{"coupon":"","discount":"","doc_name":"Legacy Paper 2nd draft","doc_id":66328,"editorId":"2750","email":"tiggeressj@aol.com","message":"Good morning George,&nbsp;<br \/><br \/>This season flu\/cold made my youngest daughter sick twice. It is little difficult for me to add some sections while she was crying for me constantly. However, I was able to finish it. (I apologize if I made to many errors.)&nbsp;<br \/><br \/>Here are professors' comments.<br \/><br \/>*&nbsp;Go through your essay and for each goal change the language from&nbsp; &ldquo;I would&rdquo; to &ldquo;I will&rdquo; &ndash; and make sure you&rsquo;ve set up an &ldquo;experiment&rdquo; for yourself to put into place during the weeks leading up to the end of the trimester. Here you might create a journaling practice for the next several weeks where you note strong emotions, your reaction and write up a reappraisal.&nbsp;<br \/><br \/>*&nbsp;What specific experiments can you put in place with respect to your daughters and your husband?&nbsp;<br \/><br \/>*Can you create a specific experiment for this goal? What actions might you take to build a stronger relationship with yourself?<br \/><br \/>*\r\n<p>(1)&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; In the sections of the paper where you identify specific goals change the language from &ldquo;I would &hellip;.&rdquo; to &ldquo;I will&hellip;.&rdquo; and name specific actions you will take during the next few weeks to move a bit closer to your desired future. I&rsquo;ve given a couple of suggestions, but haven&rsquo;t made notes on each paragraph.<\/p>\r\n<p>(2)&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Include one or two outside references to short articles or online posts that aren&rsquo;t on the syllabus. This will move your paper squarely into the A range. Perhaps something that relates to your daughters?<\/p>\r\n<br \/>Thank you always!&nbsp;<br \/>\r\n<div>&nbsp;<\/div>","price_select":"1","temp_doc_name":"upload_56d6bc4b631a47.09013317.docx","word_count":"2324","subtotal":62.75,"total_amt":62.75,"transactionReference":"PAY-0C993380J0549723TK3LLZHI"}