{"coupon":"","discount":"","doc_name":"Writing Sample for Graduate School","doc_id":64918,"editorId":"2750","email":"jyoungmay91@gmail.com","message":"Hello,&nbsp;<br \/><br \/>Attached file is a writing sample for the Graduate program. However, this draft is not completed. I have \"the empirical evidence\" section&nbsp;to write, after I finish review this draft with my professor. So I would really appreciate if you could refer to the following inquiries and correct my draft.&nbsp;<br \/><br \/>1)&nbsp;I added several memos in the word file to give you what I meant for the certain phrases. Hope these would help you. Also, the notes I added include some questions about my phrase and sentence, so I would really appreciate if you could answer to these questions.&nbsp;<br \/>2) I'm an international student, so my grammar and sentence structures could be spotty in numerous places, so please correct the errors.&nbsp;<br \/>3) If you find some redundant phrases, please feel free to delete or edit it.<br \/>4) I should follow the Chicago Manual Style (CMS), so I tried my best to follow the rules, but I'm not sure whether I put the bibliography correctly or not. If you are familiar with the CMS, please let me know if there are awkward references and citations. If you are not familiar with the CMS, don't worry and I will figure it out.&nbsp;<br \/>5) Overall, please review and correct the awkward words, grammars, and flows. Also, if some sentences are wordy, please correct the sentences.&nbsp;<br \/>6) Also, I have to attract the Admission Committees, so I would really appreciate if you could let me know about your opinion whether this paper looks interesting or not.&nbsp;<br \/><br \/><br \/>Sorry for this long inquiries, but I just wanted to make sure that I can give you the main purposes of my request. I would deeply appreciate your time and efforts. If you have any questions regarding to the context, please feel free to let me know.&nbsp;<br \/><br \/>Again, thank you for your help.&nbsp;","price_select":"10","temp_doc_name":"upload_5659e37930d453.30862944.docx","word_count":"2650","subtotal":98.05,"total_amt":98.05,"firstName":"Jaeyoung","lastName":"Kim","lastfour":"4543","exp":"0816","address":"10 Vairo Blvd. APT #203F","city":"State College","zip":"16803","state":"Pennsylvania","country":"United States","transactionReference":"7747037080"}