{"coupon":"","discount":"","doc_name":"Undergrad GPA statement","doc_id":64485,"editorId":"541","email":"ernestopineda@gmail.com","message":"<p>Dear editor,&nbsp;<\/p>\r\n<p>Your help throughout this application process is fantastic. The last two essays we worked on are now done and ready for submittal. I still have 1 more essay\/addendum I want you to take a look at and help me seriously condense it. I am including in the word count the very long post\/comments that the harvard kennedy school has on why and how to write this \"optional statement\". I believe is fair to pay you for having to read the long instructions, so you can have better context when editing my addendum. So far, my text is 666 words. Although it is WAY TOO detalied and long-winded. I leave it to your expertise to condense it to no more than 250 words, per the HKS requirements.&nbsp;<\/p>\r\n<p><em>Specifically, this is what I need to convey to the admissions committee:<\/em><br \/>1. Specific context (without glamourizing or wanting&nbsp;to cause pity) on why my freshman year grades in community college where a mess and why &nbsp;was at a community college in the first place.&nbsp;<br \/>2. Very brief higlight of the grades\/GPA in question.<br \/>3. Clarification that those issues are resolved, and I have grown and learn from them, as reflected in my successfull years towards my junior and senior years at Univ of MD as well as graduate years at Georgetown University.<br \/><br \/>I have no doubt you'll be able to make it work, and I look forward to finishing this addendum.&nbsp;<\/p>\r\n<p>I'll send you my resumes for your review in a bit as well.&nbsp;<\/p>\r\n<p>Sincerely,&nbsp;<\/p>\r\n<p>Ernesto<\/p>","price_select":"2","temp_doc_name":"upload_56367c569ee7c8.47241635.docx","word_count":"1194","subtotal":23.88,"total_amt":23.88,"firstName":"Ernesto","lastName":"Pineda","lastfour":"7232","exp":"1017","address":"11418 Rockville Pike apt2308","city":"north bethesda","zip":"20852","state":"md","country":"United States","transactionReference":"7670627097"}