{"coupon":"","discount":"","doc_name":"VL - Personal Statment for Med School Application","doc_id":67722,"editorId":"2750","email":"vivlee0513@gmail.com","message":"Hey George,<br \/><br \/>It's me again!<br \/><br \/>I rewrote my personal statement. Much of it is still there, but, for this time, I focused on my searching for knowledge and experience in diversity.<br \/><br \/>Would you be able to correct any grammar errors and check once more if the writing makes sense to you? Also, if you can shorten my writing by using shorter words or replacing wordy sentences with simplified ones would be helpful! The last thing, I know my topic is generic already (every premed student wants to help people! Duh!), but I want to make sure the writing does not sound too cheesy. If you have any recommendations on that, please leave side notes.<br \/><br \/> Honestly, any comments would be helpful!<br \/><br \/>Thank you very much for your work.<br \/><br \/>Best,<br \/><br \/>Viv<br \/><br \/>P.S. I need to submit the application tomorrow. Would you happen to have time to finish it earlier than the given deadline? Sorry for being so pushy! Again, thank you.","price_select":"1","temp_doc_name":"upload_574fc4d0780f22.03910942.docx","word_count":"863","subtotal":23.3,"total_amt":23.3,"firstName":"Vivian","lastName":"Lee","lastfour":"8318","exp":"0619","address":"20 Charlesgate W. ","city":"Boston","zip":"02215","state":"MA","country":"United States","transactionReference":"8458720215"}