Hello, Jimmy:
I would be delighted to work with you on your novel(s) and I'm pleased that Patti suggested that you contact me. I've worked on all kinds of writing: fiction, nonfiction, scholarly, poetry, you name it, and my clients have invariably been satisfied. So either submit the first chapter for me to edit or send a few pages so I can give you a sample of my work. I'm sure you'll be pleased and I look forward to a good relationship.