{"coupon":"","discount":"","doc_name":"Campus Trust Signature Project","doc_id":66959,"editorId":"454","email":"gdgairns@hollandcollege.com","message":"Hi, I have recieved this draft back from my professior, and he has made a lot of comments about my writing. He says the Content is ok, just the writing needs to improve.&nbsp;<br \/><br \/>This is what he wrote for improvments,<br \/><br \/><em>The main issue (again) is writing. I have done my best to provide constructive feedback and suggestions for improving the overall quality of the project. As you will see, there is still work to be done. Please take a look and make the necessary changes. I would also suggest getting someone close who can provide a second set of eyes to review the language. As mentioned previously, content is OK but it&rsquo;s about how you communicate it and the need to develop the report into a coherent research project. Please take a deeper look and review everything well before sending it back.<br \/><br \/><br \/><\/em>Please let me know if you have any questions, and I will get back to you right away.&nbsp;<br \/>And if it is possible, I need to have it back to him by Friday.<br \/><br \/>Thank you very very much,<br \/>Greg<br \/><br \/><br \/>","price_select":"2","temp_doc_name":"upload_570e77ee38e2f9.93996543.docx","word_count":"9605","subtotal":192.1,"total_amt":192.1,"firstName":"Greg","lastName":"Gairns","lastfour":"2118","exp":"0218","address":"27 Louis Lane","city":"North Wiltshire","zip":"C0A1Y0","state":"Charlottetown","country":"Canada","transactionReference":"8313044453"}