{"coupon":"editoreinstein","discount":9.556,"doc_name":"CJ507 Proposal Section Ending Pre-editing","doc_id":66625,"editorId":"3889","email":"williamaudelo@gmail.com","message":"EditorEinstein,<br \/><br \/>&nbsp; I have a midnight deadline for a paper I've spent way too much of my life on. &nbsp;The document for your review contains the last pages of about 50 pages. &nbsp;Unfortunately, this leaves you without the literature review or main body. &nbsp;Basic premise... I researched compressed shifts (10 or 12 hours), fatigue in police officers, and conducted a survey of a local police department (Bethlehem- BPD). &nbsp;I brought it all together in a proposal to switch their shifts to 4 days working 10 hour days. &nbsp;I refer to this as the 4\/4 model meaning 4 days on 4 days off. &nbsp;I also reference their current model 5\/2 5\/3 or 5 days on 2 days off, 5 days on 3 days off. &nbsp;Hopefully, it makes enough sense for you to help.<br \/><br \/>&nbsp; I'm basically looking to make sure there are no grammar\/punctuation errors and some editing to improve sentence structure and word flow. &nbsp;I fell like my writing has deteriorated as I've worked towards making my deadline. &nbsp;I don't want my ending to fall flat. &nbsp;Any help you can provide would be greatly appreciated!<br \/><br \/>&nbsp; Thanks!<br \/><br \/>PS: &nbsp;There are little notes to myself regarding sections and inserting figures. &nbsp;I'm currently creating the charts and graphs as we speak. &nbsp;","price_select":"9","temp_doc_name":"upload_56f1680f09a2d5.58826084.docx","word_count":"2389","subtotal":95.56,"total_amt":86,"transactionReference":"PAY-0RB306191T499310MK3YWQJQ"}