{"coupon":"","discount":"","doc_name":"personal statement","doc_id":68081,"editorId":"454","email":"ab69251@gmail.com","message":"<strong><strong><\/strong><\/strong>\r\n<p>So I&rsquo;m currently applying to medical school and the last obstacle I have is my personal statement. I just completed it but I&rsquo;m just not a great writer and it needs to be edited\/rewritten in some places. Feel free to butcher it if you think it needs it. I wrote a couple things in parenthesis that I believe specifically need addressing. I definitely don&rsquo;t have the best vocabulary and want it to sound a little more upscale. I&rsquo;m not totally sure on a theme. I want to put some emphasis on how I want to form meaningful relationships and because of this I want to go into primary care. I feel like I&rsquo;m a fairly compassionate and empathetic person but I don&rsquo;t think I addressed that enough. It is a little difficult in the essay because I only have about 100 shadowing hours in primary care and have much more experience in the emergency room, where many of the patients we never see again. I just definitely don&rsquo;t want it to sound too generic. I have read many personal statements that pretty much just say &ldquo;I want to go to medical school because I&rsquo;m good at science and want to help people.&rdquo; I don&rsquo;t want mine to say that. I am trying to keep it under 5000 characters (including spaces). If it could be finished by 11:00 am US Eastern Time tomorrow that would be great. Thanks for the help.&nbsp;<\/p>","price_select":"1","temp_doc_name":"upload_576962f18bc1f0.18030969.docx","word_count":"897","subtotal":24.22,"total_amt":24.22,"firstName":"Austin","lastName":"Brown","lastfour":"8408","exp":"1\/17","address":"26 Ashley Oaks Trail","city":"Rome","zip":"30165","state":"GA","country":"United States","transactionReference":"8505649519"}