{"coupon":"","discount":"","doc_name":"Personal Statment","doc_id":64904,"editorId":"2750","email":"hchan_park@naver.com","message":"Hi!<br \/><br \/><br \/>I'm an international student and I'm applying for Ph.d in physics.<br \/><br \/>I have 8 paragraphs in my personal statement\/statement of purpose.<br \/><br \/>I'd like to tell you my key point on every paragraph.<br \/><br \/>I tried to say what I want in indirect way.&nbsp;<br \/><br \/><br \/>1. I'm enjoying condensed matter experiment and I also want to do it in a graduate school.<br \/>-&gt; I described a moment when I was most excited.<br \/><br \/>2. Physics should be my future carrier.<br \/>-&gt; I listed some amazing examples of wonder of physics that I think.<br \/><br \/>3. I came to the US school and started reserach.<br \/><br \/>4. first project<br \/><br \/>5. second project<br \/><br \/>6. third project<br \/><br \/>7. my future plan\/ academic goal<br \/><br \/>8. excuses for low physics GRE and my weakness<br \/>-&gt; I talked to a faculty in admission commitee in one of my dream school and he sad if I have low score, I should mention it because if not they don't know.<br \/><br \/><br \/><br \/>I want it to be concise and interesting.&nbsp;<br \/><br \/>I don't want just grammar correction and word change.&nbsp;<br \/><br \/>I'd like to hear your opinion and suggestion on structure and organization of my writing.&nbsp;<br \/><br \/><br \/><br \/>I appreciate your help so much even in thanks giving!!!<br \/><br \/>Thank you!","price_select":"10","temp_doc_name":"upload_5658e02d1c57b6.08804932.docx","word_count":"818","subtotal":30.27,"total_amt":30.27,"firstName":"Haechan","lastName":"Park","lastfour":"3202","exp":"1218","address":"408-502 Dangsan-ro 214, Yeongduengpo-gu","city":"Seoul","zip":"150771","state":"Seoul","country":"Korea, Republic of (South Korea)","transactionReference":"7745141479"}