{"coupon":"","discount":"","doc_name":"SOP_Stanford_Comm PhD_Ahn_to be revised by TEXTPRO","doc_id":64914,"editorId":"65","email":"paul.h.l.ahn@gmail.com","message":"How are you doing, sir?<br \/><br \/>First of all, I should&nbsp;thank you in advance for your help. <br \/>(I never knew there was this kind of correction service until today.)<br \/><br \/>I am looking forward to receiving a lot of help.<br \/>The below are my primary request (1), important question (2), and additional&nbsp;requests for your free advice (3 and 4).<br \/><br \/><br \/><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><strong>1. Most of all, please make my SOP as \"elegant\", and \"coherent\" as possible. (Thank you!)<\/strong><\/span><br \/><br \/><strong>2. Should I change it to 1.5 spacing? Maybe my SOP is&nbsp;too wordy. <\/strong><strong>I just don't know what to do with this problem.<\/strong><br \/><br \/>3. My undergraduate school (Hankuk University of Foreign Studies) is largely unknown internationally. Therefore I&nbsp;wanted to mention and emphasize my career at Hyundai Motors,&nbsp;and my work experiences with the Nielsen Company, Seoul National University, and IDEO Tim Brown.&nbsp;Am I on the right track? <span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">What would you say to me concerning this?<\/span><br \/><br \/>4. Long story short, I feel I have an Achilles heel which is <span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">my first undergraduate school (Pusan National University economics major)<span>&nbsp;<\/span>GPA of&nbsp;2.68\/4.5 for two years<\/span>. So <span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">I thought I had to mention something to explain this, but what should I do?<\/span><br \/><br \/>&nbsp; &nbsp; (The full story is that, after the two years at Pusan National University, I dropped out of there as my military service was also over, and started my undergraduate study again at Hankuk University of Foreign Studies, and&nbsp;graduated with the BA Summa Cum Laude (4.27\/4.5).&nbsp;<br \/><br \/>&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;I did put some words that might&nbsp;cover that weakness in the SOP, for example, \"<span class=\"apple-style-span\"><span lang=\"EN-US\">probably most strongly since my turning point toward learning from&nbsp;the military discharge nine years ago.\" Also, I put \"... Lastly, I had an unusual turnaround toward learning: When I was almost&nbsp;permanently&nbsp;disabled from an injury during my military service, I asked myself, 'What is the one thing you would do for the rest of your life?' And I answered, 'I want to study and write.' Within two years I got dramatically&nbsp;recovered and left the dream of becoming a&nbsp;guitarist&nbsp;dedicating myself to learning.\"&nbsp;in another section of the online application form. You can see I am stuck with this problem. So please help me.<br \/><\/span><\/span>&nbsp;<br \/><br \/><br \/><br \/>Again, please feel free to modify it in the way you want, and provide me with any advice since you are an expert in this field.&nbsp;<br \/>Thank you very much!<br \/><br \/>Sincerely,<br \/>Hangsan Ahn","price_select":"1","temp_doc_name":"upload_5659bd9ea45e80.46083677.docx","word_count":"1324","subtotal":35.75,"total_amt":35.75,"firstName":"Hangsan","lastName":"Ahn","lastfour":"2666","exp":"0720","address":"202, 156-2, Bang-i-2-dong, Seocho-gu, Seoul, Korea","city":"Seoul","zip":"05629","state":"Seoul","country":"Korea, Republic of (South Korea)","transactionReference":"0"}