Hi, Maya:<br /><br />I've downloaded your document and will start first thing tomorrow. If I have any questions, I'll be in touch. This sounds like a major paper, so I think it's a good idea to tackle it in stages, as you're doing. I'll keep your profs remarks on a note on my desktop (in case I forget)..&nbsp;<br /><br />It looks like you're using MLA style. If you prefer to use another style, please let me know. It's not difficult to change.<br /><br />At 40 pages, you'll also probably want a table of contents. I'll set one up for you, so it will automatically update as you progress. <br /><br />It can't be easy for you, juggling family and school. I'm sure we'll do a great job, together.<br /><br />Best wishes - George<br /><br /><br />