{"coupon":"","discount":"","doc_name":"Evil Snake","doc_id":68801,"editorId":"2750","email":"IVANHVELINOV@YAHOO.COM","message":"Hi George, I moved a lot of paragraphs, sentences and bits and pieces around and I can continue to do so, but I think as an outside reader you will have a more objective eye. I tend to want to keep everything, but I think there are some unnecessary repetiotions. Sometimes the conversations are very choppy and it's not until the end that the main story emerges as if it were a puzzle. Thank you!","price_select":"2","temp_doc_name":"upload_57a9130306e263.20497941.docx","word_count":"391","subtotal":7.82,"total_amt":7.82,"transactionReference":"PAY-9FM80690EG607821LK6URGCY"}