{"coupon":"","discount":"","doc_name":"Please help me enhance the overall style.","doc_id":66639,"editorId":"144","email":"paul.h.l.ahn@gmail.com","message":"Dear Mr. Editor (NYANIDOC),<br \/><br \/>I am deeply grateful for your help last December.<br \/>Were it not for your help, I wouldn't have been able to be accepted to any school.<br \/>I really have a deep respect towards you. Your efforts and skills were more than amazing.&nbsp;<br \/>(I wish I could write somewhat like you do if only possible.)<br \/><br \/>I have been waitlisted in my dream school (UW in Seattle.) <br \/>I know. The situation is not good.<br \/><br \/>Still, the purpose of this one letter to the communication department chair is to show<br \/>my passion and reasons why I want so badly&nbsp;to get into the MA program of my dream school: UW in Seattle, instead of <br \/>a doctoral program in another school (UW-Madison).<br \/><br \/>Could you, please, read this carefully first and see what my circumstances are (in the writing)&nbsp;and make it<br \/>(1) <span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><em>truly expressing my strong desire<\/em><\/span>, (2)&nbsp;<em><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">stylish,<\/span><\/em> and&nbsp;(3) <em><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">more<\/span><\/em><i><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">&nbsp;coherent<\/span><\/i>?&nbsp;<br \/><br \/><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><em>Please feel free to edit anything as much as you want<\/em>. <\/span><br \/>Since English is not my native language, though I have spent many days<br \/>on this,&nbsp;I could not&nbsp;quite give&nbsp;the nuances I wanted.<br \/><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><em>Again, please feel free to change, add, and delete any words, sentences, or paragraphs at your will<\/em>.<\/span><br \/><br \/>Thank you very very much.<br \/><br \/>Very sincerely,<br \/>Hangsan Ahn","price_select":"1","temp_doc_name":"upload_56f29dc20571c1.98914401.docx","word_count":"1682","subtotal":45.41,"total_amt":45.41,"firstName":"Hangsan","lastName":"Ahn","lastfour":"8885","exp":"0720","address":"202, 156-2, Bang-i-2-dong, Seocho-gu, Seoul, Korea","city":"Seoul","zip":"05629","state":"Seoul","country":"China","transactionReference":"8096489266"}