I just noticed I missed one comma....Is this the back and forth process? You edit, I check and review and send back my small revisions? Do you make suggestions if I am doing something that you see could be refined? Thre are several 'fake' news articles in the story...I will need help on correct form. Content and breaks...do you assist me?...Sorry, I ask so many questions, but I just want to make sure we are on the same page and I do not overstep my expectations...<br />Thanks Arnie, I think we are going to be a very good team...i have a lot of connections and I really want to make this a published book...Your help is key!