<p>Hi Laura,</p>
<p>Here&rsquo;s two pieces I wrote which reflect a change in the course of the story. Angie <em>and&nbsp;</em>Sally are going to Cleveland, instead of just Angie. In &ldquo;Cabin Fervor&rdquo; (hunting trip scene), Sally&rsquo;s husband, Harvey, tells Frankie about finding Sally&rsquo;s diary and Frankie ends up heading for Cleveland as well.&nbsp;</p>
<p>I hope I can get the &ldquo;Cabin Fervor&rdquo; piece to you soon. It shows that Frankie is not only an angry person, but that he is a bumbler at being angry as well. (&ldquo;he can&rsquo;t even get angry right!&rdquo;). Later on, he proves his inability to get angry right, by shooting Jimmy with a BB-gun pistol he grabbed in haste, instead of his Glock .45. &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;</p>
<p>TOC Chapter 8 <b>revised</b>:</p>
<p>8.<b>The Morning-After Card</b></p>
<p>*&nbsp; Happy BirthdayEW 61693</p>
<p>*&nbsp; <i>Dear Diary</i>EW 66216</p>
<p>*&nbsp; <b>Lost in Check-Out</b>(Not edited by EW) Word Count: <b>1,961</b></p>
<p><b>*&nbsp; Max&rsquo;s Girls</b>(Not edited by EW) Word Count: <b>1,553</b></p>
<p>*&nbsp;<i> Happy Hunting Elmer Fudd</i>EW 63013</p>
<p>*&nbsp; <i>We&rsquo;re Off to Kill the Wizard</i>EW 66463</p>
<p><b>*&nbsp; Cabin Fervor</b>(Not edited by EW) Word Count: <b>7,811</b></p>
<p>*&nbsp; The Morning-After CardEW 63181</p>
<p>I hope all is well.&nbsp;</p>
<p>Thanks,&nbsp;Dan</p>