{"coupon":"","discount":"","doc_name":"Viv L.-PS","doc_id":67859,"editorId":"2750","email":"vivlee0513@gmail.com","message":"Hey George,<br \/><br \/>It's me again!<br \/><br \/>I had a phone appointment with my advisor to go over my personal statement two days ago, and he did not like it at all.<br \/><br \/>He believes that my writing was too \"listy\". He thinks that I explained well why I pursue a career in medicine, but does not show who I am as a person.<br \/><br \/>So, I wrote another one. I think this one is more emotional and less&nbsp;of&nbsp;experiences being explained.&nbsp;<br \/><br \/>I will have a list of extracurricular activities as a section of my application, so I tried to talk more about my personality and experiences before college.&nbsp;<br \/><br \/>Please feel free to be critical of the content. Also, please fix any grammatical errors. <br \/><br \/>The word limit is 830. It will be nice if you can trim it down just a bit to 800.&nbsp;<br \/><br \/>Thank you!<br \/><br \/>Best,<br \/><br \/>Viv","price_select":"2","temp_doc_name":"upload_575b6ea1483498.65416224.docx","word_count":"823","subtotal":16.46,"total_amt":16.46,"firstName":"Vivian","lastName":"Lee","lastfour":"4640","exp":"0517","address":"31-26 34th street","city":"Astoria","zip":"11106","state":"NY","country":"United States","transactionReference":"8481266523"}