Hi,<br />This is actually really well written and informative. I found very few/minor issues in the manuscript.&nbsp; One thin gI am not sure about, do you say "in " or "on" when talking about women in confinement?&nbsp; My gut reaction is to use "in" and I changed a few but you have read the literature so if it is actually "on" please do not accept those changes.<br /><br />Good luck with publication, this is a solid paper!<br /><br />Amy