{"coupon":"","discount":"","doc_name":"Help me! Need coherence and brevity","doc_id":65426,"editorId":"2750","email":"paul.h.l.ahn@gmail.com","message":"How are you doing, sir?<br \/>This my academic SOP, which really is in need of your help.<br \/><br \/>I tried to express that I had specific experiences that gave me my research interests.<br \/>I spent hours after hours, but some expressions were just too complex for me to straighten up,<br \/>and I need somebody who could coach me overall.<br \/><br \/><strong>1. First of all, I really wish you could make it more succinct. Could you please make it&nbsp;<\/strong><br \/><strong> &nbsp; &nbsp;brief. This is my greatest concern.<\/strong><br \/><br \/><strong>2. Second, I hope you please could make it sound more professional and clear as can be.<\/strong><br \/><br \/>Thank you so much, sir!<br \/><br \/>Very sincerely,<br \/>Hangsan Ahn","price_select":"8","temp_doc_name":"upload_568673c1a63e09.71602281.docx","word_count":"1116","subtotal":47.99,"total_amt":47.99,"firstName":"Hangsan","lastName":"Ahn","lastfour":"5048","exp":"0319","address":"202, 156-2, Bang-i-2-dong, Seocho-gu, Seoul, Korea","city":"Seoul","zip":"05629","state":"Seoul","country":"Korea, Republic of (South Korea)","transactionReference":"7849667386"}