{"coupon":"","discount":"","doc_name":"Personal Statement for Graduate School (Master's)","doc_id":64978,"editorId":"2750","email":"jyoungmay91@gmail.com","message":"Hello George,&nbsp;<br \/><br \/>As I mentioned before, this is my another document.&nbsp;<br \/>This is my rough draft for the statement of purpose for the master's program at the University of Chicago. It requires me to write approximately 800 words, but since this is the rough draft, I just want to write as much information as possible. I wrote it staring with my negative experiecne that encourage me to get involved in my major, other research experiences, my area of interests, future plan (briefly) and why I chose this school.&nbsp;<br \/><br \/>As always I would like to ask you if you can&nbsp;fix my grammar, flows, words, and sentence structure. Also, I'm pretty sure I'm really wordy and redundant in many places, so please cut these out if you can. I&nbsp;also included some memos in the word documents including some references and inquiries. Morevoer, the document should be approximately 800 words, as I mentioned before, so if you can reduce the document into 800 words, that would be great! But if you are not able to cut it down, that's okay. I will cut out some parts and review once again. And please feel free to comment on this paper, I would like to hear your opinion (which part I should supplement or delete).&nbsp;<br \/><br \/>Again, I deeply appreciate your time and help.&nbsp;<br \/>Thank you.<br \/><br \/>Best,&nbsp;<br \/>Jaeyoung&nbsp;","price_select":"1","temp_doc_name":"upload_565d41734c5402.09290748.docx","word_count":"1007","subtotal":27.19,"total_amt":27.19,"firstName":"Jaeyoung","lastName":"Kim","lastfour":"7849","exp":"0616","address":"Hyundai apt 9-1005, Donghwadong, Jung-gu","city":"Seoul","zip":"100781","state":"Seoul","country":"Korea, Republic of (South Korea)","transactionReference":"7756287424"}