{"coupon":"","discount":"","doc_name":"Demographics and Entrepreneurship","doc_id":66651,"editorId":"144","email":"jackie_pku@163.com","message":"Dear Editor,<br \/><br \/>I uploaded a file &ldquo;FSEW_66641_1.docx&rdquo; yesterday and I like all of your corrections. Thank you very much. So please find the attached our draft. There are several points:<br \/><br \/>1.&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;Please pay more attention to &ldquo;Section 1. Introduction&rdquo; and &ldquo;Section 5. Empirical Implementation&rdquo;. <br \/>2.&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;The FIRST page of &ldquo;Section 1. Introduction&rdquo; is what I uploaded yesterday. I have incorporated your corrections in the attached draft. So you can skip that page (page #3) this time. <br \/>3.&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;I feel that one of the main problems with the current draft is that sometime we repeated the same meaning in sentences that are closed to each other. In some cases, the repeat makes the arguments clearer, but in other cases, it is just a different way of saying the same thing. If you find the latter case, please help us delete it. <br \/>4.&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;I left two comments in the draft. The first one is where I would like to ask for your suggestion. The second one is a wiring prblem that I would like to check with my coauthor. You can ignore the second comment. <br \/><br \/>Thank you very much for all your help!<br \/><br \/>Best regards,<br \/>Jackie<br \/><br \/>","price_select":"3","temp_doc_name":"upload_56f3367c03f938.80270662.doc","word_count":"20539","subtotal":349.16,"total_amt":349.16,"firstName":"Hui","lastName":"Wang","lastfour":"7371","exp":"0224","address":"Room 366, Guanghua's building #2, Peking University","city":"Beijing","zip":"100871","state":"Beijing","country":"China","transactionReference":"8098547484"}