{"coupon":"","discount":"","doc_name":"Identity","doc_id":68946,"editorId":"2750","email":"IVANHVELINOV@YAHOO.COM","message":"Hi George, So I did decide to let you look at this one more time, not because you didn't do a great job--you did. I hope you don't mind. I've added a couple of things, and I think I would like to keep the last sentence, if possible, (and if you think it's grammatically correct and clear) the way it is, just to make the piece a bit less polished, more conversational and to stay true to his way of expressing himself. I don't know why I find this story so difficult. The idea is fairly clear--he wanted to stand out, and found that ina place where almost no one is gay, he could stand out siomply by virtue of being gay. Now that he is in a place where every otehr student is gay, he wishes he had developed as a person a bit more. Thanks so much!","price_select":"2","temp_doc_name":"upload_57bb04ff17e243.29434837.docx","word_count":"126","subtotal":2.52,"total_amt":2.52,"transactionReference":"PAY-1S4630492U1850243K65QKDA"}