Hi, Vita:<br /><br /><br />
<div>I read your paper over very carefully (several times) and made what changes I could. As you know it's highly technical and intended for a specialist audience, so I didn't dumb it down. It's too good for that. I think you are too modest to say you worry about whether it makes sense or not. It's first-rate and hard to improve.<br /><br />I didn't add any DOIs. If you want them, please let me know and I'll look them up. Some profs want them, others don't.&nbsp;</div>
<div>Please proofread carefully. I didn't want to accidentally change your meaning. I'm sure I didn't, but I'm married, so I don't always say what I mean.</div>
<div>If you have any questions, please send a message to me. I'm usually available, even tonight when I might go to the pub for an hour (but I'll have my laptop with me).</div>
<div>Best wishes - George</div>