{"coupon":"","discount":"","doc_name":"Plenty of Fish","doc_id":68508,"editorId":"2750","email":"IVANHVELINOV@YAHOO.COM","message":"Hi George, I am submitting this one again not because your first edits weren't good, but because I know how important the part about smoking and drinking was to them. I want to make sure it's 100% clear that neither of them has ever done that, and that's what they pride themselves on. I removed the part about drinking in college because it may make \"pride ourselves on that\" ambiguous. My doubts are mainly about the repetition of \"neitehr of us\". Also, although gramatically (and even semantically) past perfect in \"neither of us HAD ever\" is a better option, I wonder if \"HAS\" is not more natural, even if incorrect. It probably isn't. I know you removed the \"mid-20 year-olds\" because it's a bit messy, but I would like to keep it now that the \"college\" part is missing. \"people in their mid-20s\" is probably more correct, although we're talking conversational style here. Thank you! &nbsp;&nbsp;","price_select":"2","temp_doc_name":"upload_578cda558058f4.00684132.docx","word_count":"151","subtotal":3.02,"total_amt":3.02,"transactionReference":"PAY-2DH16043CL358473MK6GNUXI"}