{"coupon":"","discount":"","doc_name":"ENG Version_Help me! Must be made coherent, succin","doc_id":65419,"editorId":"3236","email":"paul.h.l.ahn@gmail.com","message":"Hello!<br \/><br \/>I just completed a&nbsp;rough translation of <strong>my academic SOP<\/strong> from Korean into English.<br \/>I am really in need of your help to (please) make it coherent, clear, succinct, and professional.<br \/><br \/>It was fairly difficult for me to convey the nuances of my original text. I am afraid some meanings are lost or blurred.<br \/>Nonetheless, I believe your help to could significantly enhance it.<br \/><br \/>Could you please..<br \/>1. <span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><strong>(MOST IMPORTANT) Make it as succinct as possible<\/strong>?<\/span> You can take away any part that seems redundant or unimportant.<br \/>&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;You can erase such parts it without thinking twice.<br \/>2. Modify it sound<strong>&nbsp;beautiful<\/strong> <strong>and streamlined<\/strong>?<br \/>3. <strong>Suggest any alternative expressions&nbsp;with real examples?<\/strong><br \/><br \/>Again, <strong>any additional modification<\/strong>&nbsp;is always welcome. I trust your editing skills.<br \/>Please just make it coherent, clear, succinct, and professional.<br \/><br \/>Thank you very much! I really appreciate your help.<br \/><br \/>Very sincerely,<br \/>Hangsan Ahn","price_select":"10","temp_doc_name":"upload_56855ad1221397.22912549.docx","word_count":"1504","subtotal":55.65,"total_amt":55.65,"firstName":"Hangsan","lastName":"Ahn","lastfour":"5048","exp":"0319","address":"202, 156-2, Bang-i-2-dong, Seocho-gu, Seoul, Korea","city":"Seoul","zip":"05629","state":"Seoul","country":"Korea, Republic of (South Korea)","transactionReference":"7846945769"}