke to the reader that Nora's delusion brought on by so much loss is both tolerated and catered to by Nathan fueled by his incestral feelings for his Aunt and his revealed guilt. &nbsp;<br /> <br /> Let me know how much it would cost to have you explore and edit my changes mentioned and add any further comments based on my explanation.</p>