{"coupon":"","discount":"","doc_name":"Writing Sample_MA_Ahn","doc_id":65456,"editorId":"2750","email":"paul.h.l.ahn@gmail.com","message":"Hello, sir!<br \/>Thank you very much for your help, last time!<br \/><br \/>This is my writing sample with some&nbsp;detailed logic, but not that hard to understand.<br \/><br \/><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><strong>Most of all, the school requires it to be less than 500 words.<\/strong><\/span>&nbsp;I have already shortened it from 700 words,<br \/>and I am asking for your help.&nbsp;<br \/><br \/>So, I hope you could, please, help me<br \/>1. shorten&nbsp;it to come between <span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><strong>450 -&nbsp;500 words, while not altering the logic or main contents<\/strong><\/span> (now it is slightly over 600 words)<br \/>2. connect each sentence with more <span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><strong>smooth \"linking words\"<\/strong><\/span><br \/>3. make it sound <span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><strong>natural<br \/><br \/><\/strong><\/span>Thank you very much!<br \/>Hangsan Ahn<br \/><br \/>","price_select":"8","temp_doc_name":"upload_568946a49a82e7.59203164.docx","word_count":"603","subtotal":25.93,"total_amt":25.93,"firstName":"Hyelin","lastName":"Park","lastfour":"5048","exp":"0319","address":"202, 156-2, Bang-i-2-dong, Seocho-gu, Seoul, Korea","city":"Seoul","zip":"05629","state":"Seoul","country":"Korea, Republic of (South Korea)","transactionReference":"7854145981"}