Wanted to return this draft a few days early in case you have any questions.&nbsp;<br /><br />This was more of a proof than an edit, as the extent of your research efforts is clear: remarkable work.<br /><br />I did look up the Ten Kings to have the scrolls in mind while reading the text. I might have actually seen a version during my 15 years in Japan, during which I visited many museums.<br /><br />The edits are minor with the goal of text preservation rather than restructuring. I also fixed a few mechanical items that don't merit tracking (mismatched apostrophes and quotation marks; only editors worry about this stuff).<br /><br />I enjoyed reading your text and appreciate the scholarship you have shown.<br /><br />Thank you.<br /><br />