{"coupon":"","discount":"","doc_name":"The Agency of Supernatural Protection","doc_id":67788,"editorId":"144","email":"christian_pearson16@hotmail.com","message":"Hello again! <br \/><br \/>I didn't end up getting another editior, instead I did a lot of intense editing myself (Guided by a book called The Story Grid) then did a total re-write. The book is far more focussed now. I cut two characters, ten scenes and shortened the whole thing. It's&nbsp;finally ready for editing from a real editor! Here it is! If all goes well, I should have another book for you to edit a month from now!<br \/><br \/>There are a few things that I've highlighted in the document that I was hoping you might have better ways of phrasing. &nbsp;Besides that, just do your thing!<br \/><br \/>Also, as a side note, despite the fact that I'm Canadian I've used the American spelling for words such as humor and favorite. My target audience will predominantly be in the American Kindle market.<br \/><br \/>I'm excited to see what you come back to me with!<br \/><br \/>Thanks,<br \/>Christian Pearson","price_select":"5","temp_doc_name":"upload_57556e47a60114.72350341.docx","word_count":"12991","subtotal":181.87,"total_amt":181.87,"firstName":"Christian","lastName":"Pearson","lastfour":"5718","exp":"0816","address":"246 Beechfield Rd.","city":"Oakville","zip":"L6J5H7","state":"Ontario","country":"Canada","transactionReference":"8469341656"}