{"coupon":"","discount":"","doc_name":"Lost in Check-Out","doc_id":66869,"editorId":"454","email":"danallen@twcny.rr.com","message":"<p>Hi Laura,<\/p>\r\n<p>Here&rsquo;s two pieces I wrote which reflect a change in the course of the story. Angie <em>and&nbsp;<\/em>Sally are going to Cleveland, instead of just Angie. In &ldquo;Cabin Fervor&rdquo; (hunting trip scene), Sally&rsquo;s husband, Harvey, tells Frankie about finding Sally&rsquo;s diary and Frankie ends up heading for Cleveland as well.&nbsp;<\/p>\r\n<p>I hope I can get the &ldquo;Cabin Fervor&rdquo; piece to you soon. It shows that Frankie is not only an angry person, but that he is a bumbler at being angry as well. (&ldquo;he can&rsquo;t even get angry right!&rdquo;). Later on, he proves his inability to get angry right, by shooting Jimmy with a BB-gun pistol he grabbed in haste, instead of his Glock .45. &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;<\/p>\r\n<p>TOC Chapter 8 <b>revised<\/b>:<\/p>\r\n<p>8.<b>The Morning-After Card<\/b><\/p>\r\n<p>*&nbsp; Happy BirthdayEW 61693<\/p>\r\n<p>*&nbsp; <i>Dear Diary<\/i>EW 66216<\/p>\r\n<p>*&nbsp; <b>Lost in Check-Out<\/b>(Not edited by EW) Word Count: <b>1,961<\/b><\/p>\r\n<p><b>*&nbsp; Max&rsquo;s Girls<\/b>(Not edited by EW) Word Count: <b>1,553<\/b><\/p>\r\n<p>*&nbsp;<i> Happy Hunting Elmer Fudd<\/i>EW 63013<\/p>\r\n<p>*&nbsp; <i>We&rsquo;re Off to Kill the Wizard<\/i>EW 66463<\/p>\r\n<p><b>*&nbsp; Cabin Fervor<\/b>(Not edited by EW) Word Count: <b>7,811<\/b><\/p>\r\n<p>*&nbsp; The Morning-After CardEW 63181<\/p>\r\n<p>I hope all is well.&nbsp;<\/p>\r\n<p>Thanks,&nbsp;Dan<\/p>","price_select":"3","temp_doc_name":"upload_57064d97bbdad0.07726423.docx","word_count":"3517","subtotal":59.79,"total_amt":59.79,"transactionReference":"PAY-9ES233723V6667824K4DE3MI"}