{"coupon":"","discount":"","doc_name":"SheilaCJohnsonAnswersToQuestions.docx","doc_id":66090,"editorId":"541","email":"ernestopineda@gmail.com","message":"<p>Good evening,<\/p>\r\n<p>I hope all is well. I am sending you my two responses I need for you to help me clean and make it sharper and charged. This is a continuation of the admissio package you helped me edit in November and December of last years, 2015 (about 4 months ago). I am currently competing for 3 fellowships, and the responses we are crafting here will have a major impact in my ability to be chosen as a fellow. <br \/><br \/>As always, I have included in the total word count key background information I have pasted in the document, which I feel will give you better context of how and what I need from you in this editing session. Although I am under the word count limit on both responses, I don't mind if we reduce it even more if need be. Also, for some reason I feel I am repeating the words \"Latino\", \"United States\", and \"Immigrant\" WAY TOO MUCH in both responses. Please help me use different words, or strategically eliminating some unnecessary repetitions, as I am sure the essay as it currently stands, feels very rushed and not emotionally solid. <br \/><br \/>I look forward to your advice as in prior sessions, in order for us to really create a winning essay.<\/p>\r\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\r\n<p>Best!<br \/>Salvador<\/p>","price_select":"2","temp_doc_name":"upload_56c2b0b72cd627.35296316.docx","word_count":"1425","subtotal":28.5,"total_amt":28.5,"firstName":"Salvador","lastName":"Pineda","lastfour":"7232","exp":"1017","address":"11418 Rockville Pike","city":"North Bethesda","zip":"20852","state":"MD","country":"United States","transactionReference":"7986830163"}