Thank you for the opportunity to read and edit your letters. As you will see, I have made numerous suggestions for ways to simplify them. Although the letters would be excellent in support of a position in the field, for example, I am very much afraid that you will lose the attention of people who are critical to the success of his application because they will have absolutely no understanding of, or interest in, what you are talking about. Lose their attention, compromise his application.<br /><br />If you could take a moment to rate my work, I would appreciate it very much.<br /><br />Best Regards,<br /><br />Nyanidoc