{"coupon":"","discount":"","doc_name":"City by the Bay","doc_id":67433,"editorId":"3523","email":"kristoffersol@gmail.com","message":"Taking into account the strategies of seeing used by Smith and Walker Percy in their essays,&nbsp;<strong>describe and explain your thoroughly-observed and deeply-reflected understanding of the motivating energy of a particular place.<\/strong>&nbsp;Be purposeful and clear in how you are using the term &ldquo;motivating energy.&rdquo;<br \/><br \/>Smith Essay:&nbsp;<a href=\"http:\/\/www.nybooks.com\/articles\/2014\/10\/23\/find-your-beach\/\">http:\/\/www.nybooks.com\/articles\/2014\/10\/23\/find-your-beach\/<br \/>P<\/a>ercy Essay:&nbsp;<a href=\"https:\/\/www.udel.edu\/anthro\/ackerman\/loss_creature.pdf\">https:\/\/www.udel.edu\/anthro\/ackerman\/loss_creature.pdf<\/a>&nbsp;<br \/><br \/>\r\n<p>Like Smith&rsquo;s essay, the final draft of your submission must include all of the following:<\/p>\r\n<ul>\r\n<li>A central assertion,<\/li>\r\n<li>Insights that are not self-evident,<\/li>\r\n<li>Some history of the location,<\/li>\r\n<li>Specific evidence (defined for our class as clearly-described sensory descriptions, and narrative that show described actors participating in described action). Note that it is difficult to present something clearly when using merely generic language.<\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\n<p>Your essay must also include at least three of the following:<\/p>\r\n<ul>\r\n<li>Poetic or literary allusions<\/li>\r\n<li>Pop culture allusions<\/li>\r\n<li>Intellectual allusions from a field of your choosing<\/li>\r\n<li>Comments about the chosen place<\/li>\r\n<li>Comparisons<\/li>\r\n<li>Advertising<\/li>\r\n<li>Public art<\/li>\r\n<li>Moments of identification with someone else<\/li>\r\n<li>Other forms of figurative language<\/li>\r\n<li>Linguistic analysis of received messages<\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\r\nPlease eliminate any to-be verbs.<br \/>Need a stronger conclusion.<br \/>Professor is a poet by trade so really enjoys highly descriptive and figurative language.&nbsp;<br \/>Strong enough thesis? Does it have a clear comparison or oppostion?<br \/>Looking to improve overall content and mechancial aspects.","price_select":"8","temp_doc_name":"upload_5733ca1fad06e0.14003448.docx","word_count":"914","subtotal":39.3,"total_amt":39.3,"firstName":"Kristoffer","lastName":"Solomon","lastfour":"4522","exp":"0819","address":"113 Crenshaw Ct","city":"Pacifica","zip":"94402","state":"CA","country":"United States","transactionReference":"8399206481"}