{"coupon":"","discount":"","doc_name":"Joy","doc_id":68341,"editorId":"2750","email":"IVANHVELINOV@YAHOO.COM","message":"Good morning, George. It looks like it might rain on and off all &nbsp;day so I'll try to spend the whole day just writing. In this one, I was going to use only half of the story (the second version) but I don't think it's 100% clear that they are sisters, so I added a prelude. Still, I would love for you to take out any segment that you think is unnecessary (\"she's always been my baby\", \"when I was eight\" (or \"I thought I was the other mom) although I think they probably all have a place (without \"I thought I was the other mom\" the reader may perceive that the older sister was replacing a missing or inadequate mom.<br \/><br \/>I added \"I was stunned\" myself because the older sister actually said, 'I was like...\" which implies being speechless and stunned, I think. :)&nbsp;<br \/><br \/>Thank you so much!","price_select":"2","temp_doc_name":"upload_577f904d5b0773.44721272.docx","word_count":"101","subtotal":2.02,"total_amt":2.02,"transactionReference":"PAY-9A652303P63650434K57ZAWY"}