{"coupon":"EditorEinstein","discount":3.129,"doc_name":"Personal statement for residency application","doc_id":68785,"editorId":"3889","email":"andy.liu.chian@gmail.com","message":"Dear EditorEinstein,<br \/><br \/>Attached is my personal statement for my residency application. I've gone over many drafts, and (hopefully) I'm towards the end of this process. I'm meeting with my advisor later this week to go over my personal statement again, and just want to have someone read it beforehand.&nbsp;<br \/><br \/>Three major points I aim to touch on in my personal statement - 1) how I can empathize with families 2) my ability to connect with children, and 3) my scientific curiosity in medicine drives me to provide better care - they are paragraph 2, 3, and 4 respectively. Intro is an anecdote I hope to draw my reader's immediate attention, and conclusion brings everything together. Please check my flow and transition and let me know&nbsp;if I could make it more&nbsp;captivating.<br \/><br \/>One challenge I have is to be concise. As of right now, the personal statement is a little too long. I'm trying to cut it down to 800. If you see anything that's just redundant, verbose or fluffy but does not actually contain any substance, please help me delete it and reconstruct the sentences\/paragraphs.&nbsp;<br \/><br \/>Thank you very much!<br \/>Andy","price_select":"2","temp_doc_name":"upload_57a7c7fc82a3b6.81326705.docx","word_count":"1043","subtotal":20.86,"total_amt":17.73,"firstName":"Andy","lastName":"Liu","lastfour":"5110","exp":"1118","address":"163 Centennial Court","city":"Burlington","zip":"05401","state":"Vermont","country":"United States","transactionReference":"20107033479"}