{"coupon":"","discount":"","doc_name":"Personal Statement  (graduate school application","doc_id":65163,"editorId":"144","email":"dkdud4u@gmail.com","message":"Nice to meet you!<br \/>I am a graduateschool applicant..and I have a problem with my Personal statement.<br \/>I want to make it look&nbsp;good in style and connections.<br \/>Also I would make it shorter than this(within 1000words, if possible.)<br \/>Most of all, I want to persuade readers.....<br \/>Please also refer to the instruction from this school, below.<br \/>Thank you for helping me, and have a good day!<br \/>if you have any questions,.. please send me an email through <a href=\"mailto:dkdud4u@gmail.com\">dkdud4u@gmail.com<\/a><br \/><br \/>\r\n<p><strong>Personal Achievements\/Contributions Statement<\/strong> UC Santa Barbara is interested in a diverse and inclusive graduate student population. Please describe any aspects of your personal background, accomplishments, or achievements that you feel are important in evaluating your application for graduate study. For example, please describe if you have experienced economic challenges in achieving higher education, such as being financially responsible for family members or dependents, having to work significant hours during undergraduate schooling or coming from a family background of limited income. Please describe if you have any unusual or varied life experiences that might contribute to the diversity of the graduate group, such as fluency in other languages, experience living in bicultural communities, academic research interests focusing on cultural, societal, or educational problems as they affect underserved segments of society, or evidence of an intention to use the graduate degree toward serving disadvantaged individuals or populations.<\/p>","price_select":"1","temp_doc_name":"upload_566924a1c752a8.90702909.docx","word_count":"1130","subtotal":30.51,"total_amt":30.51,"firstName":"Ah Young","lastName":"Kim","lastfour":"1413","exp":"0817","address":"1-203, Mapo-daero 19-gil, Mapo-gu","city":"Seoul","zip":"KS013","state":"SEOUL","country":"Korea, Republic of (South Korea)","transactionReference":"7787304339"}