{"coupon":"","discount":"","doc_name":"Personal Statement","doc_id":64923,"editorId":"1439","email":"hchan_park@naver.com","message":"<p>Hi! I'm an international student and I'm applying for Ph.d in physics. <br \/>I have 8 paragraphs in my personal statement\/statement of purpose. I'd like to tell you my key point on every paragraph. I tried to say what I want in indirect way.<br \/><br \/> 1. I'm enjoying condensed matter experiment and I also want to do it in a graduate school.<br \/> -&gt; I described a moment when I was most excited. <br \/>2. Physics should be my future carrier.<br \/>-&gt; I listed some amazing examples of wonder of physics that I think. <br \/>3. I came to the US school and started reserach. <br \/>4. first project<br \/> 5. second project <br \/>6. third project <br \/>7. my future plan\/ academic goal <br \/>8. excuses for low physics GRE and my weakness <br \/>-&gt; I talked to a faculty in admission commitee in one of my dream school and he sad if I have low score, I should mention it because if not they don't know. I want it to be concise and interesting.<br \/><br \/> I don't want just grammar correction and word change. I'd like to hear your opinion and suggestion on structure and organization of my writing. <br \/><br \/>I appreciate your help so much!!!<br \/><br \/><br \/> Thank you!<\/p>","price_select":"1","temp_doc_name":"upload_565a2143dc56d3.41960209.docx","word_count":"818","subtotal":22.09,"total_amt":22.09,"firstName":"Haechan","lastName":"Park","lastfour":"1563","exp":"0818","address":"10 Oval CT","city":"Stony Brook","zip":"11790","state":"New York","country":"United States","transactionReference":"7747669778"}