This is my first draft of my first children's book. I would like your help to finalize the rhyme scheme and choose expressive vocabulary that illustrates my ideas and speaks charactor into Kapota. He is a proud character at first, but then becomes insecure. He feels gratitude at the end. His teacher should be patient and wise. Please help me avoid cliches that undermine my originality. I am in the process of hiring an illustrator but the images have not yet come in.&nbsp;