{"coupon":"","discount":"","doc_name":"(plz) make it more succinct or sound gentle","doc_id":64988,"editorId":"3236","email":"paul.h.l.ahn@gmail.com","message":"Hello, sir!<br \/>This is an urgent one. Please help me.<br \/><br \/>1. For the number 1, YOU CAN CUT AWAY AS MUCH AS YOU CAN 1. All I need is brevity.<br \/>2. For&nbsp;the number 2 should explain why my GPA was terribly low. I was going to be a guitarist. This should explain that.<br \/>3. For the number 3, the original writing felt too bold or \"against the US\" which I never meant. Please make it sound more gentle, but still clear<br \/><br \/>Thank you very very much!","price_select":"10","temp_doc_name":"upload_565dc3a91e9436.75113880.docx","word_count":"1814","subtotal":67.12,"total_amt":67.12,"firstName":"Hangsan","lastName":"Ahn","lastfour":"8885","exp":"0720","address":"202, 156-2, Bang-i-2-dong, Seocho-gu, Seoul, Korea","city":"Seoul","zip":"05629","state":"Seoul","country":"Korea, Republic of (South Korea)","transactionReference":"7758169173"}