{"coupon":"","discount":"","doc_name":"2nd Admission Essay","doc_id":64309,"editorId":"541","email":"ernestopineda@gmail.com","message":"<p>Thank you for reviewing my first admission essay yesterday. I am working on it again today, and will use your services again for a second revision of it.&nbsp;<br \/>For now, here is the 2nd admission essay. I have copied the question the admissions committee wants me to answer at the beginning of the document (so you can contextualize my answer), and my response follows it. This essay is stronger in my message and vision, but I still need for your to help me make it even more impactful and consice (I have exeeded the maximun word count of 600, by 35 more words. I have drafted 635 words).&nbsp;<br \/><br \/>I look forward to hearing back from you, and would appreciate any other comments\/suggestions you might have, in case my response doesn't really answer the admission committee prompt as clearly as I think I have.&nbsp;<\/p>\r\n<p>Sincerely,&nbsp;<\/p>\r\n<p>Ernesto<\/p>","price_select":"2","temp_doc_name":"upload_56291907b38600.59654471.docx","word_count":"675","subtotal":13.5,"total_amt":13.5,"firstName":"Salvador","lastName":"Pineda","lastfour":"7232","exp":"1017","address":"11418 Rockville Pike Apt 2308","city":"North Bethesda","zip":"20852","state":"MD ","country":"United States","transactionReference":"7642931675"}